The Heroes of Olympus Thalia Blackmails Percy and Annabeth (Rated R)

aqualad posted on Sep 03, 2012 at 05:21PM
Readers discretion may be advised. You've been warned. Im continuing this forum ermmmmmm made as a little gift. XD

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over a year ago aqualad said…
First chapter

"Hi Percy." Annabeth said, grabbing Percy's hand. "Hey, sorry I'm late. So uh, why did you bring me to this dark ally?" Percy asked. "Cause I wanted to talk to you about something. In private. I thought Thalia wouldn't find us here." Annabeth said, sitting down on the dust. "Yeah, it's weird. She's been following us ever since we started dating." Percy said. "So, what did you want to talk about?" He asked. "We've been dating for a long time, and I was wondering if we could uh, talk about our future." Annabeth lied. That wasn't what she wanted to talk about at all. "Oh." Percy sounded disappointed. "What do you mean "oh"? Annabeth said. "Nothing, I just thought I could see..." He looked at her breasts and glanced away quickly. "Percy..."She said, crossing her arms over her chest so he couldn't see them. "I'm sorry. I just-" Percy started. "No, it's okay. That's really why I brought you here. I was thinking. Maybe we should, you know..." Her voice trailed off. "Yeah, i want to do it. I think I'm ready." Percy said, looking at her breasts again. Annabeth sighed. She started to take off her tank top. Underneath was a lacy, black bra. Percy took off his t-shirt and stared at her bra. Then he slid his hand down her bare back and into her skirt. He felt her thong. He slid his hands in that too and felt her butt. He squeezed it and Annabeth squealed. He had never had so much fun before. He kept squeezing for a while and then moved on. He pulled off her skirt and threw it next to her shirt. Annabeth smiled at the look on his face. He had never seen her this naked before. Annabeth pulled down Percy's jeans revealing his boxers. She noticed he was still staring at her bra. "Okay, fine. You can see." Annabeth said smiling. Percy pulled off the bra and smiled at what he saw. He kissed Annabeth's boobs and she laughed. She kissed him hard on the lips. Then he pulled her thong off too and stared at the naked Annabeth. He took off his boxers and threw them in the pile. He grabbed a condom and put it on. Then they rolled around in the dust and had sex. They had it for a long time and then she jumped on him and sucked on his dick and he licked her inner thigh. "Oh, Percy. That feels really good." Annabeth said, stretching her really. He turned Annabeth around and sucked on her boobs again. They kissed some more and had sex again. Then he sat up. "We should go. Thalia's gonna get suspicious and come looking." Percy said. "Yeah lets get dressed." Annabeth said. She turned towards the clothes pile and gasped. Their clothes were gone. "W-where are our clothes?" Annabeth stuttered. "I don't know. But we can't walk back to camp like this. We'll get laughed at, and punished!" Percy exclaimed. "Looking for these?" A voice behind them said. They turned around and saw Thalia, dangling their clothes and a camera from her arms. "I got it all on tape. And you better do as I say or it goes viral." Thalia said. "I thought you two would do it sometime soon. And I caught you both naked in the woods." She laughed. "What do you want?" Annabeth said holding Percy's hand. "I wanna join." Thalia said. "No! I will only have sex with my girl friend! Not some psycho girl!" Percy yelled. "We can go the easy way or the hard way, and you picked the hard way." Thalia said, laughing evilly. She pulled out a roll of duck tape and duck taped Percy to a log next to Annabeth. Then she did the same to Annabeth. Then she sat down on Percy and pulled off her shirt revealing her bra. She took it off and put it on Annabeth. "Ewwwww! I don't want to wear your nasty bra!" Annabeth screamed. "Just wait!" Thalia said. She took off her skirt and lacy undies. "Oh no. Please don't do it!" Annabeth wailed. Thalia put the underwear on Annabeth too. "Oh, ewwwwww! Please! They're wet!" She sobbed. "Not until I'm done with Percy!" She laughed. She put his dick in her vagina and kissed him hard. She forced her boob into his mouth and put his hands on her butt. "Squeeze it Jackson." She said in his face. "No! I won't do it!" Percy said. " Percy! The video!" Annabeth reminded him. He squeezed her ass. "That's better. Now kiss it. Kiss it hard." Thalia said. Percy winced and kissed her butt cheeks one at a time. Annabeth frowned. She saw his dick still in her vagina. Thalia sucked on Percy's dick and rubbed her vagina in his face. She pressed her ass hole into his mouth and said "Lick it Jackson." He hesitated for a second and then licked her ass hole. "You've done good Jackson. But I'm not done with you yet. I got this on tape too. And I'm gonna get this on tape as well. She shifted over to Annabeth and kissed her on the lips. "Ew, I'm not gay, Thalia!" Annabeth screamed. "Don't care." She smirked. She continued kissing and then pressed her vagina on Annabeth's. "You like this? Huh? You want more?" Thalia taunted. "No! Ew, Thalia this is gross!" Annabeth cried. Thalia laughed and shoved her vagina into her mouth. "Make out with it Annabeth!" Thalia said. "Remember the video." She said. Annabeth sucked, and licked, and kissed until Thalia got up, but her clothes on and said "Tomorrow, you both meet me at the lake behind the Athena cabin at midnight sharp." Thalia said. She licked Percy's ass once more and kissed Annabeth's vagina then lips and tore off the duck tape. She dropped their clothes in a puddle and stomped on them. Then she walked away. " I feel so dirty." Annabeth said. She tore off Thalia's undies and bra and put on her clothes. So did Percy. "I love you Annabeth. No one can replace you. But we gotta get a hold of that video of us having sex." Percy said. They walked back to the cabin hand in hand, feeling different than before.
percyjackson23 commented…
O.O kow percy jackson and he would never do tht 0.0 over a year ago
percyjackson23 commented…
holy thalia is a les and straight WOOOOOOOWWWW I LOST ALL FAITH IN THALIA PLUS HE'S A HUNTRESS OF ARTEMIS I MEAN CMON! ARTEMIS WILL BE VERY MAD IF HE HEAR ABOUT THIS!!! over a year ago
LeoValdez147 commented…
I'm with percyjackson23. this isn't canon over a year ago
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
crying
MY EYES!
Krista_The_Cool commented…
never has there been a truer post. over a year ago
Herosofolympus commented…
Oh my gods what if Rick Riordan read this he'd probably so discusted he'd stop writing about Percy and Annabeth!!!!!!!!! over a year ago
LeoValdez147 commented…
aqualad is a bastard. This isn't even canon. over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
laugh
Lol
over a year ago meredog said…
angry
O. MY. GODS........ I AGREE WITH LC!!!!!! WTF!!!!!!!! WHAT KIND OF STORY IS THIS!!!!!! THIS IS WRONG!!!!!!
percyjackson23 commented…
im with ya :( over a year ago
LeoValdez147 commented…
me 2 over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
And what do u mean... made as a little gift?!?!!?
over a year ago aqualad said…
Hahahaha you will find out.
over a year ago meredog said…
^do I even want to......??
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
O.o
over a year ago aqualad said…
Yes ......you do.
over a year ago meredog said…
blush
............
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
...............................
over a year ago aqualad said…
I will make it more .. hmmm action packed with gods
LeoValdez147 commented…
dam you troll over a year ago
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
.......................
over a year ago aqualad said…
Muhahaha
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
.....
over a year ago meredog said…
blush
O my fucking gods.... u r going to do this with the gods?!?!??!?!?!! This is just.... wrong......
LeoValdez147 commented…
yep over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
Yes and no. Not all sex will be included more like scandals and guns.
over a year ago meredog said…
blush
Oooooook then......
over a year ago aqualad said…
Yea
over a year ago meredog said…
This is still a messed up story......
LeoValdez147 commented…
mmmm hmmm over a year ago
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
crying
....
over a year ago aqualad said…
Ill fix it.
LeoValdez147 commented…
you better over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
hmmm
What do u mean "ill fix it" how r u gonna fix it???
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
zzz
He's gonna mess it up again
over a year ago aqualad said…
its a surprise
sweetsel commented…
WTF! Rick Riordan's going to sue u for this... LOL! over a year ago
LeoValdez147 commented…
sue her ,Rick Riordan! over a year ago
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
zzz
Ummm
over a year ago meredog said…
crying
Now I know how people feel when they try to guess who did that to Annabeth on my story Terrified.........
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
laugh
Lol
over a year ago aqualad said…
im working on chapter 2
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
sad
Oh no
over a year ago meredog said…
This is gonna be... well.... idk
over a year ago aqualad said…
Annabeth

