The Heroes of Olympus SoN my version!!!

RachelDare14 posted on Jun 19, 2011 at 06:56PM
Hi everyone!

This I what I think the next book could be like! All characters except Danny Craig, Lizzy Atkinson and maybe more, go to RR.

Percy Jackson:Poseidon
Reyna Colt:Mars
Dakota Morris:Bacchus
Bobby West:Mercury
Hazel Adams:Minerva
Gwen Forest:Venus
Danny Craig:Apollo
Lizzy Atkinson:Vesta
Abigail Moss:Vulcan
Cally Oldman:Juventa
Genevieve Saunders:Sybil/Oracle
Annabeth Chase:Athena
Thalia Grace:Zeus
Jason Grace:Jupiter
Piper McLean:Aphrodite
Leo Valdez:Hephaestus

Also this story will be going along at the same time as Jason and co are on their quest. So they won't feature much except in dreams.

Enjoy!
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over a year ago athena305 said…
Can't wait!
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
Chapter 1

Percy PoV 

I woke up in the middle of a big, dark tunnel with a golden sword pointed at my neck. 
    "Di Immortales! What is wrong with you?!" I cried. I mean, can you blame me for that?
     "State your name and purpose at Villa Romanus!" said a girl with a golden helmet. 
     "I'm...I'm... I don't know who I am?! Who are you?" I whispered. 
      "Reyna Colt, daughter of... Wait what?! You don't know you you are?" the girl replied. 
      "No. I can't remember anything about who I am, where I am or how I got here. Where am I?" I tried to explain "and why did you say daughter of and then just stop?"
      "Never mind. You will come with me now to be tested by Lupa at Villa Romanus" Reyna ordered. 
       "Villa Romanus?? Lupa??" I wondered what on earth she was talking about!
       "You shall see when we get there. Now walk!" she demanded.
        "Yes Miss!" I murmured under my breath. 
As Reyna marched me through the tunnel I thought about what I had said earlier about not knowing anything and I realised it was completely true. I knew nothing. All I could remember was a beautiful face. She had grey eyes and wavy blonde hair. But when I tried to remember her I got a piercing pain behind my eyes. Before I knew it we broke through the end of the tunnel and into the daylight. Standing before us was a massive Coliseum and I almost stopped right there but Reyna kept frogmarching me all the way into the 'camp'.  

Well, here goes. Enjoy and any advice will be very welcome!
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over a year ago precious211 said…
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hey this is very good!!!!!!
post soon!
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over a year ago dezzypoo said…
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that was AWESOME post soon
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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Thanks guys! I'll probably post later today because it's 5am at the moment.
over a year ago athena305 said…
Love it!
over a year ago LeoValdez456 said…
what country do you live in because where i live two hours ago was 2:22 pm!
over a year ago LeoValdez456 said…
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btw its awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago pink-bookworm said…
Awesome it's 4.29 where I live. It's all so confusing because you get people saying it's like summer break for them when it's like winter for you.
over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
It's awesome!! Oh and wanna no what times it is?? I'll
Say military


00:12 am early huh? 12: 12
over a year ago Emil5634 said…
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That was good Rachel!
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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@LeoValdez456-I live in England. You?
@Every1 else-thanks so much fir reading!

Chapter 2
Percy PoV

Suddenly a boy with floppy, brown hair came jumping up to us yelling "Hey Rey Rey!! You got us a newbie we can prank, I mean train?!"
       And to this Reyna grinned and said laughingly "Yes Bobby, I might've got us a new half-blood and please don't embarrass yourself in front of him!"
      I had to but in there "Wait! Half-blood? What does that mean?"
      The boy called Bobby sighed. "Reyna! You didn't even explain the basics?!"
       "Well I was a little busy wondering why he was in the tunnel with no memory!" she retorted. 
       "No memory! Wooah! Anyway newbie, by half-blood we mean half human, half-god. Isn't it awesome" Bobby explained. 
       "So you mean like, Zeus, Athena, Poseidon and Ares?" I said. 
      "No! The Greek gods faded away ages ago because their weak," he said it like like he thought there was nothing worse than Greek gods. "And the roman gods took their place. So we mean Jupiter, Minerva, Neptune and Mars," explained Reyna. "Anyway Bobby I'll see you later I need to take Mr Amnesiac to see Lupa."
      "Well, good luck newbie. You'll need it!" Bobby yelled as he ran to what looked like a massive stable block. 

