The Heroes of Olympus The Son of Neptune

HecateA posted on Oct 28, 2010 at 12:36AM
So once again you guys have the opportunity to get in my head of what I think the next HoO book RR blesses us with will look like.

Before I start you peoples off, I need to say something.
So shush and listen.

When I wrote "The Lost Hero, written by me", I had to guess who the parents were. Well now, I know. So I am following Rick Riordan's version of the characters. Piper has nothing to do with Persephone, Jason and Thalia are siblings and Camp Ceasar Salad is real. For my series of fanfics, I'm following my version of the characters, but here, Rick's versions rule. Get it?

Title: The Son of Neptune
Rating: C
Type: Adventure, friendship, hopefully humor, maybe a touch of romance
Characters: Add, Annabeth, Jason, Piper, Drew, Leo, Jake, Nyssa
OC personalities: Reyna, Dakota, Hazel, Gwen, Bobby, Caleb
OC: The Gayle brothers, Karren
Synopsis: After discovering a new world, not so far from their own, Jason and his friends are sailing straight for it, unsure wheter they'll come out victorious or just start a civil war. But it doesn't take the arrival of a flying boat to get the citizens curious. They already sence something is wrong, way before the flying ship docks.

Disclaimer: The story base, character and settings base was created by Rick Riordan, who owns the Percy Jackson and the Olympians, and Heroes of Olympus rights.

A/N: Hopefully you guys will like it! I got some very nice comments on my random wall poll, so here it is guys! Love you all, you rock!

The Rebel Soldier's debut: link

The Honour in Death's debut: link

The Fire's Revenge's debut: link

Part Two's debut: link
So once again you guys have the opportunity to get in my head of what I think the next HoO book RR bl
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over a year ago HecateA said…
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1
The City
I woke up and had no idea where he was.
A cell. The walls were bricks carved out of grey stone. The floor was the same and there was only one door. The door was of iron bars, so close together he could only fit his arm through. More cells were out in the corridor, torches flaming, hanging on the wall. I rubbed my eyes and looked around. People were in the hallway, two at each side of his cell.
-Excuse me? I asked. The two of them swerved spears pointing at me, all at the exact same time. I raised his hands.
-I’m unarmed, I’m unarmed! Where am I? The two figures lowered their weapons. They were both wearing armour, their helmets silver with a red plume. One was a boy, the other a girl. The girl was African American, with eyes of an impressive cocoa and her features delicately carved. She was pretty, but she looked threatening and mean enough to kick a kitten. The boy had brown bangs falling in his eyes. They both looked well-built and stern.
-We know. We disarmed you the moment you got here.
-Where is here?
-Don’t play games stranger. Where is he? The girl asked, jerking her spear forwards.
-He? Who are you talking about?
-You can not be serious. If you think that I’ll…
-WOW wow, wow! Rey, its okay, its okay. I’ve got this covered. A girl said. She walked towards me. She wore a purple shirt covered by a breastplate and black jeans. A sword was at her side. Her eyes were thin and a color I couldn’t identify, and her hair, light brown curls, was pulled back.
-Hazel, what are you talking about?
-I’m on orders from Lupa; I am to show him camp. Hazel said.
-I am to keep him in the cell.

-Lupa wants to see him. He is harmless as far as she can tell. Do you perhaps doubt her? Hazel smoothly suggested. The girl jerked her sword back and attacked the lock with a key she turned.
-It’s your lucky day. Don’t think they’ll all be like this. She said. She pulled the door open.
-Common. Hazel said. She took his wrist and led him down the corridor, up a flight of stairs. She opened a wooden door and the sunshine nearly blinded him. He squinted.
-Common before Reyna gets ticked. Hazel whispered. I followed her out the door which she closed behind us.
There was a temple right in front of us, houses around them. There was a building that looked like the collleseum too. A creek passed straight in the middle, a log-like bridge right there. Two girls were kneeling collecting water in big vase-like pots. Other people were walking around, dressed in silver armour, but very few of them were. Most people had seemed to take shelter of the chocking heat.
-I’m sorry, Reyna isn’t usually like this. Well, she is. But, oh- never mind. I’m Hazel by the way. Hazel Ducharme.
-I’m… I’m…
-Let me guess: you don’t remember?
-Umm… I’m sorry, but yeah. How do you know?
-You’re what, 16? You’re 16 and you had weaponry on you, yet nobody at this camp has ever seen your face. You didn’t answer any questions when we found you and-
-What?
-You showed up floating face-in near the stream last week. Reyna nearly attacked you. Then Bobby stopped her, and they dragged you out. You were still alive, so Reyna asked you things. You had no idea where you came from or who you were, then you passed out. You were alive and unharmed, so we got you in the dungeon.
-Dungeon? What’s this, Camp Medieval spirit?
-What’s Camp Half-Blood?
-Camp Half-Blood? How should I know?


-For starters you’re wearing a T-shirt with that name on it. Hazel said. I starred down. The shirt I was wearing an orange shirt with something that looked like “Camp Half-Blood” written on it.
-I don’t remember that either.
-Okay, since I have no idea what your name is, I’ll just call you Bob.
-Umm, no.
-Joe?
-No way.
-Tyson?
-Tyson..? The name seemed familiar. I knew someone named Tyson, and I should know who he was.
-Not Tyson either, hmm? Geez you’re picky. What about Add?
-Alright then, Add.
-Cool, and it suites you. Advena means stranger. Common, better get started on that tour before Reyna thinks I’m lying. She’s nice and all but you do not want to lie to her. Let’s go. She said.
Hazel was not giving me any processing time. I woke up in a dungeon guarded by a girl who wanted to kill me, then she’s given me a new name and now I was going for a tour of wherever-we-where.
-Where are we?
-The City. She said walking off.
-Wait, the city of what?
-The City isn’t OF something it’s completely dependant on its own. Eat form the forest, drink from the creek; the rest is given through the gods.
-The what?
-The gods. Aw, Romulus, you can’t be that clueless!


-I don’t remember my name, I’m pretty sure I can.
-Okay, then I’m going to have to break this to you. I apologise, I’m no good at this. Here, come sit down with me. She said, gesturing to the edge of a fountain with some kind of cupid on it, shooting water from the tip of the arrow notched at its quiver. She sat down and so did I.
-Science sucks. She said.
-What? Hazel smacked her forehead.
-First sentence and I screw up. I mean science isn’t true. Lightning, the waves, seasons; it’s not science. It’s the Roman gods.
-Roman gods?
-Yup. Jupiter, Trivia, Juno, all of them.
-Aren’t the Romans just the Greek gods?
-No way, buddy. Greeks were too laid-back. Didn’t take fighting seriously. No discipline, why do you think Rome absolutely creamed those guys in the old days? The Greek gods, well… Sure, they did exist. But after Romans started believing in new, similar, gods, they faded away, and those gods went for power. They still are at power, because they’re immortal. They can’t die, nor can their power.
-That doesn’t make any sense.
-Add, when you’re a demigod, your whole freaking life doesn’t make any sense.
-Demigod?
-Yup. When gods mingle with mortals, mingle and fall in love that is, a demigod is born. Some of us are born by thought, some by magic.
-Athena and Hecate’s children?
-Minerva and Trivia. But yeah. My mom is Trivia. Do you know who your immortal is? No eh? Hmm… We’ll find out. Lupa will at least.
-Who’s Lupa?



-You wouldn’t believe me if I told you. Common. Each god’s children have their own cabin.
-They all look the same, except for the curtain at the door…
-Order and discipline. Two camp rules.
-But… The gods are all different.
-Yes. But we are united. We are one. Why does it matter to you anyways?
-Nothing. I said. Hazel looked at me oddly.
-There are too many gods, more gods then room the camps own, and some of them are maidens. No kids. Empty cabins. Some of the gods are paired up by houses. The wind gods, for example. Ceres and Proserpina too.
-Who?
-Agriculture goddess, spring goddess. Ring a bell?
-Oh, Demeter and Persephone.
-Nobody uses the Greek names, Add. It’ll just make you look like a total loser. But anyways, that’s why we have so little houses. I’ll show you the arena, you will love it Add. She said. As she walked I noticed a tattoo on her arm. Except they didn’t look normal, more like burns. 7 bars, like a grocery-market code with the letters SPQR and a dog paw imprint above.
-What’s with the tattoo? I asked. Hazel looked up at me.
-This? Every summer, the day before everyone goes back to wherever they live and unity breaks, they mark us. SPQR; it’s the motto of the Roman Empire, and camp. Senatus Populusque Romanus. The lines represent each year I’ve been around. I’m 15, and I got here when I was 8. Basic math Add, 8+7=15. Every year I’ve survived. How old are you? Ooh, let me guess, you don’t remember do you? You look 16, so I’ll go with that. The paw…
-You like littlest pet shop?
-So you don’t know your name but you know all about littlest pet shop? So much sense, and realise my brothers and sisters would kill you for saying that. The dog is a symbol of Trivia. It changes depending on your parent. For example Rey would got a plumed helmet and Jason has this… She bit her lip.



-Jason? He the guy that was in the dungeon?
-No, that was Bobby. Anyways what was I saying? Oh yeah, the tattoo changed from person to person unless you have a twin. Well, even then, if there was a year where you did something to majorly disrespect the gods, the camp, Lupa or anything else really you get a red bar, the red color is from your…
-Who’s Jason? Hazel pursed her lips.
-I mustn’t speak of him to you. Not until… Not until we know where you came from. I answered your questions, you answer mine. What’s with the necklace and the beads? You’re not into jewellery are you? ‘Cause that could mean…
-No. No, I… I don’t remember.
-Dammit, how are you supposed to answer my questions if you don’t remember anything? And you’ve got some weird designs on there. Is that a tree? I stared down and rolled the bead she was talking about between my fingers.
-It looks like a tree, so I guess.
-Wow. Out of all things a stupid tree.
-It’s not a stupid tree, it’s an important tree! I replied. Then I frowned, surprised to see the anger in my voice.
-Okay, I’m sorry I insulted the important tree. How do you even know that?
-I… I just do. I said.
-Okay, so is that an important building? She asked pointing at the last one.
-I… Yeah. I think it is. I said. I racked my brains to figure out what the building had that made it important.
-We’ll figure it out Add. You know, I think we should forget the arena and I’ll just take you to see Lupa.
-Who’s Lupa?
-Lupa’s the talking she-wolf in charge of this camp. I blinked a few times.


-No seriously. Who’s Lupa?
-I said you wouldn’t believe me. You’ll see. In front of her, show no weakness. No fear, no confusion.
-Oh that’ll work well.
-You better prey it will. I need to get my armour if we’re going to see Lupa. Do you mind stopping at my place?
-Umm, no.
-Sweet, common. It’s by the creek, behind Neptune and Jupiter’s.
I followed Hazel.
-Just wait here. Don’t get in a fight, don' swear at anyone and don’t go too far away.
-Got it. Hazel disappeared through a thick black theatre-style curtain and into her house.

*Hazel (sort-of)
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                            [u]The City[/u]
I woke up and had
over a year ago redhawks said…
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That was sooooooo good! OMG awesome theory on what the lines mean!!! I can so picture whoever that is acting like that. Just kidding I know who it is! I'm guessing PERCY!!!
over a year ago Lightning98 said…
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omg that like made me cry I MISS PERCY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago sonoboreas said…
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I'm not going to lie I am definitely looking for to checking this site every 20 minutes hoping that a new chapter will be posted.

