sorry guys, I have been really busy. I had two tests today, a quiz, and a test yesterday and finals start tomorrow. So I have been super busy. I'll try and post really soon. But, thanks for the tips! I'm not really focused on the scenery because how I write my book is I wirte the basic stuff first, then add in the details, and I just never have enough time to add in little details and such.

But anyways, I am so sorry to keep you guys waiting! But don't give up on this. I won't forget about it. Just taking a little time for real life:)

Post soon! I want to see what percy's city looks like!

@Thalia67- i totally get that. Also, is it possible that percy and maybe nico could still be mad at them. i just think that if i were nico or percy, i wouldn't have forgiven them completely just because of some challenges. good luck on finals!

Kk take your time :) post whenever you can!
Yeah good luck on finals!

i'll post what it looks like in detail:P

and hmm..you could be onto something;) but im not one to reveal my secrets...

post soon!

Ok ignore my comment underneath urs because I think we posted at about the same time so I didn't see ur comment til now.

post soon! i'm DYING to know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

I just had my first final today, and it went well! so lets hope that the next one will too so I can write the next chapter:P Percy is threatening to send every monster he knows to kidnpa me so I can keep writing...I don't think I want that:P

lol
Good luck on your finals.. again :)
Post soon!

lol
GOOD LUCK IN UR FINALS!!!
and don't fOrget to post!

post soooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope your finals go well. Mine finished yesterday so I'm waiting for you to post!

*waits for chapter* I hope thailia did well in finals. Then she can post!

Ditto

POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!! please??
if you do i'll give you a cake. :)

post soon! good luck with the finals!

Are your finals over? Can you post?!

so I have two more finals to go. hopefully i have done well so far and thanks for being supportive! I promise promise promise I will at least have a preview tonight! I have a bit of free time, so I will keep you guys satisfied because I know how hard it is to wait:P

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!! hope you do well! oh, and here's ur cake. :)

POST!!

yay!! preview!!

ohj sorry i just got back from being busy and (homework) making me tired so i forgot this was here...so now im back!! its aweshum and PPOOOSTTT SOON!!!

kk good luck on the other finals :) post soon!

yay the preview is done!! I will try and post the rest tomorrow, but i'm staying late tomorrow after achool...giving my boyfriend his christmas present and all that good stuff:) then i have a basketball game and going to a friends house, but there should be a good solid hour for me to write the rest of this or maybe i'll get most of it done tonight:P anyway, i'm glad your back universalpowa! and to all you others, I'm glad your still reading! anyways, i'll quit stalling and get you the story....it's not like i'm purposely stalling and talking and babbling so it takes you longer to read the preview. nope not at all. i'm not that mean. or maybe i am. ok, now i'm talking to myself. ok, here is the preview to my story!


Chapter 16 (Preview)

Annabeth couldn’t believe her eyes. The city was amazing. It was all made out of what looked to be crystal. It wasn’t see-through, but it shined in the light. Wait, light? Glancing up, there it was: The city’s very own sun. It didn’t blind her, and she could see that it too was a crystal.

About 50 feet away, Annabeth saw the entrance to the city. It was a great archway, with pictures and sculptures, but what of, she couldn’t tell. The rest was so hard to describe. The city looked like a medieval town, with towers and the buildings were beautiful. They were each different in their own way, with some having other colors reflecting off of them. And in the far side of the city, she could see a huge castle. It wasn’t normal like brick or anything, but it was made out of crystals jutting out all different ways and at different lengths. The castle reflected the city, and Annabeth’s thought was that it was meant to be a symbol of who ever lived there and how they protected the city.

From up on the hill, she could see people roaming the streets and shopping. There were all sorts of places to go it looked like. To the side, there was a complete replica of Central Park from her time. People were strolling along, as though this city was the most normal thing in the world.

Annabeth glanced back to see who had also made it. Hazel was in front of her, because she had gone first. But one by one, everyone appeared. First Jason, then Piper, and Reyna, Frank, Leo, and Thalia. But strangely, Percy, Nico and Demetry didn’t appear.

Annabeth walked back to her friends and asked, “Where’s Percy, Nico, and Demetry? They should have come through by now.” The rest of them shrugged. She felt her heart flutter in worry. After all these years, and settling her feelings for Percy, they were back. But even though he had forgiven her, she didn’t think it was completely true. But she would make him be friends with her, no matter what. That was her first goal. And her second goal she had a feeling she would have to fight with Reyna for.

POST SOON! this is getting sssooooooooo good!