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The Heroes of Olympus The Mark Of Athena by horse22133454

horse22133454 posted on Dec 10, 2011 at 05:43PM
All the characters belong to Rick Riordan I do not own The Mark Of Athena it rightfully belongs to Rick Riordan

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The seven
The gods
The camps
The monsters

Summary: The seven unite to save the gods and some boundaries are pushed Gaea is rising and the seven need to stop her.
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over a year ago universalpowa said…
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yayz first reply!!
anyays...


u should set it up first like this... u HAVE to say all the characters belong to rick riordan and stuff.... or copyrtight isssues may delete the forum.. i think

so go like dis

Copyright- R.R
Characters- (character names)
Synopsis- (what happens- summary)
THEn post your chapter after it
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
chapter 1
Percy


I couldn't wait to see Annabeth as the ship descended

I could picture Annabeths blond hair down to her

shoulders and her gray eyes. A few more minutes I

thought as a ladder was thrown off the side of the boat

a boy with blond hair and bright blue eyes floated off

the side. "Jason!" Renya yelled "so I'm taking a good

guess thats Jason" I whispered to Renya "yes you idiot"

she whispered harshley. Then an guy that looked like an

elf came down the ladder, a girl with choppy brown hair

by his side. Renya and I walked over to the three "hello

I'm--" I started but was interrupted "don't feed me to

the loins!" "shut up Leo"the girl said "what lions?" I

asked Leo. Renya was just standing there and staring at

Jason "Renya, Renya" I whispered and finally nudged her

"wha" she almost yelled "its not nice to stare" I said.

I was tackled as a course of electric ran through my

body "Percy where have you been" "here of course and

Thalia" "yeah" " get off of me" I said as I struggled

to get up and finally got her off. "Wait where is

Annabeth?" I grabbed Leo and Jason as they tried to run

"she is at camp?" Leo said slowley "yeah she was sick

with the flu when we left"Jason said. "Okay so can we

take a tour of the ship?" asked "sure"they all said

together "oh and i'm piper"said the girl. All eight of

us climbed up the ladder and I was tackled with a lot

more hugs then I expected even Clarisse gave me a hug

but I couldn't breath but I don't think she was wanting

to I think it was a dare from someone. Finally we got to

the rooms people were sleeping in some

"lebmepgotsapyhittopseaweepbwain&&qu­ot; I herd a girl say

"Annabeth?" "no!" Leo, Jason, and Piper yelled as I ran

through the door and I saw five guards and Annabeth tied

up in the corner wth a gag "I told you guys to just keep

her down here until she calmed down" "well she tried to

jump off the boat and kill us and someone told us you

said to tie her up." "Seaweeybranwheyhesouybean"as I

made way to Annabeth a tired voice said "stop right

there Perseus Jackson f you don't want to die leave

right now" "Gaea" I grumbled and everyone was looking at

me and then Gaea said "attack Perseus guards" then they

attacked.


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At least one comment then I will write the second

chapter
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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ok thanks universalpowa
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over a year ago universalpowa said…
^ ur wlecome :D

post soon! :D
btw, u should probably space things out

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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
Ok

I will

u are very nice
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
The Mark Of Athena

Percy

Just as they charged he had just enough time to pull out the riptde

and dodged the first slice and blocked the second hit with his own

sword. The others were just staring at me and the guards "you can

help you know" the word seemed to put them to action and all of them

pulled out their weapons just as it looked like we were winning some

earth born popped out of the ground. "I got the earth born Percy you

get Annabeth" then two earth born popped out of the ground by

Annabeth and two of the campers stood blocking me from Annabeth.

The campers were shaking from head to toe so I just hit them both on

their helmets and knocked them out the earth born charged I felt the

water in the pipes and concentrated. He felt a his gut tighten and the

pipes exploded drenching everyone and making a distraction for the

earth born and making the earth born disappear with his sword. He ran

to Annabeth and untying her when he was finished she tackled him and

kissed him and he heard giggling and laughing behind him but he

didn't care he was with Annabeth and hats all that mattered. When she

finally pulled away she asked "where have you been seaweed brain?"

