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blackpanther666 posted on Feb 27, 2012 at 12:43AM
Silver Angel: Occam's Razor

Plot: In a world ruled by monarchy, clans and democracy, things are difficult and have been for a while. A new political power seeks to rule, not only Quaesar, but Telph and Zannap too. Lord-Democrat Garan is the leader of the United Future movement and has recruited one of the most powerful Enikase, Foreseer of Truth. Foreseers of Truth exist only to twist truths into lies and gain ultimate power in the changing political world, for doing so. Thus it goes that the truth is the simplest explanation.
The world itself, beside the clans on Quaesar, are highly political and most power revolves around being able to twist truths into lies. Enikase can do this extra well, and, in doing so, also spin a web of truth/untruth barrier around themselves, fooling anybody into thinking that they are lying when they aren't and vice versa.
This serves as a form of power, because in this world, everything revolves around truth and lies. These are mostly present in their original form, where the leader of the current democracy in power will tell lies to the people to make them think that things will be better, so that they gain the vote to win. These lies all make birth other lies smaller lies, which are all passed down. Once you get through the entire population, you realise that everything is basically a lie.

Setting: Korlathia, The three Isles (Quaesar, Telph and Zannap). This is a large world, consisted of three massive continents, separated by dangerous, stormy oceans and icebergs.
Quaesar is a warm continent generally, though the northern regions are much colder than southern regions. It is made up of temperate forest, large, unclimbable mountains and many long, braided rivers. Quaesar is generally inhabited by the many clans that make their home on the continent.
Telph is cold. It is the northern-most of the three continents and closest to Korlathia's Roof. Most of the continent is habitable, and the Moors have created much technolohgy to allow them to survive in the harsh condidtions.
Zannap is a mixture of the two. Though it can get very cold, it can also get very hot, as it is the southern-most of the continents, but it is also long enough to be closer to Korlathia's Roof, than Quaesar, which is smaller. Zannap has a very variable landscape, it can be flat, with small hills, mountainous regions, temperate and tropical forest, meadows, flatlands and river valleys.

These clans are particularly fierce and war-like, often having competitions between different clans/tribes. Not only that, but some of the clans are at war with each other, which has lead to an uneasy truce between other clans, for the time being. There are eight clans that are living on Quaesar, as of the start of this storyline:

Na'salan: Debatably the most fearsome of all the clans... Their warriors are known to be some of the toughest in Quaesar. Their current Clan Leader is Jiera'Na. (Clan members have their names, followed the first two letters of their clan on the end)

Tu'kalar: Also one of the tougher clans in Quaesar, but arguably, also the have some of the most intelligent and cunning warriors too. Their current Clan Leader is Solon'Tu.

Gi'ralan: These warriors have been branded cowards by the Tu'kalar and Na'salan, and are currently at war with both. Their current Clan Leader is Hordan'Gi.

Fe'hebel: A bunch of 'pacifists', that don't believe in fighting, in any form. Their current Clan Leader is Daran'Fe.

Cr'feluun: A mysterious clan, that have their own way of using link-magic. Their Shaman, Nedra'Cr, is an expert in healing and other mysterious arts. Their current Clan Leader is Tiera'Cr.

Jo'repiir: A very sadistic clan, their warriors aren't the toughest, but they sure know how to fight and they are very, very determined, especially if it involves bloodshed. Their current Clan leader is Kigan'Jo.

Wk'laffan: Decisively average in every way, none of this clan have ever distinguished themselves, however they are possibly the most civilised of the clans. Despite that, they have their source of determination and sometimes follow it. Their current Clan Leader is Niero'Wk.

Ye'Geffir: At war with the Jo'reppir. Their warriors are quite tough, but, because they have many cowardly warriors, the bravest of their warriors often do most of the work. Their current Clan Leader is Xexel'Ye.

The Foundation of Link-Magic by Articus Releum

Excerpt:

Introduction: The Basic Principles of Link-Magic and the Definition/application of Link-Magic

Link-magic is an interesting concept, one that has been studied for many years and used for many different purposes; though it is an obscure life-force, at least, in application and takes many years of training to master, even to a small degree. The most difficult piece of the puzzle, is working out how to use it and to understand the principles behind it. To date, only four principles have been discovered and used in practice.

