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The new Mermaid Princess

Fan fiction by ladybat18 posted over a year ago
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Soon the new mermaid princess was born.She was raised by Lady Bat and Ranfa.She is now 10."Why are you born with curly hair"asked Ranfa."I don't know"she replied."well let's use hair gel."Said Destiny.Then Destiny smoothed out Lelia's hair.Then it was perfect."Good,I never liked those curles."said Lady Bat.Then they told Leila how to transform into her singing form.Then she was."Now don't say anytrhing into the mike."1,2,3"Lady Bat and Ranfa fell to the floor.Destiny helped both of them up."mermaids use those to kill people."said Ranfa.Leila thew the mike across the room."oh i am so sorry!!!!!!!But why was Destiny not effected?"asked Liela."She used to be one of the mermaid princess,but she is with us know because of me."Said Lady Bat.Destiny was blushing."well......"Said Destiny.

Thats chapter 2.And destiny is me.....I just like him
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Hey, I have a suggestion. Before you put up any more work, run it through this: http://www.grammarly.com/?affiliate_id==10­61&­amp­;of­fer­_..­.b3­=

Also, go to this site, and check all of the boxes that apply to Lelia:
http://www.springhole.net/writing/maryssue­.ht­m
posted over a year ago.
 
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ladybat18 said:
Thank you.It worked out well.If you have time today go search Lady Bat.I made a club for him.You can tell it is the club by seeing that Lady Bat's eyes are closed.Please join!!!!!!!!
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ladybat18 said:
Sorry make that mermaid melody pur villains.
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ladybat18 said:
pure
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