The Heroes of Olympus Taken By A Long Shot

SeaBrat posted on Apr 27, 2012 at 03:06AM
Annabeth Chase is a junior in highschool and of course is in love with the famous Percy Jackson. He sort of feels that way about Annabeth, he just doesn't know it yet. The only thing holding these two back is Percy's sweet girlfriend, Catarina. And if Annabeth and Catarina are best friends? What will Annabeth do about Percy?

Rating: K ( idk it could change)
Characters: Annabeth Chase, Percy Jackson, Thalia Grace, Nico (maybe others)
All rights go to Rick Riodan, I do not own Percy Jackson




Chapter 1: My life is a living hell hole
Annabeth
My day starts when my alarm signals. With one quick hit it is off and I make my way to the bathroom to shower. My golden curls tumble down my back after the hairbrush undos the knots. I slip on skinny jeans, a navy blue tank top that has lace for the back, undertank top so you can't see my bra, and bright pumas. I apply under eye to my lids so I don't have racoon eyes and quickly dab my lashes with a minimal amount of mascara and a dash of light eyeliner. Yup a normal day. I jogged downstairs to see my stepmother finishing the last scraps of a large breakfast. Typical. She smirks as she drains down her coffee and demolishes her eggs, toast, coffee roll, sausage, and bacon, a lot of food for a small woman. That makes sense right? I ignore her and grab a health bar chugging it down with a glass of milk. I don't even give her one glance when she insults me and I walk out the door, my backpack on my shoulder. Home sweet home. I slosh through puddles on the sidewalk as it begins to rain and finally make it to the school. My friend Thalia joined me at the front door and we walked to our lockers in silence. Thalia's sharp electric blue eyes looked dull under the fluorescent lights and her black spiky hair sagged against her collarbone.
" I love school," her voice was dead.
" Ya. late night?" I asked her. She nodded. Suddenly I stiffened as something sharp scraped against my neck. I turned around and half smiled.
" Real mature Percy," I sighed and looked up to his full height. He grinned impishly and tried to look innocent.
" Don't you try that Jackson," I smiled wider.
" I think I left a mark," he had a satisfied look on his face.
" You what!" I quickly looked in the my mirror in the locker and groaned. On my neck was a large bite mark left by Percy's white teeth.
" You! You!" I faced him again.
" You know you love me," he grinned.
" ....." I blinked.
" Hey Annabeth," I mentally whimpered. Percy then wrapped his arms around the slim slender figure of his beautiful girlfriend, Catarina. Her golden eyes looked up to him and snuggled her head to his shoulder. Percy took pieces of her black wavy hair and twirled it in his fingers. She then tilted her head up and kissed him gently and lovingly. I have to admit it was sweet. Her large eyes locked to mine and she pulled a gorgeous smile and said to me,
" See ya in class," ya she was pretty and smart. That's just the beginning of it.
Catarina was one of the most beautiful girls in town, she was almost as intelligent as I am, she is in student council, leadership, and T.I.E.S. She is amazingly athletic and is a basketball player and a fast hurtler. Her drawing skills are incredible, but she desires photography. She is also on the poms team, super wealthy and just plain sweet as can be. How can you hate her? Oh ya, you can't. She talked about Percy and made him seem like such a "god" I found myself to fall for him when I had him in my classes. But I could never break those two up for my one personal game right?

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over a year ago kayleegurule said…
I like it. It's definately different and it has potential. Keep going.
over a year ago shubham06 said…
Seabrat is bak with anotner similar stry.... What happened to ur earlier stories?
Anyway dont stop posting on this one....
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
laugh
Possssssssst sssssssssssssoon!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Thanks for reading!
Also I just needed a break. Then all these ideas immurged from my mind!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
cool
Its good. I love the idea but.........







I hate ur OC (or her name) for reason that will not be said. But also like I said its a really good idea, and I love it and cant wait to read more!!
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over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Thanks guys! Kaia do you have a better name for the oc?
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
cool
No no. Its okay. U can keep the name how it is. I'll live.
But if want to change it. I don't really care. Its ur story and u r in charge of it.
Which means u can do what ever u want with it. So it be ur choice weather or not to change her name.
Like I said before. I will live.



Cant wait for ur post though. I hope its really soon!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
zzz
Should I post more?
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
big smile
YES! PLEASE POST MORE!
over a year ago beba157jello said…
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i love it plz post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Yes please!! Post soon!!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Annabeth
"What's the answer to number 1?" Catarina asked me.
" I believe it's prime," I told her. She looked down at her paper then frowned.
" Oh, I thought it was zero," her eyebrows pulled together.
" Ya, so did I until I noticed that it was a binomial," I said. She nodded then shut her book abruptly.
" Do you like Percy?" she suddenly asked. I blinked with large eyes.
" What?"
" Just answer my question," her gold/bronze eyes searched intently on my face.
" Well, I... u don't,"
" Annabeth it's ok really. I don't care," she shrugged. " It's natural," she licked her lip.
" Catarina I...."
" Annabeth your my best friend. It's ok. I'm ok. By the way Percy is too stupid to know you have feelings for him, so don't sweat it," she smiled.
" I guess your right, I'm just his best friend, nothing more," I sighed. Her eyes were apologetic and she mouthed sorry.


