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Fill this out and see if you're oc/fursona is a Mary-Sue. (Hopefully not.)

Let's see if Auburn is. o3o


[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[ ] They are physically strong

[x] They have a rare hair/fur colour (idk, she has a marking on her ears that's an unusual brownish color.)

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change colour

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ ] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender

[x] They have lots of friends/no friends (She has very little friends.)

[ ] They are emo/cutesy (Oh please. Emo is not cute, it's a state of mind. XD)

[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[x] They are currently in a relationship

[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[ ] They have a mental disorder

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ ] They have multiple personalities

[ ] They are very intelligent

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[x] They have a rare/unusual name (I'm the only Auburn I know besides the singer. XD)

[x] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc. (I was born on Christmas.)

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[x] They are connected with a certain animal (Lemur? XD)

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga/cartoon.

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ ] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[x] They are from a different country to where they live (Madagascar)

[x] They are very mysterious/dark (She has a dark mind, but rarely shows it. XD)

[x] They are very lively/happy

[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[x] They are very patient (Depends what she's waiting for. XD)

[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)

[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear ( A black and white striped scarf :3 )

[ ] They have amnesia

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] The have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

Point Reductions:

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[x] They are overweight (a little bit, she just loves food. So OVERWEIGHT does not mean FAT. e3e)

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[ ] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[ ] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

Final Score is: 10 (Balanced. :D)

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^


6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26< -Mary-Sue
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Yay! I have a balanced character! XD
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VeeTruLxi said:
[X] Their eyes are an unusual colour (For penguins? Brown eyes...?)

[X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc (Psychic...)

[X] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet (She'll learn soon. She just jokes around that she's Psychic when she is. She's still learning though!)

[X] They have lots of friends/no friends (Vee has her team members and other animals around the zoo)

[ ] They are currently in a relationship (Not according to my fanfics. She doesn't like anyone right now)

[ ] They have a mental disorder (Kowalski thinks Vee does XD)

[X] They are a psycho (Kinda)

[X] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. (Psychics can do that, can't they? All I know is from Psych...)

[X] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (As a psychic? I guess so She doesn't though.)

[X] They have a rare/unusual name (Vee...Venus...Cookie? XD Yeah unsual)

[X] They are very lively/happy (Vee has an older twin named Luna and yes, they are happy. Vee can get depressed though.)

[X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly (Vee...)

[X] They are very patient (Luna is. Vee is sometimes)

[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (Vee has a small cresent moon clip in her feather/hair, holding her feather/hair in a ponytail. Luna has a star clip holding some feather/hair back)


Point Reductions:

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[X] They are overweight (Not as skinny as Luna, but still kinda skinny. Has a small pudgy belly.)

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[ ] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others (Does annoying Kowalski count?)

[ ] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

Final Score is: 10 (or 11?) (Yay, balanced! :D)
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ImAnEasel said:
I assume that a complete mary sue is also known as the typical puke inducing hero that you see traces of in almost every single main character in books, films etc. Am I right?

Moonshadow = 9

Squeak = 8

Venom = 5/6 (I may have lost count)

Nebular = 8

Chloe = 14

Experiment 1 = 12

Winston = 2

I can't be bothered to do any more OCs. XD

Thanks for putting this up! It's a really good judge of whether or not you need to improve on your character and it also gives you some ideas as to how to improve them.
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[x] They have lots of friends/no friends (I'm/She's just shy and anti-social)
[x] They have a rare/unusual name (Whatever, I'd name my daughter Icicle if I want. XD)
[x] They always dress like a certain 'label' (Blue feather, blue eyeglasses, which I really do have)
[x] They are very mysterious/dark (Not exactly. Only when I'm...depressed. XD)
[x] They are very lively/happy (Happiness is the best)
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are. (In RL, I'm 16. In OC life...she's 16 too. XD We both look 10!)
[x] Their eyes are an unusual colour

[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear ( Blue feather! )
TOTAL: 8

Point Reductions:
[x] They enjoy bullying others (SOMETIMES...Okay, yeah, I'm mean.)

[x] They do not care much about others (I'm mean, but not all the time...I cry for people...)