By the I can tell this is going to be an amazing story as usual Hecate.
over a year ago Odssey said…
yea that was awsome you got to make a chapter two.
over a year ago sillyA013 said…
monkey
write more..MORE!
over a year ago sillyA013 said…
hmmm
please........
over a year ago Lightning98 said…
monkey
i hope he does not stay at the roman camp and that when he sees annabeth he remembers her.... but is probobly not
jason said thatb he would stay at camp half blood for a while... do you think percy will make the same promise....
over a year ago partypony said…
monkey
Hey, I'm new.

Anyway, love ur story. Make some more! I'm really... intrigued. Is that how you spell it?

I'm guessing this is Percy's point of view. If it is, then why does he have a tree design on his bead. He never got a bead like that. Unless... this is another Greek guy's PoV. Like, someone who's senior enough to had to have a pine tree bead.
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over a year ago Lightning98 said…
hmmm
ya just on question HecateA why did he have a bead with a tree on it the year that thaia came back the bead had a paintig of the golden fleace on it.
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over a year ago HecateA said…
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^That, lightning, is called a mistake.

partpony, love your name, and welcome to the spot. I'm Hecate, the welcomign commity, and frm all of us I give you this welcome-to-our-spot muffin basket

2
The She Wolf's palace

I didn’t stay put.
I wandered off to the cabin next to Hazel’s. I stood on the tips of my toes and peeked through a window.
The room, which was obviously a bedroom, was nearly empty. The floor was light wood and there was one wall painted like a map of the world. Different grey and white clumps moved over countries, then disappearing, colors changing and miniature lightning flashing. The ultimate storm-watcher studio. There was a low cot in the corner of the cabin with white linen sheets neatly done. Under it a trunk was tucked. The other walls were painted sky blue, and the one near the bed was decorated with pictures.
The same faces kept popping up. Hazel, Bobby, Reyna and two other girls. I noticed that in the pictures with Reyna, often she was with another boy. Blond with eyes like the sky and a scar on his lip. They were always dressed in armour, often armed. In some pictures they were slightly injured. Black eyes, bloody lips, that kind of thing.

But even with the pictures of happy friends tapped on the walls, the room seemed cold. Unused, lacking of owner. A set of armour was in one corner, and I wondered why the owner didn’t have it on. Then the room started smelling of ozone, the hairs on the back of my neck stood up and I had this urgent feeling in my stomach to back away and run somewhere safe.
But where the heck was somewhere safe? This whole place seemed wrong. From its military style, to its blandness, to the citizens walking on its grounds. It wasn’t a place for me, I knew that much.
The smell persisted and I had to run, so I ran towards the cabin next to it. My arm brushed the curtain and I knew I was safe. I risked peeking in.
This room looked like a living room. The walls were the color of the ocean. The waves seemed to move across them, refusing to stay painted on and still. But after everything else, the gods I had no trouble believing in and even the other cabin, I wasn’t scared or surprised. The floor was rock. No, not rock, coral, and light was emitted from silvery pearls, hanging on the walls. Benches made of driftwood were gathered in a corner. A fire was burning, except it seemed to be burning on water. Probably on oil. There was a part of the cabin that had no floor, but that seemed to be right above the creek, which was deeper then it seemed. In another corner there was a salt-water –don’t ask how I knew- fountain.
-Add! Hazel yanked me out of the cabin. I hadn’t even realised I’d started to walk in.
-Sorry, I, just…
-No, no, no, no, no don’t worry, I won’t tell, it’s cool. Neptune’s house ‘been empty for years anyways. Why did you look inside? Depending on which, it could have driven you mad. Hazel said.
-I don’t know. I looked in that one…
-Jupiter’s.
-Right, and then, I don’t know. I just had a gut feeling about this one. Hazel frowned.
-We really need to take you to see Lupa now. She turned and walked off.
Her purple shirts and jeans’ had disappeared, instead she wore a grey tunic, colors flashing every now and then (which would be very distracting for an opponent) underneath a metal jacket. She wore laced sandals and a helmet. Around her waist she had a kind of belt. In her hand she had a kind of spear, a rectangular shield in the other and at her side a sword. Except it didn’t look like a sword I’d use. Wait, why would I use a sword? This just kept getting better and better.
-The tunic is woollen and color changes from demigod to demigod, like the tattoo. This, she said showing her spear, is not a spear, it’s a Pilum. And the belt is a cinguium. I’m supposed to wear my armour most of the time nowadays, but I just got back from the neighbouring city – a human one- when I remembered it was Reyna’s shift at the dungeons. You’re welcome.
-Yeah, she looked about ready to gut me.
-She’s always looks like that. But she’s actually very sweet if you know how to be with her.
-Armed?
-Funny. But it’s the same thing with her mom, Bellona. Roman goddess of war.
-Who’s her Greek equivalent?
-No one. She’s an all Roman goddess.
-Well how did she come to existence then?
-The dreams of the people. Thoughts about her gathered up and BOOM, there she was. The only reason she was associated to have parents is that the Romans couldn’t understand how their own dreams created some gods. We’re here. Hazel said.
We were in front of a temple building, except this one had curtains, covering the columns and everything. Not exactly the place I’d think up for a she-wolf, but this place had already proven itself nothing like me.
-Remember, no weakness. If you show weakness, she’ll kill you.
-Harsh much?
-It’s practice for battle. If you show fear it gives the enemy energy and hope. I took deep breaths.
-You ready? Hazel asked.
-Yeah, I think. I said. Hazel nodded and walked up the steps, me at her heels.
-Until I call you stay here. Remember, no fear.
-‘Key. Hazel nodded and disappeared behind the curtain. I couldn’t hear her because of the heavy curtain, but when she yelled my name “Add” I heard. I took a deep breath and went to talk to a wolf.
It looked like a forest. Trees, moss and plants everywhere, I even spotted some poison ivy and milkweed. In the back there was a cave. Hazel was standing there, so straight she looked like plywood, Pilum at her side. She motioned for me to approach behind her back.
-You are the unknown stranger? A voice from the cave asked.
-Yes. I said.
-Do you have any idea where you come from?
-No.
-Do you have any idea where you are?
-Yes. The City.
-Excellent, Hazel has informed you. Do you know where the city is?
-No.
-Ah Hazel, your attention to detail is fine, but you forget… San Francisco.
-San Francisco! No, no I can’t, I can’t be here, I can’t be in San Francisco!
-Add, what are you talking about? You can’t go away, if you do monsters will find you and it’s all over.
-San Francisco isn’t safe. I insisted.
-It is, it is, calm down. You’re surrounded by trained soldiers Add, you’re probably trained too. I promise you are safe. Hazel said.
Then I remembered about the “no showing weakness” thing and I figured I was doomed.
I looked up at the cave. A huge white wolf walked out. I guess Hazel’d warned me, but I still think my eyes widened. And I don’t know if it was just me, but she looked troubled, maybe a little annoyed by me.
-Hazel, you may go. Inform Reyna and Bobby they may leave the dungeon, tell Gwendolyn to come here.
-Yes Lupa. She knelt and marched out the door, straight as plywood, but I was pretty sure the second she was outside she ran.
-Did Hazel tell you how we found you?
-Yes.
-How did you get in out creek?
-I don’t know. I don’t remember anything.
-Nothing… Then you probably don’t remember your name, your parents, your status?
-No ma’am. Lupa looked at me and if a wolf could smirk, she did.
-You speak Ancient Greek. You just did, and are this moment.
-I… I did? I said switching back to English.
-This is bad news. Very bad… What was he thinking? Crazy old horse…
-Horse?
-Do you remember any horse? I searched my brain.
-No.
-Do you remember one thing, any thing?
-The beads. On my necklace. They mean things. I don’t know what, I just know they do. I said.
-Hmm… Have you ever heard the name Jason?
-Yeah, Jason. The guy in the Argonautica.
-What about Grace?
Jason Grace
Jason Grace
Jason Grace

Did I know a Jason Grace? I didn’t know any Jason, but Grace was a surname I knew.
-I don't. I said, extremely frustrated with myself. And then it clicked.
Was Jason Grace the Jason Hazel didn’t want to tell me about? Lupa studied me and I was scared to ask.
-For now you will have to stay in Mercury’s house and prey their hospitality is good. I will not give you armour until you are claimed, and I will let you live, for you are not mine to kill. The moment you are claimed, you will have half a citizenship to this city. You may not vote, but you may fight and train.
-What do you mean not yours to kill? I asked.
-You are a strong, brave and powerful hero. Gwendolyn is probably waiting for you: go. She said, totally ignoring me.
But that was my cue to leave.
over a year ago partypony said…
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^Luv it! Like the crazy old horse part. I`ve never heard of anyone calling Chiron that. CCS seems an awful lot like CHB, but thats cool.
over a year ago losthero5 said…
lol 'crazy horse'. talk about unfriendly with Chiron. i wonder how he is gonna explain his dip in the Styx powers
over a year ago redhawks said…
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OH ya. I wonder how he would do that. ^

I LOVED IT!!!!! IT WAS AMAZIING!!! AS ALWAYS!!!!!!!
over a year ago Lightning98 said…
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HecateA you are amazing as always
over a year ago sonoboreas said…
big smile
Wait Hecate can make mistakes?
over a year ago Odssey said…
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She can make mistakes all right ( no offense) but she dosent make them often.
over a year ago sillyA013 said…
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hah love it...................wen will u post more
over a year ago partypony said…
meh
how bout now?
over a year ago sonoboreas said…
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Ya I am definitely think Hecate should devote all her spare time to making stories for us.
over a year ago Wolfheart316 said…
surprise
hi i am in love with this story! thankyou so much! please wright again soon!
over a year ago partypony said…
meh
Ok, guys dont rush her. stories have to be well thought out and it takes time to write a good one. So if u want a good story, patience people! So.... whens the next one!!!!??????
over a year ago HecateA said…
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You guys are so... eh, ah, AWWWWW!!!! You guys... I love you all! Your comments are so... *is wordless*

So I decided to answer your plees and just give you chapter 3 nearly a week in advance. I'll add a picture as soon as I get to the other computer (I've got 3 pics of the 3 new girls on there)

@sonoboreas- Pff, heck yeah
@Oddsey - None taken
@sonoboreas - I'd die working
@Wolfheart - Glad you like it, and welcome to the spot! I'm the welcoming commity, Hecate, here's your muffin basket! *hands*
@partypony - I'm actually working on chapter 5. But I wanted to give myself a 1 chapter per Friday rule. I have a feeling that's not happening.
@everybody - AWWW!!!!!


