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Ok, I see that A LOT of you are asking questions about the story contest. Here are the contestants so far:

Cullen-wannabe
cici1264
Edwardlover0013
bubble_babe
_madz_
sami1002
Swhit2
twerdx24x1
nikkitwilight12

More are welcome to still compete. Send me a message if you are joining.

OK here are the questions A LOT of you are asking me.

What's the minamum and maximum words for you story?
minamum is 1,500 words, maximum is 4,000 words

How do you sudmit the story?
Post it on this spot, in the articles section, where I post my stories.

What is the date the story has to be sudmited?
September 20, 2009

Can I publish the story sooner than September 20?
No. Because most likely people will be reading your story for ideas and I don't want that to happen. Keep your thoughts and creativity to yourself.

Are the stories Twilight related only?
Yes, well because this is a Twilight-dedicated spot.

Can you make up you own characters for your story?
Of course you can! This is your own creativity and your story.

Who are the judges?
I'm only going to say that 4 people, including me, are the judges. NO Bribes are allowed.

What are the prizes?
Prizes are not yet determined.

Can there be multi-parts, like chapters?
No, I don't have enough time to read stories like that. Only one article is allowed to be sudmited.

Can we continue the story after the contest is over?
Of course you can! I'm not going to be in charge of your story after the contest is over. Do what ever you like to it.

How do you earn points in order to win?
Your story will be counted points from:
Creativity
Grammar
Punctuation
Reaction (audience's reaction to the story)
Grabber (does the story get your reader's attention)

Maximum and minimum points?
That's between me and the judges, sorry. ^_^

Can I still join the contest?
Yes you can! Comment this article saying you'll join and you'll need to get your story done and publish it on September 20!

My question is not on the list
Send me a message, and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.

Thanks.
xoxoxox
Caroline
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Wow... things are getting violent! Let's see how high Bella's temper is.. shall we? 7 of 10 articles! 3 more to go! ^_^

PS: Those who are Avatar the Last Airbender fans, the way how Bella is talking to the man is familiar.....O_o

Bella's Life

"What do you want from me? Do you want my money? Go ahead, take it. Just please leave me alone." he said terrified.
"I don't need your money." I growled at him.
"So what do you want?" he pleaded.
"I need to ask you one question." I said.
"Yes. Anything!" he said.
"Look in my eyes and tell me you don't know who I am." I said while grabbing his shirt and put his...
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4 more to go!!! Whooo!!!! ^_^

Bella's POV

"No Bella." Edward said while wrapping his arms around my waist. But as a newborn, I was stronger than him, so I was able to break free from his hold.
"Edward. This is something I promised to do. I didn't bother to do it before, because I was too weak. This is a favor I'm doing for Lilly." I said.
It was still raining.. and my whole body was completely wet, not that it mattered to me.
I sighed and change the subject.
"Let's hunt." I said.
Edward nodded, without saying a word.
While walking away, I couldn't bear the silence any longer.
"I'm sorry.." I whispered...
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I'm halfway there! 5 of 10! 5 more to go! ^_^

Bella's POV

"What?" Edward said, shocked.
I moved away from his touch.
"I was stupid. She was just 6 years old, and I let her roam around the area as if she was 13 years old! I was supposed to babysit her... I spent my time on the phone and smoking stupid drugs!" I yelled to the sky.

"How did your cousin die though?" Edward asked.
"It was nightime when we were here. It was dark. There were gangs of teenagers out having drugs... just like me. Though, it was just an early stage. I started using drugs just a few week ago. But then I didn't realize the...
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3 of 10 articles. 7 more to go.... *groans loudly*

Bella's Life

"Nightshift?" I asked confused.
"You know we don't sleep." Alice said.
"Right." I said.
I looked out the window, and it was completely dark. But with my new eyes, I could still see clearly.
Then suddenly my throat burned a little bit. I auomatically cupped one of hands on my throat.
Edward eyed what I was doing.
"Is something wrong?" Edward asked.
"My throat burns a little bit." I said.
"Ah."
"What?" I asked.
"Let's go hunting Bella." he said.
"Hunting? Did you bring weapons?" I asked a little confused.
He laughed softly.
"We do have weapons."...
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1 of 10 articles today. Ugh.