This was the first time in my life I felt so violated. If anyone saw that video my life would be ruined which meant there was only one thing to do. “Hay babes don’t worry we will get the tape back.” Percy said trying to intense my nerves. I burned Thalia’s clothing and took a shower that lasted two hours. I felt so icky being in another girls’ underwear. I wonder what my mom would say.

I finally had got out of the shower and waited for Percy to get dressed. We waited till midnight and Thalia never showed. We were just about to turn around when we heard a voice. “Hay where do you two think you’re going?” My heart pounded with emotions. I grabbed Percy’s hand and squeezed it tight. “What do you want us to do Thalia?” Percy said with a bit of a quiver in his voice. I could tell he was trying to be strong for me. “Well you see, I have a couple of tasks for you to do.” She had the tape in her hand just toying with us. Then water began to rise from the sea bank. “Now now Percy you wouldn’t want to go doing that would you I brought some reinforcements.” Then I turned around to see the Stoll Brothers.

“How could you guys do this to us?” I pleaded. Conner stepped to be and said, “We didn’t do anything you brought this on yourselves.” He looked at us with distaste and spat on my face. All my anger boiled I clenched my fist and my senses heightened. I span around pushed Percy into Travis. “Ahhhh..” Thalia had zapped me with lightening. “You Bitch I hate you!” She just laughed and starred at me. “Oh Annabeth you must be punished. Percy pull down your pants NOW!” Tears began to swell up in my eyes. She started doing unimaginable things to him. It was so sickening. Then he moaned and moaned. I felt helpless and no longer loved. “Percy how could you?” “I’m sorry Thalia.” I cried out but no one was there. “How could you call me Thalia? Percy I loved you!” I was about to get up and run away when a beam of light started flashing at us.

