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Chapter 46

Percy’s pov

The next day I did the usual stuff in the morning and then went to the Training sector and although I wasn’t going to be teaching I was asked by Chaos to go and look over things. He came to me in my dreams and had told me that I was to go around the sector and looking at what people were doing and making sure that no one was causing mischief. He also told me to get to know people as I couldn’t lead an entire army if I knew none of them. Even if there were about 100,000 soldiers here, I needed to get to know most of them so I agreed with him. I chilled out in my office as I had arrived at 8.15 and the whole army normally gets here for about 8.45. I got up half an hour later and went to look outside the window in my office and saw thousands of people hustling about and getting ready for the training a head of today. I decided that it was about time that I went to go ‘bond’ with my fellow soldiers. Before I went out though I quickly grabbed my mask and put it on so that no female would faint if they saw me, only just stare.

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Chapter 46

Percy’s pov

The next day I did the usual stuff in the morning and then went to the Training sector and although I wasn’t going to be teaching I was asked by Chaos to go and look over things. He came to me in my dreams and had told me that I was to go around the sector and looking at what people were doing and making sure that no one was causing mischief. He also told me to get to know people as I couldn’t lead an entire army if I knew none of them. Even if there were about 100,000 soldiers here, I needed to get to know most of them so I agreed with him. I chilled out in my office as I had arrived at 8.15 and the whole army normally gets here for about 8.45. I got up half an hour later and went to look outside the window in my office and saw thousands of people hustling about and getting ready for the training a head of today. I decided that it was about time that I went to go ‘bond’ with my fellow soldiers. Before I went out though I quickly grabbed my mask and put it on so that no female would faint if they saw me, only just stare. I walked out of the arena and started to walk in an random direction. I nodded and smiled, even though they didn’t know I was smiling as I had a mask on, and soldiers as they passed by and they would hesitate first but then would nod back and say hello. I was surprised so far as none of the girls fainted or flirted with me today but it was a good surprise, I could finally walk around in peace. I walked past a building and saw that it had a swimming pool in it and I mentally put it on my to do list. I carried on walking until I saw a familiar figure, a person who I had an awkward encounter with when I first met them. It was Mathew Lite, the son of Aether and the person who was the second in command of the army when I arrived. I went over to him and when he saw me he looked surprised at first. He was standing at the foot of a large wall that had foot holes in them. Some areas of the wall were burnt whilst others were frozen and covered in ice. I looked up at the wall that reminded me of the one back at Camp Demigod but this one was bigger and seemed more difficult.
“Hello there Mat, how are you?” I asked him politly and this seemed to intrigue him. “Why do you look so shocked?”
He stuttered a reply “Its just that I I would of thought you would be angry at me by the way that I treated you. I didn’t know that you were going to be the commander.”
“So you treated new recruits like that all the time before as well?” I asked raising an eyebrow.
“No, never it’s just that something about you just pissed me off for some reason.” I laughed at that and a Mat seemed to be alarmed at that for a minute before he started to laugh as well.
“Yeah I used to get that all the time.” We continued laughing for a while before we both stopped as other soldiers were looking at me funny that was until I looked over and then they would just look away. “Why does it seem like they are scared of me?”
“It is because you are the first ever Commander of the army of Chaos and the protogenoi and we have some really powerful people in the army and they were never even considered. But you come along and on the first day of you being here they appoint you the Commander and so everyone thinks that you are extremely powerful and so they don’t want to annoy you and get you angry.” I was kind of annoyed at this, how was I suppose to earn their trust and get to know them if they were all frightened of me? I would have to come up with an idea later but at the mean time I got another idea.
