The Heroes of Olympus Taken By A Long Shot

SeaBrat posted on Apr 27, 2012 at 03:06AM
Annabeth Chase is a junior in highschool and of course is in love with the famous Percy Jackson. He sort of feels that way about Annabeth, he just doesn't know it yet. The only thing holding these two back is Percy's sweet girlfriend, Catarina. And if Annabeth and Catarina are best friends? What will Annabeth do about Percy?

Rating: K ( idk it could change)
Characters: Annabeth Chase, Percy Jackson, Thalia Grace, Nico (maybe others)
All rights go to Rick Riodan, I do not own Percy Jackson

Chapter 1: My life is a living hell hole
My day starts when my alarm signals. With one quick hit it is off and I make my way to the bathroom to shower. My golden curls tumble down my back after the hairbrush undos the knots. I slip on skinny jeans, a navy blue tank top that has lace for the back, undertank top so you can't see my bra, and bright pumas. I apply under eye to my lids so I don't have racoon eyes and quickly dab my lashes with a minimal amount of mascara and a dash of light eyeliner. Yup a normal day. I jogged downstairs to see my stepmother finishing the last scraps of a large breakfast. Typical. She smirks as she drains down her coffee and demolishes her eggs, toast, coffee roll, sausage, and bacon, a lot of food for a small woman. That makes sense right? I ignore her and grab a health bar chugging it down with a glass of milk. I don't even give her one glance when she insults me and I walk out the door, my backpack on my shoulder. Home sweet home. I slosh through puddles on the sidewalk as it begins to rain and finally make it to the school. My friend Thalia joined me at the front door and we walked to our lockers in silence. Thalia's sharp electric blue eyes looked dull under the fluorescent lights and her black spiky hair sagged against her collarbone.
" I love school," her voice was dead.
" Ya. late night?" I asked her. She nodded. Suddenly I stiffened as something sharp scraped against my neck. I turned around and half smiled.
" Real mature Percy," I sighed and looked up to his full height. He grinned impishly and tried to look innocent.
" Don't you try that Jackson," I smiled wider.
" I think I left a mark," he had a satisfied look on his face.
" You what!" I quickly looked in the my mirror in the locker and groaned. On my neck was a large bite mark left by Percy's white teeth.
" You! You!" I faced him again.
" You know you love me," he grinned.
" ....." I blinked.
" Hey Annabeth," I mentally whimpered. Percy then wrapped his arms around the slim slender figure of his beautiful girlfriend, Catarina. Her golden eyes looked up to him and snuggled her head to his shoulder. Percy took pieces of her black wavy hair and twirled it in his fingers. She then tilted her head up and kissed him gently and lovingly. I have to admit it was sweet. Her large eyes locked to mine and she pulled a gorgeous smile and said to me,
" See ya in class," ya she was pretty and smart. That's just the beginning of it.
Catarina was one of the most beautiful girls in town, she was almost as intelligent as I am, she is in student council, leadership, and T.I.E.S. She is amazingly athletic and is a basketball player and a fast hurtler. Her drawing skills are incredible, but she desires photography. She is also on the poms team, super wealthy and just plain sweet as can be. How can you hate her? Oh ya, you can't. She talked about Percy and made him seem like such a "god" I found myself to fall for him when I had him in my classes. But I could never break those two up for my one personal game right?

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over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
like it
over a year ago Neptune2148 said…
big smile
Post soon like the story
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
i know please post soon
over a year ago shubham06 said…
Luv it.... Post soooooon....
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Should I post in Percy's view for the next chapter?
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
over a year ago beba157jello said…
big smile
u knw its like 1.22am over here so i might not be able to read tht anyways awesome chapters !!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
Amazingly awesome chapter. It was really good.
I loved it!! <3
And I can not wait until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
I woke up drowsy to find Annabeth staring at me, a confused look written across her face. She looked kinda funny.
" What?" I asked her. She frowned then shook her nogin.
" Nothing," was her pathetic response. I decided if she wanted to tell me, she would so I didn't say anything about the subject.
" Let's go to camp today," I made my way to my room before I got an answer. I slipped on cargo shorts, my camp t-shirt and put on my blue Nike's.

