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Jacob and Renesmee Life After Breaking Dawn -Chapter 1

Opinion by BiteMeCullen107 posted over a year ago
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It was only a couple minutes after the reception and Aunt Alice was practically jumping out of her skin. “Esme can we show them please, please, please?” Aunt Alice begged. “Ok but calm done Alice we don’t want to give it away.” Grandma told Aunt Alice. They tied a peace of cloth around Jacob and my eyes. We walked a mile and Grandma and Aunt Alice took of the blindfolds. Jacob and I stood in front of a beautiful three story house. “Grandma, Aunt Alice its beautiful. Thank you so much.” I said turning back to them giving them both the biggest hug I’ve ever given any one. They said goodnight and were gone.

We just stood there a little bit longer and I was mesmerized my how beautiful it was. Then Jacob picked me up into his arms and walked inside. It was gorgeous. The house was all new the furniture from the chairs and the couches to the cabinets and the TVs. Jacob and I walked up stairs we opened the first door down the hall. “Do you want to check the rest of the house out Ness?” Jacob asked. “Not right know I want to get out of this dress first.” “That’s probably a good idea I’ll go change to.” Jacob walked into are bedroom bathroom. I tried to untie my dress but because Aunt Alice insisted on making my dress top more like a corset I couldn’t unlace it. so I just gave up. “I thought you wanted to get out of the dress?” “I do but Aunt Alice insisted on making the top like a corset and I can’t unlace it can you help?” My hands on my hip. Jacob walked over smiling at me.

Jacob turned me around. His hands were warm against my bare arms. He moved my long curly hair to one side of my neck as his warm lips touched the other side. “I love you.” he whispered in my ear. Jacob fished unlacing my top as he started kissing my neck again and slid down my back. He turned me around slowly and are lips met. He picked me up my hands around his neck and my hands tangled in his hair my legs rapped around his waist. I could feel his warm body heat coming from his bare chest. Jacob walked forward knocking my back against the wall. My hands still tangled in his hair one of his arms around my waist the other on the wall. He walked to the bed throwing me down. He kissed my stomach and moved back up to my lips. I turned him on his back. Sitting on him nailing his hands to the bed. Though Jacob was a little stronger then he was able to get out of my grasp. After that every thing ells just fell into place.

The next morning I woke up to the smell of bacon, eggs, sausage and orange juice. I was starving so I didn’t bother trying to find any clothes so I just grabbed one of Jake’s T-shirts that was laying on the floor and ran down stairs. I ran strait to Jacob and hugged him around the waist. He brought the food to the table and turned around to kiss me, and everything was perfect.

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omg u r an awsum riter
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ninoska12 said:
OMG this was awesome. i totally want renesemee's life. cause she gets jake black. omg good writer.
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Omg trust me u r an awesum writr u kp me busy wt ts
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Nessie_C said:
this is great :D
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Nessie_C said:
i love the deatil
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<3
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uglyjane said:
OMG...mah koojless..she's soooo into it...ur gewd writer..n wish u write more..lol...
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