The Heroes of Olympus The Mark Of Athena by horse22133454

horse22133454 posted on Dec 10, 2011 at 05:43PM
All the characters belong to Rick Riordan I do not own The Mark Of Athena it rightfully belongs to Rick Riordan

Copyright-R.R

Character:
The seven
The gods
The camps
The monsters

Summary: The seven unite to save the gods and some boundaries are pushed Gaea is rising and the seven need to stop her.
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over a year ago universalpowa said…
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yayz first reply!!
anyays...


u should set it up first like this... u HAVE to say all the characters belong to rick riordan and stuff.... or copyrtight isssues may delete the forum.. i think

so go like dis

Copyright- R.R
Characters- (character names)
Synopsis- (what happens- summary)
THEn post your chapter after it
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
chapter 1
Percy


I couldn't wait to see Annabeth as the ship descended

I could picture Annabeths blond hair down to her

shoulders and her gray eyes. A few more minutes I

thought as a ladder was thrown off the side of the boat

a boy with blond hair and bright blue eyes floated off

the side. "Jason!" Renya yelled "so I'm taking a good

guess thats Jason" I whispered to Renya "yes you idiot"

she whispered harshley. Then an guy that looked like an

elf came down the ladder, a girl with choppy brown hair

by his side. Renya and I walked over to the three "hello

I'm--" I started but was interrupted "don't feed me to

the loins!" "shut up Leo"the girl said "what lions?" I

asked Leo. Renya was just standing there and staring at

Jason "Renya, Renya" I whispered and finally nudged her

"wha" she almost yelled "its not nice to stare" I said.

I was tackled as a course of electric ran through my

body "Percy where have you been" "here of course and

Thalia" "yeah" " get off of me" I said as I struggled

to get up and finally got her off. "Wait where is

Annabeth?" I grabbed Leo and Jason as they tried to run

"she is at camp?" Leo said slowley "yeah she was sick

with the flu when we left"Jason said. "Okay so can we

take a tour of the ship?" asked "sure"they all said

together "oh and i'm piper"said the girl. All eight of

us climbed up the ladder and I was tackled with a lot

more hugs then I expected even Clarisse gave me a hug

but I couldn't breath but I don't think she was wanting

to I think it was a dare from someone. Finally we got to

the rooms people were sleeping in some

"lebmepgotsapyhittopseaweepbwain&quo­t; I herd a girl say

"Annabeth?" "no!" Leo, Jason, and Piper yelled as I ran

through the door and I saw five guards and Annabeth tied

up in the corner wth a gag "I told you guys to just keep

her down here until she calmed down" "well she tried to

jump off the boat and kill us and someone told us you

said to tie her up." "Seaweeybranwheyhesouybean"as I

made way to Annabeth a tired voice said "stop right

there Perseus Jackson f you don't want to die leave

right now" "Gaea" I grumbled and everyone was looking at

me and then Gaea said "attack Perseus guards" then they

attacked.


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At least one comment then I will write the second

chapter
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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ok thanks universalpowa
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over a year ago universalpowa said…
^ ur wlecome :D

post soon! :D
btw, u should probably space things out

like

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saying

it makes it

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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
Ok

I will

u are very nice
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
The Mark Of Athena

Percy

Just as they charged he had just enough time to pull out the riptde

and dodged the first slice and blocked the second hit with his own

sword. The others were just staring at me and the guards "you can

help you know" the word seemed to put them to action and all of them

pulled out their weapons just as it looked like we were winning some

earth born popped out of the ground. "I got the earth born Percy you

get Annabeth" then two earth born popped out of the ground by

Annabeth and two of the campers stood blocking me from Annabeth.

The campers were shaking from head to toe so I just hit them both on

their helmets and knocked them out the earth born charged I felt the

water in the pipes and concentrated. He felt a his gut tighten and the

pipes exploded drenching everyone and making a distraction for the

earth born and making the earth born disappear with his sword. He ran

to Annabeth and untying her when he was finished she tackled him and

kissed him and he heard giggling and laughing behind him but he

didn't care he was with Annabeth and hats all that mattered. When she

finally pulled away she asked "where have you been seaweed brain?"

"well why do you ask that because I've been here" "well as much as I

like to see couples reunited we've all been called to the deck" Piper

said. So we all rushed up to deck and there was fights breaking out

all over deck and the ground "whats going on?!" I yelled at the top

of my lungs. But that didn't seem to get their attention and they

started to pull out their weapons so he made a huge wave and crashed

it on both land and water and drenched all of them. They all turned

their heads slowly to him "now someone tell me whats going on" he

calmly said.


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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

Finally someone spoke up from the greek side "well octopus tried to

attack me" "its octivan" said a freaky looking dude with sandy hair

and that was so thin he looked like a pine needle but he reminded her

of luke.She pushed herself into Percys chest she couldn't look at the

guy so called octivan "its okay" percy whispered in her ear "we will

discuss this later" Percy shouted into the crowd "but romans show the

greeks around and do not fight." "I'll show Leo and Piper around"

Jason exclaimed "I want you to tell me what happend when you were

gone" she exclaimed to Percy "so in other words you want me to show

you around" Percy said. Then she raised her lips to his and kissed him.



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over a year ago percabeth-bcz7 said…
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i think...... it was AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! post again soon!:)
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

Finally someone spoke up from the greek side "well octopus tried to

attack me" "its octivan" said a freaky looking dude with sandy hair

and that was so thin he looked like a pine needle but he reminded her

of Luke.She pushed herself into Percys chest she couldn't look at the

guy so called octivan "its okay" percy whispered in her ear "we will

discuss this later" Percy shouted into the crowd "but romans show the

greeks around and do not fight." "I'll show Leo and Piper around"

Jason exclaimed "I want you to tell me what happened when you were

gone" she told Percy "so in other words you want me to show

you around" Percy said as he smiled. Then she raised her lips to his

and kissed him. We walked around the camp and then we walked to the

city but right before we entered a statue said "weapons please" and

this little girl that was about six held out an tray full of

weapons "are you sure this is safe" she asked Percy "because thats a

little girl." Percy just grinned and put the riptide in the bin "its

safe she is an trained professional" said the statue "oh this is

terminus he protects the city borders and just put your dagger in the

bin"Percy said. So she took out her dagger and put it in the bin. As

they walked into the city someone ran up to Percy and said "praetor

Jackson a fight broke out by the collesuem." Percy glanced at me and

asked "between who?" "the oracle and augury" "okay lets go." When

they got there Octavian had a dagger in one hand and all the romans

shouting "kill her, kill her" but when they saw Percy they shut

up. "Who started it?" Percy shouted and even I was sacred for a

second then Rachel spoke up "he did" and pointed to Octavian.
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

"Why and how do you have a dagger Octavian?" Percy asked with an

annoyed look on his face "well its a cute story actually I snuck

it past the borders when you two were talking to terminus" and you

could tell this guy was wanting to kill Percy and all of the greeks

the way his voice sounded and the way he looked at us. "Well cute

story here to your going to give me the dagger now" Percy said

getting impatient and held out his hand his eyes glaring at

Octavian. Octavian sighed and it looked like he was giving it up one

second then tried to slice Percys hand and Percy was to quick and

dodged the attempted attack. Somehow the the ground erupted with

water hitting only Octavian in the face and Percy had enough time

to grab the dagger and walk ten paces away when the water stopped all

the romans were staring at Percy than Octavian. "That was so cool"

someone shouted from the roman crowd whispers expolded from both

crowds when she looked where Percy was supposed to be he was already

down the hill talking to a girl that was wearing a bed sheet. She

looked at the ground beneath and feet started to sink "Percy!" she

said urgently he looked up and saw her sinking. He ran as fast as he

could and the whispers stopped the ground beneath her was already up

to her shoulders and it covered her head just as Percy made it to

her. "Your here for special keeping" someone it was Gaea.



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So what do you think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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im bored so im just going to keep writting
over a year ago horse22133454 said…


The Mark Of Athena
Piper


She watched as Percy ran up the hill and Annabeth sink into the

ground as Annabeths head sank under the ground. "Hazel can you find

Annabeth?" Percy sounded so worried "sorry can't find her" "Percy

come on" Renya said as she put an hand on his back Percy was just

staring where his girlfriend disappeared his face looked lost Hazel

and Frank walked by Percys sides and trying to cheer him up ugg how

she wished Jason would be like Percy Annabeth was so lucky she

thought. Later that day they Reyna called an senate meeting when she

walked into the senate house she saw Percy in his chair in the front

of the room head in his hands crying so hard and Reyna, Hazel, and

Frank was by his side whispering to him about how their going to find

her. She walked up to them and said "Percy I'm so sorry about

Annabeth" I just couldn't see him like this even though I just met

the guy. When everyone was here they had got Percy to stop crying

"okay all we know is that there are seven demigods who have to stop

Gaea's forces does anyone know who those seven are. "I know three of

the seven they are me,Hazel, and Frank" Percy said " and me, Piper,

and Leo" Jason said "but who is the seventh" asked Renya "its easy

Athena's daughter, Annabeth" Percy said hanging his head and his

voice cracking. "Can you tell us the prophecy, Rachel?" she asked

"Wisdom's Daughter walks alone,

the mark of Athena burns through Rome

the son of Poseidon shall have a choice

to make mother earth sleep or awake

the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way

and friends shall decide his fate"

At the end Rachel slumped in her chair Percy looked shocked at the

end of the son of Poseidon shall have a choice and the

the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way part then

Reyna said "this meeting is

over."

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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Piper

At dinner that night Reyna was running around asking "where is

Percy?" but when she came up to us I said "no but do you want me to

go find him?" "yes please."




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over a year ago percabeth-bcz7 said…
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AWESOME ;) POST SOON!!!!!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
The Mark Of Athena
Piper

At dinner that night Reyna was running around asking "where is

Percy?" but when she came up to us I said "no but do you want me to

go find him?" "Yes please." "Were going to" Leo said "wait what are

We doing?" Leo asked "finding Percy" Reyna said "okay so were finding

Percy ya know some people call him" Reyna glared at him and he shut up

"I know what they call him and once someone says one o those names I

Will kill them" Leo was already against the wall "sorry, sorry" "okay

Well any idea where he could be?" Jason asked trying to get Reyna to

Look away from Leo. "Try the ocean or the sword arena" "okay."

When we were heading towards the ocean and a huge wave climbed into

the air at the sword arena "I'm thinking hes over there" Leo said "no

hes over there at the cafe" I said sarcastically. "Lets go look" Leo

said hopefully when we finally reached Percy he was fighting with

Medusa "stop fighting it Percy you know you want join Gaea" "I killed

you once I can kill you again" then Medusa spotted them at the same

time Percy did. "Close your eyes" Percy yelled but just as Medusa's

Snakes flew up and eyes turned gray a huge wave followed Percys

command and blocked their eyes but then she realized Jason and Leos

eyes were closed and the wave was only blocking her eyes. She closed

her eyes as soon as the wave went down "come on kids open your eyes

and let us see your precious eyes."
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over a year ago universalpowa said…
^ umm... hey horse? u know thats MY prophecy i wrote.... so plz write ur own.....or tell them it was mine (it says so on my mark of athena :D)

i dont mean to be rude, but i wrote that prophecy and the only two lines i didn't write were the first two; "Wisdom's Daughter walks alone, the Mark of Athena burns through Rome" - Rick Riordan
the other lines were mine so at the top u have to write "Adapted by Universal's Mark of Athena" becuz then its a copyright issue..sorry
so yeah... otherwise it was good.. :)
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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yeah srry I couldn't think of one and your a really good writter
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Frank

This Leo guy was really starting to tick him off first he makes Hazel

flirt then he goes and find Percy so hes ether trying to be stupid

are hes trying to take the two other people except for dad. But Hazel

said after ten seconds that he was gone "lets go look for them"but

when I try to argue she just stands and walks away. When we find them

Leo, Jason, and Piper were standing there eyes were closed and Leo

was shaking like an earthquake "close your eyes frank" Percy shouted

"w-ahh" but then he didn't argue there was Medusa standing in front

of Piper and shut his eyes. "Open your eyes I just want to see your"

then dust flew over him and Percy standing there grinning "so whats

the party for?" "are you crazy" "I'm just a having a normal day"

"hey Percy" Leo said walking over Percy must of seen him scrunch up

his fists because he got a hit in the stomach "offff" "why did you

say and I quote 'I killed you once and I can kill you again'" "well I

killed her once what did you not get." Leos eyes Widened at that

thought and Percy just walked away like it was no big deal.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Frank

Leo was asking Percy a lot of questions "how many monsters have you

fought?" and then Percy answered "millions of them and I fought two

titans and a god" "whoa did you lose any fight?" Jason asked joining

in "I'm still alive aren't I" "what god did you fight?" Piper asked

"Ares" Percy answered happily. That gained him an surprised look on

all their faces including him "did you hurt him as much as I want to?"

he himself asked Percy "yes I defeated your dad by hitting him in the

ankle" Percy grinned "why do you want to hurt your dad?" Leo asked.

"I don't like him" he told Frank "hey where is Hazel?" Percy asked

"well she is right ther-" he scanned the group she was gone "the sea"

Percy said quickly "what?" the rest asked in usion but Percy was

jotting down the center to the ocean. When they reached the ocean

line Percy was yelling at an Iris message "well you could have told

Annabeth!" Hazel was trying to separate Percy from the message and

he knew who was on the other side of the message. He was trying to

help Hazel but when he turned into an elephant sea water pushed

him back "Percy come on take a step away from the message" Piper said

sweetly everyone took a step back from the message except for Piper

and Percy. "Stay out of this charm speaker" Percys voice sounded

harsh "Percy I swore on river Styx not to tell anyone" "wait is that

a dress in the background aww Nico found his fit" "haha its not for

me its for you" a door creaked open in the background and someone was

thrown in. "Annabeth" Percy said letting an air of relief out "Percy

Nico?" Annabeth asked "tell slime head to shut up" Nico said "tell

bonehead to shut up and smack him for me" Percy said " Hazel you hit

Percy" Annabeth said as she smacked Nico "and Percy you know where

this is where Grover" "almost got married" Percy finished for

Annabeth. "Oh and don't forget to give a big hug to your husband"

Percy said to Nico a smile played across his lips "okay I'll see you

down the aisle in a few months Percy don't forget the dress for

Annabeth" "haha very funny bye" Percy said as a smile sild across his

lips "bye" Nico said as Percy waved a hand over the Iris Message.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Jason


All the girls at camp seemed to like this Percy he could understand

why this guy defeated a god, and two titans. "Percy!" Reyna yelled as

she reached him she kissed him on the cheek and turned bright red "how

did this happen" Piper said sweetly "well hes just so h-annoying

that he makes me worried." Darn. "Piper you were so close" Leo said

"you how you take my spot and you get admired by all the girls and

you get a kiss from Reyna" all the anger pulled up inside of him he

pulled out his sword and charged.



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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Jason


All the girls at camp seemed to like this Percy he could understand

why this guy defeated a god, and two titans. "Percy!" Reyna yelled as

she reached him she kissed him and turned bright red "how did this

happen" Piper said sweetly "well hes just so h-annoying

that he makes me worried." Darn. "Piper you were so close" Leo said

"you how you take my spot and you get admired by all the girls and

you get a kiss from Reyna" all the anger pulled up inside of him he

pulled out his sword and charged. He was hopping to get the guy off

his guard but that didn't happen Percy blocked his first hit with the

Riptide "what are you doing your acting like a kid" "I'm not a kid"

I yelled in his face "then stop acting like one." "I don't think you

will win Percy" he heard Octavian yell from the crowd then Octavian

started to chant his name and the greek started to chant "Percy,

Percy" now Leo, Piper, Hazel, and Frank began to shout "Percy, Percy."

But when Leo saw him Leo started to say "Jason" and Piper did to and

both attacked Hazel and Frank now he had to just get this guy out of

the water that Percy was backing up to so he shot lightning at Percy

to make him go away from the water but Percy was already in the

water. Percy shot high pressure water at him the water hit him in

the face something whispered in his ear "hes invincible in the water"

and a dome rose above us that was made of sand and water. Percy had

him on the ground and his sword point at his chin "I don't play when

it comes to swords" he said calmly to him "that was fun lets do it

again sometime" he finished smiling like nothing happened. Reyna ran

up to Jason and was about to smack him when Percy said "he was just

playing let him try he won't win" all the greeks were cheering and Leo

and Piper were on the ground with Frank and hazel on them. The rest

of the day all the greeks were trying to win against Percy Hazel

walked up to him at the end of the day and asked "what were you

thinking?" "I was thinking I could defeat the famous Percy Jackson" I

reminded her I looked back down the hill when the stoll brothers were

running up to us and they both asked "do you want to try to take down

Percy in the ultimate battle?" "Yes" I said with enthusiasm "come on

Hazel it will be fun" "you mean pay back for you" I shook my head

"fine."
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Jason

As all the Greeks walked off to go to wait in the bushes with Hazel

and him as Clarisse was getting soaked when he finished her off he

walked away to get a drink of water. I watched him start to drink

of his water bottle and pour it on himself even tough it didn't get

him wet "charge" Clarisse yelled at the top of her lungs we all ran

out of the bushes into mud and we all were caught on it trying to

free ourselves and one by one we all got free of the mud and Percy was

in the middle of the ring cracking up. "What the heck happened?" I

asked him "thanks guys but it doesn't work that way here because of

the water" then they all turned to the supplies all the water bottles

were empty and the big water filler was still pouring out water. A

ocean light brightened the evening and a god appeared "Neptune" Percy

said bowing "hey Percy" Neptune turned around to see campers sinking

in mud "what happened here?" Neptune asked "oh ask mister smart guy"

Clarisse grumbled "uh there so clumsy they tried to sneak attack me

but I got curios because they only took their swords" Percy answered.

"Ah" all the Greeks said at once "well we got more serious matters

then that we are going to have a spy on our hands" Neptune exclaimed

"again!how this is ridiculous at first its sel-" Percy stopped

because Clarisse was glaring at him. Thunder boomed in the sky "well

I got to go" Neptune finished.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Hazel

"Leo looks and acts like Sammy" she said to Percy once she got out of

his trap "well you never know Hazel he could be Sammy's grandson"

"well hes funny like Sammy and has those elf ears like Sammy" "watch

out Frank" "what whoa" Frank yelled as he sank in the mud. "Why is

everyone except you have mud on them" "mud bath" Percy said "my

specialty then Clarisse said "Jackson you are dead" while a guy about

her age was helping her out. "What she means to say is Percy can you

help me get her out?" the guy said covered in mud from trying to help

Clarisse "sure" Percy said as he got a glob of mud in the face from

Jason. "Mud fight!" Leo yelled as he got a glob of mud to throw at

Percy all the mud rose up and copied Percys every move "okay" "run!"

everyone yelled as they tried to run but Percy clapped and the mud

flew inwards. People started to rise and she started to look for

Jason and Leo "Percy wins" she heard Leos voice beside her Percy was

over helping Clarisse out of the mud. "Whoa that was awesome but scary

how did you do that?" "water is in the dirt so I took the water and

made it come up" at the last word he flew back and hit a tree. "That

was for making me muddy" as she walked up to Percy about to punch him

a girls voice yelled "stop" and Reyna walked over to Clarisse and

Percy and shoved Clarisse. Then helped Percy up "who in the gods name

do you think you are pushing me around?" Clarisse yelled at Reyna "I

am-" Reyna started "going to go help the Greeks get out of the mud"

Percy finished then turned Reyna around and started to whisper to her.

Once they got all the campers out of the mud all of the six who were

to go on the quest Percy was leading went to go get cleaned up, to

go pack and get ready for dinner. Once she was all ready she headed

down to the dinner pavilion with Percy and Frank a yell erupted from

behind them "Praetors, Praetors" "what is going on?" Percy asked from

her side "monster spotted from the tunnel following two kids" with

that said Percy followed the guy down through the tunnel. When they

were at the entrance a minotaur was charging to two kids.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Hazel

When she looked closer the minotaur only had one horn "no, no, not

you again "stay here he said to the tunnel guys and her he jumped

into the river and swam across the minotaur smelt him and turned his

way. "Is he crazy? I've got to go help him" "he is crazy thats what

helps him live but your not going Hazel he said to stay here" the

other tunnel watcher said when she looked he had a buff body an a baby

like face "frank?" he shook his head. She didn't care what Frank said

she was going to help Percy she ran to the river and jumped in and

was immediately pushed out by the river. Percy yelled at the kids "go

across the river now!" the kids tried to run but the minotaur blocked

them "go help the kids Hazel" Frank said and sighed "Percy let me

help the kids" she yelled over the river. She saw Percy nod so she

jumped in and the water pushed her over to Percy "I'll get the

minotaur you get Geric, and Will" "okay what if the thing charges me?"

"when it gets close side step" and with that he ran up the hill and

stabbed its meaty back with the Riptide "moooo?" it mooed in question

and turned to Percy. The minotaur now must of smelt her because it

turned towards her and charged "side step now Hazel" as she did the

minotaur held out his arms and she was suddenly pulled back by

someone no she was pushed but by who. Then she noticed Percy wasn't

there she looked in the river and saw Percy fighting the minotaur in

the water but the minotaur was tearing at Percys shirt and as the

minotaur finally got Percy pinned down he must have forgot that Percy

had a sword and the Riptide went through his head. Percy laid there

for a few minutes then she walked in the river and notced he was

smiling "well it been a while since I saw that guy" Percy said. "Percy

Jackson how dare you do that!" Reyna yelled walking into the river

"and a while since I've seen that one to" he whispered low enough for

only her to hear.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Leo

When he heard the news about how Percy was defeating a minotaur he

ran to the gate to see Percy just stabbing his sword through the

minotaurs head and then Reyna pushed through him and start yelling

at Percy. "Well you could have told me" "well I was saving these

two Percy said as he put his hands on two kids shoulders. "You

don't even know who these two are" "yes I do this is Geric and this

is Will" Percy said and got smacked by Reyna. "Lupa said that we

needed to go here" Will said "Leo come here" Reyna gestured him

over. He walked over to her and she said "light up" he opened his hand

and light it on fire they both jumped back "whoa how does your hand do

that?" Geric asked. "Do what?" Reyna asked and then she looked at his

hand and jumped back "Percy!" she said urgently and Percy gestured

his hand and water drenched him. "You said light up!" he yelled at

Reyna "I meant in your head." "Welcome to camp kids I'm Percy and

I'll be your guide and I want dinner" Percy said "can I talk to you

Percy" I asked Percy and he stopped "what?" "you seem bothered Percy

and I wanted to know if it was the same reason I am" "you know whats

bothering me" "that can't be bothering you." "Well whats bothering

you?" "Dreams are bothering me Percy I go to take a nap and there they

are Gaea dreams its bothering both of us" "it is not" Percy smiled.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Leo

After dinner I found Geric and Will "hey guys will you help me with

something?" "only if there's something for us in return" "yeah"

he held out packs of chocolate golden coins. "I just need you to meet

me in the city by the big tree in the middle of the park" "got it"

they said together and snatched the chocolate from my hands. I

gathered Piper and Jason and pulled them to the park "what?" they

both yelled at me "somethings troubling Percy and I need your help

to find it out" "why do you need me?" Jason asked "to circle him and I

need you" he pointed to Piper "to charm speak him" "it dosen't work

on him I've tried even Drew tried" "he was mad and I'm guessing she

wanted to date him." "Well how do you two know your way around so

quickly?" they all three heard Percy asked "Reyna gave us a map and

said you might get lost" Will said winking his way "we want to play

for a while you sit down" said Geric "okay" Percy said. When they

were just coming out Percy spotted Thalia and waved her over "what was

the dream about now?" Thalia asked Percy before he could answer Jason,

Piper, and I came out of our spots to ask Percy the same thing.
over a year ago universalpowa said…
^ awshum!! post soon :D
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Percy

The three buccaneers came out from behind his out from behind the

tree he was sitting by "not you again" "what?" Thalia asked "the elf

keeps asking me what my problem is" I told Thalia. "Just go away I

have enough to deal with" he told Leo "so you do have a problem" Leo

said in his face "its between me and Thalia" I said into his face.

"Well Percy you can tell us you can trust us" he scrunched his fists

at Pipers voice "its working keep going" Leo whispered to Piper "come

on Percy you can trust us we won't tell anyone please Percy" she said

sounding so trustworthy like Drew did that one time by the lake.