3
At the door a girl was waiting for me. She had dark red hair braided in 2 braids, blue eyes and she was well tanned, a huge smile on her face making me wonder what she just slipped in someone’s pocket. Around her neck was a leather cord, with a tiny shark tooth hanging on it. She wore armour; her tunic was plain baby blue, a helmet under her arm.
-Are you Add? She asked.
-Apparently.
-I’m Gwen Madison, daughter of Mercury.
-That’s Hermes?
-Hermes faded man, Mercury is still alive.
-But, I mean, he’s his Greek counterpart, right?
-In theory. Mercury is a bunch of Greek gods at once, he represents many. Anyways, yeah, I’m Gwen. ‘Heard you’re going to bunk in our house for a while, at least that’s what Hazel says. Common, I’ll show you our house before supper. She said. She led me towards a house near the edge of the city and pulled the baby blue curtain out of the way.
Inside a bunch of kids, headcount revealed 10; wearing purple shirts and various parts of armour were gathered in the corner of what looked like a living room, with a temple shaped fireplace.
There was a wrestling match in a corner and everyone seemed to be placing bets except for one kid who was pickpocketing.
-There’s a free cot in room 3. Gwen said.
As we passed the young thief, who couldn’t have been more then 7, Gwen took a roll of coins from his back pockets and motioned at me not to tell. Once we headed in a corridor and Gwen opened the door, pushing me inside, I spoke up.
-Dude, you just stole from that kid.
-Add, Mercury is a god of thieves, along with Furina, who also has some kids here. If you don’t keep a hand on it, you won’t re-find it. She said. Then she held up a ballpoint pen.
-See? She said handing it back to me.
-Is it mine?
-It was in your pocket.
-Oh. Umm, thanks?
-Yeah, just watch out, my siblings aren’t as generous.
-I’ll keep that in mind. I promised.
-Great. Anyways this is the guy room. There aren’t that many of them, but if they really want to they can make the sound of 3. I’m in charge of this house, so if there’s anything else you’d like to see or know…
-Yeah, actually, the creek.
-The creek? Hmm, true, wouldn’t mind going for a swim myself right now ‘cause dang it’s hot, except we’re not allowed, but sure, we can go see the creek. Oh, and Hazel. She’ll be happy to see you’re alive. Common. Before she walked out the door she yelled out;
-10 Aureus on Henry!
-What’s an Aureus? I asked as she folded the curtain to let as much air in the house as possible.
-Currency of Rome. We still use it here. Common. She said.
-Aren’t you hot in armour? I asked, feeling my skin burn under the sun already. How could it be so hot in winter?
-Boiling actually. It’s been hotter.
-And you still have to wear armour?
-If it’s that bad Lupa lets us not. Most people just stay in the houses where it’s not required if it’s that bad. But we replicate what the soldiers did. Intense training and all. Trust me, Mercury house is the only place where you are guaranteed to find people having fun and goofing off. Gwen promised. We crossed the bridge and Gwen walked towards a spot pretty far from the rest of camp.
-This is where they found you. She said. I knelt down and looked for any type of clue. Footprints, fabric, paper, anything. No such luck.
-What day is it?
-The council was 3 days ago. It’s Christmas Eve.
-Really? Why is it so warm? I know it doesn’t really snow in Frisco, but still.
-Add, the weather is messed up. But it is strange. Gwen admitted starring up.
-So it’s Christmas Eve?
-Yeah, but don’t get any ideas. We don’t really celebrate Christmas. Well, we get the day off of training and all, but nothing real special. Do you know if you had any plans for the holiday?
-I don’t know. I… I have the feeling I was just supposed to hang around with friends. But it’s fuzzy. Argh, this is so annoying!
-Hey, don’t worry. We’ll figure out why you have no memories. Until then you can hang out with Hazel, Bobby, Da, Rey and I.
-Da?
-Dakota. She’s… I didn’t know what Dakota was because a conch bell blew.
-Supper. Common. She said. She brought me to the cafeteria. The tables were covered in different coloured shrouds over white cloths, name lists hanging on the wall besides them, golden goblets, plates and cutlery set. Lupa was sitting on a slightly elevated platform.
-You can stick with me tonight, over there. Gwen said.
-How do the tables work? I asked.
-By order of combat accomplishment. Best soldiers sit together, etc, etc. Recently my friends and I got upgraded; we have the whole table nearly to ourselves. The other praetors sit at another table; Common.
Hazel was already sitting at the table, shooting sparks from her fingers to the ceiling, looking bored.
-Yo, Haze. Gwen said. She turned around.
-Add, you made it! She said.
-Yeah. She said I wasn’t hers to kill or something encouraging like that.
-Not hers to… That’s weird. Anybody in the City is under her authority. Hazel said as Gwen sat in front of her.
-Did she talk about citizenship? Hazel asked.
-Half-citizenship if I get claimed.
-You probably will, you are older than 15, right? Gwen said.
-Here sit down Add, and yeah, you look about 16. Hazel said. I sat down besides her.
The boy that was guarding me in the cell showed up. He was holding a book under his arm. The letters of the title were like English, but the words made absolutely no sense, no matter how much I pushed my eyes to read them right.
-Hey Bobby.
-Hey Gwendo. What’s he doing here? He asked pointing at me.
-He’s lost.
-No kidding if he’s here. He said. Reyna strode right behind Bobby and sat near the wall. She shot me a murderous look.
-Well Haze and I were in charge of showing him around, so we figured he’d just eat with us. We have loads of room. Gwen said. Reyna’s face darkened.
-Aww Rey, that’s not what I…
But Gwen had lost Reyna, she pressed her head on the wall and I couldn’t believe she was the same girl who’d nearly rammed a spear through me earlier. She looked like she’d given up on something important. Like an Olympian forced to pull out of the competition because of a paper cut. I barely knew her and I knew it looked wrong on her.
There was an awkward silence so Bobby pulled a magazine from the pages of his book.
-What are you reading? I asked in a desperate attempt at breaking the heavy silence.
-Science magazine. He said. Bobby wasn’t good at conversation and just went back to read about molecules.
A new girl walked up.
-I’m sorry I’m late, did I miss anything? She asked, in a Spanish accent, sitting next to Gwen. She had shoulder length blond hair and bangs brushed to the side. She had kaki green eyes and she seemed well fit and curvy. She wore low-waist jeans and a purple tank top.
-Umm, yeah. This is Add, Hazel said. Add, Dakota.
-Salve, you new here? She said.
Salve? Did that mean, like, hi or saliva? I’d have to find out.
-Umm, yeah.
-He’s the guy from the dungeon. Gwen said.
-Oh, that’s you? So you did remember your name?
-No. Hazel started calling me Add.
-Okay. Dakota said, her eyebrows frowned in a way meaning she obviously thought that wasn’t weird. Suddenly everything turned silent. A girl with olive skin and mid-neck curly black hair was standing besides Lupa. She had a white cloth draped around her. She started speaking in a language I didn’t know, hands raised. I understood 3 words. To the gods.
Then the plates started overflowing with food and everybody dug in.
It looked really good. Chicken, cabbage, radishes, bread, figs, apples, pears; there was a little bit of everything.
-Woe. I muttered.
-Mm-hmm. Oh, by the way, in your cup? That’s wine.
-Wine? Don’t you need to be like, 21 years old?
-Dude, you need to be 25 to join the Roman army, you need to be 16 to drive. We sort-of follow our own rules. It doesn’t hurt anybody; never hurt the Romans either as long as you don’t overdo it, which you will get eternally made fun for if you do. But if you really don’t want to, just think about water when you drink.
-It works?
-Every time. Gwen said. Then someone plopped a Santa hat on her head.
-What the heck? She asked, yanking it off.
-Christmas Eve people, look alive! A girl said sitting down beside me. It was the girl who’d done the speech up-front. She’d taken off the cloth to show a black tank top, white Pumas and dark skinny jeans. Up close I noticed her eyes were a mix of brown and black, lacking of any warmth, which was supplied by the smile her full lips were pulled into.
-Oh hi. She said noticing me.
-Hi.
-I’m Caleb Gelus. She said holding out her hand.
-I’m… Add I guess.
-You guess? Oh I get it; you’re the guy in the dungeons.
Super, I thought, I wake up with a rep.
-Yeah, that’s me.
-Cool, glad you woke up. I’m the priestess here. And a daughter of Pluto.
-Hades?
-Add; stop it with the Greek names already. Gwen reproached.
-But yeah, Hades. Caleb said.
Something else clicked.
-Ha-Pluto has children?
-Yeah. Well, there’s just me, but yeah. Why wouldn’t he?
-You’re in a camp filled with children of the gods, Add. Dakota said gently.
-I know but… The three elder gods. Zeus, Poseidon and Hades, aren’t they supposed to have no children?
They looked at me odd.
-Well, they’re all married if that’s what you mean.
-No, just… Never mind. I said. Dakota started a conversation about the armoury with Reyna, who snapped out of the zombie/state and talked about the different weapons and which of them the Vulcan children should start making. I figured Vulcan was the god of forges and fire: Hephaestus. I just ate quietly.
-Where’s the stupido-squad? Hazel asked.
-Don’t call them that, they’ll just beat you up.
-I’d like to see them catch me. Hazel’s eyes sparkled.
-Fair enough. I don’t know. I think they’re out setting traps in the wood.
-Traps? Who the Pluto gets Jack, Jake and Jace out in the woods setting traps?! Reyna asked.
-Who are they? I asked.
-The stupido-squad. Hazel said at once.
-You’ll get beat up! Gwen said.
-They’re my brothers. 30, 17 and 5 minutes older than me. Reyna said.
-They’re at the same rank as us, but man are they a pain! Gwen said.
-And that’s before you add Mars’ 2 kids to the list. Caleb rolled her eyes.
Whoever the stupido-squad was they reminded me of someone. I wondered who, and sunk back into thoughts for a minute or so before giving up on concentration.
-Bobby, what are you reading now? Caleb asked. Bobby’s spoon froze half-way to his mouth and he looked up.
-Science magazine. Here. He handed her the magazine over the table and I peeked.
The cover had “THE ‘SCIST” written in big white letters. Different pictures and slogans were written everywhere, but the main picture was of a blond, curly-haired girl, her eyes grey as storm clouds. She was tall, athletic-looking, tanned, and pretty.
“THE ‘SCIST’ interviews 16 year old military and architecture genius Annabeth Chasse”
Was written above her head. She had a blueprint behind her and looked very pleased with herself for coming up with it.
But the name, the eyes, something clicked.
I knew Annabeth Chase.
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You guys are so... eh, ah, AWWWWW!!!!  You guys...  I love you all!  Your comments are so... *is word
over a year ago lilsparky14 said…
you have got to make a chapter 4 soon theses are awsome
over a year ago Lightning98 said…
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HecateA that was brilliant as always... i am crying right now because of your ending. You are such good writer and i think everyone could agree with that.
Also sorry about the tree comment it was just that i was confused so i just had to ask.
Again wonderful writer, made me cry

Love Lightning98
over a year ago losthero5 said…
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something clicked in percy's brain 10 times? -.-
oh and it's "chase" not "chasse"

great chapter though!
over a year ago labyrinth75 said…
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great chapter Hecate
when does percy/add remeber that hes the son of Poseidon/Neptune
over a year ago sonoboreas said…
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^Isn't that part of the mystery...

Anyway great/fantastic/most amazing story ever/most addicting story ever Hecate but you probably already heard.

Never stop writing I absolutely love everything you make.
over a year ago partypony said…
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OMG that was awesome. Im probably exagerating right now but who cares rigth? I luv the ending. Now Annabeth's in the picture, even if its only a click in percy's brain, its gonna be interesting.

And yea, so excited wen hes gonna realize hes a son of Poseidon/Neptune. I think he's gonna soak some children of Mars who tries to engage him in a swordfight. Oh LOL..
over a year ago redhawks said…
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THAT WAS ABSOULTLY POSITAVLY AMAZING!!!

