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The Heroes of Olympus The Protogenoi’s Assistant

son_of_cratus posted on Jan 28, 2012 at 06:07PM
Characters:

Percy Jackson
Leo Valdez
Jason Grace
Piper Mclean
Thalia Grace
etc...

Synopsis: Percy is ignored as his life falls apart. The gods and campers have found someone else to admire and look up to as the giant war has ended. Will he be able to overcome the pain of his loss or will it burn him up inside until it all comes out. Read to find out! :P

Rating T just in case for some cussing and bloody scenes


NEW CHAOS, NEW ORDER

synopsis: Join Percy as he battles the evil forces of the universe, follow him through the many twists an turns that eventually lead to new Chaos. And emerging from it, new Order.

(Not the greatest summary I know :P)

All rights go to Mr. Rick Riordan

Spaming is ok with me just dont get too carried away! :)
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10 months ago bookcat said…
angry
post allredy you are driving me insane
10 months ago son_of_cratus said…
Sooooo sorry guys for not posting but I have literally had no free time. I had work experience last week and my training for football has doubled and my crickets doubled, I've also been working and to top it ll off I have been fasting! I can't really tell you when my next chapter will be up because im so busy at he moment but my schedule should (hopefully :L) clear up later on in the summer holidays. Thanks fro the reviews guys and again sorry for the long and even longer wait.
10 months ago bookcat said…
sick
I forgive you just hurry up you're killing people aka ME!!!!!!!!! help me please
10 months ago corrected said…
wink
@son of cratus
wait ur muslim?
and by football do u mean soccer??????????
10 months ago son_of_cratus said…
smile
corrected, yh Im Muslim and yh I meant soccer I live in England :) hey everyone good news I am about to start typing a chapter now and I will have it up in a couple of hours :)
10 months ago corrected said…
yess!
cant wait
soccer is the hardest sport to play while fasting
10 months ago son_of_cratus said…
Yeah tell me about it, but crickets also pretty bad, standing under the sun for hours is really rough. Here is the chapter people, its pretty lame and boring but I am trying to speed up the training more so that we get to the action :)