"Stop your just like Drew trying to get into my business just shut

up!" I yelled at all three then sat back down and curled up covering

my ears. I felt Thalia put her around my shoulders "Percy I didn't

mean to it was Leos idea.""what you can't blame it on me"

"what on earth is going on over here?" Reyna approached

seeing me in a curled position "what did you do?" she

yelled at the three "well" Leo started "Geric and Will

were throwing pine cones at me so these three came to

help me" I finished for them "oh sorry I heard yelling

and had to check" she said lastly and walked off. Leo had

an confused look on his face and Piper and Jason were

surprised "what? its ether your in a good mood or your

just crazy standing up to Reyna" Leo said "hes crazy"

Thalia said smiling.
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over a year ago TuTuAhshae said…
post soon really good ! and also uu should talk about hazel and her curse and she talks to the greeks about it.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Percy

"Ahh!" he heard Reyna scream from where Will and Geric were he ran

over to see Reyna soaked with dirt covering her head to toe "Percy"

Leo and Jason said "what?!" I yelled at them "why you do that to

Reyna?" Leo asked "I didn't do this" I said "it is the work of a son

of Poseidon's work but Percy was over there" Thalia said pointing

toward the tree "who did this?" Percy said noticing the harshness in

his voice and pointed to Reyna and all the water fell off of her "he

did!" Will and Geric said pointing to each other. "Percy long time no

see" a bearded guy said in a chariot coming out of the sky "Neptune!"

Reyna said out of breath "I came to announce your other half brother"

"Tyson's gonna flip when he hears about this" I said smiling "Will

you are a son of Neptune" "welcome to the family Will" "and Percy you

have to come to a decision sooner or later" Neptune said as his smile

faded "to trust someone or be killed" "have I mentioned I don't like

decisions! last time a decision killed someone" I said. Thalia

patted my back "I got to go oh I almost forgot Geric the son of Gaea"

everyone was looking at Geric like he was going to kill them all in

on hit. Gerics face paled so he went over to him and patted his back

"welcome to the horrible world of demigods" I said patting him on the

back. A hour till we set off to go find Annabeth and he was eagerly

watching the clock in the dinner pavilion and sudenly everything went

blank and he didn't know which way was witch. "Join me Percy and your

life will go back to normal you won't need to decide anything" came a

sleepy voice "never I've never had a normal life" I said back to it

"and why don't you go back to sleep so I won't have to decide" "that

would be easier but I want to rule." "So what" I said "I can defeat a

you your just a wimp because you can't show yourself" "I need you to

cooperate so just say I'll join you Gaea and then I'll show you my

true self."
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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I'm gonna skip Annabeth cause I don't know what she could do right now
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Piper

They all were sitting there and Percy was staring at the clock and

said nothing but all the sudden gasped for air and fainted "someone

get a stretcher" Reyna yelled and everyone went to action. Reyna,

Hazel, Frank, Leo, Geric, Will, Jason, and her were trying to wake

Percy up once the stretcher was here they loaded Percy on it and

the infirmary people were already running down the street with him.

After dinner and some of Leos jokes everyone went down to the

infirmary where Percy was sitting up in bed playing cards with

Grover and Thalia "hi guys" Percy said sounding casual. After they

were all in the cramped room Percy got up and shut the door "why did

you faint?" Hazel asked "I need to know something and be honest do any

have dreams from Gaea?" Almost everyone did raise their hands except

for Grover "how many of you are tempted to join her side?" everyone

put their hands down "good, good" Percy muttered to himself "well I

didn't faint Gaea just pulled my conciseness from me and we had a fun

little chat" Percy walked up to Geric "when I meet your mom shes

going to be dead meat" "you and me both Percy" Geric said drawling two

fingers over his neck. Percy grinned "so thats whats troubling you oh

I feel stupid now" Leo said "you are" she said Percy walked up to her

and said "you are getting better than Drew at charm speaking" and that

made her blush. "Wait what time is it?" Percy asked checking his watch

"its time to go now" Percy said "wait Percy me and Geric want to go"

Will whined "my mom won't attack us and I can track people

underground" Geric said "have you met your mother" Percy said "no."
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Piper

"No your not going the both of you and thats that" Percy said as he

climbed the ladder to the Argo three "Piper make him let us go" Will

pleaded. She turned around to see Percy glaring at the two boys

"Percy this-" he glared at her like a wolf "gryphons Percy watch out"

Geric yelled at Percy a huge figure swooped down to Percy and picked

him up and Percy had a happy look on his face "I haven't done

this in a while where have you guys been" Percy then yelled at frank

"can you help" "no clear aim" Frank yelled back. The gryphon was

trying to get situated with Percy than it stopped struggling and

Percy had his eyes closed and the gryphon was flying to the deck and

set him down "cages?" Percy asked with his eyes still closed they

rushed on deck and Percy said "cages now!" A drip of sweat ran down

Percys face he was gripping so hard on the railing his knuckles were

turning white Leo ran up to the control room and a cage dropped down

on the deck and the gryphon flew directly into the cage. "Thats

strange" "close it!" Percy shrieked and the cage closed

immediately Percys eyes opened and he was sweating an ocean "what

did you just do?" Jason asked backing away.
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Jason

Percy was freaking him out why did the gryphon do that Percy leaned

over the railing oh no hes gonna barf then some sea water sprayed up

and hit Percy in the face. "Percy what did you just do?" he asked

his voice shaking "I was trying to get water but then I noticed I was

not getting water but was controlling the gryphon through its blood

and I was in control so it was trying the opposite of that and is the

world spinning or is that just me?" Percy asked gripping onto the

railings "can we come now Percy?" Will asked Percy "Percy let them

come" Piper said really sweetly "sure come on up" Percy said as

though Piper convinced him. Then Percy glared at her the two climbed

up. They set off to where Grover almost got married everyone who

tried to touch the gryphon was almost bitten then Percy pulled up a

chair and closed his eyes and the gryphon was asleep so it should

have been easier and Will was trying to learn how to do it to. When

the gryphon woke up Percy put his hand through the bars and petted

the gryphon "Jason come on over and meet Tusk" "what?" I asked "Tusk

my pet gryphon" Percy smiled and opened his eyes. "He won't bite he

was just scared" Percy waved his hand for him to hurry Jason

finally had the courage to pet the gryphon. "Now all I have to do

is learn how to ride him" Percy said "your gonna what?!"
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
"Wisdom's Daughter walks alone,

the mark of Athena burns through Rome

the son of Poseidon shall have a choice

to make mother earth sleep or awake

the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way

and friends shall decide his fate"

At the end Rachel slumped in her chair Percy looked shocked at the

end of the son of Poseidon shall have a choice and the

the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way part then

Reyna said "this meeting is

over."

I made a new prophecy and didn't want you to go and have to search for it again and I changed a few lines so go ahead and read it
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Jason

"You are crazy" Jason said to Percy "any other comments?" Percy asked

"Percy, Jason watch out!" Geric yelled Percy pulled him down just as

an knife flew over his head. They looked where the arrow came from

there was a guy that had sandy hair "Octivian" he yelled to the guy as

he jumped on their boat "no Percy knows though" the guy stepped out of

the shadows he had a big scar down his face "its nice to see you Percy

its been a while don't you think" Percy face was ghostly and he nodded

"but your not supposed to be alive" Percy said his voice scared. "So

why are you alive?" Percy asked "oh you know I'm the only one who

knows where Annabeth is and there going to kill her if you don't come

with me" the guy said Percys face was lost then furious "what did you

do Luke gave me poisonous food or did you summon a pit scorpion?"

Percy asked "uh duh summon a pit scorpion any more questions?" Luke

asked "what did you ask Annabeth before your last breath?" "uhhh do

you think I will make?" "wrong" Percy tried to stab Luke but Luke

blocked with his sword. Piper made it on board and sweetly said "put

your weapons down" Luke did but Percy didn't and sliced Luke's head

but instead it turned into a venti "what the heck a venti" Percy said

like he wanted a bigger challenge "Dillon!" Piper yelled "its just a

stupid venti" Percy said "whats the big deal?" "venti's are a cool

monster" Dillon complained to Percy "since when?" Percy asked putting

the cap on the Riptide "why are they so boring that you have to put

your sword away?" "yeah" "why are they so boring "well cause I can do

this" a wave of water flew onto Dillon. "Oh" was the last word Dillon

said "so you guys no that venti" Percy asked walking over to them

he just shook his head.
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Frank

The next few days were the same it felt like with Percy, Hazel ,and

himself but the day after those few days Percy wanted to have a

meeting on what to do when they get to the island. "So first of all we

have to find the meat eating sheep than folllow me cause I think they

know I'm coming so I'll tell you all what to do and don't do anything

stupid" Percy said "like follow you?" Thalia asked "ohhh yeah just do

that stupid thing" Percy said giving Thalia a soft punch n the

shoulder. "There is meat eating sheep?" Leo asked looking scared

"well yeah but there nice sheep" Percy said "this meeting is over"

as everyone set off he and Hazel still sat there and all the sudden

they weren't n the room any more and Mars was sitting in front of

them. "Mars" Hazel said as she got on her knee "oh get up daughter of

Pluto I didn't come here to get worshiped I came cause I wanted to

tell ya something" Mars said "I came to tell you to watch out for that

Percy Jackson kid hes got powers waiting to be discovered and Gaea

knows all of the powers that she will need to rise out of that guy.

So you both need to watch his back okay?" "Okay" me and Hazel said at

the same time. "Oh and I got something for you both" he pulled out a

bow and quivers and gave them to Frank "the middle one has a dragon

tooth so you can summon who did you call him 'Gray'" and then he

pulled out a bracelet for Hazel "and when you slap it once its a

shield" he told her. Hazel took the bracelet and put it on her wrist

"thanks" she told him "bye" he said as he waved good bye when the

room reappeared Percy was fighting three hell hounds and two gorgons.

"Well glad you could join us" Percy said as he smiled he was throwing

furniture at the monsters he was about to ask why Percy didn't use

his sword but then he saw somehow one of the gorgons took Percys

sword the Riptide. Then Percy had an Yankees baseball hat on and

disappeared and the Riptide floated out of the gorgons hand and cut

her in half and then the other four monsters.
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The Mark Of Athena
Frank

When Percy took off the hat he said" you guys just fainted are you

okay?" "Percy why was there monsters down here?" I asked him "I don't

know" just then another Percy walked into the room and started "who ya

-" then he saw himself. The Percys stared at each other "why are you

here I pointed to the Percy who just came in "I was up in the fight

and I wanted to check in on you" "who is the correct Percy?" Hazel

whispered to me "I don't know" I whispered back "wait what fight?" I

asked both of the Percys. I pushed them out of the way to see the real

Percy hacking away at monsters that were surrounding them and he was

the only one fighting everyone else was on the ground tied up up eyes

popping out of their head at the Percys behind up us "thats the real

one" Piper nodded her head to the Percy fighting. The Percys behind

us turned into venti and grabbed us Percy saw us and started to kill

the monsters coming our way his eyes looked like they were turning

red. "Let them go if you know whats good for you" his voice sounded

like a million Percys at once he felt his venti shake and say "I'll

kill him." Percy strangely had all the monsters fighting each other

and the venti felt like he was frozen and so did frank Percy was

going behind the venti and unwrapping him then once he was done he

did Hazel.
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Hazel next plz tell me what you think
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Hazel

Percy helped her out and nodded to the others the only one who she

did not see tied up was Will so once she was over by Piper untying her

she would have untied Leo first but he just burnt his way out and was

helping Percy. "So can I ask you question what happened?" she asked

Piper "well I was talking to Percy when two gorgons Percy called them

I think came over on the other side of the ship and brought an army"

she said. By the time she finally had Piper undone she could not help

but think about the curse now there is different chances Percy, Frank

, or Will she felt that something was wrong with Will. She started to

help Geric when Will came up on board his face was plain when he saw

Geric tied up and Percy finishing off the last monster. "So you knew

about this?" she asked Will as she untied the last knot on Geric "uh

yeah I was going to look for you two" he said "somethings wrong with

Will he hasn't talked to much around me he said he had a weird dream"

Geric whispered to her. "Hey! Will you didn't help ya ran" Percy

yelled "and to know what else is weird is that you whispered

something to the gorgon" Percy said "what did not" Will protested

"whats wrong Will?" Percy asked his voice dipping with sadness. "Uh

dreams" Will said in defeat "don't believe any of them" Percy

encouraged him "what like the one where you and me fight with swords

and I kill you" Percy stepped back in surprise and walked off. "Percy

I didn't mean it-" Will said "save it if I had to kill one of us it

would be me" Percy said over his shoulder.
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The Mark Of Athena
Hazel

"Hey Percy" she said s she walked up to Percy "hey"

Percy said plainly as he looked up "somethings wrong we

should-" he was interrupted by a loud thump "no more

monsters" he pleaded when he looked over the side he

sighed with relief "were here" he said. Everyone started

to gather and Percy said "we are at the cyclopes land."

"Can we not go to the met eating sheep?" Leo asked and

you could tell this kid was scared "fine but I was

trying to make this fun" Percy said Leo sighed with

relief. A they made their way following Percy Hazel

could not help but think there are three people who

could reverse my curse Percy, Frank, or Will. She looked

at all three and thought that she could not trust Will

"uh" she said as she bumped into Percys broad shoulders

"shh" Percy whispered. Percy looked over the cliff and

smiled "whatcha do in Grover?" Percy whispered trying to

contain his laughter "oh just hanging" she heard

Grover's strained voice come from the cliff.


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over a year ago number1pjfan said…
I like your story! It's slightly confusing though because it's not in paragraphs. Would it be possible for you to do it in this format:
Percy said jwecnouwcbiuwdfcbiuhdwcbwuhcbuwfdbcuhdewcb­.
Then reyna said iced ciudad chided NIH chic
Then Percy fought jwdfbcouwhbcuwohcbufwjnjnjnjmjkjhhefbchchh­d hdhhhhh huywfewbcuedcobuwedhucbewuhcbweohcbuhefwbc­uwe­hcb­bow­euc­buh­cbh­idf­cbi­dec­bie­fcb­ief­hcb­fhb­cre­hbc­hid­nch­ide­qcn­ide­nci­edj­cni­edn­cij­den­cie­jnc­iej­jnc­ied­jcn­iej­dnc­iej­njc­dei­cni­jde­nce­inc
Then piper said kwcniwncidc

If you could do that it would be really nice! Thanks!
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over a year ago number1pjfan said…
By the way there were support to be indents in there but it won't work on my iPad.
over a year ago swimmergirl7 said…
Just found thus and it is awesome!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
The Mark Of Athena
Hazel

"Hey Percy" she said s she walked up to Percy "hey"

Percy said plainly as he looked up "somethings wrong we

should-" he was interrupted by a loud thump "no more

monsters" he pleaded when he looked over the side he

sighed with relief "were here" he said. Everyone started

to gather and Percy said "we are at the cyclopes land."

"Can we not go to the met eating sheep?" Leo asked and

you could tell this kid was scared "fine but I was

trying to make this fun" Percy said Leo sighed with

relief. A they made their way following Percy Hazel

could not help but think there are three people who

could reverse my curse Percy, Frank, or Will. She looked

at all three and thought that she could not trust Will

"uh" she said as she bumped into Percys broad shoulders

"shh" Percy whispered. Percy looked over the cliff and

smiled "whatcha do in Grover?" Percy whispered trying to

contain his laughter "oh just hanging" she heard

Grover's strained voice come from the cliff. "Don't just stand there

help a common satyr out!" Grover yelped at Percy "so this is your

secret mission you had to do instead of helping us?" Percy said

helping Grover up. "I thought you were going to Greece" Grover said

as he got up "and leave Annabeth and Nico no way!" Percy said "oh

right" Grover said as he grinned "oh shut up satyr" Percy grumbled.

They finally reached the cave Percy started to whisper "ok here we

are so Frank, Hazel, and Grover you come with me the rest of you

watch out here" "oh I'm not going in there" Grover said "fine" Percy said as he slid inside and blocked the doorway for a second "dragon

watch out" Percy whispered to them both. As they reached the back

Percy slid the door open just enough to fit them going one by one she

slid in after Percy and was tackled by Annabeth and Nico with hugs

and a brotherly kiss on the cheek and Percy got a kiss with Annabeth

when they were all done with the reunion and were standing Annabeth

gave Frank a hug ad then went back to Percy. "Well done my pawn but

will you be able to handle whats next?" a sleepy voice grumbled

"Gaea" Percy and her said at the same time and then a voice came that

shocked her "Percy this was a dream" and a figure stepped out of

the shadows.
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The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

"Will?" Percy questioned the figure "sorry Percy" the

guy said "oh and this is the famous Annabeth that Percy

talks about hi I'm Will I'm a son of Neptune" she

blushed when he said that Percy said "Will why?" "well

she wouldn't stay out of my dreams and she said if I did

I would become a god" "typical Roman but you won't be a

god you will be a titan." "Oh no she said god" "well she

is lying" "Annabeth who do you think is right" "don't

bring her into this!" Percy yelled sounding like Zeus.

"She has a right" Will said enjoying Percys anger "Will

I don't want to hurt you" Percy said his voice dipping

"then don't Percy you could join our side and we could

fight together" "I-" "won't do it" she finished for

Percy "Annabeth let Percy decide" "I won't do it Will

you were tricked I will-" "kill yourself before you kill

me" she let Percy go and walked over to Hazel and Frank

"we need to get Percy out of here" she said. "Yeah I

think thats a good idea" Frank said she walked back over

to Percy "we need to go now" she said "yes we do need to

go now out the door" Percy said raising his voice. Five

heads peeked out by the door and Percy nodded and

started to the door and Will stepped in front of him and

said "now you can fight charm speaker but not a

daughter of Minerva sad Percy just sad but you won't be

going anywhere" and before he could say anything else

Percy had Will in a head lock and sword out. "Will let

them go and you could keep me" Percy calmly said "or we

are going to walk out and there will be one less Will in

the world" Will shook his head and Percy moved Will and

him to the side of the door monsters were starting to

come into the cave and saw Will with a sword to his head

in a headlock "let em go" his raspy voice said. Frank,

Hazel, and herself walked out of the cave no monster

attacked afraid Will would die she looked back at Percy

and his wind blown black hair and his sea green eyes

"take care sea weed brain" was the last words she said

before she walked off with the others she heard a sword

cling against the ground and a whole lot of yelling for

monsters. When they made it to the ship they climbed

aboard and sailed for Greece as they sailed there was

alot of nice to see you again and hey guys. Finally they

stopped and Hazel and Piper walked up to her "I heard

what happened and your lucky Annabeth you have such a

depending boyfriend while I can't get a guy to choose me

over Reyna" Piper said "Percy is different he chooses to

go through harder times and protect his friends that

takes alot of gut sometimes he can do more than normal

he pleases everyone around him" Hazel said. "I know its

just you should see him on a regular basis he does crazy

thing that people don't usually do to please people then

some other people" she said cause she saw Leo peeking

"hey" all of the boys peeked out with an extra he had

brown eyes like Gaea and brown hair. All of the girls

laughed until they cried and their stomachs hurt while

they were getting lectured by the boys. A few days

passed and her, Piper, and Hazel were becoming really

good friends and the day they reached Greece she saw a

ballpoint pen laying on the ground she went go pick it

up and uncapped it and it turned into the riptide.
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The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

"Percys here guys look what I found" all of them came

onto the ground and were shocked to see the Riptide

Percy left this so we could find him and he must have

left trail "Geric has Percy been here?" she asked the

son of Gaea. He closed his eyes for a moment and pointed

diagonally and said"yes they went that way" "hi I'm

Calypso and Percy sent me to find you guys" a girlish

voice said behind her. "Hi I'm Annabeth I'm Percys

girlfriend" "oh oops don't worry hes all yours" she said

looking warily at the sword in her hand. After they were

done with introductions Calypso said "their camp is

around my place and Percy was all tied up but don't

worry hes fine and told me to bring you guys to the camp

so if you all join hands I can bring you close to my

house and you could get Percy." We all joined hands and

we all were transported to the back of a house as I

peeked around the corner I saw Percy tied up against a

tree with two guards that were empusas and the three

gorgons Medusa, Euryale, and Stheno a boy that had black

hair and green eyes like Percy, Will stood talking to

the empusa. She pulled back and Calypso pulled them

inside and dressed them like waitresses and waiters and

the girls did their hair in a braid down their backs and

they put hats on and flower in their faces and they all

went out serving people and her and Calypso went over to

where Percy was and Calypso said to Will "can my


assistant and me help you with Percy by feeding him"

"sure but only if your assistant isn't Annabeth and she

can speak Greek" she spoke in greek with an accent to

Will and he cocked his head it was working thanks to

Greek class. "Is that Greek?" Will asked Calypso "yes it

is she said 'hi my name is Bella and what is yours'"

"fine go ahead and feed him for all I care he hasn't had

a meal for at lest a week" she could tell now how Percy

wasn't as strong because he barely spoke anything to her

or Calypso all he did was look up. She gave him water

singing something like "don't worry Percy we will get

you out of here" he must have understood because he was

smiling. The next few hours was a blur and then when she

could finally sleep she passed out right as she hit the

pillows. She woke up early to find Calypso shaking her

and saying "we need to make breakfast for them I have to

or they will kill Percy" "why do we have to go with

them?" I asked her "yeah" she replied after they were

done making breakfast she went over to the tree Percy

was tied up at to find all the boys tied with him except

for Geric who was hanging down from the tree. I walked

up to Percy and gave him a drink of water "oh and while

your at it can you give all them water and untie them"

she heard Will say from behind her and she said yes in

greek she finished untying everyone and putting them in

a forest truck that must have been rented today she went

to go and untie Percy. She sat be him untying him from

the tree "fine Calypso you and that girl can guard the

guys today and tonight" she herd Will say she helped

Percy up and supported him over to the group of boys and

helped him into the truck.
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Leo

Annabeth was doing great she tricked Will but the guys got caught

because they were trying to get Percy out when all the monsters were

asleep but he accidentally fell on Will and so they ended up like

Percy tied to a tree but he was lucky he wasn't tied up like Geric

was. He was also glad he wasn't Percy hungry and has to sleep away

from water and for him he has to be dunked in water and tied.

Annabeth helped Percy in but way nicer than him and the others he

couldn't help but smile and laugh at this one Calypso and Annabeth

sat in the back and Annabeth let Percy lay his head on her bag. "So

why are you sweeter to Percy than us?" I asked Annabeth "because hes

hurt more"she said in an accent and acted like she had trouble with

the words then Percy sat up quickly and said "do you hear that Will?"


"hear what Percy" Will asked and turned around "water" Percy said

with excitement in his voice "yes I do and were not supposed to be

near water" a flash of blue lightened up the day even more and Percy

disappeared and was on the street in front of the car.
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Leo

Percy looked

weak but then his sword appeared on him and armor and he looked

stronger and Will jumped out of the vehicle and said "Percy get back

in the car or I will have to kill you" "no Will you will not kill

Perseus the defeater of Kronos he turned down being a god and he has

saved Olympus more then two times you will not kill him" Zeus said

and appeared out of nowhere and then one by one all the gods were

here and Poseidon by Percys side and then he and all of the seven


including Grover and Geric were behind Percy. They all had their

armor on "I challenge Percy to Will" a voice said and he was in an

arena with everyone in the stands and he was sitting by Poseidon.


Then Will had a light on him "the blessing of the all titans"

Poseidon said. and then Percy was glowing to "wow the blessing of all

gods" he heard Annabeth say "this will not end well" he said to

Annabeth.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Percy

Will started to glow with power and than I felt a surge of power run

through my veins you can do it son I know you can a voice said in my

head. Will was the first to strike and he aimed for my leg his sword

met my sword half way alot of battle plans ran through his head but

only one stood out. I tripped Will and ran to the farthest side of

the arena Will made the wrong decision and ran towards me and I went

with the plan and I ran to him to but he meld out his sword out to

meet my neck and when I made it to him I dropped and rolled and swung

my sword and hit his thigh his glow died down a bit. He looked in the

stands to were the monsters were and a woman in a cloak was siting in

the stands she looked like she was asleep.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Percy


More power surged through him he looked to where Will stood and

noticed that the earth was healing him no it wasn't the earth it was

a tiny puddle. Will ran towards Percy aiming his sword for his head

and threw the sword Percy ducked and hit Will with the butt of his

sword "oh you couldn't hurt a butter fly" Will said trying to annoy

me an army of earth born popped up Percy cut through them like

paper.He headed for Will noticing his hurricane whipping through his

hair and he sliced Wills shirt Will yelping in pain he had gotten his

sword and Percy unarmed him again. He picked Will up by his shirt and

said in his face "I won't die today" Will closed his eyes and a glow

light the entire arena and I felt the power and stabbed Will through

the heart and dropped Will on the ground and he was eaten by the

earth. Percy felt the power dropping drastically and everything went

black.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Annabeth

Percy just fainted in the middle of the arena when his hurricane died

down and when Gaea tried to take Percy, Poseidon sprayed her with

water. Me, Hazel, and Frank rushed down to Percys side we fought any

monster who tried to get near Percy until the gods finally got Gaea

to melt back into the earth. Poseidon and Apollo were by Percys side

while the other ten gods set up camp while all the twelve gods spread

about her mother, Athena came up to her and they took a little walk

around the camp. "Did Percy kill Will mom?" I asked her "for a while

but I don't think forever Gaea took Will to revive him."


