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The Heroes of Olympus The New Olympian

ajatashatru posted on Jun 22, 2011 at 04:54AM
I am new here,this is my fanpop.I hope you like it.
I donot own any characters.
I might even borrow some of the scenes from other.
please read and share your views.
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over a year ago OsnapitzJJ said…
Ok sounds cool! I'll read it!:D
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
here is the first chapter
Chapter1
Poseidon
There was no other god who was happier than Poseidon or at least that was what he belived. The victory after all had been his. The old gods of sea had gone into hiding; the ocean and the world were safe, his father the evil titan was no more. He was proud that this all was possible because of his son, his son Percy Jackson. The moment his brother Zeus had offered Percy immortality Poseidon knew that it would get turned down. But Poseidon was happy for his son that he was to have a family of his own very soon. He had just returned after speaking to his son on the beach of the camp. Amphitrite who had been watching her husband to be in a good mood did not disturb him and left him for his thoughts.
Hermes who was not in such good mood because of his son’s death looking even more depressed entered the throne room of his uncle’s palace or what was left of it you could say. Poseidon who was brought back to the real world by this, watching Hermes and with concerned promptly asked him for the reason for his current state. When he did not receive any answer he dropped the enquiry. Hermes delivered the letters, congratulating on the victory and his son left the underwater palace.
Poseidon was in a vacation mood and did not want to open those letters, so he simple tossed them aside and stood up to leave but suddenly one of the letters caught his attention. He picked it up and studied the cover. The cover was black in color, no one needs Athena’s wits to know that it was form his brother from the underworld, it was form Hades. It was not in Hades nature to write letters to others so this must be important. Quickly going through the letter he read to himself only one sentence was written in black ink on a white paper “same place, same time”.
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i hope you like it.
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over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
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Oh that's good!!
over a year ago athena305 said…
It's really good! Very original idea.
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
thank guys for reviewing. theis chap is dedicated to all:)
Chapter 2
SPQR
A boy with messy blonde hair, scar on the lip and electric blue eyes scanned the dining pavilion he had just received a message from Lupa his trainer that the gods had asked for an audience with the first legion and the leaders of the rest of the four legions. Lupa had specifically ordered him not to reveal this to any one, not even to his second in command. Why would the gods want to have an audience with them? They had just three days ago defeated a titan and had toppled the throne of Saturn giving the gods a chance to win the war. The boy of may be fifteen or sixteen was sad as he had lost many comrades and friends in the war at titan fortress. A girl with athletic looking features, blonde wavy hair and piercing grey eyes noticed her leaders thoughtful face shook him and asked “Jason you look deep in thought, is something bothering you?” she asked. Jason turned his face to his second in command with a smile on his face answered “nothing Reyna just trying to wrap my mind around what happened last few days.” Before Reyna could respond a loud howl by a familiar wolf got their attention.
Lupa standing on a platform scanned the whole pavilion with here intimidating red eyes. Here grey brown fun seemed to glitter in the light of fire. After having every of her pups attention she began to speak. For those who where in her presence for the first time and were not scared by her size and appearance they would freak-out when they find out that the wolf can directly speak in their minds. But for demigods at Roman Legion camp this was an everyday affair. Lupa then spoke “pups today we have two new campers amongst us and they have made it the fifth legion. Let us wish them luck. And an announcement, all the members of the first Legion and the leaders of the other four legions are to stay back rest all return to your barracks.” It was hard and fast rule when Lupa ordered for something, it was to be obeyed or you reaped the consequences. Once a child of Mars had disobeyed Lupa and let us just says that no one ever saw him again.
The pavilion was empty in just minutes, only people remaining were the first Legion and the leaders of the other Legions. After making sure that only those she wanted were with her the wolf just turned and walked towards the forest at the far end of the camp. Soon after Jason followed the wolf and the rest followed their leader. After walking for some time they found themselves in a clearing with Lupa standing in the middle.
There was blinding light in the clearing, Jason yelled for his comrades to avert their eyes. Of course there was no need in telling them twice they all wanted to stay alive so naturally the closed and averted their eyes. When the light died down they all slowly turned around see all the twelve gods in their full armor and weapons sitting on large thorns in front of them.

