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Percy Jackson & The Olympians Books Caught In the Middle

penguin098 posted on Feb 22, 2011 at 04:56PM
Ok, so I'm a super fan of the Percy Jackson seires and the Heroes of Olympus seires and I thought I should introduce you to a new demigod, who might just save the world, her name is Lauren she's a daughter of Hecate who just wants to be accepted.

The first chapter takes place before Percy defeats Krosos and goes on from there. I appologize in advance for my spelling (we really need spell cheack here)

Disclaimer: I do not own Percy Jackson, Jason, Piper, or any of those ppl, ect. Dispite my prayers to the writing gods, i have never met Rick Riorden and therefore cannot have stolen any of his ideas

Also, Spaming, please don't, if the comment isn't a complament, question about the story, or constructive critisism, don't say it. Flames will only be used to roast marshmellows (spelling, ik) for the kinder people, so yea i guess i really on't care about that stuff.

Wittout further adu(sp) i peresent to you... Caught in the Middle!!!
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over a year ago penguin098 said…
Ok so first I'll tell youa bit about Lauren (the whole book is her POV unless i change it, and i'll tell you if i do)
Godly Parnt: Hecate
Looks: Strawberry blonde hair with dazzleing green eyes and slightly tanned skin
Age: Nearly 14, birthday is the 31st of August
Personality: you decide, read her life story and figure out what makes her tick
Weapon of choice: foot long knife, but can fight with anything really

Chapter 1
I leave camp

"Okay okay, whoa, whoa, whoa! I said to fight to disarm, not to kill each other!" I shouted
"Sorry Lauren," Michelle from Athena said, "but I'm new at this remember?"
I shrugged, she was new, but that was no excuse for nearly chopping someone's arm off. Gods I'm bad at teaching classes. Percy should be doing this not me! But sadly Percy was off doing...things, no one really knew what. Then Chiron galloped into the Arena
“Heroes!” He shouted, Percy has requested your presence immediately by the empire state building- grab what you need and meet me at the pine tree”
Oh Gods, the war, it’s time. I rushed off to grab my armor when Chiron stopped me, “Oh no you don’t young lady” he said
“But Chiron, I’m one of the best fighters at camp, and you know that! This is my chance to prove that to the rest of the camp! They’ll need me!” I protested
“Hecate, your mother, has ordered you to stay here, and unless you wish to be turned into a pile of dust, I suggest you listen!” Chiron shouted, whoa I’ve NEVER seen him get that mad before “Just wait Lauren, your time will come, sooner then you think”
I ran off to my cabin that I share with the other half of the camp. I hated it here, 10 years in the Hermes cabin and I finally get claimed and I’m still stuck in the Hermes cabin! No one cares that I’ve been at camp since I was 3! I stroked my silky blonde hair, trying to get a hold of myself. I stared at my want and my knife, ομίχλη, which is mist in Greek. I know they both longed to see battle, but I haven’t left camp since I got here when I was 3-Chiron wouldn’t even let me play Capture the Flag, instead I helped heal the wounded with my magic, which is boring. So unfair. I heard someone come in- it was Annabeth.
“Are you coming, because everyone’s ready?” She asked
“N-no,” I said, giving her a weak smile. Then she gave me the look, gods I hate it! It reads: are-you-sure-your-a-demigod-cause-you-aare­-al­way­s-s­car­ed-­i-d­on’­t-e­ven­-th­ink­-yo­u-c­an-­fig­ht, and then Annabeth left. I smashed my head into my pillow to keep me from screaming out of frustration. EVERYONE thinks I’m a whimp, because Chiron won’t let me do ANYTHING! I only train with Percy, that’s why he left me in charge of swords practice, he knows how strong I am, he’s the only one who knows my strength, my bravery. Trust me, if I was “allowed” I’d be on Krosos’s freakin back right now. I’m strong, a good swordsman, and I can make monster dust with just about anything (even a pillow, but that’s a different story) Then Chiron called me from the doorway, sometimes it’s an up that he can’t fit through cabin doors.
“I have a mission for you, that is if you’re interested” He said
Now let me tell you, I was surprised, nearly everyone had been on missions for the war, but me. I almost passed out I was so shocked
“What’s the mission?” I asked, still too shocked to comprehend what was happening.
“I think I’ve located a rather powerful demigod in the San Francisco area whose nearly 16, I’m pretty sure he’s of the big three” Chiron said
He seemed…weird, a little unsure, and San Francisco? I gulped demigods aren’t supposed to go there, monsters everywhere, but Chiron said big three, this might not be Percy’s prophecy, I we don’t get to hi fast this could get ugly.
“So just leave, grab him, and come back?” I said Chiron nodded “K I’ll do it” I said, nearly screaming, and I dissipated. Did I mention chrildren of Hecate are like wizards from Harry Potter? Oh well, I searched the school Chiron sent me to, and after making hellhound soup, and avoiding another monster, I found him, the 15 year-old boy with blond hair and a scar above his lip. His name was Jason.
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Sooooo watcha think, good bad, worse, tell me your favorite part
THis is lauren,when she was five,
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Ok so first I'll tell youa bit about Lauren (the whole book is her POV unless i change it, and i'll t
over a year ago Thaliahunter said…
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awwwww! Lauren(at 5 years) is sooo cute!!!

