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The Heroes of Olympus Mark of Athena Fanfic, Rainbow Style

rainbow_goddess posted on Jun 27, 2012 at 08:58AM
Annabeth
Annabeth leaned over the edge. Her heart pounded. She was finally going to see her boyfriend, Percy Jackson, after eight long months. Most of the senior campers from Camp Half-Blood came along. Leo Valdz steering the Argo II. Out of the corner of her eyes, she saw Jason Grace and Piper McLean holding hands, talking. She hoped that the video Leo sent would let the Romans know that they weren't the enemy. But after watching Leo talk, she started to think that instead of helping them, Leo would get them killed in painful, nasty ways.
Piper and Jason came up next to her. Annabeth looked at them. "What do you think will happen?" she whispered.
Jason gazed into space. "I don't know."
Suddenly, a cloud parted and what Annabeth saw nearly gave her a heart attack. Camp Jupiter. The landscape displayed below her was beautiful. The hills were green. The Roman style temples and buildings were unbelievable. Her mouth hung open.
Leo's voice echoed through the speekers. "Attention everyone. We have arrived in Camp Jupiter. And they have spotted us. Jason, please kindly wave so that the Romans know that you are with us."
Annabeth sighed. Leo had the wierdest mind of them all. Piper and Jason rolled their eyes.
Below them, a large crowd of people stood, screaming and shouting. Then as the Argo II got closer, Annabeth saw that most of them carried weapons. Uh-oh, Annabeth thought.
"Leo!" Jason suddenly yelled. "You're going to land in the forum! Move to the left!"
Leo obeyed. Romans ran to meet them. Annabeth scanned the crowds, hoping to see Percy. Then she saw him. He had his arms around a girl with curly brown hair, who was about thirteen or fourteen, and a large bulky guy. The guy looked around sixteen.
"PERCY!!!!!!!!" she screamed. Percy dropped his arms and their eyes met.
"Annabeth!!" Percy cried.
Annabeth leaped off even before the ship landed. The Romans made way for her. She could feel tears streaming down as she ran. She tackled Percy and leaped into his arms. It felt so good to be wrapped in his powerful, strong arms. She felt so safe in his grasp that she didn't want to let go. But Percy pulled back and looked into her eyes with those beautiful sea green eyes that Annabeth haven't seen in such a long time.
"I've missed you, Wise Girl," Percy whispered.
"I've missed you too, Seaweed Brain," Annabeth said. She looked up and saw that there were tears in his eyes too.
Percy pulled her back into his arms and kissed her. A real kiss on the lips. They stood there for such a long time that Annabeth didn't realize that everyone was watching, until whoops and applause filled the air. Annabeth felt her face turn burning hot.
Percy gripped her hand. "Come on. Follow me. There's someone I want you to meet." He pulled her along, until they were standing in front of Jason, Leo, and Piper. They were talking with the two kids Percy had his arms around of before and another girl, who looked about fifteen. She had long black hair, and dark, intense brown eyes.
"Annabeth," Percy said. "Meet Hazel Levesque, daughter of Pluto." He pointed to the girl with curly brown. Annabeth saw that her eye were gold, like a 14-karat gold peice.
Annabeth managed a faint "hi". Hazel nodded and smiled warmly.
"This is Frank Zhang," Percy introduced. He nodded to the big, bulky boy. "He's a son of Mars. And my distant, ah, very distant half brother. Frank is probably the only nice child of the war god."
Frank blushed. Annabeth smiled. She realized that Frank had a strange combination of a strong man, and a pudgy babyish face.
Percy pointed to the other girl, who was talking to Jason. "That's Reyna, daughter of Bellona, the war goddess. She's the praetor of this legion."
Jason turned to Percy. "You replaced me?"
Annabeth had no idea what Jason was talking about. But Percy looked down and shuffled his feet nervously. "I didn't want to. But the legion insisted. And Reyna," he added nervously.
Jason's eyes were dangerous and threatening. Piper touched his shoulder. "It's all right. We'll figure this out."
Annbeth introduced Jason, Piper, and Leo, to Hazel and Frank. Hazel stared at Leo. "You're Sammy."