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Reyna PoV

After Bobby left the kid looked worried and said to me again "Who's Lupa? Please tell me this time!"
     "Lupa is our camp co-ordinator. But when we meet her don't show any weakness or fear because, well, she's been known to eat half-bloods she thinks are weak," I explained
       "Eat! What type of person is this Lupa?!" he yelped. 
As he said this we rounded the corner into Lupa's den. She was currently talking to Danny Craig the show-off son of Apollo. I mean seriously, he thinks he's sooo good just because he's never missed a target but to be honest when it cones to capture the flag the Mars cabin cream them all the time. 
       "She's a wolf!" I muttered as Danny bowed and marched out. "Now bow you idiot!"
       "What?" he whispered back as Lupa turned around. 
        "Never mind. It's too late now. Just remember no weakness!" Honestly was that boy deaf or something! Suddenly Lupa started snarling at the boy and growled "You don't belong here son of Poseidon!"

Well 1 more chapter for you!
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over a year ago Emil5634 said…
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That great:)
over a year ago Emil5634 said…
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Oh you live in england! That's why your usually in when i am;) your only an hour behind me;P Cool
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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Yep only an hour behind! Thanks for the comment!
over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
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Its awesom and Enland?? Wow, I'm just in lousy Cali
over a year ago blakerose12 said…
Omg I loved it !! ur a good writer !! Nice chapter and you live in england that's so cool I always wanted to go there I live in L.A. Boring compare to where you live :DD
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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Are u British cause am one,by the way bloody chapter
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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@PersesJr-I am British

Chapter 3
Reyna PoV

Son of Poseidon? What does Lupa mean? Why didn't she say son of Neptune? 
        "Son of Poseidon? Don't you mean Neptune Lupa?" I asked. 
Lupa paused "Of course child just a slip of the tongue." a slip of the tongue? Lupa never makes mistakes. "Now why did you bring this child here? You are supposed be on guard duty are you not?"
       "Well,yes Lupa. I was patrolling the tunnel when there was a bright flash of light and when it went, well he was there unconscious so when he woke up I brought him to you." I explained. Suddenly the boy interrupted us 
         "Excuse me. I am still here. What are you going to do to me? And what did you mean by son of Poseidon? Am I actually a half-blood?"
Oh gods! Was he actually stupid enough to interrupt Lupa and I! I mean I did warn him about the eating. Didn't I? Then out of the corner of my eye I saw Lupa pounce!

Cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!
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over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
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Ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! Why!!! That waz....interesting slip of the tongue wow Lupa ur smart,
Post mire more more!!
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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AWESOME CHAPTER dude
over a year ago bstras said…
I love it! Fantastic. Brilliant. One thing I'm going to critisize is that your chapters are so short, and if you have short chapters you want to post at least twice in the same 24 hours. Plus it's summer (unless it's different in the U.K.). That's all really. One really good thing is that you have really good grammar which makes it look more "proper" and more "book-like". Keep up the good work.
over a year ago PersesJr said…
I love fish and chips
over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
What the that waz random

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over a year ago ajatashatru said…
keep up the good work.And post regularly:)
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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@bstras-I know they're short it's just these are chapters I prewrote when I was deciding whether or not to do this. They'll probably get longer eventually. And I am posting off my iPod! Thank you! And I have like no spare time in the mornings to post!

I will post at around 5:15 GMT time

over a year ago ahotsummerday12 said…
I really love itt! Keep posting btw I'm New here =D
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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Chapter 4

Percy PoV

As Lupa pounced I had a feeling that something was in my pocket. I felt in it as time almost slowed down around me until I found...a pen! What am I supposed to do?! Write on her! Well I thought here goes nothing when I uncapped the pen. Only to drop it almost immediately when it turned into a 3ft long bronze sword. Before I could pick it up Lupa reached me with her claws outstretched and slashed straight across my chest! But when I looked down there was just 3 massive rips in my orange t-shirt but no blood at all when that should've gutted me! I saw Reyna gaping at me and Lupa had practically sat down in surprise when she murmured
         "The Mark of Achilles. I see. Well child you are certainly strong enough for Villa Romanus if you bathed in the River Styx. Reyna, you will take him to his cabin and make sure he is ready for choosing a legion."
Reyna swiftly answered "Of course Lupa. As you wish."

