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“I think we should go” Damon said, looking at the clock. It was eleven p.m. “Okay, I’ll just go refresh myself and then we can leave” Elena said. She got up and walked to a red door next to the desk. To get there she had to pass the table were tattoo-guy and companions were still sitting. She felt her heart beating faster and she got sweaty palms. But they didn’t look up and she reached the bathroom without a problem. When she closed the door behind her she dared to breathe again. There were two doors opposite of each other. One said men, the other women. She opened the women’s door and walked in.
The three guys were getting ready to leave. Other than them and Damon and Elena no one was there. “I’m going to wash my hands first. These paper things are worthless” tattoo-guy said. “I’ll be right back” He walked to the bathroom, where he saw Elena standing by the hand basin. It was a large one, so several people could stand next to each other. Elena shoved up a little when she saw him. He opened the tap and washed his hands. When he was ready he turned around at Elena.
“Hey, I eh, I wanted to apologize. What I did in there was unacceptable” he said. “It’s been a while since I saw a beautiful girl, let alone talk to one. I was just showing off”
Elena nodded.
“That guy in there” he continued, looking at the door. “Is he your boyfriend?”
“Damon?” Elena said. “No, he’s not… I’m actually dating his brother Stefan”
“So you’re dating Stefan, but you go out with Damon. What is this, some open relationship? I like this Stefan, he seems like a very sharing person” tattoo-guy said. “I’m sure he won’t mind if I do this” he leaned forward and forced a kiss on her.
“Don’t do that” Elena said and she pushed the guy away… But he was really strong. “A girl like you shouldn’t be dressed like that” he said with a hungry look in his eyes. He pushed her against the basin with one hand and with the other he opened his belt. “Nooo, please, don’t hurt me!” Elena screamed.
Damon got up and headed to the bathroom, but in the middle of the hallway he was blocked by Stefan.
“Get out of my way” Damon said agitated.
“Why?” Stefan asked arrogant.
“Elena, she…” Damon panted.
Stefan grabbed his collar. “What did you do to her?”
“Nothing! Will you just listen?” Damon said angry and nervous.
Stefan focused and listened.
Elena was screaming, tattoo-guy was laughing, they heard a bang, bone breaking and a body that hit the floor. And all of that happened in the one minute Stefan and Damon were standing there face to face.
Stefan finally let go of Damon and together they ran into the bathroom. Tattoo-guy was lying on the ground, blood coming out of his head. There was blood on the basin too. Apparently he had fallen on the basin, broke his skull and dropped dead. They heard sobbing and turned around. Elena was sitting in a corner, her arms around her legs, crying. Damon wanted to go to her, but this time Stefan was quicker. He ducked and lay his hands on hers. “Elena, sweetie? Look at me” he said, lifting up her chin. “This is not your fault. He tried to do something really bad and you just defended yourself. It was an accident”
Elena looked at Damon. “I just did what you told me to. You said if anyone wanted to hurt me I had to hurt them first”
“Elena, we’re going to walk out of here, and we’ll get you home” Stefan said.
“What are you going to do with the body?” Elena asked.
“I’ll take care of it” Damon said. “As soon as I know you’re safe. Are you okay with that?” he asked Stefan. Stefan nodded and the three of them walked out.
As soon as they were really gone, tattoo-guy moved and scribbled up.
“I thought they’d never leave” he said and he slowly walked out of the bathroom, and out of the hamburger place.
posted by LowriLorenza89
ABO - Alpha/Beta/Omega verse. A fan fiction genre where characters have secondary genders, with some stereotypical personality traits and canine sexual aspects.

Angst - sad and depressive content, e.g. character deaths, reactions to break-ups, depression and pain.

AU - Alternate universe. Taking the characters from their original setting and placing them in a completely different scenario.

Author's note - a note left by the fan fiction writer, often at the start or end of a chapter but sometimes in the middle. It can be asking for reviews, apologising for an absence/slow posting or explaining...
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posted by LowriLorenza89
My first dislike is when a fan fiction is badly written. I can overlook the occasional mistake, but when a work is filled with errors in spelling, grammar or punctuation, this spoils the story. I don't want to have to struggle to understand what's actually written. It looks unprofessional, pulls me out of what I'm reading and ruins the illusion that the fan fiction could be an addition to or alternate version of the canon story. I understand that some people might not be writing in their first language, or they could be dyslexic or just poor at English, but in such cases they could use a beta...
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Tyler woke up with a burning pain on his chest. Someone was caressing his exposed chest with a vervain flower.
“Good evening, Tyler” a woman said. It wasn’t Veronica. She had a paper bag with her, probably full of vervain and wolfsbane. Her hand disappeared in the bag, but she withdrew her hand she was holding up a sandwich. Tyler raised his eyebrows, something that didn’t go unnoticed. “What? A girl’s got to eat, right? And I don’t know how long I’ll be in here, because that totally depends on you”
“Why? If you’re going to kill me, why not just do it?” Tyler snapped...
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Rachel stared at her eldest daughter, crying of happiness and grief. The last time they had seen each other Rachel had told Kelsey about her true nature and things didn’t end well between them. Now all Rachel wanted was for Kelsey to become solid so she could take her in her arms like any normal mother would.