"What?" Annabeth asked. The others looked euqually confused. Leo stared at Hazel as if she had popped out from his nightmare.
Percy was about to explain when Reyna interrupted. "We'll talk about this at the meeting." She raised her voice and shouted. "Senators and Greeks. Meet me in the Senate House."
Annbeth looked at Percy questioningly. "Just follow me," he said.
All the others from Camp Half-Blood joined up with them. Percy turned back and announced, "Everyone. Listen up. No weapons allowed, so you're gonna have to take them out. You'll get them back, but we don't want the meeting to get bloody."
They marched to the city. The statue, Terminus, made sure all the weapons were placed safely on the metal tray.
They arrived at the Senate House right on time. Percy took the seat next to Reyna at the head. Jason kept giving Percy a murderous look. Percy looked very uncomforatable, because Reyna kept taking hold of his hand. Annabeth felt a strong pulse of jelousy rippling inside her.
Reyna stood. "Jason, I would like to hear your story. From the very beginning. Then Percy will tell you his. Then, we must discuss the problem that our long lost praetor, Jason, has come back, and Percy has just recently been raised at the second praetor. But that'll be for later. Jason, you may begin."
Jason stood and took a deep breath. Then he began.

This is my first fanfic, so i hope that you all like it. and i would LOVE comments. they dont hafta be positive. but keep them constructive. enjoy!
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10 months ago jordan333 said…
cool
Awesome post again soon please
10 months ago rainbow_girl said…
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NEW PAGE!!! im still thinking about what i should do next. ill probably post tonight.
10 months ago rainbow_girl said…
big smile
i actually finished it. wow. here you go. the next chapter will be in franks pov.
its the whole thing.

Percy
When Percy collapsed onto the bed, he couldn't sleep. However hard he tried. He could here his friends breathing. The moon shone bright through the window.

When Percy finally fell asleep, his dreams were similar to all his others. But something felt wrong. His limbs felt tense. It felt as if he was standing in thick syrup. Percy looked down, and his heart crawled into his throat. He was standing in blood. A river of blood. He was in the small creek he made last night, overlooking the Field of Mars.
Gaea's face appeared. Perseus Jackson. I'm surprised you managed to escape from my grasp. But no worries. I have plenty of plans left. Soon, you shall fall into my hands, and your friends can't do anything to save you. Rome and Greece will finally fall. And you, Perseus Jackson, will be the key to the gods' defeat.
Searing pain pierced into Percy's mind. My precious pawn. Don't be afraid. Gaea's voice cooed softly. He saw visions of war against his friends. Blood was splattered everywhere. Stop! He cried. Don't hurt my friends!
Gaea laughed. The ground trembled. But you won't be able to save them
The pain in his mind increased. Percy screamed.

“Percy! Percy!” Someone was shouting his name.
Percy groggily sat up and blinked the sleep out of his eyes. His head ached. “Wh-what happened?”
Annabeth was sitting next to him “Are you okay? You were crying out in your sleep. And you kept rolling around.”
Percy realized that Jason, Leo, Piper, Frank, Hazel, and Annabeth were all staring at him. No one else seemed to be in the room. He shook his head, trying to clear his mind. “I-I'm fine. Really. Don't worry about me.”
Hazel frowned. “You look as if you didn't sleep at all.”
“Dreams,” Percy muttered, as he got out of bed.
There were gasps. “Dreams?” Annabeth asked cautiously. “None of us had any dreams.”
Percy froze. No dreams? That didn't sound right.
“You look terrible,” Frank said.
Which didn't exactly make Percy feel any better.
“I'm fine, really,” Percy insisted.
None of them looked really convinced.
Percy glanced at Annabeth. She seemed kind of... troubled. “What's wrong?”
Annabeth looked behind her. Hazel nodded encouragingly. “I-I got an Iris-message from Athena.”
Percy's jaw dropped. “Athena?!? Are you serious?” Percy hoped it wasn't a message telling them to stay away from each other. That would pretty much suck. But her expression said that it was more than that. A lot more.
“She wants us to check on Mt. Tam.”
“Why?”
“She said something bad is stirring in Mt. Tam. There is a powerful source there.”
Percy thought for a second. “Does it have anything to do with Atlas?”