Hecate NEVER EVER stop writing. AT ALL. IT IS AMAZING!!
over a year ago Lightning98 said…
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i hope you can write more you writing is alot like ricks and i makes me cry and ya you are the best writer EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago thebolt said…
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wait is this ricks story? or hecates?
over a year ago Idunn said…
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Beautiful, you should be a writer
over a year ago Wolfheart316 said…
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ok, you officially have me checking this blog every day for the next chapter. And the part about annabeth, that was genius!please keep going! i am sorry to say but you aren't allowed to stop until the next book is out because the wait will kill me! thank-you
over a year ago sillyA013 said…
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh...... speechless......

i agree with wolfheart[:D]

pleasse i am -wow- omg theres no words and if i tried to say wat im thinking it wud take forever to finish :D

i love the part about annabeth
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh...... speechless......

i agree with wolfheart[:D] 

pleasse i am -wow- omg there
over a year ago HecateA said…
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Thank you!!!
And I'm a sucker for Percabeth, who is proudly the one couple or romantic thingy I have minor interest in. Which is why I added a PICTURE!!!!. I'm a sucker for that guy's pictures too.
@ losthero5, writting :) grammar and punctuation :(
@ lightning, you have no idea how much of a compliment that is <3
@ thebolt, welcome to the spot, here's your muffin basket, love the welcoming commity. This is my version of Son of Neptune
@Wolfheart Glad you're on bord! I think this is my best oen so far. This morning getting dressed I had this great idea and I was very proud of myself :DDDDD
@everyone thta asked - I will be a writter and I never stop! Drives my friends nuts!

Don't forget to check out Jewels too, that's still happening!

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The girl called Annabeth Chasse

-I know her! I said pointing at the girl.
-What, her? Caleb said.
-Annabeth, I know her, since I’m 12! I said excited.
-How do you..? Dakota asked. But I’d taken the magazine from Caleb and was looking for the article where she was featured. I found it and read it aloud, choppily trying to make the words have sense until Hazel took over.
“New York City has one of the best child military geniuses. Annabeth Chasse, 16 years old, who got interested in Military when she was 6 years old.
‘My dad is a military professor.’ She says, ‘that’s how I got started and since then, I’ve studied battle strategy of both Ancient civilisations and of world wars.’
‘I definitely like the war strategies of the Ancient civilisations better. Compared to back then, right now taking over a city is easy. The man power used is much more impressive.’ She confides.
But Annabeth Chasse’s genius doesn’t stop at Military strategy and history. Architecture is perhaps a bigger part of her life.
‘I have wanted to be an architect since I am very little.’
And Annabeth’s dreams are very close to realisation; the blueprint she entered for a Civil War memorial won first place.
‘The girl is a genius, how else can I put it?’ Janie Holls, architect laughs. ‘Her design is smart, the outside is beautiful, but it’s the inside that’s interesting. It’s hollow. You heard me, hollow. How she figured out how to make it as sturdy as it would’ve been if it wasn’t hollow, I’m still not quite sure, but it is. It’s not something many have thought about for monuments, but it works. And the money saved by doing that…’
As first prize, not only will Annabeth’s monument be built, but she will also receive a prize of 10 000$ US.
‘I really just wanted the monument to be built, money isn’t important to me.’
Annabeth has made the money a donation to a summer camp local to her present hometown- New York City.
‘I didn’t need the money; I’ve already got college-money covered.’
But she didn’t need that money either. She received a scholarship for the University of Ottawa at age 16 for all the classes she needs to become a licensed architect.
‘It’s a thrill to get a full scholarship so young.’ She says, ‘I didn’t expect it, but I’ve heard the University of Ottawa has an excellent program.’
‘Annabeth’s great; some of the things she’ll have drawn will just blow your mind away.’ A friend says.
‘When she told me she wanted to be an architect I didn’t buy it, I couldn’t see her do it, but now she’s going to have her monument built.’ Another tells.”
-You know this girl? Dakota asked.
-Annabeth, yeah, I remember her.
-Does that mean you remember who you are?
My energy dropped.
-No. I just remember her. I said.
-Only her? What does she call you?
-I… I don’t know.
-Does she have any brothers or sisters? Dakota asked.
-I don’t know.
-We should find her, she probably knows more about you. Hazel said.
-She’s where? New York? Caleb asked.
-Well we can’t go.
-What? What do you mean? I asked. If this girl was at New York, I was going to New York.
-We are forbidden to go to New York. Reyna said.
-Why? What’s wrong with the City?
-We don’t really know. But everybody that goes there ends up dying very painfully. Sometimes we get the body back, and it’s not pretty. Gwen said.
-Why?
-We’re not sure, but Bobby has an idea. Hazel said.
-Dude, do you know everything about the fall of Rome?
-No.
-Crash course: Rome separated into 2 states, 2 emperors. The decision was taken in Rome. As strong as the capital is, that’s where things started breaking apart. New York City is the new Rome, we know that much. I think you need to be careful when you go to the city.
-But isn’t that were Olympus is? If it’s the capital, isn’t that where the Roman gods live?
-Yes. But you don’t go to Olympus for a weekend, Add. You barely go to Olympus, the only ones who really do have any contact with the gods are Dakota and… Gwen trailed off.
Jason.
It was the only name who got caught in their throats and wouldn’t come out. An awkward atmosphere settled in.
-Point is, New York: bad place.
-That can’t be right. New York can’t be bad.
-Add, people DIE. PAINFULLY. I think it can be, is, bad.
-No, I mean… Never mind. I said.
-We should talk to Lupa. Caleb said.
-For sure, let’s go. Gwen said, pushing her chair back.
-Wait, what?
-This is urgent. Well, it could be for all we know.
-I’ll soften things up. Dakota said.
-Take this. Bobby said handing me the magazine. I said thanks and followed them out of the cafeteria and further into the city. Night fell and torches appeared on each side of doorways, and some seemed to float in mid-air.
-She’ll be at the forum. Dakota said.
-The forum?
-It’s like the town square. Gwen said.
-The centre U. I said, just like that.
-What?
-I don’t know. Never mind, ignore me. I said.
This was so confusing. Annabeth Chasse, I had just enough memory to remember her. I remembered the blade of her dagger, the sound of her voice, and the touch of her lips. I remembered her presence in battle, her shrines up above and the gaze of her eyes.
And then I’d keep blabbing about the Greek names, random places I knew about and having these random gut feelings, that this place was as unsafe as unsafe gets. It seemed so wrong. The drills, the statuses, the rules. There had to be something about that that hinted where the heck I came from. A breeze drifted across the village.
-Add, you okay? Gwen asked softly, peaking over her shoulder. I nodded, even if the answer was No, absolutely and undeniably NO.
Could you be homesick for a place you didn’t remember? Was it normal I wanted to see a girl I’d remembered about 2 minutes ago? That I wanted to hold her?
-Don’t worry Add, we’ll figure things out, Gwen said. You’re not the first demigod to wander around here. Your case is just… umm… Unforgettable.
Dakota smacked her forehead looking downright ashamed of being near Gwen, as she waited for a response.
-Okay, okay, bad joke, I’m sorry. But we will figure things out. Gwen said.
We turned a corner.
The person wasn’t Lupa, but a woman with hair, white as snow falling unequally between her two shoulder blades. When she turned I saw her eyes were still those of a she-wolf. She wore grey battle armour and the plume of her helmet was white as her hair. She had a short sword- a gladus Reyna had said- in her hand, pointing down at the ground.
-Lupa? Dakota asked. She turned slowly and looked at us.
-Yes?
In her human form, the wolf goddess looked equally as threatening and intelligent, but she was beautiful, in a cold harsh way.
-Add, he remembered something. During supper.
-What? Lupa asked. I opened the magazine at the page with the article on Annabeth. I figured she could see pretty well in the dark, so handed the magazine to her. She read through the article.
-Do you remember how you met her? Lupa asked.
-No.
-Do you remember how you knew her?
-A friend. I blushed.
-Anything else? She asked, thought I could tell she was seeing right through my lie.
-No ma’am.
-Lupa, she lives in New York. Dakota piped up. The wolf goddess glared at me.
-How important is she?
-Very.
-Important enough to go to New York?
-I… I don’t know. It can’t be that bad, can it?
-Ah, but it is, hero. Do you really think that if you find this girl, it will fix the problem at hand?
-Problem? Lupa, what problem? Lupa’s face darkened.
-Not something one should speak of in the night, hero.
-Does this have to do with Jason Grace? I asked. The night suddenly became colder and the silence was absolute.
-Do you know who Jason Grace is, boy? Lupa asked.
-No. I said.
-Then that too must be discussed in other times. Come back to find me, tomorrow at supper. Just you and Dakota. I will… Explain. Lupa said.
-Common, Add. Dakota said. She took my arm and led me away from Lupa. We were nearly at the other side in the city when words seemed to explode form Gwen’s mouth.
-She knows who Add’s talking about, doesn’t she? Gwen said.
-I think she does. Or at least she has an idea. Dakota confirmed.
-Who is Jason Grace?
-If Lupa does not tell you, nor shall we. It is forbidden. I’m sorry. Gwen said.
-He’s important, isn’t he? I asked again.
-Our lips are sealed Add. You’ll just have to wait.

*This picture is Caleb, or as close to Caleb as I could find
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Thank you!!!
And I'm a sucker for Percabeth, who is proudly the one couple or romantic thingy I have
over a year ago redhawks said…
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ABSOLUTLY AMAZING!! I keep saying that because I have know idea what to say. I mean your chapters just leave me speechless. I think you are Rick who has 2 story lines and wants to share both so you have this one and another one. You really need to contact an agency bout your writing to get it published.
over a year ago losthero5 said…
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When I read that they die in NYC, i thought for a second that Chiron would hunt for them and kill them ... Boy do i have a dark sense of humor -.-
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over a year ago Idunn said…
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Beautiful!
over a year ago WiseGirl_Shayne said…
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Hi.. I love your fanfic.. so far, its the best.. can't wait for chapter 4..
over a year ago ase said…
GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago Eirene21 said…
That is absolute amazing! your writing is very captivating and entertaining. I agree with redhawks, your should certainly consider talking to a published about your writing and see if you can get it published. Are you Rick Riordan in disguise?
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over a year ago partypony said…
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that. was. amazing. totally supercalifragalisticexpialidocious! Thats like a fancy word for awesome!
over a year ago partypony said…
PS luv the pic.
over a year ago percyjackson51 said…
Good job, your really good at writing hecate!!!
Hope you write more soon :)
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over a year ago labyrinth75 said…
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B-R-I-L-L-I-A-N-T!
I think this is a brilliant no awesome story Hecate
over a year ago percylover22 said…
YOU ARE AWESOME!
over a year ago red1red2red said…
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Great!!! More!!
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over a year ago Lightning98 said…
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HecateA you have done it again... you hae made me cry. My mom thinks i am going crazy because in the middle of the night i just start crying.
What are the reasons for me crying..... you are the most amizing witer on the face of the earth almos equal to Rick!!!!!!! You add so much emotion into your work it is just so amazing.
Agreeing with redhawks you should talk to a publisher to get this ... published.
Please write more or else I will be crrying in a sad way... you know what I mean<3

Love always Lightning98
over a year ago sillyA013 said…
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yu cant just leave us with
-yull just have to wait

its just as bad as rick riordan leaving us with
-percy jackson is at the other camp and he probably doesnt even remember who he is