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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Annabeth

Percy just fainted in the middle of the arena when his hurricane died

down and when Gaea tried to take Percy, Poseidon sprayed her with

water. Me, Hazel, and Frank rushed down to Percys side we fought any

monster who tried to get near Percy until the gods finally got Gaea

to melt back into the earth. Poseidon and Apollo were by Percys side

while the other ten gods set up camp while all the twelve gods spread

about her mother, Athena came up to her and they took a little walk

around the camp. "Did Percy kill Will mom?" I asked her "for a while

but I don't think forever Gaea took Will to revive him" her mother

replied "uh Annabeth um Percy uh woke up um about now and uh he

wanted to see um you" Grover said stumbling on the words. Athena and

I walked over to the tent where Percy was and he was talking to

Poseidon "well I don't think that was your choice Percy that was what

needed to be done but Will wasn't killed yet Gaea took him because

she has control over who comes out of the underworld" Poseidon's said

through the tent. "Well why me I just can''t sit down for a day

without having to worry" Percys voice said "well sometimes you can

have the normal life of the demigod and sometimes the wild life of

one" Poseidon told Percy "and you have a very wild one indeed but you

also have a special one with that Athena girl Annabeth." "Thanks dad

I noticed something on Wills body before he sank into the ground and

had enough time to grab it before and that was this" Percy said "whoa

how did he find this?" "I don't know what is it?" "its the Cintamani

stone."
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Annabeth

She walked in the tent and Poseidon shoved something into Percys hand

and Percy shoved the item into his pocket Athena walked in beside her

"boys these days" Athena said smiling. Percy said to Poseidon I think

there on to us" Percy was sitting in a water bed on the side Percy

looked like he just got out of bed and his hair was sticking up in

all directions but his sea green eyes were as bright as ever "shes

thinking of how you look" Poseidon whispered to Percy a bit to

loudly. "You stay out of my daughters thoughts Poseidon" Athena

rumbled about how Poseidon was nosy but she wasn't really listening

"then you stay out of my sons thoughts" Poseidon boomed at Athena.

Athena blushed and said "I was just checking if he loved her or not"

"me and Annabeth will leave you to this and go check in on Geric"

Percy said but both the gods said "sit down" she walked over to Percy

and sat on the bed next to him and it looked like they were

underwater. She put her head on his shoulder and her hand through his

and then heard laughing outside everyone at camp was out side when

Poseidon opened the tent flap she saw Apollo, Leo, Jason, Geric,

Frank, Hazel, Piper, and Thalia cracking up Poseidon looked at them

all sternly and they all shut up but still grinning from ear to ear.

"Why are the parents deciding whats good for these two why not

themselves they are perfect for each other" Aphrodite said to the two

Parents she felt Percy sigh with relief. "Percy go with Annabeth

while we talk" Poseidon commanded Percy Percy stood up holding her

hand and she stood up by his side they walked out of the tent to find

everyone eavesdropping "aw are the two love birds gonna have to break

up because of their parents" Leo said to Percy and Percy said " you

bet because the next time Leo tries to make a joke Percys gonna give

Leo a head cut." Leos eyes grew wide and he stepped away form Percy.

"Percy that was so rude say your sorry" Annabeth stepped away from

Percy to say that even though Percy was a few inches taller then her

she seemed to surprise him "uh sorry Leo" the romans turned him into

this guy you shouldn't have to live with she thought. No that

what her mom wants her to think wait she looked closer to Percys

forehead and were those worry lines "Percy whats-" I started

"nothing!" Percy said a little to quickly.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

Percy brought her to a little lake and said "Annabeth when I was

asleep Gaea was messing with my head first she showed you on her side

and then she showed me my death. She wouldn't stop she showed me all

of the people closest to me dying and she said 'you will lose

everything Perseus Jackson' and then Will appeared holding a sword

with blood on it saying 'if you don't join me Percy she will' and

pointed to you. I was just lost in everything" "Percy did you tell

your dad?" she asked him "yes" he replied holding back a sob. "Percy

I don't want to hurt you" a voice said "Will" Percy said ferociously

"go away" "Percy let me explain" Will pleaded appearing as Percy

brought out his sword and lunged at Will but two earth born came out

of the ground and grabbed Percy by the arms. "I'm going to kill you"

Percy screamed in Wills face a huge amount of water rose out of the

lake and Will said "I have all the powers you do Percy" "but you

haven't mastered alot of them" and the wave pushed on but was being

pushed back by dirt. "Percy, Annabeth are you okay?" Geric popped out

from behind tree "go get help" Annabeth yelled at him Geric tried to

run but Will grabbed him by the shirt and said "your not going

anywhere just then a gryphon flew down and grabbed Geric by the

shoulders and flew off towards camp. Once Will finally was able to

close off all the water in the lake then he started to talk she

didn't attack because Will had Percys sword tip under Percys chin.

"Percy Gaea would have killed you if I didn't join her so in a way I

saved your life" Will started "but you went after me so you aren't

trying to save my life and oh you have a sword point to my neck"

Percy said totally mad at Will. "Will put the sword down we can just

talk this out" Piper said emerging from the bushes Will put the sword

down from Percys neck and water was sucked out from the trees and hit

both of the earth born and they turned into dust. Percy said "Jason

shoot him with a lightning bolt" a lightning bolt shot down but

missed but Percy had enough time to grab his sword but he swung and

there was nothing to swing at.
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
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Nice chapter! I really love how you post often and post a lot. It's really good!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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i usaully post every day i would post faster but im writting on an very slow and old computer but still it works
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

"Will just appeared and then disappeared its like hes trying to drive me crazy" Percy said staring at the spot where Will disappeared "he knows you Percy hes trying to get to you cause you are his half brother but he knows you won't hurt him without having to" I said rubbing Percys back. Poseidon walked out of the bushes with Athena by his side Poseidon looked at Annabeth then Percy and then where Percy was staring he walked over to Percy and then said "come on Percy you should get some rest" he placed a hand on Percys shoulder and lead him away. "Annabeth whats wrong?" Athena asked her "oh Will appeared trying to tell Percy why he turned over to Gaeas side" she told her mom.

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sneak peek i have to go to bed
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
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Good so far! I love how you post daily. Can you please read my forum called back in time? You'd want to start at the first one then go to number two so you can understand it. Thanks!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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brothers soooo annoying wont stop bugging about fat people faliing on it these are the videos

also if ur wondering why did Annabeth 4x its cause i had 2 make up 4 her
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Annabeth

"Will just appeared and then disappeared its like hes

trying to drive me crazy" Percy said staring at the spot

where Will disappeared "he knows you Percy hes trying to

get to you cause you are his half brother but he knows

you won't hurt him without having to" I said rubbing

Percys back. Poseidon walked out of the bushes with

Athena by his side Poseidon looked at Annabeth then

Percy and then said "come on Percy you should get some

rest" he placed a hand on Percys shoulder and lead him

away. "Annabeth whats wrong?" Athena asked her "oh Will

appeared trying to tell Percy why he turned over to

Gaeas side" she told her mom. We walked back to camp in

silence she could only think about how Will might pop up

every day until Percy finally gives in once they reached

camp she asked Leo "where is Percy?" "oh grumpy pants is

in his tent" Leo replied. She walked over to Percys tent

only to find an old friend waiting there and Percy

talking to him "Luke" she said and "look who came to see

Percy" Luke said "I'm just visiting death cupid let me

for only tonight." Luke smiled and his scar showed in

the weak light "come on Annabeth are ya gonna sit or

stare at Luke in till he dies again we've been catching

up on a few things" Percy said smiling. She sat down on

the other side of Luke and they started to talk "so

which one are you in" she asked Luke Luke replied "I'm

in the fields of Adolsel (I think that's right is it?)

yeah wasn't good enough to go to Elysium" "hey! whose

there?" Percy looked around frantically "what?" Luke

asked him. "You didn't hear it nothing its probably my

imagination" Percy looked around one more time then said

"okay sorry I thought I heard something." "Well as I was

saying" Luke continued Percy punched the ground and Luke

yelled "don't Percy!" Percy stood in front of her and

pulled Luke off the ground and said "you can tell Gaea

that I don't accept her gift ,Will and stay away from

here" "Percy what that is not Will its Luke" Annabeth

told him. "Luke! please Luke turned good at the last

minute and he doesn't make up names like 'Death cupid'

plus Thantos would never let a spirit go walking around"

Percy made his point. "Percy put me down" Will pleaded

not making his voice like Luke's "turn around Percy

now!" Wills urgent voice said "I'm not falling for it"

she turned to see a guy holding a dagger up aiming at

Percys throat right when he stabbed Percy lurched

forward and let out a wail of pain as the dagger hit his

back. Percy turned around quickly and stabbed the

attacker with the Riptide to meet his attackers arm

"Octavian" Percy snapped as he pulled the guys hood off.

Octavian sank into the ground as Apollo ran in to find

Percys back blood red Apollo asked for an explanation as

he wrapped Percys wound so Percy told him about his

decedent being on Gaeas side "well that about does it

and tell Octavian next time you see him he will be

stripped from his duties and then kill him will you?"

Apollo asked Percy. "I love that idea" Percy said after

Apollo left they had some time to their self and Percy

said "come here Annabeth and tell my what ya think fast

or slow death for Octavian?" "fast" she said and then

kissed him she couldn't feel any better then this.
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over a year ago tortillialuvsrr said…
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hey!!!!! I LOVE YOUR FORUM!!!!!! POST SOON!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE REALLY GOOD!!!! BUT YOU CAN MAKE IT A LITTLE CONFUSING BUT I COULDN'T STOP READING!!! LOVE IT POST SOON!!!!!!
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
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I think Octavian relly is a traitor in the real Sierra so I'm glad you put him in here as a traitor. No one else is so that makes your foam extra special! Great chapter!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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thanks i pictured Octavian as a traitor to cause he is so weird and cut up Percys Panda Pillow pet :(
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Piper

Her and Jason relationship was nothing like Annabeths

and Percys theirs was so pure but they did weird things

like pull pranks on each other, or practice fighting.

But that did not matter why must her brain be like this

but she wished Jason would stop trying not talking to

her. "Hey Piper" Percy said as he walked by "wait Percy"

she said after him "yes" Percy said "I want to ask you

if you wanted to help me with pulling a prank" "oh" he

said like he was going to do something else "sure what

kind of prank and for who" he asked his voice pipped

with excitement. "For a certain son of Jupiter" she said

Percys mouth fell wide "last time I did that I got

shocked with lightning from Thalia but sure as long as

you get him by a body of water" he said "oh and bring

Leo." She walked up to Leo and Jason Leo was poking a

slug with a stick "you guys want to hang out for a

while?" she asked them "no were having a blast" Leo said

"really?" she said "no lets go and where are we going?"

Leo asked. "Oh to the lake" she said very loudly cause

she saw Percy hiding behind bushes "hey wheres Percy?"

Jason asked just then right on que Percy walked from the

sword arena and smiled at them "hey Percy want to come?"

Jason asked Percy "sure oh wait only if the others come

to" Jason shrugged and Percy ran off to gather the

others. As they finally got to the lake something said

"son of the sea god you are going to pay you took all

the monsters and put them here" "what was that" the

three of them said looking around wildly Percy,

Annabeth, Grover, and Thalia were just grinning.

"Naiads" Percy said shoving his hand in the water and

pulling out a human "let me go you stupid son of

Poseidon" Percy let go and a second later there was a

stream of water hit Percy in the face but just ran down

his body making his clothes wet. Leo was leaning over

the side of the lake and a high pressured wave pulled

him in she looked at Percy and Percy said "wasn't me"

"go get him before he drowns" she said to him. Percy

sighed and threw his shirt off and dived in the water

Leo flew out in a few seconds and Leo said "best time of

my life best time." Annabeth said "where is Percy?" and

then Percy walked out of the water "hey guys" he said

something was off about him something about his voice.
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Piper

"Hey Percy so what happened down there?" she asked the mysterious

Percy "oh you know getting flame head from the Naiads" Percy said

looking at Leo. "Those girls down there are just big flirts" Percy

said "they kiss every hero they fall upon" "what?" Leo asked looking

confused for a second but then puzzled. A big figure flew into the

water not creating a splash Nico smiled for a second then burst out

laughing "hey Percy try to not make a scene" he said in between

breaths. A big wave flew and hit everyone in the face and two Percys

were wrestling in the mud the Riptide by Annabeths foot both Percys

were all muddy a twelve year old girl stepped out from the bushes

laughing followed by alot more girls. Thalia looked close to crying

from laughing "hey!" a Percy yelped "Frank help me bind Octavian" the

Percy on top of them said Frank reached for rope that the top Percy

said. "Wait!" I sweetly said but loud enough for everyone to hear and

everyone stopped except for the Percy on the bottom and Artemis

"thats the real Percy" she said pointing at the one on the bottom.

Frank nodded and tied the top one up Percy pulled at the fake Percys

hair and it came off as a wig "how you doing Octavian I Perseus

Jackson here by strip you of your authority as Augury" Percy said he

held out his hand for his sword and held it over Octavian's head.

Percy was tackled to the ground by a Naiad and Leo said "hey your the

one who pulled me to underwater!" the Naiad smiled at Leo she pulled

out a dagger and held it over Percys head "I can help you with

reviving your lake!" Percy said quickly the Naiad put the dagger back

and said "you will Perseus Jackson come back after Rome and say 'Jill

come to the surface'" Percy nodded and said "call me Percy please."

The Naiad nodded and got off of Percy and walked back into the water

and before she went fully underwater she said "Percy Jackson nice to

meet you." Leo said "hey you have Annabeth let me have Jill!" Percy

nodded took the Riptide walked over to where Octavian was supposed to

be and Octavian was gone with Frank. Percy looked around for around

five hours for them and only found Franks quiver and arrows then

Percy disappeared for like an hour and Hazel said "don't worry he

will be back the gods are talking to him."
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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If you are confused you can tell me what your confused about so I can help you on that so you won't be as confused except the Percy and charm speaking that's the next chapter so yeah
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over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Please post soon!!!!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Jason

"Annabeth calm down they won't do anything bad to him!"

Piper said trying to calm the pacing Annabeth down "you

know for once I would like to not hear about Percy from

you when hes not here" Leo said. "What else should we

talk about?" Annabeth snapped at him "millions of things

like the weather or people?" Leo said Annabeth looked

disgusted at Leo "weather or people you know I am human"

a voice said behind Leo making jump. "Percy what did

they tell you?" Annabeth snapped at him "well hello to

you to" Percy exaggerated "what did they tell you"

Annabeth snapped at him again "they made me swear on

Styx not to tell you until you figured out" Percy said


taking a step away from her "thank the gods your here

Percy tell Annabeth to shut up" I said as I rolled his

eyes. "Calm down Annabeth this will only make him"

Apollo said as he walked in "him what risk his life?"

Percy and Apollo nodded their heads together "you are

not doing it then!" Annabeth said "you sound like my mom

Annabeth" Percy said "and not to mention Hera" Apollo

added. "Ugh" Annabeth yelled then cursed in greek Percy

walked out with Apollo saying that they needed to do

training with Poseidon and he fell asleep while Annabeth

kept pacing. He wanted a dreamless sleep but Gaea had a

different plan he saw Annabeth yelling out curses to

Gaea and trying to wake then she just fell to the ground

Gaea put hand on his shoulder and said "she will be

here in a second don't worry" I went for my sword but I

forgot that I put it on my nightstand. Annabeth appeared

right next to me and yelled at Gaea "why do you have to

do this now why not later?" "calm down girl I thought

you wanted to know what your boyfriend was doing during

the meeting" Gaea said peacefully. "Thats not for me to

know!" Annabeth yelled at Gaea "look at the screen if

you don't want to see what happened then how about now"

Gaea said pointing to the screen. They saw Percy being

pushed to his limit with fighting a merman "Triton I

said teach him his powers not to hurt him and push him

around" he heard Poseidon yell "come on dad I'm just

having fun with him and its not hurting him that much

you just like him more" Triton yelled turning around to

see his dad. A sword hilt hit him in the back "I came to

learn not play with a weakling" he heard Percy yell with

anger in his voice Triton shook with anger he threw his

spear at Percy aiming at Percys face the spear slowed

down but how was Percy doing that? "You see I could kill

Triton if you want Annabeth?" "no Percy would stop you

they are underwater if you tried Poseidon or Percy would

stop you" Annabeth sighed. Dirt flew up but the time

froze there and Percy walked over to Triton and sighed

as he pulled Triton out of the way of the dirt then the

time played again Annabeth gasped "how?" was the only

word out of his mouth "well when Percy defeated Kronos

he absorbed some of Kronoses power somehow Kronoses

power went through his scythe when Percy was scrapped on

the shoulder" Gaea said. Poseidon looked at Percy and

smiled and said "you saved him even though you don't

like him why?" Triton said "thank you but how did you do

it?" "well dad he seemed important to you and something

said I owed you one so there" Percy said seeming pleased

with himself "and Triton I don't know how I did it I

just wanted to stop it so I tried the water but it

stopped time instead.""Wow" Leo said I turned to look

and everyone of the seven and Thalia, Grover, and Geric

were staring at the screen "well you see Percy isn't

doing this because he wants to but they are forcing him

to I'll show you the meeting but not show you what they

are talking about" Gaea said. The screen changed to

Percy and the Gods and Goddesses "you will have to do it

if you want your friend back!" Zeus yelled "why me why

does this always happen to me!" Percy yelled "You are

going to and thats it" Zeus yelled again "no I don't

want to because if I go in-" Jason was shook awake by

Hera and so were the others "thank you" he said to Hera.

Percy walked in after they were all awake with a sweat

filled shirt with a towel swung over his shoulder "Percy

why didn't you tell me you got hit with Kronoses

scythe?" Percy glared at her and said "where did you

hear that from?" "Gaea now tell me why you didn't tell

me in the first place" "cause this would happen and I

hope you guys got sleep cause we got to go now" after

they were all cleaned up and ready to go Percy lead the

way to a Greek town. Every time they passed water he

thought he saw a human in the water and all of them

looked the exact same. Finally they stopped and Percy

told them were they were supposed to go and he fell

asleep but I laid awake not able to sleep and all the

sudden the ground shook and he looked over to the others

and Percy was sinking into the ground. "Annabeth" he

shoved Annabeth "Percy is sinking into the ground" she

sat up quickly and looked over to where Percy was only

to see a girl that looked like she was nine pulling

Percy up. "Come on" Annabeth and I got out of our

sleeping bags and went to help the girl "Tina" the girl

said "I'm Jason" I said "I'm Annabeth" Annabeth said.

Finally Percy woke up to see himself being pulled by

Tina, Annabeth, and me pulling on his legs and arms

Percy helped alot by pulling himself out. "Come on you

can sleep at my house" Tina said they got everyone up

and they all packed the walked deeper into the town and

they reached a big house that was totally white and its

neighbors were tiny to this one. A boy was standing at

the top of the stairs he spoke to Tina in Greek and she

said "Tony they don't speak Greek well actually these

guys speak it" she pointed to Percy, Annabeth, Geric,

Thalia, Piper, and Leo. "Are these the ones Tina" Tony

said then Tina shrugged Tony turned to Percy and said

"are you the ones in the great prophecy" Percy said

"yeah and you must be the ones the gods wanted me to

find" Tony shook his head. "Come on in" Tony said then

Percy walked up to Tony and handed him a paper Tony took

the paper and shoved it into his pocket Tony and Percy

said thing in Greek that he could not get Annabeth was

telling Hazel what they were saying. Tony showed them to

rooms he got a room and had to share with Geric, Grover,

and Leo Percy had to share with Tony and the others went

to Tina's room. He went to sleep on his plush bed as he

hit sleep he only had one dream and it was when Percy

was fighting Luke on a cruse ship but Luke had golden

eyes.
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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long chapter i know right its like two combined i just could not stop
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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oh poo i forgot to tell you how Percy and the charm speaking works srry i will totally tell u next time
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The Mark Of Athena
Jason

"Jason wake up!" he heard the muffled cries of his

friends "I'm up now what do you want?" instead of asking

Leo pulled Jason out of his nice warm and cozy bed to

see all the girls fighting down on the ground. Why were

they fighting he asked himself he looked to the other

railing to where Tony had seen the attack and went into

the room to tell Percy he looked back at the battle and

saw Annabeth fighting Will sword to dagger. Annabeth was

a professional but Will had an advantage on the ground

he scanned the battle there was no Octavian that is good

he thought he looked back over the railing and saw Percy

looking at the battle Percy looked him straight in the

eye. He knew what Percy was asking and he pointed to

where Annabeth was looking himself he saw Annabeth had

lost her dagger and Will had his sword tip under her

throat. "Come on out Percy" Will yelled threw the place

he looked where Percy was "Annabeth!" Percy yelled he

vaulted off the railing down to the floor causing the

marble to break underneath him how? he asked himself yet

another question. He looked closer to see Percy had a

hurricane under his feet that was growing every second

Percy walked up to the first row of monsters sword drawn

and sliced through all the monsters in his way some

monsters parted for Percy Will was to scared to move his

sword.

"You have a bigger challenge now Will" Percy said his

voice strong Wills face flashed scared but then he

grinned "Percy you are not a challenge your a piece of

cake" Will said his voice shaking slightly on the last

part. "Then why did I kill you the last time" Percy said

gaining an advantage then Will charged Percy blocked

with his sword pushing Will back Annabeth scurried out

of the way of the to furious sons of seas. Will didn't

get a position right in a second Percy gained the upper

hand in a second twisting Wills sword out of Wills hand

clang the sword hit the ground. Percys hurricane died

down but Percy held his sword under Wills hand "bravo,

bravo" came a new girls voice everyone looked from where

the voice came from. "Selina" Percys voice came softly

she dropped two figure at her sides "Percy three choices

come with us silently and we will leave these three here

we can take Annabeth or we can take these two" she said

"Selina-" Percy started "wait what I'm Tina daughter of

Aphrodite not Selina" Tina interrupted "who do you

have?" Percy asked her she lifted her hands Nico and

Geric dangled from them Percy made a loud taxi whistle

and said "well if it isn't those two" Percy laughed. One

dark figure ran from the shadows and trampled Tina

giving Nico and Geric time to get away he looked back to

Percy and Percy was immediately lifted into the air. A

black Pegasus was lifting Percy into the air Percy

whispered to the Pegasus and they dived towards Annabeth

at the last minute a cage of dirt surrounded Annabeth.

Percy stayed in the air "what do you want?" Percy whined

"its easy Percy even though you have that charm your dad

gave you to not listen to charm speakers that can't

protect you forever from me" Tina said "how do you know

about the charm" Percy snapped at her almost falling off

the Pegasus.

"Well its around your neck isn't it and since you can

disobey Piper doesn't mean you can disobey me" Tina said

in a soothing voice "what charm Percy?" Piper asked

"Tina I'd hate to break it to ya but that isn't the

charm this is" Percy pulled a string out of his pocket

at the end it had a pearl. "That can't be the charm

unless-" "this one was the old one" Percy finished for

her. "Its blessed with all the gods got it yesterday

before we left when I was training" Percy said smiling

Tina said "come down here" the urge was to overwhelming

and his body was disobeying him water rained down

blocking all the ways down "stop it Will let Annabeth

go!" Percys voice hit him and he stopped "Jason come

here" Percy said "drawl your sword." Jason did as he was

told standing by Percys side "Leo come here and drawl a

weapon" Tina's voice taunted him Percy tied something

around his neck "Jason you have the power to not listen

to charm speakers with this charm he felt the pearl on

his chest "Percy I can't take this is yours" he told

Percy "the old one" Percy said smiling "I got Leo you

get the others out of here. Leo go with Jason I'll go

with you" Percy said as he tried to get off the horse it

stopped him "boss if your going I'm going" the horse

said. "Aah" Jason said probably making himself look like

a fool "that horse just talked" I said Percy smiled

"meet Blackjack" "yo" the hose said as he pulled a hoof

back. Percy kicked the leg and Black jack said "ow hey

what was dat for" Percy rolled his eyes Leo said "are

you talking to that animal?" Blackjack replied "if your

talking about your self then yeah" Percy was cracking

up. "What?" Leo asked "what did he say?" "'if your

talking about yourself then yeah'" Percy told Leo. "Come

on guys we need to go" Hazel said urgently Percy yelled

at Tony in Greek and tony yelled back "hey I don't know

where to go!" Percy chucked a rock at his head and said

"use that." "Well I don't know how you can't let death

and dirty go instead" Blackjack said Percy kicked

Blackjack in the side "shut up Jason might hear you"

Percy said as they tied up his wrists and Will hopped on

the back and Blackjack said "you weigh as much as

Blondie" he started of to his friends as Black jack and

Will solved problems he looked at Percy and Percy was

saying "shut up both of you."
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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LOOK AT THIS DO NOT IGNORE PLEASE ANSWER FORGOT TO MENTION THIS CAKE! DO NOT IGNORE 9x4=36 HOW DID THAT GET THERE?

who do you think the second shadowy figure was
a Mrs
b Oleary
c Beckendorfs spirit
d Mrs Oleary
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over a year ago tortillialuvsrr said…
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D and I loved it!!!!!
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
D. I loved it but I'm a little confused. So Percy is letting himself be taken so everyone else goes free? I didn't get the last chapter at all. Sorry
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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yeah it was D I was eating cake and doing math homework
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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yeah well he was going with them to free some one there it will be in the next chapter and to tell you that person disappeared with stupid Octavian
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Frank

He wasn't sure how he could get out there wasn't a crack big enough

for a cat or a mouse in fact there was no cracks at all he got up and

scanned ever single centimeter of the smooth walls. Even at the bases

once he was done scanning the walls he started to pace he stopped in t

he middle as a cur chunk sound filled the silence that's how he

thought he waited until they opened it fully. Instead of him going

forward they threw a guy with black hair at him he was propelled back

and hit the wall with a thud "why did they throw you in here and get

off of me!" I yelled at the guy not seeing his features. "Wow your

grumpy today" the guy said he looked down to him the guy had sea

green eyes and long black hair that went in every direction "Percy!"

he said almost screaming. "Well I don't care!" a voice said coming

into the room Will stepped into the room "you!" he yelled at Will he

tried to charge but was blasted with dirt. "Do you want to trie me?"

