The Heroes of Olympus The Mark of Athena (my version)

fangirl-dianne posted on Jun 12, 2012 at 10:22AM
Hi guys, this is my version of The Mark of Athena. I just reposted it on the forum section. I don't own any of these characters they belong to Rick Riordan. Hope you like it!

Chapter 1 Jason

Jason was nervous.
He was pacing back and forth, on the deck of the ArgoII his purple Praetor’s cape hanging on his back. What if Reyna had replaced him? He knew Romans were different from the Greeks. They did not like having an empty Praetor’s chair for long.
Reyna was also another problem. Ever since he came back from that quest, he had remembered a girl named Reyna—his Co-Praetor and girlfriend. If she had been searching for him as desperate as Annabeth was searching for this Percy guy, and he came back with another girlfriend, what would happen? Would the camp genuinely hate him for that? Maybe Reyna might even have him removed from Praetorship.
Leo came spinning like a ballerina, mumbling, “Camp Jupiter everybody! Romanssss! Grrrreeeks! Don’t you just love flowers?...”
Piper put her hand on Jason’s shoulder. She looked like she was trying not to laugh, “Funny how easy he was.” She said.
“You charm spoke him to do that?” Jason asked.
Piper smiled.
“Piper,” Jason said. “You know you’re not supposed to do that! You promised!” He was smiling too.
Piper showed him the edge of her hair. It was singed .“He’s not suppose to burn four inches of my hair is he? Don’t worry it will wear off soon.”
As Jason watched, Piper’s hair glowed pink and went back to its original form. It’s a good thing she’s the daughter of Aphrodite, otherwise she would look like a monkey cut her hair. They both went down to the bottom of the ship. Annabeth was there, hanging from the ceiling with a bungee cord looking down through the glass bottom.
“Looking for Percy?”Piper asked. As Jason helped her get strapped in, after her, he just flew next to them. Yeah, he can fly (being the son of Zeus and all)
Annabeth pointed down at a crowd of Romans staring up at them. Mrs. O’Leary was running around and barking up at them. Hannibal was playing tag with her. Many Romans gave them a wide berth so not to get trampled.
In the months Jason spent at Camp Half Blood, he had heard alot about this Percy character. He had defeated Kronos/Saturn last summer while Jason stormed the Titan’s headquarters on Mount Tam. Percy had returned his father’s master bolt the first year he had come to Camp Half Blood. All in all, Jason was no match for him.
The boat lurched forward. Annabeth and Piper swing from their cords.
“Welcome to Camp Jupiter everyone!” Leo said on the speakers. “Don’t you just love rainbows? They light up the sky after rain.”
Annabeth smiled, “What’s up with him?”
Piper burst laughing, “That’s what you get for burning my hair?”
Jason helped Piper down. “Need help?” he asked Annabeth.
“No thanks.” She pulled on the cord and unlocked her belt. She swung to the ladder, landing on it perfectly. She didn’t need flying powers.
Up on deck Annabeth ducked into her room and Piper removed the spell on Leo.
“Romanssss! Greeeksss! Flo—“Leo blinked. “What just happened?”
“Nothing much.” Piper said. “Just don’t mess with me again.”
Jason, Leo, Piper and Annabeth leaned over the side of the Argo II. After eight months...
Piper gasped, “Were here.”
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over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
Chapter 2 – Hazel
Hazel knew Percy was excited. Ever since he got all his memories back, he could not stop smiling. Hazel knew it was because of Annabeth.
She squeezed Frank’s hand. Frank squeezed back. They stood behind Percy and Reyna watching the ship come to a stop. Mrs. O’Leary—Percy’s hellhound—was being chased around by Tyson—Percy’s Cyclops half brother. For the past hour, Mrs. O’Leary had been eating all the muffins and drinking all the coffee she could find. Hazel didn’t know her all that well but she did know that a hell hound her size did not need more caffeine. She almost ran over a couple of kids from the 3rd Cohort. Tyson had to jump on her to calm her down.
The ship hovered a few metres off the ground and 20 or so bright orange tube things popped out of the side of the ship. Hazel’s instincts told her to pull out her spatha but she trusted Percy, and these were his friends. The other Romans, however drew their swords and backed away. She couldn’t blame them, not every day a flying ship comes to their camp.
“Relax!” a guy’s voice came from the ship. “They are just slides!”
A blonde girl jump over the side.
“Annabeth!” Percy screamed.
She disappears into the first tube. Hazel could see her figure through the slide until she lands 20 feet in front of us. Percy and Annabeth’s eyes met but before they could do anything, Octavian had her at sword point.
“Octavian!” Reyna said, “Put your weapon away!”
“NO!” he answers. “This... girl is Greek! They’ve come here to destroy us! Do you really trust these people?”
Percy drew his sword, “Octavian!”
Faster than Hazel could’ve done it, Annabeth drew a knife out of her pack, knocked the sword out of Octavian’s hand and put her own weapon at his throat.
“Woah,” Hazel heard Frank whisper to Percy. “Some girlfriend you got there Percy.”
Hazel elbowed him, “I heard that!”
“Octavian!” Reyna said obviously angry. “You will be on stable duty for two weeks.”
Some snickers come from the crowd. Octavian picked up his sword and trudged away muttering to himself something like, “Stupid...graecus...try to help...stable duty...”
Annabeth ran over to Percy, and punched him. “Thanks, I missed you too.” Percy said.
“Eight months, Perseus Jackson! Eight whole months! Not even a single Iris message!” Annabeth scolded him. “I missed you.”
“I’ve been busy.”
Annabeth cursed in Greek. Thunder rumbled in the sky, “Eight months! What did you expect?” she shouted at the sky.
That was very daring of her. Just like Percy, she didn’t seem to care what the gods could do to them. She wondered if all Greek demigods were like that.
Percy pulled her in for a kiss. They only come up a minute later for air.
“Hey!” came the same guy’s voice from the ship. “I can see you down there!”
Both Percy and Annabeth turn a dark shade of pink. Annabeth clears her throat, “Come on down guys!”
Around 60 more kids come bouncing down. “Remind me to try that later.” Frank whispered.
Percy went over to greet his old friends with Annabeth. There were lots of hugs and pats on the back and there was this one girl, Asian with lots of bangles and bracelets. She kissed Percy full on the lips then she collapsed, Annabeth behind her.
Most of the Romans were just watching them, without actually doing anything. Those Greeks and their completely unorganized gatherings—yuck! Hazel enjoyed watching Percy and their friends. For the first time in a week, Percy truly seemed happy. Annabeth and Percy head over to Hazel and Frank, his hand around her.
“Annabeth,” Percy said. “I would like to introduce to you Hazel Levesque and Frank Zhang. Hazel and Frank, Annabeth Chase.
We all shook hands. Hazel was about to say something to make conversation but beside them, Reyna gasped and ran to the Principia. “What’s with her?” Percy asked
“Uh oh.” Hazel said. She pointed up in the sky to a blonde guy with his hands wrapped around a dark haired girl.
“That’s Jason, What about him?” Annabeth asked
“Jason was Reyna’s boyfriend.”
“Boyfriend? Jason never said anything about being in a relationship. Should we...?” Annabeth asked pointing to wear Reyna had gone.
“Nah. We should let her work it out, she’s not the open kind.”
“Yeah.” Percy said rubbing his forearm
“Wait,” Annabeth said, rolling up his sleeve. “What are these?”
“It’s a thing they do here like a tattoo or something like that”
“Oh gods, did it hurt?”
“Yeah, I’ll tell you everything later.”
“Oh, No!” Hazel said. “Frank and I will just leave you guys alone. Right Frank?”
Frank sighed. “Sure yeah.”
Frank and Hazel walked away from them and Hazel scans the Greeks for that guy—Leo Valdez. When she spots him they’re eyes meet. He gets a confused look on his face and starts wading through the crowd toward her.
No, Hazel thought. She wasn’t ready to face Sammy again. She had to do something, “Hey,” she told Frank, “race you to the barracks!”
“Wait—what?” Frank asked but she was already gone.
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
*About 60 more kids come sliding down*
(Sorry about that)
over a year ago Magic1799 said…
What does this part mean?
She kissed Percy full on the lips then she collapsed, Annabeth behind her.
over a year ago Magic1799 said…
I Iove the part where Reyna gasped and ran to the Principia
over a year ago Blackjack-Arion said…
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over a year ago book-worm said…
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over a year ago Magic1799 said…
Post soon!
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
>Drew kissed Percy and Annabeth knocked her out (She is his girlfriend)<