We drove in silence all the way to camp. Annabeth practically flew up the hill to her sibling's, Malcolm, arms. Well I feel left out

Will finish
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
Post soon
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
Finish please!
over a year ago bukluvr17 said…
Luv it plz post really soon
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
big smile
Awesome preview. It was really good.
And I can not wait until u pos the rest. I hope.its really soon!!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Grrr! Mental break down!!! My whole chapter was deleted! My IPod died before I could post most of it!!!!!
Srry if I take long to post!
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
its okay just post soon
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
In honor of our arrival, Chiron made it Capture the flag for today's activity. But we all needed lunch first.
Percy and I sat together at the Poseidon and made small talk.
" I love camp," I looked around and sighed happily.
" ya," Percy took a bite of his burger. " Feels good to be back,"
" I missed everyone. I miss Thalia," I said. Percy nodded his thinking face on.
" I wonder how Cat is doing," I secretly vomited in my mind as that name came to my ear. Percy called Catarina Cat. " And her sister Hazel,"
" Oh ya, eighth grade right?"
" ya," Percy sipped his blue coke thoughtfully.
" Do you love her?"
" Excuse me?"
" Not hazel," I giggled. " I ment Catarina,"
"Oh," he slightly frowned. " I don't know. I haven't really thought about it,"
" Oh sorry for asking," I blushed.
" No, no it's fine Annabeth, I really don't think I do though. She isn't some one I would spend the rest of my life with,"
" Why is that Perce?"
" Well, Catarina is sweet, beautiful, caring, smart, humorous, rich, and athletic but it's just highschool. We aren't going to get married or anything. I don't feel like it is a relationship that will last for that. I will never forget her but I think my heart is meant for someone else," he furrowed his eyebrows. I blinked.
" Really?"
" Annabeth, we haven't even had sex. I don't think that we are in for that. It's just not us," he shrugged. So he wasn't in love with Catarina. Point to Annabeth!
" Oh, I really don't know what to say seaweed brain,"
" it's ok, do you love anybody?"
" Ummmm......" my face beat the color of cherries. " ....yes, I do. I am in love. I'm in love with a boy. I know for sure I love him. He is my other half," I dared not to face him and stared out to the strawberry fields.
" Let the games begin!" Chiron announced. I sighed ready to leave this awkward situation. All the campers exploded in cheers and ran to the woods waiting to see who's team they were on.
Let the games begin
The teams were split up and I grimaced. Percy was on the other team. I ran into the woods with my siblings followed by the Aphrodite cabin, Demeter, Ares, and Hermes. The other team was Apollo, Poseidon, Heacte! Hephaestus, Nico, a Zues kid, and the newest daughter of Pan. Seemed unfair but we had more team members. This would be an interesting game. I took ready taking my dagger out and waiting for the bullet. The blue teamcheered and I could hear then clomping through the woods. I waited watching for a mop of black hair or a 3 foot long sword that glowed in the sun. Suddenly the Aphrodite cabin came screaming from the trees and hid in fear behind a rock. My puzzlement was solved when 50 griffons and elephants surged through the underbrush. I sat wide eyed when 70 clones of a Hecate child, Collette maybe? carried bows and arrows and started to shoot at the Ares cabin. I rab past them and jumped onto a boulder just before a child of Zues shot a cast lightning where I was just standing. My heart thundered and again I had to duck as Apollo children shot arrows from the trees. Clarisse came next to me, her hair was singed and mud on her clothes looking enraged.
" Collin has had some fun," she growled. I gave her a confused look. She nudged her head to our territory and saw a fire breathing dragon, and cannons that shot Greek fire. Of course Collin sat on top of his creation. Collin was another Hecate child, just as dangerous as Collette. I groaned and tripped a young Apollo kid running by.
" We have to cross the river," I told Clarisse. She nodded and looked at her spear.
" Run!" Malcolm's voice came from the left. He sounded frightened even if this was only a game. Clarisse and I ran forward getting closer and Oder to the river which divided our territories. We sprinted until we were 20 feet away from the river where a skeletal army was waiting.
" I got them," Clarisse muttered and motioned me to go ahead. The Hermes cane running from the enemies' territory.
" Annabeth you don't stand a chance," Travis's eyebrows were burnt, his hair frosted with ice shards and his arms had large cuts on them.
" What? How?" I granted his shoulders trying to shake the terror from his eyes.
" It's Percy, he is ferocious," he shook his head making snowflakes fall from his hair. " He's not a seaweed brain today,"
" I can handle myself," I told him and charged across the river. I ran across the grass until the Earth swallowed me. I tried to get my head up out of the soil, fighting for air. The ground opened up and I managed to escape from my chest up before the Earth closed agin. I struggled and tried to pull myself out until I was slapped in the face with a mud ball.
" Sorry Anne," Kitth appeared from the bush. Kitty was the daughter of Pan and could control. She was a freak of nature, literally.
" Kitty let me go!"
" I'm afraid I can't do that," she sprinted to our territory tangling the grass onto my team members' feet. Irritated I used all of my strength and actually pried myself out. That left a big gopher hole I though. I ran looking for the flag. An arrow hit my armor but I kept going. The sun blinded me and I had to stop. A red flats came across my vision and I saw Alive drop from the tree. Her thick flaming red hair cascaded around her as she regained her footing and looked at me with sky blue eyes her bow ready.
" Surprising I know," she watched me take out my dagger. " Percy was..." she stopped and froze. I turned my head diagonally. Pain shot through me and the ground became closer as I fell. Brandon, Alice's 6'6 foot half brother stood above me strong as a boulder.
" Sorry," was all I heard before I blacked out. When I awoke I was standing. Confused I looked where I was, tied against a tree, my dagger was 10 feet from the tree sticking out of the dirt, tempting me. I growled.
"Frowning is bad for your complexion," a voice joked. I sighed and rolled my eyes.