As Reyna led me to the  Neptune cabin I could see her mind was elsewhere so I thought about what Lupa said about the Mark of Achilles and if I had a weak spot, where it was. Suddenly we reached the Neptune cabin. It was amazing. It was covered in shells and was a deep sea blue. As I went inside Reyna hovered at the doorway. Then, as if she had come to a sudden decision, Reyna walked in. 
   "You need to get ready. You'll need armour and a weapon. Wait.  Scratch that. You already have a weapon, that pen of yours. Does it have a name?" she quickly rattled off as if it were simply a weapons drill or something.  
       "Anaklumos," I immediately replied " or Riptide. What do I need to do for the choosing of a legion?"
       "Basically, you will fight the leaders of each of the legions and whoever you are defeated by, you will go into their legion. Oh, and you'll find armour in the cupboard over there." And, after nodding to a small cupboard on the back wall, she left.
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over a year ago PersesJr said…
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Thats it post again awesome chapter by the way
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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Why thank you! I might post tomorrow morning if I wake up early enough!
over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
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Good!! Goof, it's awesome, goof goof goof, I lik it!! And Perxy dropped the sword? Ur soo dumb
over a year ago ahotsummerday12 said…
Yayyy awsomee you posted great chappter!
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
Thanks Guys!

Chapter 5

Reyna PoV

How did he get the Curse of Achilles? He would've had to go to the Underworld and no one but no one goes there! But even with that he probably won't get any higher than than the 5th legion. Abigail would train him well, although he doesn't look like the type to follow rules much. I looked hurriedly at my watch. 2:20. 
      "Ah Styx!" I muttered. That boy, he must have a name, had his fights coming up in 10 minutes and I forgot to tell him where to go!

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Percy PoV

I checked in the cupboard that Reyna showed me and there was a full set of sea green armour. It actually fitted! Looked pretty decent too, I might add! Looking in the mirror I wondered when this 'choosing of a legion' would be. Suddenly, Reyna burst through the doors panting
       "Yourfightsarein10minutes!" she mumbled. 
       "What?" I asked confused. 
        "Your fights are in 10 minutes!" she repeated with a patronising tone. 
        "10 minutes!" I yelled "You didn't tell me that!"
         "Yes I did,' she muttered.                   "Just now!" I yelled. 
         "Anyway you need to get to the arena pronto. Have you got Riptide?" I lifted the pen. "Good. You'll be fighting Rowan Goods from legion 10, Dakota Morris from 9, Gwen Forests from 8, Danny Craig from 7, Bobby West from 6, Abigail Cameron from 5, Phoebe Starling from 4, Hazel Adams from 3, and Lizzy Atkinson from 2."
       "What about legion 1?" I asked. I mean if she started at 10 there must be a 1. Right?
       "That would've been... Jason. He's been missing from 3 days before you turned up. But as he's not here. You'll be battling his second if you get that far." she replied. 
        "Ah. Well who is his second" I wondered. 
        "Me," she said and started to walk out of the door beckoning me to follow. 
        "You?!!!!!" I said. 
         "Yes me. Do you have a problem with that?" she retorted sharply. "But you just need to know, Rowan is a faun and Dakota is a son of Bacchus. I'll tell you the others if you get that far."
   And with that we walked into the arena. Well I walked. Reyna marched.
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over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
Awesome
over a year ago PersesJr said…
awesome chappie post soon
over a year ago AmazingPercy said…
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cool:)
over a year ago MaximumRide12 said…
Cool!
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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@Every1-Thanks guys!! This is the last pre-written chapter so I probably won't be posting quite as often but I'll try!!!!

Chapter 6
Percy PoV 

We got into the arena at 2:30 exactly and 15 minutes later I was holding my sword to Hazel, daughter of Minerva's throat. 
        "Impossible!" she whispered,"You've got no memory, yet you beat me in minutes! You must've had some training. This defies all reasoning. No ordinary new kid can do that! You...win."
I had defeated 8 praetors in 15 minutes and no one in the humongous crowd knew what to say. And I mean humongous it must have been about 150 people at least! My next fight would be against Lizzy, daughter of Vesta. None of the praetors of the legions knew what my  powers could be except from Reyna seeing as she knew I was a son of Pos-Neptune  Well to be honest I didn't really know either, but I had a feeling that this fight would definitely test me in that area. Then as I finished thinking this I heard Lupa's voice rise above the others to yell. 
     "Warriors ready? Fight!" 
And with that command Lizzy sprang into action. she immediately drew her golden double daggers and summoned flames that danced along them. It gave me a headache just looking at them! I shook my head and got out my pen. As I uncapped it Lizzy started to charge me. As the fight drew on she started to use her fire powers more and somehow, without me noticing she got me trapped in a circle of fire. Then I decided it was time to show them, and myself, how powerful I could be. I felt a large tug in my gut and there was a roaring sound in my ears and then the ground exploded around me and massive geysers blew out of the gaping holes in the ground. After that I saw Lizzy sitting on the floor soaked and wide-eyed. And everyone else in the arena, except me, was soaked. Around us everyone was whispering. 
"A son of Neptune he can't be!"
"Not after Jason!"
Soon, however, Lupa silenced them all with a harsh growl. Everyone knew not to mess with Lupa if you valued your life. Just then Reyna came striding out into the arena in full battle armour, she bowed to Lupa and then turned to face me. 