It was Chiron I could hear his voice. I was about to scream when, Conner taped my mouth shut. He grabbed me and Thalia tugged on Percy’s stick taking us to an abandoned shack. I felt so disturbed and upset. My heart pleaded for a way. I closed my eyes and prayed to Athena. help would be nice and cleansing. Thalia began to rub my boobs tears just stormed out of my eyes.

Then there was a knock on the shed and we all stood still I tried to make as much noise as possible but Conner had me in a bind. The door opened and the person standing in the door was the girl that had subliminally just ruined my life. I was confused my heart bleated for the truth.
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
crying
My eyes
over a year ago aqualad said…
wow it wasnt even that vague
over a year ago meredog said…
crying
W-wow........... I need a hug... this is sad...
over a year ago aqualad said…
im toning the stories vagueness down slowly then we will get into the mystery and deaths.
over a year ago meredog said…
Better...
over a year ago aqualad said…
im gonna like slowly lower the content because of the little kids on here.
comicsking commented…
IM 10 YEARS OLD. I DONT NEED TO READ ABOUT THALIA RAPNG THEM over a year ago
cupcakeforever1 commented…
Same here!!! I thought this site was kid friendly!!! over a year ago
LeoValdez147 commented…
WTF, bitch! over a year ago
PiperMclean7732 commented…
I am 12 and my childhood is gone!!! Gone i tell u! over a year ago
over a year ago LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
OH GAWDDDDDD NOT THIS AGAIN
IM SCARRED FOR LIFE
TOO GROSSSSSS FOR A THIRTEEN YEAR OLD (well for me not mary)
u do know Thalia's a hunter rite???
last edited over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
yes i do but this is before the fact might discontinue i get borred with forums easily
SamValdezLuv commented…
How can it be before the fact?? Percy and annabeth didnt start dating till the 5th book and thalia was already the hunter. That means if this happened befor, they would have been having sex at 13 over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
I am 13 yes but I skipped over the rly gross and detailed parts....
greendayiscool commented…
Can I just say I'm 13 but lm not that gross out but it's sttill sick though. over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
atleast its not overdescriptive
RRBlover1110 commented…
1. I'm 12, had no idea what r rated means, and my eyes are punished. 2. My name is thalia, so this isnt very flattering. 3. none of the characters would actually do this, 4. MAI CHILDHOOD IS GAWN. GONE! 9 months ago
over a year ago meredog said…
blush
Yea.....
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
ASIRI239PPF')OE"?:KOQoq@#Njdskq32^W2N­Jkd­hei­..I­(*!­N 8X3

I THOUGHT I ENDED THIS! LIKE WHAT THE HECK IS THIS? DX
over a year ago aqualad said…
A redo
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
AHHHHHHH!!!!!! MY 13 YEAR OLD EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT BURNS!!!!!!!!!!



That was graphic I think I need a hug....
Scarred. for. life.
comicsking commented…
AHH MY 10 YEAR-OLD EYES IT BURNS over a year ago
comicsking commented…
WELL NOT ACTUALLY IM ENJOYING THIS over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
It says rated r i know you guys can read
greendayiscool commented…
Sorry but I can't stop rescind. over a year ago
cupcakeforever1 commented…
You think kids r gonna listen? over a year ago
LeoValdez147 commented…
kids R deaf over a year ago
olympianglory commented…
half of these kids dunno what it means over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
Lol!!!!! ^^im 13 to so I just skipped over the detailed parts....
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
*STILL RAGING* JWizm8832Q99;o3EC9((#@"I["02C JXN1
fanforbooks commented…
Srsly? over a year ago
fanforbooks commented…
Can't you read it says R RATED?! if you dont like it, just dont read it over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
laugh
^LOL!!!!!
over a year ago corrected said…
WTF how could u continue this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago aqualad said…
im toning down the rating so stuff your bunion and put a sock in it
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
I can but maybe I couldn't find my glasses for that part hmmm?
cupcakeforever1 commented…
Me too, hehehe over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
laugh
^lol!!
over a year ago aqualad said…
wow
over a year ago corrected said…
...still u have a very sick mind
LeoValdez147 commented…
agreed over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
............... that was mean..........
over a year ago aqualad said…
i didnt make the first chapter im continuing it but fixing it up
over a year ago 8xchristellax8 said…
sick
w-what the fuck did i just read?!???!? Dx this....is unexplainable O_O
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
SUGAR! SUGAR! SUGAR! SUGAR!
over a year ago aqualad said…
ohh k
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
Enough you idiots who like this story! I know ermmmm in real life and I'm calling her back! You people have no idea who you're dealing with
LeoValdez147 commented…
go LORDCHAOS!! over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
U know ermmmm thats a werid name...... I can take anyone! Bring it! Lol
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
Tommorows school do I'll get her here today. To rip put your hearts and eat them!
over a year ago meredog said…
zzz
^wtf man!!!
Minion_Lover commented…
^^like totally eewww over a year ago
over a year ago somisista said…
mischievous
^oh so I just read this story and I'm like FTW!!! But yeah he is toning it down and um...good story ....
over a year ago aqualad said…
umm... ok
over a year ago corrected said…
o ur fixing it?
ok then
over a year ago aqualad said…
yes
over a year ago corrected said…
sry for being mean
im just glad u didnt add pics to go along w/ the story like some other poeple do
it wouldnt work for this story...
over a year ago aqualad said…
its ok and thanks
over a year ago corrected said…
ur welcome
over a year ago ermmmmmmm said…
hi guys its been a long time since ive been here
@aqualad- first of all im really glad u offered to continue my story but im kind of upset that ur toning it down. id rather u kept the content VERY mature. whoever doesnt like it shouldnt read it , its that simple