“Maybe.”
“Anything else?”
She hesitated. “She, uh, told me to tell you to be careful.”
Percy raised an eyebrow. Since when did Athena care about me? He thought.
Then he thought of his dream Does that have anything to do with what was happening at Mt. Tam? He thought about telling his friends about his dream, but that can wait.
Percy glanced at the nervous faces of his friends.
“Anyways,” Percy said, anxious to change the topic, “What time is it?”
Jason checked his watch. “Ten-thirty. You slept through breakfast,” Jason replied. “We couldn't wake you up.”
Percy sat up so suddenly he hit is head against the top bunk. “Ow.” He rubbed his head.
Jason nodded towards the door. “Reyna's waiting for us. We need to discuss about our departure. Oh, and Reyna changed the praetor battle to tomorrow. She said we might not have time to wait another day.”
Percy groaned. Why did he have to fight for praetor ship? He didn't even want it in the first place.
“Come on,” Hazel said. “We're holding back the senate."
Percy nodded and stretched. “Let's go.”

They just walked out of the barrack when a Roman soldier from the Third cohort raced to them. “The camp is under attack!”
“What?” Jason asked.
“The army. It-it's huge.” The soldier looked at Percy for answers. Percy pretended not to see a look of irritation and jealousy flash across Jason's face.
“Gather the cohorts. Form ranks. Just make sure they are ready.”
The soldier nodded and scrambled away.
Horns started to blow.
Percy looked across the Field of Mars and saw Reyna and the senators running towards them.
“I heard the horns,” Reyna gasped. “Is the camp really-”
She didn't need to finish the sentence. Percy and his friends just nodded.
“This is bad. Really bad.” Piper said.
There was a moment of silence. Finally Annabeth said, “Let's go check out the army. Maybe we can estimate the number and make a plan.”
It didn't happen like that, which was no surprise to Percy. Almost nothing went right along with the plan when Percy was around.
When they saw the army, Percy's heart nearly skipped a beat. The army was larger than the one that attacked Camp Jupiter a week ago.
They all stood watching as more and more monsters appeared from the Caldecott Tunnel.
“Holy Hephaestus,” Leo muttered. “It's huge.”
One of the senators started chewing on his finger nail. “We're dead. We are so dead. AAAHHHHH!!!!!” He ran off.
Percy gulped. There were packs and packs of hellhounds, hoards of dracenae, armies of cyclopes, (the Ma Gasket kind, whatever that was), and giants. Percy wasn't sure what kind of giants they were.
Percy leaned close to Annabeth. “What are those giants?”
“I don't know. I've never seen them before. Gaea must've let them out of Tatarus or something.”
“Great. A new species of giants. Great.”
Percy glanced at his friends. They all had solemn expressions. If he was going to die, at least he would die fighting next to his friends. It could be worse.
Then a large muscular man in armor stepped out of the shadows. He had a brutal looking face, covered with scars. At first Percy thought that he was looking at his old enemy, Ares, but he knew better. Ares would never betray Olympus.
He looked closer and the man's face caught in the sunlight. His breath almost stopped. Because the man, was no god, but a titan. He remembered what Annabeth had said. Something bad is stirring in Mt. Tam. Because the titan in armor was Atlas.

Percy couldn't believe it. It really was Atlas.
Jason frowned. “He looks familiar.”
Percy took a deep breath. “That's Atlas.”
Annabeth caught her breath. “Are you sure?”
“I'm positive.”
Leo sighed. “Great. Just wonderful. Now we get to be turned into chow.”
“Leo!” Piper scolded. “Shut up.”
“Sorry Beauty Queen.” Which earned him a black eye.
Percy turned to the senators. “Centurions. Gather your cohort. Remember, stay together.”
They nodded and scrambled away.
Reyna whistled and Skippy came soaring down. This gave Percy an idea. “Hazel, go find Arion.”
He whistled three times, loud and clear. Before long, three large shapes appeared in the air. Blackjack and his two friends, Guido and Porkpie, landed in front of the.
Yo boss. Anyone you want us to stampede? Blackjack neighed. Cuz this horse is ready for anything! As to prove his point, Blackjack rose on his hind legs and neighed loudly.