“How about I race you to the top of the wall?” I challenged Mat. He nodded and smiled at me so I counted to three and before you knew it we were both racing up the wall. Mat was really quick and we were drawing so far and we were half way. The only thing was that I wasn’t even trying and I had been told by the council and Chaos that none of the soldiers can know about me receiving their blessings until I have mastered all of them. I kept going the speed I was going at until the very end when I used my wind powers to give and extra edge so that I could win. Mat was huffing and puffing once he pulled himself over and I was too, but I was acting and I wasn’t even the slightest bit tired. We were both smiling as well and at this time I thought to myself ‘I have made a friend’. He showed me the slide that was behind the wall and told me this was the way down and one thought crossed my mind, SWEET! Mat went first and after a few minutes I followed and rocketed down at incredible speeds. As I got to the end the slide began to tilt upwards and so I was thrown into the air. I did a few back flips and landed steadily on my feet which earned a cheer and clap from Mat. Mat then told me that he wants me to come and meet his friends with him who were at the swimming pool. I mentally ticked that off the ‘to do list’ and followed him to a different building than the one I saw from before. When we entered the size of the pool shocked me. It was like 100 times bigger than the Olympic sized ones that I had seen back on earth and there were also smaller ones surrounding it. There were also Jacuzzi’s and saunas on different sides of the building and the main pool was filled with soldiers swimming in the lanes, doing laps and timing themselves. The smaller pools were also filled with soldiers but they were just messing about with their friends and having a good time. As soon as I walked in and one person saw me, they all stopped and looked at me.
“Why are they staring at me?” I asked Mat.
“The ones in the smaller pools aren’t really aloud to be messing about like this, it’s the training sector and we are meant to be training...” He stopped there and I put together the pieces. They thought as I was the Commander that I was gonna shout at them and tell them to get back to training and just then I had an amazing idea.
“Thank you Mat for telling me about this disgusting behaviour!” I shouted and Mat looked at me confused but I winked at him and he caught on to the act. I saw a kid about to dive off the highest board and I climbed up the ladder, stomping my feet to make it more believable. I looked form the highest point in the building down at all the people and they all looked scared at what I was about to do to them. I glared at the kid on the board and asked “What were you thinking about climbing all the way up here for, huh? This is the training sector and you are meant to be training here and yet I find you and all the rest of you in here messing about!” The kid looked like he pissed himself and I struggled to control my laughter. I grabbed him and shoved him out of the way behind me and strode forward to the edge of the board. “I am the Commander and I demand that all you people stop what you are doing and....” Here I stopped and pretended to be pushed of the diving board, pretend screaming all the way down. I landed in the water and using my enhanced hearing and eyesight I heard Mat laugh and all the other kids looking up at the kid, scared for his safety. I even saw some of them looking over at Mat and staring at him like he had a death wish. I smiled and decided to rise out of the pool, in style. I had sunk all the way down by now and crouched on the floor of the pool. With all my strength I pushed up and rocketed out of the pool screaming in delight. I hung in the air for a few seconds before I started to fall and then I made a spiral of water appear underneath me and I just sat on it. The water kept me up therefore giving me a great view of the whole hall and I was greeted by shocked faces. I had a huge grin on my face and when I looked at Mat I saw he had one as well and we broke out laughing. I stood up on the spiral and then commanded it to place me beside Mat and as soon as my feet touched the floor I crumpled over laughing and in pain. Mat soon followed me and we stayed there, rolling on the floor for who knows how long. When I stopped laughing I realised that this was the first time that I didn’t know how long I had been doing something and I was shocked for a moment until Mat nudged me and pointed to the faces of everyone. I grinned and spoke up again.