Bella's POV

Everyone stared at me.
"That name is so familiar..." Alice said.
"Yeah, he owns a sporting good store in Forks." I explained.
"Then I'm confused. He lives in Forks." Leah said.
"Mike Newton moved to Forks before Bella did." Edward explained.
"So why Mike didn't recognize you?" Alice asked.
"For one, I have to change my last name for that undercover mission. For the other thing, well, I had to change my look, so no one would notice it was really me.
"So you are wearing you disguise right now?" Alice asked.
"Well, yeah, but I rather stick with this look these...
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I will put another article up in about 1 hour. ^_^

Bella's POV

Everyone in the car's jaw dropped. Now I regretted to speak the truth. If I was human, my face would be completely red.
Then Alice giggled.
"Who knew Bella had a thing for boys." she said.
I groaned. "Alice, not the best time for teasing."
"Bella? I never knew you dated." Leah said, a little impressed.
I looked at Edward's expression. Jealous?
"Come on Edward! It was 4 years ago." I said, about one more block from the hotel.
Edward growled.
"I can't immagine you with one of those low-lives." he hissed.
I groaned. "That was back then, when......
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I'm SOO MAD! I just wrote this whole chapter and I accidentally pressed the wrong button!!! UGH!!! Well, I hope you enjoy it :)

Bella's POV

I looked into Anthony eyes. I felt so protective of him. It makes feel like he was my own son. Anthony's eyes looked at me, as if I was his mother. It seemed normal for me to kissed my forehead. When I did, he smiled. I had to smile back, he had an adorable smile. Then started playing with my hair, and he giggled. I smiled wider. I can sense that my parents and Alice, Edward, and Leah was smiling too.

"Bella has changed so much. She never got along with...
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Here's another one ^_^

Bella's POV

That's it. I got out of the car and slammed the door. Everyone else did the same thing.
"I can see that I can't wait to delay this conversation, so I guess I will just do it now." I said.

"Wow Bella. You look..different." Charlie said, while getting a better look at me.
"What do you expect, you let Mark send me to missions, and to boot camp. What do you expect!?!? Of course I changed!" I yelled.
He flinched at my sudden outburst.
"Sorry dad." I muttered.
Then Charlie turned to my sister.
"Alexia.. you got the nerve to show up back here again. I made it perfectly...
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I will write a couple more in a few hours. ^_^

Bella's POV

Oh crap! Oh crap! Panicking, I squeezed the steering wheel a little too hard, making the steel loose a little but of its shape. I saw Charlie, staring wide eyed, at me. No no no no no no!!! I planned to meet them later!!

"Bella? Who were those teenagers back there? And why you seemed to be panicking?" Alice said looking at me.
"Charlie..." I said, I couldn't say more.
Leah understood right away.
"Oh crap! Dad!" she yelled.
Then Charlie's eyes were wider, if that was possible.
Then he went out the house door, and headed towards our car....
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Ok, I'm addicted! I'm going to write another chapter after this. ^_^

Bella's POV

"Um, Alice? What did you say?" I said.
"You are a big sister! Your little brother was born an hour ago! His name is Anthony. Isn't that soo cute!?!? I can't wait to meet him. He looks so adorable!! After we arrive, I'm going shopping. He needs some cute outfits.! "she squealed.
If I was still human, I would have collapsed.
My voice came out half-strangled.
"Are... you... telling... me... that... I'm a big sister!?!?!?" I nearly shouted.
"Well, what else would you be?" Alice said.
I turned to Edward.
"She's wrong right?...
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Hmmm.... I will put one more article tonight. Today is a busy day for me. ^_^

Bella's POV

I handed my boarding pass to the steward.
"Bella! Can't you wait up?" Leah said, with Edward behing her.
I didn't answer. I just went inside and looked for my seat. Ugh, don't tell me Edward got me a first class seat! My seat number is 3B.
I took my seat, and I guess Edward got seat 3C, the seat next to me. I saw Leah pass by us.
"Where's your seat?" I asked.
"Seat 34C. Waaayy in the back of the plane. Some of us are trying to save money." she said.
"Well, see you later then." I said.
"Bye."