im sory.... i have no time to read ur story! dont blam me, blam skool! not my fault!! i will read it tomorrow night or sometime!
im sooo sory i cant read it now!!!!!!! :'(
over a year ago vlad_todd_fan said…
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OH MY GOD'S
it's so scrumptrilescent I can hardly move. *Stays frozen for ten seconds*
also read my 'Lost in Thought' articles, but not before reading 'Continuation of Percy Jackson'
:D
over a year ago percabeth5 said…
mischievous
Not bad, BTW I'm starting my own fanfic it is here http://www.fanpop.com/spots/percy-jacksson­-fa­n-f­ict­ion­/..­.nt­s I plan to post daily


over a year ago darkling_menace said…
it really messes with my brain that your using HoO characters in a PJO fanfic
over a year ago penguin098 said…
Ok, so I'm going to try to post once a week from now on, probably on thursdays casue i really hate thursdays cause, well i just hate them, and that way i have something to look forward to

@Thailiahunter: Don't be ashamed of not being able to read, i totaly understand, skool sux
@vlad_todd_fan: I looked for your artile, but i can't find it, could you give me a link
@percabeth5: i plan to read ur fanfic today, i bet it's awesome
@darkling_menace: I'm sorry i'm confusing you,but hopfully it will get somewhat less confusing

Chapter 2
I meet the Romans

I took a deep breth and walked towards him. You’ll be okay I told myself, but I wasn’t sure, something was wrong
“Hi,” I sad, gaining confidence “Jason isn’t it?”
But before I could answer one of the students nearby looked over at us shouted something, I’m not sure what- I think it was Latin (weird right) and turned into a Cyclopes and charged us. I took out mist and Jason stared at it, newbies, you can’t help but love ‘em, but then he took out a coin and flipped it, and it turned into some axe-thingy. Now it was my turn to stare, he was amazing, Jason was fighting like a maniac, no joke this dude had skill. The Cyclopes was dust before I could swing my knife.
“Impressive” I said “Espectually for a newbie”
“Newbie?” Jason asked, still panting “I’ve been at camp since I was two!”
Really? Because I’ve never seen y-“
“I could say the same thing about you,” He interjected, “I mean you’re what, 13, 14? Our paths should have crossed at Fort Rome”
“Whoa, slow down, Fort Rome? As in not camp half blood? Where else would a Greek go?”
“Um, Pluto?” He said confused “The Greeks were weak, they’re all dead, but the Romans, they’re still kicking butt! Are you a loner or something, where in the name of Jupiter did you get that knife?”
Okay, so maybe I missed something, but this guy’s nuts, who’s Jupiter and Pluto? Why would he talk about planets? Honestly I could have talked with Jason for hours, but if he really was of the big three, there would be a monster number three, we had to get going.
“Know anywhere safe we can go?” I asked
“Corse, follow me” Jason said
As we walked, we talked trying to figure things out, first things first, parentage. Jason was a son of Jupiter, who is really Zeus, not a planet. It took us a while to figure out what and who the gods were according to him and me both. And after that it didn’t take us long to come up with the situation
1. Jason is a roman demigod, I am a Greek
2. There are separate camps for both, each being a secret to each other
3. No one could find out or there’d be another war on top of this one
4. We were the only two demigods who knew about both groups
5. We were caught in the middle of two groups who hated each other
So turns out, Jason was bringing me to his “home base” he called it fort Rome, their version of camp half blood. It was amazing, there were cabins, but they were organized by legion, how good of a fighter you were. The better you fought, and the more quests you had been on, the higher your status, and the better you had it. But there was an area; Jason called it the “Wolf House” that made me uneasy. It was where they tested new demigods in combat and stuff. Why test them? I remembered my first day, I was scared out of my wits, I couldn’t possibly imagine having to fight for my life too! Shake it off Lauren I told myself, get a grip.
Can we train a little, I want to learn some Roman moves, and I’ll show you some Greek if you want.” I asked
“Sure why not?” Jason said
I was having the time of my life, Jason was so much fun, and really good, but I was better, he never won. Yet, something was missing; there was something wrong that I couldn’t just put my finger on.
“Where is everyone” I finally asked. Jason got all serious then, a little sad too. “Sorry am I being too nosey?” I added
“It’s not that” He said, “Just, bad timing – they’re all on their way to war on Mount Orthyus, I was on a mission to pick up a powerful demigod-you- and then meet them in war.”
“Gods that is bad timing!” I agreed “I guess I’ll be going then, but I’ll try to come back soon” I smiled. He’s my little secret, kinda cute too, but he’s got a girlfriend. Reyna is one lucky girl. Focus Lauren! There’s a war going on! I told myself. I turned around to say bye to Jason, but he was already gone, so I left Fort Rome. The more I thought about it, the more wrong it seemed, I mean why separate us, we’re all family aren’t we? Maybe this was why Chiron seemed uneasy when I left, did he know Jason was Roman? It’s time I got some answers, now! And whether Chiron wants to tell me or not. And I disparated.