Here's Chapter 3
Chapter 3 – Jason
Jason wasn’t surprised with Reyna. He hadn’t told anyone at camp—especially Piper—that he had a girlfriend back at Camp Jupiter. He didn’t know what he would do. He spent eight months with Piper and more than two years with Reyna but he still doesn’t know what he feels and who he feels for. It’s like Aphrodite was messing with his mind just to have a good show.
He knows he should be with Reyna, because Piper was just a fake relationship that Hera made up for her plan. But the thing was, He didn’t remember any feelings for Reyna, and he’d grown to like Piper over that short period of time. He couldn’t just dump Reyna. Hey! Guess what! I fell in love with another girl while you were desperately searching for me every day for the past 8 months so this is the end. Bye!
He decided to just fly Piper down there and see what would happen. Honestly, he was relieved when Reyna ran into the principia—that would at least mean he wouldn’t have to talk to her in front of his campmates. He just dropped Piper off and ran into the mob of cheering Romans.
He tried to act happy and like he missed these guys alot but all he could think of was Piper and Reyna. The mob carried him to his old house on the Via Principalis and dumped him there. He could tell by that they were also disappointed at his entrance with another girl.
He looked at his surroundings and remembered the last day he was here. He remembered just getting out of bed changing into his purple shirt and jeans and putting on his preators cape. It was Reyna’s birthday that day and he had to hurry to the bakers shop. He put on his shoes—well shoe. He didn’t really need shoes to fly, did he? His watch alarm had gone off, he had set it to 10 am. That was when Reyna’s cake would be ready.
This was a special cake, a gift from Reyna’s mother. Bellona had said that the cake would be in the bakery at 10:15 am sharp, at 10:30, it would disappear. It was a cake that would give Reyna an unending supply of Jelly Beans. Jason knew his girlfriend seriously loved Jelly Beans. He remembered flying over Terminus who was screaming his name Jason Grace you come back here! I’ll have your preators cape for this! He remembered coming back and dropping off his coin/sword Sorry, in a hurry. Rushing into the bakery and having to wait in line for 10 minutes for a 3 foot wide cake. He swiped his coin/sword off Julia’s weapon tray then setting up the principalis with streamers and confetti and party hats just for the two of them. He flew over to Reyna’s house to pick her up (literally). He knocked on the door then... well, that was all he could remember.
Nobody had touched his stuff at all. His bed was still messy and his shoes and socks were scattered on the floor. His pictures of him and Reyna on Olympus had a fine layer of dust on them. He wondered what happened to the cake and the streamers.
Jason realized he was tired. This whole Piper and Reyna problem has had him up for the past two days. He hasn’t gotten a decent night’s sleep. He just took the beddings off (because they were dusty too) and collapsed onto the bed.
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over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
No one likes it anymore?
over a year ago book-worm said…
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over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
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Oh, OK. well, here it is, hope you like it!!

Chapter 4 – Percy

Percy really missed Annabeth. He couldn’t believe it when they had that minute long kiss. Maybe Percy’s memories were still incomplete but that was the longest kiss they ever had—as far as Percy could remember. As soon as Hazel and Frank had left them alone they kissed for 30 more seconds.
Annabeth stumbled herself when she saw Hannibal the elephant.
“This camp has an elephant?” she asked
“Well, we have a hell hound.” Percy pointed out.
Horns blew from the barracks. “What does that mean?” Annabeth asked.
“I don’t know, it’s a bit early for dinner. Let’s go check it out.”
They ran over to the Via Preatoria. Hazel and Frank were waiting there.
“What’s up?” Percy asked.
“Reyna called another senate meeting to decide who the Seven are.”
“You should be there,” Hazel told Annabeth. “And probably, Jason too. Where is he?”
Annabeth shrugged and grabbed Percy’s hand, “Come on, I’ve got to do something first.”
She pulled Percy, along toward the Greeks, “Piper! Leo!”
A girl with choppy uneven hair and an elfish-looking boy came out of the crowd.
“Percy, this is Piper Mclean, daughter of Aphrodite and Leo Valdez son of Hepheastus. Piper , Leo... this is Percy Jackson.”
Percy remembered the way Hazel had jumped when she saw Leo, like she’d seen a ghost. He shook their hands. Leo’s hand burst into flames and Percy’s instincts took over. Before he knew it Leo and Piper were soaked.
“Hey, man!” Leo said. “That was just a joke!”
“Sorry, reflex.” Percy willed the water to flow out of their clothes until they were dry again.
“Cool!” Leo smiled. “Heard alot about you... controlling water and whatever.”
“Yeah,” Piper said. “Nice to meet you.”
Piper’s smile made Percy warm all over. He hoped it was just because she was the daughter of Aphrodite.
“Come on,” Annabeth said. “They deciding who the seven are!”
They walked to the Via Preatoria and Hazel was still standing there.
“Where’s Frank?” Annabeth asked
“He had to hurry to the Senate house. A centurion can’t be late,” she looked at Percy. “Nor can the Preator.”
“Oh, yeah.” Percy said, “We gotta hurry!”
He raced to the Pomeranian Line. Luckily, Reyna and the others were still there with Terminus.
“—and I want a new statue!” he said. “This whole armless thing is so 3000 years ago!”
“Terminus,” Reyna said. “We have to get in now.”
“Oh, fine. But remember this conversation is not yet over!”
He let her pass through. Annabeth was just about to pass Terminus when it screamed, “WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU’RE DOING?!”
Annabeth blinked. Percy smiled, “Annabeth, this is the Roman god of boundaries—“
“Wait!” she said. “I know this...Terminus! It’s Terminus right?”
“Ah!” Terminus said, obviously pleased to hear his name. “And who is this young woman Percy Jackson?”
“Well, I am Annabeth—“
“Oh! You are Annabeth? Percy talks about you alot!”
“How did you know that?” Percy asked
“Pfft! I am a god! Did you think I just sit around all day waiting for intruders? Hmm?”
“So you eavesdrop?”
“That is not important! What is is that Annabeth over here knew who I was! Which is a lot more than I can say for you.”
“Well, Terminus we have to get in so if you don’t mind—“
“Weapons! Bring them out! Out!”
Annabeth looked at Percy. He nodded. Annabeth hesitated then brought out her knife.
“Celestial Bronze!” Terminus examined Annabeth’s knife. “Very nice weapon, hmm. Julia? Where’s Julia?”
A little girl around 6 years old ran up from behind the statue with a tray. So far, the tray was empty except for a pocket knife. Percy put her knife on the tray along with his sword. “Percy,” Annabeth said. “What are you—“
Percy steered her into the city, “Sorry Terminus, we’re kind of in a hurry. Months and months of catching up to do.”
“That was... different.” Annabeth said.
“Yeah, he’s obsessive/compulsive so... yeah.” Percy said.
Hazel and Frank caught up with them. They followed the trail of Senators into the senate house. Reyna was already seated in the Preators chair. “Glad you could join us Percy.”
Her eyes were puffy like she’d been crying, but her tone was angry. Percy knew for a fact that you did not want to have a daughter of Bellona angry. Jason wasn’t anywhere in the room. Percy wondered where he was or what Reyna had done to him.
Annabeth kissed Percy and the cheek and sat down with the others. Percy, being Praetor, had to sit in front with Reyna. Percy didn’t like being Praetor, all the attention and responsibility. He had only accepted the job because he knew Reyna needed help leading the camp.
“You okay?” Percy whispered to Reyna.
She didn’t answer him, instead she said, “We are her today, to decide who will be the seven in the Prophecy. Let’s begin at this: those who wish to go may volunteer at dinner in front of the whole camp.”
Annabeth raised her hand, “Um, excuse me? Uh, Hera already made it clear that Leo, Jason and Piper will be part of the seven.” She pointed to a girl and a guy in front of her.
Reyna’s jaw tightened at the mention of Jason’s name, “All right then since Juno has chosen three from the Greeks, four will be from the Romans. Any objections?”
That was weird. Reyna said three Greeks. She knew Jason was a Roman, just like her. Then again, she could have meant Percy, although that’s not likely...
Annabeth frowned. “Wait a minute. I want to go too.”
“Objection!” screamed a ghost. “Why do the Greeks get more on this quest! Unfair!”
“Hey!” Annabeth said. “It will be just as unfair if the Romans get more!”
“Quiet!” Piper said. Her voice contained so much power, Percy wanted to personally shut his own girlfriend up. Horns blew.
Reyna cleared her throat. “We’ll resolve this matter at evening muster. This Senate meeting is adjourned. “
Percy sat down beside Annabeth. “Stupid Blasius.” She mumbled.
“Blasius?” Percy asked.
“Yeah, that’s the ghost’s name.”
“How could you have possibly known his name?”
“You don’t? Well, I suppose you wouldn’t—“
“No, all I meant was his name was mentioned in a Hercules story. He wasn’t that important but the story described him enough that a child of Athena would recognize him: short, fat and bald-headed, would you have recognized him?”
“Yes!... Maybe,... No.”
Annabeth laughed and kissed him on the cheek. “One of the things I love about you. Come on, I want to experience this evening muster of yours.”
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over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
Thanks guys, I'm glad you like it.