@LORDCHAOS- i was very happy when u said u would post chapters for me but then i realized THAT U LIED TO ME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­! how could u!!!!!!
if u want to be forgiven post a chapter that would fit in with the story i started
U also lied when u said u knew me...u dont ;)


anyways thanks for continuing my story ill be back later!!!!!!!
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Minion_Lover commented…
plz make it more spicy plz over a year ago
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
LIVE AND LEARN
over a year ago ermmmmmmm said…
???????so r u going to post a chapter or what
over a year ago aqualad said…
Yez i am later but you can be the co writer so i guess its your turn
over a year ago ermmmmmmm said…
i have no time to be cowriter
ill just read
if i ever have time ill ask if i can post a chapter alright
u continue writing but try to stick to the original storyline plzz
if u cant i understand
BUT PLZZZZZ TRY!
over a year ago aqualad said…
sure thing
over a year ago somisista said…
angelic
Yay! You gonna post!
I think yay....
over a year ago aqualad said…
Ill post this weekend
over a year ago corrected said…
....................
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
ok i just read like 5 lines and no, you can just keep your fucked up perverted fantasy to yourself,
cupcakeforever1 commented…
What I thought, but keep those thoughts to yourself over a year ago
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
i am disturbed
comicsking commented…
ME TOO . BUT IM STILL ENJOYING IT over a year ago
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
Thank you!
over a year ago corrected said…
@kkw1700
who r u thanking and y ?
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
^^^^ & ^^^ cu zthey agree this story is crap.
LeoValdez147 commented…
me 2 over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
its not my story itssome personsssssssssssss
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
I dont give a crap! You're continuing it when I ended it for a reason! This story is just plain sick and disgusting and perverted and should not be on Fanpop!
over a year ago aqualad said…
Well dont read it its as simple as that gosh how hard is it to not read in the thing it says rated R that was your warning
cupcakeforever1 commented…
Well maybe u shouldnt have r rated stuff on fanpop. over a year ago
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
Yeah, and that stops people from reading it. Your warning is ineffective.
over a year ago aqualad said…
Well its your fault for reading.
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
THIS STORY IS CRAP
IT IS BEEP!!
IT IS DISTURbing
comicsking commented…
WHEN THEY TONED IT DOWN IT GOT RUBBISH BUT WHEN I SAW THE THALIA AND PERCY AND ANNAYBETH I ENJOYED IT over a year ago
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
^ It is! If you agree, click that little grey flag at the top. Report it as innapropriate.
cupcakeforever1 commented…
I reported this Illinois of times. over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
only way its gonna get removed is if everyone removes there comments
over a year ago corrected said…
so r u seriously continuing this story aqualad or not?
over a year ago aqualad said…
yes just dont read it.
over a year ago corrected said…
fine ill leave u alone
ur argument makes sense
over a year ago aqualad said…
thanks someone that understands
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
I'm to lazy to push the buton man you do it!!!! kkw1700
over a year ago aqualad said…
surprise
Chiron

I opened up the shed door slowly and saw my dearest maiden Thalia. "Sweet pea what are you doing here?" I looked at her quizzically no one else seemed to be in there with her. "Daddy you know I like the dark come in and play." I couldn't resist ever since last summer she made me feel special. I touched her hair and she kicked me in my balls. "ahhh you brat.!" i yellled. "your to old. sorry pops." she and a few unfamiliar faces started out of the shed and then she locked me in. I heard a tiny voice from the corner of the room and Annabeth was tied up I took her knife and left her in there. I shouldve untied her but i couldnt risk her telling the entire camp so I took my knife and......
over a year ago Alvin2442 said…
stabbed her in the throat
LeoValdez147 commented…
U R f*cked up. over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
no no no
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
Like i usually do when i say a story sucks, i go back in a few days to read the comments after mine and really it should not be rated R, it should be rated XXX, porno
comicsking commented…
LOL over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
wow
over a year ago corrected said…
i dont think aqualad cares ..... even thoguh he should
over a year ago aqualad said…
i dont care at all because its MY story NOT theirs.
over a year ago corrected said…
true enough
like i said earlier i understand ur argument
@lordchaos
ihavnt seen u comment very often these days
over a year ago aqualad said…
its just if you dont like it dont read it its that simple.
over a year ago somisista said…
worried
Well.....that was um...........interesting.....l
over a year ago corrected said…
^im glad he stopped posting
did u like it?!
i hope not
over a year ago aqualad said…
im back bitches.
over a year ago corrected said…
meh
...
over a year ago aqualad said…
Annabeth

