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Tangled 2 - Gothel Returns

Fan fiction by fanta_fantasy posted over a year ago
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NOTE: This will be my 1st ever fan-fiction (: I hope you guys enjoy the story, I tried my best on it (:
"Bring back what once was mine..." finished with the lullaby, Rapunzel set princess Rana to sleep.
SWOOSH ~~~ The windows opened suddenly. The cold wind ran down Rapunzel's spine. She felt a chill of an evil presence around her. Hearing footsteps,she turned around to see, and saw MOTHER GOTHEL !
Rapunzel gasped,surprised and shocked as ever, she screamed. But someone covered her mouth before anything came out.
She tried to scream as loud as she can, but still, nothing came out of her covered mouth. She turned to see who it was that was covering her mouth and saw a woman dressed in black, She looked a lot like mother gothel only she had a scar from the edge of her eye to the tip of her lips. Mother Gothel also had little scars all over her face.
SWOOSH ~~~ Darkness...
Gothel and the mysterious woman had captured Rapunzel and had held her captive in the sack bag. As they heard the footsteps of wondering guards nearby, Gothel and the woman made a run for it. The woman making a little too much noise awoke princess Rana and she started to cry so loud that it caught the guards' attention.
The guards know that Princess Rapunzel knows better than leaving her child crying to wake up the whole kingdom. So the guards unlocked the door and came in. They saw that Rapuzel was missing and saw mother Gothel. They also saw faint movement from a sack bag that a woman was holding.
" AFTER THEM " yelled the captain of the guards.
But it was too late, Gothel and the woman escaped.
Rapunzel gasped for air as Gothel finally opened the sack.
" You! Gothel ?! But I saw you fall down to your death! You can't be alive! " exclaimed Rapunzel.
"Ah, dear, whatever happened to MOTHER Gothel, eh? Mmm. But your still the little fool you used to be." Said Gothel in reply.
" But how did you-- Rapunzel got cut off.
"But how did I managed to still be alive? Is that what you were gonna ask?" asked Gothel
Rapunzel gave a little nod.
" Let's say I had a little help in order to recover from a little injury. Mercury here (points to the woman) helped healed my injury. Together we planed to capture you, and it went perfectly, so far." Gothel replied.
" But why capture me? I don't have the magical hair anymore! Are you gonna hold me for what? Ransom? Sell me? What do you want ? "asked Rapunzel desperetly.
Mercury laughed an evil laugh. " All those are good things, but we want something more. Something a little magical. Something like, your daughter!"
TO BE CONTINUED ! Hope you liked it so far (: Tried my best so hope you enjoyed. I'll make the next chapter better (: Ok, thanks for reading, comment below and favorite it? :))?



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This is a great start. I want to read more.
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(: Thanks I've written it all down in a notebook already, just making some corrections then I'll post it up (: xD :)))
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Slipca said:
good job I like it :) can't wait for another
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Nice job
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BolFan14 said:
I haven't seen the Tangled short, but do they really have children?
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@ BolFan ;; Oh, they don't... This is just MY fan-fiction :) -.-' Sorry for the confusion...
@ Silpca ;; Thanks (: I'm working on it...
@ starlight77 ;; thanks (:)
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I freakin hate Mother Gothel!!
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hjb123 said:
i think that it should be more happy ya know like because it is disney princess but other than that its amazing! good job oh and i would love it if you wrote something on my wall
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you because u named rapunzel's daughter rana thats my name thank you thank you thank you thank you for naming her that becuase its my name <3 btw your fan fiction is amazing,awsome,nice and great cant wait till the next chapter
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@ hjb123 ;; Don't worry, it'll get happier (:
@ Rapunzel 123 ;; LOL , um, ur welcome (: I'm still working on the next chapter...
TO ALL OF YOU GUYS ;; CAN YOU GUYS GIVE ME SOME IDEAS (: PLEASE, I WANT U ALL TO LIKE IT SO I REALLY WANT IDEAS FROM U GUYS (: <3
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Fuck,I totally knew her daughter will have magical hair >.<

FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU MOTHER GOTHEL!!!!!!!!!

Okay,here's my idea,Rana is WAAAAAAAAY stronger than anybody in the kingdom,but Gothel's and Mercury's powers together were like a stronger thing than Rana. So if you could tell,they took Rana away. Eugene,Flynn,whatever you call him,heard Rapunzel crying and tried to cheer her up but once he saw Rana wasn't in her arms,he knew exactly who it was that took her away,and here comes the adventure out!!!! :D
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WTF mother gothel i really hate her eugene save rapunzel!!!!!!
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uh..... she's dead so it makes no sense and she couldn't come back to life.. good storyline though!
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