P.S. I made a mistake back there 'Annabeth kissed Percy ON the cheek' not AND.

More chappie's coming soon!
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over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
CHAPTER 5! du du dadun dadun! >dramatic entrance music<

Chapter 5- Frank
At evening muster, almost everyone wanted Frank at their table. They know about his powers and wanted him in their group.
Frank and Hazel sat in Percy’s table. Well, it’s not actually table, more like tables. All of the Greeks put together 6 tables into a circle.
“Come on over here guys!” Percy motioned them over.
Frank and Hazel sat on two spots that were reserved for them at the head of the tables in Percy’s table. The other Romans stared at them like: Fraternizing with the enemy? I can’t believe I wanted him at my table!
“Hi.” Hazel said weakly.
A guy with elfish features grabbed Frank hand and said something he couldn’t understand. Probably Greek. His twin beside him whispered something into his ear. He looked back and said uncertainly this time, “Ave?”
“English is fine thank you.” Frank said.
“Oh thank the gods! You know how I hate speaking Roman.” He glanced at Frank. “Uh, no offense.”
Percy was telling the Greeks about their quest, “And then I had a brilliant idea! I pulled out my lighter and threatened the field of grass! I was awesome! You should’ve seen me!”
Everyone on his table laughed. Hazel was trying to understand a little girl around Julia’s age, who was speaking Greek faster than Frank thought possible.
“Hazel, Frank,” Percy spread his arms to the whole circle. “I’d like you to meet Camp Half Blood.”
The Greeks cheered and Percy pushed them into the middle of the circle as the others introduced themselves.
There was a Katie, a Drew, a Will, a Max, a John, a Cindy, a Tracie, a Mitchell, a Shane, a Nyssa, an Eileen, a Chris and dozens more. Frank smiled. He just now met the Greeks but he instantly loved them. They were so different from how Octavian described them: cold, blood-thirsty killers who want nothing but violence. In fact, the Greeks were warm and welcoming. They didn’t stare at him thinking: “This is a Roman we are dealing with.” They looked as if they were trying really hard to see the bright side of him, despite his huge bulky form. That Drew girl, she was the only one who looked at him with a disgusted expression. Frank wasn’t that ugly was he?
After ten minutes, he finished greeting all the campers and sat back down. Annabeth walked up behind Percy and sat beside him. She smiled at him, “Thanks for keeping my boyfriend alive.”
Frank smiled back.
“Where have you been?” Percy asked.
“Chatting with Reyna.” She answered.
Hazel frowned, “You know what? I noticed you two both have grey streaks in your hair. Why?”
Percy looked at Annabeth. “No reason.”
The fawn that sat beside him, what was him name again? Grover, maybe. Grover said, “Are you kidding?! It wasn’t just nothing! Percy and Annabeth both held up the sky!—“
“It was quite romantic actually,” Piper said. “Annabeth was kidnapped and forced to carry the sky but Percy –the sweetheart—he took the sky for her so she could escape. In the end, they tricked Atlas back into his own burden.”
“That’s not what happened!” Percy protested, blushing.
“Annabeth was like,” Piper imitated Annabeth. “Oh, Percy, I’m so glad you’re here!”
“And Percy was like,” Grover imitated Percy (he wasn’t that good). “I couldn’t just leave you to die! Because I love you!”
He made kissy sounds.
“Grover!” Percy said. “Artemis was there, she did all the work!”
“You call carrying the sky NOT work?” Piper asked.
Both Percy and Annabeth were blushing.
“And he returned Zeus master bolt on the FIRST year he was at Camp Half Blood!” Grover added.
“He saved the camp with the Golden Fleece his SECOND year.” Piper said.
“And then again his fourth year in the Labyrinth.” Annabeth said, obviously proud of her boyfriend.
“Grover.” Percy interrupted him with a genuinely annoyed look on his face. They didn’t notice everyone else was quiet, as in everyone in the mess hall. Reyna was staring at them her face showed shock like she couldn’t believe that dorky kid held up the sky. Honestly, Frank didn’t believe it either.
After dinner, they went out on the field of Mars and lined up according to their Cohorts. All the Greeks were in a large group at the bottom of the stage. Percy was up there with Reyna. The idea of Praetorship didn’t seem to bother him now that he was back with his old friends.
“Tonight, we won’t be having War Games,” Reyna said.
Many people murmur in disappointment. Frank guessed that they wanted to kick Camp Half Blood’s Greek butts. Show them that the Romans are better. Frank also realized that the ghost’s didn’t stand halfway between people this time, which was weird they always did that. Frank smirked, his fellow Romans couldn’t control them but a bunch of visiting “enemies” could.
“We are here,” Reyna continued. “To decide on the Seven.”