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over a year ago PersesJr said…
post soon man i love your chappies
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
here is the next one
Chapter 3
Gifts
The demigods bowed to the gods and knelt before them. Jupiter’s voice boomed “rise demigods.” The demigods slowly stood up and looked around and were surprised to see even Pluto the god of the underworld in a throne. The king of the gods continued “you must be wondering why we are here. We are here to reward you for your services which let us win the titan war.” Mercury spoke “Shane fields my son step forward”. Shane the leader of fifth legion stepped forward, he bowed to the gods again and the he knelt by his father. He looked like a mine version of Mercury himself. With his blond hair blue eyes, when he is around you should definitely protect your pockets. Mercury looked at his son fondly and said “you have done well and led your troops like a true roman. As a gift you get this new sword. Use it well. Also there is a gift for all those in you legion.” The god of messengers and many more made a sword and a box appear out of thin air handed the items to Shane who took it gratefully bowed again and went back to stand in the back.
Then the leader of fourth legion Mark Scott’s son of Apollo was called forth he received a new bow from his father and a package for rest of the legion. Alicia Jones daughter of Venus leader of third legion got her gifts. Roger Dawlish son of mars leader of second legion got a new shield form his father and some gift for rest of the legion. The gods the asked the members of the first legion step forward. One by one they received their gifts. Hazel Langer daughter of Apollo got a new bow and with never ending supply of arrows. Bobby Symonds son of mars got an electric spear as his old one was destroyed. Dakota Hamadan daughter of Ceres received a new weapon of her own. Reyna daughter of Minerva got as she herself would say the best of the gifts. She got to rebuild and redesign the camp itself.
Jupiter spoke again “demigods now that you have received your gifts return to your camp. And Jason Grace my own son stay behind.” No one understood as to why Jason was to stay back but they followed the orders. Lupa also disappeared. Jason bowed to his father and knelt in front of his father. Jupiter spoke “Rise my son. Does anyone here disagree to that my son is deserving of our gift.” No one uttered a word, Jupiter addressed his son again “we the gods of Rome for the bravery you have shown in the battle you have had with the titan Koios and for leading your team to topple the throne of Saturn offer to make you a god do you accept it?” “a god!?” Jason was now surprised and could not form any other word. Juno his patron spoke “yes a god, a minor one of course but a god never the less. You will be immortal undying living forever. Do you accept?” the way his patron looked at him said you better say yes. Jason thought about his friends Dakota, Hazel, Bobby he especially he thought of Reyna but then he could be immortal powerful undying and may more. His flaw power he could not resist power. What he should do? Even being an immortal he could visit them and even help them more or he,. He was cut out of his thoughts by Jupiter’s impatient worlds “we do not have all day, your decision child…” Jason took a deep breath “yes my lord I accept”.
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from next chapter i will try to put in some action. i have to be out of town for 4 days so my next post will be on teusday.
over a year ago sonoboreas said…
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Wow this is really good. This is one of those rare, very well written Fanfics on this site and it seems like you put a lot of work and effort into it. I can't wait to see more!
over a year ago OsnapitzJJ said…
WOW. Thats cool:)
over a year ago PersesJr said…
JAson accept gud chappie though
over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
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Awesome!!! Why'd Jason accept! I know it's good
That he accepted but Percy turned it down!!
over a year ago PersesJr said…
yea post soon
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
thank you guys for your kind words. as to why jason accepted,i have given a small hint. but in later chapters i will try to elobarate. today i am posting two chapter but there is no action in them. i the next chapter there sure going to be some.
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
Chapter 4
Percy
The war was over and now it was aftermath. So many deaths, much more pain, but they had won. Percy was sad. May be if he were a better leader, may be if he had gone to Styx earlier, he could have saved them saved them all. But his love Annabeth convinced him that the deaths were not his fault and if he had gone to have his invulnerability way before the titans would have found his weak spot and she would have lost him. Annabeth was up at Olympus bringing here designs to life. Percy sitting by the sea shore gazed at sea thinking of all that had happen all these years after he had killed his very first monster.