1. Construction: This can be used to create something, at the cost of an equivalent amount of energy. Under this basic principle, anything can be created from nothing, but requires the user to sacrifice that same amount of energy, that was expended in the crafting of the item. If the user has too little energy and uses this Prinicple, they will die from loss of body energy. The second Principle of Energy applies to this: Any energy used will be given off as heat and contribute a certain amount of disorder to the atmopshere, as a small portion of that energy can never be used to 'work' again.

2. Apparition: Can force an existing item to appear, at the cost of a small amount of energy. The item cannot be summoned if it belongs to someone. Every item has an energy signature, which is the sign of ownership by the owner. If the signature is broken, that object can be forced to submit to user and forfeits any rights the previous had over the item in question. The possessor of the item/object cannot destroy it: this is a direct component of the Principle of the Conservation of Energy. Energy can neither be destroyed, nor created... Only transferred/or transformed.

3. Transfiguration: Can summon 'Golems', that are non-living creatures, that serve their 'Master', until they are destroyed or cast away by the user themselves. In order to summon these creatures, the user must sacrifice a small portion of blood, depending on the strength of the Golem. These can only be destroyed by an existing source of magic/life-force. In addition to these Golems, other creatures can also be summoned. These are known as Shades, and, when they are summoned, the user decides what creature they want it to look like. Once this has been completed, the Shade becomes a 'shade' of the creature that the user decided on. The magic works like thus: 'threads' of link-magic, a mixture of chaos and order that sustain each other, form into longer strands, which grow larger and larger, until they begin to shape themselves. When the Shaping Process begins, the Mage decides what form they want it to take and then imagine it, letting their thoughts flow into the Shaping Process. These thoughs are what finalises the Process and allows the form to become whatever form the user desires.

4. Transmutation/recontruction: This attempts to re-create something that once existed, but no longer does. This can be applied to objects, which is what it is mostly used for... However, for an abnormally strong 'Mage', this ability can re-create a creature, that looks exactly like the person that died. This is where the magic begins to become complicated. While it 'creature' may look like the deceased, it has no real 'soul' and cannot speak or remember anything from the life that the deceased lead. In order to achieve this magic, the user must be willing to sacrifice an appendage (for human transmutation), or a large amount of energy and relatively small amount of blood, in order to re-create an object.

Link-magic, being a life-force, is present in every being of energy and sustains them. If their life-force disappears, then that being will die. This applies to all 'beings', including plants, animals, trees and humans. However, link-magic also exists in a small amount in any element, or chemical, and can be used to convert into energy. Hence the life-cycle of link-magic: life-force exists in all beings, but can be converted into energy, either from existing elements/chemicals, or beings. That 'energy' can be used for link-magic, and to create other objects, or modify existing ones. When that energy is used up - it goes back into the atmosphere as heat and a portion is lost forever, still existing, but unable to be used.

Small Glossary

Enikase: A small order of powerful men and women, who have mystical powers. As of yet, no-one but the Enikase themselves can hope to understand how it is they gathered this power in the first place. They are experts at tangling nets of lies and truths, which also hold a mystical value. This has not been witnessed since the Great Age of Truths, when the world of Korlathia was young. It is said that just being in their presence prompts even the strongest of men to insanity, through voices crying out inside their head and replicating truths and lies they don't wish to hear.

Lybringer: Personal attendants to Lord-Democrats in Telph and Zannap. They are skilled at lying and recognising lies. They have no mystical powers, but are instead revered for their proficiency to further a Lord-Democrat's cause.

Truth-teller: A rare person who cannot tell a lie, no matter what the cost. Their soul and spirit cannot withstand the simple chaotic revelation of lying and will cause them illness, even at a thought of telling a lie.

Mage: One who embraces the ways of magic and its teachings. Mages are even rarer than Enikase, but much more skilled in 'mystical arts'. There are many types of Mages, which all depend on how they ultimately choose to use the magic. Mages choose their own way in life and, once they have made their decision, they cannot revoke that decision.