"well why do you ask that because I've been here" "well as much as I

like to see couples reunited we've all been called to the deck" Piper

said. So we all rushed up to deck and there was fights breaking out

all over deck and the ground "whats going on?!" I yelled at the top

of my lungs. But that didn't seem to get their attention and they

started to pull out their weapons so he made a huge wave and crashed

it on both land and water and drenched all of them. They all turned

their heads slowly to him "now someone tell me whats going on" he

calmly said.


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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

Finally someone spoke up from the greek side "well octopus tried to

attack me" "its octivan" said a freaky looking dude with sandy hair

and that was so thin he looked like a pine needle but he reminded her

of luke.She pushed herself into Percys chest she couldn't look at the

guy so called octivan "its okay" percy whispered in her ear "we will

discuss this later" Percy shouted into the crowd "but romans show the

greeks around and do not fight." "I'll show Leo and Piper around"

Jason exclaimed "I want you to tell me what happend when you were

gone" she exclaimed to Percy "so in other words you want me to show

you around" Percy said. Then she raised her lips to his and kissed him.



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over a year ago percabeth-bcz7 said…
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i think...... it was AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! post again soon!:)
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

Finally someone spoke up from the greek side "well octopus tried to

attack me" "its octivan" said a freaky looking dude with sandy hair

and that was so thin he looked like a pine needle but he reminded her

of Luke.She pushed herself into Percys chest she couldn't look at the

guy so called octivan "its okay" percy whispered in her ear "we will

discuss this later" Percy shouted into the crowd "but romans show the

greeks around and do not fight." "I'll show Leo and Piper around"

Jason exclaimed "I want you to tell me what happened when you were

gone" she told Percy "so in other words you want me to show

you around" Percy said as he smiled. Then she raised her lips to his

and kissed him. We walked around the camp and then we walked to the

city but right before we entered a statue said "weapons please" and

this little girl that was about six held out an tray full of

weapons "are you sure this is safe" she asked Percy "because thats a

little girl." Percy just grinned and put the riptide in the bin "its

safe she is an trained professional" said the statue "oh this is

terminus he protects the city borders and just put your dagger in the

bin"Percy said. So she took out her dagger and put it in the bin. As

they walked into the city someone ran up to Percy and said "praetor

Jackson a fight broke out by the collesuem." Percy glanced at me and

asked "between who?" "the oracle and augury" "okay lets go." When

they got there Octavian had a dagger in one hand and all the romans

shouting "kill her, kill her" but when they saw Percy they shut

up. "Who started it?" Percy shouted and even I was sacred for a

second then Rachel spoke up "he did" and pointed to Octavian.
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Annabeth

"Why and how do you have a dagger Octavian?" Percy asked with an

annoyed look on his face "well its a cute story actually I snuck

it past the borders when you two were talking to terminus" and you

could tell this guy was wanting to kill Percy and all of the greeks

the way his voice sounded and the way he looked at us. "Well cute

story here to your going to give me the dagger now" Percy said

getting impatient and held out his hand his eyes glaring at

Octavian. Octavian sighed and it looked like he was giving it up one

second then tried to slice Percys hand and Percy was to quick and

dodged the attempted attack. Somehow the the ground erupted with

water hitting only Octavian in the face and Percy had enough time

to grab the dagger and walk ten paces away when the water stopped all

the romans were staring at Percy than Octavian. "That was so cool"

someone shouted from the roman crowd whispers expolded from both

crowds when she looked where Percy was supposed to be he was already

down the hill talking to a girl that was wearing a bed sheet. She

looked at the ground beneath and feet started to sink "Percy!" she

said urgently he looked up and saw her sinking. He ran as fast as he

could and the whispers stopped the ground beneath her was already up

to her shoulders and it covered her head just as Percy made it to

her. "Your here for special keeping" someone it was Gaea.