Chapter 4

Percy’ pov

The cool sea breeze blew violently against my face, whipping my hair in various directions and making my shirt tug against my body. I gazed out to the vast ocean that lay before me and bathed in its purity and glory. I had been on this planet for a few days now and so far Chaos had not shown up at all, he told me and Ariel that he wanted us to explore the planet and we had done exactly that. The whole planet was full of wondrous and magical things that no words known to man can illustrate how beautiful they are. There were fields full of gigantic things such as strawberries or mango trees and also full of things the pair had never seen before. Giant, plump looking fruit that were green and square in shape which tasted like heaven were just one of the many magnificent things that we had seen and tasted so far. We had also found beautiful waterfalls that were as tall as five empire state buildings, which spewed water by the size of lakes every second, causing tremendous but beautiful noise. The result of all this water was clear high above the waterfalls, rainbows arched themselves over the falling water and created an truly picturesque scene which took my breath away. Caves were also found scattered throughout the land and what they had in them was truly amazing, I found the caves first and long, clear crystal beams crossed and zigzagged their way through some of the caves whilst others had stalagmites which were equally as beautiful. All this beauty also had a negative effect on me, it made me angry. Angry at the fact that my world had began just like this but we destroyed it. Angry that we take advantage of our planet and use it as if it just a giant rubbish dump. This made me think that maybe Gaea had a reason to be angry and oppose the gods and maybe it wasn’t entirely because of us defeating her children. Maybe, just maybe it would have been better if she ruled that planet, rather than the gods.
“I thought the exact same thing once. Maybe it would have been better if she ruled. But then I saw the look in her eyes, she was mad with power and all she had wanted was to kill and rule over the beings on that planet, too consume it in darkness and not let life be free. That was why I gave you the blessing and not her, to destroy her and the giants. Too win the Earth.” I was startled at first but I then listened closely to Chaos’s words. I was shocked to find out that he was the cause of the glow around me when I defeated Gaea and the giants and that he nearly gave that exact same blessing to his ‘daughter’. He saw the thoughtful look on my face “You see every single planet I create starts off relatively like this, think of it as a template. It has the potential to become the greatest and for the people to thrive and live peacefully here for supereons. But as soon as populations begin to thrive on any planet the same thing happens again and again they become too comfortable with their lives, they start inventing things to keep themselves occupied and to help them. They start hating other species because they have something they don’t, or they don’t believe in what others believe in. This, essentially leads to wars and pollution which leads to death and decay until ultimately plain silence again. That is why I want to create planets like these but put no life here that would endanger the fine balance it has, so that no outside interference may change or mould it into something I don’t want it to be.” I calmed down after hearing what Chaos had to say and looked into his eyes, eyes filled with a literal life time of pain and hardship and at this split second of time he looked as old as he was. He quickly shook it off and smiled at me “But I didn’t come here to give you a history lesson, no I came here to tell you that your first training session begins now” I immediately smiled in anticipation of what was gonna happen next. But it was nothing I expected, it was so cruel and devastating that some would consider it torture and order its ban on any living creature, meditation. Chaos ordered me to sit down on the balcony floor and cross my legs over, luckily he didn’t make me do anything with my hands that would have made me commit suicide. He told me to lose my eyes and began to speak.
“It may seem cruel to you but meditating is great for relaxing and getting to know your surroundings. It’s also important as now you have my powers you need to become one with the universe, you need to indulge and feed off of it. You need to listen to what it tells you and this is great for making that connection so that in the future you don’t have to do this every time.” I sighed and started to relax a bit. “Concentrate on everything that is around you and then just go further. Feel every particle and molecule move and shift, never stopping no matter what gets in their way and never being destroyed, always there but just adapting and changing.” I concentrated as hard as I could but it was more difficult than I thought. I sat there with my eyes closed and eye brows scrunched up for hours, but as far as I could reach was around 20 metres around me. Chaos told me to keep trying and that with practice I would get better. Then came the devastating news, until I connected fully with the universe, he would not teach me anything else, what great fun.



10 months ago bookcat said…
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10 months ago corrected said…
great post!
10 months ago corrected said…
ur descriptions of the planet r so great and detailed
10 months ago bookcat said…
angry
oh my goD post for the love of everything that is holy POST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!
10 months ago corrected said…
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10 months ago bookcat said…
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9 months ago son_of_cratus said…
worried
I am so so incredibly sorry for not posting in like a month but I have been so busy with and everything and I just haven't been able to post. I am gonna try to get a chapter up for you today but I promise that if I dont post today I will tomorrow, again so incredibly sorry :(
9 months ago corrected said…
glad ur back cant wait for the post
9 months ago son_of_cratus said…
Here you go people again sorry for the long wait :(