              **********

Reyna PoV

He may've gotten this far but he will not beat me. I will win, if only for Jason's sake 

          
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over a year ago blakerose12 said…
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omg I love it !!! percy is gonna fight Reyna ohhh cant wait till you post !! awesome chapter !! :DDD
over a year ago daughterofTerra said…
this is soooooo good what happens if he beats Reyna?
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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AWESOME CHAPPIE MAN/GIRL POST SOON PLZ CAUSE I WANT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.OH AND U DO KNOW THAT PERCY CAN CREAT ICE AND EARTHQUAKES.
over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
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This is really good!!! Keep postin!!
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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@Daughter-of-terra-I haven't quite figured that one out yet!
@PersesJr-I am a girl and yes I do know about his other powers.
@Green-art-ac-pj-Thanks!
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
that was brillent chapter.keep going and post.:)
over a year ago MaximumRide12 said…
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awesome!
over a year ago PersesJr said…
post soon plz
over a year ago bstras said…
Awesome. Your chapters are getting way longer in just six. It took me about ten to eleven. Nice job. You have me as a fan.
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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Thank you everyone! PersesJr-I don't actually have a chapter ready cos I pre-wrote all the others! It should be coming fairly soon!
over a year ago pink-bookworm said…
This is so good can't wait till you post
over a year ago PersesJr said…
oh ok i luv your chappies abyway
over a year ago darkrai6543 said…
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cool vbut by da way, A DAUGHTER OF VESTA!!! IMPOSSIBLE!!! SHE SWORE AN OATH TO NEVER HAVE KIDS!!! TO BE AN ETERNAL MAIDEN!!!. okay calm down, but how does that make sense???
over a year ago MaximumRide12 said…
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possibly they were made out of fire?
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over a year ago Softdog said…
Wow what a great chapter! I just joined fanpop, but i don't know how to post can anyone help me? Please!

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over a year ago greektrickster said…
It's very easy soft dog first you have to be a fan of this club.then all yOu have to do is go up on the page and click on forum after that click on make your own forum topic and you are good to go
over a year ago Softdog said…
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Thank you, greektrickster! i now have just added a topic and will be posting soon.
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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@darkrai6543-I'm not sure yet but there will be an explanation later.

Chapter 7
Percy PoV

I hadn't realised I had been so apprehensive of my fight with Reyna. Even now I only knew because I was shaking. 
"Warriors ready?" Here we go! "Fight!"
Immediately Reyna sprang into action, charging at me with her golden sword in hand. I stood there with Riptide waiting for her to get close enough for me to...
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Reyna PoV 

What is that idiot doing? Just standing there like a lemon with his sword not even in a defensive position! Suddenly he grinned cockily as a large shadow fell over me. I looked up and saw a massive wave just hanging over me. Suddenly, the wave collapsed on top of me and I was enveloped in a ball of water. For some strange reason I could still breathe but I couldn't move. Percy then charged into the ball to hold his bronze sword at my throat. The fight was over before it had even begun. He let me out of the ball of water and I sank to my knees. 
      "I yield. I have failed you Lupa."
No one knew what to do. Where where they supposed to put him if he had beaten our top fighter. Me. As general and part time empress when Lupa or Jason isn't here it's my job to organise the legions. Lupa nodded at me. 
       "He shall be put into Legion 1! No complaints!" I yelled. Everyone ceased their whispering which had started as soon as our fight was over. 

