Spirit 2: rains' sister chapter 2-Looking for lost sister

Rain was galloping and looking for hours. She ran into many obstacles,like fighting a mountain lion. She had to take a break from looking so she fell asleep. The next morning. Rain woke up and heard hoof beats. She looked around and sees nothing but she still hears it and it was getting louder. Finally she seen what it was. It was another mare! She was cantering gracefully. She stops in front of Rain. She looked like rain but different. She had Rains coat but her main and tail was brown. "Is that you Rain?" the mare said.
"Rose?" Rain said.
The both neighed happily.
"Can you come with me and see someone special in my life?" Rain asked.
"Sure." Rose said. They galloped together all the way home,side by side. Finally they got home. "Now Rose i want you to get cleaned up for us,ok?"
"You sound just like mom." Rose said.
"And yes i will." rose walks away and gets ready to meet rains boyfriend.
End of chapter 2.
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