BUT OTHER THAN THAT I LOVE IT
over a year ago saf99 said…
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COMMON MAKE ANOTHER ONE PLEASE PLEASE
over a year ago saf99 said…
man u need to become a author
over a year ago JackofDeath2445 said…
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Its Wonderful! I wonder if Rick Riordan would give Percy a romantic interest in the Roman Camp. After all, Aphrodite isn't just done with his love life when he and Annabeth started to date, I'm sure she'll throw him another girl from the Roman Camp, just to spice up his life ha ha. That'll probably cause some frictions between the two camps when they try to team up against the giants.
over a year ago TheHero_AC said…
I wish he would make annabeth fight for her Percy it would be a great story
over a year ago JackofDeath2445 said…
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Tragedy, Jealousy, Betrayal... It is in almost every Greek stories. It is through that journey do their love mature or falter. You can see it in the old Greek Heroes, Jason, Perseus, Hercules, Odysseus, Aeneas(Okay he's a Roman Hero, but born a Trojan, so in a way he's Greek). Each one of them experienced love, loss and a whole lot of misfortunes(Courtesy of the Gods sometimes). So why will it be any different for the New Heroes who now faces the same, if not more dangerous, challenges in the Modern Age? What really would be interesting is that a Daughter of Minerva, the Roman Athena, falls for Percy ha ha. I'm guessing the goddess would 'disapprove' of the Son of Poseidon more than ever. Which begs the questions, how she would react if both of her daughters prays to her to help win Percy's Affection..
over a year ago losthero5 said…
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2500+ views... DAMN! oh i dont want to start a discussion here but at the end of lost hero, it said that he PROBABLY doesnt remember who he is. percy might, just might, have his memory :]
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over a year ago saf99 said…
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hurrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyy uuuuuupppppp ppppooooosssststtttttt annnoootttthhheeerrr ccchhhappterrrrr plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz­zzz
over a year ago sillyA013 said…
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yea it wud be cool if he had his memory but more boring........
btw i like the way the story is going with percy remembering annabeth and the rest going CLICK! [percy´z light bulb jst turned on]
over a year ago saf99 said…
hurrrrrry
over a year ago zips said…
worried
i joined just for this story... i want the next chapter....hurry please
over a year ago Lightning98 said…
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guys calm down no matter how exciting this might be (Best story ever buy the way to Hecate) but Hecate (the author) has already anounced that a new chapter comes out every friday
in the mean time if you have not already heard of it you should read Jewles by the one and only Hecate
Hecate you ARE the best writer ever and ya
dont forget any of the stuff i said before :)
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over a year ago saf99 said…
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what
over a year ago redhawks said…
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Oh guys for Jewels to make any sense whats so ever you need to read the first one. The Lost Hero written by me. (Hecte) O and btw you guys weren't hear when seh said just to call her Hecate. That name was taken so she added the A. just to let ya know.

I agree with Lightning. BE CALM. SHOW ME YOU PATCIENCE. You can't rush a work of art.
over a year ago bookeater said…
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i wish annabeth didnt have to lose percy but I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! MAKE ANOTHER OR I MIGHT DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago losthero5 said…
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lighting, she even admitted that might not be happening
over a year ago Lightning98 said…
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well then... sorry i really hate to be mean but ummmm ya. I love reading Hecate's work but i hate to rush her or else her writing wont be her usual perfect. Its like making Michelangelo paint a pictue in a minute... it takes time to make a master pice
also whould you like it if you are making these stories and people kept rushing you and spaming all over... would you like that?? Because I know I would not like that
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over a year ago partypony said…
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i. cannot. wait. any. longer. well maybe i can but its gonna be torture! its just super awesome! think i mentioned that in my previous pst. KEEP ON WRITING HecateA!!!!!!!
over a year ago saf99 said…
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this is killing meh
over a year ago saf99 said…
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if u wanna read another son of neptune there is a good one that has 19 chapters i think it on fanfic
over a year ago bookeater said…
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i read that on fanfic and i thought it wasnt that good... i like this one bettter.... GO TEAM GREEK!!!!!!!!!!!

ps you are either team roman or tem greek.
over a year ago zips said…
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i cant choose sides untill i learn more about the romans
over a year ago Festus1126 said…
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that was amazing! I just finished TLH 2 days ago and wanted to read anything about TSN and i found my self here. Inpresive story. You Rick Riordan?!
over a year ago partypony said…
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theres another fanfic? where? can u add a link plzzzz?????
over a year ago sillyA013 said…
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Team GREEK [cuz percy is greek (so is leo)]
over a year ago saf99 said…
ok ill try
over a year ago saf99 said…
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Son of Neptune Chapter 1, a Heroes of Olympus fanfic - FanFiction.Net i think thats it
over a year ago bookeater said…
thx sillyA013 i is team greek 2
over a year ago saf99 said…
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ugh almost friday
over a year ago sillyA013 said…
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welcom bookeater
over a year ago bookeater said…
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thanks sillyA013 whats up that guy on fanfiction or whatever isn't writing any more chapters anymore its annoying well anywany GO TEAM GREEK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago TheHero_AC said…
Ya go Greek Percy is on that team and i just love him GO GREEK!!! more chapters please any one add on if they can please
over a year ago bookeater said…
hmmm
hey did you spell Annabeth Chasse wrong? i think its Chase not Chasse??????????????? IDK
over a year ago saf99 said…
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hurrry post the next chapter its friday
over a year ago losthero5 said…
meh
OMG we have to stop commenting... we love hecate but she will love us more if she can manage to write her fanfic in a few pages. 2 pages are 100% comments and Hecate only managed to write 3 chapters in 2 pages! when anyone else comes here they have to sift through all of this! -.-
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over a year ago saf99 said…
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woah temper TEMPER
over a year ago saf99 said…
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calm down
over a year ago losthero5 said…
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sorry i just wanted to emphasize my piont
over a year ago redhawks said…
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Hey guys.... Did you ever relize that maybe HEcate doesn't like her fan fic forum being all spammed up. Seriously guys. You need to be pattcient and just WAIT for her new chapter. I know I know it's really good but WAIT!
over a year ago sonoboreas said…
Redhawks thank you for summing up my thoughts into words somehow.

Also am I the only one who's starting to like the Romans a lil'...
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over a year ago RickJackson98 said…
ok Hecate I love your fanfic sorry I only started reading it earlier but still guuys would you all please stop spamming on Hecate's spot I doubt she'll be happy and honestly do you all really think telling her to post it will suddenly make her write faster and if it does it won't be as good and if I were writing a fanfic and people were hastling me like you are all doing I would say I'm stopping until you all come down
over a year ago HecateA said…
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OKAY I'm back! Did'ja miss me?

So anyways, I didn't put it at the top like I used to, because I figured between the anti-spam goddess (who is presently on hold) and me, spamming would be no problem. Guys, I really, really love comments, but spam comments aren't worth anything to me. If you're going to comment on my writting, wheter you like it or not, I love that, but if you're just going to yell TEAM GREEK!!!1!! or pressure me into doing something, I consider it spam (more the first then second). If you have more to say, edit it into the first comment by clicking the grey pencil instead of making a whole new comment. I will love you more.

Oh yeah, and did I mention if at any time I feel the spamming is going out of control and I'm tired of being pressured etc, etc, I will stop publishing this. Yeah, I reserve myself the right to do that, as well as I reserve myself the right to send it to a few particular members after I stop publishing.

If I make you wait that long its because I'm busy or not home. I was in Orlando for the week. I'm not going to appologise for the wait, because I don't feel I really have to, but there will be more waits. Warning.

Arivals, oh boy! Well, all new arrivals, I noticed you all, you are really all welcome to this spot, please proceed to the table to your right and pick up your signature HoO muffin basket. As you probably know or have figured, I'm Hecate, the welcoming commity and very proud second dedicated fan of this spot (eeeeeeeepppppp)

@lightning God, you will cry SO MUCH later on
@saf99 losthero has a point please, if you pressure me it wont work
@bookeater Yes I did.

Can I mention Rick, lightning, sonofboreas, red and losthero, as well as everybody else who tried to calm down the spamming and pressuring? It really was for you guys that I started writting this, I love you all! You people are the fans that joinned about the same time or before I did. <3