Percy had a connection to the sea; he felt a presence in there. Huge waves started form and the suddenly everything went calm. A head sprouted out in the water. If Percy did not know better he would have attacked but he stood up in his eyes you could see love and respect for the person now standing before him, his father. “Son, how are you?” Poseidon greeted his son. There was love in his voice and pride in his eyes. “I am good father, how are you?” Percy replied bowing. With a smile Poseidon said “I am good as well son. But you must be wondering as to why I am here” as a smart person Percy was he wanted to tell yes but he decided to go with the truth “well actually no, the truth I did not even give it a thought. Why are you here dad? No offence and all.” Poseidon kept smiling and answered “well you remember the day I told you that you are my favorite son.” Percy nodded and the god continued “I was not lying with those words. You see Percy just because you are grown up the monsters won’t stop attacking you. In fact more of them will try to kill you. It is also truth that you are the most skilled of all my sons and wielded your powers better than any other. But there is more, you are much more powerful than that. There are powers in your of which you know not. So I am here to offer you to train for those powers in my palace. Of course the training will be only on Saturdays and Sundays. Do you accept?” Percy was stunned his father was asking him train him personally. Now if your dad was a god and offered you something how could you not take it? Saturdays and Sundays were the days when Annabeth was most busy and Percy had those days free. Percy had a dilemma, should he accept or should he decline. Before he could think it any further seeing his expression Poseidon began “I know what you are thinking son, why I did not give this offer before the war? Well that is because if I had done so your uncle Zeus would have taken that as an act of war against him” Poseidon wanted to say more but Percy cut him off “ no dad that was not what I was thinking. I was just thinking should I accept it or not. You see I cannot just leave camp and come down to sea to you, and then what will…” “Annabeth say.” Poseidon completed the sentence for his son. Percy blushed. This did not stop Poseidon “I know son that you rely on her for your decisions. But now think of it this way, you have a family with her won’t it be better that you are well trained so that you in a position to protect her and your children?” the comment about children got Percy blush harder. Poseidon gave his son his trade mark grin; he knew that he had hit his mark. Before Percy could say anything Poseidon spoke “I will not push you for an answer right now, take time, and ponder over it. If your answer is yes then your training begins tomorrow. Come to the sea sharp at 10 hours in the morning. And one more thing I will not be making this offer again.” With that he gave his son a hug and then disappeared into the sea.
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
Chapter 5
Yes or no
It been an hour since the sea god had left, Percy was waiting for his girlfriend to return from Olympus. When she did he ran to her and kissed her. Seeing both excitement and nervousness in her boyfriend Annabeth knew something was up but she did not bring the topic up. Hand in hand they went to the dinning pavilion made their offer to the gods finished their food and as usual went to the camp fire. After the camp fire Annabeth could not hold her curiosity any further one of pecks of a child of Athena. “Percy what is the matter you seem distracted?” Annabeth asked. Percy gave her a smile “well that is exactly what I want to talk to you about” Annabeth nodded to him to continue, so he continued “well my father visited me today and he told me that I had not discovered all of my powers so he wants to train me at his palace s that I can learn them and control them. He wants me to have these training sessions are on Saturdays and Sundays. What should I do?” Annabeth ponder it for a while. She knew that her lover one whom she wanted have with her for life was powerful, but he is even more powerful as his father had to say. If so he will need training. The water power control could be coming for god of sea only nobody else can teach him how to control them. And also training were on Saturdays and Sundays the days when she was most busy with Olympus so instead of having Percy bored to death in her absence he could as well as do something productive. She was jolted out of her thoughts by Percy lightly shaking her “Annabeth what do you think I should do?” Percy was looking at her for the answer. Annabeth quickly came to a conclusion and said “I think you should accept the offer Percy. Not knowing how to control a power could be dangerous, also the training is on weekends so there should not be any problem with that.” Percy had a smile on his face, he kissed her goodnight and went back to his cabin.
Next morning Percy after his daily routine went straight to the sea. It was only 9hours but Annabeth had left for Olympus, he had informed about his dads offer to Chiron, he had nothing to do. While he was in the water a hippocampus came up to him and said in his mind “My lord you father awaits your arrival.” And it offered to carry Percy to the destination. With Enthusiasm radiating from him, Percy boarded the sea horse towards his father. Yes he was to train.
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i hope you will all like it. next chapeter i will try to do it in next 24 hrs. thank you all and keep reading.
over a year ago cro0010 said…
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It's really really good. I love it!
over a year ago sonoboreas said…
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Yes very amazing!
over a year ago PersesJr said…
POST SOON DUDE IT WAS AWESOME
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
thank you guys for your words. here is the chapter 6;
Chapter 6
Atlantis
The moment Percy entered the sea Poseidon knew that he had won and soon he will have Percy to be not just the great hero he already was but a warrior like never before. When he informed of his plans to train Percy to his wife and son triton needless to say they were not happy. A Nereid brought the sea god the news of Percy’s arrival and he ordered the Nereid to bring his son to the throne room.
Percy entered the throne room following the Nereid who was flirting with him. Percy just discovered that the Nereid was of a young age and there were Percy fan clubs all over the sea. This made Percy a bit uncomfortable. He had heard stories of Nereid being possessive and jealousy in nature so he made it a point to avoid them as much as he could. He bowed to his father who fondly walked over to him and embraced him. Then Poseidon spoke “so I take it as a yes then. You are here to train.” “Yes dad I am here to train.” Percy replied. Poseidon saw that his son looked a bit uncomfortable so he said “don’t worry about the state of the palace son it will good as new in ten years. It will cost a lot but you don’t have to be concerned with it. Now we go off to train.” Percy did not bother to say his discomfort was not because of the state of the palace but the Nereid.
