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Rains sister chapter 11 the battle/12 who are you/13 the black stallion/14 sultan/15 where am i?

Fan fiction by alexis249 posted over a year ago
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"That's it! I'm not running from you any more rain!" Rose yelled while stopping. Her nostrils were flaring. She was very angry. They started to battle. Rose kick her.Rain kicked her back. And the battle went on for two hours. Rain ran away scard to death. Rose won! Spirit was gone. "Spirit? Where are you?" she yelled. Then she blacked out.Or in other words got knocked out. She dreamed about spirit and herself getting married.A horse dragged her somewhere with ropes.

Chapter 12
Rose woke up in a cave.
"Where am i?" she said. She suddenly heard movement.
"Hello?" she called out. No one answered but more movement. Then a black,black horse came out of nowhere. No seriously no white,or gray,or brown,or roan, just black.
"Who are you?" she said.

chapter 13
"I am Black." he said.
"No really,what is your name?" she said.
"Black."
"No your name." she said.
"Black!" he said.
"Oh,your name is black. I got it." she said.
Black called out for someone. Then a red stallion came out of nowhere.

Chapter 14
"Ah,there you are Sultan." said black.
"Yes.Here i am. Now what do you need?" he said
"Take her somewhere else. Where we know." black said.
"How about paint cave?" he said.
"Perfect." black said.
He puts ropes around sultans and roses neck.
"Now go!" he said.

Chapter 15
Rose woke up.
"Where am I?"
"Paint cave. Where we keep all the paint mares." sultan said.
"No! Get me out of here!" she yelled.
Sultan left.
"Rose?Is that you?"said the black and white mare.
"Checkers?" Rose said.
"Yes it is me. How did you get here?" Checkers said.
"Got kidnapped." she said.
"You?" she continued.
"Same." checkers said.They chatted until they couldn't no more or when they get rescued.
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Wolfman32 said:
9 out of 10. A little better.
posted over a year ago.
 
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alexis249 said:
thank you.
posted over a year ago.
 
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has a bit of a glitch. you added a bit of the movie in your chapters. but altogether very good. it should be part of Spirit 2.
posted 7 months ago.