Sorrym this one's kind short, and no picture :^( i'll try to give y'all pics with every chap. Hope you iked it!
over a year ago greek_camper95 said…
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that was really great hope u can post soon
over a year ago NightmareGirl16 said…
my god this so good! post more than thursday, i cant wait 2 read the next one, i may do this whole story thing 2... INSPIRATION! thanks penguin!!!
over a year ago penguin098 said…
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ok YAY it's thursday... this whole post thing is egging on my spiritss about it... thought i still uterly despise thursdays, they ARE a bit better now
I guess i will try to post *counts on figers* monday AND thursday!
*Waits for applause*
so withour further adu (god i rlly need to learn how to spell tht) Chapter 3!

Chapter 3
Answers

It took me a couple of days to figure out how to confront Chiron, but three days later I was in front of the big house
“Oh Chiron!” I yelled, knocking loudly on the door of the big house. Finally, the door opened, “Ah Lauren! I see you’ve succeeded, now where’s Jason?” He asked.
“More like WHO’S Jason, Chiron “I said, “I know he’s roman!”
Chiron looked slightly alarmed at this comment, which is exactly what I was hoping for “Alright, come in and I’ll tell you, but I must warn you, it’s not a bed-time story” I smiled, but as Chiron continued, my happiness faded. The wars, the fighting, the blood, the death, it was all too much. No wonder the gods separated us! When the two groups met, war broke out, how could people be so evil? I gulped, even if there were children of Minerva, rather than Athena, or Neptune rather than Poseidon, we were still family, we were still half brothers, cousins, twins even. It scared me. After many more harsh stories, I plucked up the courage to ask the one question I’ve been dying to know the answer to
“Why won’t you let me fight in the war, or in capture the flag, or go on quests, or anything dangerous for that matter!” I demanded
Chiron sighed, like he had been waiting for that question to come. “ Child, you must swear on the River Styx not to tell anyone about this, until the events have folded out, no one can know that you knew a head of time, you understand” I nodded, I had no idea this could be so serious. “Good,” Chiron continued, “Now, the details I don’t know, but shortly after the war, there will be a new oracle, who shall give a new prophecy. It concerns you. Now, it’s so important that the gods decided there must be a one hundred percent chance of you being alive until then!”
Silence. What can I say? I was stunned, me? Being, that is becoming just as important and powerful as Percy? Whoa. I decided to take a walk on the beach, I needed to think. A prophecy? With me as the leader? No possible. I needed to get away, I needed to fight. I grabbed my knife, wand, and armor and snuck off to Manhattan. I got there, ready to fight, but there wasn’t anything left, gods they won! I went up to Olympus, expecting to see the normal glory off it, but nearly everything was crushed, the war had defiantly taken a toll, and I missed it cause of a freakin prophecy. I hurried on to the throne room, to find the gods in a meeting, and I saw my mom for the first time. Sadly, she saw me too. Hecate motioned me to the back room, oh gods, here we go, I thought as I followed her
“Lauren, let me say, I’m sorry I have prevented you from fighting, and in extension being a true demigod. I promise, that is all over, it will all change. But before that, I must give you this” Hecate said
She handed me a ring. I slipped it on my finger, I have to admit, it was cool, but a ring? Honestly, I was expecting more, I mean after all she’s a god.
“Gee mom thanks” I said, trying to hide my disappointment, I failed at that though.
“This is no ordinary ring, squeeze it and you dagger, mist, will be brought to your hand, no matter where it is, and won’t leave your hand unless you squeeze your ring again” She said
“Sweet! Even if it’s like, in Tarturus?” I said, much more enthusiastic this time. She nodded. I tried it out, and sure enough, just as Hecate had promised, mist appeared in my hand.
“Thanks,” I said, amazed.
“Hermes also thought it would be wise to give you this- an anklet, slap your heels together and your armor will appear on you, complete with a shield made by Hephateus himself” Hecate handed me my other prize
“Wow, but why give me these things now?” I asked “You’ll see” Hecate said “Next summer will be very different” She said that like she knew something I didn’t, it bothered me. “Bye mom!” I left and headed towards camp, not sure of what awaited me there.

Ok, so maybe this clears a LITTLE up about the whole Roman thing, hope it makes sense, if not just ask i'll try to answer/explain
These are Lauren's new magic items
ok YAY it's thursday... this whole post thing is egging on my spiritss about it... thought i still ut
over a year ago penguin098 said…
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ok so turns out... I had a science test today that i didn't know about, and I'm pretty sure i failed it :( but I finaly got around to posting!! yay! so here we go chapter 4... and PLEASE post your comments I'm dieing not knowing what ppl think about this... please?