The arena was huge, much larger than the one at camp half-blood. Percy just stared at this huge arena and admired the facilities there. Poseidon led Percy to center there was a merman and a Nereid sparing. Both had their swords of about four feet and were moving about in a fighting technique Percy had never seen before. In the limited time he had he tried to take in and understand as much as he could of this fight. When the two sensed that their ruler was in front of them the stopped turned and bowed to the great sea god. “So this is Perseus Jackson” the Nereid said and bowed to him “it is honor to meet you lord.” “You can call me Percy” was all Percy said. The Nereid giggled and the merman just grinned and they both introduced themselves as Undine and Jots. The Nereid who had led Percy to his father throne room had also tagged along with them until then was standing a little bit away from them but was in ear shot came running and immediately started to apologize bowing to Percy “please my load accept my apologies, I am new at this my lord, please pardon me.” All of them who were there did not understand the reason for her sudden pleading. Percy who was now convinced that this Nereid was crazy but kept his temper at check asked patiently as to why she was apologizing to that the Nereid answered “I have not told you lord of my name.” all of four of them burst out laughing. But for the sake of this young girl they all stopped themselves. Percy doughted if he wanted to know this Nereid’s name but out of common decency asked her what her name was. Clearly excited that she was forgiven she proudly announced that her name was Andromeda and lord Poseidon had assigned her as lord Percy’s personal assistant and help in his training. Completely filled with horror Percy turned to his father, who just gave a smile and said “she is in training as well.”
Poseidon did not wait for any comment from his son and motioned him towards Undine and Jots. These two will train you in the fighting techniques of the sea. And then I personally will be teaching you with different ways with water.” He turned to Andromeda and nodded for her to continue, she immediately began in her joyful voice “my lord you will be training in combats on Saturdays and on Sunday till lunch in the afternoon you go to your father for water powers. And before that on Saturday evenings you will be doing the history of the seas with me.” Percy had no problem with the schedule but for the part which had “history of the seas with me” part. He wanted to argue with his father for having him an assistant and that to a Nereid and in that this Andromeda. But he knew better than to disrespect a god who happens to be his father. Poseidon wished him luck and left.
“My lord I think we should begin with your training now.” She wanted to say more but got cut by Undine “thank you Andromeda, so my lord you are well furnished in the act of sword fight or at least that is what we have heard so we will begin directly with the art of mermen and Nereid combat.” Then jots spoke “the techniques are not just for fighting when you are inside a water body but can be applied to fight on land as well.” And with that they showed him some of the very basic moves. Suddenly everyone heard a voice and all turned to look that way.
“Well well if it is not the savior of the Olympus himself.” Standing there was triton the prince of the sea. Excluding Percy the rest bowed to him, triton did not even acknowledge them but was glaring daggers at Percy. He had hoped that Percy Jackson would die in the battle but he was wrong. The worst part was that he was standing right in front of him getting ready to learn about new techniques. Triton swam as calmly as possible his trident was cracking with energy. For some reason Percy felt like laughing at him, but then triton started mock him. “I really do not get what is so special about you Jackson. I get the feeling that the titans just fell off laughing when you challenge them and got hurt form there fall.” Percy kept his cool. Others were now stunned by the way their prince was treating his half brother. But Percy was slowly losing his cool. Triton started call Percy names. The water around started go cold, with every word Percy was getting angrier. Then triton did something which set the trigger he called Percy’s mother a slut.
“Triton!” there was anger and hurt in Percy, how this guy could even be his brother. “You have crossed a line. You have forgotten that you are just a minor god and not the ruler of the sea. You dare call my mother names you will pay for it.” With that Percy charged. That was exactly what triton wanted a chance to fight a chance to show that Perseus was a waste of time.
The prince of the sea easily dogged the first strike. And the battle began. Both were good fighters, but triton had the reach of his trident. Percy actual did not need to worry about being hurt because of his invulnerability. But being the prince of the sea and a minor god triton had more control over water than Percy, he was constantly depriving Percy of the advantage of using water. ‘Think boy think’ Percy told himself. How can he defeat this fool? Percy let his instincts take over. He expertly fooled triton in believing that he had an upper hand. He just kept dogging the attacks made by triton. He let the prince to try and stab with is trident, stepped side ways to his right and caught the weapon and pulled triton forward and also willed the water to push the minor god forward. With one swift motion of his sword Percy made a long gash in one of triton fin tails. The prince had not seen this coming golden ichors started to pour out of the wound. He yelled in pain but Percy was not finished yet he used the hilt of the sword and hit it hard on triton’s head. There was an audible crack. Percy wanted to do more damage but a loud booming voice stopped him.
