Boo. I've come back from the grave to write more random things. Seriously, this time. I believe I've improved as a writer, after several stories a few dozen poems and about ten writing classes. So, let's see how this goes.
A slender but sturdy orange mare bucked her hind legs, her hooves thumping into a tree. Apples fell like rain, overflowing the buckets and coaxing a smile. A few feet away, a canary-coated mare flinched, letting out a squeak. "It- it's very l-loud..." She mumbled, cheeks pink. The orange mate laughed. "Of course it is, Fluttershy. All hard work produces noise." The mare's voice carried hints of the south, an accent that was both soothing and exciting to the Pegasus mare. Flicking her straw-colored mane to the side, the southern-sounding female sighed. "Who-ee. I'm ready for a drink. Ya want anythin', Sugarcube?"
The other pony started. "O-oh, um, yes. I-I mean, if it's not a bother, and if there's enough. B-but you can--" the other mare's chuckling cut over her. "Sugar, I've told you time and time again, ya need to stop thinking you're a burden. Ah like your company, darlin'." The paler of the two blushed. "T-thank you Apple Jack."
AJ hummed leading the way to the house. "Oh, and Sugarcube?"
"Y-yeah?"
The earth pony broke into a fond smile. "You're sweet as cider."
Gomennasai, it's short. But, I think that that's all I needed to write for them. Short sweet and to the point, like AJ. If it's good, please let me know. Writers love love love praise. Thank you!
-Petals
A slender but sturdy orange mare bucked her hind legs, her hooves thumping into a tree. Apples fell like rain, overflowing the buckets and coaxing a smile. A few feet away, a canary-coated mare flinched, letting out a squeak. "It- it's very l-loud..." She mumbled, cheeks pink. The orange mate laughed. "Of course it is, Fluttershy. All hard work produces noise." The mare's voice carried hints of the south, an accent that was both soothing and exciting to the Pegasus mare. Flicking her straw-colored mane to the side, the southern-sounding female sighed. "Who-ee. I'm ready for a drink. Ya want anythin', Sugarcube?"
The other pony started. "O-oh, um, yes. I-I mean, if it's not a bother, and if there's enough. B-but you can--" the other mare's chuckling cut over her. "Sugar, I've told you time and time again, ya need to stop thinking you're a burden. Ah like your company, darlin'." The paler of the two blushed. "T-thank you Apple Jack."
AJ hummed leading the way to the house. "Oh, and Sugarcube?"
"Y-yeah?"
The earth pony broke into a fond smile. "You're sweet as cider."
Gomennasai, it's short. But, I think that that's all I needed to write for them. Short sweet and to the point, like AJ. If it's good, please let me know. Writers love love love praise. Thank you!
-Petals
Derpy: (flying home)
Master Sword: (runs over to her, and ends up asking her on a date).
Derpy: Uhh... Sure, I don't see why no- (suddenly gets shot in the arm, though it's only a flesh wound).
Master Sword: (holding handgun) That's great! I'm so damn happy!!
Derpy: (holding arm, and looking mad at him) WHY THE HELL DID YOU SHOOT ME!?
Master Sword: Because I'm a weird, creepy, green guy.
Derpy: Your an idiot!
Master Sword: (proudly) Yes! But I'm YOUR idiot!
Not much of an chapter.. But it's I have for now..
Please leave reviews and all that jazz ;)
Master Sword: (runs over to her, and ends up asking her on a date).
Derpy: Uhh... Sure, I don't see why no- (suddenly gets shot in the arm, though it's only a flesh wound).
Master Sword: (holding handgun) That's great! I'm so damn happy!!
Derpy: (holding arm, and looking mad at him) WHY THE HELL DID YOU SHOOT ME!?
Master Sword: Because I'm a weird, creepy, green guy.
Derpy: Your an idiot!
Master Sword: (proudly) Yes! But I'm YOUR idiot!
Not much of an chapter.. But it's I have for now..
Please leave reviews and all that jazz ;)