Creatures/monsters: Living creatures, or organisms, that live in their chosen habitats and can potentially be very dangerous to humans.

Education

Ecology: This covers interactions between different species of animals and is very useful in helping humans to understand and augment those ways.

Biology: The study of life. Important for many reasons. Biology also covers the life-force, link-magic, and helps Mages to understand it better.

History: History of Korlathia and past wars and events.

Geography: The study of the physical land, including how the land works and how it came to be. This is closely related to geology. Geography also includes studying environments and how they work, especially the effects of human culture on the land. Geography even covers the study of man-made environments and how they work.

Sociology: The study of human interactions between one another and how this affects the man-made environments.

Healing/medicine: This covers medical treatment and hospitalisation.

Characters:

Lord-Democrat Garan (antagonist)
The Silver Angel (protagonist)
Hawk Avalon (main character)
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over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
New RP! XD. I hope people are interested in this, because I think it should be pretty good.
over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
I'll explain a little about Truth as an aspect of power. The world itself, beside the clans on Quaesar, are highly political and most power revolves around being able to twist truths into lies. Enikase can do this extra well, and, in doing so, also spin a web of truth/untruth barrier around themselves, fooling anybody into thinking that they are lying when they aren't and vice versa.

This serves as a form of power, because in this world, everything revolves around truth and lies. These are mostly present in their original form, where the leader of the current democracy in power will tell lies to the people to make them think that things will be better, so that they gain the vote to win. These lies all make birth other lies smaller lies, which are all passed down. Once you get through the entire population, you realise that everything is basically a lie.
over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
Hawk Avalon was a curious man. Some, in his village, would say that he couldn't lie, while others would say that his ability to tell the truth, no matter what, was a better explanation. Whatever the case was, Hawk was an interesting young man, full of hopes and dreams, wild ambition and admiration for the world outside of North Yayle.
Hawk was quite tall, even though he had only been through twenty winters, when he had seen sixteen winters, he was about six foot one and was slowly gaining more and more muscle as he grew older and older. It didn't help that the other guys his age were all much shorter and smaller, they picked on him and called him a freak, not that he cared what they thought.
Hawk walked outside, with a scowl on his face. That had been four winters ago, when he was only sixteen winters old; the other kids respected him more, though only a couple of them were actually good friends with him.
His only real friend, though, was a man slightly older than him, only by half a season, called Damian Ravdul. Damian was his best friend and the easiest person to laugh at, with and laugh and laugh even more. Damian had a curious, inviting sense of humour, one that everybody in the village would laugh at.
'Hawk, you peel. I though I'd have missed ya. Where you headin' to?' Damian asked casually, drawling slightly.
A peel was a boring person. Hawk ignored the comedic insult and stared back, the scowl exchanging for a grin. 'I was going to take a walk. Are you going to come?'
'Sure, sure. Maybe we'll see Rose while we're walking...' Damian hinted slightly. 'Yeah, yeah. I told you, I'll talk to her one of these days, but I'm not interested right now.'
Damian laughed. 'Rubbish! You know you want her, just go and talk to her.' Hawk shrugged nonchalantly then continued a quickened pace.
'Hey, wait up! I'm not as tall as you, so I can't run as fast.'
'Slowpoke!' Hawk walked even faster.
Damian sighed and stopped. Hawk stopped as well and looked back; 'alright, I'll stop.'
After the walk, Damian walked back to his small house, that he shared with his old and ailing mother.
'Hey! Mum, where are you?' Hawk yelled. She didn't answer, so he figured she was asleep and went around to her room to check on her. It seemed as though she was asleep, so Hawk went to wake her up, figuring that she hadn't eaten yet.
However, she didn't wake when he shook her. Even though it wasn't abnormal, it was still enough to set off a sense of unease in the pit of his stomach and he shook her, more roughly this time. 'Mum! Wake up!' he cried. She still didn't wake up. This time was more alarming, she had never failed to wake after the second time. Hawk checked her heartbeat and, to his utter despair, he found it didn't exist at all.
Hawk shook with grief and tears began to fall onto his dead mother's face. 'Why? Why!' he cried, over and over again, until, finally he had used up all of his tears.
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over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
The being opens its eyes. Silver wings lift up high and begin to flap slowly; above the being a large, snowy mountain peeks, forbiddingly, behind the being.