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Percy PoV

Legion 1! I thought that Reyna was only the second-in-command. Did she even have that kind of power? To put me into a legion?! Suddenly Lupa barked
      "All hail ..... What is your name?"
       "I'm not really sure Lupa."
At this laughter bubbled up from the crowd. 
        "Doesn't know his name..."
        "He beat Reyna!..."
Then out of the noise someone shouted 
         "Why don't we call him after a hero? Theseus? Aeneas? Perseus maybe?"
Wait! Perseus! That's my name!!!
          "Perseus! That's it!!! That's my name! I'm Perseus Jackson!!" Though, er... can you call me Percy?"
Lupa looked down at me and I swear she grinned a bit. 
        "Of course. All hail Percy Jackson, son of Neptune!"
Wait. Neptune? That doesn't sound right!
            
Sorry it's taken so long!
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over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
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That's really good!! And Percy shouting that's my name that's my name!! Nice!!! Keep going!!!
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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EPIC CHAPTER DUDETTE POST SOON
over a year ago pjlover212051 said…
wait how did they know his last name
over a year ago blakerose12 said…
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Epicccccccccccc !!!! I loved it and so glad you posted !!:DDDDD
over a year ago pink-bookworm said…
Cool
over a year ago MaximumRide12 said…
Awesome!
over a year ago tina902 said…
awesome chapter please post soon
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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Just working out the next chapter as I have writers block at the moment. Will asap!
over a year ago MaximumRide12 said…
kay kay!
over a year ago Safree said…
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These are so awesome and toally cool.
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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Chapter 8
Percy PoV

As soon as that was over one of the people in the crowd came over to me. 
      "You were pretty impressive out there Percy. Are you sure you've never had any training? Oh, I'm Cally Oldman, daughter of Juventa, goddess of youth.   Are you any good with animals? Oh! What about horses! Do you like horses?I love horses!"
Well I do like horses but Cally wasn't exactly giving me time to reply. 
      "And I'll give you the tour of the Villa if you like. Or is Reyna doing that? But she's usually on guard duty at the moment. What do you think?"
I butted in before she could start off again. 
        "That would be great. Thank you. I don't know about Reyna but I'm sure she won't mind if you do the tour. And yes I like horses too."
      "Alright then. Let's start at the stables. Follow me!"
I almost laughed as she skipped off towards the big building that Bobby had gone to earlier before my legion sorting. 

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Percy PoV

"Here we are!" Cally cried as we reached the large double doors of the stables. She opened them and I walked into the most amazing place. I had a feeling I'd been there before but.... I can't have. Can I? There were 5 rows of pegasi inside with about 30 on each. There were also also 50 people in loose armour wandering around and talking to the pegasi. But that wasn't the strangest part. As soon as I walked in I was bombarded with voices in my head. 
       "Greetings my lord!"
       "You're here! They said you would be!"
       "My lord!" 
It was overwhelmingly loud so I did the only natural thing. 
       "SHUT UP!" Only to be stared at by everyone in there. Cally proceeded to tell me off in hushed tones. 
       "What do you think you're doing? You need to keep it down in the stables!" The pegasi had immediately quieted down but I couldn't very well tell Cally what had happened. I mean, she's not exactly going to understand. But, it's worth a try. 
         "I wasn't talking to you or any other person! I was talking to the pegasi! How can I do that?"
        "OMG! That has to be the coolest power ever!!!!!!!" Cally screeched. However that did nothing but confuse me further. 
        "Power?" 
         "Oh! Sorry. I forgot you wouldn't know about that stuff. Basically as a demigod you can have certain powers, like Lizzy with fire. My guess is that as a son of Neptune you can control water, ice, make earthquakes and apparently talk to horses!!!"
Wow! If that's true then maybe I'm not as helpless in amnesia as I thought!
over a year ago MaximumRide12 said…
Yay! U posted. The scene with the pegasi was funny
over a year ago pink-bookworm said…
That really good love ya story so much
over a year ago blakerose12 said…
awesome chapter !! it was really good cant wait till you post again and the scene of the pegasi was funny !!:DDDD
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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Hello again 1 chapter for you today! Have seen the latest HP and I love it!!!!!!!! Anyway..