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Chapter 6 – Annabeth
As soon as Reyna had said “the Seven”, the camp shifted uneasily. Annabeth sensed they knew about The Prophecy of the Seven and how close it was to happening. She stared at the back of Reyna’s head, hoping she remembered their conversation.
“But before that, we must follow procedure.” She gestured to Annabeth. “Annabeth Chase insisted that we do, even Camp Half Blood procedures.
“Who goes first?” somebody shouted.
Reyna thought about it.“Flip a coin. Me and Percy.”
She pulled out a coin—that looked like a drachma but the inscriptions were different—and said something to Percy. She flipped the coin and it landed heads. Percy smiled and Reyna grunted.
“The Greeks go first!” Reyna announced. She stepped off the stage.
Percy stood up and Annabeth stood with him. Percy was about to introduce Camp Half Blood but Annabeth stopped him, “Wait! Chiron should be here!”
“Yeah! I almost forgot!” Percy said.
“But how do we—“
“Here.” He climbed down the steps.
He walked over to a Pegasus, the colour of peanut butter and put his hand on the horse’s head. They seemed to have a mental conversation. The Pegasus whinnied. Percy went behind the stage and brought out a garden hose. A jet of water burst out of it and drenched a couple of Roman’s.
“Sorry.” He said as he willed the water out of their clothes.
“What are you doing?” Reyna asked quietly.
“Iris message.” He answered. Reyna wrinkled her nose.
He dropped the hose and the horse caught it under its foot. The hose sprayed fine mist into the whole area right next to the stage (and that was big).
Annabeth gathered a dozen drachma from the others and walked over to the mist, careful not to spill any of it. She tossed them into the mist and they disappeared. The Romans stepped away from her.
“Relax guys, it’s just an Iris message.” Hazel said.
“O Iris, goddess of the rainbow, accept our offering,” Annabeth said loud enough to hear all the way to the other side of the Field of Mars. “Show us Camp Half Blood.”
The mist shimmered and an image appeared. The view was from the Big House looking down into the valley. The strawberry fields, the armory, the forge, the arena, the Pegasus stables and the woods were in plain sight. If you looked into the corner of the image, you can see the cabins. While the others were mesmerized by the mist, Annabeth asked, “Who’s the Pegasus?”
“Scipio. Skippy for short.” He whispered back.
Percy sighed. Annabeth tried to imagine eight months away from there. She couldn’t. She held Percy’s hand and rested her head on his shoulder.
“I missed this place, Annabeth,” he told her. Then his eyes widened. “CHIRON!”
Annabeth looked where he was, and sure enough, Chiron was there in the archery range, shooting dummies 200 yards away like it was nothing. He looked and saw the Iris message. He galloped over , “Percy! You don’t know how glad I am to see you!”
The Romans stared up at the centaur with awe. They’d been taught that centaurs were evil crazy horse-men that always got drunk and ran over people. They probably never even seen a calm and collect centaur like Chiron.
Chiron smiled. “I see you’ve met the Romans.”
“You knew about the other camp?” Annabeth asked.
“I’m sorry Annabeth, but yes. I didn’t tell you because I swore by the River Styx. The gods decided that the two camps had caused enough troubles in the past.”
“Like the world war two...” Reyna muttered.
“Mmmm... yes, but that’s not a topic I wish to discuss.”
“How is the camp?” Percy asked.
“I imagine you would like to see for yourself.” He turned around and shouted something down the hill. “And bring blackjack!”
Percy’s face lit up. Annabeth knew he missed his own flying horse.
In just a few minutes, 17 more kids are up the hill beside Chiron followed by a jet black Pegasus. Skippy snorted. “Blackjack!” Percy said
Annabeth nudged him. When he realized he greeted his horse before his HUMAN friends, “Sorry, hi guys.”
There alot more greetings and air hugs and air slaps on the back and whatever. At least no one ELSE kissed him. Annabeth was glad no one could through an Iris Message. She always hated Drew.
“Blackjack!” Percy said on more time.
Blackjack whinnied.
“I told you to stop calling me that!” Percy said. “This is Skippy, Reyna’s Pegasus.”
The horses stared at each other. Then they had a conversation full of snorting, whinnying and neighing.
“Now,” Chiron said. “Why did you message us?I mean no offense, of course.” He looked at the edges of the message. “But this is a big iris message. You won’t be able to sustain this long enough.”
Annabeth emptied her pack onto the ground beside Percy. “Guard this for me will you?”
She went to the Greeks, “Guys we need all the drachma we can get.”
They passed around the bag but got only a few coins. She went back to Chiron.
“That’s not alot.” Annabeth said
“Will denarii work?” Percy asked.
“I suppose.” Chiron said.
Annabeth went to the Romans, “Guys, we need to keep this message open for a while. It’s like a payphone so we need as many... denarii as possible.”
Soon the bag was completely full. They just probably didn’t want the “mist-phone message” to end. When Annabeth came back, the mist shimmered. She put in a few denarii and it straightened out.
Percy and Annabeth went back on stage.
“Guys,” Percy pointed at the iris message. “That’s Chiron back at Camp Half Blood. That’s where I came from. I—“
He was interrupted when the Field of Mars exploded with flames.

I hope you guys love it!
over a year ago book-worm said…
Whoa!!!!!!! Didn't see that ending coming!!!!! NOOOOOOOO IT'S A CLIFFY!!!! Awesome post!!! Post soon PLEASE!!!!
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
P.S. just so you know, that last sentence did not mean that I just destroyed Camp Jupiter. NO! why would I do that... Wait till the next chapter
over a year ago huskyrock said…
This chapter's really cool and at the end did a god or goddess appear?(Like Mars) Or did Gaea cause it?
over a year ago book-worm said…
^I dont think Gaea can do that....but if she cod thy would make tons of sense!!! Hopefully Percy will up it out!!!!!
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
I'll post the next chapter in five days. (pls. spread this fanfic. I want to see what other people think)
over a year ago book-worm said…
FIVE DAYS!!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? How about tomorrow(: that sounds like a good idea(:
over a year ago Aileencookies said…
Yah, I agree with book-worm! five days is too long!!! post in at least two days!
over a year ago jordan333 said…
Post post post post
over a year ago Heritage112 said…
Yes do please post I love your storyline it fantastic, but could you PLEASE give me spoliers Im going away soon and nedd to no whts happening while im away
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
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Okay, Heritage112, I'll make you guys a deal. I'll post each next chapter seven days apart. BUT (there's a but) I'll give a preview after two days... DEAL?

Also I just wanna try something: Everyone on this forum won't use the words:

POST (replace it with:SUBMIT), don't use LIKE or LOVE use: "LIVE" (love and like mixed together), don't use AWESOME or COOL (replace it with AWE-INSPIRING)

please. it would be soo coo-- AWE-INSPIRING :D if that could happen



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Okay, Heritage112, I'll make you guys a deal. I'll post each next chapter seven days apart. BUT (ther
over a year ago Aileencookies said…
soooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute for that i will say.....

I LIVE this. You are so AWE-INSPIRING please SUBMIT more soon!!!
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
haha, thanks! first to reply that way! giving you a prop!!!
over a year ago huskyrock said…
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Oh my gosh, they're are so adorable! Aww, are these your puppies or someone else's, cause if it's yours you're SO lucky! So AWE-INSPIRING, I LIVE the picture and your chapters! Looking forward to the preview!
over a year ago huskyrock said…
Or did Leo cause the fire cause that would be interesting! In that case Frank will be in trouble! Book worm, I think maybe it's not Gaea, but if it is, maybe tons of monsters appeared and stuff and that would make sense too!
over a year ago book-worm said…
^That would make sense!!!! I can't wait for your preview!!!! I LIVE your SUBMITS!!!! They're so AWE-INSPIRING!!!!!!!
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
the next chapter is Jason so you guys just have to wait, here's a preview!!