-Things have changed on Korlathia... I have slept too long-


On the other side of Korlathia, things are remarkably great for Democrat Garan. Any day now, his political party will be the leading party for coalition. Any day now he'll become Lord-Democrat and Zannap will be under his law.
'Excuse me, sir. Your client is here to see you...'

Garan stands up. 'Thanks, Lukas, you can go home now, if you want. You've been working extra hard today and I really appreciate it.'

-Lies, all lies. Why does the truth always end up being a lie to him and the lies become truths-

'Thanks, sir. I'll see you tomorrow...'
Garan smiles falsely and waves his assistant out of his office. 'Yeah, no doubt of that. See you later, Lukas.'
over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
Scene One: The Truth Hurts (An introduction to the intricacies of lies and truths)

The truth always hurts. Not because of the obvious consequences of such devastating acts, but because of the injured feelings involved and the bitter touch of helplessness. Not even the grandest of leaders can face the ultimate truths in life, because, deep down, they are ones that will become the easiest victims of such atrocities. The ones with the most power and fame, well, they are the ones that have the furthest to fall.
This is where the truth and lies begin to intersect and influence one another. Many powerful men begin to fall under the pretense that lies are more valuable than the truth and can use them to aid them in their ambitous pursuit of power, fame, riches and more material goods that collect the dust of Ages. Truth becomes an obvious enemy to these men and distant memories. Once this has fallen into place, these men become more powerful, until eventually their disdain for the truth and aptitude for lying begins to affect their lands and people begin to embrace the lifestyle of bittersweet lies. Finally the lands begin to also fall further from the ability of Truth-telling and closer to that of chaotic Lybringers, who test the merits of life as it is and as it was, by continuing the fall into a world so corrupt that lies are the truth and the truth is always a lie.

over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
Small Glossary

Enikase: A small order of powerful men and women, who have mystical powers. As of yet, no-one but the Enikase themselves can hope to understand how it is they gathered this power in the first place. They are experts at tangling nets of lies and truths, which also hold a mystical value. This has not been witnessed since the Great Age of Truths, when the world of Korlathia was young. It is said that just being in their presence prompts even the strongest of men to insanity, through voices crying out inside their head and replicating truths and lies they don't wish to hear.

Lybringer: Personal attendants to Lord-Democrats in Telph and Zannap. They are skilled at lying and recognising lies. They have no mystical powers, but are instead revered for their proficiency to further a Lord-Democrat's cause.

Truth-teller: A rare person who cannot tell a lie, no matter what the cost. Their soul and spirit cannot withstand the simple chaotic revelation of lying and will cause them illness, even at a thought of telling a lie.
over a year ago whiteflame55 said…
Felix Seren was a man of truth, bound to it inexorably by what and who he was. Perhaps that was part of the reason he oppose Lord-Democrat, a man surrounded by Lybringers, though that was only a half-truth. Felix wanted to restore truth to the world, but he also wanted power. That meant taking some liberties. He reached over to the intercom on his desk nearby.

Felix: Tedra, could you come in here please?

No response. That was well, any response from her might be a lie. Perhaps that’s why she chose to use as few words as possible with him. Tedra was different from the other Lybringers, or at least, that’s what he liked to tell himself. That was a half-truth as well – in reality, he knew as little of her as he did anyone. And they had been married for 10 years!

It was a strange balance his camp ran between the truth and the lies.

Tedra pushed open the doors to his office. His entire office was covered in glass, a symbol of his openness with the public. That much was true. He hid nothing in his past from them, much as he could have.

Being a Truth-teller was deceptive. “Truth” was no simple concept. A Truth-teller might tell a lie by believing it to be true. They might tell a hundred partial truths before telling a single full truth. Being a Truth-teller made people less suspicious of him than they would of his wife, or any normal human being for that matter. Tedra was one of the few who saw through him, and it was because of her that he refused to use that advantage regularly.