" What would you do if I kidnapped you tonight?" Percy tapped me with his pencil again.
" Escape," I rolled my eyes.
" No you wouldn't," he said plainly.
" Yes! I would!" I said getting frustrated.
" I know you wisegirl, don't lie,"
" I'm not lying seaweed brain," I huffed.
" I bet you that if I kissed you right now, you would love it so much you would faint," he dared.
" Would not!" I growled.
" Your lucky," he suddenly smirked.
" Lucky?"
" That I have a girlfriend!" he simply states.
" Why?"
" Because I would totally intoxicate you," he laughed.
" No!" I yelled.
" I bet you a drachma!"
" On?"
" You will see...."
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
big smile
Nice, post again soon.
over a year ago cro0010 said…
Cool.
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Its like percy KNOWS that annabeth likes him............. that's wat makes this story sooooo HILARIOUS!!
I love it!!! Its sooooo amazingly good.
And I can not wait until u post again. I hope its really sooon!!!!!!
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over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Annabeth
They hardest thing about loving your best friend is that they know everything, well except feelings sometimes. Percy is stupid and doesn't know my true feelings. He jokes and laughs about my love for him, it's just he doesn't know I'm serious. He wraps his arms around me for hugs but doesn't feel a connection. He puts his chin on my head and puts his arms cross my face making me flush. He takes his pinky and wraps it with mine through the hall sometimes but forgets me when he runs to his girlfriend and they chat about the day. He takes me out to eat and smiles the whole time telling me he couldn't live without me but never considers me as his next girlfriend. He confuses me. Yet sometimes I feel that he can see right through me. So inconsistent. You know who he reminds me of? Kelso from that 70's show. Clueless, hot in the girls opinions, and stupid. But what can you do.

" Annabeth get down here!" and know my reality starts.
" Yes Suzanne?" I came down the stairs and waited for my step mother to yell at me.
" What are you doing up in your room?" she schrieked.
" Homework," I huffed.
" What was that?" she raised an eyebrow " Are you talking back?"
" No," I tried not to roll my eyes.
" Yup that's a lie!" she yelled at me.
" Suzanne what do..." I didn't get to finish the sentence as my step mom back hand slapped me.
" You Bitch!" I yelled and ran out the door slamming it after me. In a rush I dialed the number I knew all to well.
" Hollo!" called a deep voice.
" Percy I need to stay at your place for the weekend," I almost started sobbing.
" Ok. Ya! Another sleepover!" he cheered.
" Ya sure Percy," I let myself smile.
" This is gonna be a blast wisegirl!" I could hear his excitement. It made me blush.
" Can you pick me up?" I asked him.
" Ya! I love this!" he said happily.
" Ya me too," I smiled.
" See ya babe!" he laughed then hung up. Did he just call me babe? I shrugged it off. Just a Percy comment nothing more.
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over a year ago kayleegurule said…
IS everyone demigods or not?
over a year ago Nemisis said…
^ yeah I'm curious about that but
Post soon!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
sad
Ya I guess they are... Haven't gave it alot of thought....
over a year ago bukluvr17 said…
post
over a year ago trivia101 said…
big smile
you really should post! what about ur other high school one where annabeth is actually daydreaming about what happens? r u still posting there? i hope so! and u should POST HERE RIGHT NOW!
over a year ago precious211 said…
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Wait Annnabeth watches the 70s show?
o.o Is that why she's being so sappy and lovey-dovey? That show is an awesome one yet bad influence.
XD Kelso<33
Aww Poor Annabeth:(
XD
This is good post soon:)
over a year ago Nuralove said…
Interesting....pls post soon
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
I have been super busy! I owe you!

Annabeth
Percy showed up in his car. Hi uncles got him a car for his 16th birthday because they felt bad that his father was dead. The car was of course a Ferrari Enzo. (is that spelled right?)
"Hey," Percy smiled wide and took off his sunglasses. I hopped in the car and put my feet up. " No hey back?"
" Just drive seaweed brain," I looked out toward the street. We drove in a comfortable silence until we pulled up to his apartment complex.
" I hope you don't mind, my mom and Paul aren't gonna be home tonight," he told me as the elevator climbed higher.
" That's fine,"
" Are you ok?"
" Ya,"
" no your not,"
"Percy I'm fine,"
" Just tell me what happened,"
" Percy it's nothing,"
" Then why are you hanging with me?"
" Your my friend,"
" Not a good reason Annabeth,"
" I don't want to talk about it ok!" I then noticed how close we were to each other. Our noses practically touching. Suddenly I remembered I was yelling at my best friend, my best friend that only wanted to help me.
" Percy I'm sorry," I looked toward him.
" No it's okay, I shouldn't have asked," he looked at me with a small smile.
" No it's fine. You were just trying to help me. I was mad that you were up in my business, but you only wanted to protect me. I'm the one who is sorry," I said shaking my head slowly. Percy smiled and he snaked his arms around my waist and pulled me close. He placed our foreheads together and we looked in each other's eyes.
" I don't know what I would do without you Chase. Your strong and independent, you can care for yourself. Your the bravest person I know. Don't you ever change," his hands dropped from my waist and grabbed my hands and interlaced our fingers. " I will always be there for you, your my best friend and I love you. I will protect you Annabeth. It hurts to see you troubled. Don't be afraid to tell me what your really feeling," he blinked and I felt his eyelashes brush against my face.
" Thanks Percy," I kept myself from flushing when my lips almost hit his from saying his name, well the P part anyway. He smiled and closed his eyes. His hands returned to my waist and his position changed to an embrace. I hugged him back putting my head in his chest. We rocked a little and I felt comfort in his warm arms.
" Aaawwww! You two are so sweet together!" I jumped back and looked at a woman waiting at the open elevator. Percy an I blushed and walked out onto his floor. The woman beamed and stepped into the elevator.
" Be good to her Percy. Don't have sex!" was her last comment before the doors shut. Percy and I looked at each other and blushed even more. Ugh! Stupid lady! Why did she have to ruin this?
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
laugh
Funny!
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
laugh
LOL. I agree with LordChaos
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Thanks guys!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Amazingly awesome chapters. They were really good!!
I loved them.
And I can not wait until u post again. I hope.its really soon!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
cool
Again thank you! I will post soon! Need more reviews!
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
angry
Post sooon!!!
over a year ago bukluvr17 said…
mischievous
this is awsome plz post really soon
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
POST SOON!
over a year ago beba157jello said…
big smile
awesome chapters love them plz post soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago shubham06 said…
Awesome.... Just one thing cant u think of any other car than ferrari enzo.... Does it always hav to be a ferrari???? I mean there are other cars as welll.... Nd do u know whats it price is???? One doesnt giv it as a b'day gift on 16th birthday......
Dont be offended... I m a little into cars.....
Ur stry is awesome.... Plz continue...
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
That's ok shun I'm not offended. I couldn't think of anything else... They always use a myserati spyder also.
I'm an Audi person myself. But I use that often. Super duper busy! Will post soon!

