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The Heroes of Olympus Unexpected

percabeth13 posted on Jan 13, 2012 at 10:53PM
Percy has a twin sister!i no this has been done so many times before but just give mine a chance ok? Percabeth. NO ONE IS GETTING BANISHED!!! Annabeth just moved to new York from San Francisco. After the last olympian school year before HoO.
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over a year ago percabeth13 said…
Chapter one

Madeline
   My name is Madeline. I am 16 years old and I have black hair so long that it reaches the small of my back and emerald green eyes. I am a sophomore at Goode high school in manhattan, NY. I love ancient Greek myths. I never knew my real mother or father. Or even my own last name.
My morning started out great (hint: that was sarcasm)
        I had the weirdest dream last night. There was a mother in a hospital bed smiling down at her newborn twins one boy and one girl.( I could tell by the blankets they were wrapped in) they had black hair and emerald green eyes. The mother, who had beautiful eyes that changed colors in the light and long brown hair, looked so happy. Then all of the doctors walked out of the room as if in a trance. The woman didn't notice. Then there was a blinding light, I knew that if I were there in person I would have been reduced to a pile of ashes in mere seconds,the mother shielded her children's eyes then adverted hers. When the flash died down there was a man standing there. He had to be the children's father, for he had the same black hair and green eyes as them. He was wearing a hawaiian shirt and bermuda shorts with sailing shoes. He must have been a fisherman because he had a deep tan and strong arms. He had creases around his eyes which meant he smiled a lot, but now he wasn't smiling. He looked as if he were here to give very unfortunate news.
       The woman looked up at him smiling but it quickly disappeared as she took in his expression.
"what's wrong?" she questioned.
" they cannot stay together,they are to powerful." he said sadly. "one will be taken to a foster home. If my older brother found out that I sired not one but two  mortal heroes after our oath, he'd surely be angry. "
"but didn't he sire a daughter just a few years ago?" the woman asked him desperately.
"yes but still,  it's hard to believe that my little brother kept to the oath."
He explained."I will be back in the morning to get one of the children."
"NO! It's not fair! you come in here, not even asking their names, and tell me I can only keep one!?! Do you think that's fair!?! No it's not!" the woman cried.
"I'll be back tomorrow" he said as he disappeared with another flash. The doctors walked back in to her shielding the children's eyes and crying. She soon fell asleep holding her babies with her tears drying on her cheeks. 
The next morning, she woke up with just enough time to adjust her babies and look away before the man flashed in.
"I've always wanted a boy, take the girl. I know I'll see her again someday."
The mother said handing him the child. 
"what's her name?" he asked.
"her name ? Her name is Madeline."she replied
"and his?" he questioned looking at the still sleeping baby boy.
"his name is-" 
I woke up in a cold sweat.
It was just a dream. it was just a dream. I kept telling myself. But was it really just a dream? I was jerked from my thoughts by my foster mom, carol, shouting at me to help get the younger kids get ready for school. I got dressed and started Getting the kids ready for the first day of school.
When I got to school  there was a new student I've never seen her before so she must have  Just moved here from somewhere she had along blonde hair curled like a princesses with grey eyes. so I walked up to her. She gasped when she saw me.
"hey, is this your first day here?"I asked her.
"yes," she replied." I'm looking for my boyfriend.he goes here"
"ok I know everyone here maybe I can help you. What's his name?"
"Percy Jackson. You know, you really look like him. A lot . Like you could be twins." she told me.
"thanks? I get that a lot. Hes in my first class. Let's look at your schedule to see who you have first."I said.
"oh you've got Mr. Blofis too."I told her.
"Percy's stepdad?"she asked.
"really?" I asked a bit suprized. I mean Percy and mr. Blofis had been close and once mr.blofis called Percy 'son'. I mean he called everyone 'son, but I felt as if he really meant it.
Right as we were about to walk to class, Percy ran up.
"Annabeth!" he shouted."wait."
"Percy! Hi." annabeth said, smiling."we were just about to walk to Mr.blofis' class."
"oh really?"he asked "who's this?" 
"seriously?" I said "you still don't know me? Even after I was in your fifth grade class, your third grade class and your eighth grade class and now here for the past year"
"really?" he sounded surprised."I was kicked out of a lot of schools"
"I know I was too."I said.
"ok, well bells about to ring. Wouldn't look good if I was late to my own stepfathers class. Let's go."
When we got there I was standing next to Percy, who was standing next to Annabeth. When mr.blofis saw me he gasped. Once he regained his composure he told us to sit down. When every one was silently working, he called me and Percy into the hall.
over a year ago percabeth13 said…
What should I have him say to them?
over a year ago universalpowa said…
^ idk
maybe that sally told him something...?
once again--idk