4
I discover the pen of mass destruction
My dream was completely bull.
I was standing in the ruins of a house in the woods. In front of me was a little boy. He couldn’t have been more then 2, with short blond hair and blue eyes. He had a funny little scar on his lip, like he’d rammed a stapler on it.
-Where am? Where Thalia? He asked looking around.
-Your sister isn’t here, child. A voice said. Slowly Lupa’s shape drawed itself from the shadows. The boy jumped back and gasped.
-How old are you? Lupa asked. The boy just starred at her.
-You are too young to know, I fear. Who is your mother?
-Mommy. He said.
-What is Mommy’s name?
The boy surprised me. I expected him to turn and try to run, hoped maybe, but then that would be weakness and Lupa would have to hunt him down. Or maybe he was too young to realise how bad it was.
-Suzzy. Daddy calls mommy Suzzy.
-And what’s your daddy’s name? Lupa asked, with more patience then I’d have given her. The boy frowned.
-Jupi… Jupit… Ju…
-Jupiter? The wolf looked surprised, but the boy nodded.
-Boy, if what you say is true, and I have no doubt it is, it is a much kinder fate for you to end it now. Lupa said. She advanced towards the boy, who sensed the canine’s attitude change and backed away.
-I’m sorry. Lupa said. She pounced and she was mid-air when the boy screamed, and lightning crackled down from the sky and electrocuted her. She fell to the ground in a lump. Then she glowed grey and turned into her human form. She got up, leaning greatly on a tree. Her neck was low and her hair hung on either side of her head. The boy didn’t moved, just watched the wolf. She looked at him, and I was scared she might actually go for him with her gladus. But she broke in a grin, showing off sharp white canniness.
-Boy, you are exactly the kind of hero I like. Welcome to my army. Lupa said.
I woke up in Mercury’s house.
I was still wearing jeans and the orange t-shirt. It just seemed wrong to put on one of the shirts one of the guys had given me, plain white to show I wasn’t any important soldier. I got up and rubbed my eyes. Looking out the window, it couldn’t have been more than 5 in the morning.
I pulled my sneakers on and looked around.
Nobody else was awake, and I didn’t want to go outside alone, not get in trouble. From the impression of everyone else here, getting into trouble was about as safe as diving into a pool of acid. Pool of acid… A spot on my back tingled. Pool of acid… That had to be important. I just had to figure out why…
But the dream gave me plenty to think about.
Lupa had put a 2-or-so year old boy to the test, and by making lightning crackle out of the sky, he managed to live.
And his sister. His mother… He’d had a family before coming here. I wondered what’d happened to them. If they knew where he was, or if they were still scavenging the planet for their little angel. Or even worst- if they’d already set up his tombstone in a lonely cemetery and went there to cry his loss. Who was he?
Then I thought about my mortal parent.
Was she my mother, or was he my father? I didn’t know, and had no way of knowing. I’d known my parent for 16 years, but now all that they did for me, it was all gone. Was someone looking for me? Searching the country, calling my name in woods? Was there even someone who would do that for me?
There was Annabeth…
I couldn’t bare thinking about the little boy anymore, nor about my parents, nor about Annabeth. I had to do something, not just sit on a cot.
I got up and walked as quietly as I could to the bathroom, where I refilled a canteen Gwen’d given me. I took a sip of icy cold water and went back to sit in the common room corner.
Under the cots in the bedrooms and furniture in the common rooms, the floor was made of the sides of shipping crates. One wall was dedicated to shelves lined with things. They were the randomest things, from toasters, to daggers, to a dog collar. Things that got stolen probably. Particular things the thieves were proud of getting.
The curtain separating the room was made entirely of stamps. The kind people sell for hundreds in church basements and frame.
On the ceiling were glued different coins. More collectables. I wondered why nobody would steal those, it wasn’t that high of a jump from a bunk compared to the heights I’d seen Joel Madison jump. They were attached to form the constellations during the night, and gather along the edges during the day.
Waiting was pure torture.
I tugged my necklace off my neck and starred at the beads as if I could extract their stories by pure will power.
It didn’t work.
I put it back on and starred down at the logo on my T-shirt. What was camp Half-Blood? I couldn’t figure anything out and started playing with the 1 other object I had. The pen Gwen’d taken from me. I took the cap off and it grew into an enormous 3 feet long sword, made out of bronze.
-Holy Styx! I yelped, nearly dropping it. I heard the sound of 3 people waking up. The 3 guys walked through the hallway from the room to the common room, looking half-dead.
-Awe, what the heck, Add? Why’d you – Holly Remus, what’s that?
-It was a pen! A pen, and I took the cap off and it turned into a sword! They looked at it in awe.
-Dang, that’s cool! Joel Madison, Gwen’s 10 year-old brother, said.
-Where did you get that? Henry, the guy Gwen’d betted on, said.
-Oh yeah, he doesn’t remember his name but he knows all about where he got that from. Kyle, Joel’s creepy little twin, said.
-Anaklumos. I whispered.
-Ha! He does know! 20 bucks, cough it up! Joel demanded.
-Where’s Anaklu-smish? Henry asked.
-No, its name is Anaklusmos. I said.
-Guys, what the Pluto, some of us are trying, Holy Remus! Add, what’re you holding? Gwen asked, appearing in the hallway with her sisters.
-It was a pen, and then I uncapped it.
-Oh my gods, that’s awesome! 12 year-old Marissa said, peeping over Gwen’s shoulder.
The other girls- Quittrie, Samantha, Gabby and Alena walked across to check it out, and the 7 year-old thief, Darren, woke up. A huge conversation in the camp’s main language, Latin, picked up. I just stood there without understanding a thing until Alena had a question.
-What did you say its name was? Alena asked.
-Anaklusmos.
-Riptide. In Ancient Greek. Gabby said.
-What’s up with you and Ancient Greece? Gwen asked.
-Does it matter? Merry Christmas! Samantha said.
-Yes, day off! Darren said. The whole house was excited, but obviously Gwen thought it did matter. And I agreed with her. It had to mean something.
-Sorry I woke you up. I apologised to Joel.
-Hun? Oh, don’t worry man. We wake each other up at this time anyways. Joel said.
-Well, might as well do the rites now. Gwen said.
Everybody formed a semi-circle around the fireplace.
-The rites to Vesta, goddess of home. The head of house does it every morning. Joel whispered in my ear.
Gwen took a cupcake-shaped jar and took a pinch of salt from it. She threw them in the flames, speaking words in, like, Latin. Her footwork, her movements, the words, they were all perfectly placed to happen at the right time. At the end everybody bowed and Gwen put the jar back on the mantel, next to a statuette of Mercury.
-I have to go talk to Da, Add, you’re coming. Gwen said.
-Umm, okay. I said.
-You guys get dressed, no armour required, and make it quick if you want to beat everyone to it. The stuff’s in compartment 4.
-Where’s compartment 4?
-You haven’t figured it out yet? None of you? Gwen asked. She looked singularly disappointed as she reached for something in her pocket, a key, and tossed it to Gabby, second eldest.
-Lose it you die. Common Add.
I recapped the sword (which looked absolutely idiotic) and it turned back to a pen. We walked out of the room and we both froze (no pun intended).
-What the Pluto? This is California! Gwen said.
Fluffy white snowflakes were falling from the sky, there was already an inch of white frost on the ground.
-It was like a thousand degrees yesterday! I protested. Gwen muttered something in Latin.
-What?
-Nothing, let’s go.
The city was quiet, with its frosted roofs and chilly winds. It could’ve made a decent postcard scene.
-Merry Christmas. Gwen said.
-You too. I said.
-Did you have any plans for the holidays? Gwen asked as we turned a corner.
-Probably. You?
-Well, every year our cabin, we… I shouldn’t say it right here, you’ll see later. But we’ve been planning it since March.
-No, I mean, with your family. I said. Gwen’s look made me regret asking. She wore a green pullover with a round neck and jeans. Her shark tooth necklace hung around her neck and her gladus hung at her side and the snow stuck to the bottom of her pumas.
-I don’t really talk to my mom. She got remarried a year after the brats were born, to a guy she met on the Internet. It’s not he’s not nice, it’s just… Sometimes she just isn’t considerate for Joel, Kyle and I. I’ve been at camp since I’m 7, but when I tried to go back to live with her it just kin-of went downhill with us. She tried to take us to New York when Grant- that’s her husband- had a business meeting there, to try and make it a vacation. She gets mad at us for doing every single damn thing that children of Mercury do.
-So stealing?
-In part. I’m too good to get caught, Joel and Kyle aren’t klepto, but more in the practical joke section. It’s not that I don’t like her just… She forgets who we really are. Last year I went to see her and she looked right through us like we were kids like Grant’s, 3 meant to be perfect little angels who tuck their shirts in their pants and floss after every meal.
-I get it. I said.
-Usually I spend Christmas here with everybody. It’s cool, and I wouldn’t have it any other way. Gwen said. And I believed her.
7 years old… Gwen’d been training since she was 7. Why did that sound familiar?
She approached the cabin that had a door and knocked. Nothing. She knocked again.
-I’m not opening Gwendolyn Madison, forget about it! Somebody yelled.
-I come in peace! Unarmed, no stink bombs, paint or syrup I swear to Mercury! Gwen said. The door unlocked.
The guy standing in the doorframe had a messed up face. No making it any nicer or softer, that was it.
His eyes were two different colors, brown like tree bark and the left icy blue, closer together then normal. He had brown hair and his nose looked like he frequently rammed himself into walls and his lips were pursed. He had an under-bite and two pointy teeth were sticking out. All in all: bulldog.
-Is Dakota there?
-Where else would she be at freaking 6:30 o’clock in the freaking morning? He grumbled.
-Dakota! Klepto red-head’s here! He yelled into the house.
-Merry Christmas by the way. Gwen said.
-Fneh! He said before stomping off.
-Dael, don’t scare my friends. Dakota complained. She appeared in the doorframe. She was wearing skinny jeans and a red tank top with a printed-on Christmas light string going around her waist.
-Hey Gwen, hey Add, what are you guys- Holly Remus, is that snow?
-Yeah, a freaking inch of snow and more’s coming down.
-Welcome to California Add. Please excuse my problem-I mean brother. Dakota said.
The cabin confused me. One wall was all cabinets. Doors, and doors, and doors. Most of them were square, but I spotted a hexagon, and the material and handles altered. It was like a giant mosaic.
The fireplace was big enough for me to fit inside just fine, and a fire crackled, warming the living room. There was a hallway that led to more rooms, like in Mercury’s cabin, besides was a mini kitchen. A mini-fridge, boiler and cabinet hanging above. A girl with two high green ponytails walked in. She starred at us.
-Oh. Hi. She said before scurrying away.
-Who’s she? Gwen asked.
-Katelynne. Undetermined, Lupa put her with us for a while.
-Don’t strangers go with the children of the traveling god?
-Janus was the god who took in Saturn when he was on the run from Jupiter.
Cue blank look.
-Saturn, the god of agriculture and the father of the big gods, was chassed away by his son Jupiter. Janus, who was ruler of Latium, sheltered him. We take in strangers once in a blue moon. Dakota elaborated.
-Maybe she’s a daughter of Iris. I suggested.
-Maybe. Anyways, why did you come here about? I don’t reckon you’re here for Christmas carols. Dakota said.
-No. But if you want me to sing…
-Don’t. Dakota shook her head.
-I found this pen in my pocket… I started. I finished the story.
-You know Add, the more you know about yourself, the easier it’d be for me to… Nah, I shouldn’t offer.
-Offer what? I asked.
-The doors over there. Everybody is represented. If I can find yours, I can actually see your beginning. Where you come from.
-Well dot it, Da! What are you waiting for?
-The thing is… Sometimes things happen for a reason. Sometimes you keep things secret until you can’t. But the choice is yours, Add. Do I look for your past?
I thought about the little I knew about myself. My weapon, my age. My girlfriend…
I will never make things easy for you Seaweed brain, get used to it. Her voice echoed in my head.
Well at least one of us will…
-Go for it. I said.
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OKAY I'm back! Did'ja miss me?

So anyways, I didn't put it at the top like I used to, because I fi
over a year ago TheHero_AC said…
It was awesome can't wait for more!!
over a year ago auliaputrin said…
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read both of fanfict!

both are very fantasticly geez!

but, i prefer the fanfic on fanfiction.net
i like the writer's style, like : 'she has blond hair, grey eyes, and etc etc etc'

i wonder would RR will read one of it? if yes, i think RR will be so proud -of course- because u both's fanfic which is motivated by him is AWESOME ENOUGH TO MAKE ME READ IT 10 TIMES
over a year ago redhawks said…
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I could not understand any of that, auliaputrin. But it's ok!

Hecate you have done it again!! That was amazing!!
Your welcome for TRYING to keep the spam and pressure down.

Oh and for Katelyn if you added anothr n and an e at the end I WOULD BE IN YOUR STORY. Katelynne. heheheheh
over a year ago Idunn said…
laugh
Speechless
WHOO !!!!
over a year ago losthero5 said…
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lol if you do happen to send it to me via message, i will probably forget and keep coming back back here -.-. thats a BIG probably tho...
over a year ago Lightning98 said…
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Hecate that was brilliant... i really liked the part when he was thinking the words i will never make things easy for you seaweed brain, get used to it.... oh my gods Hecate you are the best
I love how he finds out his pen is a sword, and how it was snowing in California
you are a brilliant writer
Also thanks for the comment at the top... i would hate it if people satrted spaming on what i work so hard on doing
Keep wirting you masterpices
Love always Lightning98
over a year ago labyrinth75 said…
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Brilliant as always Hecate
over a year ago Festus1126 said…
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What a great chapter! I really liked how he thought he remembered something about coming to camp at age 7. keep writing!
over a year ago sonoboreas said…
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Redhawks your middle sentences said exactly what I wanted to say.

Anyway your welcome Hecate and saying that I was part of the few that helped you start making these absolutely amazing articles, makes me feel pretty good.

Also Hecate you should post a link of all the chapters, once you finish, on R.R. twitter account.
over a year ago bookeater said…
cool
WOW I ALMOST PAST OUT WHEN I READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS WAS SO GOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!! and by the way i think you might be rick riordain in disguise, your'e that good. if you write a book i would totally read it.
PS my nickname is Gabby.
over a year ago Nield444 said…
I do enjoy this, but I have to disagree, for reasons beyond my understanding, as is often the case, I feel that Rick will have Percy know full well who he is.
over a year ago bookeater said…
sunny
i think Nico should get a girlfriend in this book like maybe Dakota because Dakota is 15 and so is Nico. it would be more interesting to me to see that... BOOKEATER OUT PEACE!!!!!!
over a year ago partypony said…
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i thought nico was 12? yeah im pretty sure hes 12. great fanfic, btw! he finally discovers riptide. been waiting for that forever.
over a year ago bookeater said…
laugh
no nico was 12 in the Titan's curse 3 years ago so he is 15
over a year ago Lightning98 said…
sad
Guys we are spaming again...
over a year ago bookeater said…
cool
srry i'll stop spaming...
over a year ago percyjackson51 said…
Love your story!!!
Your an amazing writer
I hope you write more soon!!!!