[x] They are emotionless (I'm pretty sure that's the definition of Icicle. Haha! But not all the time)
TOTAL: 3

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

IN YOUR FACES MARY SUEs! >:D

...Heheh, I'm boring. XD Dang. I need to 'spice it up' a bit!...I WILL NOW SHAPE-SHIFT--Okey, that's a little too much.
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[x] They are physically strong

[x] They have a rare hair/fur colour (Pengotter lol)

[x] They have lots of friends/no friends

[x] They are emo/cutesy (Not “Emo”… More like gothic)

[x] They are currently in a relationship (Do crushes count? o3o)

[x] They have an emotional disorder (Don’t ask… -3-)

[x] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[x] They are very mysterious/dark

[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (Dark violet/black rose)

[x] The have a curse upon them (Not so much a curse as it is an inherited problem… “Feral” side xD)

[x] They have a short temper


6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

...Yay. xD
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[x] Their eyes are an unusual colour (purple... lol XD)
[x] They have lost one/both of their parents (her dad :()
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are. (she's small (and cute XD), so she looks much younger than she is)
[x] They are very intelligent (I CAN'T HELP THAT SHE HAS A GOOD MEMORY! But to make it very bright, she barely uses her intelligence XD)
[x] They have a guardian spirit (Um... yeah I think Johnathan falls in this category :/)
[x] They are connected with a certain animal (Penguin? XD)
[x] They are very lively/happy

Oh... good... balanced... Johnathan's another story though *looks at Johnathan*
John: What?! D:<
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Kat32112 said:

[X] They are physically strong

[X] Their eyes are an unusual colour

[X] Their eyes change colour

[X] They have wings

[X] They are immortal (Thanks Richard! :D)

[X] (if a female) they have large bra size

[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender

[X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[X] They are a healer

[X] They are from a very rich/royal family

[X] They have lost one/both of their parents

[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[X] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[X] They have lots of friends/no friends

[X] They are currently in a relationship

[X] They have a mental disorder

[X] They have an emotional disorder

[X] They struggle to stay sane

[X] They always dress like a certain 'label'

[X] They are very intelligent

[X] They are hiding from someone/something

[X] They are very mysterious/dark

[X] They are very lively/happy

[X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

Point Reductions:

[X] They smoke

[X] They have a short temper


16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.


Eh...... Not really.
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x=Ally
o=Josh

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[x] They are physically strong

[x/o] They have a rare hair/fur colour (blonde ally. and brown josh.. pretty wierd for a penguin XD)

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change colour

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[x/o] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ ] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[o] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender

[o] They have lots of friends/no friends

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[ ] They are currently in a relationship (they wish XD)

[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[ ] They have a mental disorder

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ ] They have multiple personalities

[x] They are very intelligent (halfway... )

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[ ] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[x] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth (3 years old.)

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga/cartoon.

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[x] They are hiding from someone/something (i....ill explain it later.. im still thinking of a reason XD)

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[x/o] They are from a different country to where they live (Antartica)


[x] They are very mysterious/dark (she doesnt show it..)

[o] They are very lively/happy

[x/o] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[o/x] They are very patient (depends...)

[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)

[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[ ] They have amnesia

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] The have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

Point Reductions:


[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[ ] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[ ] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

Ally: (11)
6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.





Josh: (9)

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.




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yay! balanced character
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1Amberpet said:
My Oc Cynthia is a Mary Sue...

Mya isn't really...
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i change mine, Ally is 12, (shes in a relationship) but still balanced character
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My OC, Sindaj isn't a Mary-Sue. Her greatest fear is ants and her second fear is hospitals
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[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[ ] They are physically strong

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change colour

[X] They have wings (do penguin flippers count?)

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ ] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender

[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[x] They are currently in a relationship (sorta)

[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[ ] They have a mental disorder

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ ] They have multiple personalities

[ ] They are very intelligent

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[ ] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga/cartoon.

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ ] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[x] They are from a different country to where they live (From Australia)

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[x] They are very lively/happy

[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[x] They are very patient (moat of the time. XD)

[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)

[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (Glasses, 'cuz she need them to see, and a diamond-shaped, jade neckalce)

[ ] They have amnesia

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] The have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

Point Reductions:

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[ ] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[ ] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

My score is six. So CC is a balenced character.
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I'm taking this again, 'cuz I have two OCs.