Tedra walked up to him and sat on his lap, lying up against his right shoulder. She smiled at him demurely.

Tedra: You called for me?

Felix smiled: Have you gotten a hold of the data on the Lord-Democrat yet? I have a speech in an hour, and I want to go into it knowing the truth.

Tedra pouted: And here I thought you were calling for me!

Felix tisked: Now darling, we have more pressing needs. I can attend to you later.

Tedra remained put out, and rose from her seat. She removed a packet from her coat pocket, slamming it down on the desk with a little too much vigor. In big red letters, the form read “Lybringer files.” Of course, they weren’t about Tedra, but rather two or three of the central Lybringers advising the Lord-Democrat. She stalked out of the room, throwing the door shut with a clang that set his teeth on edge.

Felix removed a sheet to begin reading. While he felt no enmity towards Lybringers a group, he couldn’t help feeling annoyed as he perused the sheet, analyzing what policies each had participated in recently. They were the reason Zannap was a nation of lies, and he was one of the few trying to save it. He wouldn’t give up, no matter how bleak the outlook.
over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
The Silver Angel (By Democrat Garan)

History: The Silver Angel is a myth, which has existed purely for cavalier acts and false truths. Has appeared in frequent tomes, but there has not been a witnessed sighting the Angel.

There are many fabrications to describe the Silver Angel, though no person has ever truly been certain of this information. One such description, is thus, the Angel wields a sword, one that has reported powers, though this is, again, highly uncertain. No one has seen neither the Angel or the sword.

Appearance: Anywhere from a large being with wings, to some kind of flying dragonfly creature. There are varied opinions on the originss and appearance of this Pseudo-God.
over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
Ockanresor ('Occam's Razor')

Ability: This sword searches for, and finds, the ultimate truth, in any situation. This same rule can apply to the Silver Angel and is a heavy weight to bear, especially with such a responsibility.

Origins: This has lain dormant in the hands of the Silver Angel for quite some time. In ancient times, this sword was a bitter weapon, protecting the secrets of its origins and keeping truth as truth and lies as lies.

Appearance: A longsword, with a large, double-T bar, made from prelidium, a material notorious for being hardy. The blade is about 1.5 meters long, but very light. The blade is about as tall as a hand's width from the top of the blade to the bottom, sharpened, point, at its widest point. Also as sharp as a razor.
over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
Until more people join, I'm taking a break on this. But, if anyone is interested, please post a character on this forum and follow how me and Whiteflame have done it. XD
over a year ago whiteflame55 said…
I do hope more people get involved here, it's an interesting idea for an anime.
over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
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Yes, it would be good. I'm not bothered if it doesn't get started up for a little while, as long eventually other join and/or are interested. I am prepared to invest a fair bit of time into this, as with other RPs, as long as a few others are too.
over a year ago Sinna_Hime_chan said…
Rose Harrow was as soft and kind as a kitten... while her father, [the twice-her-senior] General Harrow, now retired, was her polar opposite. Rose had the fair, angelic face and comely demeanor of a blossoming young woman. Beguiling rose-coloured hair and eyes, at five-six, she was a bonny lass. She would be twenty in only a few weeks. Optimistic and hard-working, she worked three jobs, saving all of the money she could manage, ferreting away every coin [for “something” which she told no-one]. She worked in the Central Pilot Office, with secretarial duties [usually running various papers around that needed to be signed, in the Democratic Office of Zannap's Alegirion District]. In the evenings she hurried to the sonic train, known for its high speed, jet-like propulsion, and raced off home to Quaesar's North Yale. There, she would scurry to the flower shoppe, where she'd either don an apron to trim and arrange, or stock the outside stands that housed colorful baskets of flowers for passersby’s... whilst additionally the storefront mingled in flower gift-o-grams (sometimes accompanied by costume).

Lastly, (but not least), she would often babysit and/or walk pet animals for further funds. She had a reliable clientele who needed her help, and she was happy to do so as a personal favor, as well.