“Uh right,” Percy said, feeling awkward. “A lot.” He pointed to the army.
Porkpie neighed nervously. That is one huge army.
Guido clopped his feet excitingly. I'm in the mood for some monster pie.
“Well great.” Percy turned to his friends. “Annabeth, why don't you take Porkpie? Jason, how would you feel about riding a pegasus?”
Annabeth squealed happily and hugged Porkpie. Jason looked uncomfortable. “I've actually never ridden a pegasus.”
Percy laughed. “It's easy. Oh, and I think that you should take the eagle with you.”
“What?”
Percy wanted to laugh at Jason's expression. “Hey, you're Jupiter's son. You can use the eagle's power and add it to yours.”
“Sure.”
Percy glanced back. They nodded to let him know they were ready. He turned his attention back to the front, and saw the titan stalking towards them.
Atlas looked at Jason. “Jason Grace. I witnessed your fight with Krios. Why, I wanted to laugh at him. Getting beaten by a fifteen year old?” Atlas snorted. He looked at Percy. “My, my. Perseus Jackson. Your name is all over the world now. Kronos failed, but mother earth hasn't. The Romans and Greeks will fall once and for all!”
The monsters surged forward. Percy raised his hand the Little Tiber rose. The waves crashed onto the monsters, vaporizing the first few rows.
“Attack!” Jason shouted. He raised the eagle and lightning streaked down onto the enemy lines. Percy, Jason, and Annabeth climbed onto their pegasus. Hazel mounted Arion. Together, they attacked.
Battle cries were heard throughout the whole camp as the Romans moved as one against the enemy.

The battle was a mayhem. So many things were going on. Fire fell down onto the enemy lines once in a while and Percy knew that Leo was doing his awesome fire power thing. Hazel made tunnels collapsed and monsters would roar in surprise before falling into the world below. Frank turned into several different animals, sometime big, sometimes small. At some point, Frank would be a huge bear fighting, then turn into a mouse, run behind an enemy and turn back to a bear to deliver the final blow. It was a smart idea, but it wasn't enough. They were going to be overwelmed.
Atlas approached Percy, and their swords clashed against each other. Sparks flew in different directions. They exchanged strikes a parries, but neither of them could hurt each other. Finally, Percy made his mistake. Atlas disarmed him and Percy flew a hundred yards backwards. His whole body ached. His head hurt, and in his guts, he knew he was beaten The titan raised his spear and got ready to stab downward.
Percy closed his eyes and waited for the final blow to come. But it never came. There was a bright flash in front of him and the smell of ozone filled the air. Jason! Jason save his life by summoning lightning. He helped Percy up. “Thanks,” he muttered.
“No problem.”
Together, they engaged Atlas, pushing him closer and closer to the Little Tiber.
Percy willed the water to flow out, turning to ice, forming a large pointed ice spear. He was about to hurl it at Atlas when a pain in his head made him lose concentration. He sank to the ground. Jason called his name, but it sounded far away. The pain was just too much.
Gaea's voice talked softly to him. Visions of the destruction of his friends haunted him. Percy screamed one last time before falling into darkness.
10 months ago book-worm said…
GAH!!!!!!!! Scary!!!!!! Post soon!!!!!!!!!
10 months ago rainbow_girl said…
im still thinking about how i should write the next chappie. i already got down the main idea, just need the details.
10 months ago book-worm said…
Ok well post soon!!!!
10 months ago rainbow_girl said…
here u go!

Frank
Frank had never felt so alive. The feeling of hitting monsters, just plain awesome. But after a few minutes, Frank realized that they were losing. Wounded campers cried out in pain and the healers were busy. The monsters cried out in joy and charged. No way are they going to destroy his home. Frank was about to slice at a hellhound when he heard Percy scream in agony. Oh no, oh no. Jason called Percy's name and Atlas laughed evily.
“Percy! Percy!” It was Annabeth. She raced past him in a blur of blond hair. Frank rushed after her. They knelt down around Percy and he wasn't moving.
In no time, Tyson, Piper, Leo, Hazel, and Reyna had joined them.
