Sry this took FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh and to refresh your memory you should read the chapter before this!!
Chapter 4
“NO!!! NO!!! NO!!! I AM NOT A GODDESS!!! I’M A NORMAL GIRL WITH FEELINGS…AND…..and…and... No, I’m just still dreaming!! Yeah that’s it!!” I screamed to the crowd of goat men behind me. I was a sight, running through a giant forest of white sparkling trees and shimmering damp grass under my feet. My long white dress flowed like water behind me, almost leaving a trail. But I wasn’t going to stop running. Not with the freaky tree nymphs and satyrs following me close behind.
With damping tears stinging my face I searched the forest for a hiding spot. These animals were too quick. I was now wishing I had actually listened to my mom in Greek mythology class. She probably taught something about satyrs and such. But it was so dang boring!!
“Stop mistress stop!!!” Yelled the fat satyr as he waddled with a half-eaten apple in his hand. I had no clue where he got it! Wasn’t he eating bark? I thought to myself while ignoring his demand. Oddly, I looked up above me at the tall white trees. As I looked more closely, I saw pure white, glowing pieces of fruit. They looked like apples, but they weren’t red like fatty satyr’s was.
I was so stupid. I had no idea what I was doing. But of course, I kicked off my gladiator sandals and they soared towards my mob. Then, oddly I ran across the grass pathway towards the biggest tree where I grabbed onto one of the branches, pulled myself up, and pulled down one of the apples. Immediately as it touched my hand it turned a dark, raspberry red. Then, while not thinking, I began chucking every single one of the apples I harvested at the satyrs. They moaned and tried to block them. I began laughing as I chucked more apples. The fat satyr slowly fell over and made a loud ‘ump!!’Sound from his puckered lips.
“Come on!! Is that all you got!??!” I screamed while giggling, my long legs dangling over the branch. Crystal looked furious as her pretty green hair got messed up.
This was the best! Nothing funnier than chucking apples at goat people!! The fat satyr, I think his name was…..I don’t even know, began to shake his fist in the air at me. “Miss Brenna please get down from there!!! You are upsetting the great spirit of Pan and the new Satyr Leader!! Stop disrespecting us!!! Is this how a proper young Goddess treats her loyal servants?!?”
It was quiet for a bit as I thought about that. No one moved. Finally I spoke. “Well I guess I’m just not a ‘proper young Goddess’ like you think I am!” I laughed as I made my voice sound like Professor Umbridge from Harry Potter. Crystal folded her arms as her green face became as red as the apple in my hand. Laughing I chucked my last apple and then I jumped from the tree.
Then that’s when I heard the small, faint whisper. Like diamonds, it was almost crystal clear. But I could hear it, not see it. “You are the goddess…..” It whispered like a silver ghost. I immediacy stopped. None of the satyrs had said anything. Again I heard the faint voice, “You are the goddess….you are the goddesses…” The animals were gaining on me. I had to run. But who was speaking? Confused I began running again….or trying to at least. My feet became frozen to the green grass. I couldn’t move a muscle, it was like I went limp but I was still standing and upright.
“WHATS HAPPENING!!!!????” I yelled out behind me, but I heard no response. I suddenly transported to a different place. No white shimmering trees surrounded me, no soft green grass. All there was was one color: gold. I was standing in a world of gold. I wasn’t on anything or under anything, like another dimension.
“Hello?!?” I called out to the nothing. I didn’t expect anyone to appear, that’s probably why I jumped when I saw a pure white unicorn walking towards me. It had appeared out of nowhere too. “Uh……hi?” I awkwardly asked the horned creature. Its eyes were huge and silver and the pupils just seemed to peer strait through me.
Suddenly I heard a voice, but I didn’t hear it exactly. It was in my head. “Before I introduce myself, let me just say before we start this: you are a big, fat, stubborn, rude, negative idiot.”
….
“WHAT!!!!!!????!!!!!!!!! DID!!?????!!! YOU!!!???!! JUST!!!!!!?????!! SAY!!!!!?????”
……
“I said you are a big, fat, stubborn, rude, negative idiot.” The voice said again. The unicorn began to snort like it was laughing.
“Are….Are you this unicorn in front of me?” I asked even more confused than before.
“NO!!!” The voice said sarcastically. “Yes of course I’m the unicorn. I’m also your animal spirit now shut up and listen to me. You are the goddess. I brought you here, out of the real world. What we are in now is called Immortal Vision. It’s when immortals transport their minds to a different dimension. There they get all their answers, ideas, and where they can speak to their spirit. Each person has a spirit but some spirits are in different forms. Some have bug spirits, some have mythological spirits, and some even have other human spirits. And some have animal spirits. Their spirit is just them in another form. If you were an animal you would be a unicorn. Unicorns are kind, beautiful, caring, thoughtful and lovable. They are also smart mouths, rude, and EXTREMLY stubborn. Just like you.”
“Well that explains a lot! I mean look at you!!” I said now laughing at my own joke. She nudged me hardly with her horn. “HEY!!!”
“Told you I was rude. My name is Edyth.”
“Okay okay so what do you want from me?”
“You need to understand who you really are. You are the goddess. The goddess in that prophecy Rachel made.”
“That was a long time ago!! I don’t even remember it!! So why does it still matter!!!??”
“Let me take you back to the memory of when it happened.” She smiled with a devious hint in her eye. Then she tapped her silver horn lightly on my head. I was immediately in Camp Half Blood.”