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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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im bored so im just going to keep writting
over a year ago horse22133454 said…


The Mark Of Athena
Piper


She watched as Percy ran up the hill and Annabeth sink into the

ground as Annabeths head sank under the ground. "Hazel can you find

Annabeth?" Percy sounded so worried "sorry can't find her" "Percy

come on" Renya said as she put an hand on his back Percy was just

staring where his girlfriend disappeared his face looked lost Hazel

and Frank walked by Percys sides and trying to cheer him up ugg how

she wished Jason would be like Percy Annabeth was so lucky she

thought. Later that day they Reyna called an senate meeting when she

walked into the senate house she saw Percy in his chair in the front

of the room head in his hands crying so hard and Reyna, Hazel, and

Frank was by his side whispering to him about how their going to find

her. She walked up to them and said "Percy I'm so sorry about

Annabeth" I just couldn't see him like this even though I just met

the guy. When everyone was here they had got Percy to stop crying

"okay all we know is that there are seven demigods who have to stop

Gaea's forces does anyone know who those seven are. "I know three of

the seven they are me,Hazel, and Frank" Percy said " and me, Piper,

and Leo" Jason said "but who is the seventh" asked Renya "its easy

Athena's daughter, Annabeth" Percy said hanging his head and his

voice cracking. "Can you tell us the prophecy, Rachel?" she asked

"Wisdom's Daughter walks alone,

the mark of Athena burns through Rome

the son of Poseidon shall have a choice

to make mother earth sleep or awake

the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way

and friends shall decide his fate"

At the end Rachel slumped in her chair Percy looked shocked at the

end of the son of Poseidon shall have a choice and the

the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way part then

Reyna said "this meeting is

over."

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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Piper

At dinner that night Reyna was running around asking "where is

Percy?" but when she came up to us I said "no but do you want me to

go find him?" "yes please."




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over a year ago percabeth-bcz7 said…
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AWESOME ;) POST SOON!!!!!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
The Mark Of Athena
Piper

At dinner that night Reyna was running around asking "where is

Percy?" but when she came up to us I said "no but do you want me to

go find him?" "Yes please." "Were going to" Leo said "wait what are

We doing?" Leo asked "finding Percy" Reyna said "okay so were finding

Percy ya know some people call him" Reyna glared at him and he shut up

"I know what they call him and once someone says one o those names I

Will kill them" Leo was already against the wall "sorry, sorry" "okay

Well any idea where he could be?" Jason asked trying to get Reyna to

Look away from Leo. "Try the ocean or the sword arena" "okay."

When we were heading towards the ocean and a huge wave climbed into

the air at the sword arena "I'm thinking hes over there" Leo said "no

hes over there at the cafe" I said sarcastically. "Lets go look" Leo

said hopefully when we finally reached Percy he was fighting with

Medusa "stop fighting it Percy you know you want join Gaea" "I killed

you once I can kill you again" then Medusa spotted them at the same

time Percy did. "Close your eyes" Percy yelled but just as Medusa's

Snakes flew up and eyes turned gray a huge wave followed Percys

command and blocked their eyes but then she realized Jason and Leos

eyes were closed and the wave was only blocking her eyes. She closed

her eyes as soon as the wave went down "come on kids open your eyes

and let us see your precious eyes."
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over a year ago universalpowa said…
^ umm... hey horse? u know thats MY prophecy i wrote.... so plz write ur own.....or tell them it was mine (it says so on my mark of athena :D)

i dont mean to be rude, but i wrote that prophecy and the only two lines i didn't write were the first two; "Wisdom's Daughter walks alone, the Mark of Athena burns through Rome" - Rick Riordan
the other lines were mine so at the top u have to write "Adapted by Universal's Mark of Athena" becuz then its a copyright issue..sorry
so yeah... otherwise it was good.. :)
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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yeah srry I couldn't think of one and your a really good writter
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Frank