Will asked Percy "no you'll be to boring" Percy replied Will

scrunched his fists and said "Gaea wants to keep you here till the

wars over you still have a chance to join just say 'I accept the

power of Gaea.'" Percy walked over to the bunk bed and laid on it

"Frank Octavian wants to see you thats why I had to be here" Will

said to him "not unless Octavian comes here or I go with him" Percy

said Will pushed Percy and grabbed me "open the door and get guards"

Will cried as Percy grabbed him and pulled him back the door opened

and two guards rushed in to get Percy and Will separated. "Go Frank


are you waiting for an invitation" Percy yelled water appeared

suddenly in mid air and Percy got energized and tangled Will with the

guards the guards got confused and yelled "more guards we need more

guards" five more guards rushed in and I helped them and tried to get

Will and Percy separate. I heard a snicker I looked up to see

Annabeth, Thalia, Geric, Tony, Tina, Jason, Hazel, Piper, Leo,

Grover, and Nico Piper punched Leo in the arm. Annabeth pointed to

Will and Percy and I went back to work and in a few seconds the elven

demigods were behind the guards Annabeth said "drop your weapons and

turn around slowly." "Apollo said he would send backup but I didn't

think it would be you" Percy said frowning Percy had Will in a head

lock "let go Percy" Will whined. Percy let Will go but the second

Will got up Percy pulled him down and ran to the exit "come on" he

called all of us ran out of the cell. Percy closed the door and

locking it behind himself and said to Hazel, Piper, Leo, Jason, and

me to go find a chariot that will fit all of us and that the rest of

them were going to find Blackjack.
over a year ago oceanlover123 said…
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Please please please type more...actually write more. I really love this awesome , terrific, terrifying story! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Frank

The five of us couldn't find anything a sports car drove

down form the sky and Apollo stepped out of it "who can

drive?" he asked us none of us said anything. Percy

appeared behind Apollo on a black Pegasus and said "I

can" Apollo said then hop on in the driver seat "I don't

mean to burst your bubble but that can only fit five

people there is eleven in this group" I said Apollo

clapped his hands twice and it turned into a big sleigh.

"Isn't that Artemis's thing" Percy said "yeah but shh"

Apollo whispered just then a sleigh pulled by reindeer

pulled down by Percy there was alot of girls with bows

at the front a twelve year old stepped out of the sleigh

and grew to about twenty and said "change it Apollo"

"Lady Diana" I said and bowed so did Hazel. Leo chuckled

I put an arrow in my bow and aimed it at his head

somehow Percy had taken my bow and arrows "hey!" I said

"no killing" he said "if I can't use my bow and arrows

then I'll use my bare hands" I said "Frank no do not do

that" He said in a calm voice. I couldn't disobey so I

stood there cursing in Latin at Leo "hop on in everyone"

Apollo said as he turned the chariot into a bus Percy

dismounted and told the horse to go to camp or follow.

Percy walked into the bus and was about to go to the

back but Apollo grabbed his arm and said "your driving"

nothing could hide the fact that he was scared "what I

was just kidding" he said "its okay where we need to go

is just over the city" Apollo said Thalia said "I go to

go with Artemis" and walked off the bus to the sleigh.

Apollo pushed Percy into the drivers seat and told him

what to do Percy lifted into the air and seemed to doing

fine they drove for about 30 minutes and reached a cave

"get out nice seeing you all" Apollo said. Everyone got

off the bus in a moment the bus was off Percy reached in

his pocket and pulled out a rock then the Riptide and

made it a sword and stepped into the cave "come on" he

told us we all were walking down into the cave when

Percy said "stop" Gaea's sleepy voice echoed throughout

the cave "Perseus Jackson how nice of you to join us we

fond three people out of your family you might want to

hurry." "Three Mom, Paul, and Poseidon no Tyson" Percy

mumbled to himself Percy picked up his pace and we all

ran after him "Percy hold on Tyson is at camp he can't

be here try Triton" Annabeth told Percy out of breath

"how do you know?" Percy asked her Annabeth said "oh I

don't know they are right there!" Annabeth pointed to a

rock wall Percy looked over to where she was pointing

and he yelled "Mom, Paul" Percy charged his body glowing

blue. He defeated every monster blocking his way "go

Percy! watch out!" Paul and his mom said at the same

time Will was sneaking up behind Percy water came out of

nowhere and made an orb around Will holding him Percy

ran over to the two hanging on the wall and untied them

"Percy!" his mom and Paul hugged him me and everyone

walked over to the reunited family. "Who are these

guys?" his mom asked Percy pointing to everyone except

Annabeth, Grover, and Thalia Percy introduced us all to

his parents "wait someones missing" Percy said standing

immediately "the fish man?" his mom asked. "Yeah Tritons

not here where did you put him Gaea?" Percy yelled down

the cave Gaea replied in a riddle

"down here the earth born can eat fish tail not needing

to fight

Will has the answer but you

need to take flight with two siblings of

Zeus, Poseidon, Gaea, and Hades

you will find them in front

of your eyes for my pawn is their leader"

Percy said "two siblings of Zeus, Poseidon, Gaea, and

Hades got it anything else."

"the sons of Mars and Hephaestus to settle their

differences

daughter of Athena lose something close to her heart the

daughter of Pluto to find it


daughter of Aphrodite helps the son of Poseidon come to
a decision

descendant of Neptune to lift the curse"


Gaea finished Percy was writing vastly on his hand "wait

how do you know this?" Percy asked her "oh if not for

the help of your oracle I wouldn't have been able to"

Gaea replied. "Rachel!" Percy yelped "Percy" Tina said

tugging on Percy "what?" Percy asked "what does mommy

mean?" she asked "she means WAIT MOMMY" Percy said "whos

your mom?" Percy asked Tony tony shook his head and said

"dad Hades" Nico said "yes."
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over a year ago blackNblue said…
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This story is awesome, but I think it will be easier to read if you turn it into paragraph form and not with double spaces. But anyway, it's really nice! Merry Christmas!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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I will try oh and I forgot to mention Percy keeps Will in the orb of water

The Mark Of Athena
Hazel

"Okay so we got two Hades, Gaea, and Thalia left with Artemis so anyone have an idea what to do" Percy said "how about make sure that Thalia isn't behind you" a voice that belonged to a girl said "and there she is!" Percy exclaimed. "I hope you needed back up cause I brought the hunters" Thalia said "yeah we did" "great" Percy stood up and said to the cave wall "oh Iris goddess accept my offering and show me the gods on mount Olympus" Percy flipped a coin at the wall and the gods "well hes a threat!" Zeus boomed "yes hes a threat to your thrown!" Poseidon boomed back Apollo saw the message and covered it with his back "he will give the others strength like no other we have to kill him!" Zeus ordered h"hey ya know watch your mouth Zeus" Percy yelled at the message Apollo started to chuckle.
"Perseus Jackson what in the world are you doing?" Zeus asked "I'm saving your world and you plan to kill me nice thanks" Percy joked some of the gods smiled holding back a laugh "yes he saved your world from being destroyed you should not kill him" Thalia backed Percy up "all in order of killing him?" Zeus said to the gods only Zeus, Ares, and Hades raised their hands. "All in favor of not" every other god raised their hands "you can not mess with the fates Zeus" Gaea rumbled behind them "I was going to tell you something but now shes listening" Percy said. "Fall into my trap my little pawn the gods might come to save you then they all will-" "not listening cause then your gonna give us a lecture about how were gonna die" Percy finished for Gaea. Percy started to walk down the cave we all followed Percy slowed his stride and started to walk down by me and Frank.
"Hazel I think you should start to look at the prophecy and not" Percy said indicating Sammy "I know but" I said leaning to Percy "I think Franks jealous so can you talk to him he won't talk to me with Sammy around." Percy nodded and veered over to Frank, Tony, and Nico Will walked up to her and asked "whats up?" "why are you here?" Will nodded to Percy and the hunters "they won't let me go" "why don't you just go into the ground?" "Geric is blocking me to go to Gaea with extra help" "oh" "yeah did you understand what the gods were talking about and who?" Will asked "they were talking about killing Percy" a hunter said with a dreamy look at Percy Annabeth saw it and glared at her until the hunter looked down. "You like Percy?" I asked her when I was out of hearing range of Annabeth "no I just like the thought of killing him all of us do except Thalia who says hes my friend." "Well you didn't look like you wanted to kill him" Will said the girl had a knife at his neck in seconds Will held his hands up in defeat "Phoebe put your knife down" Percy called out "no we should not be apart of this Phoebe snapped at Percy. Percy snapped his fingers and Phoebe froze in the middle of her sentence Percy casually walked over to them pulled Phoebes knife from her hand and pulled Will away the hunters aimed at Percy with their bows and some took out their knifes even Thalia did it.
"Percy put Phoebe out of the trance and give her her knife or we will kill you both" Thalia said with pain in her voice like she didn't want to "try me" was the only two word Percy spoke the hunters released their arrows and ran to him to slice only to find all of the things they did slowed down within ten feet of him and water swished around him. "Stop!" Thalia yelled at the hunters "they won't hit him he has a force around him" all the hunters put up their bows and knives "no more of that will take place" Percy said unfreezing Phoebe who looked shocked.
Percy placed a hand on her back and lead her forward then went between the demigods and hunters. The hunters started to aim at random rocks and one of Percys waves would send it back to the hunter sharpened they walked for miles Hazel kept repeating the line that energized her descendant of Neptune to lift the curse her curse was going to be lifted waves started to wash around her feet. "Wow bonus" Leo said bending to pick something up but a wave pulled him back and grabbed the jewel "thanks Leo" Percy said smiling. Alot of water was building up around Percys feet "how are you doing that?" I asked him "this pulling water out of the air, rocks, sweat, and the ground" Percy replied. "Hazel!" Frank called just as she fell off a cliff only to be pushed up by the air and water Frank hauled her up when he could reach her and hugged her. Percy looked over the cliff that she just fell off and jumped "Percy!" Leo, Jason, and Piper called after him "come on someone push Will. I helped Frank grab Will we pushed him as Annabeth jumped.
Jason ran up to us and asked "what are they doing?" a splash came from below "come on its fun" Annabeth called up "you guys are wimps I thought you like to have fun" Percy called "lets jump with" Jason indicated Piper and Leo he looked at Thalia and smiled towards Piper and Leo. She nodded "get them near the edge and me and Hazel will push em" Frank said Geric, Tina, Nico, and Tony were by the edge and Nico jumped and the others followed all that were left were Leo, Jason, the hunters, Piper, Frank, and me. Jason got Piper and Leo close to the edge he put his hands behind his back and put one finger down then a second and third and all the hunters, Frank, and I charged the three once we were free falling Thalia closed her eyes and started to freak out and they all stopped falling for a few minutes.
Percy was fighting sea monsters and strangling them he looked at them and brought the hunters towards him and yelled at the top of his lungs "shoot its eyes and mouth!" the hunters brought out their bows and arrows the monster dived with Percy on its back they all pulled out their weapons. She stepped in the water and almost fell but Frank got her the hunters were still floating and Percy surfaced and took a deep breath and froze the monster except for its head which was swinging back and forth wildly the hunters tried to shoot at the eyes and mouth. "We can't shoot it its to wild" Thalia shouted to Percy he had drawl his sword and started to walk up the head and every step he took froze it even more she looked closer to the monster and noticed it was a sea serpent "Percy its a sea serpent it eats people and demigods" I shouted he shook his head once went past the eyes and into the mouth the serpent broke the ice and swallowed Percy whole.
Suddenly a light emerged from Annabeth and hit the serpent she held out her hand and blasted the serpent Annabeth walked out and floated above the water and started. Annabeth started to walk to the serpent and it back off Annabeth started to glow then so did the serpent but it was glowing green the serpent blew apart Hazel saw a flash of black dropping. She dived before Frank or anyone could grab her and chased the black item she couldn't hold her breath anymore but she had to get the item or person but it wasn't just one it was millions.
There was so many people she couldn't count she started to glow green and she could breath underwater she went further people started to float to the top but none had black hair. She saw what she was going for it was Percy.
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
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Merry Christmas! Happy holidays! Amazing chapters, poor Percy, always does heroics then is almost killed... Percy is so powerfulmits ridiculous. Great job!
over a year ago necikk said…
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great story! i really really love it! please post again soon... just thought you'd like to know
the story is just a little hard to understand so if you could i'd really appreciate it if next chapter you'd try to write a bit more clearly, happy holidays!! again love the story
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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ok ill try
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The Mark Of Athena
Hazel

Percy looked perfectly fine she reached him for some reason he hadn't floated to the surface she wrapped her arm around his shoulders and started to kick her feet propelling up to the surface. The ice cold water hit her as she surfaced Frank, Annabeth, Nico, Geric, and Thalia stepped in to help once they were out of the water Frank had gathered up blankets and had given them to her with some dry clothes from her pack. "You scared me half to death when you jumped I myself was about to jump in" Frank said with a worrying look on his face Leo walked up and asked "how are ya doin?" I looked at him Frank still was warming me up by holding me "I'm okay" I replied. He sat down and Percy came over with Annabeth on his tail "hey Hazel I wanted to thank you for saving me yeah and what did he tell you about why he came over here" Percy said pointing to Leo "that he wanted to make sure Hazel was okay?" Frank said "your scared of the truth aren't ya?" Percy asked Leo smiling Leo shook his head "what happened?" Frank eagerly asked Percy "he was threatened by Phoebe" Percy said. "I don't blame her he was hitting on her" Annabeth said "but she deserved being frozen in time you should have made her stay there forever." Annabeth looked back at Phoebe "Annabeth stop if she likes me I don't like her I love you" Percy said shaking her shoulder she wished it was that easy for her not to have a curse and love without fault.
That night her and Frank were on first watch Frank kept asking her questions about Leo and Sammy like what is Leos fear? when Percy finally woke up and Frank hadn't noticed and asked "do you think Percys stunt today was to protect us or impress girls?" Percy raised an eyebrow she couldn't hold a laugh broke out laughing Percy was smiling and pointed over to the water then Frank then the water. "Frank your starting to be overprotective" I told Frank laughing "am not" he protested "are to" I said "am not" "are to" Percy joined in "am oh no" Frank said his expression looking scared. "Yeah if Annabeth heard you say that I'm would be dead meat and your going down with me" Percy said a hunter stirred Percy looked alert and the hunter got up and ran towards Annabeth Percy tackled the hunter they both started to wrestle and the other hunters woke up and started to pull Percy of when he got the upper hand and pushed the first hunter into the others. Frank and me were L=laughing so loud e got hit with a pillow from Nico who started to crack up to the hunters and Percy were wrestling and then Nico, Tony, Geric, Jason, Frank, and Leo went to help Percy who was doing a great job holding them off but they had cornered Percy to the rock wall.
Everyone was awake finally and even Will helped the guys it was boys vs girls Thalia and Annabeth and most of the hunters were on Percy I was wrestling with Frank, Piper was up against Jason, and Tina was up against Tony who was losing. They all three had won I asked "what do we do with them?" "off you go" a voice called at them and Percy had floated up in the air with water and all the girls against him rammed into me, Piper, and Tina. Annabeth had stopped before and Percy put his foot down and Annabeth tackled him he did a flip and made her let go "take a water break" Percy said and a huge wave went over their heads and Percy threw Annabeth in before he made the wave fall dirt covered them blocking the water. When the water cleared away all the boys had their weapons drawn except Percy Annabeth pulled out his sword and uncapped the pen and started to fight the boys off with it. "Thats where it went" Percy said making the water make a sword and he started on Annabeth they locked sword again and again Frank saw I was distracted and charged and put his weapon back she dodged and he fell I jumped on him and we started to wrestle again I sat on him this time winning. Then Piper won and Tina "throw the in the lake and Jason push him in" Thalia yelled she pushed Frank cause she couldn't pick him up and Tina was having problems. Nico had joined the fight over there and she yelled "go help them I got this" I ran over to the circle where Percy was getting into and started to help we all got pushed back with water as he floated up a whirlwind surrounded him. He got faster and stronger every once in a while a hunter got pushed into the water Thalia put her shield on but it didn't effect Percy who was fighting with Annabeth with daggers. He got Thalia's dagger from her belt and started to fight with two by the time the whirlwind stopped all the boys had been dumped in the lake and were cheering Percy on and half the girls had been dumped in the water to and were cheering on the hunters, Annabeth, and me. Percy had a missed a step and Thalia pushed him he lost his balance and fell the girls lifted him and threw him to the water "oh wait his powers" I said remembering Percy could float.
Just before he hit the water he stopped "that was close" he said grinning he went out to the middle of the lake and said calmly "come get me girls." She felt it hard to disobey and almost stepped into the water with the others but Piper said nicely "stop hes charm speaking you" "no I'm not I gave my charm to Jason" Percy calmly said "yeah come to think of it I saw it around Jason's neck" Thalia said. "How do we get him then?" a hunter asked "bows and arrows no rocks" Annabeth said Percy fell about a foot just above the water "try it" Percy said giving a little smile.
A hunter picked up a rock and threw it would have hit Percy in the head but the water reached up and swallowed the rock "oops" Percy said "how did that happen." The girl launched herself at Percy and the water swallowed her to she came up for a breath there was only five girls left two of those jumped at the same time the top jumping off the back of the bottom "what are you doing Phoebe getting wet" Percy said noticing the girl on the top but acting like he didn't and walked to where Phoebe got wet. I picked up a jewel that appeared at my feet and whispered to Thalia "get ready and jump when I throw this at Percy I walked into the ice cold water and said "I surrender" Percy looked at her for a second then back to Thalia and Annabeth I threw the diamond at his face "WHAT ARE YOU DOING TRYING TO KILL ME HAZEL!" he yelled at me "Percy look out!" Frank pointed out. Percy looked up at Thalia who was about to tackle him but he ran forward and she hit the water Percy walked over to where she was coming up he said "I win" she and Annabeth who had swum under him grabbed him and pulled him in. Annabeth kissed him while Thalia and me hugged him in the cold water but they only hugged him for warmth. He walked out of the water with all three around him Frank gave me a towel and hugged me I leaned into his warm chest.
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The Mark Of Athena
Leo

Percy walked out of the water perfectly fine while the three girls were staying near him in the water and when they stepped out the girls veered away from Percy except for Annabeth who started to make out with Percy. Thalia walked over to Jason and me we wrapped her in blankets and the hunters came over and I scooted towards Jason and his sister away from Phoebe who was sharpening her knife on a bone. After Thalia was warm Hazel walked over with Frank "hey" she said "are the love birds done yet?" Thalia asked her she said "not yet" I said "well at least they know nothing is wrong" all the hunters glared at me except Thalia. Then all the sudden they all looked away "thats what I thought" Percy said coming from behind Leo glaring at each hunter Phoebe was still glaring at me. Percy looked over and Phoebe started to curse at him "don't do that unless you want to take a dip in the water Phoebe" the hunter to her right said to her "or get frozen" said the one to the left. "Were going now with or without you Phoebe" Percy said her name with distaste "pack up your things everyone now we will be leaving in ten minutes."
"Percy are you okay?" Thalia asked "and wheres Annabeth?" "I'm fine and she is packing leave her alone" "I'm going to go check" Thalia said "I'll go with you" Percy said putting a hand on her back "can I go to?" I asked "sure" Percy said I walked to Thalia's side and she whispered to me "watch out somethings wrong Percy isn't like this."
They reached Annabeth and Percys tent and Percy went in first then me and Thalia entered together and Percy was tied up in the corner and knocked out and Annabeth was trying to wake him up. Thalia pulled out her knife and aimed it at the Percy who wasn't tied up "run" she said to me I ran but as soon as I got out monsters were on to me I ran as fast as my feet would carry me shooting flames at monsters who were behind me he shot a flame at the ceiling of the cave and it made a popping noise. He heard everyone starting to run towards me an empusae caught me and put a dagger to my neck and pulled me behind a tent a venti changed into my form and said in my exact voice "sorry I thought I saw a monster."
The hunters started to curse at the venti Geric calmly walked around the tent and the empusae pulled me in the tent and hid me on but behind a ice box. She hid back with me Nico walked in the tent with Geric, Tony, and Tina I set the ice box next to him on fire "go get Percy" I heard Nico tell some one and then foot steps Nico appeared above the empusae and sliced at her with his sword but she blocked with her dagger she pulled out another one and put it under my chin "I will kill him" she told Nico "lower your sword son of Hades and he may live." Nico put his sword down "good now tell your friend to come along silently and give me your weapons" she told him Nico smiled and said something like "your soul belongs to me" in Greek. "Nice try but that dosen't work on-" "he told you to bring them to him did he not" a voice interrupted her "sorry" she said and pushed him and Nico down to meet the fake me.
He grabbed the back of Nico's and my shirt and dragged us out the back I tried to get to my feet but it didn't work out for me "stop it your breaking my concentration" Nico said "concentration of ahhhh!" I screamed as a skeleton warrior appeared in front of me the venti that acted like me hit Nico's head against a tree knocking him out and swinging me and my feet hit the skeleton and it turned to dust. We finally reached the Percy and Annabeths tent and the venti threw me on the ground then Nico on top of me then the others on top. "Ooof" I said as the last unconscious body on the fake Percy tied them up one by one taking his time when he got to me he pulled me along to the lake and dunked me under tying me up in the ice cold water then pulled my num body out. He threw me at the pile of groaning demigods Percy had awaken and whispered "someone untie my hands" but it was to loud and fake Percy walked over to the pile and picked up Percy by the shirt someone had already untied Percys hand and Percy said "sianara sucker" and punched fake Percys face and it turned into a venti Percy pulled out the Riptide and sliced at the venti but an empusae blocked it with her dagger. Percy was shot back with lightning from the venti Percy was dazed for a moment and the venti changed form into Percy again.
The venti pulled out rope and tackled Percy, Percy was tied and then gagged and hit with a dagger hilt on the head they threw him on us and whispered to the empusae "I'll be back but make sure the girl doesn't untie him." The empusae laughed and pulled Annabeth from the pile a wave smashed into the tent "stop it Poseidon or your child will be killed" she said to the wave "I'm not Poseidon" a voice called "I was wondering when you guys would be here" Will stepped out of the bushes.
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The Mark Of Athena
Leo

"Will I thought you said 'I didn't have a choice she would have killed you' to Percy you lair" I managed to say "your right it was all lies I lied to Percy and defiantly to the gods all of it was so I could have my family back" Will said walking over to the pile and pulling me up. "Will I am your family and so are the Romans and Greeks" "I mean my real family my mom,-" Will up said on the verge of tears "I know what you mean Will I know where your family is" Nico said "your mom died two years ago because of a car accident and your brother and sister I will show you if you untie me." Will picked out Nico and reached for his hands "wait sir um Dillon wants to keep them tied up" the empusae said rocking on her feet "he will be fine" Will said untying Nico's hands Nico turned around quickly and fastened his hands tightly around Will's neck "they are all dead Percy and Neptune or Poseidon are your only family left your brother and sister paid the price for you twice and this is your third strike" Nico said. Will started to turn blue and the venti entered to see Will being choked the venti shot lightning at Nico when it hit him it sent him flying back Will gasped and breathed hard.
Nico smiled and laughed "they are dead now and they will go to the fields of-" Nico said "gag all of them except Annabeth" I was gagged and thrown back into the pile Percy's hands were under mine and I could burn his ropes I thought. Percy must have noticed he was on him so he drew the water from my hands and kept it on his wrists I heated then waited till it cooled then heated it again finally after five times of doing that it was broke Percy slowly pulled his hands to his feet and untied them.
Percy started to head for the tent flap the guards and Will had fallen asleep Percy opened the flap the guards woke up and Percy ran and they jotted out to.
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Very short chapter but had to stop cause it was like 12 am so yeah I'm writting right now on the computer I'm doing this on my kindle fire I got on chritmas
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The Mark Of Athena
Percy