Jason was standing above them, yelling a taunt at the titan. Lightning streaked down and made contact with Atlas. Frank expected the titan to vaporize on the spot, but he only laughed. “Doesn't seem like your father is with you boy!”
Frank stood and looked at the motionless body of Percy. He gently put his hand on Annabeth's shoulder. “Come on. We can't give up now. We have to keep fighting to honor him.”
There was tears in all of their eyes. Frank could feel his eyes beginning to water, but he fought them back. No way was he going to cry in front of his friends. He had to stay strong, like Jason was.
Frank raised his sword. “For Percy!”
His friends repeated the words and charged in different directions into the enemy lines. Annabeth, however stayed close to Percy to make sure no monster trampled him.
Tyson shouted, "NO ONE HURTS MY BROTHER!!!!" He jumped on a giant and started bonking him in the head with a shield.
Frank imagined his eyes glowing like a lion. With one massive roar, his body swelled. His hair turned into a golden mane. His muscles grew and a tail lashed around. Frank was now a full grown male lion.
He roared in outrage and leaped at a giant that was growling at a Roman from the Second cohort.
The battle was disastrous. Tunnels collapsed and the grass burned. Frank noticed that there were robots moving through the enemy lines, snapping at the monsters and roaring fire.
It was probably one of Leo's master pieces and Frank couldn't help feeling impressed.
Piper was doing a good job of distracting the monsters. Even though she was wearing a Care Bear T-shirt (really?) and her hair was practically smoldering, Frank found himself staring at her. He shook his head to clear his mind. Concentrate.
Finally, the monsters were starting to fall back. Then it was just Jason and Atlas.
The eagle was no longer in his hand. Frank looked around and saw Dakota holding the eagle aloft.
He turned his attention back to the fight. Jason and Atlas parried and exchanged strikes. Jason had several cuts that were bleeding, but he still seemed pretty strong. Atlas, on the other hand, was almost smoldering with rage. He was in a worse condition that Jason and his rage was making him careless. Lightning came down and struck Atlas in the chest. The titan flew backwards and slammed into a rock. The campers cheered as Jason raced after him. He brought his gladius downward, but Atlas rolled out of the way and the blade sank hilt deep into the ground. Jason tried tugging it out, but no such luck. Atlas kicked Jason's legs out from under him and the son of Jupiter went down.
Frank winced. There was no way a demigod like Jason could beat Atlas. Then he thought of how Percy said he defeated Hyperion and Kronos and how Jason defeated Krios.
Come on Jason, Frank thought. You can do it.
Atlas bellowed with laughter. “You can not defeat me, little demigod. I don't need Gaea's help to kill you. I can finish you off myself.”
He saw many Romans inching closer, twitching, probably wanting to help Jason. Frank felt the same urge, but he knew that this was Jason's fight, not his. Jason had to finish Atlas off himself.
Atlas brought down his spear and Frank turned away, not wanting to see what happened next.
Then Atlas grunted and BAM!! Frank looked and couldn't believe what he saw.
Atlas was on the ground looking dazed. Golden ichor leaked from a gas above his forhead.
Jason looked down at him with distaste, and Atlas's spear was in his hand. The look on Jason's face was beyond hatred and anger, it was full of outrage so bad his whole body seemed to glow.
Frank gasped. His body was glowing. There was a faint light of sky blue surrounding Jason, lifting him off the ground by a few inches.
“The blessing of Zeus,” Annabeth muttered. “I-I've never seen anything like that.”
Jason brought down the spear and it pierced Atlas's stomach.
The roar that followed was so loud Frank felt like his ear drums would explode. Everyone was blasted backwards.
Frank hauled himself to his feet, ignoring the pain in his back or the fact that he felt like he was going to throw up.
Everyone got to their feet too, except, well, except for Percy, who was still lying in the same place.
The expression on Atlas's face was full of pure shock. He started to glow and Annabeth shouted, “Look away!”
Frank obeyed and he felt a searing heat on his back, then it faded. Atlas was gone and a very shocked Jason was on his knees, looking at where Atlas was a moment ago.
The monster army slowly backed up, not sure what to do, now that their leader was gone.
Piper stepped forward. “Leave us now, or you will all face a terrible future.”