This Leo guy was really starting to tick him off first he makes Hazel

flirt then he goes and find Percy so hes ether trying to be stupid

are hes trying to take the two other people except for dad. But Hazel

said after ten seconds that he was gone "lets go look for them"but

when I try to argue she just stands and walks away. When we find them

Leo, Jason, and Piper were standing there eyes were closed and Leo

was shaking like an earthquake "close your eyes frank" Percy shouted

"w-ahh" but then he didn't argue there was Medusa standing in front

of Piper and shut his eyes. "Open your eyes I just want to see your"

then dust flew over him and Percy standing there grinning "so whats

the party for?" "are you crazy" "I'm just a having a normal day"

"hey Percy" Leo said walking over Percy must of seen him scrunch up

his fists because he got a hit in the stomach "offff" "why did you

say and I quote 'I killed you once and I can kill you again'" "well I

killed her once what did you not get." Leos eyes Widened at that

thought and Percy just walked away like it was no big deal.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Frank

Leo was asking Percy a lot of questions "how many monsters have you

fought?" and then Percy answered "millions of them and I fought two

titans and a god" "whoa did you lose any fight?" Jason asked joining

in "I'm still alive aren't I" "what god did you fight?" Piper asked

"Ares" Percy answered happily. That gained him an surprised look on

all their faces including him "did you hurt him as much as I want to?"

he himself asked Percy "yes I defeated your dad by hitting him in the

ankle" Percy grinned "why do you want to hurt your dad?" Leo asked.

"I don't like him" he told Frank "hey where is Hazel?" Percy asked

"well she is right ther-" he scanned the group she was gone "the sea"

Percy said quickly "what?" the rest asked in usion but Percy was

jotting down the center to the ocean. When they reached the ocean

line Percy was yelling at an Iris message "well you could have told

Annabeth!" Hazel was trying to separate Percy from the message and

he knew who was on the other side of the message. He was trying to

help Hazel but when he turned into an elephant sea water pushed

him back "Percy come on take a step away from the message" Piper said

sweetly everyone took a step back from the message except for Piper

and Percy. "Stay out of this charm speaker" Percys voice sounded

harsh "Percy I swore on river Styx not to tell anyone" "wait is that

a dress in the background aww Nico found his fit" "haha its not for

me its for you" a door creaked open in the background and someone was

thrown in. "Annabeth" Percy said letting an air of relief out "Percy

Nico?" Annabeth asked "tell slime head to shut up" Nico said "tell

bonehead to shut up and smack him for me" Percy said " Hazel you hit

Percy" Annabeth said as she smacked Nico "and Percy you know where

this is where Grover" "almost got married" Percy finished for

Annabeth. "Oh and don't forget to give a big hug to your husband"

Percy said to Nico a smile played across his lips "okay I'll see you

down the aisle in a few months Percy don't forget the dress for

Annabeth" "haha very funny bye" Percy said as a smile sild across his

lips "bye" Nico said as Percy waved a hand over the Iris Message.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Jason


All the girls at camp seemed to like this Percy he could understand

why this guy defeated a god, and two titans. "Percy!" Reyna yelled as

she reached him she kissed him on the cheek and turned bright red "how

did this happen" Piper said sweetly "well hes just so h-annoying

that he makes me worried." Darn. "Piper you were so close" Leo said

"you how you take my spot and you get admired by all the girls and

you get a kiss from Reyna" all the anger pulled up inside of him he

pulled out his sword and charged.



