Balto 4 4:12am 29
29/3/2010
it is just like 24 except on guns. So here I go

pevusely on balto 4
" I have to get away from here"says Balto "why" says Alue
The folowing takes place between 4:00 am to 6:00 am
" It's that idot Steel is why I am running" says balto "ohhhh" says alue "I only think thi-"says balto " DAD LOOK OUT !" says alue. He falls on to a lake with thin ice "eaaa don't worry I will get mom" says alue she gose all the way from Candova to Nome. " I have no intanchen to do this " says steel " were is Jenna ?mabe she is up with her new boyfriend Kaltag" says alue foolshely " I HERD THAT " shouts kaltag She gose to find her and tells her " HOLY crap " says Jenna" we have to help him" your right " says alue .when theay get there the ice looks like it will shatter. Alue gose to cross "ALUE " shouts balto and jenna "what" says alue then suddnley the ice and she falls thrugh balto gets across.over in nome "we have to kill Alue an-" steel says "status report she is all redy dead "says niju (makeing a face XO ) "so she is dead yeah great great " steel says sadly.
I am makeing a another one this is a piolt epeasode it depeands if it gets lots of vewis in comments if you want you can mark out of 10 thanks