“Are you…a ghost?” she asked. “Why haven’t you try making contact with me? Why now?”
“We tried, mom” Amber replied. “When Derek dug up our graves on Veronica’s command, he didn’t just release our bodies, but our spirits as well. We tried to reach you, but like Jeremy...
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“I’m the one getting you out of jail” Stefan pointed out.
“And I’m the one still waiting for that to happen” Rachel responded with raised eyebrows. She tried to look beside Stefan. “How did you get in here? I mean, with all the deputies and the sheriff”
“I used the backdoor” Stefan smirked mischievous. He took the bars and wrecked them. He took Rachel’s hand and pulled her out of the cell. “Let’s get out of here”

“Where are we going?” Rachel asked when Stefan dragged her along at a rapid pace.
“I need you to meet someone” Stefan responded. He stopped at Mystic...
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Gabe’s body was lying on a table in the basement of the Salvatore Boarding House. Stefan was leaning forward to get a closer look, when he heard a door open and close.
“I’m down here!” he yelled, before the visitor could call him. Rushing down the stairs and an instant later Tyler appeared. “Glad you could come so fast”
“You said it was important” Tyler replied scrupulously.
“It is” Stefan confirmed. He nodded at the body. “I need you to…sniff this one. I want to know who killed him”
“You want me to sniff him?” Tyler asked with raised eyebrows.
“Pretty much” Stefan...
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Elena parked her car at the Boarding House. Caroline had taxed her with the message to get her ass there ASAP. She opened the door and looked inside.
“Damon!” she called.
Damon appeared in the hallway, frowning. “What are you doing here?”
“Caroline taxed me” Elena said, waving her phone. “Hello to you, too, btw” She tried to look over Damon’s shoulder. “What’s going on?”
Before Damon could answer Caroline appeared.
“Elena, what are you doing here?” she asked, but in a completely different tone than Damon. “Come on” she continued as she took Elena’s hand and...
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Rebekah stormed downstairs into the sitting room where Elena was still sitting on the couch.
“What happened?” she asked worried when she saw Rebekah’s face. Rebekah didn’t answer, but raced to Elena, grabbed her neck and attacked her.
Elena screamed and Rebekah tightened her grip.
“Hey!” Damon shouted and he rushed to Rebekah. He grabbed her hair and swayed her into the room. He bit his wrist and held it against Elena’s lips.
“No” she groaned. “No vampire blood”
Damon pressed his wrist against her lips and forced her to drink. Elena’s neck healed and she relaxed.
Damon...
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The door of the Boarding House slammed open and Stefan entered the house, with Katherine still in his arms.
“Stefan, are you all right?” Rebekah asked worried as she quickly got up. She walked to him, but Stefan headed for the stairs.
“Where’s Damon?” Elena asked when she didn’t see Damon coming in.
“He…he stayed behind. There was something he had to do” Stefan said vague.
“Stefan” Elena protested unsatisfied.
“He’ll explain everything when he’s back” Stefan replied impatient. He turned to Rebekah. “Could you bring some blood bags?”
Rebekah reluctantly went to...
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“They took Katherine? Why?” Damon asked dismayed.
“They didn’t take her. They just…they won’t let her go” Derek said agitated. “Like I said, she was upset and she was in the mood for some kills. But Ronnie had already summoned us to capture you, so when Katherine came we could easily overpower her”
“You mean you took her by surprise” Damon snapped disgusted. Derek shrugged uneasy. “Yeah…Ronnie shot a few arrows in her back and Rachel snapped her neck” he explained.
“Who the hell is Rachel?” Damon asked frowning and squeezing his eyes.
“She’s Kelsey and Amber’s...
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Jeremy parked his car at the address Veronica had given him. She was waiting for him outside.
“What are those signs?” Jeremy asked, pointing at the signs on the wall.
“They’re to keep ghosts out” Veronica explained.
“Ghosts?” Jeremy asked skeptic.
“Yeah, you know, dead people” Veronica said. “You can’t see the signs during the day, because it’s fluorescent paint”
“So, ghosts can’t enter” Jeremy said slowly.
“Well, they can travel with mediums, but you’re not a medium” Veronica replied obviously. She squeezed her eyes and cast Jeremy an exploratory glance....
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Katherine was standing by the punch bowl. She looked around to make sure no one was watching, before she conjured a small bottle and poured some of its content in the bowl. She stirred with the ladle to mingle the alcohol with the punch.
“I saw that”
Katherine smirked and turned around. Stefan was standing behind her, his hands in his pockets.
“And what is that, Mr. Salvatore?” she asked. She took a cup and poured some punch in it.”Can I seduce you to a sip?” she whispered while she held the cup against his lips.
Stefan accepted the cup and drank. He raised his eyebrows. “Are you...
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Caroline was putting on her dress when the door of her bedroom opened and Liz appeared. “Sweetie, there’s someone here for you” she said soft. Caroline, expecting it would be Tyler, nodded and said: “Okay, mom, you can let him in”
But it wasn’t Tyler, it was Damon. Caroline turned around annoyed. “You’re the last person I expected. What is that you want?” she asked a little hostile. She zipped the dress and turned around.