He got out of the tent only to run right into Jason "hey Percy I-" "run" I said to him pulling him along "why?" he asked "monsters impersonating everyone who sees me and the venti thats me and their after me" I replied. "What Percy?" Jason said "monsters" he said they finally got to the camp fire "they are all asleep you said 'change of plans get a good nights rest and we will go in the morning'" Jason told me. I looked back and there was millions of figures running towards us "change of plans now you go wake everyone up while I play with monsters" I told Jason pushing him towards where the remaining seven slept. I took out the Riptide and ran towards the monsters and killed a whole lot before any help came the finale monster was a hydra "got it go for its body" I yelled and charged.
I hit the monster on the left foot it hissed in pain I jumped on the monsters back and stabbed the Riptide through its heart it screamed in pain now and the sleeping hunters came out of their tents unhappily. "Percy how dare you show your face around me" Phoebe said walking up to me with a dagger in her hand Jason walked over to my side "yeah what did I do?" I asked her "what do you mean what did you do you glared at me and told me what to do" Phoebe replied. "I didn't do that it as monsters tell them Jason" I said "actually I think hes telling the truth Phoebe but I didn't see them he sounded like it was the truth" Jason said "not you to Jason" Phoebe complained "I'll prove it wheres Thalia?" I said to Phoebe "she is in her tent leave her alone" she said putting her dagger under my neck and pushing me away from Thalia's tent. "Fine you go check in on her and bring her out here" I said pushing the dagger away from my neck Phoebe walked over to Thalia's tent and went in then came out a few minutes later without Thalia "shes not there" she said. "Where is she? Percy or not your showing us where our leader is" Phoebe said nocking her bow with an arrow "take his weapon just in case and nock your bows with a arrow" Phoebe said.
A hunter walked up to me I grabbed her hand and pushed the Riptides hilt into it she walked off and the hunters had formed a barrier separating me from Jason, Frank, Hazel, and Piper. All the bows were aimed at my head "walk" Phoebe commanded me I started to walk towards Annabeths and my tent I stepped into the tent and Phoebe pulled out her dagger and put the cold imperial gold blade against the left side of my back. "You did a good job Percy but not good enough Phoebe" Will said from the corner I felt Phoebe change "nice to have a son of Poseidon on the other end of my dagger" a voice said behind me that sounded like someone I knew as a monster "Kelly good job of getting him back here without any weapons" Will smiled a cold smile. "Help!" I yelled out the tent and Kelly covered my mouth with her hand "Percy shut up I'll make it quick for you" she said loud enough for them to hear in Phoebes voice "shut up you son of Poseidon I wish I could kill you but my master won't let me she says ' let him live he has a part to play'" she whispered in my ear.
She pushed me hard to the ground and put the dagger back onto my back "but it won't hurt for a drop of-" she started "Kelly you know what Gaea said 'not a centimeter wasted until she sees him" Will said. Annabeth must have been holding her breath because she sighed with relief "fine" Kelly angrily said pulling the dagger away Will walked over to me and started to tie my hands but was tackled by a dog who I assumed was Frank. I got up quickly heading over to the pile I had started to untie Leo I got through the his hands and was going to Nico's hands when an earth born popped out of the ground. "Protect Percy" Geric said I looked over to him and Leo had burned through his gag I looked behind me and Kelly had a dagger raised at me the earth born blocked her I went back to Nico's hands the earth born had been reduced to dust and Kelly had her dagger against Annabeths neck.
I focused on Kelley's eyes a pain hit my gut and I entered her thoughts I made lower her dagger a bead of sweat go down the side of my face. "Percy don't give up you can do it" Thalia put her hand on my shoulder "this is what I saw that night" I said remembering the night I saw Annabeth and Thalia for the first time in eight months me and Thalia were sitting under a tree and I had a vision for the first time. "You have had millions since then Percy its okay" Thalia said "let go of it" Annabeth had scurried over to me and Thalia I let the pain flow into Kelly it was like letting a million pounds off my shoulders Kelly fell to the ground wailing in pain I picked up her dagger and walked over to her and brought the knife down on her head.
Will stood in the corner of the tent surrounded by Leo, Nico, Geric, and the dog who changed shape to Frank I stood up and immediately felt drowsy. Will grinned "it works" he said "what did you do?" Annabeth ferociously asked him Thalia raced to my side and supported me "that's good don't worry he will obey Gaea now" Will said smiling "what no I won't" I said "Percy just is weak from his powers right now" Thalia said "come on Percy lets get you to the water." Thalia and Annabeth helped me walk to the water I put my hands in the ice cold tingling water I cupped some in my hands and put my mouth to the surface of the water in my hands and drank it I stood up and dived into the refreshing water power surged through every part of my body.
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The Mark Of Athena
Percy

He lifted his arms and the water copied his commands following his every move making fists and raising nothing can stop me now I thought to myself smiling with his progress he said "bring Will forward " all of the people by the lake shuffled. "Found him " I heard Phoebe yell from the gathering crowd Will was shoved forward "now Percy this will hurt the more you struggle the more it will hurt the less you struggle the less it less it will hurt so just don't try to struggle "
a voice said the earth rumbled around Will and swallowed him. The water started to drie out and I couldn't feel any around me "Gaea is taking the water " I mumbled to myself "Percy come here " Thalia urgently said the water around me started to melt into the ground then wails coursed through the cave. "Jason!" Thalia screamed as the earth started to surround her feet the ground around me started to wrap around me I frantically searched for water I met Annabeths eye "shes taking the demigods of the big three and hers" she said to me. "Go to the doors of death at the end of the cave use this to close them with this" I told her taking the charm the gods gave me just as the earth swallowed my other arm I threw the charm to her and she caught it "but Percy how do I use it?" "the answer is in you well thats what the gods told me stupid riddles" I told her thinking of the millions of thing that it meant. The dirt was climbing up to my head as I looked at the golden hair in a ponytail and her stormy gray eyes I just noticed the hunters were holding her back she is trying to help me I thought. Annabeth yelled "let me go!"
I met her eyes and suddenly a vision popped in my head and Annabeth was with me I tried to say something but I couldn't I looked ahead instead a vision I thought a vision is this what you told Thalia about Annabeth said in my head. Well no but yeah I thought she didn't say anything but she must have thought I couldn't hear her thoughts because the next thought she had was oh hes so cute I just don't want to lose to that stupid Reyna girl I smiled but he dumb to Gaea told me he was going to join her side once he knows what shes offering Annabeth continued. Hey I mean I know I'm dumb but not enough to where I cant be rude I thought you heard that now I feel dumb she said through her mind we didn't say anything as (vision)Annabeth, Piper, Leo, Frank, and hunters made their way a big set of double doors that were black had spirits roaming by and letters in Greek that unscrambled to say DOORS OF DEATH. (vision)Annabeth held up the charm I threw at her second ago up into the air and the door and the charm were like magnets she let go of the charm. The doors opened to find a bruised, cut, and weak Thalia and Jason with Will standing above the them with the Riptide in his hand holding it next to their head. A dirt figure rose out of the ground "Gaea" Annabeth snapped "what happened to the fight did you want to give up" "no I thought how kind it would be to give you a message" Gaea said "and if you want a fight I can give you one." "What is the message?" (vision)Annabeth asked "okay sweetie-" Gaea started "don't call me that" (vision) Annabeth said "fine Annabeth you will find the one you desire farther in the cave" Gaea finished then vanished millions of soldiers popped up Annabeth pulled out her dagger and charged.
I was pulled out of the vision to find Will tying me up a weird tug in my gut water I thought a blast hit Will "ah!" Will screamed surprised I looked around and found Nico, Thalia, Geric, Tony, Tina, Hazel, and Jason smiling but they were tied up to. A cyclopes poked his head in and asked Will "do you need any help?" "that would be ah!" Will started but got hit again by the water "nice" Will finished "which one?" the cyclopes asked "Poseidon's son Perseus Jackson" Will told the cyclopes. "Okay hold still" the cyclopes told me as it raised its club aiming at my head he swung and I jumped out of the way "are you crazy?" I asked "no" it replied a few laughs went around the room "it was a rhetorical question you idiot" Will said "oh" the cyclopes said. He aimed at my head three times and missed all three times because I wouldn't stay Will kept trying to block me from jumping each time they finally got me cornered and the cyclopes raised his club and aimed "you know you should have had him tied up by now Gaea wants to see him so get him tied up and lets go and no knocking him out" a voice I heard before "Octavian" I growled. I rolled under the cyclopes and ran to find Octavian at the doorway with two empusae at his sides "do you two need help?" Octavian asked Will "yeah" Will said Octavian waved his hand and the empusae came running at me they both grabbed each of my arms and each had sharp nails and teeth. I tried to get them off but they strengthened their grips and sank their nails into my forearms I managed not to scream in pain. Octavian walked up picking up the ropes that Will had tried to tie me up with. Octavian took his time unraveling the ropes and talking "your going to die when I get my hands on you" I said under my breath as he tied my hands up "what was that?" he asked "your going to die when I get my hands on you" I repeated louder for him.
He pulled the knot behind my back tighter I winced in pain he pulled me up and pushed me forward "check his pockets for his weapon" he told the empusae. They checked everyone of my pockets and found the Riptide and thought it was a normal pen and put it back "that was his weapon" Will said as they put it back "its a pen a pen sir whats he going to do drawl us to death" an empusae said Octavian pulled off the cap and it grew into the sword the sword I used for alot of years now. The empusae stared at the sword in wonder and Will grabbed it and put it in his sword case Octavian pushed me towards a door the door opened as we walked in it was and Parthenon Annabeths favorite Greek building. In the middle stood a hooded figure but she wasn't made out of dirt "so this is the great Percy Jackson I'm Maya daughter of Hecate" the girl said.
Maya didn't pull her hood off she just told me her story while monsters and demigods sat in seats I noticed they brought Thalia, Geric, Tony, Nico, Jason, Tina, and Hazel were sitting on the first row. Maya was pulling out a mud bowl that had Greek and Roman symbols that I couldn't read and a golden dagger Octavian pulled me up untied my hands and put them over the bowl and said "you move and I will sacrifice you whole." I kept my hands their because I felt Octavian put a blade against my back and some dirt wrapped around my feet and was crawling up my body and out to my arms. Maya put rocks in my hands and Octavian handed the blade off to an empusae Maya "Will come on" Maya said she removed the rocks and held up the dagger and sliced slits in my hands "what are you doing?" I asked with pain in my voice. "This may hurt Percy and I mean alot" Maya said with concern in her voice "before I do this let me ask do any of you want to see the future?" Maya asked Thalia and the others. "Lets show them so if we win the war they will change now" Will said all of them got pulled up and put in a circle Maya situated everyone in the circle and walked over to me and looked at my hands she put a clear liquid on them all the blood ran off my hands and into the bowl. An excruciating pain hit me I wailed in pain "sorry Percy Gaea wants to know what happens” she cut the rocks on the surface and they dripped a liquid she put them on my hands.
I started to feel tired she quickly went to her position and I had a vision with everyone who was in the circle. "Okay Percy think of something in your past lets start with that" Maya said I thought of when I was claimed at the capture the flag game I had been fighting against Clarisse charged yelling "cream the punk" her spear the barbed metal tip with her five other siblings. We were fighting and they surrounded me hitting me with their swords "I like this one" Octavian said smiling. "Oh, wow" Clarisse said "I'm scared of this guy. Really scared." "The flag is that way" (vision)Percy said "Yeah" one of the siblings said "but see, we don't care about the flag. We care about a guy who made our cabin look stupid." "You do that without my help." (vision) Percy said that made the others laugh except Octavian "go forward to the part you want us to see Percy" Maya said with humor in her voice. I went forward to where I saw the hell hound it red eyes as big as a rhino leap at me and start to tear at my armor everyone gasped arrows sprouted from its neck I was badly cut Annabeth said "Di immortales! That's a hell hound from the Fields of Punishment. They don't...they're not suppose to..." Chirion looked
at (vision)Percy concerned "hold on Percy get in the water" Annabeth said to (vision)Percy. Annabeth put Percy in the water and the cuts healed immediately a trident appeared over (vision)Percys head "okay Percy now think of another thing from your past" Maya told me I thought of the Minotaur attack on Will and Geric. I looked over to Will who was holding back tears "Percy please change it" Will said his head dropping "you deserve it I saved your life around-" I started "change it Percy now!" Octavian interrupted "how do you do future Maya we might want to get down to business" Octavian said "who will win the war Gaea or Gods?" Maya asked instead of showing that it showed me and Octavian in battle "what question did you ask Percy?" Maya asked me "who will win Octavian or me? I want to show Octavian his death" I sneered at Octavian. But when I disarmed Octavian in the vision and Will met my sword. A excruciating pain hit my stomach alot of my blood came onto my shirt as we were pulled out of the vision I looked at my stomach and an arrow sprouted from it. I looked to the fields on the side of the Parthenon I saw a flash of blond hair in a pony tail Annabeth I thought. Thalia was the fist to my side she said "hold on Percy this may hurt" she put a hand on my chest and then one on the arrow she pulled the arrow out as I screamed in pain.
Thalia covered my wound with her hands Maya came over with bandages the monsters formed a defensive form around us everyone who was in the circle was helping even Octavian was. "What happened?" I asked Maya "oh well someone must have known what we were doing and shot the power source which is you and the vision stopped" she told me. The world started to spin faster and faster "stay awake for a little longer Percy a few more minutes" Maya said she said something in ancient Greek that sounded like a spell the world stopped spinning immediately. An empusae brought a wriggling girl that looked around 16 "May!" Tony yelled to the girl she had brown hair and bright green eyes "we found the one who shot the arrow at the son of the seas" the empusae said to Octavian he walked up to the wriggling girl and said "you will be killed for what you did to Praetor Jackson." "Octavian thats not the one who shot the arrow" I said firmly sitting up with Thalia's support "Praetor Jackson what are you talking about?" Octavian asked like he was good. "The one that shot" I said stopping so I could stand "is with hunters, Frank,Piper, and Leo she has blond hair and is my girlfriend whats her name Octavian" "Annabeth shot you Praetor then why is she here?" he asked. I towered over Octavian by about four inches "wheres her bow, blond hair, and her ponytail?" I asked him making my point Octavian said "put her with the others" he looked at me and sneered "you have no power over me here Jackson."
Thalia stood behind me putting a hand on my back "and neither do you huntress" he sneered at her "and you won't talk to her like that" I snapped at him he backed down "say your sorry Octavian or say your good bye to your life Octavian I have more power in Greece." "Sorry" Octavian said "sorry you had to live with this guy for more than a second" Thalia pulled her hand off my back and punched Octavian so hard he fell to the ground. "I'm sorry that I had to meet you cause Percy is my best friend" Thalia said before knocking him out my vision started to spin again and I almost fell face first into the ground if it weren't for Thalia. We all were walking back to the place where they kept us captive as the whole world around me blacked out and I saw the sea and a guy fishing "dad?" I asked him "sorry Percy but I just finished something for your sword and couldn't wait to give it to you can I see the Riptide?" he asked "they took it" "oh check your pockets Percy it returned already" I felt in my pocket and he was right the riptide had returned I handed it over and he did something and after he was done he gave it back to me. "Now it will change to a sword when your thinking sword and open the cap and it will change to any other weapon just do the same thing but think of that weapon" he said "and the other gods want to give you some thing to." With a wave of his hand I went to meeting with the other gods.
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The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

I can't believe what happened when I shot the arrow I was aiming for the empusae that was holding the dagger up to his back and what was weird was that Percy's eyes were glowing green, gold, and brown. She decided she was going to take lessons how to shoot a bow because I accidentally in the stomach at least it wasn't going to kill him I saw everyone rushing to help him but I think he saw me cause he looked over to where I was and smiled. I saw an empusae found a girl that had brown hair and green eyes the girl saw me and I started to aim at the empusae and the girl mouthed 'no I will tell him' I lowered my bow Phoebe who was in the tree jumped down after the empusae and the girl disappeared. "We have to go" Phoebe said putting a hand on my shoulder I looked over to where Percy was pushing Octavian away from the girl I smiled Phoebe led me back to the crack that we came out of. I climbed through the crack and once I was through fully me and Phoebe were tackled with questions Frank asked "is Hazel okay? and Percy? and what happened?" "I'll tell them" Phoebe said "tell us what?" Frank asked curiously.
"For things unknown Percy's eyes were glowing" Phoebe started "they weren't just glowing he was having a vision" I said remembering the vision he showed me. Everyone looked like I was crazy "wait Annabeth what do you mean?" Piper asked "they all were in the vision that's why his eyes were glowing we need to go no time to waste!" she said realizing the truth. She started to run " Annabeth I'm not moving until I find out what your talking about" Phoebe said "fine Percy can see the future because he defeated Kronos Percy absorbed some power from him got it lets go the longer they have him the more they know!" this time everyone ran I was running blindly and came to a a set of doors that had Greek on them it said DOORS OF DEATH "Thalia and Jason are behind this door get your weapons ready Will is going to be here to" she commanded.
Everyone did as they were told I grabbed the charm Percy threw at me the day he was taken and lifted it to the door it was magnetized and I let go only to find exactly what happened in the vision. "Get away from Thalia and Jason and you won't be killed" Phoebe said stepping towards him only one thing was wrong he wasn't holding the riptide of course the future can change and Gaea didn't come "wait" I said I stepped forward and Will backed off I reached down for Thalia. Thalia grabbed my hand and got up turned me around and put a dagger to my back she changed into an empusae "we thought you would go for her" Will said smiling cruelly Leo set his hands on fire and hit Jason's shirt "ahh!" Jason rolled quickly. Then Leo hit Will in the shirt and Will almost jumped in the Styx but the empusae dropped me and grabbed him. I grabbed Jason who didn't change and ran towards the others.
Octavian came out from behind the doors "good show but Annabeth Percy wants to see you and so do the others" he said and snapped his fingers two empusae came out with Percy his hands tied in front of him he was extremely pale and looked close to fainting a girl came out behind him carrying a bowl, dagger and liquid. The girl set the items down and walked up to me and said "I'm Maya nice to meet you" she had a cloak but her hood was off she had brown hair and brown eyes "Annabeth daughter of Athena" I said "I'm a daughter of Hecate" Maya replied. "Lets get on with this Jackson looks close to fainting" Octavian said "we should have let him have some sleep at least we are using alot of his energy" Maya said "and blood" she said under her breath.
She set up the bowl and she untied Percy's hands and pulled me closer "sit and don't disturb this ritual" she said to everyone she grabbed the dagger and grabbed one of Percy's hands. His hand had dried blood in a cut like motion Percy was staring at me Maya cut both his hands again and picked up the clear liquid. As she poured it over each hand Percy tried not to wail the blood fell into the bowl and Maya cut two rocks slightly and put them on his hands his eyes started to glow and Maya put one of my hands on Percys then on her Octavian sat and put a hand on Percys and Mayas. The rock must have been doing something as all of them were in a vision.
"Percy ask who will win the war?" Maya said instead of showing that it showed Thalia, Hazel, Nico, Tony, a girl, Geric, and Tina it backed out and showed a valley Octavian said "Percy change it!" Percy shook his head and kept going. Octavian got up and walked over to Percy and raised a fist I pulled out my dagger and cut his arm "argh" he charged me but Percy tackled him with the power he had.
We were pulled out of the vision I saw Jason grab an unconscious Percy and pull him to the hunters Octavian grabbed my dagger and his and put them behind and in front of my neck. "Go get Percy Maya" he commanded "if anyone makes a move to protect Percy, get Annabeth, to run, or harm Maya I will kill Annabeth" Octavian told everyone. Maya went in the crowd with the two empusae and came out with Percy "now we will take all of you come along" Octavian said a black flash developed Percy . Percy tackled Octavian and they rolled around in the dirt and Will went to help "Annabeth go" someone said she looked at Percy who was blasting the monsters and others away she noticed the voice was Maya's. "Are you helping us?" I asked her "yes" she whispered to me out of Octavian's and Will's hearing range "come with us then" I said "I can't the gods sent me to protect their children" she whispered again. "Oh" I said "go Annabeth Percy only has this power because of Hades and it won't last long" and with the last words I ran with the others over to Hades palace.
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oh and I just made a new forum called Banished by the gods it at:
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over a year ago tortillialuvsrr said…
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hey I Like your story please post soon!!!!!!! :)
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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wow your fast tortillialuvsrr

over a year ago tortillialuvsrr said…
What do you mean I'm fast?
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You read very fastly or I type short chapters
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The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

She and the others were stopped on the way to the palace they were stopped by a friendly ghost "Annabeth how are you?" A very familier voice said "Selina Ive been good how have you been?" I asked her "great Annabeth even though I helped kronos they let me go to Elysium with Charlie we are waiting to be reborn its taking a lifetime where's Percy?" Selina asked we all went silent
over a year ago graceandgraace said…
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WOW!!! post soon please!!!
over a year ago oceanlover123 said…
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love ur story! Post soon please! :D :D :D :D :D ;D
over a year ago oceanlover123 said…
love ur story
over a year ago graceandgraace said…
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post?
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I will
over a year ago tortillialuvsrr said…
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Oh so that's what you meant!!!!! Post soon! love your story!
over a year ago graceandgraace said…
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

She and the others were stopped on the way to the palace they were stopped by a friendly ghost "Annabeth how are you?" A very familiar voice said "Selina Ive been good how have you been?" I asked her "great Annabeth even though I helped Kronos they let me go to Elysium with Charlie we are waiting to be reborn its taking a lifetime where's Percy?" Selina asked we all went silent "oh well I should go" she said and disappeared. We started to run again we finally reached the palace of Hades she couldn't open the doors so she pulled out the necklace Percy gave her held it in her hand and pushed the door open to show Hades surprised that I could open the door "how did you do that?" he asked "this" I held up the necklace.
"Darling have you looked closely at the necklace" Persephone said gasping at the necklace "what?" I asked and for the first time I noticed that this wasn't a charm but his camp necklace. "He must have swapped them" I said starting at the necklace "no he didn't it looks like he must have had someone cast a spell on it its glowing with aurora its very powerful" Persephone said. "Annabeth I can use this to communicate with you and the others I also know where you are get out of there" Percys voice sounded like he was barley awake. "Annabeth dear can I see that?" Hades asked I was about to give him it when Percy yelled "don't Annabeth! he wants to over throw Olympus that's Will they know about the necklace and how it drains my powers don't" but the fake Hades grabbed the necklace he was blasted back and hit his thrown. The necklace floated over to her hands someone said something in Greek that she didn't understand then she noticed it was Persephone blasting the fake Hades.
"Run!" Thalia's voice said through the necklace we ran through the different corridors and finally found a room they entered to see Hades tied up in a corner knocked out. "DAD!" Nico's voice yelled through the necklace "wha" Hades said as he woke up I went over to the cursing in Greek god and untied him "that you um uh Thalia no wait your uh Anna no wait-" "ANNABETH!" alot of people yelled from the necklace. "Yes Annabeth whoa what is that?" Hades asked reaching for the necklace he looked at it "Percys necklace huh" Hades said running his fingers over each bead. "Well I think I know what you need" he walked over the closet and pulled something out "okay Athena come on down she came here ha I told you" Hades yelled to the roof I couldn't help but giggle. Athena popped out of nowhere "Annabeth Chase daughter of Athena do you want this?" she asked "yes" I said "the wisest of all of her siblings she accepts the mark" Athena said and looked at Hades he flicked his wrist and a ghost appeared "I am Bella daughter of Athena and the last one to have the mark" the ghost said and when she stepped closer "you have an extremely strong power aurora I can't get through its like its pushing me back" she said "Annabeth whats that may I see it?" Athena asked looking at Percy's necklace "sure mom" I handed her the necklace. "That's the item that pushed me back" the ghost said "someone hold this for a second" Athena asked "I will" Frank said immediately. He was given it and Bella walked in front of me and Athena said "Annabeth Chase daughter of Athena accepts the mark and will let Bella live in her until the next" Bella walked into my body I glowed for a minute.
"Who's Percy?" she asked in my head "hes my boyfriend" I thought I heard her giggle in my head.
over a year ago tortillialuvsrr said…
I loved it!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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now thats speed reading tortillialuvsrr
over a year ago graceandgraace said…
post again soon!!!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Hazel

They took Percy and Jason great I thought am I next over the last few days they have been using Percy to look at the future and sacrificing his blood for Gaea to awaken. "Hazel" Thalia warned looked down no jewels were popping up "what?" I asked her she pointed to the doorway Octavian was walking towards me I made a diamond pop up and I threw it at his head. He dodged it "come on Hazel I was going to bring you to Percy" he said grabbing my hand and pulling me "get your grubby hands off her" I heard Nico say "you can bring me and Tony to see Percy to if you bring her to see Percy" "and me" Thalia and hen the rest added. "Fine all of you can come except the girl in the corner she is undetermined" Octavian said the girl spoke up "I'm not undetermined I'm a daughter of Zeus and the names Mia idiot."
Tony shot a don't get involved look at her and Mia didn't pay attention Octavian got all of us out and Mia and Tony were having a conversation. "Your not a daughter of Zeus your a daughter of Poseidon" he said "really but the only way to save Percy" Mia said "really Mia ever heard of tell the truth" Tony said "they wouldn't have brought me then" Mia said. "Wow Percy has a half sister and she isn't like him very surprising" I said they both looked at me "what Percy's crazy and almost dies its how he survives" I said. We all walked in silence finally Octavian pulled us in a room.
"Percy!" Thalia shrieked I looked at where Thalia was Percy was hanging from the ceiling in chains and the earth looked like it was eating him he looked up Octavian put a hand on my shoulder and said "find some jewels to make a giant fr this new Olympian that is coming up and he won't die" Percy said "Hazel don't I'll be fine." "I'll give you time to think on it" Octavian said as he walked out with the empusae and closed the door Percy was saying almost nothing as he looked at me "Hazel" he said I looked up from my knees "what?" I said as I walked over to him "don't do it I can survive like I did with that sea monster I always do no matter what sometimes I do crazy things just don't okay then you will be serving her and you may never see me again" he said looking at the door.
A second later Will and Octavian came in "WHAT?! YOU SAID YOU WOULDN'T KILL PERCY IF I JOINED YOU GAEA" Will screamed looking at Percy. "So did you think about it Hazel choose wisely" Octavian asked me while Will cursed in Latin and started to dig at Percy's feet "I did and I-" I tried to say but an alarm went off "INTRUDER INTRUDER" a voice went off she heard Percy say to Will "there is a necklace in my front left pocket give it to Hazel" Will grabbed the necklace and gave it to me. The alarm turned off "Hazel Percy" Maya said coming in "they want to talk to Hazel and Percy so can we please have them" she said.