It had been a few years after I had left camp and I decided it was time to return and face my demons. I had married a nice mortal named Rick Riordan. “Honey I’m getting ready to leave.” He walked into the kitchen and kissed me on my cheek. “Ok be safe. “ I had boarded my plane and arrived at camp halfblood. The place was like a ghost town; not to mention Thalia’s pine was gone. An arrow whisked past my head and cut my cheek. I scanned the area but no one was in sight. Then a guy with a black robe stepped out from behind the Artemis Cabin. “Show yourself.”

The guy took of his robe and my jaw dropped. “Percy...” my jaws clenched with anger. He tried to hug me but I pushed him away. “Aren’t you with Thalia now? Where is everyone?” Where is Thalia’s pine?”

I was cut short by a stunning kiss. “Stop.. don’t...” he kept kissing me but it felt so real. “No I’m married Percy.” he took a step back. “m.. ma.. married.?” I nodded my head. “I'm sorry Percy you left me for Thalia. I had no place to turn and he was there for me.” I looked around for an explanation but there was nothing that needed to be said now.

“Thalia has claimed a dictatorship here in camp follow me.” I reluctantly followed him. He took me behind his cabin and opened up an underground shack that wasn’t half bad.

“She killed everyone off that didn’t agree with her. He had a few pairs of boots by his bed that were covered in mud which I figured came along with the G.I. Joe buzz cut.

“Annabeth I need you to know after you left I resisted Thalia. I didn’t mean for it to happen like that.” I turned the other way looking over my shoulder.

“Percy its ok.” I didn’t know what came over me but I jumped on him and wrapped my legs around him and dramatically started making out with him. He tried to speak but I cut him off. “How could I ever let you go?”

“Baby I'm sorr-.” I cut him off again and kissed him some more and pushed him back down on the bed. I licked my finger. I rubbed his shoulders and licked his bare chest as his abs clenched. “ohh Annabeth you don’t need to do this.” I put my finger to his lip and he flipped me up and threw my cowgirl boots off and flipped my dress up. “Oh Percy …” He started sucking on my neck and I moaned incredibly loud. He took his jeans off leaving him half naked in his underwear and t shirt. I rubbed his boxers and he grew bit by bit. “Percy I need you inside me.” He sucked my neck one last time as I moaned and pushed into me as I gasped. He made love to me all night and morning.