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i thing i want to ask you all, am i goning too slow with thestory? do you want me to up the speed? please do enlighten me.
over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
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Soo good!! Nice pace, it's fine
over a year ago PersesJr said…
AWESOME CHAPTER MAN,POST SOON
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
save the tigers. this chapter is dedicated to the great beasts.
Chapter 7
Atlantis continued
Poseidon was just leaving the arena but stopped in his track as he saw Triton entering the arena from the other end. He quickly turned himself invisible and watched. He watched as triton insulted Percy, his anger flared when Sally was called a slut. He wanted to punish this son then and there. But Percy had charged at Triton and Poseidon could not interfere because of some ancient laws. Percy had then injured triton and was about to send a fatal blow, Poseidon knew that killing is something which Percy would regret doing so he had to stop. He yelled in loud voice for Percy to stop. He ordered some of the sea beings to take triton to the infirmary.
To bring Percy’s anger down he engulfed Percy in a hug and consoled him. Sea god apologized for his other son’s behavior “I am sorry for what triton said and did Percy, he is just afraid of you. He is convinced that you will replace him as the heir to the sea.” Percy looked up and asked “Why? Why does he think so?” Poseidon looked sad but answered any way “the heroics you have done makes him uneasy. He never had any competition in his life none of my other sons had done such things as you that worries him. He does not see that you have actually turned down immortality. Don’t worry Percy he will come around. I promise.” Percy nodded and gave his father a small smile. Poseidon let out a breath the one he did not know he was holding and said “well you have training to do. Begin already.” With that he left the arena.
Percy started his training with jots. He showed Percy some trade mark mermen moves. They sparred for long hours. Percy was covered in sweat, if that were possible underwater. Andromeda announced that it was lunch time, they had the food brought right there in the arena. Percy had never before had underwater food. It did not look even remotely delicious. Sensing his discomfort undine just said “do not worry my lord, the food might not look as good but if you taste it you will see how wonderful it is”. Percy hesitantly put a small amount to his mouth and just like undine had assured the food was not like anything he had tasted before. It reminded him of all the delicious food he had in his whole life. Seeing his expression both undine and Andromeda giggled and jots grinned. After the meals they began with more of battle training. In the evening he learnt that triton will take at least five days to recover fully. The part which he dreads the most came soon, history of the sea with the evil Andromeda. But he was surprised to see an old clown fish was to take this class and not Andromeda, she was also to learn lessons with him. The clown fish was wise and also he did not bore Percy by drowning into some monotonic narration but he told the story in a way which kept Percy on the edge of the seat and kept him anticipation of what was to come next. The old fish told the stories of Poseidon’s battles with the old sea gods and many more. When it was time for dinner Percy was about to crash. He was very tired, but he followed Andromeda to a dining hall and sat on the seat allotted for him. His father was already seated. He smiled when Percy entered the hall. Once food was served Percy dug into it, he had not realized that he was very much hungry till then. The dinner was finished without any word. The thing which Percy had not noticed was that the queen of the sea was not there at the dinner.
Poseidon rose from his seat and addressed Percy “so I guess you need your sleep now son. Follow me.” “My lord” Andromeda began but Poseidon cut her off “I know what you want to say dear but I will be showing him his room. You are dismissed for the day you may go. “With that he motioned Percy to follow. They had a small conversation as they walked towards the room. Percy was yawning with every sentence he spoke; Poseidon knew that his son needed his rest. When they got to the room Percy did not even stop to admire the room he found the bed flopped no it and fell asleep immediately. The sea god smiled at this pulled the covers over his favorite son, kissed his forehead closing the door he left. That was when dreams found Percy.
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over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
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I really like this story!!! It's soo good!!
over a year ago cro0010 said…
Wow! Really good. I love it!
over a year ago PersesJr said…
HOW COME JASON IS A GOD AND PERCY IS NOT,I WAS THINKING SINCE HE BEAT KRONOS HE WAS SOPOSE TO GET SOME TIME POWERS AND U KNOW SOMETHING LIKE THAT,AND IF HE CAN BEAT ARES THEN HE CAN BEAT JASON.AWESOME CHAPPIE THOUGH