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over a year ago graceandgraace said…
oooh... good sneak peek. hope percy survives!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Hazel

They took Percy and Jason great I thought am I next over the last few days they have been using Percy to look at the future and sacrificing his blood for Gaea to awaken. "Hazel" Thalia warned looked down no jewels were popping up "what?" I asked her she pointed to the doorway Octavian was walking towards me I made a diamond pop up and I threw it at his head. He dodged it "come on Hazel I was going to bring you to Percy" he said grabbing my hand and pulling me "get your grubby hands off her" I heard Nico say "you can bring me and Tony to see Percy to if you bring her to see Percy" "and me" Thalia and hen the rest added. "Fine all of you can come except the girl in the corner she is undetermined" Octavian said the girl spoke up "I'm not undetermined I'm a daughter of Zeus and the names Mia idiot."
Tony shot a don't get involved look at her and Mia didn't pay attention Octavian got all of us out and Mia and Tony were having a conversation. "Your not a daughter of Zeus your a daughter of Poseidon" he said "really but the only way to save Percy" Mia said "really Mia ever heard of tell the truth" Tony said "they wouldn't have brought me then" Mia said. "Wow Percy has a half sister and she isn't like him very surprising" I said they both looked at me "what Percy's crazy and almost dies its how he survives" I said. We all walked in silence finally Octavian pulled us in a room.
"Percy!" Thalia shrieked I looked at where Thalia was Percy was hanging from the ceiling in chains and the earth looked like it was eating him he looked up Octavian put a hand on my shoulder and said "find some jewels to make a giant fr this new Olympian that is coming up and he won't die" Percy said "Hazel don't I'll be fine." "I'll give you time to think on it" Octavian said as he walked out with the empusae and closed the door Percy was saying almost nothing as he looked at me "Hazel" he said I looked up from my knees "what?" I said as I walked over to him "don't do it I can survive like I did with that sea monster I always do no matter what sometimes I do crazy things just don't okay then you will be serving her and you may never see me again" he said looking at the door.
A second later Will and Octavian came in "WHAT?! YOU SAID YOU WOULDN'T KILL PERCY IF I JOINED YOU GAEA" Will screamed looking at Percy. "So did you think about it Hazel choose wisely" Octavian asked me while Will cursed in Latin and started to dig at Percy's feet "I did and I-" I tried to say but an alarm went off "INTRUDER INTRUDER" a voice went off she heard Percy say to Will "there is a necklace in my front left pocket give it to Hazel" Will grabbed the necklace and gave it to me. The alarm turned off "Hazel Percy" Maya said coming in "they want to talk to Hazel and Percy so can we please have them" she said.
"Who?" Octavian asked Maya "oh its Wednesday so the sacra-" she stopped in the middle of the word "what are you doing to him" she asked instead "oh he cursed the necklace to where it will always return to Annabeth so now we can't get it so punishment good right" Octavian said smiling at his work Percy smiled and looked at Octavian "what?" Octavian completely confused with Percy. "You said 'do whatever you can to protect her'" Percy said to Octavian "you said that directly to my face" he smiled Octavian started to fume and grabbed Percy's shirt "you can forget about what I said cause your not going to live much longer do you understand me" Percy was just laughing. "Why Octavian he is the only way to awaken Gaea you idiot" Maya said yelling her eyes turning red "don't you remember the vision 'son of the sea god is the only way to awaken Gaea he has blood that reverse time if you were to drink it you would live forever'" I shivered at the thought "hey I have an idea we don't think about that" Percy booted in. "Get him down from there and bring him to the Colosseum" Maya said as she turned grabbed my hand and walked out we walked while Maya was yelling in Greek probably cursing I thought. We reached the Colosseum Percy and Octavian came in a few minutes later "hey does anyone hear cussing?" Percy asked "and someone yelling 'for doughnuts how ya doing boss' oh never mind" Percy winked to me "Blackjack arrows fly away" Percy yelled a shape was floating around "ha ha not funny Blackjack" I started to laugh.
"What Arion not nice stop saying that horses are picking on me" Percy whined I started to laugh so much my stomach hurt "Percy stop" I said in between laughs "then teach your horse language nice language" Percy said Maya and Octavian staring at Percy. "Okay I'll tell him Octavian Blackjack thinks your a 'murderer of the stuffed ones'" Percy said to Octavian he pushed Percy to the middle Percy lurched forwards and fainted. "What the heck?!" Maya yelled as she caught Percy and glared at Octavian "what I didn't do anything it must be that Athena girl using his powers" he said "useless we have to wait till he wakes up" Maya said.
over a year ago Aphrodite100 said…
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wow!! i read this 1 minute after you posted!! hope percy's ok...
over a year ago percyroxz said…
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awesome!!!!! wish i could be an awesome writer like u!!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Hazel

Thalia got extremely mad when they threw Percy in unconscious she even almost killed Octavain by strangling if it weren't for those stupid empusae Thalia litterly had lightning under her feet when they shut the doors on her she walked over to the sleeping Percy. "Hazel what happened?" Tony asked not getting to close to Thalia "Percy just lurched and fainted Octavian said something about Annabeth using his powers" I told everyone "wait using his powers how?!"
Mia asked astonished "you complete idoit Percy you gave her your necklace" Thalia said "what?!" Tony asked Nico paled and tried to go to the shadows Tony and I each grabbed an arm.
"WHAT DID HE DO TO HIMSELF?!" Mia asked yelling at Nico who was trying to get out of our grip "stop I did this and they didn't want me to okay they tried to stop me I needed to though" Percy's strangled voice said we all let off of Nico and ran to Percy's side he was smiling like nothing was wrong. "Percy your an idiot for doing that" Thalia said as
she hugged him to death "what did you do Percy?" Mia asked Percy looked down his smile lost "you wont believe what I did for Annabeth for love the things I did" he sighed "what?" Mia asked "you really want to know Mia I cursed myself whoever has my necklace is able to control my powers the only way to reverse it is for me to axcept immortality or for me to die then the holder is to die with me or become immortal with me" Percy said everyone pulled back except Nico and Thalia. "Why Percy?" Tony asked "it was the only way to defeat Gaea and for Annabeth to get the mark and now its all in line Gaea won't win even though we will lose a battle I only showed Maya, Octavian, and Will the fake future" Percy said Octavian stormed in and tried to grab Percy Octavian stopped. Percy stood and walked over to Octavian hes
freezing Octavian in time I thought. "To battle me you need to have power over time" Percy said to Octavian "but we have your necklace Percy and the one who shot you Annabeth" Will said at the doorway holding Annabeth Percy said something in Greek "did he say that well he wont die with our blessing
nethier will anyone who is caught or trying to help them break
out" Tony translated for us as Percy glowed "you see you have
to have to have my blood to use those powers in the necklace" Percy said "and now you wont have it since Nyx and Styx the river goddesses blessed me" and with that he shot energy that hit Will in the chest the others who stayed with Annabeth rushed over Annabeth ran up to Percy and hugged him and kissed him and started to ask him qeustions Frank ran over to me and hugged me.
Percy seperated from Annabeth walked over to Will grabbed his sword and the necklace he uncapped his sword and cut his hand pulled Annabeth torwards him put the necklace on his cut and her hand over his and made her grab the necklace Maya walked in to see Percy standing with Annabeth and she smiled
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over a year ago oceanlover123 said…
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awesome :D keep writing and of course happy new year!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Piper

I watched as Percy cut his hand and put his camp necklace over it then Annabeth's hand over it he talked to her a bit with his hand still griping hers she grabbed the necklace and shoved it in her pocket. "Percy what are you doing?" I asked walking over to him "oh nothing" Percy said as he shoved his cut hand in his pocket "lets go" he said as he walked out holding Annabeth's hand Maya blocked them and grabbed Percy's cut hand "tell them Perseus Jackson" Percy said "oh I got myself cursed so whoever has my camp necklace has my powers and there are two ways to reverse it-" "no three ways Percy tell them the third' Maya interrupted "fine one for me to die then the necklace is not valuable two for me to become a god three for me, Annabeth, Piper, and Leo to kill Gaea" he mumbled the third part and said the rest.
"What?! I'm important on this quest" Leo said out loud Percy glared at him and Leo shut up "lets go" he said and walked out I joined up with Jason and Leo. "I just can't believe I'm important on this qeust this is the first time in actually first time yeah see I'm awesome like that" Leo said "Leo" I said "yeah" "shut it" I said. "Five four three two one hey Will they went that way" Percy said pointing down the hall "thanks" Will said and running "lets run" Percy whispered to us "hey!" Will said noticing Percy just tricked him and turning around "you have to show me how to do that" Leo told Percy. We finally reached the end of the hallway but it was a dead end except for two doors Percy started to push with Maya who must have followed us. "Hold on" Percy said stabbing the riptide through he door they pushed and the doors opened to fields Geric and Tina were playing outside with a frog and immediately stopped when they saw Percy and us out of breath Annabeth jotted up the hill and we followed.
over a year ago kronosdied said…
Post soon luv ur version
over a year ago kronosdied said…
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Piper

They jotted up the hill monsters flooded out along with Octavian and Will all of us were fleeing to where the hunters were on their perch by the cave. "Get inside the cave everyone" Phoebe said as she saw them Thalia pulled out her bow and we all pulled out our weapons "or stay here and help" Phoebe said "some hunters go in with the others and fight up close trie not to die" Thalia said as her and some others pulled out their daggers. "I will get Octavian you get Will Jason" Percy said to Jason they nodded and charged I ran beside Annabeth and Hazel all three of us fought by each other helping everyone out they finally got to cyclopes with Leo and Frank by their side and one was Ma Gasket "you really need a new fashion girl I'm thinking-" Leo started "you really think now's the time to start thinking of fashion" I interrupted. "Fine pushy much" Leo said as he set himself on fire and started to hit the cyclopes with it Hazel was throwing jewels which they were catching then turning into dust Frank turned into a bear and I started to charm speak some while Annabeth killed them I looked over to Jason he was still fighting Will.
We finished with the cyclopes and one by one all the monsters disappeared Octavian was starting to tire in his battle while Percy was having a sugar rush with water Jason was still fighting Will but Will was doing the same as Percy except Percy looked like he was taking water from Will. Jason was tiring like Octavian with nothing to reboot him clang a sound echoed through the fields I looked at Jason good he still had his sword in his hand the one who didn't was Percy who was smiling "haven't got me yet" "what you at the end of my sword point" Octavian looked at Will for help Percy ran "dude" Will said and pointed at Percy. "I don't know why you fell for that Octavian" Percy said running backwards to Octavian who was running after him everyone cracked up as Percy turned around and ran the other way. Percy felt in his pocket and pulled out the riptide "I don't know what you've been told but I have you on the end of my sword "what?" Octavian asked out of breath.
Percy tackled Octavian to the ground and put a foot on his back "you will meet death now Octavian" Percy said as he swung his sword "wait!" Will yelled. "You don't want Reyna hurt do you?" Octavian asked as Percy stopped his swing "what?" Percy snapped "oh and you forgot about your precious Oracle and Triton" Octavian said. Annabeth had pure hatred in her eyes when they mentioned Reyna Annabeth stood "bring her out then and the other two also" Annabeth commanded with her voice sounded doubled probably Bella did that "uh um well you guys could take them" Will said "okay" Percy said as he swung his sword and it met Octavian's throat flesh "bring Reyna forth" Will's voice rang and the doors opened to find.
over a year ago oceanlover123 said…
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over a year ago Aphrodite100 said…
post soon! 1 question: did Percy kill Octavian?
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Frank

The doors creaked open to find two empusae shuffling their feet "uh sir um he let Reyna go" one empusae said Percy smiled Will looked at Percy then to Jason. Will appeared to try to run to Jason who was limping up the hill Percy pulled out the Riptide and slammed it into the earth a big earthquake suddenly came Jason fell Percy started to hit blades with Will who was on the ground protecting himself. Piper and Leo grabbed Jason Percy was blasted with dirt that didn't seem to make him step a millimeter it looked like Percy had this under control they were battling in a way of form. Percy was doing great until Will messed up it and sliced Percy on the cheek Percy did something that no one knew he could do.
Earth and water surrounded him locking him and Will in battle "thats amazing" Reyna's voice said in awe I looked at her she was staring at the battle. "I surrender" Wills voice screamed across the valley I looked at the battle once more Will was on his knees and hands up looking at Percy with pleading eyes as Percy's sword was moving down Will's chest. "Percy join Gaea's side and you could keep on living" Will said Percy cut Will's arm lightly then pulled his sword away as if killing him was to tempting "sorry Percy I'm sorry I screwed up on everything". Something strange was happening Percy said "you say sorry after all you have done to me you battle me and if you killed me you would not say sorry if you buried me alive and put a fire on my head you would not say sorry once your life is in danger you say sorry to protect yourself ha like I will forgive you." Percy grabbed Will's neck and lifted him off the ground
"Percy the prophecy the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way
and friends shall decide his fate" Hazel said "typical Roman always wanting power" Percy said dropping Will on the ground. Percy walked right up to Annabeth "Percy I want another chance just let me go with you I here by quit Gaea's side to go with you" Will said bowing before Percy "I gave you a chance and what happened" Percy said "Will you may come just stay away from Percy okay" Annabeth said as she stopped Percy from attacking. Thalia and Annabeth pulled Percy away from Will I walked over to Will and said "one thing that goes wrong when your in our boat or camp your dead!" he nodded as Hazel hit me in the shoulder "ow" I said to be nice.
The hunters blocked Percy from Will we some how appeared on the boat Percy said "your welcome" and crashed on a hammock with Annabeth on top of him. The others spread out "air" Percy said as Jason was about to ask something "he needs sleep" Annabeth said kissing Percy the boat lifted off then something went wrong and the boat splashed into the water hitting only Percy and Annabeth.




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over a year ago Aphrodite100 said…
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post the rest soooooon!!!!! what happened to Percy and Annabeth???
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Frank

The doors creaked open to find two empusae shuffling their feet "uh sir um he let Reyna go" one empusae said Percy smiled Will looked at Percy then to Jason. Will appeared to try to run to Jason who was limping up the hill Percy pulled out the Riptide and slammed it into the earth a big earthquake suddenly came Jason fell Percy started to hit blades with Will who was on the ground protecting himself. Piper and Leo grabbed Jason Percy was blasted with dirt that didn't seem to make him step a millimeter it looked like Percy had this under control they were battling in a way of form. Percy was doing great until Will messed up it and sliced Percy on the cheek Percy did something that no one knew he could do.
Earth and water surrounded him locking him and Will in battle "that's amazing" Reyna's voice said in awe I looked at her she was staring at the battle. "I surrender" Wills voice screamed across the valley I looked at the battle once more Will was on his knees and hands up looking at Percy with pleading eyes as Percy's sword was moving down Will's chest. "Percy join Gaea's side and you could keep on living" Will said Percy cut Will's arm lightly then pulled his sword away as if killing him was to tempting "sorry Percy I'm sorry I screwed up on everything". Something strange was happening Percy said "you say sorry after all you have done to me you battle me and if you killed me you would not say sorry if you buried me alive and put a fire on my head you would not say sorry once your life is in danger you say sorry to protect yourself ha like I will forgive you." Percy grabbed Will's neck and lifted him off the ground
"Percy the prophecy the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way
and friends shall decide his fate" Hazel said "typical Roman always wanting power" Percy said dropping Will on the ground. Percy walked right up to Annabeth "Percy I want another chance just let me go with you I here by quit Gaea's side to go with you" Will said bowing before Percy "I gave you a chance and what happened" Percy said "Will you may come just stay away from Percy okay" Annabeth said as she stopped Percy from attacking. Thalia and Annabeth pulled Percy away from Will I walked over to Will and said "one thing that goes wrong when your in our boat or camp your dead!" he nodded as Hazel hit me in the shoulder "ow" I said to be nice.
The hunters blocked Percy from Will we some how appeared on the boat Percy said "your welcome" and crashed on a hammock with Annabeth on top of him. The others spread out "air" Percy said as Jason was about to ask something "he needs sleep" Annabeth said kissing Percy the boat lifted off then something went wrong and the boat splashed into the water hitting only Percy and Annabeth. The wave retreated leaving Percy, Annabeth, and Poseidon "you can't kiss a guy without being interrupted" Annabeth said pulling her hair back into a ponytail Percy said "picture us on Hawaii then poof hey dad."
Poseidon frowned Annabeth laughed and planted her head into his chest Hazel walked over to me and laid on my side and my cheeks started to turn red. "Percy I can't talk to my own son anymore without her" Poseidon said with a deadly tone in her "whats wrong dad?" Percy asked sitting up slowly. "Zeus thinks his son shall be better your going by water" Poseidon said glaring at Jason he raised his hand his weapon appeared "dad no!" Percy yelled as Poseidon shot something at Jason the boat deck turned sideways throwing everyone slipped and Poseidon fell to the water at the last second the boat flattened. I looked and saw the giant Polybotes smiling "someone missing?" he asked turning to sea water "wha-" I started but Hazel interrupted "Percy!" we all ran over to the side of the boat. Annabeth shot out of the water and landed on Jason, Leo, and me I groaned "sorry Percy said he will be fine" her voice was dipping with emotion. Poseidon said he was going to look for Percy Annabeth said she wanted to go with him but she didn't.
A few moments later Poseidon came back up holding an unconscious or dead body I noticed it was Percy I ran up with Hazel at my side Poseidon laid him on a hammock. Everyone was surrounding the hammock Percy was barley breathing and extremely pale more than Nico or Hades "we should get him to the infirmary" I said. "No duh" Hazel said "who will carry him" Poseidon had gone a few minutes ago and every guy backed off "hey he is heavy" I complained "the hunters will" Thalia said. Thalia, Phoebe, and Annabeth held Percy and carried him down to the infirmary I followed as they took him once we got there I waited with Annabeth and Thalia the others came down after a few minutes. "Whats wrong with him?" Leo said "oh poison to kill a god it should have killed him already I don't understand and a deep cut" a healer said walking in. I looked closer to see a deep gash of made by a dagger as the healer flipped him over and started to work Apollo walked through the door and walked next to Percy and said "whats up?" "oh hi dad um hes badly poisoned and deep gash that will not stop bleeding" the healer said. "Oh here let me see" Apollo said then pulled away as he saw the wound "Percy might scream and hate me for this" he said as he covered started to sew the wound with speed after the wound was sewn up Apollo put his hands on Percys back.
His hands started to glow and then Percy's back a scream hit the air Percy struggled to get away but Apollo held on strong after a while Annabeth ran to get Apollo off but Thalia and I held her back. "Let me go stop stop!" Annabeth yelled a glow came off Percy's back then encased them "she can't get through you can let her go" a healer said we let her go and she ran to the orb and started to try and get through. "Annabeth stop" Thalia said and grabbed Annabeth's arm tears were streaming off her cheeks the orb grew and finally disappeared Percy stopped moving Apollo said "that should be enough for a day now I need a nap" and he crashed on a bed Annabeth ran to Percy's side who was barley awake and she flipped him over. "Percy are you okay?" Annabeth asked "no my body is hurting like a thousand daggers with the deadliest poison in my blood and I was rudely awakened" Percy said Annabeth smiled and giggled. "He needs sleep you guys leave him please we will let you know when he wakes up" said a Apollo camper we left as Percy fell into a deep sleep Annabeth took out her dagger and walked over to Apollo "no Annabeth" Thalia said grabbing her.
over a year ago Aphrodite100 said…
good story!!! post more soon!!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Frank

The healer ran into the room and asked "hey uh have you seen Percy walking around lately by any chance?" "what you lost Percy Annabeth will kill we will help" Hazel said grabbing my arm. We ran directly into Jason, Leo, and Piper "we'll help" Jason said we ran the whole perimeter of the ship then found a very pale body with jet black hair windblown sleeping on a bunk like nothings wrong. I stepped to the bedside and reached out for him and touched his hand it was freezing "Percy?" I asked the guy sleeping "huh" he said with his half gazing and half asleep with his green eyes. "Finally your here bravo bravo but I would think wouldn't you noticed how Percy is-" a voice said behind us "whats going on?" Annabeth walking through the door with a book "who did this they will die" Annabeth said rushing to Percy Will stepped from the shadows and pulled off a mask and Tina the daughter of Aphrodite said "try me" Annabeth turned to her victim. Her eyes dancing a gray storm I stepped away in fear Annabeth tried to stay calm but pulled out her dagger and charged I turned and picked up a sleeping Percy and ran to the infirmary.
Apollo was standing by Percy's bed I dropped Percy on the bed Apollo said "wow he's out cold" as he prodded Percy with his finger "do something?!" Hazel screamed at him, "Fine" Apollo said as he disappeared "thats helpful" Hazel sarcastically said.