Chapter 7—Jason—part 1
Jason dreamt of Piper. He dreamt of when he woke up on the bus with her beside him. The time she stood, ready to fight despite her hypothermia. How powerful her voice sounded back at the Wolf House. All the times he took her into the skies. She charmspoke Blackjack into letting her ride him and they would fly as high as possible and kiss and dance without music. Piper was amazing. Jason knew he could never forget her.
He also dreamt of Reyna. When he got elected Preator, she accepted him, even if he was from the Fifth Cohort. He remembered sitting beside her on the stage, in the Principia and when they danced together for a whole two hours during that one year, when they had the Camp Jupiter Prom. She was beautiful even without makeup. She wore a purple dress, and her hair was in her usual braid. She had heels so high, they made her taller than him. He didn’t care. He, however was under dressed. All the other guys wore tuxedos but the best he had was a button down shirt and a tie. Compared to Reyna, he looked horrible, but she didn’t care. They danced and danced and danced. Reyna had to remove her heels halfway through. Even if the music wasn’t a slow dance, they danced slowly. At the end, he flew her back to her house and kissed her good night. He walked all over the city smiling that night because he knew he couldn’t sleep.

This is the longest chapter yet so I'll be giving it in 2 parts (5 WHOLE word pages!) this part 1 preview, hope you like it!!

P.S. thanks to Aileencookies, husckyrock, and bookworm for replying that way!! I'm glad you guys LIVE it!

new page!! CAKE!
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over a year ago book-worm said…
Omg i live that preview!!!!! You know what would be awe-inspiring? If you submitted the next chapter early!!!!
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
still working on it. I probably could submit it tomorow. glad you live it. its mostly about Jason's dream...
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over a year ago bukluvr17 said…
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luv it
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
buklur17 don't you mean you LIVE it? yes, L-I-V-E (see the last few comments especially the puppies)

okay guys, I was just bored today so I finished part 1 here it is hope you LIVE it

Chapter 7—Jason—part 1
Jason dreamt of Piper. He dreamt of when he woke up on the bus with her beside him. The time she stood, ready to fight despite her hypothermia. How powerful her voice sounded back at the Wolf House. All the times he took her into the skies. She charmspoke Blackjack into letting her ride him and they would fly as high as possible and kiss and dance without music. Piper was amazing. Jason knew he could never forget her.
He also dreamt of Reyna. When he got elected Preator, she accepted him, even if he was from the Fifth Cohort. He remembered sitting beside her on the stage, in the Principia and when they danced together for a whole two hours during that one year, when they had the Camp Jupiter Prom. She was beautiful even without makeup. She wore a purple dress, and her hair was in her usual braid. She had heels so high, they made her taller than him. He didn’t care. He, however was under dressed. All the other guys wore tuxedos but the best he had was a button down shirt and a tie. Compared to Reyna, he looked horrible, but she didn’t care. They danced and danced and danced. Reyna had to remove her heels halfway through. Even if the music wasn’t a slow dance, they danced slowly. At the end, he flew her back to her house and kissed her good night. He walked all over the city that night because he knew he couldn’t sleep.
The dream shifted. On one side of his vision, Reyna was walking beside him on the pathway between the temples in Camp Jupiter. On the other side, Piper was walking with him on the beach back on Long Island. Holding his hand and staring into his eyes. The dream was blurred right down the middle. His left foot was in the sand and his right on stone.
Then at the same time, they wrapped their hands around his arm and leaned they’re heads on his shoulders. He was so guilty that it felt like he was carrying the weight of the sky, and he couldn’t get out of under.
“Oh, Jason.” They both said. “It’s such a beautiful night.”
They stop walking and stare harder into his eyes. They smile and both head in for a kiss then suddenly everything stops. Their faces freeze half an inch from his face. Their hands turn as cold as ice and their eyes bore into his soul.
He quickly gets his arms out of theirs and trips back into the sand. Piper’s eyes start to glow pink, so bright they blinded Jason.
When he regained his vision, he was still in the whole beach/city thing and it was starting to give him a head ache.
“Well, it’s about time!” said a voice.
Jason looked around to find that a marble statue of a girl in a T-shirt and shorts who looked around 18, and another girl made of soil who was wearing black robes with a shrivelled old body, 50 years old maybe. Jason panicked. The old lady reminded him of Gaea the black robes and soil.
The marble girl tilted her head, “What’s the matter? I thought I looked good!”
She looked around and completely passed the old lady as if she weren’t there. Jason pointed at the woman. “You don’t see her?”
The girl looked behind her, “Who?”
"Come to Rome my hero", Jason heard Gaea’s voice in his head. "Rome. I shall crush you and your friends, starting with Perseus Jackson. He will be the first one to die. Remember that Jason Grace. Defeating Hyperion was nothing compared to the suffering you will experience. Come to Rome, straight to your death. I shall await you."
The old woman's form dispersed in the wind.
The girl was still staring at Jason. “Hello? Anybody in there?”
Jason knew the old lady was Gaea. Which bring to mind who was the girl? Jason stood up and stepped away. “Who are you?” he asked
The girl sighed, “And I thought you were the complete package.”
She stood up straight as marble melted off of her skin. She had brown hair and dark eyes. She reminded him of Piper, dark hair simple clothes, and she had that same sarcastic look. Jason looked at Venus’s statue in her temple on the Camp Jupiter side of the dream.
“Venus?” he asked.
“Yes, Jason.” She looked down at her outfit. “Well actually, right now, I’m Aphrodite. I hate it how Romans are always about uniform and whatever. They completely DESTROY fashion! A lighter shade of purple would be perfect!” her shirt turned into a lavender-ish color with the letters SPQR on them.
“What do you think? Or maybe blue...” her shorts turned indigo.
Jason frowned. “You didn’t see her?”
“See who?”
Aphrodite looked at the ground and nervously stepped into the Long Island side of the dream. Her shirt turned orange. She made sure both our feet were in the water. “Jason, I think it’s best if you don’t mention that name. It kind of... you know.”
“So you saw... her in this dream?”
Jason nodded.
“Did she say anything?”
“Something about coming to Rome straight to our deaths and killing Percy Jackson first.”
Aphrodite’s face went slack, “You’re sure?”
Thunder rumbled in the sky. She shot an angry look at the sky and the rumbling stopped.
“What did Dad say?” Jason asked.
“Nothing.” Aphrodite took a deep breath and smiled. “Come Jason Grace. Let us walk.”
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over a year ago huskyrock said…
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Wow! That was long, I LIVE LIVE LIVE it! I guess Aphrodite really favors Percy/doesn't want him to die, me too, I LIVE Percy too! Did Aphrodite give Jason some advice or sth? Anyway, keep submitting and will u be posting part 2 tomorrow? And is Jason sleeping at night when the field of Mars burned up in flames or did u skip that part for now? Also, Quick question: Who/Which is ur favorite couple in PJ and HOO series?
over a year ago huskyrock said…
Plus, I agree with book worm. It'll be REALLY AWE-INSPIRING if u submit the next chapter early! Haha, good idea! Of course, I understand if u can't cause I can never keep up like u! (^_^)
over a year ago book-worm said…
I LIVE IT!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS TOTALLY AWE-INSPIRING!!!!! PLEASE SUBMIT SOON!!!!!! Please submit part 2 tomorrow!!!!!!!
^ my fav HOO couple is percabeth!!!!! What's yours?
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
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mine? I love PERCABETH of course. (who doesn't)... I just skipped the field of mars for now...
P.S. there might be another 2 parts (i underestimated it's LONG-NESS)
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over a year ago snowflakes989 said…
I just read this and just three words: JUST. PLAIN. AWESOME!!!!! And to all Percabeth fans-high five! Oh and like bookworm said, I totally live your story. Its way better than mine.
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
give me the link!! I'm sure its great! because anyone who loves Percy Jackson can't be any less than 99% awesome!!
it's official! yah! search it on the web!