Chapter 4
“NO!!! NO!!! NO!!! I AM NOT A GODDESS!!! I’M A NORMAL GIRL WITH FEELINGS…AND…..and…and... No, I’m just still dreaming!! Yeah that’s it!!” I screamed to the crowd of goat men behind me. I was a sight, running through a giant forest of white sparkling trees and shimmering damp grass under my feet. My long white dress flowed like water behind me, almost leaving a trail. But I wasn’t going to stop running. Not with the freaky tree nymphs and satyrs following me close behind.
With damping tears stinging my face I searched the forest for a hiding spot. These animals were too quick. I was now wishing I had actually listened to my mom in Greek mythology class. She probably taught something about satyrs and such. But it was so dang boring!!
“Stop mistress stop!!!” Yelled the fat satyr as he waddled with a half-eaten apple in his hand. I had no clue where he got it! Wasn’t he eating bark? I thought to myself while ignoring his demand. Oddly, I looked up above me at the tall white trees. As I looked more closely, I saw pure white, glowing pieces of fruit. They looked like apples, but they weren’t red like fatty satyr’s was.
I was so stupid. I had no idea what I was doing. But of course, I kicked off my gladiator sandals and they soared towards my mob. Then, oddly I ran across the grass pathway towards the biggest tree where I grabbed onto one of the branches, pulled myself up, and pulled down one of the apples. Immediately as it touched my hand it turned a dark, raspberry red. Then, while not thinking, I began chucking every single one of the apples I harvested at the satyrs. They moaned and tried to block them. I began laughing as I chucked more apples. The fat satyr slowly fell over and made a loud ‘ump!!’Sound from his puckered lips.
“Come on!! Is that all you got!??!” I screamed while giggling, my long legs dangling over the branch. Crystal looked furious as her pretty green hair got messed up.
This was the best! Nothing funnier than chucking apples at goat people!! The fat satyr, I think his name was…..I don’t even know, began to shake his fist in the air at me. “Miss Brenna please get down from there!!! You are upsetting the great spirit of Pan and the new Satyr Leader!! Stop disrespecting us!!! Is this how a proper young Goddess treats her loyal servants?!?”
It was quiet for a bit as I thought about that. No one moved. Finally I spoke. “Well I guess I’m just not a ‘proper young Goddess’ like you think I am!” I laughed as I made my voice sound like Professor Umbridge from Harry Potter. Crystal folded her arms as her green face became as red as the apple in my hand. Laughing I chucked my last apple and then I jumped from the tree.
Then that’s when I heard the small, faint whisper. Like diamonds, it was almost crystal clear. But I could hear it, not see it. “You are the goddess…..” It whispered like a silver ghost. I immediacy stopped. None of the satyrs had said anything. Again I heard the faint voice, “You are the goddess….you are the goddesses…” The animals were gaining on me. I had to run. But who was speaking? Confused I began running again….or trying to at least. My feet became frozen to the green grass. I couldn’t move a muscle, it was like I went limp but I was still standing and upright.
“WHATS HAPPENING!!!!????” I yelled out behind me, but I heard no response. I suddenly transported to a different place. No white shimmering trees surrounded me, no soft green grass. All there was was one color: gold. I was standing in a world of gold. I wasn’t on anything or under anything, like another dimension.
“Hello?!?” I called out to the nothing. I didn’t expect anyone to appear, that’s probably why I jumped when I saw a pure white unicorn walking towards me. It had appeared out of nowhere too. “Uh……hi?” I awkwardly asked the horned creature. Its eyes were huge and silver and the pupils just seemed to peer strait through me.
Suddenly I heard a voice, but I didn’t hear it exactly. It was in my head. “Before I introduce myself, let me just say before we start this: you are a big, fat, stubborn, rude, negative idiot.”
….
“WHAT!!!!!!????!!!!!!!!! DID!!?????!!! YOU!!!???!! JUST!!!!!!?????!! SAY!!!!!?????”
……
“I said you are a big, fat, stubborn, rude, negative idiot.” The voice said again. The unicorn began to snort like it was laughing.
“Are….Are you this unicorn in front of me?” I asked even more confused than before.
“NO!!!” The voice said sarcastically. “Yes of course I’m the unicorn. I’m also your animal spirit now shut up and listen to me. You are the goddess. I brought you here, out of the real world. What we are in now is called Immortal Vision. It’s when immortals transport their minds to a different dimension. There they get all their answers, ideas, and where they can speak to their spirit. Each person has a spirit but some spirits are in different forms. Some have bug spirits, some have mythological spirits, and some even have other human spirits. And some have animal spirits. Their spirit is just them in another form. If you were an animal you would be a unicorn. Unicorns are kind, beautiful, caring, thoughtful and lovable. They are also smart mouths, rude, and EXTREMLY stubborn. Just like you.”
“Well that explains a lot! I mean look at you!!” I said now laughing at my own joke. She nudged me hardly with her horn. “HEY!!!”
“Told you I was rude. My name is Edyth.”
“Okay okay so what do you want from me?”
“You need to understand who you really are. You are the goddess. The goddess in that prophecy Rachel made.”
“That was a long time ago!! I don’t even remember it!! So why does it still matter!!!??”
“Let me take you back to the memory of when it happened.” She smiled with a devious hint in her eye. Then she tapped her silver horn lightly on my head. I was immediately in Camp Half Blood.”
