Tanglescar

Ok since you people wanted to ignore me in the forum i'll post it here. i have decided to leave this clan, for the leader stormstar rarely comes on to help her clan or stop them from fights. she only comes on to me when she makes warriors, apprentices, etc. i have gotten tired of the way she leads, no one ever get's in trouble here when they should because it teaches them about respect and shows them how they need to behave so they don't get in trouble again. i also feel like sometimes it isn't a clan because of the random things that go on, this clan sometimes acts like it's a twoleg group,...

"ok" Mosswing began, "this is your first time alone hunting, are you sure your ready?" Mosswing asked?
"Absolutley, posotivley!" Oddpaw exclaimed excitedly!
Mosswing nodded and walked off to hunt in another part of the area, leaving Oddpaw alone. Oddpaw smiled and sniffed the air for prey but instead, picked up the scent of an intruder.
"Strange scent" Oddpaw comented, "smells of rotten crowfood and a she-cat."
Oddpaw sneaked through the undergrowth then pounced on the surprised she-cat. Oddpaw narrowed his pale blue eyes at her. She was medium sized, not to younge not to old, her silver fur...

The pain is unlike anything i ever felt.I felt pain before ;the loss of my mother who ive loved dearly,the hauntings of my father and his clawing,find out the father i thought i shared a blood connection wasnt real and even fights but this pain i will never be able to earse from my memories.The pain of the claws tearing deep down into my youthful flesh as white dot glittered my eyes.The bites were horriable as well;they felt like jagged rocks ramming into my skin.I suddenly felt sympathy for all the pray that i and everyone killed since it must have felt similar.My mind raced and was trying...

Finchfang padded through the forest, a chill rippled through his gray fur, reminding him that leaf-bare was about to return.
Finchfang shivered, and sniffed the air. "Not one sniff o'mouse around here" Finchfang sighed.
Finchfang was about to move on when he heard a rustling of bushes, not far off. An intruder, Finchfang wondered? Imediatly his claws slide out, fur bristled, and eyes turned from curious to catious. Finchfang gave the air another sniff but relaxed as he reconized the scent of StormClan, a couple heartbeats later, a dark lean-shape leaped from tree-to-tree, landing a mouse-length...

clan~tribe
sharpclaw~ warrior
claw~ apprentice
no scratch~ elder
healer~ medicine cat
leader~ flashstar

*in this "tribe" there is no names such as flare"KIT" and flare"PAW" this tribet takes care of one a nother but has different rules then most clans. here there are no borders and no dupty.*
members of the tribe:
leader: flashstar
healer: echo( sharpclaw)

sharpclaws:
~ krestalclaw,dark grey tom with black stripes and black paws
~ nightdust, a beautiful dark ginger she cat with sprinkled yelowish spots and tail striped with white
~ lillydraft, a white she cat with dark brown spots
~ scareleaf, a grey tom...