Okay, I completely get the obsession with the complete lack of ending we got at the end of season 3, but people, you must listen very carefully: Kyle XY isn't just about the love romance thing with Kyle and Jessi.
Yes, that whole romance/finding each other thing was cute, and I loved it, but lets face it... Kyle XY would be boring if the description read, 'Genre: Endless Teen Romance'. Okay, Kyle and Jessi are like the perfect couple, and yes, Amanda is a bloody fool for even thinking she deserved him, and yes, every time argues with Jessi on screen I get mad because she thinks she can hold a candle to Jessi. But the point of Kyle XY is not endless romantic tension between the two protagonists, (though, as Josh so aptly says, I enjoy a good are they aren't they as well as the next person), is not what the whole show is about.
Breaking Inertia Part 2- Chapter One- Exposure by abs07 was well-written, well plotisized, and yes, I did only read the first page which probably makes me a hypocrite in myself. I loved it, because, though I am a girl, I love the Kessi dynamic. It is, in fact, irresistible. But if you are truly attempting to write proper Kyle XY continuation, the romancing of Jessi and Kyle should not take up a whole page of confusion and sadness.
You also made Kyle way too martyrish. I mean, sure he takes way too much onto himself, but he would recognize that Jessi was being partly unreasonable.
Which brings me to the next point, which is that Jessi is a very smart girl who would never object to Kyle, in any form. She has been pining after him forever. And she doesn't even know what a consolation prize is! I mean, come on.
Very good, on the whole, and very entertaining.
Thanks for that, but it is obviously fan fic. If that's what you wanted. well done.!