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[ ] They are physically strong

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change colour

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[X] They have lost one/both of their parents (it's actually unknown yet, (cuz I haven't decided))

[ ] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender

[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends

[ ] They are emo/cutesy (Oh please. Emo is not cute, it's a state of mind. XD)

[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[ ] They are currently in a relationship

[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[ ] They have a mental disorder

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ ] They have multiple personalities

[ ] They are very intelligent

[X] They have hallucinations (kinda. Sometimes she see what happened to her in her past)

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[x] They have a rare/unusual name (I suppose Rune would count as unusual)

[x] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc. (Rune was born on April Fools' Day)

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga/cartoon.

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[X] They are hiding from someone/something (she'e hifing from THEM)

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[x] They are from a different country to where they live (Germany)

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[x] They are very lively/happy

[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[ ] They are very patient (not really)

[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)

[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (flower on her left ear)

[ ] They have amnesia

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] The have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

Point Reductions:

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[ ] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[ ] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

and Rune's score is eight. Also balenced.
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Tressa: Balanced Character
They are physically strong
They have lost one/both of their parents
They are currently in a relationship(Tresski)
They are very intelligent
They are connected with a certain element (Electricity!!!
Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
They are very patient
They are hiding from someone/something
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Amy: Balanced Character
They have a rare hair/fur colour
Their eyes are an unusual colour
Their eyes change colour
They never knew their parents
They are currently in a relationship
They are hiding from someone/something
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Matt is like a one. So he is not a Mary sue
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Emma got 11 a balanced character. :3

They have a rare hair/fur colour: The blue bits anyway. :P

They are very attractive to the opposite gender. Hehe if only in real life...

They are telekinetic: Well she USED to have that.

They have sixth sense/can mind-read: Again, USED to have that.

They are currently in a relationship: With Kowalski. :3

They have lots of friends: Emma gets on well with most people. :3

They are very intelligent: Well I've been told I'm really smart in real life, so same with Em. :P

They have a guardian spirit: Her great great great (etc) aunt Eleanor. But she only sees her in dreams. :P

Not from where they're currently living: England. :D

They have a rare blood type: EE negative, doesn't even exist any more, it came from the bit of Rhonchaser (extinct specis I made up, but not mythical or anything. :3) in her, and it's compatible with all other blood types. :D

They are very lively/happy: Emma's quite happy and cheerful most of the time, like me. :D She can be upset though.


And Ashley got a 6, balanced character. :D

Lots of friends: Well when he moved to the zoo he made a lot of friends, but not before. :3

Look much younger than they are: Ashley is really 13, but he looks about 6, 7? XD

Currently in a relationship: With my other Oc, Ava.

Not from where they're currently living: Scotland.

Very lively/happy:

Very patient:


I'm not going to do it for my other characters, since I have too many. XDD

Though I personally think that if people want to make there Ocs all powerful, and mystical and stuff, it's ok, all power to them. I think that someone can go as crazy as they want with their character, because it's their creation. :3 I actually don't believe in Mary Sues to be perfectly honest. A few people on here have characters that tick quite a few boxes, but no ones character annoys me, I think they're all imaginative and awesome! :D So if you want your character to be all powerful an stuff, then its fine by me. :D
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Balanced.

Physically strong
has several powers
is in a relationship
mental disorder
intellegent
talks to spirits at times
although, she does have a bit of a short temper, though, she tries to work with it
posted 9 months ago.
 
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I did Hope, and she isn't a Mary-Sue. If anything, she is the complete opposite!
posted 8 months ago.
 
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So let's see - SHARPEYYYYY! c:

[x] They have a rare hair/fur colour ( Red stripe in her hair. :D )
[x] Their eyes are an unusual colour ( Purple because of the microchip in her flipper, they used to be just blue... or I said brown before. XP )
[x] Their eyes change colour ( From the microchip ._. XD But it remains purple as long as she has the microchip )
[x] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift ( She can shapeshift using her microchip... XD )
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender ( Um... o3o I think so? XD )
[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers ( Microchip ._. )
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are. ( Well, I meant Sharpey to be in her 20s... but, I think she could be my age? ... Dunno. XD )
[x] They are currently in a relationship ( ... Well, it's not official - just a fandom but - Rico. XD )
[x] They are from a different country to where they live ( France. o3o )
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear ( A red belt xD )

Final result: 10! :3 WOOT BALANCED. 8D

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

:3 Shapeshifting too much? I think it's cool, actually. XDD lol
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