Author's Note; just a small written (actually, it's quite roughly written!) short story of Spirit's thoughts of his beloved, Rain. It's not my best kind of short story, but I just started back into writing - so I am a bit rusty, ehehe .. aw well! enjoy!
I didn’t think this day would come.
Feeling her mane brush against my chest, her nose nuzzled into my skin with our legs intertwined in the spring flourishment. With eyes fluttering against the soft breeze that cooed, my eyes catch sight of her silk, pale and as radiant as the crystals in...
It starts off with the same beginning, with the eagle and everything, but instead of Esperanza giving birth, it's rain giving birth to Storm. (Yes I think their son is storm, look it up...) it shows them all happy with their new colt like it did with 1. Meanwhile, at the cowboys' the chief is sick and very ill. His son has heard stories about spirit, the horse his father could not tame, and in revenge, sets out to capture spirit. But instead, he finds storm and holds him captive. He gives the foal to his father. Spirit and rain set...
Hi I just wanted to make part 2 of The Cimarron,
Little Creek becomes a Grey hair Chief, the little indian baby from the first movie is called Red oak, cuz she is so stubborn, the twin ponies in the first movie are Owl and Snake, one becomes smart and one becomes means, Spirit and rain have a son named Thunder, the movie is about Red oak, leaving the tribe to find, a cure for Little Creek, and this is the story of how she met Thunder, it is called a tail of thunder, if you think I should keep writing it, send me a note.. firstname.lastname@example.org ty I love the movie!
"That's it! I'm not running from you any more rain!" Rose yelled while stopping. Her nostrils were flaring. She was very angry. They started to battle. Rose kick her.Rain kicked her back. And the battle went on for two hours. Rain ran away scard to death. Rose won! Spirit was gone. "Spirit? Where are you?" she yelled. Then she blacked out.Or in other words got knocked out. She dreamed about spirit and herself getting married.A horse dragged her somewhere with ropes.
Spirit and Rose was eating fresh green grass until they heard something. Bang! They are back! Rose ran into the village.Spirit went after her. He couldn't find her! After a tepee fell down he seen her rear and galloped away with a Indian on her back. He chased after her then he sees where she was going.Toward connal! Connal aims toward them but spirit shoved him. But he didn't think all the way through that plan. Because Rose got shot! She fell into the river. Spirit ran after her on land and jumps into the water he got her on his back and hears something. A waterfall! He tried to get away...
Rain and spirit was alone. Spirit walks up to Rain and says "Rain?"
"Yes" she answers.
"I am..." he clears his through,he was sweating all over.
"I am in love with..." he pauses.
"Who?" she asks curiously.
"Rose." he says softly.
Rain laughs and says "I am hearing things it sound like you said you where in love with rose. Now who are you in love with?" she said.
"Rose." he said.
Rain had tears in her eyes.
"Rain.I..." he said but before he could finish rain runs away without a word. She couldn't even look back. Spirit was still standing...
Bang! Rose gets spooked. Bang,bang,bang! Its spirits enemy!The leader of the army. The herd runs away spirit and Rose was behind them. Rose got lassoed! Spirit stops and looks back and seen Rose with a lasso around her neck. He was angry. He went back to save her but he also got lassoed. They were fighting for a long time. Rose fought for three hours. Spirit fought for six hours. Finally they got to the fort. When the doors opened they walked in. Rose and Spirit seen all the horses trotting at the same time. They tried to get their attention but only one stopped. The horse behind him bumped...
After meeting rose his heart was racing and he was sweating. After his long run he noticed Rose was trotting with grace past him. His heart was racing once more while sweating,he knew that he was in love with Rose,he also knew it wasn't because of his long run. She looked back and continued to trot.
He continued to run but this time away from Rose so she doesn't see him. She looked back again and seen him running the opposite direction. She had a crush on spirit and she knows he has a crush on her. After awhile she turns around to go home. The mountain lion is back and attacked her again...
They got to the top of the hill Rose hide her self in the shadows. "Spirit?" rain asked.
"Yes?" He answered.
"I want you to meet my sister. Come on out sis!" she yelled.
Rose came out of the shadows. Then she stopped in the light. Her main and tail was flowing with the wind. She was beautiful. She had a rose in her main. Spirit walked up to her and said "Hi, I am Spirit."
"I am Rose." she said.
"So,you are Rains sister?" He asked.
"Yes." After awhile. Rose walks away and blushes without him seeing her blush.
Fans, you may now rejoice. Someone already beat me to it, but I have to say something. I was on Netflix just now, and, drumroll...There is now a series on there based on the movie! It's called "Spirit: Riding Free" and it looks CHARMING!
Posted over a year ago