Chapter 9
Percy PoV

After that strange revelation Cally immediately whisked me off to a circle of cabins, including my own. But something one of them had said was bugging me. 'They said you would be(here)!' What could they mean? Who were the 'they' they were talking about? But as for those great mysteries I don't think have much time to think about them with the 'Great Oldman Tour' going on. And even as I've been thinking this, she has been nattering away to me "...and that's the Ceres cabin, that's the Bacchus cabin and over there is the best of all, the Juventa cabin! There's not too many of us but with the help of Bobby and some other kids from Mercury we can have some pretty epic parties! Percy were you even listening to what I just said?!" Oops!
      "Uh...Sure Cally!" she pouted. 
       "Liar! Liar! Liar!" Oh, come on Percy think. 
       "I was just thinking about what you said about powers and stuff the pegasi were saying. I'm sorry Cally."
        "That's allright! What was I saying?" Heart of an angel, brain of a fish!
         "Juventa and Mercury cabin parties." I supplied. 
          "Oh yeah! As the cabin leader I meet up with Bobby in my fave hiding spot in the woods. I call it 'The Den!' Actually we also meet up with the Trivia leader Crystal. Bobby gets light-fingered in the dining hall and makes a few deals with the Vulcan cabin to get some tech stuff, Crystal handles making sure people who know don't tell, getting people here without people noticing and muffling the sound of the music and the lights in the windows. And I, well the whole Juventa cabin, put it all together in our cabin. We could invite you next time if you like. If you can contribute something. Oo, oo, oo! What about ice sculptures! I mean you do have power over ice as well as water." Wow! For someone who seems so immature she's actually quite good as this organising and explaining stuff. It would also be a great way to get to know some other people and learn about this place because as much as they say it's safe I just don't feel right! 
       "Yeah it sounds like a good plan Callie. Do you know when the next one's going to be?"
        "No, sorry. You could always come to the den and meet with Crystal and Bobby with me, then we could organise one!" she looked around, "Percy! You let me get off track and I'm supposed to have given you a tour! Besides it's nearly time for dinner now. Do you want to sit with us I'm sure the rest of my cabin won't mind?"
At that moment we both saw Reyna burst out of the Arena glowering at anyone in her way. 
over a year ago pink-bookworm said…
Awesome chappie.
over a year ago MaximumRide12 said…
Oooh. reyna's mad! Great chappie, post soon.
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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Hi everyone! Sorry if this chappy is a little short! I might not be posting much as on Mondy I'm going to Australia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then 5 days after that I'm going camping so no internet. Sorry!

Chapter 10
Percy PoV

"BOBBY!!!" she yelled, brandishing a floppy rubber-looking sword. The door to the Her-Mercury cabin closed swiftly and we could hear a multitude of clunks from various locks on the the door. 
     "WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH MY SWORD?!!!!!"

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Reyna PoV

That was it!!! I've told him again and again to stay away from my weapons! But does he listen? Noooooo! He just has to do it again!!!!! I could see Percy and Cally running towards me, Cally excited and Percy worried. 

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Percy PoV

I heard Cally's whisper as we ran. 
     "Do you think she'd throw a tantrum if I asked to have the sword?"
Hopefully we'd never have to find that enlightening piece of information out. 
      "Reyna! Stop! I'm sure Bobby only meant it as a joke!" I panted when we reached the door of the Mercury cabin which Reyna was thumping. 
      "A joke! A JOKE! IT'S HAPPENED 3 TIMES! IT IS NOT A JOKE ANYMORE!" 
Reyna's face was now rapidly turning deeper shades of purpley red as she tried to force open the door with her rubber sword. 
       "Okay, okay! But I'm not sure using that bendy sword as a crowbar on a locked door will help much." 
At that moment Cally decided to intervene with a high-pitched squeal. 
      "WHAT ABOUT THE WINDOWS?!!"
Hearing this Reyna ran to the nearest window and jammed the rubber sword in the gap before anyone had a chance to close and lock it. Actually for such good thieves and pranksters they're a bit dim for leaving the windows open like that. Then a little too late I thought about actually stopping her before she tries to murder Bobby. 
      "Reyna! Don't.....Go in there!"
       The last part was said to late as she slipped through the gap and into the cabin. 
       
over a year ago bstras said…
Hey WHAT UP! Just read the rest of your chapters and... BRILLIANT.
over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
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Hhahahahhah!!! Awesome!!
Post again!! Cally is soo imater even worse them Percy and Leo!! And Nico when e was younger!! Let's say I didn't say that... Post soon..
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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Well she is a daughter of the goddess of youth! I need ideas for the next chapter please guys!!! I'm going away on Monday and probably won't have any Internet so please chop chop!
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
i have been reading this story regularly. it is just that i am not a consistant commenter. you have done an exallent job so far and just keep so.
as for what you can do for next few chapters. you can let the campers know more about Percy's fighting skills. you can make him have more friend ship. have him win their hearts. you can even have some have a cruch on him. you can make reyna torn between her loyalty towards Jason and a new found facination for Percy.
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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Thanks!!! Am working on a new chapter, about 1/2 way through it now! Will involve a bit of a nervous Bobby
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over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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Sorry it's a bit short but it has a new PoV and it's kind of a 2-parter chapter and I have finished the second bit!