Yeah, so guys, nevermind the whole preview thing... I love Percy too much, I could probably wrte a chapter a day, but it depends on when my mom will let me use my laptop! (she thinks I need a break!)
so... next chapter will probably be up tomorrow!!

P.S. Oh my GODS! Is it my imagination or is this forum in the popular content?! thanks guys for viewing and commenting etc. CAKE!
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over a year ago huskyrock said…
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Yay, glad EVERYONE likes Percabeth! Actually, I kinda don't. Sorry guys! Please don't hate me!(>_<)

Hi again! JUST KIDDING!!!!!!!! OH MY GODS, Percabeth is AMAZING! They're definitely my favorite couple!!!! Just want to see u guys' reaction! Lol and sorry if you got mad or sth for a moment!
over a year ago huskyrock said…
And please submit tomorrow!
over a year ago mjkcsk said…
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hey post soon please you are really good.
over a year ago jberagon17 said…
hi i am new to this forum but post soon
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
so guys, just wanted to say, congratulations to this forum for getting 1000 views in LESS THAN A MONTH! and also on the popular content!! Thanks to ALL of you out there and as I said yesterday, here's the next chapter!! . . . well, next PART

Chapter 7 part 2--Jason

It was weird. She just forgot all about what Jason had said. That could mean two things. Number one: Nothing to worry about, and Number two: ALOT to worry about. Jason seriously doubted it was number one.
Aphrodite started walking and Jason followed. “Why are you here?”
The goddess frowned at him, “Excuse me?”
“No! I just meant what did you come into my dreams for?”
She wrinkled her nose, “Fine. I have come here,” she spread her arms and the scene changed. “To help you.”
They were in a sort of Iris message room. On the left side were a bunch of Jason’s memories about Piper and on the right, Reyna. Jason took a step towards Reyna’s side, hoping to justify being with her but Aphrodite stopped him. “We should start at Piper’s side.”
As soon as his foot passed the first Iris message, his head ached and the message disappeared. Jason scratched the back of his head, “Ow.”
Aphrodite looked back, “Oh, yes. I forgot to tell you. Don’t touch any of these or you might permanently destroy your memories.”
Jason put his hands in his pockets. “ah. Thanks”
Aphrodite motioned him over, “Here i have and idea.”
She leads him to an empty hall and and snaps her fingers. The darkness evaporates and he’s suddenly standing in a Greek version of a movie theatre, with stone columns and marble thrones for seats. The place didn’t seem to have exits. They both sat in the front row. The chairs were surprisingly comfortable for marble. A few seats away, three old ladies—that looked like triplets—watched them.
Jason pointed at them, “Um...”
“Shhh, just act like they’re not there.” Aphrodite whispered. “They are the Fates.”
“The Fates...”
The goddess held out her hands and two boxes of popcorn appeared. She handed one to Jason.
“What are we doing here?” Jason asked.
“Well I thought it would be better to do this sitting down rather than walking through miles and miles of iris messages, don’t you?”
“Mhhm, and this is just Piper’s side!”
The lights dimmed. “Oh, good it’s starting...” a Fate mumbled.
The movie was of Jason when he was a baby. He was in a cradle playing soldier through the bars with a dark haired 5 year-old girl. Thalia, Jason thought.
The scene changed. He was 2 years old, playing with a pair of staplers. He accidentally stapled his lip to his gum and he cried until Thalia rushed into the room. Just watching it made Jason’s lips itch.
He watched himself being cradled by Thalia in a car, the road was bumpy and she was singing him a lullaby. His mom was driving. She was giving Thalia a lecture about getting to attached to Jason, that they should give him space to grow up into a real man. When they got to the park, his mom asked Thalia to bring the picnic stuff over to the top of the hill.
“I’ll just be a second darling.” she had said.
Thalia hesitated, but she did anyway.
As soon as Thalia was out of sight, Jason’s mom wrapped him in a purple blanket. She stared at him in the verge of tears.
“I am sorry Jason,” she said. “But I cannot deny the Queen of the Gods.”
She carried him to a house that was burnt down, leaving only the structure. She knelt at the bottom of the pool and set Jason down. Tears were streaming out of her eyes.
“I love you.” She whispered. “I always will.”
“I see you have brought the child.”, a woman’s voice echoed through the air.
Jason’s mom looked up at a woman in pink robes and a goatskin cloak. “Must you do this, Juno?!” She shouted, her voice filled with hate.
“This is important. Without the boy, Olympus will one day fall. Evil will take over, you and everyone you care about will perish.”
His mother sobbed. “Yes, I know that! But my son?!”
Juno’s voice softened. She knew what Jason’s mother was going through. “Your son is special. I promise you, someday he will make you proud.”
That didn’t matter to Jason’s mom, if anything, she cried harder. She looked at baby Jason one more time, “I love you.” She kissed Jason one more time and ran away crying.
Juno picked Jason up, “If you will be my hero one day, Jason Grace. You must grow up properly.”
Jason looked over to Aphrodite, who had a single tear on her cheek.
“What?” she asked. “She really DID love you. Can’t you tell?”
No, Jason couldn’t tell, he couldn’t even remember her name!

hope you guys LIVE it!
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over a year ago mjkcsk said…
I live it. you are Awe inspiring
over a year ago snowflakes989 said…
super awesome! (as usual) Post more!
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
I totally LIVE it! It was so AW-SPIRING!
over a year ago huskyrock said…
I'm SOOO happy u submitted this!!! U AND the story are BOTH AW-INSPIRING! Keep submitting as soon as possible!
over a year ago Blackjack-Arion said…
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i live it :) it was awe-inspiring! pls submit soon :)
over a year ago bookcat said…
oh my god or is it gods? anyway post soon (i feel so bad for jason) post
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
Thanks!!! glad you guys LIVE it!!
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
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here's the last part (I over estimated the length...)

Part 3
Suddenly, the air between Jason and Aphrodite shimmered.
“APHRODITE!” a booming voice shouted.
Aphrodite cringed, “Zeus! Be quiet! We are in the theatre!”
“Dad?” Jason asked Aphrodite through the mist.
“Unforunately,” Aphrodite grumbled.
She stuck her finger through the mist and pulled it to an angle both Jason and her could see.
Zeus seemed to notice the surroundings for the first time. He grunted and snapped his fingers. The light from his side of the iris-message dimmed.
“Aphrodite!” Zeus whispered. “What are you doing here! You should be at the Camp! I gave let you communicate once and you waste it on a dream!”
“Stop! Can’t you see I am trying to help your SON figure out who he loves? And technically, I AM at the camp.”
“Uh, hi Dad.” Jason said.
Zeus looked embarrassed. “Of course, I mean no offense, um... Jason, I know any child of mine doesn’t waste dreams, but I let Aphrodite three hours only!”
“Yes!” Aphrodite said. “Fine! I’ll go to deliver your stupid message.”
Zeus flashed her an irritated look and the iris message disappeared.
Aphrodite turned to me. “Sorry Jason, I have to go to your camp and give a speech so, we have to cut this a little short...”
“You mean we don’t get to watch the movie of my horribly ruined life? Aww.. what a shame.. OK let’s go.” Jason wasn’t anxious to see his mother abandon him again.
He didn’t want to remember the details of Camp Jupiter or Camp Half Blood. He wished he could just crawl up into a small ball and stay asleep the rest of his life. Or fly up so high and freeze himself to death. But he knew he couldn’t abandon his friends, or Piper, or Reyna... or the world.
Aphrodite sympathized. “I’m sorry Jason. You must find your own path from here.”
over a year ago bookcat said…
awww i hate zeus may he rest in taurturst (i spelled dat rong) keep posting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!
over a year ago book-worm said…
Post soon!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago jberagon17 said…
post soon
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
new page! time for some cake! glad you guys loved it!.....
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
eh obama looks CREEPY!!! in that picture
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
ok i just read the first part of the 2nd chapter and yea... no
over a year ago huskyrock said…
Yeah, u submitted! Keep submitting and of course AW- INSPIRING !
over a year ago book-worm said…
I live this story! Submit soon!!!
over a year ago SilverOwl2233 said…
I really live your story!! Please post soon!!
over a year ago book-worm said…
PlEase submit soon!!! It would be awe-inspiring!!!! I live this story!!!
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
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WARNING: this forum MAY OR MAY NOT slowly deteriorate into a boring/dull plotline... sooo, dont blame m if it get's worse. But i love percy jackson too much... ill keep posting anyway