* * *

Thalia

I was doing some patrol when a heard screaming and moaning. I went down the cabins and found Percy’s bunker door unlatched. I went in and saw him fucking Annabeth like there was no tomorrow. I pulled out my camera and started recording them. I left the footage on the doorstep. -From your best wishes Thalia
Minion_Lover commented…
eeww and nice over a year ago
Minion_Lover commented…
Lolololol olliecat out over a year ago
LeoValdez147 commented…
WHAT THE FUCKING HELL!!! over a year ago
over a year ago somisista said…
surprise
^jesus christ! why god! whyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^jesus christ! why god! whyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
comicsking commented…
LOL over a year ago
HermionePiper commented…
THAT PICTURE I CAN'T EVEN HAHAHAHAHA :') and what did I just read??? over a year ago
over a year ago corrected said…
why did u read it somisista??????????????????????!
comicsking commented…
LOL over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
LOL interesting.
over a year ago precious211 said…
sunny
Huh this is still going even after the reviews that the writer got. I am going to say what everyone else has been saying. THIS IS SHIT. Not because of the perverting crap, which wasn't really perverted. (I've read and seen so much worse.) I say it because the writing is terrible. My little sister can do better.
over a year ago aqualad said…
its a joke you idiot you have no creative brains at all.
over a year ago precious211 said…
heart
Lol i've read joking perverted fanfics, and let me say this. You failed epically bro:. Lol and no creative brains? I'm currently writing a wizards101 fanfic -_-
olympianglory commented…
if u like fanfics plz read mine! over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
wow look if you dont have anything nice to say get the fuck off and idgad what your writing.
LeoValdez147 commented…
shut the hell up! over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
meh
Somisista.... I wanna hug.....
over a year ago aqualad said…
lol ill hug your i bet you guys jaws dropped whenyou saw ricks name.
comicsking commented…
MINE DID over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
Thanks for the hug aqualad lol! Yea I read that like 5 times when I saw his name.... then I skipped the last 2 paragraphs.....
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
idk mere, if i was u i would not want a hug from a pervert. Also u guys are actually reading this? I just skimmed through the angry replies once i got to line 6 of ch1
over a year ago aqualad said…
im not a pervert maybe you should go read its meaning in a dictionary its called comedy for me and having some fun if you dont like it pupster get the fuck off.
LeoValdez147 commented…
Your fucking story isn't even canon! over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
Look I'll give aqualad as many hugs I want to! He isn't a perv! Its just a story! C I'll give him another hug! *hugs aqualad again* c nothing happened! Just gave him a hug!
comicsking commented…
WHEN HE RAPES YOU over a year ago
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
hah... eh *whispers* still a perv. Also meredog, if hes not a perv the y dont u write a porno? huh?
Minion_Lover commented…
wtf once I called some one a perv and it did not end well so you just shut the Fu¢K up bitch over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
ITS NOT A PORNO ITS JUST COMEDY TO FUCK WITH YOUR BRAINS hugs meredog back.
comicsking commented…
IT IS DISTURBING BUT FUN over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
OK what does him not being a perv have to do with me writing porno? Aqualad is fine! He is not a perv so quite messing with him asshole! Rly! Its just a story! *hugs aqualad again* o no! O wait... nothing happened! He isn't a perv!
over a year ago meredog said…
And sry for all the hugs.. lol!
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
............ sigh, i was expecting u 2 say no im not a perv im not writing 1! then i would say ha so u admit is XXX. but sadly no u didnt say that. Also aqua bitch u got a VERY BAD image in my brain... it refers 2 u saying FUCK WITH YOUR BRAIN. thats prolly the worst image ive ever had in my head. som 1 screwing into my brain.. gawd please just leave fanpop.
over a year ago aqualad said…
ok pupster skank get the fuck off my forum now if you dont like it dumbass dont read it.
over a year ago meredog said…
Lt if anyone should leave its u! Everyone hates u! Fuck! I love everyone but u! And I like people easy! Everyone wants u to leave not aqualad! At least some people like him unlike u! Get the FUCK off this forum! No one wants u around weirdo! And btw only pervs would think like that asshole! I love aqualad! I love everyone on fanpop but u! And that's not a good thing! Cause I normally like people the first time I talk to them.
SamValdezLuv commented…
Preach it over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
i agree with meredog
over a year ago meredog said…
zzz
Thank u aqualad!
over a year ago aqualad said…
no problemo
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
I get it now aqua is jason. Bye 4 ever
over a year ago meredog said…
Lt what? U mean my jason?
over a year ago somisista said…
mischievous
^damn Lt is smart! I ever would have thought of that! It makes sense now!
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
mischievous
yea i am smart-ish i hav 136.9 iq though actually, iq donesn't mean much it's only potential. but well yea i guess im kinda smart i usually get As and Bs. ha BS ah o yea so, i think aqualad is jason from REAL LIFE!!!! well i guess this is also real life but, well on a computer ugh. whatever u get my point. if u dont u should check ur IQ

OMG I FOUND OUT THE BEST NAME FOR AN ASIAN RAPPER!!!!!
TuChinks! get it, its like a combination of TuPac and 2chains cept its asian.
^ the previous sentence may be found 'offencive' to some readers, if u read this line before the one above you, good. Though if u do read the line thats ^ u may have some issues with reading down 2 up not up to down like most of us. I assume meredog reads down 2 up cause she always adresses my 2nd statement first. For example when i said bye 4 ever she was prolly like what! no LT I WILL MISS U!!!! Or she was like WHAT HELL YEA. whichever way she said u mean my jaon 2nd when i said jason 1st.
fanforbooks commented…
136.9 is not a very high IQ, you fucking idiot. I had higher IQ when I was TEN over a year ago
comicsking commented…
ooooh. hey im 10 ya know over a year ago
Minion_Lover commented…
shut the hell up BITCH!!!! over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
i dont giv a damn
over a year ago meredog said…
laugh
Ok what? And aqualad isn't Jason! Wtf! Hahaha!! That's funny!! If aqualad was my boyfriend trust me u would have known!!! And when u said by 4 ever my eyes light up and I was like "YES!! THE ASSHOLE IS GONE!!!" There is no way I would ever be upset if u left! I would have a fucking party!!! And I was confused for a sec when u said aqualad was Jason.... I was like "wait... is he talking about my Jason?"
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
aww i can be the niceist person of fanpop, if u went back in time (omg back in time was the best fanfic) and u went to like november/december people would say i was the nicest person on fanpop.
over a year ago aqualad said…
just wow
over a year ago meredog said…
laugh
Haha! Yea right Lt!! Ill believe it when I c it!! Hahaha!!
over a year ago aqualad said…
OMG universal left whats her cell #
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
yea well outside the internet things turned me evil like i became rlly good friends with some kid who is amazing at basket ball and he lit a toilet on fire (he used toilet paper put it all around it). Its also rumored that he brought a bullet and a knife. Another thing o yea forget.. yea he got expelled.
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
o yea i also started listening to rap like... really 'offencive' rap.. like faded, its my favorite song right now... u shouldn't look it up.