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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Jason


All the girls at camp seemed to like this Percy he could understand

why this guy defeated a god, and two titans. "Percy!" Reyna yelled as

she reached him she kissed him and turned bright red "how did this

happen" Piper said sweetly "well hes just so h-annoying

that he makes me worried." Darn. "Piper you were so close" Leo said

"you how you take my spot and you get admired by all the girls and

you get a kiss from Reyna" all the anger pulled up inside of him he

pulled out his sword and charged. He was hopping to get the guy off

his guard but that didn't happen Percy blocked his first hit with the

Riptide "what are you doing your acting like a kid" "I'm not a kid"

I yelled in his face "then stop acting like one." "I don't think you

will win Percy" he heard Octavian yell from the crowd then Octavian

started to chant his name and the greek started to chant "Percy,

Percy" now Leo, Piper, Hazel, and Frank began to shout "Percy, Percy."

But when Leo saw him Leo started to say "Jason" and Piper did to and

both attacked Hazel and Frank now he had to just get this guy out of

the water that Percy was backing up to so he shot lightning at Percy

to make him go away from the water but Percy was already in the

water. Percy shot high pressure water at him the water hit him in

the face something whispered in his ear "hes invincible in the water"

and a dome rose above us that was made of sand and water. Percy had

him on the ground and his sword point at his chin "I don't play when

it comes to swords" he said calmly to him "that was fun lets do it

again sometime" he finished smiling like nothing happened. Reyna ran

up to Jason and was about to smack him when Percy said "he was just

playing let him try he won't win" all the greeks were cheering and Leo

and Piper were on the ground with Frank and hazel on them. The rest

of the day all the greeks were trying to win against Percy Hazel

walked up to him at the end of the day and asked "what were you

thinking?" "I was thinking I could defeat the famous Percy Jackson" I

reminded her I looked back down the hill when the stoll brothers were

running up to us and they both asked "do you want to try to take down

Percy in the ultimate battle?" "Yes" I said with enthusiasm "come on

Hazel it will be fun" "you mean pay back for you" I shook my head

"fine."
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Jason

As all the Greeks walked off to go to wait in the bushes with Hazel

and him as Clarisse was getting soaked when he finished her off he

walked away to get a drink of water. I watched him start to drink

of his water bottle and pour it on himself even tough it didn't get

him wet "charge" Clarisse yelled at the top of her lungs we all ran

out of the bushes into mud and we all were caught on it trying to

free ourselves and one by one we all got free of the mud and Percy was

in the middle of the ring cracking up. "What the heck happened?" I

asked him "thanks guys but it doesn't work that way here because of

the water" then they all turned to the supplies all the water bottles

were empty and the big water filler was still pouring out water. A

ocean light brightened the evening and a god appeared "Neptune" Percy

said bowing "hey Percy" Neptune turned around to see campers sinking

in mud "what happened here?" Neptune asked "oh ask mister smart guy"

Clarisse grumbled "uh there so clumsy they tried to sneak attack me

but I got curios because they only took their swords" Percy answered.

"Ah" all the Greeks said at once "well we got more serious matters

then that we are going to have a spy on our hands" Neptune exclaimed

"again!how this is ridiculous at first its sel-" Percy stopped

because Clarisse was glaring at him. Thunder boomed in the sky "well

I got to go" Neptune finished.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Hazel

"Leo looks and acts like Sammy" she said to Percy once she got out of

his trap "well you never know Hazel he could be Sammy's grandson"

"well hes funny like Sammy and has those elf ears like Sammy" "watch

out Frank" "what whoa" Frank yelled as he sank in the mud. "Why is

everyone except you have mud on them" "mud bath" Percy said "my

specialty then Clarisse said "Jackson you are dead" while a guy about

her age was helping her out. "What she means to say is Percy can you

help me get her out?" the guy said covered in mud from trying to help

Clarisse "sure" Percy said as he got a glob of mud in the face from

Jason. "Mud fight!" Leo yelled as he got a glob of mud to throw at

Percy all the mud rose up and copied Percys every move "okay" "run!"

everyone yelled as they tried to run but Percy clapped and the mud

flew inwards. People started to rise and she started to look for

Jason and Leo "Percy wins" she heard Leos voice beside her Percy was

over helping Clarisse out of the mud. "Whoa that was awesome but scary

how did you do that?" "water is in the dirt so I took the water and

made it come up" at the last word he flew back and hit a tree. "That

was for making me muddy" as she walked up to Percy about to punch him

a girls voice yelled "stop" and Reyna walked over to Clarisse and

Percy and shoved Clarisse. Then helped Percy up "who in the gods name

do you think you are pushing me around?" Clarisse yelled at Reyna "I

am-" Reyna started "going to go help the Greeks get out of the mud"

Percy finished then turned Reyna around and started to whisper to her.