Chapter 4
A Warm Welcome Home, sort of

I got back to camp, worried. All I could see was green smoke, the kind that comes out of the oracle when she gives… a… prophecy. Crap. I rushed to the big house, hypothetically speaking; really I just appeared there, to see some red head with green eyes chanting
“Seven half-bloods shall answer the call
To storm or fire, the world must fall
An oath to keep with a final breath
And foes bear arms to the doors of death”
I’ll keep it short, not what I was hoping for, why not, “The monsters are all gone” That would have been MUCH better. I looked over at Chiron and he nodded, this was my prophecy. Crap. I walked over to Percy; I wanted details about the war, so he told me, everything. I gotta say the way he told it, the part when Annabeth took that knife was the scariest, by far. I expected a relaxing evening that day, but with the promise the gods made, that couldn’t be possible. It only took five minutes for the first demigod to arrive, gods was he hot! He had chocolate brown hair with, grey? Yes, grey eyes. Athena for sure. He was being followed by Echidna herself, at least I think it’s a her. I charged it, without thinking twice, I could hear Chiron and Percy yelling how foolish this was, I didn’t even have a weapon, but I had better, my ring. As I slapped my heels together, I squeezed my ring, and suddenly, the campers were silent. In two swings, Echidna was gone, and he came out from his hiding place. He had a nasty looking gash above his eye, it was bleeding a lot.
“Oh, that doesn’t look good” I said, he nodded, still to shocked to really speak I guess. I took out my emergency supply of nectar and poured it on his wound. He stared at me in amazement.
I smiled “Hi, I’m Lauren, you?” I asked
He seemed uneasy, I can’t blame him though, Echidna still had me shaking.
“ David" He said, his voice shaking “Whe- Wherrre’sss Zz-z-Zoey?”
“Who’s Zoey, is she your sister?” I asked, growing more concerned by the second.
“N-not sister, adop-adopted” David said. He was shivering
“Ok, let’s get you inside, m’kay? You’ll feel better, don’t worry, we’ll find Zoey” I said, trying to put confidence in my voice. He nodded, but was still hesitant with leaving the hill. Finally, we got to the Big House, only to hear shouting.
“WHERE’S DAVID, WHERE’S MY BROTHER?” a furious voice shouted
David’s eyes brightened up, I guess the furious voice was Zoey. We entered the big house to see one of the most beautiful girls I have ever seen. She had long brown hair and startling blue eyes. She looked tough, like she had been raised by strict rules and harsh punishments. I could see some weird bar-code thing on her arm, just like Jason’s I thought.
“Oh thank the GODS” Zoey screamed when she saw David. She ran up and embraced him.
“Um hi, I’m Lauren, and you’re Zoey, right” I said, trying to pull Zoey back to reality. She nodded.
That night was like a firework display. Everyone was claimed, and I mean EVERYONE there were little tiny god simples everywhere all night. After about an hour, everyone had been claimed. I had a little sister, who knew? Or at least I thought everyone had been claimed.
“Hey Zoey, who’s your mommy?” I asked, happy, everybody was in a good mood now.
She shook her head, “I wasn’t claimed, guess my mum doesn’t want me, huh?” She said. I hugged her, and the sleeve of her jacket fell down, revealing her tattoo again. Damn, I had forgotten about that.
“Hey Zoe? What’s that” I asked, pointing to her arm
“You're going to think I’m crazy” She said “But, I already knew about the gods before I came here. You probably shouldn’t know this but,”
“There’s a Roman camp just like this one?” I interrupted
“Yeah, how’d you kno-“ She shrugged “I guess it doesn’t matter, but I came there, well more like was forced inside the gates, anyways, I got there 2 years ago, and honestly I hated it. This place, here feels right, there, not so much, I was claimed by Ceres, but I still felt weird, like something wasn’t right. I ran away during the war and was adopted by a very ‘kind’ woman. You just killed her”
“Echidna was your mother?” I asked, bewildered,
“Well, yes and no, she adopted me yes, but I did most of the ‘motherly’ things, and then she adopted David and said something about joining her, that’s when I decided to leave, again. We wandered the country for weeks, heading for New York. Even if the gods don’t always help, I figured maybe my mom would help us out. And gods did she. She told us to avoid Olympus at all costs, something about Kronos” She shrugged.
“And now you’re here?” I asked, trying to end the story on a good note
“And now I’m here, alive, with David.” Zoey agreed.
“Don’t you see, you are Greek, and Correct me if I’m wrong, your mother is Demeter, not Ceres” I said, confident I had my god/goddess conversions down. “The Romans just got to you before a satyr could.”
She nodded, happy that she had a mother again, when David walked up
“What does an owl mean, who’s my godly parent?”
Yes, I was right, “It means your mom is Athena goddess of wisdom and battle strategy, I’ll go get Annabeth and she’ll show you your cabin” I said, already running off.
What a great way to end the day I thought as I laid my head down in a bed for the first time in 10 years, the Hermes cabin lost a lot of members that night.
The next day, construction on the new cabins for the minor gods started. With some help from mom, the Hecate cabin was the first one done
“Hey! Lily, c’mover here, the cabins done. And cute little five-year-old Lily came, bewildered by my speed
Gods was my cabin amazing. It had black, stone walls, but with a sparkle and a slight purple tinge to it. Inside, there were balls of fire floating in mid air, illuminating the room. In the front, there were 2 overstuffed couches, centered around a huge fireplace. Beyond that, there was a huge and beautiful statue of my mother, with two halls leading off on each side, leading to rooms for boys and girls. Looked like there were more siblings on the way. It was way bigger on the inside then it looked on the outside, another gift from mom. The beds were overstuffed, matching the couches, and the most comfortable things I had ever sat on. They were dressed with simple, black covers, and a cashmere comforter on top. There were silk curtains going around the bed, for a bit of privacy I guess, complete with our own bathroom. But when me and Lily tried to go down the boy’s hall, it was like some invisible wall kept us from entering. Stupid over protective mom, but I guess she was right, if just one day could be this different, imagine what next summer would be like.