ya know what i find annoying is when people say whatever u do don't do this. Just saying dont do something is going 2 make people wanna do it.
over a year ago aqualad said…
big smile
hmmmmmmmmmmmm
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
wait u searched it aqua? lol im hoping your not a girl
comicsking commented…
THAT **** WAS OFFENSIVE WITH SWEARING AND RACIST WORDS over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
smirk
U r making me want to c it......
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
dont u will hate me 4 ever.
over a year ago aqualad said…
im a guy and searched what?
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
oh I though u searched faded nvm
comicsking commented…
I SEARCHED IT over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
ohhhhh
over a year ago meredog said…
Um... y not? I wanna c it! Btw I ALREADY HATE U!!!
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
no... no.. this is like really bad like horribly bad like .... just please. for like 1/3 the world's sake.
over a year ago aqualad said…
hate who?
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
me.
over a year ago meredog said…
Yea aqualad I rly hate Lt.... u r only making me want to c it more!
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
well be back in like 10 hours... seeing if u actually listen 2 faded by tyga
over a year ago parras2 said…
aqualad I hope you don't mind me saying but what the hell is happening in your story ,the plot is basically nonexistent
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over a year ago aqualad said…
ohhhhhhhhhh
over a year ago meredog said…
What.. the .... fuck...
over a year ago aqualad said…
it got molested jks. uhhmmm im trying to fix it but i dont want to lose those readers that like that kinky sex stuff because theyre nice.
over a year ago meredog said…
laugh
Aqualad I read that up to molested and I was like WHAT THE FUCK! And dropped my kindle... then I read jk and I was like "U mother fucker..." lol!
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
ya know what i think aqua got molested as a child/
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
Aqualad listen to me. *hugs Aquallad* Could you please tone it down just a little? Because there are younger readers on here and I don't want you to get in trouble. Oh and one more little thing, since there are some other people on here, could you please try to read my story? It would me the world to me. Your a really nice guy and this * poinrts to where he cusses somebody out.* is nott like you. Please, please I miss the guy I knew who was always happy one fanpop. I want you to be you and getting angery all of the time is not who your are at least as far as I know.i'm sorry about what these people said I'm especially sorry for what I said. I was horrible and rude too you and my mind was not open to what you had to say. I cuss when I'm suprised. I hope you can forgive me because you're my friend and I don't want to lose another one. *hugs Aqualad.* I'm here if you need me
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over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
Oh btw I don't hate anybody BUT I AM PISSED OFF AT LT OK! DON'T TALK TO AQUALAD LIKE THAT! AQUALAD IS FUCKING AWESOME! HE'S MY FRIEND AND YOU DIFFENTITELY AREN'T FOR SAYING THINGS LIKE THAT TO HIM! SOMETIMES I WANT TO LEAVE FANPOP 4EVER BECAUSE OF BEING CALLED A NAME BUT I DON'T! I DEAL WITH FUCKED UP CYBER BULLIES LIKE YOU EVERYDAY BUT NOBODY KNOWS! NOBODY CARES! *starts crying* IT'S NOT FAIR THAT AQUALAD HAS TO GO THROUGH THIS TO! SO JUST FUCKING SHUT UP! WHAT IF YOU BULLY HIM SO HARD THAT SOMETHING HAPPENS HUH! I STARTED TO BECOME ANORIEXIC WHEN PEOPLE CALLED ME FAT! AND I AM STILL GETTING OVER IT NOW!