The enemy dropped their weapons as one and ran for the Caldecott Tunnel, trampling each other trying to get away first.
The camper cheered, but Frank's heart wasn't in it. Frank ran to Percy and felt his chest. Nothing.
Jason, Annabeth, Piper, Hazel, Leo, and Reyna knelt by him. Annabeth and Tyson were sobbing, horribly. Mrs. O'Leary, the friendly hellhound nuzzled Percy mournfully. Then she howled in despair into the sky. The others had tears in their eyes too. Frank let his tears drip down. Percy was his friend and now he's just gone.
The cheering died down. All of Percy's Greek friends were sniffing and their eyes were red and puffy from crying
Frank felt as if part of his soul, his identity was gone. A huge hole in his chest opened and was filled with grief and sorrow. He hadn't felt like this since his mother's death.
If Frank felt this bad, he could only imagine how Annabeth and Percy's older friends felt.
Will Solace tried to pour nectar into Percy's mouth, but he was just shaking to badly.
Will looked at the stunned faces of the Romans and shook his head.
A few people started to cry.
Suddenly, Percy gasped and sat straight up like he had just woken from a nightmare.
Annabeth looked up. “Per-Percy?”
Everyone stared at him, mouths opened in shock.
Percy looked confused. “What's everyone staring at?”
No answer.
“Close your mouths,” Percy said. “Or flies will go in and your jaws will be disconnected.”
Frank and everyone else closed your mouth.
Reyna wiped her tears. “You-you were...dead.”
Percy stared at her. “What?”
Hazel scooted forward. “What do you remember?”
Percy frowned as if trying to remember. “I-I don't know. There's so many thing in my head, I can't tell what's real and what's not real.” He looked at all of them.
Frank gulped. What if Percy thinks he's dreaming? “But you were dead.”
Percy shook his head. “Like I said, there's just so many things going on. Gaea showed my some visions and then it went black. And I just woke up.”
Reyna stood. “Everyone go back to your bunks and rest.” She nodded at Will. “Take Percy to the infirmary.” She looked at Jason, Leo, Piper, Annabeth, Hazel, and Frank. “We need to talk.”
Uh-oh, Frank thought. But he followed the rest of them as they marched to the principia.

who's pov do u think the next chapter should be in?
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10 months ago book-worm said…
Do piper or jason maybe Leo Super awesome chappie loved it as always!!!!!(:
10 months ago rainbow_girl said…
thanks book-worm. ill do jason, i guess. do u think the next chapter should be the praetor batte? cuz if u want it to be it, then ill do jason's pov.
10 months ago book-worm said…
Yeah!!!!!!!! That would be awesome!!!!!
10 months ago jordan333 said…
cool
No way not yet Percy was just dead he is in no condition to fight try annabeths pov I wanna no what she was thinking or Reyna cos she likes him too
10 months ago Phrabow said…
you should do percy pov soon i want to know whats he been thinking
10 months ago rainbow_girl said…
all right. ill do reynas pov.
10 months ago LeosGirl said…
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Hi rainbow!!!!!!! I love your forum!!!!! This story is great!!!!!!! Can't wait for your next post!!!!
10 months ago rainbow_girl said…
great. i still need to think about what to do next.
10 months ago book-worm said…
Okay!!!! Post soon!!!!
10 months ago jordan333 said…
cool
Cool cant wait for Reyna's pov
10 months ago rainbow_girl said…
it might take a few days. im still debating on what to do next. so just hang on tight.
10 months ago book-worm said…
Ok!!!!
10 months ago rainbow_girl said…
im actually working on it right now.
10 months ago SilverOwl2233 said…
Awesome!!! Post soon!!
10 months ago rainbow_girl said…
heyy, i just edited the previous chapter. u can reread it if u want.
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10 months ago megon4ever said…
OH MY GOSH
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!
That was the best chapter yet!
I don't go on fanpop a lot, but i'll definately go on for yours!!
10 months ago rainbow_girl said…
thanks. do u think its too emotional and choppy? thats what my friend said, and after i reread it, i kindof hafta agree. i dont really think about what im gonna type, it just happens.
10 months ago Phrabow said…
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book worm put your link to your fanfiction that you and another person just started because i want to read it