I'm not used to...
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Alright, last one for today. Good night!

Bella's Life

Leah stared at the both of us, her eyes flickered from me to Edward and back to me. She looked light-headed.
"Leah?" I asked.
Then she collapsed.
"LEAH!" I yelled. I held her up and put her on the chair, with her eyes still closed.
"Leah? Can you wake up?" I whispered.
"Don't worry Bella. She'll come around. Her mind is already stressed enough. Just let herself calm down first." Edward said.
I waited next to her, holding her hand, hoping she'll wake up.
Then her eyes suddenly fluttered and opened.
"Bella?" she whispered.
"Thank God that you are...
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I will post up another article today. ^_^

Bella's POV

We were silent for a couple of minutes. But then we heard thunder outside and saw lightning out the window. I groaned again. I wonder how long the delay is.
Then I heard Leah take a deep breath.
"You really have no idea how heartbreaking it is for me to see you as one of them. But I have to admit, it's better than you dead. It's... just... complicated." she admitted.
I turned around and looked at her.

"What's so complicated?" I asked.
"The tribe. Everything in the tribe, well.. has a hatred over vampires. It's been going on for thousands of...
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Sorry this took so long. My room was messy and I couldn't find my Eclipse book. But I found it yesterday. Ok, enough excuses, here's the next chapter. ^_^

Bella stared at me with disbelief. I ignored her. I'm trying my best to please her father. There was already enough tension for all of us. I wasn't surprised when it worked.
"Fine." he mumbled and moved towards the living room.

I'm not even sure I should let Bella go out with him again. But how can I fight with that? UGH!

When the TV was on, Bella started to talk.
"What-"
"Hold on, I think you can reycle you essays for this one. Same questions."...
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I promise tommorrow that I will continue Evening Star. Sorry!!!!

Bella's POV

"Leah! I know you are in here." I yelled.
No one answered.
"LEAH!" I screamed.
Leah slowly came out of the stall, and stared at me.
"What are you doing here?" she asked, suspicious.
"I was wondering the same thing." I said in a cold, dark tone.
Seeing that this could end up badly, everyone left the bathroom, with just me and my sister alone.
Then she looked at me with a confused expression.
"What?" I demanded.
"Your eyes are brown again." she said, uncertain.
"Contacts. I'm getting annoyed with people staring at me all...
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On weekdays, I will only be able to put one article per day. On the weekends, I will be able to put 3 articles. Camp is annoying the crap out of me. UGH!!!!

Bella's POV

My mouth dropped. My eyes were wide. It was a good thing that Leah didn't see me. I didn't want her to see me. Why is she here? Then I heard footsteps behind me. I didn't bother to turn around because I knew it was Edward.
"What's wrong Bella?" Edward asked from my shocked expression. Then he followed my glance, and was silent.
"Why is she here?" I hissed.
"She's going to meet your parents. She's going to tell your parents...
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Sorry u guys, only one article today. I have a busy schedule!

Bella's POV

"I don't know Bella... Isn't your dad the one who got you into the FBI?" Edward started to say.
"You don't have to come!" I snapped.
"I'm going where ever you are going." he vowed.
"I'll arrange the flight."
We both packed and we headed to the airport.

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Our gate number is A34. Which was already very close from security. Everyone who passed by me looked fightened and moved away from me.
"Why are they staring me like that?" I whispered to Edward.
"Your eyes.." he whispered.

Then I remembered they are red. Right...
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I MIGHT put another article today if I have time. ^_^

Bella's POV

Edward's expression was confused.
"Your parents?" he asked.
I sighed.
"It's been years since I saw them. " I whispered.
"They believed my suicide. I wonder how they'll cope."
"Do you want your parents to be at the wedding?" he asked while wrapping his arms around my waist. My mind trailed off, remembering a talk I had with my mom, years ago, before my sister's "death", or even the FBI.

"Bella, can we talk to you for a minute?" Renee said.
"Is something wrong?" I asked.
"No, but we just need to talk." she said softly.
"You are already...
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