Nobody cared enough to stand up for me so now I stand up for anyone. I was anoriexic for six monthes and nobody noticed. Then my mom noticed two weeks ago.
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
lol @ wisegirl aahhahhahah your funny
Also in 6th grade we had to do some cyberbullying assembly and ... o wait i already told that story.
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
your anorexic? lol im sorry for saying and laughing.. its just.. how do u become anorexic. So your saying you were fat then u cried cause u were fat then u became anorexic cause u dont wanna be fat? Im between slim and normal.. Im also fit. I guess ill never be able to step in both of your paires of shoes.
over a year ago corrected said…
rainy
whats happened to fanpop?
everyone is cussing and using horrible language like its completely normal and suddenly people enjoy these horribly perverted and inappropriate stories!
SMH
i think this website is going downhill pretty fast
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cupcakeforever1 commented…
EXACTLY WHAT I WAS THINKING. MIGHT CANCEL MY ACCOUNT! over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
uhhuhhhh
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
yea unversal left too... i cant imagine fanpop without liz.... also corrected i dont like this story im just here to troll and comment. (i havent read beyond 6th line of chapter 1)
cupcakeforever1 commented…
Yep. over a year ago
over a year ago meredog said…
OMG WISEGIRL!!!! *crys* y didn't u tell me this before!?!!! Wisegirl who the fuck is picking on u?! I sware when I c this guy I am gonna fucking YELL!!! I am so fucking pissed! This guy is dead! Who is it waisegirl? Where is it happening?!
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
UH.... THERES A POSSIBILITY IT IS ME? MAYBE... O WAIT MERE COULD GET PISSED UH..... *POINTS TO AQUA* HE DID IT!
over a year ago meredog said…
angry
Lt don't mess with me with this kind of shit....
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
fine it wasnt me, i dont even know the person.
over a year ago meredog said…
angry
............
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
At school my"friend" Johnathen called me ugley and fat, the Katlyn london called me a fat *beep*, then the guy i liked called me ugley. It wasn't anyone on here as far as I know. But on facebook people called me a bitch, lyer,and a fat loser
FantasyLover543 commented…
it's ok wise girl I know this was about an year ago but still I want you to know that you are not alone and there are other people who were also bullied when they were young (that would be me) over a year ago
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
damn... that would suck.
over a year ago meredog said…
Omg!! Wisegirl!!! *crys* don't listen to a thing those assholes say!!! U r beautiful!!! I don't know what u look like but I just know u r!!! Ive never been picked on... nobody messes with me cause they no better then that. Stand up for urself! Don't listen to them! U r amazing and most definitely not a bitch! U r a wonderful person and don't EVER let someone say otherwise!!
FantasyLover543 commented…
omg meredog that's just plain nice of you standing up for someone you don't even know that's soooo cool............... over a year ago
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
hmm whenever someone gives me shit and is less than 6 inches taller than me i beat them up. wrestleing XD. though if ur a girl and u do wrestleing you would be seen as a freak so dont do it.
over a year ago meredog said…
angry
Lt... just shut up... girls can wrestle if we want to asshole! Just cause we r girls boesnt mean shit! We can play football and wrestle! Quit being so sexist!
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
Meredog, thanks it's just hard I always feel sick at least a little now and I'm always soooo hunergy. I'm sorry that I exploded it's just I don't want what happened to me happen to you Meredog or Aqualad, I get protective and well yeah. Oh and Btw, I got saved sunday night lead my Bff to chirst tuesday night, committed to batism yesterday and tonight I got baptisted soo I feel happy. Does happiness feel like warm and fuzzy? I don't kniw what it feels like. :(
over a year ago meredog said…
heart
Awwwwww!!!!! Yes that happiness!!! Trust me wisegirl I never got bullied and if it happens I will make sure who is doing it regret it... or my boyfriend will... ether way they will not get away with it....
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
yea... well i woundn't wanna wrestle a girl.. cause u get pretty close..
over a year ago corrected said…
@lt_pupster
good
over a year ago precious211 said…
heart
Welcome to the christian community!
Are you a baptist cause then we would be almost the same thing.
:D am black so like i never get bullied or insulted....or even name calling.....
Lol and trust me, no matter how bad you think it is now, people have it worse. I was raised in the ghetto as my childhood....Not fun:)
Nice post to the author:)
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
im episcopalian, though also im athiest, cause i only show up to church once every 2 years. hate 2 break it 2 u but god isnt real, hes like the adult version of santa claus or the easter bunny.
comicsking commented…
SHUT UP. IF YOU DONT BELIEVE IN GOD FINE BUT DONT COMPARE HIM TO SANTA YOUR BASICALLY MAKING FUN OF THE CHRISTIAN FAITH over a year ago
cupcakeforever1 commented…
Thank you. Apparently us kids have more sense then one of you. over a year ago
over a year ago corrected said…
^u sound like ur lying
over a year ago aqualad said…
hmmm wow interesting.
over a year ago wisegirl778 said…
hey, i hate everything.
Somebody called me a beep again.
you have it lucky

oh and at luch yesterday My crush said he might ask me out.
Then today he said he didn't have any idea what i was talking about.
He said he would never go out with me cause I'm too damn ugley.
*sobbing hard*



But at least now I'm on fall break
and yeah I'm a baptist.
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oceanlover123 commented…
That's bullshit girl. Listen, no girl deserves to be treated like shit. You're beautiful no matter what. <3 over a year ago
Nicosgurl commented…
Listen to me wisegirl I know i am new here and all but trust me them bullies don't know shit about you and don't you be bothered by what they tell you because none of it is true you is beautiful and they the freaking ugly ones cuz it don't matter what you look like on the outside girl it is the lnside we all care about on fanpop you r nice u like almost everyone here and trust me I've been through all this shit it's meaningless they know nothing cuz they r stupide hoes and u dont need to waste ur time on them over a year ago
comicsking commented…
I AGREE WITH THEM over a year ago
olympianglory commented…
Looking at ur pic, ur the most beautiful girl ive seen over a year ago
over a year ago aqualad said…
hmmmm
over a year ago corrected said…
^whats with all the hmmms?
over a year ago aqualad said…
its just awkward HOW YOU ALL WONT STOP COMMENTING YOU KNOW WHAT IM GONNA POST AT NINE O CLOCK!
over a year ago corrected said…
ok i dont really care
u can just ignor the comments u know
over a year ago aqualad said…
yeah thats an option
over a year ago corrected said…
hmmm
how do u have so many views?
over a year ago aqualad said…
how many do i have?