post soon!
i think its good, but its just that its not like--real
like, percy never had a twin sister
but its good all the same!! :D
over a year ago kronosdied said…
Percy should get banished its fun post soon
over a year ago killer24 said…
you are great keep it up
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
heart
Sooo kewl. Its really good. Wait no its not good its AMAZING and AWESOME!!!!!!!! POST SOON!!
over a year ago percabeth13 said…
angry
Ok first of all I'm not banishing Percy! Why on this big green hearth would you even suggest that!?!.!
Do you want percy to become all powerful and kill everybody who turned against him?
HINT:that was a rhetorical question Percy will neverbebanished in any of my stories! Any of the stories I read that Percy gets banished in I hate with. A passion I'm sorry I you ace here expecting percy to get banished but it's in. The title: unexpected!!!!!! I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings I'm just alittle miffed that you would suggest that.
over a year ago percabeth13 said…
worried
Omg I'm soooo sorry for my rant I just had to gt that out.
over a year ago puggyluv17 said…
Wow your rant was pretty crazy but I do like only one banished story calle the banished three that ones good. And so far your story is good. But I got kinda confused whom is the new person Madeline or annabeth
over a year ago percabeth13 said…
New school year,Madeline's been there freshman year now this year, annabeth just moved from San francisco to new York.
over a year ago percabeth13 said…
Btw huge percabeth!!!
Oh and also@ puggylove17, I've read that one I think it was mean how one person could get everyone turned against him enough to banish him.
over a year ago fros4est said…
smile
wow thats a great start i love it

paul should ask them if they know about each other and they reply(your words) then paul is thinking while sending them back to class

thats what i want paul to do the rest its up to you
over a year ago percabeth13 said…
How do you guys like the name Madeline?
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
big smile
That is a gr8 name post soon
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
big smile
I like the name.
Post soon!!
over a year ago percabeth13 said…
It will take me awhile to write a chapter that long.
Also I think the next chapter will be short and in Paul's POV.
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
smile
Ok. I will wait.
over a year ago ImAnnabeth said…
lets get something straight:
percabeth13+ImAnnabeth= the same person!!!!!
ill be posting from both!!!!
DO NOT GET CONFUSED!!!
over a year ago beba157jello said…
heart
i love it really good post soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago beba157jello said…
pliz post !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
Post soon!!!!
over a year ago percabeth13 said…
Chapter two

Paul
The ball was about to ring and three students still weren't here yet so I looked at the roll and saw that Percy and annabeth were in my class along with a girl named Madeline. The three of them. Walked in right as the bell rang. Percy was in the middle with annabeth on his right and on his left was a girl I assumed was Madeline. I gasped. Madeline looked exactly like Percy.(if Percy was a girl that is) I told everyone to take their seats and get started on their class work. Once they were all working, I asked for Percy and Madeline to meet me in the hall.
"do you know each other?" I asked.
"nope" Percy said popping the 'p'.
Madeline gave a look of irritation to Percy. "no we don't know eachother, even thou we were in the same class for third, sixth, eighth, and last year. Not including this year because it just started." Madeline told me.
"you look a lot like Percy" I said . "so much alike.....go back to class."
I needed to talk to Sally.
All class long I kept stealing glances at Madeline.when class was over, I couldn't concentrate the rest of the day because I kept wondering why that girl looked like my stepson.
When I got home Sally was cooking. Percy had gone to help annabeth finish unpacking her things over at her house.
"so there's an interesting young lady in my class." I said.
"oh really? What's she like?" she asked.
Well, her name is Madeline-"
She stiffened ever so slightly.
"and she has long black hair and green eyes" I finished
"really?" she asked forcing her voice light and feigning suprize. 
"yeah, you know she looked like she could have been Percy's twin, but she can't be, you would have told me."
When she turned around I saw there were tears in her eyes.
"I meant to tell you Paul,it just,you can't tell percy." she begged
But I didn't notice.i was still trying to process the fact that I have a suprize stepdaughter.i stared at her with a blank expression on my face. Then the door opened and Percy called, "mom? Paul?" 
"we're in here" Sally yelled back, wiping her tears. 
"hey whens dinner?" he asked.
"it's almost done sweetheart. Will you set the table dear?"she replied.
"I won't tell Percy." I said in a hushed voice when he was in the other room. "but you have to."

hope you liked it
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Wow...... I love it!!
over a year ago percabeth13 said…
Thanks!
over a year ago percabeth13 said…
smile
I'll try to post at least twice a week.