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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Frank

The healer ran into the room and asked "hey uh have you seen Percy walking around lately by any chance?" "what you lost Percy Annabeth will kill we will help" Hazel said grabbing my arm. We ran directly into Jason, Leo, and Piper "we'll help" Jason said we ran the whole perimeter of the ship then found a very pale body with jet black hair windblown sleeping on a bunk like nothings wrong. I stepped to the bedside and reached out for him and touched his hand it was freezing "Percy?" I asked the guy sleeping "huh" he said with his half gazing and half asleep with his green eyes. "Finally your here bravo bravo but I would think wouldn't you noticed how Percy is-" a voice said behind us "whats going on?" Annabeth walking through the door with a book "who did this they will die" Annabeth said rushing to Percy Will stepped from the shadows and pulled off a mask and Tina the daughter of Aphrodite said "try me" Annabeth turned to her victim. Her eyes dancing a gray storm I stepped away in fear Annabeth tried to stay calm but pulled out her dagger and charged I turned and picked up a sleeping Percy and ran to the infirmary.
Apollo was standing by Percy's bed I dropped Percy on the bed Apollo said "wow he's out cold" as he prodded Percy with his finger "do something?!" Hazel screamed at him, "Fine" Apollo said as he disappeared "thats helpful" Hazel sarcastically said. Apollo came back with supplies "ha that will show you to sass me" he said "just help him!" Annabeth shouted coming in dragging Tina tied up. We all stepped away from Annabeth Apollo grumbled as he started on Percy once he was done Percy was paler then five minutes ago "you didn't help him you made him paler" Annabeth said as she walked over to Percy "what? that was supposed to heal him" Apollo whined suddenly all the gods and goddesses appeared in the room. "Well Apollo have you done a check up that might help" Artemis said as she walked over to her brother Apollo said "I don't need to do that see I can tell that he is not okay." Poseidon walked over and glared at Apollo "we can all tell something is wrong Apollo" he said while Apollo looked like he wanted to be anywhere but there.
"I'll look at it" Apollo said going for a clipboard "if I may explain sir" I said stepping forward my foot slipped on a piece of clothe that just appeared there. "Whats this?" he asked as he bent down and looked at it "the clothe that Will put on my nose it smelt weird and I felt sleepy and more pain" Percy said sitting up "I didn't know I was this important."
"Lay down" Poseidon said pushing Percy back into a laying position Percy groaned Apollo came back with ten healers "a little to much healers" Leo said. Hazel helped me up as the healers started in Percy speaking over one another I only picked out the important information like "more poison" "no broken bones" "no cuts that poison could enter" Poseidon said "hey now someone tell me what is wrong with him" "well" an healer stepped forward "hes okay except that somehow more poison entered his blood stream without cutting whats that" another one finished pointing to the clothe that Poseidon was holding. Poseidon handed the clothe over "that-" Percy started but a healer said "don't talk" "LET ME TALK that is what Will shoved on my mouth and nose" Percy said. Apollo walked over and said "okay let me see" then Apollo examined the clothe "you will be to late he is already going to die even if he accepts immortality now" Tina said Apollo whispered something to a healer and the healer walked off returning with a clothe like it. Apollo grabbed the clothe and walked to Percy "Percy you will be fine just inhale this" Apollo said grabbing Percy's arm "no" Percy said in alarm then "why are you trying to save me I'm nothing but trouble for all of you." Percy turned his head away from Apollo who looked shocked and put the clothe over Percy's nose Percy tried to pull away Apollo and the healers started to hold him down. Percy finally took a breath then kept struggling his struggles growing weaker and weaker until finally they stopped ad he started to breath as his eyes closed Apollo and the healers stepped back. "Will you please leave so we can precede" a girl healer asked walking up to us we all went out of the room Annabeth we had to pull out.
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
Holy crap lease post soon your amazing!
over a year ago Aphrodite100 said…
POST SOON!
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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You are really good at this other forums suck because people just guess and don't get anything right in their story
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Leo

Wow I felt happy that I wasn't Percy two hours ago the cute girl asked us to leave and we were just approaching camp half-blood and a crowd was gathering probably to see their lost leader. When we reached the beach the whole camp looked at all of the people on deck including Nico, Thalia, the seven, the Olympians, Tina, Geric, Mia, Tony, and the real Will I even tried to pull off his face but it didn't work so he was real. A horn blew in the distance announcing our arrival to the whole camp Grover came up with a few others camper and Chirion "wheres Percy?" Grover asked looking around. "Yeah wheres the punk?" Clarisse asked stepping forward "did the stupid Romans kill him" she growled at Frank and Hazel Frank changed into a dragon and Clarisse pulled out her spear that cracked with electricity. "Percy is in the infirmary and I will kill you sister" Frank said changing back Clarisse face looked confused for a second then yelled "I have to share a cabin with him" "he is a descendant of Neptune" Hazel said. Grover said before anyone else could say something "lets go to the infirmary Leo you built it mostly lead the way" I started to walk down the confusing hallways I kinda remembered the way to the infirmary but forgot some turns after walking for around 30 minutes I finally found the infirmary.
I opened the doors to find the girl that asked us to leave drawling a beard on another healer that was sleeping on a hospital bed like the others with a crayola marker. "What happened?" I asked looking around she shrugged and put the marker away "healing him he was a fighter and hard to heal" she said I looked to Percy's bed Apollo was sitting by it and was whispering a chant under his breath. Chirion looked over as Percy started to glow then something pushed us all to the ground except for Apollo and Percy Apollo cursed "how come that didn't work the 20th one any others Jennet?" he said then noticed us when Jennet pointed to us. "Hi wait wasn't camp-" "NO!" Grover screamed to quickly over Apollo "it isn't nice to interrupt a god especially my dad" Jennet said running up to me and grabbing my hand and whispered in my ear "their monsters burn yourself I will get your friends away" then she said to my friends "Jason, Piper, Annabeth, Hazel, Frank, Geric, Tony, Will, Tina, and Mia come here."
They walked to Apollo I had the chance I let the fire come onto my skin it felt nice all of the people by Percy's bed watched as I did Annabeth tried to stop me but I was shocked by a spear tip a surge of electric went through my bones numbing ever part I sucked away my fire as I hit the ground. Clarisse had turned into a monster an empusae I said to myself in my mind she charged again only for Thalia and the hunters to appear out of nowhere and shoot the empusae in the head she turned into dust on me. Grover smiled and grabbed the nearest hunter which had to be Thalia she grabbed her knife when Chirion looked at her with pity then to Percy who had three fake campers at him and the rest holding the others except Apollo a blue light lit the room Percy's riptide quickly plunged through the monsters as he stood up getting rid of all the monsters but Percy's eyes weren't green but changed color. His body stayed as Percy fought "Annabeth?" I asked her a silent question as I pointed to Percy's body she seemed just as confused and said "I don't understand" a force in the shadows started to fight to killing fake Grover first freeing Thalia once all the monsters were dead the Percy who fought disappeared. Apollo appeared by my side and said "are you okay?" I tried to stand and felt woozy Apollo grabbed my arm to steady me my world turned ad I could not think straight Apollo shoved a person off a bed and led me to it as my world started to fall.
"Leo" Pipers voice sounded far away as my eyes turned off as my mind did I was in a a building and Piper and Jason hanging over a pot my memory I thought I watched the scene go by then was put in a dim lit room that had dirt walls. I looked around a heap with dirty black hair was laying on the ground with mud, blood, and dirt on it it moaned in pain then screamed I saw his face it was covered in mud and dirt his green eyes showed excruciating pain. "Percy? what is wrong?" I asked running to his side he didn't reply but crawled away and curled up in the corner and yelled weakly "turn around Leo!" I turned as a guy had a raised dagger dripping with poison I rolled and grabbed his robe and set myself on fire as I pulled the robe away. A teenager with a scar running down his face grinned at me he had sandy hair and blue eyes "Luke stop this let him go" Percy called as he tackled Luke. Percy fought Luke not getting touched by the dagger then Luke caught Percy's forearm Percy screamed and pulled away in pain "be warned Leo Percy won't wake up not until the end of this war not unless you can find out who she is and you only have 1 hour before its his throat thats sliced" I was pulled out of the dream hearing Pipers sweet voice sooth me by saying "Leo wake up."
"I know how to wake up Percy" I said sitting up in the bed I hit my head on Pipers head "wow you have a hard head Piper" she smiled at that. Annabeth yelled "Valdez get your butt up and help" Apollo said "before that how do you wake up Percy?" "some girl" I said looking over to see Jennet sewing up Percy's stomach while another healer was holding a clothe to Percy's forearm. I looked at Annabeth who was fighting monsters I stood and made fire dance on my hands and shot at monsters "he only has 1 hour before L-" I stopped myself "someone kills him" I finished. We finished the monsters off as we all ran to Percy's bed as a new cut opened on his chest Jennet started on it I knew who the girl was.
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over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Leo

The girl had to be a healer and she happened to know how to heal people very fast she was the only one awake with her dad "Jennet fix him up heal him from the poison" I said to her. She stopped immediately "how did you know Leo?" she asked me everyone was staring at us "well put the clues together you are the only healer awake that is a girl. Luke said a girl so yeah oh oops" I said noticing Annabeth was in front of me "Luke you have to be mistaken he wouldn't do this" she said "Luke is doing this I thought he was trying to save Percy so I helped him but then I noticed he was trying to get revenge on Percy for not helping him" Jennet said. Annabeth started to have tears in her eyes "not Percy he wouldn't do that he turned good at the last second" she said glaring at everyone like challenging each of them to argue "just make him wake up" I said. She muttered something then put her hand Percy's chest and both of their eyes turned Green then Jennet yelled "awaken Perseus Jackson!" she pulled away Percy's eyes opened and dirt, mud, and blood appeared on him.
Annabeth tackled him then kissed him hugged him and the other things couples do Jennet pulled me out into the empty hall "yes?" I asked she looked at me like she was examining a book. "Leo how did you know from what I heard your an idiot" she said "that makes you smart" I said she laughed a little this girl was drop dead gorgeous her neat brown hair tucked behind her ears and her hazel colored and her laugh was light and contagious. "Well Leo it seems that you are nice, funny, and dumb" she said batting her eye lashes "no one must find out about the Leo" I said she laughed a bit more. I saw a monster behind her running with a sword "whats wrong?" she asked looking at my face I pushed her in the door then shut it and turned my body into a fire place setting myself on fire was awesome I felt powerful with it on me. "Wow Leo I didn't think you would fall for that trick" Luke's voice sounded behind me I turned to see Luke with Tina who was holding a bucket of water she threw it at me the cold water bit the fire out. A window broke somewhere Percy came running down the hall with his sword Luke put his sword to my neck "stop Percy" Luke said stepping behind me his sword still to my neck. "No I think its stop Luke" Percy said I suddenly was out of Luke's range watching Percy and Luke fight "your immortal so cool man" I said "nope just have power of time" Percy replied Annabeth turned at the end of the hall. She saw the fight then shouted "STOP!" everyone turned to her Luke's sword had disappeared and I noticed Luke had his hands up "Percy what are you doing he has no sword so you are just going to kill him" she said walking over to Percy. "Annabeth he had a sword but he made it disappear" Percy tried to explain "Annabeth this side has liars I escaped the underworld we can start a life together without Percy all you have to do is put your dagger in his hands and Kronos can eat his body quickly so he would die quickly" Luke pleaded. Annabeth started for her dagger "I die you die Annabeth" Percy said she stopped and muttered "the camp necklace you can have it I am tired of you" she said "wheres the Annabeth I know" Percy said as he smiled "I should have done this long ago Percy long ago" she muttered. She pulled out her dagger and raised it to his hand oh no I thought Annabeth did something surprising and turned around so fast I thought she had killed Percy a scream filled the air I looked to see Tina on the ground with Annabeth on her but no one was dead Percy was on Luke with his sword over Lukes head.
"Lets go Luke to get the campers" Percy said picking Luke up I went with them cause I just wanted to the campers were in a cages in the middle of camp. The cages were like the cabins in a u shape the most were in a water cage "Leo get them I will get them Annabeth them" Percy pointed in different cages. "Percy she didn't remove all of the poison from your body" Annabeth said walking with him then waved me over to the cage that they were walking to Percy started to fumble with the lock while Annabeth kept talking I pulled out some things and started to fumble with them and made a key I put the key in the lock and it opened and someone pushed us all in the cage.
I hit the cement floor and saw the top it was caged but had a tube that looked like a lightning bolt "Zeus's master bolt" Annabeth said "whoever made the cages they aren't going to be able to escape." Percy said "I bet I can get the master bolt" "bet on I will pay 100 dollars to see that" I said "really" Percy said hopefully "no" I said. "Darn oh well" Percy said he stood up and picked up and rock and chucked it at the lightning bolt the whole cage was shocked Percy jumped before it could hit him I followed by jumping to. He summoned a huge wave the earth shook the wave hit the cage and stopped "Percy! is it really you" Grover asked coming out of the crowd of campers I swear Percy's eyes were turning different colors then he glowed the color of Olympus I just noticed that the gods were in the cages to and holding their hands out to Percy I ran behind Poseidon who was in this cage Percy looked so powerful and unbeatable he kept hitting the lightning bolt with powers I went out from behind Poseidon and made fire dance on my hands Percy did the same with water which came out of the air and made a bubble around the people in the cage "no Leo or I will kill your friends" Luke was standing outside holding two swords to Hazel and Franks necks "those are my friends but you got them wrong" his face turned angry. "WHAT?! THEY SAID THEY WERE" Luke yelled then went to hit both of them but Percy spoke with the water that hit Luke away Percy literary stepped out of the water. "You will never do that again" Percy said through grinding teeth him and Luke started to fight then Percy put them both underwater and in a few minutes pulled Luke out coughing out water Hazel opened the cage. I ran out and hugged her "thank you so much I think I have gone mad do you think I have gone mad I think I have gone mad do you not think that I think that" I said to quickly for her to answer. I went on with her cracking up until a wave hit me and I slipped "I think you fell" Percy said smiling as he tied Luke up "here help me" I went over to help him and to soon did I notice that he was tying me up. "What are you doing Percy its a bit to tight" I said "oh I am playing Leo" he said and it wasn't his voice it of course had to be Will "Will?" I asked.
He was tackled by Percy then they started to fight I started to burn through my ropes "its no use even the strongest fire won't break these there fire resistance" Luke said I stepped away from anything burnable. I made fire go on all over my wrists more and more Percy walked over and said something in Greek that made the ropes untangle I fell forward and Percy caught me setting his shirt on fire a wave of water washed over us he made me an air bubble as my world darkened fully.
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Percy

Leo just was fine when he fainted and set my shirt on fire great so I made water come to put out the fire but it turned out this water just had an oil spill fun I let the water go covered in oil and fire around me with a kid who was perfectly fine and could go through fire. I picked Leo up and saw a few campers retriving water from the lake wait that had the oil in it I threw Leo over the flames I was about to jump when the flames licked the sky I noticed they we're in a ring around me "come on" I yelled I turned to face Luke, Octavian, Will, and Gaea. "My pawn just join us then the fire will sleep and your mother and step dad will be safe" she said "never" I said then "you will die like your son cause I will never join you and if you say a word about my parents I will kill you!" "my dear pawn Luke" she said and waved her hand Luke tackled me and pinned me to the ground Gaea came over and patted my cheek and said " join me" I said "no" "Will" she said waving her hand. Will came forward with oil and poured it around me Luke held me down still I reached for the riptideand my pen was gone "do what you want Gaea it wont hurt I ACCEPT IM-" I started but Luke covered my mouth. "Octavian" Gaea said Luke pulled back as Octavian put fire on the oil it turned to fire that licked the sky "PERCY!" Leo screamed the smoke was starting to take my air "in here!" I screamed dropping to the ground it was getting burning hot in here and I had no air at all I started to cough the air cooled and someone pulled me up I looked at the face of Clarisse and Leo. The cold air hurt my lungs a few healers ran forward I saw Annabeth fighting Luke and surprisingly Luke wasn't fighting back "get a stretcher!" Jennet yelled they put me on a stretcher and walked into the infirmary on the boat I was put on an oxygen machine and drifted off into a sleep that had no dreams.
I woke up with Annabeth asleep on my chest and my mom and Paul in the chairs asleep on each other Jennet walked in and saw I was awake and asked "how are you feeling?" "I am feelling horrible what time is it?" I asked "oh around two am" she walked over to the machine and twisted some knobs and pushed some buttons the machine whirled then quieted "there that should take care of the smoke it will put this liquid/gas in your lungs that makes the smoke evaporate then it evaporates after the process" she explained to me. "Nice" I said "wow I was awake a few seconds now I'm so tierd" I said "good that's the liquid/gas entering into your lungs" she said smiling then walked out I kissed Annabeths forehead and laid back falling into another deep sleep.
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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Ong I know I might sound annoying but this is like really good :D
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Percy

'I opened my eyes ever so slightly to see Apollo looking with the oxygen machine "what are you doing?" I asked him he jumped and said "oh uh I was trying to fix the machine and the Olympian council wants to talk with you" thbackround changed to Olympus. I was in a camp T-shirt and jeans "Perseus Jackson" Zeus boomed as the council came into veiw "yes" I said as I bowed to him "you started the sentence 'I ACCEPT IMMORTALITY' do you still want that?" he said "no I cant the prophecy hasn't come yet" I said shoving my hands in my pockets. The others walked through the door "wow dude that's big and you don't want it I will have it" Leo yelled "I cant believe I am going to say this but you all can learn from this young fellow" Zeus said. We all popped into camp it was fully rebuilt and campers surrounded me in ten seconds hugging us and chanting "Percy" over and over Annabeth leaned over to me' "Percy Percy" Annabeth shouted I know one thing I just saw the future.


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over a year ago percyroxz said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Percy

'I opened my eyes ever so slightly to see Apollo looking with the oxygen machine "what are you doing?" I asked him he jumped and said "oh uh I was trying to fix the machine and the Olympian council wants to talk with you" the background changed to Olympus. I was in a camp T-shirt and jeans "Perseus Jackson" Zeus boomed as the council came into view "yes" I said as I bowed to him "you started the sentence 'I ACCEPT IMMORTALITY' do you still want that?" he said "no I cant the prophecy hasn't come yet" I said shoving my hands in my pockets. The others walked through the door "wow dude that's big and you don't want it I will have it" Leo yelled "I cant believe I am going to say this but you all can learn from this young fellow" Zeus said. We all popped into camp it was fully rebuilt and campers surrounded me in ten seconds hugging us and chanting "Percy" over and over Annabeth leaned over to me' "Percy Percy" Annabeth shouted I know one thing I just saw the future.
"Huh" I moaned "come on seaweed brain they need that bed and your needed in battle" she said pulling me up I started to pull her down and kissed her. "Better" I said pulling myself up she smiled we walked out of the ship and into camp half-blood that was in flames Clarisse was killing millions of monsters with her spear but her hits were slowing. I pulled out the riptide and did my best taxi cab whistle Blackjack landed by me 'how ya doin boss?' he asked me "oh I don't know Blackjack THE CAMP IS UNDER ATTACK!" I yelled everyone except the campers like I was crazy 'you look like and idiot talking to a horse' he snickered "I am talking to a horse" I said smiling "hey punk why don't you stop talking to your horse and help" Clarisse yelled 'ya know she is scarier when she wakes up and I have been in that position before boss it ain't pretty' Blackjack said looking at Clarisse. I stifled a laugh then got on Blackjack "up" I said to Blackjack 'its always up never please go up boss its getting annoying' Blackjack snorted I rolled my eyes "please go up" I said 'thank you boss your the first one who said-' "Blackjack UP NOW!" I shouted interrupting Blackjack Will was charging towards us with a Pegasus to 'help me please son of Poseidon' the Pegasus pleaded me Blackjack darted up Will followed on his Pegasus 'names Blackjack your?' Blackjack asked the Pegasus 'Roselia this son of Poseidon is annoying what about yours' I tuned out the conversation from there. I pulled out the riptide and studied Will and the way he was on his Pegasus he had a saddle and saddle that barley fit and was put on wrong he was shaking this must have been his first time I thought a crowd of campers started to form under us. "Hey blackjack can you run very fast?" I asked him he replied 'yeah why boss this is a plan ah plans from you are crazy' Blackjack started to freak out "higher Blackjack as high as Olympus" I said he started to fly higher and higher till I started to feel nauseous "Blackjack be ready to run when I tell you kay" I said 'kay boss I'm trusting you' Blackjack said Will came to our height his face paling to Nico's shade "please dive Blackjack now please" I whispered out of Wills range Will charged. Blackjack tucked his wings "go to the hill" I said he started to turn the whole camp was watching as we fell like a meteorite from space gaining speed 'boss' Blackjack warned "wait" I said.
We were speeding to where I could barley see the golden fleece "now blackjack now run" he opened his wings and started to run I put my sword away and laced my fingers through his mane and started to direct him. We were running towards the bottom of the hill when the dirt opened and made a net Blackjack started to fly again but over the net once we were over the net he started to run again we ran right into the Romans who must have been coming to help "get to camp and help them I got this over the hill" I yelled the Romans ran to help. We ran with Will on Blackjacks tail "go go go" I yelled Blackjack speed up then we reached a lake it separated us from New York I turned Blackjack around and faced Will "you shall not be able to use your powers from the gods for you are now an enemy" I cursed him in Greek he didn't even know what I had said "what?" he asked I pulled out the riptide he pulled out his weapon "in the water Blackjack" I said he backed into the water up until it was touching my shoes people stopped to watch us a news crew came and started to play it on live TV. Will charged at me from the air I blocked then grabbed the Pegasuses hoof my gut tightened then the water swirled around us trapping us in a ball of water "now try and fight" I said making the ball able to see through but thick people were starting to gather me and Will kept blocking each others moves when.
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over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Percy(need to show the fight from his view)

Will blocked my attacks something rose behind me and I was blasted forward with sharp mud and dirt with rocks the bridge started to fall as an earthquake shook it. I willed the water to hold the bridge as everyone ran off the falling bridge I was pelted with dirt and mud water climbed up my body as I charged to Will and Gaea. They tried blasting me back and Will tried his powers "no one attacks my camp when I am around" I growled. A look of fear passed on Wills face as he tried to block my hit I willed the water to push him high off the ground then freeze under him making him slip. I ran to Gaea and cut her head "stupid demigod stop this madness you are my pawn you lead your friends into trouble and almost made me kill you" she said. "Your worthless to them the gods use you as their protection Percy they don't care for you I do that is why you should join me" she said and I almost believed her except that I wasn't that stupid. "Then why did they give me a home and place to train and why did my dad claim me Gaea I would rather die then join you I never will" I said as I made the water hit her square in the chest. I slammed the riptide into the ground making an earthquake Will surprised me and stabbed my chest with his sword I fell backwards into the deep. My dad was waiting for me at the bottom the water licking my wound "you are not dead Percy you are stronger then that one he is from the future Gaea sent him once she was defeated. He only has to kill you to win the war cause in the end of the war you kill Gaea with the help of Annabeth, Leo, and Piper I shot towards the surface Will was an idiot. Smiling I saw Annabeth smile at me I was on a pillar of water around 50 feet in the air I directed the pillar down and put my sword through Wills head blood poured from the wound on to my sword.


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over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Percy(need to show the fight from his view)

Will blocked my attacks something rose behind me and I was blasted forward with sharp mud and dirt with rocks the bridge started to fall as an earthquake shook it. I willed the water to hold the bridge as everyone ran off the falling bridge I was pelted with dirt and mud water climbed up my body as I charged to Will and Gaea. They tried blasting me back and Will tried his powers "no one attacks my camp when I am around" I growled. A look of fear passed on Wills face as he tried to block my hit I willed the water to push him high off the ground then freeze under him making him slip. I ran to Gaea and cut her head "stupid demigod stop this madness you are my pawn you lead your friends into trouble and almost made me kill you" she said. "Your worthless to them the gods use you as their protection Percy they don't care for you I do that is why you should join me" she said and I almost believed her except that I wasn't that stupid. "Then why did they give me a home and place to train and why did my dad claim me Gaea I would rather die then join you I never will" I said as I made the water hit her square in the chest. I slammed the riptide into the ground making an earthquake Will surprised me and stabbed my chest with his sword I fell backwards into the deep. My dad was waiting for me at the bottom the water licking my wound "you are not dead Percy you are stronger then that one he is from the future Gaea sent him once she was defeated. He only has to kill you to win the war cause in the end of the war you kill Gaea with the help of Annabeth, Leo, and Piper I shot towards the surface Will was an idiot. Smiling I saw Annabeth smile at me I was on a pillar of water around 50 feet in the air I directed the pillar down and put my sword through Wills head blood poured from the wound on to my sword. He stopped and turned in the last seconds of his life and said "Percy you have to die someday by someone." With that he fell to his death into the water the mortals looked fazed then they started to clap and shout "yeah" I stepped up to the lower water and was hounded by news people. All of them asking different questions they stopped as one last crew parted them the woman asked "are you ready to die Percy Jackson?" I looked her up and down. Then noticed the crew behind her started to form together into a Hydra my gut tightened as the water lifted up following my hands "heck yeah" I said smiling the Hydra looked up as I made a pillar of water under it then for myself. The Hydra looked scared to death on the water "well how ya doin?" I asked going in front of one of its heads.
It growled and lunged I dropped 20 feet "yeah I am to this is boring one second" I said then dropped to the water keeping the monster up there. I walked up to Annabeth and asked "any Greek fire by chance?" "no Percy the whole camp is almost burned down "well that stinks okay I will let him down" I said making the water stop. The Hydra fell to his death turning to dust as he hit the water I walked past the borders as I walked to the throne room in Olympus and ran into a pillar. "Ow first of all and second I think this is the wrong place sorry" I said as I started to walk out then Zeus said "stop" I froze in place. "Yes?" I asked turning around "why him?" Athena grumbled "cause I am awesome" I said smiling "Perseus we would like to thank you for you have killed a boy that shouldn't have come in the first place. Also we would like to say that what you did was brave" Zeus said nothing wrong on his face told me this was a joke I broke into a bigger smile. My dad shrunk to my size and said "most of the reason is that if you didn't do that he would have killed you and Gaea would have already won you are our key to victory."
We walked out of the throne room and Poseidon said "you will always be my favorite son never will someone else take your place" I smiled even wider then hugged my dad. He then took out a vial and said "this is one and only and us gods and goddesses made this just right now is a liquid so powerful it will cure you of your curse and make you immortal but" he said. "But what?" I asked suspicious "but it comes with more pain then becoming immortal directly" he said he put the vial in my hand then walked off.
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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Awesomenesssssssss
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Please hurry and post I check back every hour :D there's no rush Im just excited
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Yay lol :D
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The Mark Of Athena
Percy

I walked off Olympus fingering the tube that my dad gave me I walked right past two people one had a plater "Perseus Jackson" one said "yes" I said then noticing they were two gorgons I yelled "oh my gods" then did something even Hades would laugh at I said "what did you do to your hair girl it is gorgeously ugly." Then ran for my life...