hope y'all like it.
Here's the new characters, and hopefully, David+Lauren will get together later on, all u need to do is come up with a cute name (like Percabeth) m'kay? POST POST POST COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!
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ok so turns out... I had a science test today that i didn't know about, and I'm pretty sure i failed
over a year ago zeuskid777 said…
GR8 story post chpt5 soon by the way why hasnt she used much magic
over a year ago brittanyloves said…
In my story, (on the other page where you had posted a link) can I use your character for one of my side characters and you use my character as a side character.
It'd be awesome if you said yes.
over a year ago penguin098 said…
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ok let me start with... im ditching the while one chapter per thursday thing... im just gonna post when i feel like it... but at least twice a week... so YAY! and thank the GODS some one posted... u both get props! yay 4 u *claps* IDK y, but i rlly love this chapt! Hope u do 2...

@zeuskid77 i just relized that... there should be more magic in the future chapts... i guess i just didn't include it

@brittanyloves... could i know what character+how often they will be in b4... it took me a while to come up with all of them... but i'd be happy to help you come up with other characters (like in those demigod creators... im good @ it)
@everyone... DON'T 4GET I NEED A NAME FOR DAVID+lAUREN (i was thinking laurid... but i want your imput)

here we go CHapter 5!!!!
Chapter 5
Another newbie

Ever since the war, I had more, confidence. I trained harder and with more people. It didn’t take long for me to be known as one of the best fighters at camp, after Percy, Annabeth, and Clarisse in that order. I almost never lost a match, and I always had my secret weapon: my Roman moves, but I always saved those for an elegancy. So, naturally I used them when I heard Clarisse bashing my fighting skills. Let’s just say five minutes later, I was the third best fighter at camp.
I spent most of my time training campers, and spent most of my free time with David, he was getting to be pretty good. I have to admit, he was cute too, but don’t you dare tell him I said that. But sadly, all good things have to come to an end, and the summer session of camp was over, and most of everyone went home. Of course, some people stayed, including most of the newbies like David and Zoey, but camp just wasn’t the same. The next few months that past were uneventful. I needed action, but nothing was happening, so there were no quests to be given. I thought of Jason, and wondered what he was doing. Duh, Jason, the Romans. I could go to Fort Rome for a day. I begged and begged and begged Chiron to let me go, and after 2 hours or so, he caved, and I left.
I stood outside of the gates to Fort Rome, listening to the sounds of swords hitting each other and targets getting hit by arrows, the sounds of demigods. There were certainly more campers here than at camp half blood. Maybe there was no summer session, year-round only. I I-M Jason, telling him to let me in, and the tall gates slowly opened, revealing Jason and a giant wolf, I guessed it was their leader, Lupa. What if she “tests” me, after all, Jason told people I was a loner, not a Greek.
“Hey Jason, looks like you won the war” I said, turning to Lupa, making an awkward bow. She nodded in approval, and I tried to return a confident smile, still worrying about being tested
“Do not worry child, if you do not plan to stay here, there is no point in seeing if you are worthy of training at this camp” Lupa said. Did she just read my mind? Oh wait, I forgot gods can do that. I nodded, now sure I would enjoy myself here. Jason brought me to the swords arena.
Today’s Saturday, so Lupa lets us have fights here to see who’s the best, it also helps determine if you are worthy enough to go up a legion. If you want, you can compete.” Jason said
“Hell yea, but won’t it be suspicious that I fight like a Greek?” I asked, fearing what would happen
“Naw, I told them you picked up some wicked moves on the road”
“Perfect” As we walked in, nearly everyone turned and stared, ad whispers started. I couldn’t pick out much, but I was pretty sure they were talking about the loner who beat Jason on her first try. I looked at Jason, he had given me an awesome rep.
“Anyone wanna fight?” I asked, and one girl raised her hand. She had brown tangled hair and black eyes, hard and cold. She came down to the “stage” or whatever you want to call it, and took out a sword. She looked at me, waiting for my weapon. I slapped my heels and squeezed my ring, awing the crowd and my opponent. I heard a horn, and began fighting. I have to admit, she was good, but I was better. I disarmed her and hit her in the head with my shield. We fought a little longer, but eventually, she fell down, knocked out cold, I had stunned her with, well magic. I didn’t like the fact that to win you had to knock out your opponent, but I had to do it, the look on everyone’s face was good enough. I could tell Jason was impressed but I had given the girl a deep gash, and when he saw it, he paled and ran over to her.
“Oh Pluto Reyna, always gotta add a new scar every time you fight. Don’t cha?” Jason said. Oh gods, Reyna was Jason’s girlfriend, I had a hunch who would challenge me next.
Jason took out his coin, flipped it, and we were fighting. I wanted to be nice, so I finished with mist under Jason’s neck, rather than him being unconscious
“I win” I declared, beaming