:)
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
big smile
Yay!! Cant wait!!
over a year ago shubham06 said…
Post whenever u can
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
smile
Thanks guys! I have alot going on in my life!
I promise to post very soon.... It will be very interesting
over a year ago bukluvr17 said…
k i understand nd wait
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
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POST SOON! THIS IS AWSOME!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Annabeth
After that woman mortified us, it was hard to look at each other. Finally Percy broke the ice,
" Tomorrow we should go up to camp," he smiled shyly. I nodded slowly. " Want to watch a movie?" he opened the door to his apartment and strolled in.
" sure,"
" I will make some popcorn," he scrambled to the kitchen. I sighed and grabbed a random movie and set up the DVD player. I snuggled with a soft blanket and slopped on the couch. Percy came after the credits rolled with ice cream sundaes and a large bowl of buttery popcorn. He slipped on the same couch as me and got comfortable, I couldn't help but blush as his warm leg rested next to mine.
" Nice movie choice," he smirked. I flushed when I recognized this movie as the Titanic. Nice move Chase.
" We should change into PJs," I mumbled. He chuckled.
" It's only 7pm wisegirl,"
" So?"
" no, nevermind," he grasped my hand and walked me to his bedroom. He opened his dresser then threw a large orange t-shirt at me and a pair of his old sweatpants at my face. They fell to the floor as I failed to catch them. I dropped to my knees and picked them up from the carpet, as I got up I quickly dropped down again to hide my cherry cheeks. Percy's jeans slid to the floor as he pulled on PJ pants and unbuttoned his polo. He chucked his clothes at his hamper then smirked as I blinked several times while I stood up.
" Enjoying the view?" he placed his hands behind his head and flexed.
" Go put a shirt on Jackson," I rolled my eyes and walked to the bathroom. The t-shirt went down to my knees and the sweatpants were big around the waist, but I didn't care, and they smelled like the sea breeze. Together we made our way back to the couch. Things got awkward from there, I mean Jack and Rose are in love, always together and kissing and what not. Then the carriage part came, I swear I felt Percy rub my thigh, but he was on the other side of the couch no longer by my side. I looked over at him to see he was looking at me, studying my face. I could tell Catarina was not on his mind tonight. Score for Chase! He licked his bottom lip slowly and I couldn't help but stare at his lips. He crawled on his knees toward me and started to reach his hand out toward my stomach. I scooted down the couch closer to him until my little toes could touch his waist. He leaned forward, a longing look in his eyes. I managed to keep my heart in control. I closed my eyes waiting for him to come closer.
" This popcorn is really buttery!" I heard the crunching of popcorn as he accidentally hit my cheek with a kernel. He say away from me again the bowl of popcorn in his lap
" Percy!"
" What?" the problem with the Titanic is the ending, and the length, and the whole love part. Well for the love, it was just awkward timing. Anyway it's a 3 hour movie and sitting for a long time made me sleepy. Percy put on another movie but I'm not sure which one, the last thing I remember is some one's arms around me and the smell of the salty sea.


I awoke at precisely 6:30 sharp. I yawned and took my head off of the blue pillow, wait that's Percy's chest. Oops. I noticed my body was laying on top of his, his long arms wrapped protectively around me, his neck was burning hot from where I my head was laying. I put my lips to his ear and whispered delicately,
"Percy, Percy," he didn't move. " Percy let me go,"
"No Annabeth,"
" What?" I asked.
" Not again,"
"Not again?"
"I'm not going to let you go again,"
"What do you mean?"
" I made a mistake,"
" Percy what are you talking about?"
"Just forgive me,"
" For what?!"
" I'm sorry,"
" Sorry for what Percy!"
"I should have said something long ago,"
" said what?"
" It's too late now Annabeth,"
" For what?!"
" Just know... Just... Know.. That I... That I...." he started to snore and didn't finsih his sentence. Boys. So confusing


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over a year ago kayleegurule said…
post again please
over a year ago bukluvr17 said…
plz post more i love this
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
U should do a Percy chapter
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Well?
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
POST
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod!!!!!!!!!


That chapter was sooooo AWESOME!!!!!!!
Like really really really good!! I LOVED IT!!
And I can not wait until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!!!!!
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
POST AGAIN!
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
omg love post soon
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
This is going to be Percy's point of view just for fun! Just saying it is when he is at school so don't get confused.