Once they got all the campers out of the mud all of the six who were

to go on the quest Percy was leading went to go get cleaned up, to

go pack and get ready for dinner. Once she was all ready she headed

down to the dinner pavilion with Percy and Frank a yell erupted from

behind them "Praetors, Praetors" "what is going on?" Percy asked from

her side "monster spotted from the tunnel following two kids" with

that said Percy followed the guy down through the tunnel. When they

were at the entrance a minotaur was charging to two kids.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Hazel

When she looked closer the minotaur only had one horn "no, no, not

you again "stay here he said to the tunnel guys and her he jumped

into the river and swam across the minotaur smelt him and turned his

way. "Is he crazy? I've got to go help him" "he is crazy thats what

helps him live but your not going Hazel he said to stay here" the

other tunnel watcher said when she looked he had a buff body an a baby

like face "frank?" he shook his head. She didn't care what Frank said

she was going to help Percy she ran to the river and jumped in and

was immediately pushed out by the river. Percy yelled at the kids "go

across the river now!" the kids tried to run but the minotaur blocked

them "go help the kids Hazel" Frank said and sighed "Percy let me

help the kids" she yelled over the river. She saw Percy nod so she

jumped in and the water pushed her over to Percy "I'll get the

minotaur you get Geric, and Will" "okay what if the thing charges me?"

"when it gets close side step" and with that he ran up the hill and

stabbed its meaty back with the Riptide "moooo?" it mooed in question

and turned to Percy. The minotaur now must of smelt her because it

turned towards her and charged "side step now Hazel" as she did the

minotaur held out his arms and she was suddenly pulled back by

someone no she was pushed but by who. Then she noticed Percy wasn't

there she looked in the river and saw Percy fighting the minotaur in

the water but the minotaur was tearing at Percys shirt and as the

minotaur finally got Percy pinned down he must have forgot that Percy

had a sword and the Riptide went through his head. Percy laid there

for a few minutes then she walked in the river and notced he was

smiling "well it been a while since I saw that guy" Percy said. "Percy

Jackson how dare you do that!" Reyna yelled walking into the river

"and a while since I've seen that one to" he whispered low enough for

only her to hear.
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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The Mark Of Athena
Leo

When he heard the news about how Percy was defeating a minotaur he

ran to the gate to see Percy just stabbing his sword through the

minotaurs head and then Reyna pushed through him and start yelling

at Percy. "Well you could have told me" "well I was saving these

two Percy said as he put his hands on two kids shoulders. "You

don't even know who these two are" "yes I do this is Geric and this

is Will" Percy said and got smacked by Reyna. "Lupa said that we

needed to go here" Will said "Leo come here" Reyna gestured him

over. He walked over to her and she said "light up" he opened his hand

and light it on fire they both jumped back "whoa how does your hand do

that?" Geric asked. "Do what?" Reyna asked and then she looked at his

hand and jumped back "Percy!" she said urgently and Percy gestured

his hand and water drenched him. "You said light up!" he yelled at

Reyna "I meant in your head." "Welcome to camp kids I'm Percy and

I'll be your guide and I want dinner" Percy said "can I talk to you

Percy" I asked Percy and he stopped "what?" "you seem bothered Percy

and I wanted to know if it was the same reason I am" "you know whats

bothering me" "that can't be bothering you." "Well whats bothering

you?" "Dreams are bothering me Percy I go to take a nap and there they

are Gaea dreams its bothering both of us" "it is not" Percy smiled.