I thought nico was 10 in the titans curse
over a year ago RickJackson98 said…
wow great story sorry I read it awhile ago just never commented

ONLY FOR PEOPLE IN NICO ARGUMENT
guys in the Titan's Curse Nico was 10 we never figure out if he was 11 or still 10 in BL seening as it was only half a year later but I'm guessing he was 11 and in TLO he was 12 so her he is either 12 or 13 it is half a year later and this is based the same time TLH is based

sorry if this counts as spam but I under lined (or I tried to underline)it so anyone who doesn't care should know not to read it
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over a year ago losthero5 said…
rainy
what part of "no spamming" do you guys not understand. if you arent going to spam, then dont, because actions speak louder than words. basically, if you dont spam, then that means "i wont spam". kapeesh?
over a year ago lilsparky14 said…
Guys, if you want to talk about anything else besides thhe story go do it somewhere else. and by talking about spamming were spamming.
over a year ago sonoboreas said…
wink
So what is talking about spam...
over a year ago HecateA said…
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^Trying to reset order?
I appreciate it, its better this week then last!
@ auliaputrin I don't understand what you're saying
@ redhawks Okay, it was just too easy, so I change Katelyn's name to Katelynne. It was just too easy, I'll take other name requests if you guys want.
@ sonoboreas I have no twitter, and I'm not sure he would read it. But I like the idea of me writting Son of eptune at the same time as him! Makes me feel good :D By the way, he's started writting SoN
@bookeater I am not RR in disguise
@Nield Can I know why?
@bookeater I can tell you its not Dakota


NICO IS 13

5
Ho ho ho
When it snows in California the kids go absolutely nuts. There wasn’t a snowball-free minute for the whole day. I managed to nail Hazel for the stupid name she’s got me stuck with. My name had to be better than “Add”.
Mercury’s little surprise got figured out soon enough, when the snow started turning different colors. In no particular order or anything, it just started. Then the color crept onto the houses and the people. Kids were running around cursing in Latin. Gwen was beaming, without any of us realising why. Then Bobby got a nice-sized snowball in her face, but that’s besides the point.
Christmas was fun. Reyna even stopped looking at me like I was public enemy number one, and I’d figured she talked coldly to everyone, not just me. Looking at her now, I saw scaring on her face and the back of her hands. This girl had been into a lot of fights.
Hazel and Gwen got me to tag along with them; they even spoke English rather than Latin, considering I was the first half-blood in a century to not understand Latin.
Everyone had a couple of layers on and there was nobody inside.
A few of Vulcan’s children had built an army of snowmen and ice sculptures that were displayed here and there. They were really quite elaborated, joints, freckles and everything. There was everything, from Lady Gaga to Spock from Star trek.
That’s how I met the stupido-squad.
They were going around and destroying statues, hand picking the best ones. After Harry Potter and Merlin went down, Hazel got ticked. She headed straight for them and pushed one of the guys to the ground, falling face first onto the remains of Merlin.
-What the Pluto’s your problem? She yelled.
-What’s yours pixie? Hazel drew her wand from her sleeve in a swift movement and in the same speed yelled;
-Subvolo! , pointing the carefully cut and polished oak branch at him. Immediately he floated in the air, hanging by the foot.
-What the Pluto? The guy asked. The 4 other guys went for her with her bare hands, but Hazel ducked and jumped out of the way with the speed and swiftness of a cheetah.
Reyna ran and pushed Hazel out of the way, intercepting the guy’s sword with her own, pure silver with a red-leather wrapped hilt.
-Let it go Jake! Reyna yelled, pushing against the blade.
-Step out of the way midget! He pushed and her blade slipped back, but she managed to twist his blade so it went away from her and Jake went stumbling back.
-30 minutes! Reyna yelled. I realised Jake was her older brother. So the 2 other guys, who were identical, must’ve been Jack and Jace.
One of them grabbed Reyna from behind, an arm around her throat, chocking her. She jammed her sword in his eye, and he bounced back wailing, only for it to be swatted away and her last brother to resume the chocking.
-Oh damn. Bobby said. He took out his own sword. Gwen, Caleb, Dakota and I did the same, but Dakota put her arm in front of me to prevent me from going in.
-It’s not your fight; you only intervene if someone’s in mortal peril.
Hazel had kicked the last brother in the back and he’d let go of Reyna, falling on his back, but he fell against her legs and brought her down.
-Subvolo! She yelled. He went flying as well.
Reyna had gotten up and was fighting the last of her brother and a child of Mars at the same time. Hazel was duelling with another child of Trivia, a boy with shaggy black hair that was probably new to the squad, judging from the lack of scars and muscles. That or he was so good Hazel had no chance. Flashes of light shot out from the wands, setting fire to the snow for point three seconds, Harry Potter movie style. I looked back at Reyna.
-Dakota, they’ll overpower her!
-Don’t underestimate Reyna. But yes, they will. She said. Before we could move,
-EXCLUSA! He yelled. None of us could take a step forwards anymore, nor to help, nor to simply pass.
-Exclusion spells are SO unfair! Hazel yelled at him. He turned towards her but she was already behind him and brought down her gladus. He got knocked out and Hazel got knocked out from behind, when Reyna dodged and a brother’s sword came down. Reyna kicked his legs from underneath him and pinned him to the ground. The last guy standing lifted his sword above his head to crack open Reyna’s skull.
The spell faded and we ran in.
I managed to block his sword before he hit Reyna. She turned and lost her concentration, her brother flipped her and they wrestled a short distance away.
He fought strangely. Step, stab, step back, step, stab, step back. He’d try to stab, but I’d push his sword back. The pattern was easily learned, and if I could surprise him just when he was getting ready to step forwards, moving his shield I’d have a clear coast to stab.
So I did.
He fell to the ground, bent in two. The stab hadn’t made a deep gash, just big enough to give him trouble.
Everyone was staring at me. Hazel had woken up, so had everybody else, and she’d brought the 2 guys down and they were standing as far as they could from her, but still with the other 2.
-Add, where the heck did you learn to fight like that? Caleb asked.
-I… I don’t know.
-That was amazing! Reyna exclaimed.
-What? I asked.
-Add, that was amazing! Jace had no idea how to defend himself, you pulled something completely new! One, he underestimated a new kid and you weren’t thrusting your sword, you were stabbing, none of us ever do that, believe me, I’ve fought everybody here! Where did you learn that? Were you basing it on a hero or something?
-I have no idea. Probably.
-Can I see your sword? She asked. I handed it to her. She took it and examined its every detail like an art critic examines a masterpiece. She took a step back and slashed the air, with the power of someone way bigger and seemingly stronger then a 16-year-old girl: she passed her thumb against the metal and frowned.
-What type is it? I’ve never seen anything like it.
-Xiphos. I said.
Wait, what?
-Xiphos isn’t a type of sword we use. Nobody does, those things aren’t good for anything but museums. Reyna said.
-But it’s a Xiphos.
-What’s it made out of? Bobby asked.
-I… I don’t know.
-It’s not imperial gold, some kind of bronze. Bobby said, examining the blade (I’m not sure how well that went considering his hair was still in his eyes).
-I’ll ask Vulcan if they’ve ever seen anything like it. He determined.
-Add, show me again. Reyna asked.
This was so out of character. She was cold and strict, but know she looked as excited as a kid hyped on coffee on Christmas morning.
I showed her. She examined every move and then frowned.
-What’s your style? It’s not Roman. She said.
-I don’t know. Do you?
-… No. Oh stop whining Jace, the cut isn’t deep! She said. Bobby took something from his jean pocket and threw it at him. It hit him in the arm and dug itself into the snow. Jace picked it up and got to his feet. He threw it at Bobby, but he caught it.
-I don’t need pity. And you’ve made an enemy stranger. He said. He clutched his stomach and they all left.
-I’m sorry, I shouldn’t have started anything! Hazel immediately said. She had a kind of barrette in her hair, three frost covered leaves stuck together and I don’t know if it was just me, but it seemed to glow.
-It’s fine Haze. I was bound to fight them sometime today anyways, and it’ll make for a pretty interesting evening. Reyna said. She brushed the snow off her legs.
-Are you okay? He hit you pretty hard. Gwen inquired.
-I’m fine, we’ve been at it before we could walk, you get used to it. Reyna said. I recapped Riptide and slipped her back in my pocket.
-Well, at least you met the stupido-squad, Add. Hazel offered.
-Wow, way the ruin a Christmas. Caleb said, covering her face with her hand.
-Could’ve been worst, Reyna shrugged. Could’ve been in a bad mood.
-That was them in a good mood? I said.
-Mm-hmm. But I think you ruined it, so they’ll be a pain at supper. Gwen said.
-Compared to the usual..?
-Point is, you’ve made an enemy, Bobby said.
-And the Grail brothers aren’t an enemy you want to have.
-Well, if you know how to use their strength against them…
-Bobby, no offence but we don’t care about military strategies right now, we’re on our day off.
-No Haze, it actually includes you. How you were dodging and junk. If you can do that until they tire, then they’ll be weaker when you switch from defence to offence. Bobby said.
-Could work. But direct attacks work best; I rather finish them while I can before another stupido comes in. Reyna said.
Reyna and Bobby talked strategy and Gwen decided it was too peaceful; hence I got a snowball in my face. We sort of auto-split into two teams. Caleb, Reyna, Dakota and I against Bobby, Gwen and Hazel.
When the other team finally surrendered, Gwen dragged us to the top of a hill. There was a house there, thought I wasn’t sure what it was for. Gwen made us climb to the top.
Looking down at the valley below, you could see that all the colors that were drifting across the snow everyday weren’t that pointless. They were painting a pattern on the snow.
A giant winged pole with two intertwined snakes, all different colors, making it look like pop-art and on different heights was spread across the valley.
-Wow! How the… How did you do that? Caleb asked Gwen.
-Paintballs, root bear and hydrogen, that’s all I’m saying. Anyways, we decided to cut you some slack this Christmas, so we did this instead of our other stunt. But expect a lot of hell next year. Gwen’s eyes sparkled.
-Wouldn’t have it any other way Gwendo. Bobby said. Supper was announced. We climbed down and sprinted for the cafeteria to avoid being late.
After my second piece of turkey did I remember Lupa’s instructions. I looked at Dakota. She crossed my eyes. She tapped her wrist and showed five fingers. I nodded.
5 minutes later we eclipsed ourselves, back to the forum.
Lupa was standing there, big, fluffy snowflakes accumulating on her shoulders, starring off into the woods. A branch creaked under our feet and she turned.
-Perfect. You remembered. She said.
We both bowed at the wolf goddess’ feet.
-I owe you an explanation about Jason Grace, do I not?
-Yes ma’am. I said.
-Follow me. She said.
Dakota and I followed her, and I realised she was heading to Jupiter’s house. She took a ring of keys from her belt and unlocked the cabin. She pushed the door open and held the door for Dakota, who walked inside like it was her own house. I hesitated.
-Hero, come in. Lupa said.
-I… I can’t. I said.
-Why would that be? She asked.
I couldn’t give her a reason, so I followed Gwen.
Lupa led us through the living room, which was all marble, with tiles shaped like interlocked lightning bolts and a temple-shaped fireplace. Wooden chairs here and there, some floating slightly off the ground, and into a room. It was the room I’d looked into yesterday. A rope ladder led up to a kind of floating patio, and if you’d climb higher you had access to the roof.
Lupa took a picture from the wall. Dakota, Reyna, Caleb, Bobby, Gwen, Hazel and the unknown boy all standing in front of the Golden gate bridge, their arms around each others shoulders, grinning and squinting at the sun.
-Is the blond guy Jason? I asked. Lupa nodded.
-He was a consul here. Praetor, or chief, of the first legion. Son of Jupiter, the only one. He went missing, 6 days before the Winter Solstice, when the gods have their meeting. Nobody knows what happened to him, we have been searching since, but there is no sign. Lupa said.
-Wait, why is he the only one? Zeus had a whole bunch of kids.
-Zeus doesn’t exist anymore Add. Dakota said.
-But still, why?
-Do you know who the elder gods are, boy?
-Yeah. Jupiter, Pluto and Poseidon, right?
-Neptune, but yes. And Mars is sometimes considered an elder god. The 3 elder gods do not have many children. There are only 2 in the army. Jason was one. A child of Jupiter.
-He still is one, he’s still alive. Dakota said fiercely. Lupa held up her hand, either in halt, in excuse, or both.
-Caleb Gelus is the other one. There`s a prophecy, that will happen when 3 elder god children will be assembled in this camp.
Dakota recited something in Latin. Thankfully she said it again in English.
-7 half-bloods shall answer the call
To storm or to fire the world must fall
An oath to keep with a final breath
And foes bear arms to the doors of dead
-That is the next prophecy that will threaten the world, and I fear Add, that you and Jason are two of the seven.
-But… if the first prophecy hasn’t happened…
-Add what first prophecy?
-You know, the great prophecy, happened sometime around World War II?
-Add, that doesn’t exist… Dakota said, eyeing me weird.
-What do you know about the elder god prophecy? She cut.
-I just know… I said.
-What elder god prophecy?
-A child of the 3 elder gods
Shall reach sixteen against all odds
And watch the world in endless sleep
The hero’s soul cursed blade shall reap
A final choice shall end his days
Olympus to preserve or raze
-You know your prophecies in English? Dakota asked. And what is the elder god prophecy anyways?
-A prophecy. During World War II. I said.
-What? Why do we not know about it? This seems something to mention even on a need-to-know bases! Dakota asked.
-Nobody but the included do. Ask Jason or Caleb, they’ll tell you. It’s plagued the world for decades, until it was revealed it would never happen.
-Excuse me? I asked.
-It will never happen.
-But it has happened! It’s why the second one’s going to!
-Add, what do you mean it has happened? This is the only demigod training facility in the world, we`d know if it had. We might not have known the prophecy, but if it… Wait, are you talking about the war last summer?
-The… I don’t know Dakota, I just know it has. It has to happen before the second can. I said.
-Well the two will mirror each other maybe. Lupa said, not convinced.
-For you guys, maybe that one will start the second.
-For us? Add, when a prophecy happens it concerns the whole world.
-But it’s happened for the whole world; you guys missed out on it! I said.
-Enough talk of prophecies. I don’t know what impression you are under but the elder god prophecy was the result of the misinterpretation of the oracle. Nor Caleb now Jason will ever be subject of that prophecy, as well as any other of my soldiers. Lupa said fiercely. I was scared she’d go wolf and destroy both of us if we kept arguing. As much as I knew I was right, not knowing why, I figured that would be a dumb way to die.
-How did he go missing? I asked.
-Jason? Nobody, not even the gods, know. Lupa said.
-Not that they’d tell us. Dakota muttered. Lupa shot her a deadly look.
-He was in the forest with Bobby and I, we were setting traps. We came back; Jason looked troubled when he left. Bobby walked me back to my place, we talked about the game out there for a while and then he left. The next day, he was gone. His chariot was there, so was his armour, and we have no idea. No sign of a struggle. It’s like he just left. Dakota said.
-Have you looked outside the city?
-Of course! We’ve had a quest party out travelling the country, Reyna, Bobby, Gwen, Hazel and I’ve been going out and looking, we’ve checked everywhere in this city and Frisco. He’s not in California.
-May I go look in the forest? I asked. Lupa raised an eyebrow.
-Of course, if Dakota comes with you. Do not go too deep, and be back before the moon is as its full height. The she-wolf instructed.
-Yes ma’am. I said.