The crowd broke into cheers, but no one would challenge me, so I watched instead. They were freakin awesome, but having different moves was my only advantage. Without them, I’d be toast, with a side of butter. I went out the river that surrounds Fort Rome to splash around. When Sam contacted me in an Iris message. Sam is a satyr; responsible for this kid named Jesse, and well I think you can guess why he called me.
“We have a pretty brutal monster, um attacking, and I think its got back-up” Sam said, glancing around, like something was going to jump up at him, but you never know.
“Awww not now” I complained, “But I guess I’ll be there in a few minutes, ‘bye Sam”
“Bye” The mist shimmered and it was gone. Thank Zeus no one saw that, or I’d be a dead Greek. I went and told Jason, who nodded and I dissipated and ended up in rainy Olympia Washington. I got there to see a school in total chaos. I made sure to get in full armor before going in. There were fires everywhere, and I could hear screams, I hated when mortals got hurt. Then I saw… it. Some dragon fire breathing thing. This was going to be fun, and I charged.
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New POV, Jesse . This kinda tells how this all happened
OH. MY. GOD. My teacher breaths fire and my best friend is a goat. Maybe my dad’s right, I AM crazy. But, I should probably back up a little. My name is Jesse, I’m in seventh grade and until quite recently I went to Froth Middle School. It was a normal day, and my least favorite teacher, Mrs. Mellow, was passing out our final exams for ancient history. I looked at the first question, but I just couldn’t read it, see I have dyslexia and ADHD, and honestly tests just make it all worse. A golden glint caught my eye on my glove that I always wore. An apple, a golden apple had appeared on it, I swear I never saw that before. Weird, but then again weird things tended to happen with me. The only thing I knew about my mother played in my head ‘never go anywhere without it’. I left the classroom, going to get a drink of water, but Mrs. Mellow cut me off half way there.
“Hey honey” she said, in my least favorite voice that meant detention. I gulped.
“Yes ma’am?” I answered, trying to sweeten her up. She smiled and transformed into a giant fire-breathing… thing. She looked at me.
“Now don’t worry, this will only hurt a lot” And as she got ready to pounce, my best friend, Sam came out, with the bottom half of a goat. He took out a knife and charged Mrs. Mellow. That’s the last thing I saw before I blacked out.
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Don'cha love clif-hangers? *cricket cricket* well too bad u still have one. don't foget, post!
here's Jesse, the new demigod
ok let me start with... im ditching the while one chapter per thursday thing... im just gonna post wh
over a year ago brittanyloves said…
I'd use you once in a while OR your character can go on the quest with my character (Quinn Garrett) and Nico di Angelo. And also, I'd like if you'd help. Thanks for offering!
P.S. Your book is great.
P.S.S My book is on the Percy Jackson & The Olympian Book forum called, "A Demigod Life."
P.S.S.S This takes place after the time period of "The Last Olympian." about the summer after.
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over a year ago darkling_menace said…
yay! Jesses finally in the story!
over a year ago penguin098 said…
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YOu guys better make me feel loved for gining you so many chapters this week... JUST KINDDING you don't have to, but it would be nice... ok chapter... whatever we're on...

Chapter 6
A Change for the worst

Jesse’s POV
I woke up in a small, dark room, with a huge lump on my head. That thing must have hit me on my way here. Damn, it really hurt! I heard someone come in, Mrs. Mellow probably coming to finish me off.
“H-hello?” I asked, my voice quivering “M-mmm-mrs. Mel-llow? Is that you?” I looked around searching for something to use to defend myself and something caught my eye. Damn, my cowboy boots had mud all over them. They were like 100 bucks! Stupid monster.
‘Good child your angry, use that to your power’ a voice whispered in my ear, or at least that’s what I thought, but when I looked around, there was no one there. I heard it again
‘Do not worry child, I don’t plan on hurting you, for now. And the ground started shaking and a lady covered in dirt appeared before me.
“Hail Jesse I am Gaea, the goddess of the Earth, and you my boy have an opportunity to join my army!” My first thought was, okay this girls nuts, there’s no such thing as gods and goddesses, right
“Oh but aren’t there” Gaea said, “You’re a smart boy, surely you must know of the Greek gods, and mythology? Well, they aren’t myths; they’re real all of them, the monsters too. And you my boy are a demigod, son of Eris the goddess of strife and discord. Surely you must believe me, after all you have met one already, Typhoeus, the one who brought you here”
“Tyfo hoey?” I asked
“Typhoeus, a fire breathing dragon with 100 heads, brought to this world by me” Gaea beamed as if this was here biggest achievement.
“What about this army business? I’m no soldier!”
“That can be arranged, you will become one of my best, let us pick out your weapon” Gaea’s voice sounded sweet as honey, but something was up. But what could I do about it? I followed her into the forge.
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Ok here’s an exact description of Typhoeus:
TYPHOEUS: A fire breathing dragon with a hundred heads that never rest. It was birthed by the goddess Gaea as a last ditch effort to keep the Olympians from defeating her children the Titans. It came close to succeeding, setting most of the gods to flight and capturing Zeus. Hermes was able to free Zeus. Zeus was then able to dispatch Typhoeus with his lighting bolts. Typhoeus is buried under Mount Etna in Sicily.
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Camp Half-Blood, Lauren’s POV

