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The Golden Tear part three

Opinion by edward-lover456 posted over a year ago
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The Golden Tear part three
"Someone killed Mrs. Frendlen" she spoke soft like velvet or silk
and with that pice of infomation I jumped out of bed and walked
into the dinning room and to my serprice Molly and David were in
there with Cheese my hamster Molly got up from the floor and said
"Mama Eva I can't belive you have a hamster" "yeah I do well that
was you'r gift I guess you got it early" and than Liz said "Oh Eva
i'm sorry I thaught it was okay to play with Cheese and then
Molly woke up so I let her play I'm I'm so sorry" I told Liz "it's alright
honey" and I said "So I wonder who killed her?" and Molly and David
said "Killed who?" and Liz said without thinking "killed Mrs. Frendlen"
I said "it's okay kids we are all fine so let go play with cheese in the
living room alright" they all three replyed "alright" "school
will bw fun it starts tomarrow!" I said as we walked in to the livingroom
David said "Mama Eva why do we have to go to school" and Molly
ansered for me by saying "because we need to learn so when we get
older we can have an awsome job" and David asked me if that was
true and I said "yes Molly knows why" and Liz butted in and said
"Eva I need well I need to well um" I said "well spit it out" and she
said "I need to find a job" and I said "oh well okay we will start
looking tomarrow" and she said "well I already have one but it's
at the place you used to work at and I work with Steve" Steve is
my exboyfriend he dumped me for a yonger woman and I said
"oh okay" and she said "it ain't going to be werid right?" and I said
"know" evrn though I was thinking how could she how could she
and the we herd the phone ring so i got up and I went to the phone
picked it up and said "hello?" and The vioce on the other side said
"hey Eva it's it's well no one important just do as i say and no-one will......."
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AWESOME:D

Please write chapter 4:D

I want to know more
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why why why.........
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awesome
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myfrau said:
more more more....xD
good job :)
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