Ok, here's my go.
Hi Hecate!!!! I'm one of your biggest fans and I am THE ULTIMATE BOSS!!! I signed up for Fanpop just to comment on your story! I love it! I was reading ever since you started writing the Son of Neptune! Best stuff ever! When I was reading RR's SON, I was like, whoa! She was right! Reyna is a daughter of Bellona! I reached the same conclusion because I was like hmm, Annabeth is the daughter of Athena, Athena is a war god. Who is a female war god that is not Athena? Then it clicked - Enyo. But then, snap! Enyo is Greek - even better, cause that means Bellona is Reyna's mom!
And then, you killed Hazel. I was all like: "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!" But then I remembered you don't do stuff for nothing. And you killed Karen! Just when I was getting to like her!
Anways, enough with me getting mad at you! Let's get to good stuff. You are completely brilliant. Josie? Perfect for the seventh. Octavian? Well...I was thinking...ok.... But then I'm like, what the hey.
Aside from that, there's some constructive criticism I'd like to give you. It's mostly about spelling and grammar.
Well, first off: "Common." You seemed to have fixed that, which is great!
Chocked: The correct spelling is "choked."
Scrapped: The correct spelling is "scraped."
I can't think of anything else, so that's it for now.
Another thing, the seventh is a child of Athena/Minerva, and that is because of Olympian Week. There were seven cities each honoring a different god every day of the week. These were the parents of the seven. One was Athena. Just thought you should now. :)
Anyways, keep up the good work! I hope you become an author one day!
Hi Hecate!!!! I'm one of your biggest fans and I am THE ULTIMATE BOSS!!! I signed up for Fanpop just to comment on your story! I love it! I was reading ever since you started writing the Son of Neptune! Best stuff ever! When I was reading RR's SON, I was like, whoa! She was right! Reyna is a daughter of Bellona! I reached the same conclusion because I was like hmm, Annabeth is the daughter of Athena, Athena is a war god. Who is a female war god that is not Athena? Then it clicked - Enyo. But then, snap! Enyo is Greek - even better, cause that means Bellona is Reyna's mom!
And then, you killed Hazel. I was all like: "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Anways, enough with me getting mad at you! Let's get to good stuff. You are completely brilliant. Josie? Perfect for the seventh. Octavian? Well...I was thinking...ok.... But then I'm like, what the hey.
Aside from that, there's some constructive criticism I'd like to give you. It's mostly about spelling and grammar.
Well, first off: "Common." You seemed to have fixed that, which is great!
Chocked: The correct spelling is "choked."
Scrapped: The correct spelling is "scraped."
I can't think of anything else, so that's it for now.
Another thing, the seventh is a child of Athena/Minerva, and that is because of Olympian Week. There were seven cities each honoring a different god every day of the week. These were the parents of the seven. One was Athena. Just thought you should now. :)
Anyways, keep up the good work! I hope you become an author one day!