" Let me go Percy,"
" I could, but I'm not going to," he came out from behind an oak and into the sunlight. I turned my head so he wouldn't notice my blush. His glossy raven hair shines, his tan skin was smooth, white smile, and bright humorous, beautiful, seagreen eyes were like emeralds. He was probably the only one who could look good in armor. To me, Percy could put Adonis to shame. He kicked my dagger toward me and walked back a good 20 feet. I managed to reach it after some difficulty and released my bindings glaring at Percy as I made my way toward him. He smirked as river water gathered at his feet, waiting to revive him. I charged and swung at his head to get him off balance. He ducked and stabbed at my shoulder with a great force. I blocked his sword and slashed at his feet knocking him onto his butt. He has wide eyes as he somersaulted across the grass and hit my thigh with the flat of his sword hard. my eyes watered, yup that's going to leave a mark, and hobbled into a rock. Percy smiled and flew at me like a bullet the water raised him above ny head. He fell at me and slashed at my armor then parried and attacked at my arm. I made a move toward his face. He landed on the rock and accidentally pushed me down for balance. I almost laughed while I rolled away getting back on my feet in a fighting stance. He charged and I blocked, I struck, he ducked. We went on and on like that, leaping over swords and rolling around in the dirt. Soon we were covered in sweat and our breathing ragged. Percy swung his sword and connected with mine and twisted smiling as my dagger fell to the ground. He came and put his sword on my neck his face grinning slightly. I just blinked at him as he walked closet to me, his green eyes never wavering from my face. he was so serious it even made ME confused.
" I win," he whispered in my ear, his sword placed sideways on my neck.
" No duh," I laughed. He just smiled the dark lines under his eyes disappeared as his eyes crinkled with amusement. I thought about kissing him but thought better of it. Gods I love him. His face became distracted as he looked at a butterfly. I took that opportunity and and shoved him to the ground, but he grabbed my hand and we went tumbling to the ground. I fell on top of him, and call me weird but it felt amazing as my hips accidentally throbbed against his as gravity pulled me down. Our faces were so close I could see each individual of his eyelashes. He had his arms hooked around my waist and started to lean forward, I did too, reaching my hands up to his hair. Cheers broke out just as Percy's lips touched mine. Nothing more than touching someone's arm. It wasn't kissing, his salty lips just touched mine and he pulled away as his team ran across the border holding our flag. DAMN IT!
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over a year ago beba157jello said…
big smile
Awesome chapter i wonder if annabeth is goin to end up telling perce the truth
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
i love it
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
big smile
Finally done!
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
i love it
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
Hahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!! That ending was priceless!!!!!! XD
But still good chapter. It we amazingly awesome.
I loved it!! <3
AND I can not wait until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago bukluvr17 said…
i luv diz its so cute
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
More reviews!
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
over a year ago childofhermes said…
plz post this is awesome
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
Pretty please post again soon!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
I awoke screaming, my heart pounding furiously in my chest. I jumped out off my bed and ran out of my cabin to cabin 3. Of course the door was unlocked, typical Percy. I walked across the wood floor making sure my steps didn't wake him as I walked toward his bunk.
" Annabeth?" his voice mumbled in the dark.
" Ya, it's me," I whispered and crouched by his bed.
" What are you doing here? Not trying to be rude," he sat up and scratched his head.
" Oh... Well.... Huh... I had a nightmare," I sighed. He had an adorable look of confusion on his face, or was it concern? He scooted over and patted the bed. I hopped on and crawled over until we were facing each other, my legs in Indian style.
"You want to talk about it?" he asked. I shook my head tears dripped from my cheeks onto the sheets. He opened his arms and I went to them. He was warm as his strong arms held me, his sweet breath breathing on my neck as he embraced me. He stroke my back in circular motions with his hands and rocked back and forth. I cried into his t-shirt then placed my head in the crook of his neck.
" It was so horrible," I said tearfully. His fingers played with my curls, and pet my head his other hand resting on my cheek. " Oh Percy! I thought you were going to die!" I sobbed.
" It's ok I'm here..... I'm here," he kissed my temple. " Do you want me to take away the pain?"
" what?" I laughed at his expression.
" Where does it hurt?" he asked. I pointed to my heart. " Oooooohhhhh... We I need permission to take away that pain..." he blushed. I looked at him puzzled. " Does it hurt anywhere else?"
"my head," I said. He placed his lips back to my temple and kissed it lovingly, I think?
" Anywhere else?"
" here," I pointed to my cheek. He moved down to my cheek.
" and?"
" here," I said timidly. He moved to my lips in less than a second. His lips were moist and soft as he kissed me slowly, then they became hot as the kiss became more hungry and vicious. I pushed him down onto the bunk and he grabbed my thigh. One small kiss became a heavy makeout. Wow! He is an amazing kisser! My hands stayed on his defined chest as his hands tangled in my hair. My tongue slipped in his mouth. His lips became still, his hands rested at his side, he was motionless.
" Percy?"
" I'm sorry Annabeth! Really!" he pushed me away gently and put his head in his hands.
" What for?"
" I.... I have a girlfriend. I can't be that kind of boyfriend. I'm sorry. I enjoyed don't get me wrong, I just, I'm sorry," he stuttered. That hit me. Damn! Shit! Omg! What was I thinking?!
" It's my fault Percy! I'm sorry!" I flushed deeply, the remaining happiness drained out of me.
" Let's forget this happened," he said and laid back down on the bunk and closed his eyes.
" You don't want me to leave?" I asked surprised.
" No," he said and fell asleep.