Chapter 11
Bobby PoV

Percy and Cally were having a discussion as I walked up. I'd been finishing off some stuff for our next big pr-anyway...I could here lots of thuds and yells from inside the cabin. 
       "Hey Cally, Percy. What's going on in there?" I had a sneaking suspicion it could be the sword trick. 
        "Hello Bobby. Are you in trouble?" Cally sounded more dazed than usual.
        "You're in big trouble Bobby! Reyna found the plastic sword you swapped. You
gonna go in there or do you want me to cover for you? She's pretty mental in there if you ask me!"
Wow! He's not got any idea what's been going on and he's willing to stick his neck out for me! Anyway odds of me coping against an angry Reyna, even with a rubber sword! Not very big methinks! 
       "Thanks Perce. Do you mind if I call you Perce? Would you mind? It's just, it's the third time I've swapped one of her swords and let's say the results aren't pretty!"
       "Course I don't mind if you call me Perce. In fact, it sounds a little familiar but I can't think why! Agh! This is so frustrating! Anyway what do you want me to tell her? Pegasus riding? What should I say?"
     "Can you tell her Gwen asked me to do patrol with her seeing as Sammy is sick. Oh and say Danny Craig told you. Thank you so much Perce! I'll owe you big time. Anytime you need a hand or some 'specialised' equipment just come find me."
       "Anytime! What do you mean 'specialised'?"
The clanking stopped. 
       "Never mind come round later. Reyna's done in there and I need to leg it. See ya!"

Ta Da! Enjoy! Now feedback please!!! I need it to help shape the story even though my characters kind of decide it a bit(Woh I sound wierd!)
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over a year ago MaximumRide12 said…
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Thanks for posting! Hehehe bobby's in trouble!
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
of course he is. post soon.
over a year ago bstras said…
Cool, but when is Annabeth coming?
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
As I said at the top this is at the same time as TLH so any appearance of Annabeth, Jason, Piper, Leo etc. will be in dreams/visions.
over a year ago paigemeable said…
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago skyguy98 said…
Great story! ha bobbys in trouble.
over a year ago Percy99Jackson said…
angelic
good.i like the way bobby thinks.post soon
over a year ago RachelDare14 said…
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I am sooo sorry !!!!!!!!! I've been on holiday with no wifi and so no posting and not much time for writing but here you go!

Chapter 12
Percy PoV

With this, Bobby sprinted up towards the edge of the Coliseum. I heard Cally sigh behind me and then start to whistle innocently. Then the door to the Mercury burst open and Reyna, only looking slightly out of breath, walked out. 
       "Where is he?! Have you seen him?" she demanded. 
       "Oh, Danny Craig said that Sammy asked him to do patrol with him because Gwen's sick. Wait! No! Scratch that! Gwen asked him to do patrol because Sammy's sick but we haven't seen him." It felt wrong lying like this  to Reyna. She kind of reminded me of some-one. Who, I have no idea but...
        "Nice try Percy! But you are an absolutely AWFUL liar! Even worse than Jas...Tell me where he went!"
So trying to look ashamed I pointed in the completely opposite direction. It had little effect. Maybe because of the terrified scream that came from just outside the Coliseum walls.

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Reyna PoV

That had to be Bobby! I've been on quests with him before and no-one screams like that and he must have a good reason. He barely ever screams! Percy and I looked at each other and started sprinting towards the scream. We reached the edge and saw why Bobby had screamed for help. 

The Minotaur was here. Within camp boundaries! Impossible! But as I turned around so I could get Percy to come up with a plan with me, he wasn't there. 

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Percy PoV

     "Remember me Beefhead?" I charged towards the monster. Probably not one of my better ideas. Reyna was still 10 metres behind looking gobsmacked that I would be so stupid. But don't ask me to explain because I am getting really strange déjà vu. Bobby meanwhile had scrambled towards Reyna. Just as well because this was not going pretty. 

Again I am soooo sorry!!!!!!
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