Chapter 1: My life
Percy
I was starting to think my class was strange, but maybe I was just mental. My teacher absolutely hates kids but still teaches. Yup that makes sense. Her name was Mrs. Hate, not kidding, she has hair the color of sea foam that sticks out in tufts around her head, almost like dust bunnies. Her eyes were harsh and sunken in, maybe she was half dead, her nose was a long snout that curved into a beak. She smelled like old mail and her skin was withered and stretched. All, in all, pretty ugly. My classmates weren't much better. There was one girl with bubblegum pink hair up in a bun with a yellow bow, her neck was covered with plastic necklaces from Claires, and she had neon green laced tights. Another had chalky white chin lengthed hair, like humpty dumpty fell on top of her. Her eyes were surrounded by a sea of purple sparkles and thick black eyeliner, she wore shades on her head and star earrings. a boy had a dark spiky Mohawk with red tips and eyeliner? He reminded me of those quiet kids that never got noticed in middle school so they turned goth. I just met him so I don't know, but I have my suspicions. Then there's this chick that thinks she's a vampire, a little old to be thinking that in highschool I think, but it's her opinion not mine I guess. She has frizzy orange hair like sprayable cheese or those cheetohs that kids eat for lunch. She has these two freckles on her neck which she refers as her vampire bite. She even puts dried ketchup on the corners of her lips so it looks like she just ate her last meal. I try to stay away from people like that, but somehow they are drawn to ME. I don't know how, I don't know why, I guess it's just me life.

Chapter 2: Mr. Popularity
Percy
I don't have alot of friends at school, maybe it's because most of them are like that vampire girl or goth boy. Anyway, I was talking to my friend Justin who is actually normal compared to every other kid at this mental school. Justin has dark black spiked hair, like an axe blade, and electric blue eyes. He tries not to make friends, like me, to avoid our interesting classmates. Maybe that's why we became friends. Both trying to avoid reality as long as possible. Too bad he's not a demigod. Anyway, for now at this dump we call school, I'm Mr. Popularity.
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over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
like it
over a year ago Neptune2148 said…
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Post soon like the story
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
i know please post soon
over a year ago shubham06 said…
Luv it.... Post soooooon....
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Thanks!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Should I post in Percy's view for the next chapter?
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
yes
over a year ago beba157jello said…
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u knw its like 1.22am over here so i might not be able to read tht anyways awesome chapters !!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Amazingly awesome chapter. It was really good.
I loved it!! <3
And I can not wait until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Percy
I woke up drowsy to find Annabeth staring at me, a confused look written across her face. She looked kinda funny.
" What?" I asked her. She frowned then shook her nogin.
" Nothing," was her pathetic response. I decided if she wanted to tell me, she would so I didn't say anything about the subject.
" Let's go to camp today," I made my way to my room before I got an answer. I slipped on cargo shorts, my camp t-shirt and put on my blue Nike's.

We drove in silence all the way to camp. Annabeth practically flew up the hill to her sibling's, Malcolm, arms. Well I feel left out

