A Beautiful World

Chapter 1 Tested

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The angel went up.

Sesshomaru braced himself for attack. He instigated this battle, but he should have known it was a battle he couldn’t win!

~2~

How life can change so quickly. Sesshomaru had heard this saying before, but it bore little meaning....

This is a prequel to Saharah, and the first part to chapter 1 that will be divided into two to three parts, depending on length. The remaining parts will be posted up shortly.

Edited by LadyLilith :)

And thanks to the encouragement and support of sesshylover (sesshyz) and my husband Matt :D

Chapter 1: Omiah, Part 1

775 AD – 1997 AD

The heavens see all
The heaves know all
The heavens hear all
Under the sun,
Upon the earth
And what lies therein
In the beyond
And underneath

In the year 775 AD, in a remote village in the desert of Djudea, a woman’s voice cried out, “Heaven help us!” Alongside her,...