“WHERE IS HE?” I screamed, the school had burnt to the ground and Jesse was nowhere in sight. I wanted to curl up and cry, newbies shouldn’t have to face this, they should be safe! I shook with anger, I get two missions to pick up a demigod and I had failed both of them, and it didn’t feel good. Sam kept rubbing my back as we sat in silence, in honor of the lost demigod.
“C’mon Lauren, we’ve gatta tell Chiron, he has to know” Sam said, letting a tear escape his eye. I nodded and disapated with Sam in a tight hold and we landed in the strawberry patch by the Big House. Nico ran up to us,
“Hey guys! Ren-ren, been wondering where you where, and” then he saw me crying “Oh my gods what’s wrong?” Nico asked, full of concern *I know lame nickname but it’s kinda cute, right?*
“I went to get a newbie, and, and there was fire everywhere, and he-he didn’t make it” I sobbed
Nico looked at me skeptically, “Jesse?” I nodded, as he shook his head “Naw, I would’ve known, he’s still alive I can feel it”
“Really! That’s great, Oh Hades thank the gods!” I ran up to Nico and gave him a big hug, making Nico blush like a maniac. “That thing must have taken him! Not good”
“Why what was it?” Nico asked, as worry lines appeared on his forehead
“Typheous” Nico took a big breath, after it’s a pretty ugly monster (and not just in looks). Hopefully the fact that he’s still alive means she let him go I thought, not likely though. I sighed.
“I need a quest, to go and save Jesse, obviously, there’s a new enemy about and we need information on it” Then Nico sighed
“Not gonna be easy, Chiron’s super uptight right now, like there’s something bad coming that he know about, but we don’t” Nico said.
And that’s the bottom line with being a half blood, nothing’s ever easy. Never.
“Hey, Nico? You seen David?”
“Yea he was at archery when I saw him last” Nico replied
“Thanks see ya later!” I yelled, already running away. I checked the archery fields, but he wasn’t there. I ran into the arena, hoping to get David alone, but he was fighting Zoey, who was adapting to the Greek way of life pretty well.
“Hey guys,” I said
“Hey Lauren, mind teaching us some new moves? We’re good, but I want to crush Clarisse during Capture the Flag tonight” Zoey asked
I laughed “Why not?”
We trained hard, and by the time we were done, all three of us were covered in sweat, and laughing our heads off. David had a hard time beating the dummy, surprisingly he lost.
“Wow David, you really know how to show that dummy who’s boss” I said, and David kicked it over. I nearly collapsed I was laughing so hard.
“Let’s just go to dinner” David said, sulking
“If you think you can handle it” Zoey teased. And we walked to the dining pavilion, arm in arm.


Ok so i didn't know what to put for a picture so i did camp half blood...
YOu guys better make me feel loved for gining you so many chapters this week... JUST KINDDING you don
over a year ago brittanyloves said…
You're awesome, Penguin. You know, for making lot's of chapters in a week.
over a year ago darkling_menace said…
you could've put a picture of Typhoeus that would've been cool (and also isn't Typhoeus just a roman Typhon).
over a year ago darkling_menace said…
legal disclaimer (not really): Jesse is of my creation, i only asked penguin if she could put Jesse in her story.
over a year ago penguin098 said…
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so here's Typhoeus, who isn't the romen Typhon, (the roman from of typhon is saturn)sorry it's a crappy pic, but apparently there's a bettle by the same name so it was kinda hard, but anyways here y'all go:
so here's Typhoeus, who isn't the romen Typhon, (the roman from of typhon is saturn)sorry it's a crap
over a year ago darkling_menace said…
no, saturn is the roman kronos
over a year ago penguin098 said…
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oh crap... i guess it is the roman form of Typhoon. I appollogize, I could've sworn he saw greek (did the discription even sound like Typhoon???) If i had known i wouldn't have used him... maybe i just got the name wrong. Anyways, let's just pretend that Typhoeus isn't really tyohoon and get on with the story, shall we?