“I can’t believe you all fell for that. But that’s what you get for thinking that I was a tight ass with no sense of humour.” They all looked down ashamed and I and Mat walked off. Mat led me to a corner of the hall which had 9 teenagers all sitting on the edge of the pool with their mouths gaping open in shock. I and Mat chuckled at their faces and the impact that our little prank had on them. We went to the changing rooms to get on our trunks. As I had the power of Eros I just thought of some sea green, Hawaiian style trunks and in the blink of an eye I was wearing them. I waited though for a couple of seconds to make it seem like I changed before stepping out of the cubicle type thing. Mat didn’t question where I got my trunks from and I didn’t question him so we just both walked back to the pool. When we got there the hall had turned back into its noisy self and because we got changed in the rooms nearest to our pool nobody apart from the small collection of friends saw me enter. They were all still sat there but this time they were laughing and messing about. I had decided that I would take my mask off as I would be going topless anyway in the changing rooms so I was ready for the unconsciousness. But it never came, which was a relief, but I still got stares from the 7 girls that were in the group of nine. We stood on the edge of the pool as the others came over to us and came out. The two boys were wearing knee length trunks like me and Mat and they introduced themselves first. But before they could talk I said in a serious like tone
“If any of you bow, salute me or call me anything other than Percy, I will kill you.” Mat smiled and I did as well.
“Erm, I guess I’ll go first then. My names Jacob Dodd and I am a son of Tartarus.” Jacob had long matt black hair that hung just above his eyes and brown eyes with a tint of red in them. He was about 5ft 9, had a good build and was wearing dark red trunks.
“My names Tom Cornet and I am a son of Ouranos” he had blue eyes like the children of Zeus but they were lighter and he had dark blonde hair, also had a good build and was wearing sapphire coloured trunks. His hair was spiked up at the back but the front was combed slightly to one side. Next was the girls to talk and the nearest one to me spoke first, recovering from the staring the quickest.
“Hi my names Angel Levine and I am a daughter Eros.” Angel had deep brown eyes that was full of care and love and lush brunette hair that was at the moment tied in a bun but I could tell that it usually cascaded down her back, one of my Eros powers. She had flawless, tanned skin but her cheeks were a bit red and she was pretty tall too about 5ft 7.
“My names Kelly Branch and I am a daughter of Phusis.” I recognised her from somewhere. She had black hair and a light shade of sea green eyes and when I looked into them I remembered.
“You’re the girl that held a spear to me when I snuck into the Arena aren’t, you?” She nodded and I laughed which she didn’t expect “Nice to know that you don’t do that to everyone you meet.” This earned a laugh from everyone. Kelly had skin that wasn’t pale but wasn’t tanned either, it was somewhere on the middle.
“My names....” I stopped her there as I remembered her straight, dark as night hair that ended just above her shoulders and her eyes which were also black but looked warm and caring.
“You’re the one that I met with Mat, on my first visit to the Training sector. The one I had to carry to the hospital because you fainted. You’re names Melaine Grey right, the daughter of Nyx.” She looked shocked that I had remembered at first but then thought about the carrying part of what I said and blushed. I chuckled in response and the next one spoke.
“My names Olivia Richards and I am the only daughter of Ananke.” Olivia had multi-coloured striped hair which ended below her shoulder blades and light grey eyes. The eyes troubled me for a moment I don’t why but I thought I had seen something like them before.
“I’m Grace Heart, also daughter of Eros” She had the same complexion as Angel but her eyes were bright blue eyes and the same colour hair but shorter, which ended above her shoulders.
I recognised the next one as I had known her ever since I had came to camp. Her hair was black and her eyes chocolate brown and she had the figure that normal girls would die for, it was Silena Beauregard. I smiled at her and thought how I could have missed her when I walked past. I took off my mask and she walked up to me and gave me a hug which I happily returned. She was like a sister to me and even though she had been the spy she did the right thing in the end and in her position I would of done the same thing. We pulled apart and I said hi to her and she said hi to me. She then gave me a look that said we would talk later and I also had a suspicion that that meant Beckendorf as well. The others looked at us weird but we didn’t tell them anything, not yet anyway. The last girl stepped up and introduced herself
“My names Stephanie Blur and I am the daughter of Hemera.” She had tanned skin and bright blonde hair and like, Mat’s hair it shone. Her eyes were a very bright blue and she, as well as every other girl was stunning. They all wore two piece bikinis that corresponded with the colour of their hair, eyes or the colour of their parent. After the introduction we all went to the pool and just relaxed there and had some fun. At first I was a little shy and the others, apart from Silena and Mat, stayed clear of me. But after a while they started talking with me and in the end we all had a massive water fight which I won being the son of Poseidon. I came into the pool with one friend that I knew of and I left with 9 more.

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