Not to be underestimated, Rose took after her mother, in that she had a strength and sassiness if provoked; where she was passionate, sharp, and quick. Unfortunately she might intimidate a trifled soul.

Aloof to multiple suitors, she concentrated on her tasks, and dreamed of other things. She would be too tired or too busy to do the usual activities the people her own age participated in for fun. There were a handful of friends she could count on. She enjoyed their company, but sometimes she felt like she was not seen to exist by a certain someone.



Here, embarking upon her second job, scuttling mid-stride to take off high heels, she ran down the pristine white sidewalk toward the flower shoppe. With windswept long hair, Rose rounded the corner full tilt and swooped up an apron off a hook still in quickened motions to dance back into her heels without a breath to stop!

“Ohhh! ‘To have such energy!” Hattie Mae, the Shoppe-keeper squawked –as Rose blew by.

“No Hattie,” Rose smiled over her shoulder, “It is caffeine!” (She had chugged a cup of warm brew while she ran up the street.) Rose was still hurrying here and there to fetch pruning clippers.

“Well, whatever it is…Stop! You are making me dizzy child!” cried the gruff-voiced, but loving 60-year-old woman. Rose just beamed her sweet smile. “If only to be her age again!” Hattie mumbled, with a sigh, returning to her work.


...............Rosealyn {Rose} - only child...................
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Rose Harrow was as soft and kind as a kitten... while her father, [the twice-her-senior] General Harr
over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
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Awesome! Nice writing... XD. Arigatou!
over a year ago Sinna_Hime_chan said…
Crystalline Senna {also called Sen} wore a multi-coloured tourmaline crystal around her neck which hung just in the onset of rather buxom cleavage of someone all of five-foot-three, at the most. Agile, flexible, and fleet of foot, although voluptuous, she carried herself tall and stately in an imbued sense for one so petite and diminutive in stature. Within the proportionate frame housed hidden emotional and physical strength while retaining grace. Long blue-black hair fell like cool black silk down to a v-shaped point just below her bottom. Exotic, and mysterious…one could not pinpoint nor rule out ethnicity. Her skin was a pale beige. Her eyes were almost dark as night. As bewitching as her features could be to behold, (especially stepping out from shadow into moonlight at night), the effect is a hauntingly unearthly beauty which stirs the soul.

This can be a potentially deadly and highly dangerous creature. Multi-talented and multi-faceted, her range varied considerably in juxtaposition. A weapons specialist, among other things, (with a fervor for antiquity), she combined her skills to be as lethal as she was lithe. This was a person who could be almost anyone or anything she chose to be for whatever time, and someone who was convincingly sincere in her hired role. She would always follow through on a mission and she did not take prisoners or believe in loose ends. It was a cold and calculated rule she followed. There was no room for error or mistakes. She would not be sloppy! Conversely, with all this terse and tainted stolidity, she was not a chameleon, in the typical sense, or even an actress. She drew from what she harbored deep within, from what was real, both grim and good, and chased her demons by storm, back into the nightmares from whence they emerged, and thus formed her many faces not from insanity, as much as necessity. She was as much an indentured servant as she was paid proper, at least in living cost expenses. Her business was as much blood as dealing in any other number of manipulations of outcomes or securing of events. Orders were handed down. The true puppet masters belonged to the head seat of a specialized branch in the monarchial offices that sat aloft a branch so derisively high that they were just above the law, untouchable as it were, and so covert, that few besides the offices directly below them even knew of their existence. It was in walking with giants, these faceless powers, that she owed her forced allegiance to serve what they deemed the higher, just cause.

So true, her heart dwelled in darkness, but in captivity -because she was not without feeling, and this bane and curse she kept secret unto herself. It would torment her every waking breath if she lingered her thoughts upon her deeds. Thus she did not carry the knowledge of plans in their entirety when it concerned the convoluted objectives of others. In order to sleep at all at night, she kept her focus simple. It was not an easy task, though, when one has a naturally curious and analytical mind.