This is a good game of capture the falg, if the plan seems confuzing, just tell me and i'll try to come up with a better explanation

Chapter 7

We Try Not to Get Killed Over a Flag
Lauren’s POV

After we finished eating, Chiron came trotting into the Dining Pavilion.
Heroes, as you know, today is Friday, and we will be playing Capture the flag. The teams stand as this: Blue Team, Athena, Poseidon, Demeter, Hermes, Apollo, Red team: the rest of you! No intentional killing or maiming. Captives are allowed and may be disarmed. All magical items are allowed I will be serving as Field Medic. You have one hour to prepare. Have fun” And Chiron galloped out.
I was the leader of the Red team, and I knew we were going to win, I heard Percy and Annabeth whispering about battle plans yesterday, and I “borrowed” their plans. Plus, I had made alliances with all of the minor gods (which wasn’t many kinds, but still a lot) the Ares and Hephaestus cabins, who had been working on some pretty nasty traps this week, I also had the Aphrodite girls, but I didn’t expect much from them. The Ares cabin had gotten Annabeth’s invisible cap so I could play around with it, and keep Annabeth visible. What can I say? When I came to Capture the Flag, I played dirty.
“Okay troops fall in!” I yelled and pulled out the Blue team’s plans as well as my own, “Ok I want half of the Ares cabin over here, ready to rush in first thing with the Hephaestus cabin while the other half of the Ares cabin will come in five minutes later, disguised as Apollo campers. Do NOT go straight for the flag, take out the guards. Then blow this whistle, and I’ll come in and grab the flag as you guys hold off anyone else. The rest of you stay guard, equally spread out. Annabeth’s planning a rush, hoping we will capture them all and not worry anymore. I want ten of you to watch out, not attack the rush. Percy and Annabeth will come in and fight together. If you see riptide’s glow, watch out for Annabeth, don’t worry Percy won’t fight.” I said, out of breath
“Wait, how do you know all of this?” Butch, a child of Iris asked
I smirked, and showed them the “borrowed” plans, and they cheered. “Okay, get into your places. Fight according to plan and we will win in about one hour, don’t forget the traps, they’re pretty nasty. If you can’t beat someone, bring them to a trap, where they can stay prisoner.”
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Annabeth’s POV (before the game starts)

“Ok so you all know the plan, get to you places, and don’t go down without a fight.”
I put on my Yankees hat, planning to enter enemy territory with Percy, undetected, but when I put it on, nothing happened.
“Damn it! Stupid Lauren!” I yelled. I guess Lauren wet over-board, this was her first time playing, but my hat? This meant war. Then again, she always favored my team, and this was my first time without my star medic, I knew I should have made an alliance with her. I sat on the ground, my head in my hands
“Hey Owl-Head, it’s almost time to start, put your hat on and get over here!” I looked up to see Percy offering a hand.
“Oh Seaweed brain, she bewitched my hat, it’s not working!”
“Damn, now what?” That seaweed bran, doesn’t he know I always have plans A-Z, I had a back-up for everything, but my hat.
“I don’t know, let’s just hide really, really good.” I smiled, and he looked at me.
“Kay” But before Percy walked away, he kissed me on the cheek. We had to win this. Magic wouldn’t stop me.
The conch horn blew, and the game began. Nearly all of my team rushed off towards the middle, and me and Percy headed to the side. He would take care of and stragglers, and I would grab the flag when they weren’t watching. I nodded. Percy walked over a little and took out riptide. And, nothing happened, instead, the guard headed towards me! I got ready to fight, but he overtook me, and took my knife. Percy came running over, but when he saw me, with my own knife to my neck, he stopped in his tracks, shocked, I could see it in his eyes. I wanted to scream at him that it was a trap, but before he knew it, Lauren came up and stunned him with her wand.
“Aww isn’t it cute, the two little leaders, taken in under five minutes.” Lauren said, “You thought Percy would distract my guard, no no, we were expecting you” She held up my spare plans, I wondered where that had gone. And Lauren left us in her jail, tied up, along with nearly everyone else on my team, I think the rest were stuck in traps. I heard a distant whistle, and Lauren ran away. Five minutes later, she came back with the flag, except she looked just like Johnny, who was also in jail. I stared
“Polyjuice Potion” She said, when she caught me staring. And tossed me my hat “Missing something?” I just glared at her “Now go back to your little friends and tell them why you lost” Lauren said, smiling ear to ear.
“C’mon seaweed brain let’s go” Lauren had un-stunned him and Percy and I walked back to the creek, in silence.
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Lauren’s POV (again)

I smiled the flag in my hands as my team cheered, the plan went perfectly, and Annabeth didn’t know what hit her. I could tell Chiron was impressed by my ingenious plan, even Mr. D was speechless when I talked to him later on, and he actually called me by the correct name (first time ever)
“Hey Annabeth, be on my team next time?” I asked, teasing her
“We’ll see” Annabeth said, but I could tell she wanted to.
“Whatever, see you around” I said, not really interested. I knew time was running out for Jesse, if he really was captured, but I tried not to think about it. I went to see Chiron; I needed to get a quest. I told him the situation, and without putting up a fight, he let me consult the oracle, Rachel. When I asked her, her eyes turned green and she started chanting
“Your journey shall start after the 28th of June
Find her new captive, quickly and soon
Travel far north, locate the ground’s lair
And do not forget, the missing still care”
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Sorry it’s so long! Hope you like it!!

THis is the sympol of hecate, which would have been put on the flag when Lauren won the game
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oh crap... i guess it is the roman form of Typhoon. I appollogize, I could've sworn he saw greek (did
over a year ago brittanyloves said…
I LOVE long chapters (I don't like to write them, though). You should do more of them.
over a year ago zeuskid777 said…
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Keep on writing
over a year ago zeuskid777 said…
crying
Read my fanfic called the demititans or the new demigods