Chapter 5

Third Person pov

Atoms collided and exploded causing massive amounts of energy being released and blasting away everything in its path. As the dust cleared a lone figure sat with his legs crossed and eyes tightly shut in concentration seemingly unscathed from the violent reaction which had just taken place. After a while the man’s eyebrows scrunched together as he once again concentrated and suddenly things started to collide again but this time the collisions between the atoms did not create an explosion, no but it did the opposite. A bright light shone as atoms stuck together and began to form a shape. The shape soon began to become the recognisable form of a rose. A loud clapping sound came from the edge of the residing dust and out stepped a man wearing a white tux, smiling proudly at his student. The man in the centre opened his eyes and also smiled, knowing that all that hard work had finally paid off, all of those torturous hours doing a seemingly impossible task became a reality.
“Well done Percy, you have mastered your control over my powers and have become one with the universe.” Percy smiled and stood up and hugged Chaos. This shocked the creator as he awkwardly hugged his pupil back, it’s not that he did not like Percy but he did not want to get close to the man, especially knowing what was in store for him. Chaos then whispered in his ear “you are the second person other than myself that has successfully undertaken this task and succeeded well done.” It was meant to be a compliment but Percy knew it was also a warning, as he knew who the only other person is, Chaos’s son. Percy pulled away and nodded his head when he was suddenly transported to the place he hadn’t seen for just under a year, Chaos’s planet. He planet somehow seemed bigger and by using his newly mastered powers he sensed that the planet had actually grown in size and population. He was marvelled at how much a planet can change in just under a year when he was brought out of his thoughts by about 10 people all jumping on his back. He could of held the weight easy but because he was distracted he flopped to the floor face first as he heard laughter above him. He recognised the voices of all of his friends and family that he had left behind whilst on his training mission and he too began to laugh. One by one they got off of him and helped him get back on his feet and afterwards they all hugged him. There was his father, Poseidon and his brother Orion along with Mat, Grace, Jacob, Lilly, Angel, Kelly, Stephanie, Tom and Olivia. There was a loud thump which came from behind them and they all turned sharply to see Ariel sitting on the floor rubbing her back and thighs in pain.
“Ouch that hurt!” she exclaimed before again everyone jumped on her apart from his brother, who was blushing and his father. He looked at Orion and saw that he looked much older than he was supposed to be and he guessed that his father saw him staring as the next second he began to explain to him that the Protogenoi council all voted to speed up his ageing process. He told Percy how Chronus had created a bubble around Orion and then aged him by going further into the future; Percy had remembered Chronus telling him of such power. Orion now looked eighteen which meant that he was now an immortal and forever the same physical age as Percy. After all the greetings were done and such everyone went to the throne room, which to Percy’s and Ariel’s delight and surprise was just down the hall. As they entered all the Protogenoi stood and clapped at the only person, to their knowledge, to have mastered Chaos’s powers other than himself. Everyone congratulated him and patted his back and some even gave him hugs, although they were mainly given by the female Council members. After that Chaos snapped his fingers and they were all transported to a restraint in the Main City.
Everyone’s eyes widened and heads turned as they saw, for the first time ever, all of the council members out in the Main City and eating, together.
They all began to talk to each other and that was when Percy found out that all of his friends around the table were now assassins just like him and he also found out that the army size had doubled since he had left. Chaos then cut in and explained that that was because whilst training Percy also went on missions to other planets to keep him fresh and awake in battle situations. His name had become legendary throughout the universe for being the helper of the outnumbered and the keeper of peace and tranquillity. As of this beings wanted to be just like him and so they joined the Army of Chaos and The Protogenoi.
After dinner Percy went out for a walk around the City. He saw couples walking around on their dates and families all out as well for dinner. Ariel had admitted to Percy that she liked him but that was a month after they had arrived on that beautiful planet and she said that now she loved him as a brother only. Percy was fine with that as he loved someone else, someone he had known from his past life. He knew that it would be impossible for him to be with her but he hung on for hope. But at the moment Percy felt lonely, when would he finally be happy? When could he be with the one he most loved? When could...........
He was ripped out of his thoughts by an alarm, an alarm in his head that meant the council needed him now. He closed his eyes and appeared in the Throne Room with all 13 Protogenoi and Chaos council members present.
“What has happened?” asked an anxious Percy. Chaos gave him an knowing look which meant only one thing and this thing was apocalyptic.
“Word has reached us that many planets furthest in the Universe are now under siege by an unknown threat. The Soldiers posted on those plants have told us that a dark cloud has blocked out the sun and weird creatures have attacked them and the innocent population of that planet.” Ouranos told Percy. Chaos turned paler and paler with each passing word and Percy knew why. “We do not know what the threat actually is......”
“I do” Everyone apart from Percy turned to face the creator of all in shock. They all gave him a look telling him to continue and so he did. He told them the story of his son, how he had created him out of a dying sun and how he had turned evil resulting in Chaos banishing him. The further he got into the story the more horrified the Council looked and at the end they were paralyzed with shock. Only the blinding flash at the entrance to their Throne Room brought them out of their shock.
9 months ago son_of_cratus said…
smile
Hey guys! thought I'd let you know that I am gonna start posting again in when I go back to school which is within the first 10 days of September (I dont really know when I go back, so yeah....). I thought this would be better than people waiting for the chapter as now you know when I will start really posting.
9 months ago bukluvr17 said…
big smile
awsome cant wait
9 months ago corrected said…
cant wait either
9 months ago annabeth523j said…
big smile
that was really good! but plz post soon so i can find out who that person is! :)
9 months ago son_of_cratus said…
smile
Hey guys sorry I couldnt post today I had football training (soccer) and didnt finish till 8. I thought Id let you know that I will only regularly post on mondays, wednesdays and fridays, until tomorrow :)
9 months ago corrected said…
ok take ur time
well not too much time
post soon!
9 months ago bookcat said…
at least you posted school sukes I started on tuesday and they gave me homework right away
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9 months ago son_of_cratus said…
smile
I know i had homework as well!