Will finish
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
Post soon
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
Finish please!
over a year ago bukluvr17 said…
mischievous
Luv it plz post really soon
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
big smile
Awesome preview. It was really good.
And I can not wait until u pos the rest. I hope.its really soon!!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
sick
Grrr! Mental break down!!! My whole chapter was deleted! My IPod died before I could post most of it!!!!!
Ahhhh!!!!!
Srry if I take long to post!
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
its okay just post soon
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Annabeth
In honor of our arrival, Chiron made it Capture the flag for today's activity. But we all needed lunch first.
Percy and I sat together at the Poseidon and made small talk.
" I love camp," I looked around and sighed happily.
" ya," Percy took a bite of his burger. " Feels good to be back,"
" I missed everyone. I miss Thalia," I said. Percy nodded his thinking face on.
" I wonder how Cat is doing," I secretly vomited in my mind as that name came to my ear. Percy called Catarina Cat. " And her sister Hazel,"
" Oh ya, eighth grade right?"
" ya," Percy sipped his blue coke thoughtfully.
" Do you love her?"
" Excuse me?"
" Not hazel," I giggled. " I ment Catarina,"
"Oh," he slightly frowned. " I don't know. I haven't really thought about it,"
" Oh sorry for asking," I blushed.
" No, no it's fine Annabeth, I really don't think I do though. She isn't some one I would spend the rest of my life with,"
" Why is that Perce?"
" Well, Catarina is sweet, beautiful, caring, smart, humorous, rich, and athletic but it's just highschool. We aren't going to get married or anything. I don't feel like it is a relationship that will last for that. I will never forget her but I think my heart is meant for someone else," he furrowed his eyebrows. I blinked.
" Really?"
" Annabeth, we haven't even had sex. I don't think that we are in for that. It's just not us," he shrugged. So he wasn't in love with Catarina. Point to Annabeth!
" Oh, I really don't know what to say seaweed brain,"
" it's ok, do you love anybody?"
" Ummmm......" my face beat the color of cherries. " ....yes, I do. I am in love. I'm in love with a boy. I know for sure I love him. He is my other half," I dared not to face him and stared out to the strawberry fields.
" Let the games begin!" Chiron announced. I sighed ready to leave this awkward situation. All the campers exploded in cheers and ran to the woods waiting to see who's team they were on.
Let the games begin
The teams were split up and I grimaced. Percy was on the other team. I ran into the woods with my siblings followed by the Aphrodite cabin, Demeter, Ares, and Hermes. The other team was Apollo, Poseidon, Heacte! Hephaestus, Nico, a Zues kid, and the newest daughter of Pan. Seemed unfair but we had more team members. This would be an interesting game. I took ready taking my dagger out and waiting for the bullet. The blue teamcheered and I could hear then clomping through the woods. I waited watching for a mop of black hair or a 3 foot long sword that glowed in the sun. Suddenly the Aphrodite cabin came screaming from the trees and hid in fear behind a rock. My puzzlement was solved when 50 griffons and elephants surged through the underbrush. I sat wide eyed when 70 clones of a Hecate child, Collette maybe? carried bows and arrows and started to shoot at the Ares cabin. I rab past them and jumped onto a boulder just before a child of Zues shot a cast lightning where I was just standing. My heart thundered and again I had to duck as Apollo children shot arrows from the trees. Clarisse came next to me, her hair was singed and mud on her clothes looking enraged.
" Collin has had some fun," she growled. I gave her a confused look. She nudged her head to our territory and saw a fire breathing dragon, and cannons that shot Greek fire. Of course Collin sat on top of his creation. Collin was another Hecate child, just as dangerous as Collette. I groaned and tripped a young Apollo kid running by.
" We have to cross the river," I told Clarisse. She nodded and looked at her spear.
" Run!" Malcolm's voice came from the left. He sounded frightened even if this was only a game. Clarisse and I ran forward getting closer and Oder to the river which divided our territories. We sprinted until we were 20 feet away from the river where a skeletal army was waiting.
" I got them," Clarisse muttered and motioned me to go ahead. The Hermes cane running from the enemies' territory.
" Annabeth you don't stand a chance," Travis's eyebrows were burnt, his hair frosted with ice shards and his arms had large cuts on them.
" What? How?" I granted his shoulders trying to shake the terror from his eyes.
" It's Percy, he is ferocious," he shook his head making snowflakes fall from his hair. " He's not a seaweed brain today,"
" I can handle myself," I told him and charged across the river. I ran across the grass until the Earth swallowed me. I tried to get my head up out of the soil, fighting for air. The ground opened up and I managed to escape from my chest up before the Earth closed agin. I struggled and tried to pull myself out until I was slapped in the face with a mud ball.
" Sorry Anne," Kitth appeared from the bush. Kitty was the daughter of Pan and could control. She was a freak of nature, literally.
" Kitty let me go!"
" I'm afraid I can't do that," she sprinted to our territory tangling the grass onto my team members' feet. Irritated I used all of my strength and actually pried myself out. That left a big gopher hole I though. I ran looking for the flag. An arrow hit my armor but I kept going. The sun blinded me and I had to stop. A red flats came across my vision and I saw Alive drop from the tree. Her thick flaming red hair cascaded around her as she regained her footing and looked at me with sky blue eyes her bow ready.
" Surprising I know," she watched me take out my dagger. " Percy was..." she stopped and froze. I turned my head diagonally. Pain shot through me and the ground became closer as I fell. Brandon, Alice's 6'6 foot half brother stood above me strong as a boulder.
" Sorry," was all I heard before I blacked out. When I awoke I was standing. Confused I looked where I was, tied against a tree, my dagger was 10 feet from the tree sticking out of the dirt, tempting me. I growled.
"Frowning is bad for your complexion," a voice joked. I sighed and rolled my eyes.
" Let me go Percy,"
" I could, but I'm not going to," he came out from behind an oak and into the sunlight. I turned my head so he wouldn't notice my blush. His glossy raven hair shines, his tan skin was smooth, white smile, and bright humorous, beautiful, seagreen eyes were like emeralds. He was probably the only one who could look good in armor. To me, Percy could put Adonis to shame. He kicked my dagger toward me and walked back a good 20 feet. I managed to reach it after some difficulty and released my bindings glaring at Percy as I made my way toward him. He smirked as river water gathered at his feet, waiting to revive him. I charged and swung at his head to get him off balance. He ducked and stabbed at my shoulder with a great force. I blocked his sword and slashed at his feet knocking him onto his butt. He has wide eyes as he somersaulted across the grass and hit my thigh with the flat of his sword hard. my eyes watered, yup that's going to leave a mark, and hobbled into a rock. Percy smiled and flew at me like a bullet the water raised him above ny head. He fell at me and slashed at my armor then parried and attacked at my arm. I made a move toward his face. He landed on the rock and accidentally pushed me down for balance. I almost laughed while I rolled away getting back on my feet in a fighting stance. He charged and I blocked, I struck, he ducked. We went on and on like that, leaping over swords and rolling around in the dirt. Soon we were covered in sweat and our breathing ragged. Percy swung his sword and connected with mine and twisted smiling as my dagger fell to the ground. He came and put his sword on my neck his face grinning slightly. I just blinked at him as he walked closet to me, his green eyes never wavering from my face. he was so serious it even made ME confused.
" I win," he whispered in my ear, his sword placed sideways on my neck.
" No duh," I laughed. He just smiled the dark lines under his eyes disappeared as his eyes crinkled with amusement. I thought about kissing him but thought better of it. Gods I love him. His face became distracted as he looked at a butterfly. I took that opportunity and and shoved him to the ground, but he grabbed my hand and we went tumbling to the ground. I fell on top of him, and call me weird but it felt amazing as my hips accidentally throbbed against his as gravity pulled me down. Our faces were so close I could see each individual of his eyelashes. He had his arms hooked around my waist and started to lean forward, I did too, reaching my hands up to his hair. Cheers broke out just as Percy's lips touched mine. Nothing more than touching someone's arm. It wasn't kissing, his salty lips just touched mine and he pulled away as his team ran across the border holding our flag. DAMN IT!
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over a year ago beba157jello said…
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Awesome chapter i wonder if annabeth is goin to end up telling perce the truth
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
i love it
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
haha
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
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Finally done!
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
i love it
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Hahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!! That ending was priceless!!!!!! XD
But still good chapter. It we amazingly awesome.
I loved it!! <3
AND I can not wait until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago bukluvr17 said…
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i luv diz its so cute
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
More reviews!
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
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Post! I LLLLLLOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE IT!
over a year ago childofhermes said…
plz post this is awesome
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Pretty please post again soon!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Annabeth
I awoke screaming, my heart pounding furiously in my chest. I jumped out off my bed and ran out of my cabin to cabin 3. Of course the door was unlocked, typical Percy. I walked across the wood floor making sure my steps didn't wake him as I walked toward his bunk.
" Annabeth?" his voice mumbled in the dark.
" Ya, it's me," I whispered and crouched by his bed.
" What are you doing here? Not trying to be rude," he sat up and scratched his head.
" Oh... Well.... Huh... I had a nightmare," I sighed. He had an adorable look of confusion on his face, or was it concern? He scooted over and patted the bed. I hopped on and crawled over until we were facing each other, my legs in Indian style.
"You want to talk about it?" he asked. I shook my head tears dripped from my cheeks onto the sheets. He opened his arms and I went to them. He was warm as his strong arms held me, his sweet breath breathing on my neck as he embraced me. He stroke my back in circular motions with his hands and rocked back and forth. I cried into his t-shirt then placed my head in the crook of his neck.
" It was so horrible," I said tearfully. His fingers played with my curls, and pet my head his other hand resting on my cheek. " Oh Percy! I thought you were going to die!" I sobbed.
" It's ok I'm here..... I'm here," he kissed my temple. " Do you want me to take away the pain?"
" what?" I laughed at his expression.
" Where does it hurt?" he asked. I pointed to my heart. " Oooooohhhhh... We I need permission to take away that pain..." he blushed. I looked at him puzzled. " Does it hurt anywhere else?"
"my head," I said. He placed his lips back to my temple and kissed it lovingly, I think?
" Anywhere else?"
" here," I pointed to my cheek. He moved down to my cheek.
" and?"
" here," I said timidly. He moved to my lips in less than a second. His lips were moist and soft as he kissed me slowly, then they became hot as the kiss became more hungry and vicious. I pushed him down onto the bunk and he grabbed my thigh. One small kiss became a heavy makeout. Wow! He is an amazing kisser! My hands stayed on his defined chest as his hands tangled in my hair. My tongue slipped in his mouth. His lips became still, his hands rested at his side, he was motionless.
" Percy?"
" I'm sorry Annabeth! Really!" he pushed me away gently and put his head in his hands.
" What for?"
" I.... I have a girlfriend. I can't be that kind of boyfriend. I'm sorry. I enjoyed don't get me wrong, I just, I'm sorry," he stuttered. That hit me. Damn! Shit! Omg! What was I thinking?!
" It's my fault Percy! I'm sorry!" I flushed deeply, the remaining happiness drained out of me.
" Let's forget this happened," he said and laid back down on the bunk and closed his eyes.
" You don't want me to leave?" I asked surprised.
" No," he said and fell asleep.