“I want to say I’m sorry” Damon said, reaching out his hands. “I was wrong keeping you away from Elena. You’re the best friend she has and I was...
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“You’re going to regret this” Rebekah said trembling. “That’s my necklace. I lost it, back in the twenties. On the night I met your brother” Klaus never said she couldn’t tell Damon.
“You’re lying” Damon replied supercilious.
“Am I, now?” Rebekah said slowly as she stepped closer to Damon. “Stefan knew how to experience all the perks of being a vampire. We had so much fun together, while you were probably sulking over your dear Katherine”
“And you’re telling me this, because?” Damon wondered.
“Stefan and I have a past, a present and if you back off and don’t pull of stunts like you just did, then we might have a future” Rebekah answered threatening.
“But pulling stunts is so fun” Damon replied.
“You don’t want be on my bad side, Damon” Rebekah threatened. Suddenly she gasped, her eyes bulged and her face turned dark grey.
“No” a female voice said. “But I do”
Rebekah fell down and Katherine appeared.
The Hospital
The door of the examination room slammed open and doctor Fell looked up. “Would you mind waiting outside, please?”she said annoyed.
Tyler ignored her and walked straight to the bed.
“How are you feeling?” he asked worried.
“I’m okay” Veronica said. “Doctor Fell gave me a miracle drug. I’m as good as new”
Meredith shot her a warning glance.
“How did you know where I was?” Veronica wondered.
“Rachel told me” Tyler explained. “She told me Rebekah attacked you”
Veronica shook her head. “Actually it was Stefan” she said.
“Why would Stefan want to hurt you?” Tyler asked skeptic. “He doesn’t even know you”
“Neither does Rebekah” Veronica shrugged. “They know. They know that we’re going to try and take them down. We’re going to have to move fast”
“No, what you need to do is stay away from Rebekah” Tyler said. “I mean it, Ronnie, she’s dangerous”
“So am I” Veronica said sharp.
Bonnie closed her suitcase and lifted it from the ground. She carried it, but it was really heavy. She needed Caroline for this. After all she would need a place to stay when she left the clinic. Which was today. She had signed her release.
“Are you going somewhere?” a male voice asked. Bonnie waited for Keith to catch up with her. Maybe he could carry her suitcase for her. And indeed, as soon as he was standing next to her he said: “Here, let me do that”
He took the suitcase out of her hands and released Bonnie from her burden.
“So, are you leaving?” he asked.
“Yeah, I feel a lot...
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Elena opened the door of the Boarding House. As she passed the living room she saw Damon sitting in the couch, his back to her. She wanted to sneak away, but…
“Elena! Get your ass in here now!” Damon said. He sounded furious and so Elena rushed to him. She looked at him and startled. She had never seen him this angry.
“What’s wrong? Did I do something?” she asked careful. Damon looked at Stefan, who came out of the study room.
“I’m sorry, Elena. I thought he knew” he said sad.
“Knew what? What is going on?” Elena exclaimed.
“Will you stop playing dumb?” Damon said angry...
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Elena’s doctor was driving on the road. There was not many traffic, so she’d be at work fast. Then she’d have some time to do some paperwork.
The radio was playing lame music, so she looked for a CD. While she put Switchfoot in the CD-player, she had her eyes off the road for two seconds. When she looked up again she screamed.
There was a woman standing in the middle of the road. She had long, dark blonde hair, green eyes and she looked rather pale.
The doctor braked and her car made a few turns before it stood still. Before she got out she needed to get her heart beat under control.
Her door opened and a familiar man appeared.
“Are you all right?” Alaric asked concerned.
The doctor nodded heavy, breathing fast.
“What happened?” Alaric asked.
She looked at Alaric, thinking he’d think she’s crazy.
“I thought I saw a ghost” she said quickly as if it wouldn’t sound so insane if she said it fast.
One month later.
Damon was making breakfast when Elena came into the kitchen.
“Morning” she mumbled. Ever since Rebekah had forced her to drink blood she had been very distant towards Damon. This was his fault. If he hadn’t been so damn stubborn she wouldn’t have had to go help Stefan and she wouldn’t have been in that position. What if Rebekah had killed her? Then Elena would be a vampire now, all because of Damon’s brother issues.
“So, eh, what are your plans today?” Damon asked, trying to be casual. He knew he had a lot to make up for.
Elena shrugged. “Going to school, obviously....
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Elena was leaning against the door trying to hear what was being said when Damon pushed the door open. Elena rubbed her temple and looked angry at Damon.
He frowned, then got the picture. “Sorry” he mumbled.
“Where’s Kat?” Elena informed.
“Gone” Damon said short. “She won’t bother to come here…ever”
Elena gave him a weird look, but decided not to ask any further. Not about Kat, anyway. “Was that Caroline? I thought I heard her voice”
“Yeah, but she’s gone too” Damon said.
“Why?” Elena asked.
“I sent her away” Damon said, avoiding Elena’s look.
Elena shook...
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