Hey guys and girls I am posting today its just taking me a bit longer to produce a decent chapter :L
9 months ago son_of_cratus said…
smile
Ok this chapter is really short but I had deleted it when I was at 1000 words cause it was quite frankly crap. Again sorry and I will try to post tomorrow :L


Chapter 6

Third Person pov
The flash revealed a man covered in golden blood, sprawled out on the floor half dead. All the Protogenoi rushed forward and knelt next to the body whilst Chaos looked shocked, staring at the body as if it was a nuclear reactor about to melt down and cause mass devastation. Pontus summoned a tub of water and Ouranos used the air to carefully pick the body up and cushion it on top of the water. Thalassa now approached and closed her eyes, the water running up, down and over the body like a scanner, feeling what was injured. Thalassa grimaced and opened her eyes shaking her head. Aeither then staggered forward and knelt beside’s the tub of water, placing a hand gently on the bodies shoulder and bowing his head as tears threatened to erupt like Olympus Mons. The mood in the Throne Room went from disbelief to sadness and grief, things kept on getting worse as Chaos said who had did this.
“I feel the work of my son, on your son Aeither, I m sorry.” He said as he hung his head down in shame. Aeither stood up and approached Chaos with clenched fists, then as everyone thought he was gonna hit him he raised his arms and hugged Chaos.
“We will stop this evil from destroying the universe you and us have created and watched over. I will get revenge for my son.” All the Protogenoi nodded but Percy was just staring at the body, looking closely and seeing all the popped blood vessels an puncture marks on his skin. Percy shuddered and then grew angry, he also made a pact there and then, no matter what happened he would stop Chaos’s son. There was another flash and more bodies appeared and with this came more tears and more vows of vengeance. Percy stared in horror as all the soldiers posted on the outskirts of the universe were sent back dead, all dripping golden ichor mixed with blood. Percy grew angrier and angrier and with this more reason to fulfil his vow.

The next day Percy awoke with the images of all those dead faces burned into his brain, permanently. He got up out of bed and did his routine with a new found determination. He had asked Chaos if he could stop training the others as well and not start straight away so that he could practice his powers. That’s exactly what he did for the next two months, he hit the gym hard and practiced all of his powers to the extreme, sometimes falling unconscious from the strain put on his body. At the end of those two months the alarm went off in his head which signalled Chaos and the Council needed him. He vapour travelled to the Throne Room, greetings were short, and he was told what they needed him for. It turned out that some of the planets with dictators had joined Chaos’s sons side and were fuelling him with hat he needed. Chaos told Percy that he was to go to one of the biggest enemy planets and find out all the information he could and also to help the rebel army like on his last mission. Percy nodded and flashed away to his assassin headquarters where Lelantos, Hygieia and Sophrosyne greeted him. They wished him luck and quickly sent him through the portal. What greeted Percy on the other side can only be described as horrible....