I opened my eyes to the sunlight pouring in and smiled down at Percy, his arms wrapped around me innocently. I pulled my brows together, this moment wouldn't last. I snuck out of his arms and opened the door to his cabin taking one last look at the boy I loved. I only wish he could realize it
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
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over a year ago kayleegurule said…
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POST AGAIN, PLEASE!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Awwwww!!! I knew that would happen.....

Anyways......

Amazingly awesome chapter. It was really really good!!
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And I CAN NOT WAIT until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Thanks! Poor Percy is confused ;)
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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I know right!!!!
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
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U should do a Percy chapter! PPPPPPLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEE­EEE­!!!­!!!
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
yeah i want to know what percy thinks about it
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Yeah!!! Do a percy chapter.
Im sooooo curious as to wat he thinks about!!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
Awesome post soon
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Percy
I woke up and yawned I smiled and went to the shower. The water was nice on my sore muscles from capture the flag. I wrapped a towel around my waist and walked toward my wardrobe when my phone called.
" Yolo!" I answered.
" Percy really," a voice giggled.
" Well I know you wouldn't want a normal boyfriend," I replied.
" Yes of course," she huffed. I could see her rolling her eyes at me.
" You love me for it,"
" Yes Percy I do love you. So where are you?"
" Oh, I'm at that summer camp I told you about,"
" Oh, fun, well I miss you, come home soon,"
" Okay bub!" I yelled. She laughed then the phone went dead. I smiled then my face went to a frown. Last night. Annabeth. Gods. I have no clue what to do! I really think I love Catarina but there is something special about Annabeth. No Percy! Bad! Bad bad bad! Don't think of her. Catarina. Catarina. Beautiful, sweet, smart Catarina. Catarina with gold piercing honey eyes, thick lucious waves of tumbling black hair, thick natural dark eyelashes, pink/rose colored sweet delicate lips, the smell of cloves and cinnamon whenever we hugged, that curvy figure, long toned legs, blond cute curls, silver calculating eyes, wait woah woah woah! Back up! Jackson! Get your head straight!
" Percy, breakfast," a familiar voice called. I ran toward the door and tripped on a loose board.
" Fudge!" I shouted.
" Percy are you ok?"
" Don't come in!"
" Why?" the door creaked open. " Oh shit,"
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
Please do not tell me that Annabeth sees . . . Percy's other side.
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
I lo e it post soon make it longer though
over a year ago beba157jello said…
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haha this is awesome plz post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Oh man……………………………………… O_O!!!!!!!!