Age: UNKNOWN
[main appearence between 24-34 years of age]
but able to pass for younger, as well.
Actual age: 33.
Actual name: UNKNOWN.
Actual occuptation: UNKNOWN
or whatever it is at any given time.
ASSASSIN
ENKIASE (at least in part if not whole)
True nature: UNKNOWN .......................-*Lonely, searching


Sen -
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Crystalline Senna {also called Sen} wore a multi-coloured tourmaline crystal around her neck which hu
over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
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Hey, awesome character, Sinna. I really like it! XD
over a year ago Sinna_Hime_chan said…
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Relief! I am glad you liked. Thank you for the compliments on my writing. I have been rusty of late. (I do not know if it is appropriate to post these commentary thingies here, I am following your lead, but I guess they can always be deleted if you wanted it cleaned up for rp posts only later. I talked to White Flame, too, not long ago.)XD & I am very relieved (& thankful) you both approved of my writing!
over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
That's great, I'm glad you are enjoying yourself and getting back into writing... I hope I get to talk to you sooner or later. But internet has terrible lately and people have giving lots of stuff to keep me busy XD.
over a year ago blackpanther666 said…
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I hope more people join... I really want to RP this, but its hard with only three people in such a large, intricate and complicated world. XD
12 months ago coriann said…
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name: Laileb, (which spelled backwards means deceptively beautiful fallen angel, who's name is without worth)
Laileb has the deceiving appearance of a child, his callow beauty and everlasting childish charm grabs people's heart and soul
powers: Laileb has the ability to use his ukulele to utterly charm people and sometimes bring them into their doom, sort of like the pied piper, and he can also hypnotize people with his musical spell

He works for the democrat Lord Garan, he calms him and soothes his wrath with his music and tender playing(sort of like David form the bible), puts him to sleep and also does his dirty work, but then when his plying is not good enough, Laileb is beaten, not to mention verbally abused every 5 minutes, but even Laileb's awesome powers cannot surpass the kings stone which makes him immune to all magic it is called the bloodstone

Said to have the power to turn the sun blood red, and to cause thunder, lightning, rain, and tempest! Bloodstone is also used to stop bleeding and preserve health and well being. Gives the wearer clairvoyance and guards against deception. Believed to be one of the most healing and protective stones on earth. Bloodstone is *green* and may have red specks} Vibrates to the number 6.

the poor fallen angel is given barely anything to eat, until one day, the princess, who is the rightful heiress to the throne appears. Laileb is supposed to take her to Garan or kill her himself bu her beauty is too much for him to bear, not her outer beauty alone, but her inner beauty, she offers the boy a whole apple to eat and she is very sweet, and he decides that he wants to work for her instead, however, Garan is still in power, so while he secretly pretends to work for Garan he tries to get this undercover princess unto her rightful place as queen.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=puSkP3uyym5­k
name: Laileb, (which spelled backwards means deceptively beautiful fallen angel, who's name is withou
12 months ago coriann said…
smile
^ ^ okay, im done Liam, what do you think? :)
12 months ago blackpanther666 said…
That is very good! I think this will be great. I'll write a post over the next couple of days and contact Sinna and Whiteflame. While I wouldn't mind doing this RP just us two, it would be quite hard, because it is such a large world, with so many characters. Also, we'll also choose secondary characters to work with as well, so we can get more stuff done. XD
12 months ago coriann said…
hmmm
:) okay, i will be the princess (Apollyander) and then you can be your own best friend, you the andgel and me could meet up and we could like....fight against the evil ruler, who enslaves random folk and is only (democratic) towards the rich people, but sometimes....the rich folk liked to kill people in rather grusome ways for entertainment, so while the rich people were swimming in a pool of awesomeness, the poor people, were like, dying and stuff and barely getting anything.. blackpanther, do you think this is a good idea? :\
12 months ago coriann said…
smile
oh, wait, and the princess could be rolling with us too :P
12 months ago coriann said…
meh
ps. Liam, we should probably discuss together what creatures are sutable to live in each of the lands, to me it seems like Zannap is the perfect place for humans and "maybe" a few fairytale things....plus the animals could be messed up, like...not earth animals
and i was thinking Quesar is the perfect place for angels, they could live on the top of the clouds of the unclimbable moutains and only come down to gather stuff....but you have to give me your opinion too