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nice!
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Thanks!

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your really funny and a great writer but she's 13 that's kinda gross
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yeah i know- I guess that was the point of the beginning. It was supposed to be so wrong, but they just couldn't stay away. But, thats why I had her grow up =) to age 15.
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New chapter up!
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Another new chapter up! ;-)
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haha I like this:

"I looked up into Edward's STUNNING face. He'd like that one."
"Oh, I do."
lol
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mwalsh said:
i love it please update it soon
love it
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mwalsh said:
when will you write the next chapter?
it is a really great story
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pkrebelde said:
omg!!! why did u stop hahaha i love your story!!! i want more... can i ask u some questions??
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perugal said:
This was great!! I cannot wait to see what happens next. Please keep writing.
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I love it! Great job.
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UUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMM does anyone know if stephanie meyer will write a book about jacob and renesmee?
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You are the best story writer that i have ever seen we want more !
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wubz said:
please pleaaasee keep writing for this story!! you are such an excellent writer!!
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ths was awsome ur such a graet writer. please update
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im srry but im not a big fan of some parts. in the books nessie is described as a polite little girl who usually only speaks through her thoughts but in this shes all getting all wasted. you would think with a family like the cullens she wouldnt do stuff like that even though jake DID leave her. but you ARE an excellent writer and it IS YOUR fanfiction so i can not judge you against your OWN story so you keep righting however you like! WRITE ON~
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ros59 said:
add more chapters please.I love it.You are a great writer.
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MYKEL1431 said:
its a prize winner plz continue CHOW
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antot107 said:
i like your story, please continue writing.. :)
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Why cant I open your link? I want to read your story!
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really nice story.....
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