Anyways……………

Amazingly awesome chapter. It was really really good!!!!!!!
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!
And I CAN NOT WAIT until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!!!!
over a year ago trivia101 said…
surprise
O.O
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Pretty please post again soon!!!
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
Yeah you have to post
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Annabeth
I must say I was quite shocked when I walked in that cabin. I think I screamed, probably not, but I'm pretty sure my mouth went wide and my hands covered my eyes in horror. Sure he was hot and all but I didn't plan on seeing that. Well it wasn't too bad. Uh! You know what never mind! I soon as I was in, I was out.

Srry have to finish later
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
Haha so for your next chapter can you don't have to but can they talk to each other
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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"…… As soon as I was in I was out." ………
I read that and busted out laughing!!!!!! XD!!!!!

Anyways…………………

Amazingly awesome preview. It was really really good.
I LOVED IT!!!!!! <3 <3
And I CAN NOT WAIT until u post the rest. I hope its really soon!!!!
over a year ago avatarfan800 said…
sunny
Post
over a year ago trivia101 said…
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0.0

:D new pg.
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over a year ago beba157jello said…
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plz plz plz plz plz plz plz post soooon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Catarina

Sweet love, sweet love, trapped in your love
I've opened up, unsure I can trust
My heart and I were buried in dust
Free me, free us

You're all I need when I'm holding you tight
If you walk away I will suffer tonight

I found a man I can trust and boy, I believe in us
I am terrified to love for the first time
Can you see that I'm bound in chains?
I've finally found my way

I am bound to you
I am bound to you

So much, so young, I've faced on my own
Walls I built up became my home
I'm strong and I'm sure there's a fire in us
Sweet love, so pure

I catch my breath with just one beating heart
And I embrace myself, please don't tear this apart

I found a man I can trust and boy, I believe in us
I am terrified to love for the first time
Can you see that I'm bound in chains?
I've finally found my way

I am bound to you
I am bound to

Suddenly the moment's here, I embrace my fears
All that I have been carrying all these years
Do I risk it all? Come this far just to fall? Fall

I have entrusted, boy, I believe in us
I am terrified to love for the first time
Can you see that I'm bound in chains?
And finally found my way

I am bound to you
I am, ooh I am
I'm bound to you

I glanced at Percy and sighed. I had to tilt my head to look at him since he was 6'4. His cocky lopsided smile made my heart flutter. He always scrunched his perfect nose making him look adorable when he smiled. His chin was smooth and chiseled and he always smelled salty and like the sweet waves, and the hint of aftershave. His laugh was husky and raspy, but his voice was as smooth as silk, or like velvet. His hair was an array of black, it was messy, but it suited him, I prefer it that way. His wonderful eyes look at me calculating but with a dazzling fire that was partly innocent. I always admired the color they were, seagreen, like melted emeralds. Then another pair of eyes crossed my vision and I blinked and I noticed the abnormal long lashes, so volumness and black. Then I saw seagreen eyes that had dark green swirled into them. Backing from my gaze and saw flushed cheeks, pink seashell lips and flowing black hair, and feminine features and figure? I saw it was a girl, about 18, looking at me with sad eyes. Her lips parted and a single word was heard.
" Help," a tear drop escaped her eye and rolled down her cheek. Her eyes became glossy and she licked her bottom lip. Then the world went dark and I heard a blood curdling scream coming from the darkness. My eyes widened as I looked around. And of course, it was a dream. Or was it a message? I had to call Annabeth. Fast.

Annabeth

" Annabeth I need you!"
" Hello to you too,"
" It's major!"
" What is?"
" I'm coming over," the phone went dead. What the hell? My doorbell rang a few minutes later. Outside stood Catarina looking winded.
" I need a canvas," she looked up at me with her large gold eyes. She followed me inside and sat on the couch, taking paintbrushes, paint, pencils and an eraser out of her pockets.What? I went into our office and grabbed her a note pad of drawing paper, and in the closet there, of course, was a canvas. I slugged out and handed her my supplies. Her eyes widened and she made a grab for the canvas. She expertly made a tan head and painted a body. Her eyes never left the canvas. I grabbed her a paper plate for her paint and a water cup. She squeezed black on her brush and stroked it against the canvas. Then seagreen. Then pink. 20 colors later she stood back.
" Annabeth do you know who this is?" I stepped forward and gasped. It was an identical Percy, if he was a girl I mean.
" So do you?"
" No," I shook my head. Catarina frowned. "Why?"
" She was in my dream." she shook her head. I licked my lips and waited.
" This is what happened...."

I wasn't sure if it was just a mortal dream or a message. I was hoping it was a mortal dream, I really didn't want another Rachel. Cat's eyes flashed and she grabbed the sketch pad and a pencil. The cheeks that formed were a child's and the hair was beautiful. Cat always drew never stopping her eyes in an intense focus.
" I think you need to find her," she gestured. It was a 10 year old girl with streaming hair and brilliant blue eyes. Is she a demigod? I wondered.
Then they attacked.Hellhounds came crashing through the windows spilling glass all over the carpet." Annabeth...." Cat's voice whimpered next to me. I grabbed my dagger from the strap on my leg and advanced on the puppies. One jumped from the wall and growled at me. I clutched the dagger fiercely and awaited for him to attack.
" Come and get it mutt," I taunted. It came at me with blinding speed and I made a quick hack at his back, the monster exploded to puppy chow. The second barked and four more came with it and started to circle me. I turned around myself my eyes in a glare thinking of a plan. One of them yipped and they charged. I lept in the air and swung the dagger around me like a mad woman killing three dogs in the process. I landed and wiped the bead of sweat off my forehead.
" Annabeth duck!" Cat shrieked. I ducked as she said and watched as a kitchen knife went flying through the air and hit the monster's elbow. The hound looked at it confused then aimed its head at her. I sprinted and stabbed my dagger in its head. A growl rippled behind me and I turned to see twenty hellhounds coming at me. I gasped and prepares myself for the worst. Th dogs advanced then lept over my head and ran toward Cat. I whipped my head around confused, a dog grabbed Cat's shirt in its mouth, another grabbed her jeans.
" Annabeth! Help!" she cried. I licked my lips and ran toward my friend. One of the bigger hellhounds howled and shook its head like a signal. The dogs ran out the broken the window and dashed into a shadow with Cat, her cries echoing around the yard. My mouth gaped open suddenly my world was upside-down.
" C.... C.... Caaaat?" I half shrieked half whispered. "Cat!" I cried and burst into tears and cradled my head in my hands. What am I going to do?! I only knew that I would get her back
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over a year ago trivia101 said…
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POST SOON!!!!! U HAVE TOOO!
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
Post soon please
over a year ago beba157jello said…
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omg awesome cliffhanger u hv to post soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago bukluvr17 said…
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post!! plz?
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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OMGS!!! Im sooooo confused!!!

