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Two Hearts
Two Hearts
New Arwen fic! My rewrite of "With All My Heart." NO DOLMA.
Keywords: merlin, arwen, arthur, guinevere
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Two Hearts
New Arwen fic! My rewrite of "With All My Heart." NO DOLMA.
Keywords: merlin, arwen, arthur, guinevere
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The conversation with Gauis was perfect.. I especially loved the bit about him being born of magic and good person. Touching. And again, poor Arthur...
Arthur's inner war breaks my heart, but it is too good! Both about Merlin and Gwen. I love how he cannot stay angry for too long. And how he questions himself about not being able to tell Gwen was enchanted. Fantastic chapters!
But thank you for writing it in this story though. I am enjoying it, as usual. And always I love the way you write Arwen.
Chapter 6 is up!
The whole issue of Gwen never getting pregnant would have been a HUGE deal. That basically would have been her only job as queen during that era. She has to have babies so there is an heir. That's it. There would have been tons of gossip and even accusations about fact that she hadn't conceived in three years. People would have been looking for Arthur to take a mistress to get an heir by any means. They would have blamed the fact that he married a servant. It would have been major, and the show ignoring this completely only made it more obvious, at least to me.
And the sword in the stone thing WAS rubbish, but I think I spun it pretty well. I wrote it and was like, "Whoa, that's pretty good..."
And yes, I agree about the sword in the stone thing. When I read it I even questioned myself 'maybeee I got it all wrong'... You gave it a meaning that the show tried and failed miserably.
And Oh My God this chapter was everything i needed!!!!! It explained everything so perfectly, touched every tabu and unspoken thing. Lancelot, baby, Arthur not being the good husband as he could be( which was so OOC for him). This honesty and love that can be felt was something I really missed. Perfect! You've outdid yourself, Kim... *standing ovation*
And awwwww, Arthur and Gwen being worried parents even now is so adorable.. Them having a baby was one of my biggest wishes! And I loved how Arthur told him he thinks of him as his brother...
Morderd's bond with Kara was very sweet. You've managed the story really well, made it seem much more realistic.
Oh and have fun at the concert!!!
Reading this, I'm reminded how much I need domestic happy Arwen. I'm glad it was Arthur who killed Morgana, it felt right. I don't really like when Merlin does all the work and Arthur appears like an idiot. And twins, just awwww. It's nice to read open hearted conversations between OT3, that's the best!
BTW, I'm going to point it out here because no one has commented on it if they've noticed: Morgana dies without ever knowing Merlin's secret or who Emrys is. I thought that was really cool, but NOBODY has made mention of it.
"I can see it because I'm the one who placed it on her and I want to be able to see it to make sure it remains,” Merlin says. “No one else will notice anything. Not even a magic user. Not Mordred, and he is my pupil. Not even Morgana, a High Priestess.”
Btw, how do you pronounce Gwydre?
And him having magic is brilliant! Now at least they won't have a problem with recognizing them!
Percival is adorable. Judging my his physical appereance, you'd think he'd have no problem approching a lady.
I always loved the idea of Leon and Mithian. And I know you did as well.. Here, they have so much in common, it would be at least unusual relationship, I dare to say.
And Gwaine and Elena, didn't even realise how good pair they'd be until now.
Already 2 other stories in your mind? why am I not surprised! :D
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