Chapter 8—Leo
You know that feeling when you get burned? Leo didn’t, being the son of Hepheastus does have it’s advantages. This time, Leo FELT it and it was a totally different feeling for him.
When the place exploded with pink flames, no one else seemed to be bothered. Leo, however, stumbled back with burns on his arms.
“Leo!” Piper said, surprised.
“I thought you were immune to fire.” The Frank guy whispered.
“I was, shut up.” He answered.
As he watched, a drop of water appeared on his arms, then another, then another, until it covered them like bandages. Leo looked up the stage at Percy Jackson. Percy smiled at him, he nodded back. Leo had a feeling he knew what this was like.
A ten foot tall woman in a lavender shirt and indigo shorts stepped out of the fog smirking straight at Leo.
“Mom?” Drew said.
“Yes, Drew. Oh, by the way... hon, just because you are the daughter of the goddess of love, doesn’t mean you can go around kissing other people’s boyfriends.”
Drew was speechless.
“You hear that Annabeth? Yes, whenever she gives you more problems, feel free to IM me OK?”
“Um, yes Aphrodite.” Annabeth said quietly.
Aphrodite smiled over at Leo, “And Leo? Next time you think about burning Piper’s hair, remember this moment, and what I can do to you, despite your father.”
She waved her hand and Leo’s burns disappeared. The water bandages just melted into the ground.
“Romans!” Aphrodite announced. “AND Greeks, Yeah, I was supposed to give you guys a very long speech about who the Seven are and how good always triumphs evil and all, ... but I won’t”
Lightning struck the horizon.
“Geez, Zeus.” Aphrodite said. “If you really wanted your message delivered, you should have gone yourself.”
The Romans started kneeling.
“Hail Venus!” Reyna said
“Hail Venus!” The others repeated.
Aphrodite smiled. “I know it’s your tradition and all but as the goddess of love, I don’t really like being kneeled to so..”
She motioned them to get back up. The Romans hesitated but did anyway.
“Yes, that’s better.” Aphrodite said. “Anyway, I am just here to ... observe. So don’t mind me.”
She shrunk to normal size. “Go ahead.”
“Um, okay.” Annabeth was the first to speak up. “Off to the seven.”
That got the camps’ attention. They quieted down and waited.
“Okay,” Annabeth continued. “So Hera/Juno already chose Jason, Leo and Piper to be one of the Seven.”
Leo and Piper stepped on stage.
“And she also chose Percy, Hazel and Frank.” Said someone in the crowd.
Hazel and Frank waved, Percy stayed quiet.
“So, we have one more spot.” Some else added.
Reyna calmly stepped on stage and stared at Annabeth, Annabeth stared back.
“I volunteer.” Reyna said.
They both looked like they were ready to attack each other.
Leo wanted to see where this would go, Annabeth was a very powerful girl, for a teenager. Jason told him that Reyna was the daughter of Bellona. He almost wanted to move around collecting bets on who would win. But that would be rude.
“I should be there.” Annabeth said, with an angry tone.
“So should I.” Reyna replied.
Everyone looked at Aphrodite.
“Hey,” she said. “I’m not here remember?”
Everyone waited. Aphrodite sighed. She materialized next to Reyna and whispered something into her ear. Reyna’s expression was shock, then disbelief, then anger. She cried as she ran down the stage into the barracks.
Annabeth straightened up. She didn’t scream: YES!, like Leo expected. She walked over to Percy’s side and grabbed his hand. She wasn’t even smiling, like she didn’t expect to win.
Just then Jason came flying up from behind the stage.
over a year ago book-worm said…
Nice I totally loved it!!! Post soon even though you just posted.
over a year ago jberagon17 said…
post soon
over a year ago cheekypeach said…
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post soon............ur story is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago book-worm said…
over a year ago huskyrock said…
Submit soon, lIVE it!!! I'm sure this won't get boring
over a year ago book-worm said…
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
I'm starting to get lazy to write...anyone wanna co-author with me???
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
me i wanna pwease pwease pwease pwease!!!!!!!!
Dang i feel like Katniss everdean
over a year ago Heritage112 said…
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@wisegirl778: yeah u do U R NOW AW3SOM3 WIS3GIRL778 but yeah you should be!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago huskyrock said…
I would LIVE to co-write but I don't have much time and I really can't keep things up a lot so I think wisegirl778 should be the co-author instead! I'm really sorry but I can write a nice long chapter every month if u want me too!(^-^)Or can I?
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
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sure! we can do a co-co-author thing! just says so..
over a year ago jberagon17 said…
over a year ago huskyrock said…
THANKS and I'll post if I can though don't really count on me too much cause I post slow and can only post like once or twice a month!(*☻-☻*)Bye
over a year ago bookcat said…
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post awsome fyi keep posting
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
Hey peoplez! I'm gonna post like in a couple hours kk?????
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
Hehe I guess it's only going to be one hour because i am bored did anybody else watch the1D special YAY!!!!!! My first chappie one this forum! YAY!!!!!!