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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Had to post sneak peek little brother botthering me
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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Lol ok :D
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The Mark Of Athena
Percy

I walked off Olympus fingering the tube that my dad gave me I walked right past two people one had a plater "Perseus Jackson" one said "yes" I said then noticing they were two gorgons I yelled "oh my gods" then did something even Hades would laugh at I said "what did you do to your hair girl it is gorgeously ugly." Then ran for my life. Its a really good thing that Camp Half-Blood was dropping off the strawberries I jumped in the van and surprised Clarisse. "What?" she asked "two gorgons go now!" I said she understood the two gorgons were running towards us Argus climbed in and Clarisse raced to get to camp the gorgons had little wings now and started to glide after us. "I will be right back" I said then opened the door and climbed on the roof of the van I heard Clarisse laugh and say "there ya go do something more stupid" "thanks" I said.
I looked at the gorgons that were gaining on us I tried to remember their names one came near I pulled out the riptide and cut one of her wings off. "Stupid Demi-god" she said as she went right the other came close while I was saying "well thank you" I accidentally cut the other one head off. I looked at the one that had one wing she charged at the vehicle to bad an arrow hit her shoulder then my sword went through her head. I looked up the hill and there was the one and only Thalia Grace I saluted to her and she saluted back "Clarisse stop" I said she came to a stop that made me fly forward and hit the cement. My vision blurred then went back to normal I felt fine but couldn't remember much a girl with wavy black hair and lightning blue eyes asked "are you okay?" "who are you?" I asked.
She helped me up then punched me in the face "gods what was that for Thalia" I said as my memories flooded back "sorry just needed you to remember and a good punch to the head doesn't hurt" she said. "Yes it does" I said we hopped in the van and drove to camp we were greeted by the campers including the seven Annabeth ran up to me and kissed me. The whole crowd snickered some Aphrodite kids were going "awww" the Aphrodite were saying "you get him girl" Annabeth pulled away then smacked me and said "don't you dare do that again Perseus Jackson" then the whole crowd went "hes in trouble" I hugged her. I said "aw there's my wise girl" she smiled then a hell hound ran out of the shadows this one was the biggest I have ever seen and had the deepest red eyes. A shadowy figure was on the back he said "Perseus Jackson give me the elixir of immortal life and I will not kill you" "Hades" I shouted "get in camp everyone" I shouted I started to run with everyone in front of me when the big hell hound tackled me I sliced at it bringing the riptide out the hell hound whimpered. "What in the world are you doing?" I asked "getting the elixir" he said "mine and it will always be mine" I shouted then ran to camp I whistled Mrs. Oleary slammed into the bigger hell hound I ran to the lake when Hades and his hell hound ran towards me I made the water flood his hell hound and him. Mrs. Oleary bounded over to me I hopped on she ran into the water knowing that I was strongest there she dived under I made an air bubble for her the other hell hound followed I made the water drown it and Hades.
We made it to shore when two hell hounds tackled Mrs. Oleary and four tackled me I killed three when a lightning bolt hit me in the head and my brain shorted out.

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Annabeth

Hades came up from the water when Zeus hit Percy in the head with lightning nothing to kill him just to knock him out Mrs. Oleary wouldn't let anyone near Percy. He was laying there while Mrs. Oleary killed everything except for the campers that came near when I started to walk over to Percy she growled at me then snapped as I jumped away. Nico came and asked "what is going on?" I said "Zeus knocked Percy out and now Mrs. Oleary won't let us get near him there after a elixir" he walked over to Mrs. Oleary and then around her to Percy when she snapped at him he jumped back. Zeus went down to try and get Percy floating in the air when Mrs. Oleary bit his arm and growled I had an idea I walked over and pulled out my dagger the whole camp gasped. Mrs. Oleary glared at me growling I put my weapon down then anything that could hurt her I walked around her to Percy she let me by looking at me. I sat by Percy and blocked any hell hound that got past Mrs. Oleary Poseidon walked out of the sea and had no weapon ran over to Percy getting past Mrs. Oleary. The ocean started to crash into the beach the earth started to shake the ocean climbed the river banks eating each hell hound and venti that were in the camp. Poseidon rumbled "you two swore on Styx that you wouldn't come after him and you broke that promise" the ocean retreated as Poseidon grabbed my arm and pulled me towards Percy, him, and Mrs. Oleary the ground erupted as five goddesses appeared and hit Zeus and Hades the two gods yelped and jumped back the ground erupted in five spots. They were the five underworld rivers and the goddesses were their controllers the two gods disappeared as the goddesses bowed to Poseidon and said "master" together.
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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OMG SO COOL...so did zues and hades die?
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Sadly no cause they are immortals
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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Ohhhhhh ok sorry didn't catch that part :O
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Actually you made me remember that I forgot about entering it in my writing
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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I will post after my homework is done
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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Ok yay :D
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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last part
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The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

Once Poseidon left with the five goddesses Percy was still unconscious healers rushed to his side and put him on a stretcher then ran to the infirmary. I followed them I fed him ambrosia and nectar he woke up his eyes were bright green "good times right" he said as he sat up "yeah except you and me are dating and Mrs. Oleary killed anything that came beside you till I put my weapons on the ground in front of her" I said. "She was protecting her master" Percy said hiding his face "whats the elixir?" I asked crossing my arms and looking at him in the eye "lets go get ice cream" he said swinging his feet down. "What is the elixir?" I said blocking his way "Annabeth if I tell you, you have to swear on Styx you won't tell anyone unless I give you permission" he said his black hair covering his eyes as he looked down. "I swear on Styx I won't tell anyone unless you give me permission now tell me" I said grabbing his arm he looked up and a hint of sadness showed. He got up and dragged me to the beach and said "Annabeth the elixir is hurtful but turns me into a god it will hurt me more then becoming a god by well directly by the gods" he said when we were in a deep part of the forest. Some gasps came from behind a bush "who's there?" Percy asked then tackled the bush he pulled out Leo, Jason, Piper, Hazel, Frank, and the Stolls. "I told you to be quiet" Jason said to the Stolls he dropped them in the middle "swear on Styx you won't tell anyone" he snapped grabbing Leo as he tried to run.
"Oops" Travis said he had his phone out Percy glared at him the ran deeper into the forest as my phone rang from a new text I looked at it and Travis had said in the text 'Percy has an offering from the gods to become immortal tell everyone!;]'
"Travis!" I shouted. I tried to run after Percy but Jason grabbed my ankle "Annabeth lets all go even though Travis should be killed by a monster lets all go" he said. Once they all were up Clarisse ran through the bushes with alot of the campers with phones she saw I was on the verge of tears and noticed Percy was gone. Picking up a rock she hit Travis on the head with it and said "lets go find him" we ran through the forest till the end of camp Percy was fighting off millions of monsters I saw Grover just walk into view on the other side he jumped and yelled "go Percy!" a kid around 10 stepped beside him I was to surprised to even move Percy was holding off millions of them. The little boy by Grover screamed every monster turned to him Percy charged killing all of the first row I noticed his eyes weren't his normal color they were the colors of the five underworld rivers Grover noticed to then pulled the kid into camp campers stepped around the kid in a protective huddle. Once the monsters were all finished off Percy's eyes turned normal I ran to him and hugged him I felt arms wrap around me he said "its okay Annabeth its okay" tears ran down my face I said "you're not mad."
His arms loosened then went back he said "I am not mad" I let go and he stumbled a bit I helped him walk to camp everyone looked at him curiously Clarisse walked up to help. Someone clapped then the whole camp went up in applause congratulating Percy.
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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Omg so awesome
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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Can you make it to where annabeth and Percy get married or....ummm....oh idk or maybe even nico and Thalia could hook up that would be pretty funny
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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Lol awesome post soon :D
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over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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Yay.....it's my b day :O
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Really cool happy bday having to retype whole chapter
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over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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Thx lol can't wait to read
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The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

"That was...Fun" Percy said walking to camp I laced my hands through his and laid my head on his broad shoulders "I love you and don't want anything to happen to you" I said "thats great Annabeth you know we have been together for" he paused to count on his fingers "that doesn't matter Percy the only thing that matters is that I love you and you love me" I said putting his hand down. He smiled and hugged me I looked up at his green eyes and said "why would any girl want to let you go" his grin widened. "In fact enough to make any girl love you when they lay eyes on you" I said he leaned down and kissed my forehead then put his against mine "what do you do when you get tickled?" he asked I smiled and said "kiss the guy that I love." "Let me see" he said as he tickled my stomach I laughed and kissed him he stopped and wrapped his arms around my waist I put my arms around his neck. Someone coughed Percy turned his head "oh hey Frank just-" "trying to swallow her" Leo said as he walked over Jason laughed and said "there ya go." "Just cause you two have no sense of love doesn't mean you tease me" Percy said "is it true that the gods gave you a elixir for immortality?" Leo asked jumping up and down "Percy he is an idiot don't listen to him" I said gripping onto Percy's shirt. "Annabeth I got to go talk to someone" he said looking at my eyes pleadingly "no Percy you can talk to that person later" I said "can you tell us your adventures and defeating Kronos?" Leo asked.
Percy sat in his spot and I sat by him laying my head on his shoulder as he started to tell the long story I fell asleep and had one weird dream.

"Percy don't leave" I begged "Annabeth if I come out alive then everything will be fine okay?" Percy said "okay" I said not wanting to lose him. I ran forward with the seven as we ran into a building that looked like it was in the middle of a forest a guard blocked us then strikes at me Percy leaped forward and cut the guards hand then punched the guard in the face. "Thanks" I said then Percy grabbed Jason and threw him in then the rest of us we fell into a deep hole and Percy looked happy and walked off. Leaving us screaming for help the scene changed to a dark room I had been crying Gaea said "see Percy will join me no matter what you do even if you make him swear on Styx not to Annabeth Percy is using you trying to make you love him more. Cause he wants to spend the last months of his life are good you can't change fate Annabeth dear" she said "he wouldn't" I said "yes he would you two can live through this join me Annabeth" she said. "There are millions of possible explanations so no" I said she looked at me and said "he is helping me awaken Annabeth" I said "no you forced him to."

"Hey! I'm not that boring" Percy said "well you made her fall asleep Percy yes you are!" Jason said "I have defeated you once Shocky I can beat you again" Percy said I smiled and sat up. "I am never telling stories again you are mean falling asleep Annabeth" Percy scolded me.
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over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
YAY SO AWESOME
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I know you like just posted but please post soon XD
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The Mark Of Athena
Jason

It was funny watching Percy get mad and when I noticed Annabeth was asleep then he found out and started to scold her. "Percy it was Gaea I'm telling you she-" Annabeth started "gods when is Gaea going to just leave" he said. Then dirt started to float up and formed a lady "go away Gaea" Percy pleaded. "Perseus Jackson you will join my side" she said "or what" Percy snapped. "I can make you and your family immortal and take the weight off your real fathers hands so he can spend time with you anything you desire. Nothing your grandmother can't do" Gaea said "no I can do anything I want I'd rather die" Percy said.
"Wish granted Perseus" she said her tone was deadly the earth rumbled as earth born came up it kept rumbling. The only person that was unaffected was Percy he was standing I heard him shout "I wish these monsters will only hurt me." I saw every monster turn towards him "what are you doing Percy!" I shouted. "Saving your lives" he shouted back I started to get up when Gaea turned to me and said "its no use." "Yes it is" I said I started to get into the air "hey Annabeth I got a plan but you might think it is the most idiotic thing I've done" Percy said as the earth born stumbled towards him. Annabeth looked like she was in thought then she looked to Percy who was running towards the earth born. I heard Percy shout "HEY ZEUS I HEARD THAT YOUR SO OLD THAT YOU CAN'T WALK. ALSO THAT YOUR SO FAT THAT YOU USE YOUR MASTER BOLT TO SCRATCH YOUR BACK."
"Does he want to die?" I asked Annabeth "no he is just an idiot" she said smiling a large bolt came flying at Percy as he went into a baseball slide under the monsters. The bolt killed millions of them then Percy shouted "HEY HADES I HEARD YOUR SO WEAK THAT YOU HAVE THE UNDEAD HELP YOU OUT OF BED. I ALSO HEARD THAT YOU AND THE DEVIL HAVE SO MUCH IN COMMON THAT THEY CALL YOU THE IDIOTIC DEVIL." Undead came up from the ground and started to go for Percy with lightning Percy then shouted "HEY ATREMIS I HEARD YOUR SO LONELY THAT YOU TAKE IT OUT ON YOUR HUNTERS. AND IS IT TRUE THAT YOU MAKE YOUR HUNTERS WORK MORE THAN YOU DO."
Arrows started to fly at him he dodged every one lightning and the undead were killing every monster he stabbed andkilled the undead then ran to the beach and dived. Lightning tried to strike at the water but the water swallowed the lightning whole after that only arrows were trying to hit Percy. The hunters were by the waters side. Percy jumped out of the water and made a hurricane. Every camper ran to their cabins. I tried to make the winds stop when I got some to stop Percy made them pick up then I saw what Percy was doing Oceanus was approaching Percy with a weight net. I made the winds speed up to help out Oceanus looked like he was starting to fall. Oceanus threw the net Percy made a quick swing the net and Percy's sword met with a clang.
Percy's arm started to shake I noticed the winds were to strong around Percy they were staring to draining the water from Percy's hurricane. "Percy put more water in it!" I shouted he shouted back "Oceanus is taking it all wait put more wind in it." I added more wind wondering what he was doing when suddenly Percy had all the water around him.

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over a year ago Aphrodite100 said…
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lol!! post the rest soon!!
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over a year ago Aphrodite100 said…
that was great! thanks!
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over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Jason

It was funny watching Percy get mad and when I noticed Annabeth was asleep then he found out and started to scold her. "Percy it was Gaea I'm telling you she-" Annabeth started "gods when is Gaea going to just leave" he said. Then dirt started to float up and formed a lady "go away Gaea" Percy pleaded. "Perseus Jackson you will join my side" she said "or what" Percy snapped. "I can make you and your family immortal and take the weight off your real fathers hands so he can spend time with you anything you desire. Nothing your grandmother can't do" Gaea said "no I can do anything I want I'd rather die" Percy said.
"Wish granted Perseus" she said her tone was deadly the earth rumbled as earth born came up it kept rumbling. The only person that was unaffected was Percy he was standing I heard him shout "I wish these monsters will only hurt me." I saw every monster turn towards him "what are you doing Percy!" I shouted. "Saving your lives" he shouted back I started to get up when Gaea turned to me and said "its no use." "Yes it is" I said I started to get into the air "hey Annabeth I got a plan but you might think it is the most idiotic thing I've done" Percy said as the earth born stumbled towards him. Annabeth looked like she was in thought then she looked to Percy who was running towards the earth born. I heard Percy shout "HEY ZEUS I HEARD THAT YOUR SO OLD THAT YOU CAN'T WALK. ALSO THAT YOUR SO FAT THAT YOU USE YOUR MASTER BOLT TO SCRATCH YOUR BACK."
"Does he want to die?" I asked Annabeth "no he is just an idiot" she said smiling a large bolt came flying at Percy as he went into a baseball slide under the monsters. The bolt killed millions of them then Percy shouted "HEY HADES I HEARD YOUR SO WEAK THAT YOU HAVE THE UNDEAD HELP YOU OUT OF BED. I ALSO HEARD THAT YOU AND THE DEVIL HAVE SO MUCH IN COMMON THAT THEY CALL YOU THE IDIOTIC DEVIL." Undead came up from the ground and started to go for Percy with lightning Percy then shouted "HEY ATREMIS I HEARD YOUR SO LONELY THAT YOU TAKE IT OUT ON YOUR HUNTERS. AND IS IT TRUE THAT YOU MAKE YOUR HUNTERS WORK MORE THAN YOU DO."
Arrows started to fly at him he dodged every one lightning and the undead were killing every monster he stabbed andkilled the undead then ran to the beach and dived. Lightning tried to strike at the water but the water swallowed the lightning whole after that only arrows were trying to hit Percy. The hunters were by the waters side. Percy jumped out of the water and made a hurricane. Every camper ran to their cabins. I tried to make the winds stop when I got some to stop Percy made them pick up then I saw what Percy was doing Oceanus was approaching Percy with a weight net. I made the winds speed up to help out Oceanus looked like he was starting to fall. Oceanus threw the net Percy made a quick swing the net and Percy's sword met with a clang.
Percy's arm started to shake I noticed the winds were to strong around Percy they were staring to draining the water from Percy's hurricane. "Percy put more water in it!" I shouted he shouted back "Oceanus is taking it all wait put more wind in it." I added more wind wondering what he was doing when suddenly Percy had all the water around him.
Oceanus started to turn white Percy's eyes were closed water would touch Percy every once in a while to make him stronger Oceanus turned unimaginably pale. He retreated away from Percy he looked extremely weak Percy's eyes shot open I looked back to the water that calmed to Percy's command. Oceanus bowed to Percy and said "sorry sir" Percy smiled but when he talked it was like the gods and goddesses were saying it with him he said "never come back to hurt or harm any camper." Oceanus stumbled as he walked backward he said "your command is my wish sir" I looked at Percy's eyes they weren't his normal color they kept shifting from the gods and goddesses to his. "Percy?" I asked "yeah" he said with his normal voice as he looked down at me as he stepped out of the lake "that was so cool! you were like wow then when you spoke made me want to call you sir like him but how?!" an over hyper Leo said running up to Percy. "Help" Percy said pointing up Annabeth tackled him in a flying kiss "that was idiotic but heroic" she said "you should have seen him when he crossed the river with two gorgons, and when he drank gorgon blood not knowing which side it was from. Also the time he-" Frank was interrupted by Percy "no more that's enough your going to give her a heart attack" Hazel started looking at the paling Annabeth "fell off the ice oh and don't forget the time he killed Polybotes with Terminus oh my gods we have to tell her about the qeust Frank" Hazel said "no we don't" Percy said. "Quest Perseus Jackson what quest" Annabeth said glaring at Percy "you didn't tell her about the dangerous quest well lets tell her" Frank said. "I waste my time trying to find you when your on a quest" Annabeth said "well I'm sorry Hera took my memories and all I thought about was you" Percy said. "Yeah Percy lets go blame it on the queen of gods" Annabeth said "okay Hera can you come here I need to ask you something" Percy said then a bright light appeared in front of him and Hera appeared. "Percy I didn't mean literally" Annabeth said glaring at Hera "why did you drop me off at that camp?" Percy asked Hera "so I could combine the camps to fight Gaea" she said. "Hear that it wasn't my fault it was hers" he said to Annabeth Hera smiled and said "next time I take his memory it will be Reyna he will remember." Percy threw the riptide at Hera's head but I jumped in front with my sword blocking "I would have wanted to remember her" I said "I would like to stay with Annabeth" he said.
"Reyna would be better cause she doesn't always cry about her lost friend" I said Nico leaped out of nowhere in front of Percy blocking him from me. "No Percy hes trying to get you mad" he said "it worked and I should have known Reyna said that I wouldn't understand that he is an idiot" Percy said. I went for Nico's back when Percy pulled him forward out of my reach Percy was glaring at me then went for his sword Annabeth said "don't Percy your better then this lets go get you into some dry clothes."
He gave me a I'm going to kill you later look as he turned and walked off with Annabeth I heard murmurs like 'what's wrong with Jason its like he's jealous.' Piper and Leo walked over as the campers left Piper asked "what were you doing?" I said "I don't know its like I just couldn't hold it in anymore and made Percy angry" I said "your welcome" a voice said behind me I turned to face a guy with sunglasses on with a leather jacket, jeans and a black shirt. "Ares I said "yep and its better out then in" he said "you made me on Percy's kill later list how is that good" I said "hey he's not much" Ares said "he kicked your but" Leo said. "That doesn't matter he just needs to be shocked be Jason's moves" he said smiling then "I will be watching beat him till he cry's."
The next day Percy was practicing in the sword arena I walked over he stopped and glared at me I walked to the opposite side of the arena then started to act like I was practicing. He was slicing at every dummy in half about after an hour he dumped water on himself I walked over and said "I challenge you." Every camper stopped to watch the battle Percy and me walked in circles around each other he wasn't really in a fighting position he was just walking. I charged him when I thought he wasn't paying attention but he jumped into a perfect position with his sword in the right place I made the winds push me back. I saw Ares on the side of the arena Percy must have saw him to Percy looked like he was about to explode I couldn't hold myself back.
"Your so annoying you took Reyna, my job, and my life!" I shouted "I don't want that I want to live here Jason you have it back I can't do it" he said. I glared at him if I hadn't learned a thing in the roman camp was never let your guard down he showed not a single piece of fear of me. "Why don't you fear me?!" I shouted as lightning boomed "I fought better than you Jason don't let Ares get to you" he said he was totally calm. "Ugh your so hard to break I like that" I said making lightning fly at him he blocked it with water which just swallowed my bolt. "Your girlfriend is so annoying all she talks about is you" I said trying to make him angry but it just did opposite "I think your mom's an idiot just like you" I said not able to calm down. "You say that one more time you will die Jason Grace" he said "your mom's probably an idiot like you" I said not able to resist. Percy ran to Ares and started to slice at him finally Ares was cut on the heart but stayed I calmed a bit I made lightning fly at Percy there was no water around when there was a shield of water. The lightning hit the water then Percy flew towards me his sword flew out of his hand I put my foot on his chest and my sword above my head ready to finish this when he tripped me by pulling my foot from the ground. I hit the cement and made a cut on his forehead a long one two it didn't kill him he sat on my grabbing my sword arm and gripping it harshly my sword came out of my hand clattering onto the ground. Blood started to run into his eyes from his wound I still wasn't scratched my lungs started to fill with water I scrambled to get him off the pain was unbearable I started to scream. When he stopped I noticed Nico, Thalia, Annabeth, Clarisse, and some undead were pulling him off. I turned onto my stomach and coughed up water Piper and Leo walked over to me Leo said "wow you totally lost" I looked over to Percy who was yelling at Thalia then stormed off to the ocean Annabeth glared at me then followed Percy.
"Stupid Ares" I said as Thalia walked over glaring at me she started to scold me "Jason what were you thinking you could have died if I didn't get a break from hunting you know better then to mess with Percy." I sat up uncomfortably and said "it was Ares he made me want to kill Percy" Clarisse and Nico walked over "Percy's not coming up for a while" Nico said Annabeth stormed over and growled "I hope your happy Percy won't come up or let anyone down." "Annabeth I'm sorry Ares made my old feelings of Percy come through" I said "come on lets go see what hes doing" Thalia said we walked over to the lake grabbed a canoe and started to go around the lake. When we got to the middle of the lake we saw Percy sitting there talking to a naiad "time for a swim uncle please let us have air Jason needs to apologize" Thalia said then flipped the canoe I fell in the water and started to swim towards Percy. I was freaked out cause I was running out of air but then a bubble went around our heads and I took a breath Percy had seen us I reached him with Thalia. "What do you want?" he snapped I said "Percy I'm sorry I don't know what happened" I said "I do you jerk" he said "Percy Ares just made his real feelings show" Thalia said.
"I don't care he could have stopped and ignored Ares" he said "Percy you can do that he can't" Thalia said "everyone does it! Thalia you can! Annabeth can! everyone can! he didn't need to bring my mom into it. The monsters are starting to attack her when I'm not around the gods are taking turns staying there to protect her and Paul" he said. "Yes squirt they are and that means dad is gone more often with her and more time for me to kill you" a voice said from behind Percy "I can do without you bothering me Triton!" Percy shouted. "Why don't you introduce me to your friends?" Triton asked he had two tails instead of feet and legs and razor sharp teeth Greek armor and a sword "I don't want to meet you" I said.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Thanks I going to put a sneak peek
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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over a year ago Aphrodite100 said…
great chapter! post soon!
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Jason

Triton walked over to Thalia and said "especially your lady friend" Percy said "Triton that is Emma and she has a huge crush on you" Triton said "well I have one on her to so." Triton leaned down then jumped back in surprise he had a little burnt part on his armor Percy started to crack up Thalia said "its not Emma its Thalia daughter of Zeus and I'm a hunter you idiot." Triton hissed showing his many sharp teeth he went for Thalia a sword pushed through his shoulder as me and Thalia were pushed up by the water. I looked down to see the half brothers slashing at each other "we need to get the archers, hunters, and all the campers" Thalia said after we did that the archers started to shot at mermen who were starting to invade camp. A fight broke out when Percy's and Triton's fight came on top of the water "STOP!!!!!" Poseidon said emerging from the water "shut up and let your kids fight barnacle face" a merman shouted from some of the few that were tied up. "Horrible language and that's not nice" Percy said as he started to free style to the beach when Triton threw a net over Percy "finally I get spot as number one" Triton said. "Triton was that my weight net?" Poseidon asked "yes it was and I got the key" Triton said "you were so stupid to even think about that with Annabeth at camp" Thalia said stepping aside. All the campers parted for an angry Annabeth who was running at full speed and jumped directly on Triton "GIVE ME THE STUPID KEY YOU IDIOTIC MERIDIOT" she screamed digging her dagger to the struggling Triton. She finally dived with something that glimmered gold I floated above the water where she went under and saw her untangling Percy from the net I couldn't see much but Triton was sitting on a rock wrapping his wounds in sea weed I heard a gasp for air followed by someone coughing I looked back down and saw Annabeth trying to keep her and an unconscious Percy afloat. I slipped in the water and put Percy's other arm around my shoulders we started to swim back to shore. When our feet touched the warm sand people grabbed Percy from us then helped us out of the water Annabeth laid on Percy cause of his warmth.
After around 30 minutes Percy's eyes opened and Annabeth kissed him before he could say a word Piper was leaning on my shoulder and Thalia was sitting by me the whole camp got the day off so the were having a lake party. Thalia, Piper, and I left Percy and Annabeth to their make out session to go enjoy the lake right when we stepped in currents and wind pushed me and Piper face to face people started to chant "kiss kiss kiss kiss" over and over I leaned in and touched Piper's soft lips best day ever I thought.
over a year ago Aphrodite100 said…
great chappie!!!
over a year ago Kaw21dx said…
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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Thx guys I will post in a few hours homework first though
over a year ago oceanlover123 said…
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