Anyways…………………

Amazingly awesome chapter. It was really really good, even though im slightly confused as to where the story is going…………
But I still loved the chapter.
And I CAN NOT WAIT until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
This is her drawing of the girl

link
over a year ago beba157jello said…
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awesome chapter cnt wait to see who attacks them and nice pic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
Awesome Post Soon!
over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
post soon
over a year ago bukluvr17 said…
awsome luved it post wen u can!!!!!!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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I wonder if Cat is like Rachel………………………………

Anyways………………………

Amazingly awesome chapter. It was really really good!!!!
I LOVED IT!!!
And I CAN NOT WAIT until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!!
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
Awesome
over a year ago beba157jello said…
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love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Oh man………… wats Percy gonna do?!?!?!?!

Anyways………………………

Amazingly awesome chapter seabrat. It was really really good!!!!!!!!!
I LOVED IT!!!!!!
And I CAN NOT WAIT until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Thanks! Need more reviews.
And if u see, I bounded those posts together :)

So if u haven't read my last post it's at the bottom ;)
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over a year ago ReadingGurl said…
Post soon
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
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I wrote this really small piece of writing that is not on topic I just wrote it.
Want to read it?
over a year ago beba157jello said…
yea i want to read
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Next chapter is on Percy
over a year ago kayleegurule said…
Post soon, please!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
M'kay
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Percy

”Hello sunshine!" I sang to my locker buddy. She turned around and glared at me. Her actual name was Ember, and she scared me. Her dyed black hair hung on her face and had red tips at the bottom, her dark eyes were like tunnels, you could never escape! Her lips were lined in black along with her eyes, she had multiple piercings on her body and tattoos. She wore a Blood on the Dance Floor t-shirt, black combat boots, ripped black skinny jeans, and her studded bangles. The weirdest thing about her is she is a STRONG Christian, i wouldn't have suspected that. So anyway, I waved to her like an idiot with an open mouth smile. Ever since we started school, I think she thought I was "special," so that is how I started my act.
"Jackson, listen I'm Ember!" she growled, her eyes scrunched making her look even more like a raccoon, or maybe even a dead ferret.
"Hello Ember! The Earth says hello!" I grinned and closed my eyes. ( like the 2 mood) she snarled at me and stompted away.
" Hey Perce, whatcha do this time?" called Justin. He ran up to me and jumped on my back.
" get off," I laughed. He bounded off then faced me. " Geez Sparky Larky, why are you so hyped up?"
" Collin gave me RedBull!" he screamed. I grabbed my ears.
" Yow! My ear drums are broken! Wait, Collin? Oh great!" I slapped my forehead.
" actually he didn't know," Justin shrugged. Typical Collin, he is pretty clumsy and kind of stupid. He is like the Stoll bros, but he always gets caught.
" Well anyway Perce, I thought maybe...... Ooh snap! She is F-I-N-E," he ran off and started talking to another girl, he then grinned and hooked his arm through hers. That lucky bas#%*#.
" Percy! Percy! Percy!" Annabeth sprinted toward me and feel into my arms when she didn't stop fast enough.
" Well hey, wisegurl," I smiled and helped her stand upright. "Have you seen Cat?"
" actually I have," she sulked.
" Where?"
" I'm not sure," she tilted her head down, maybe she is looking for a bug or something.
"You said you saw her!" I pointed out confused by her mood.
" Percy! I saw her yesterday, then...."
" Then?"
" She was captured," after she said that, I cracked up.
" she was captured by her overprotective parents? Nice one Annie!" I laughed.
" No Percy, by hellhounds," my good mood was gone, I stopped smiling.
" B... B.. But she isn't like us.... That's not.... That's not possible," I looked Annabeth in the eye, " Is it?"
" Percy, I'm sorry,"
" Tell me what happened," my voice was hard and icy, not like myself. Annabeth looked frightened as her lip began to quiver. "Annabeth please tell me," I grabbed her shoulders. She let her eyes drift to my hands and just stared. I released her and waited. She frowned but then took a big gulp of air and told me what happened...

I had nothing to say, I didn't known how to react, but I knew that I would have to save the demigod first.
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over a year ago kkw1700 said…
Awww this was so good D:
over a year ago Nicosgurl said…
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SEABRAT IT HAS BEEN 10 MONTHS WHY HAVE YOU ABANDON US THIS WAS AN AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!
over a year ago Alygirl421 said…
What happened?? Why would you just drop the story like that? :'(
over a year ago Alygirl421 said…

pleaseeeee post soon
over a year ago corrected said…
ikrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
over a year ago Alygirl421 said…
Somebody else should continue this forum. This was a good story, but where did the author go?