Annabeth's POV

Annabeth watched as Jason rises above the stage looking as though he has just awoken from a complicated dream. She was still in shock from being appointed as the seventh of the seven of the prophocy because she was expecting Aphrodite to pick Reyna her being the godess of love ( and appearently drama!) and Reyna being Jason's first girlfriend. But appearently she was happy with Percy and Annabeth's reunion so instead of her being droped off at Camp Half- blood on their way to Rome she was accutally going to Rome. Percy was beaming at her as though he knew that she would be picked to go by his old friend Aphrodite( long story). Her mouth curled into a half smile as he drags her onto the stage with him and announces her as the seventh.
At this point Jason was about a foot above the stage and his arms where extended out to the sides and his body was outlined in a faint pink light. Annabeth was mezmerized she had seen the blessing of Aphrodite once before on Piper and she was beginning to think that it was an all girls thing. But now she can see that she was wrong on Jason the blessing looked almost laughable almost. His eyes glow with a light that is older then the gods even older than the titans. It looks as though Gaea is pocessing him to send us a message through the blessing. Jason doubles over in pain and both Reyna and Piper rush over to see if he's okay. They ask him a series of questions and he nods yes or no to every single one of them. They both look genuially concerned about him and not even bother to glare at eachother as they lead the ex preator to his bunk back on board the Argo 2. That leaves it to Percy who informed Annabeth he was appointed preator after the battle on the feild of Mars to dismiss everyone and make sure they get to bed.
Annabeth didn't want to leave her boyfriends side so she asked him to sleep in his bedroom that they had made for him on board the Argo 2. He quickly agreed oblivously reluctaunt to leave her side aswell. They walk hand in hand to the flying ship and get there in about ten minutes. They walk through the halls quietly since the others are surely asleep. Percy's room is right across from hers so Annabeth doesn't have to let go untill they are inbetween the two doors. He kisses her goodbye and opens the door to his room. Annabeth was sure he was going to like it she had designs it herself not letting anybody in for days untill she got done with it. He comes back out proboly seeing the note she left in there telling him she did all of it and pulls her into another kiss.
"Thanks." He says and goes back into his room. Annabeth goes into her own room. Her walls are painted light grey. Her queen size bed has a black head board, her comforter is grey with a large decorative purple owl on it, her pillows are grey with an additional purple owl in the middle, she has a black wooden desk that is placed in the corner, on it her Dalduas laptop hums to life, shee has a framed picture of her and Percy, and a grey light. She also has a small bookcase containinng all of her books and notebooks, blueprints and pictures of friends. She walks over to her bed and throws over the covers and climbs into bed she grabs her purple sham and pulls it up over her head. She throws the small owl pillow across the room. Slowy she falls into the most peaceful sleep she has had in monthes.
over a year ago book-worm said…
Nice wisegirl!!!!!! Lived it!!!! Submit soon!!!!
(haha(: I feel like such a nerd!!!! I live it!!!!!)
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
thank both of us are working on the next one
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
big smile
Annabeth’s POV
Annabeth dreamt of Jason as a kid.
He was around 6 or 7 years old, sitting cross legged under a spotlight in a dark room. He was facing right, humming to himself. Annabeth watched him. After a few minutes, a bright light shimmered across Jason in front of Annabeth. Annabeth cautiously stepped back.
She squinted at the bright light and frowned. Athena.
Athena was wearing her usual Greek clothes staring at Annabeth like she had killed a man. Annabeth didn’t know what to say. For almost 3 months, her mother never appeared in her dreams or answered her prayers, she knew why.
“I won’t.” she said.
“I’m not here about that.” Athena simply said.
“What is it now?”
Athena’s shoulders relaxed. “You shouldn’t be on this quest.”
Annabeth was surprised. She was SURE she was one of the seven Hera has been bugging her for months about her responsibilities and sacrifices blah, blah, blah. She had spent eight whole months looking for Percy then here was her mother telling her that she couldn’t be with him.
“No.” Annabeth said. Fear crept into her voice. “Eight months. Hera! She said—“
“Annabeth. The prophecy.”
She heard pity in Athena’s voice, which did nothing but make her angry.
“Eight months! Aphrodite! She said I was!”
Athena’s eyes drifted down to Jason. “That was only for her daughter. She didn’t believe me Annabeth. No one can change fate.”
Annabeth did not understand. “What? Piper?”
“Yes, I am sorry Annabeth. I cannot tell you more. You must find that out yourself.”
And with that she turned into a swirl of books and disappeared
Annabeth woke up in her bed breathing heavily she hoped that she hadn't been talking in her sleep again because then Percy would worry even more about her. She climbed out of her bed and made it.
Her arm exploded in pain she tryed not to cry out but the pain was to much for her to bear a scream escaped her mouth and she could her Percy's door slam and footsteps running across the hall. He burst through the door and sank down in front of hertrying to comfort her. The pained had lessened but when she looked down there it was an olive branch just a small one but she could tell what it was the mark of her mother Athena was on her arm.
"Oh no."
" What Annabeth? Tell me!" Percy presses. I hold out my arm to him and I can tell he doesn't understand.
" The Mark of Athena thats whats wrong."
" And that is?"
" It's the mark of a murder Percy but I don't get it what did I do?"
" I don't know Wisegirl I seriously don't know"
" But what if it's a prediction what if I might kill somebody?"
" I'll still be here for you."
" Oh Seaweedbrain!" I bury my face in his shoulder and we sit there for awhile.
A few moment later, Leo cam bursting into the room, "Guys, you gotta see this."
They both quickly got up anf followed Leo. He led through a maze of halls, up a flight of stairs, down a couple, then up three more. This was so deep inside the ship, Annabeth didn't have enough time to explore it all, she didn't even know these halls existed.
Finally Leo came to a stop beside a small closet. He took out two breathing tanks and handed one to Annabeth and put one on himself. He looked at Percy.
"I guess you won't be needing this huh?" he asked.
Percy shook his heAD, "What's this all about?"
"Come on." Leo walked a few more feet and opened another door. This room was sort of like the engine room, but not the whole thing, Annabeth remembered. One of her half-brothers suggested to separate all the engines so the ship can't be disabled in one hit, there were tons of these things all over the Argo II. Jason and Piper were staring into what now was a huge lake. A tangle of wires hung from the dimly lit ceiling that extended all the way down into seawater.
"Woah," Annabeth said. "What happened here?"
Water should not have been inside this ship, and the wires should have all been neatly arranged on the ground. (she was a neat freak). As soon as Percy saw what was at the bottom, he inhaled sharply and dove into the water.
"Wait, Percy--" Annabeth said.
When he didn't come up for a while, Annabeth was about to jump in after him when he flew out of the water riding on a wave, in his arms was Reyna.

sorry it took so long, my mom sort of grounded me, here's the next chapter. Hope you like it!!
over a year ago SilverOwl2233 said…
Wow!! I really LIVE it!! Please post soon!!
over a year ago jordan333 said…
Post again soon please
over a year ago bukluvr17 said…
amazing i luv ur story pls post again really soon
over a year ago book-worm said…
No way!!!!! That's awesome!!!! Post soon guys!!!
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
I'm so glad you guys lived it!!!
over a year ago cheekypeach said…
big smile
OMG....PLEASE POST SOON ( it was awinspiring)
over a year ago book-worm said…
I totally lived it!!!
over a year ago jberagon17 said…
post soon that was amazing
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
Did you guys enjoy my chappie?
over a year ago book-worm said…
^ YES!!!!!!! How could I not it was AWE-INSPIRING!!!!!!
over a year ago bookcat said…
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!! no anabeth has to be on this quest post post post post post post
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
Leo's POV

Things could not get any worse for Leo. First he has to go on a quest with two lovebirds to do nothing but feel like a fifth wheel (or is it third wheel?). Then he finds out Jason really has another girl back here in Camp Roman. Then Annabeth finds her long lost boyfriend and they will probably live happily ever after. Why can't HE have a girlfriend?
Another thing is: why in the Hades would Reyna destroy his ship? She could have just walked up through the frickin' door! now they would have to go back and forth through these halls for about another week just to fix this. And where did all the water come from??
Annabeth gasped when she saw Reyna, and she looked like a mouse caught in a trap. Maybe it was just jealousy, but Leo had a feeling it was more than that. Perc rode up higher and higher on his little wave.
Leo wished he had been born to Posiedon, or some other god besides Hephaestus. He knew if he had, his mother would still be alive. But the fire user thing is still kinda cool.
As soon as Percy's feet touched the ground, Annabeth pulled him a little too quickly from Reyna and kissed him.
"My gods," she said. "If you do that again, I swear I will kick the water right out of you."
Reyna looked embarrassed. She clossed her eyes and muttered to herself.
"Please be a dream, please be a dream..."
she opened her eyes again and her shoulders slumped. "Oh, Pluto..."

so guys this is just a preview cuz I just made it a while ago, bec. it doesn't look like wise girl is gonne post sooo... enjoy!!!

P.S that "Oh pluto part is like "hades for the greeks." just sayin'
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over a year ago somisista said…
OMG that was epic!
over a year ago jberagon17 said…
post soon
over a year ago book-worm said…
Post soon!!!
over a year ago fangirl-dianne said…
This forum is getting less and less comments...
over a year ago 1999jacko said…
ammazing no contest best mark of athena ever you are both amazing writers
over a year ago bookcat said…
WHAT WAS THAT but awsome post
over a year ago book-worm said…
Awesome post!