What I Can Come Up With In 2 1/2 Minutes

Something I came up with in 2 1/2 minutes.....


And so she fell
Quick to her feet
Her mind no longer with her
Her body no longer holding her
Her heart no longer beating

And so she fell
Quick as lightning
Here today
Gone tomorrow
No one saw her go
Not even a mouse

And so she fell
She quickly met her fate
Into eternal death does she part
DRIP DRIP
Goes the sound of her bleeding heart.....

So yeah, that's basically it. Yes, I know it sucks but if you're going to bother posting a comment please at least have some constructional criticism that would be actually helpful. K, thanks for reading. :)