I opened my eyes to the sunlight pouring in and smiled down at Percy, his arms wrapped around me innocently. I pulled my brows together, this moment wouldn't last. I snuck out of his arms and opened the door to his cabin taking one last look at the boy I loved. I only wish he could realize it
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
love it
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
Awwwww!!! I knew that would happen.....


Amazingly awesome chapter. It was really really good!!
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And I CAN NOT WAIT until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Thanks! Poor Percy is confused ;)
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
big smile
I know right!!!!
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
yeah i want to know what percy thinks about it
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
big smile
Yeah!!! Do a percy chapter.
Im sooooo curious as to wat he thinks about!!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
Awesome post soon
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
I woke up and yawned I smiled and went to the shower. The water was nice on my sore muscles from capture the flag. I wrapped a towel around my waist and walked toward my wardrobe when my phone called.
" Yolo!" I answered.
" Percy really," a voice giggled.
" Well I know you wouldn't want a normal boyfriend," I replied.
" Yes of course," she huffed. I could see her rolling her eyes at me.
" You love me for it,"
" Yes Percy I do love you. So where are you?"
" Oh, I'm at that summer camp I told you about,"
" Oh, fun, well I miss you, come home soon,"
" Okay bub!" I yelled. She laughed then the phone went dead. I smiled then my face went to a frown. Last night. Annabeth. Gods. I have no clue what to do! I really think I love Catarina but there is something special about Annabeth. No Percy! Bad! Bad bad bad! Don't think of her. Catarina. Catarina. Beautiful, sweet, smart Catarina. Catarina with gold piercing honey eyes, thick lucious waves of tumbling black hair, thick natural dark eyelashes, pink/rose colored sweet delicate lips, the smell of cloves and cinnamon whenever we hugged, that curvy figure, long toned legs, blond cute curls, silver calculating eyes, wait woah woah woah! Back up! Jackson! Get your head straight!
" Percy, breakfast," a familiar voice called. I ran toward the door and tripped on a loose board.
" Fudge!" I shouted.
" Percy are you ok?"
" Don't come in!"
" Why?" the door creaked open. " Oh shit,"
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
Please do not tell me that Annabeth sees . . . Percy's other side.
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
I lo e it post soon make it longer though
over a year ago beba157jello said…
big smile
haha this is awesome plz post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
Oh man……………………………………… O_O!!!!!!!!


Amazingly awesome chapter. It was really really good!!!!!!!
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!
And I CAN NOT WAIT until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!!!!
over a year ago trivia101 said…
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
Pretty please post again soon!!!
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
Yeah you have to post
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
I must say I was quite shocked when I walked in that cabin. I think I screamed, probably not, but I'm pretty sure my mouth went wide and my hands covered my eyes in horror. Sure he was hot and all but I didn't plan on seeing that. Well it wasn't too bad. Uh! You know what never mind! I soon as I was in, I was out.

Srry have to finish later
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
Haha so for your next chapter can you don't have to but can they talk to each other
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
"…… As soon as I was in I was out." ………
I read that and busted out laughing!!!!!! XD!!!!!


Amazingly awesome preview. It was really really good.
I LOVED IT!!!!!! <3 <3
And I CAN NOT WAIT until u post the rest. I hope its really soon!!!!
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