-This is where our traps were set. Dakota said. We were standing in a small clearing, the skies open, moonlight touching down on us.
I looked around. Nothing much. And then something in the bush moved. I wasn’t conscious of drawing it, but my sword was in my hands.
-That wasn’t a deer. Dakota said. Her gladus was in her hand. Something galloped around us.
-Any monsters in here? I whispered.
-A few loners, yes. She whispered back. I heard hooves hitting the ground.
Hooves
I walked right towards the noise.
-Add! Dakota hissed. But I brushed away a branch and out of the woods jumped a horse, made entirely of cloud, electricity crackling across his mane. It neighed and reared up on his back hooves. I grabbed the reins and tried to steady the horse.
-Calm down girl, calm down, it’s okay; sword’s down, not going to hurt you… I soothed as she bucked. I pulled down. The mane calmed down.
-Oh my gods! Dakota exclaimed, pretty loudly.
-What? What? I asked, stroking the horse’s neck. Dakota’s face was pale in the moonlight, her face frozen in shock.
-She… She disappeared with him… That’s Tempest, that’s his horse!
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over a year ago irismess said…
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this story is soo good,, u are doing a great effort to keeping me dreaming about all this plot.. I dont know if that is good or not but still, I want to tank u..HECATE
over a year ago zips said…
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You are an amazing writer and i love your story let me know if you ever write a book because i will buy it. you inspired me to start writing again. thank you for sharing your gift.
over a year ago RickJackson98 said…
well done Hecate another master piece chapter
over a year ago bookeater said…
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wow i a just wowed i really like how he just remembered hid profey not that he was in it really nice job.
over a year ago partypony said…
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omg that wuz amazing, like ever. cant wait for the next one! luv the fight scene btw. now he has enemies. and one question: who's Caleb's god parent again? can anyone answer this?
over a year ago redhawks said…
O MY GOODS THAT WAS AWESOME!!!

Ohk people I know some people have already told you this but SHUT THE **** UP!! I mean seriously people stop freaking spamming. If you wanna spam and talk about something complely un related to this forum which btw is about HEACTE'S CHAPTER'S OF HER OWN VERSION and not someone else's anyway go to the club Random and make a forum for spamming. Just don't do it here. If you love her chapters so much then stop spamming so we can all get it. I know I prob. sound rude but IDC please people stop spamming so I don't have to go on another screaming thing again. Oh and telling us your not going to spam IS SPAMMING SO STOP DOING THAT!!
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over a year ago RickJackson98 said…
no one has spammed recently that I can see anyway but still yes I really love your chapters Hecate they're brilliant and so called Add has and enemy things just keep getting more and inteeresting
over a year ago Idunn said…
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Love it!
over a year ago Lightning98 said…
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Holy PLUTO hecate that was sooo good!!!!! oh my....... I just cant get over it!!!! He remembers the one and only prophocy and he remembers how to sword fight and he could talk to hourses and *eeepppp*
I just cant hold it in any more
OMG's!!! I hope you could write more!!!
Hecate you are the most amazing author on the face of the earth, keep writing becaue i am sure that you inspire everyone else on this site to keep trying
Love always Lightning98

P.S. My mom thinks I am going crazy again ;)
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over a year ago bookeater said…
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why does your mom think your'e crazy???? rofl...
over a year ago TheHero_AC said…
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Another one soon please I cant wait much longer
over a year ago bookeater said…
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me neither... *ammpphhf* i just died of boredness
over a year ago bookeater said…
cool
by the way they on fanfiction.com they posted another chapter of son of neptune chapter 21 to be exact and its by crazyreader2196 so i think you guys and girls should check it out but this one by hecate is so much better!!!!!!! lOVE YOUR WRITING <3 it is snowing at my house and i am so happy
over a year ago barogr said…
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Hecate, you are really talented!!!
(I've been reeading your version of "The Son of Neptune" for one and a half weeks now but I didn't have an account here so I didn't write a comment, but your story got so good that I thought that I owed you a thanks! :))
Since you don't want simple comments that are almost like spaming, I'm gonna try to give an idea;
I got bored and started to read The Lightning Theif again, and I realised that Kheiron was Percy's "Latin" teacher, so they probably do teach Latin in Camp Half Blood (of course with the ancient greek alphabet, awkward idea), Percy should (probably) understand half of what they are talking in CCS.
over a year ago barogr said…
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Hey, me again... Sorry for bothering you guys with my stupid ideas but I am not brave enough to write my own story so I just am giving the ideas to someone who is brave and more fit for the job, not that you need to use them, even I think they are kinda silly...
What ever, here are some new ideas;
-Since every olympian god and godess had their own children or heros who works under their comand as major characters except for Apollo and Hestia(who isn't fully Olympian) I think that we should have a strong archer, a girl in my opion would be better, to be able to cause conflict with Artemis but I've got no problem with boys (even though there are more than enough boys in R.Riordan's story you've got many girls, easier to relate with your own gender I guess) This character could even have a magical ability about light (I mean his/her father will be the sun after all) and a tragic history and talent with music... Just a thought
-I've really missed Black Jack and we even get to see Jason's horse Tempest and his father isn't the god who created horses.
(I hope you don't see this as spam, but waiting makes my imagination run wild, especially with vivid stories like yours. If you think this is spam, just tell me and I will delete it-yes I am paranoyed, or not?-)
over a year ago HecateA said…
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OKAY, breaking my own rule here, but I want to tell you barogr before anybody else does that your message does not fit as spam in my opinion, because I take name requests (seriously people, help me out, I always like my characters having the perfect name and sometimes my brain got kaput) and everything. I think you're cidekick, because Hestia is a goddess I'm planning to use, in the meantime, head over to my other fanfic. Read the Lost Hero written by me, then the sequel Jewels and a daughter of Apollo is indeed coming your way. She's one of the most complicated characters of that series, perhaps rivalering with Lee.

And welcome to the spot! I double as fanfic writter and welcoming commity, here is your WELCOME muffin basket! *hands muffin basket* (just take it)
over a year ago emiehs96 said…
D: I never got a muffin basket.…
over a year ago barogr said…
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Thanks...
over a year ago barogr said…
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emiehs96 I think I can share mine with you :)
over a year ago yolmo_boi said…
hecateA absolutely love ur work !
I just didnt understand the part where percy finds tempest cuzz wen i read lost hero it didnt seem like jason knew tempest from before..
just wondering..
over a year ago bcquinn109 said…
HectateA u f fricking amazing I feel like I am reading rick riordan rite now its the same style and everything
over a year ago redhawks said…
Yolmo_boi, Jason lost his memory so how could he seem like he knew Tempest.

People please stop spamming. Our great writer Hecate does not appriciate it and if you do spam she may decide to just give the stories to people who did not spam. (I have consulted with her and I know she will do this.)I'm not saying all of you are just a few. But enough to make her stop writing and posting ON HERE.
over a year ago emiehs96 said…
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Man,I really hope she doesn't. These stories are amazing! Good job,HecateA!
over a year ago Persephone123 said…
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Hi i'm new here hello and i would just like to say this is B-R-I-L-L-I-A-N-T
over a year ago partyponies1099 said…
hi im new and would like to say the story is awesome . please update as soon as possible
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over a year ago redhawks said…
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Okay for all of the new people......Go check out Hecate's article on this site, So I noticed........ And then come back here. Also Hecate only posts chapters on Friday and she never replys without a chapter with the one exception above.
over a year ago zips said…
Hello hecateA i have read your story and i think it is amazing, and i have an idea. Your story is awesome ,but (don't hate me) i think you are missing something. in C.H.B. the greeks play capture the flag to improve their battling skills and because it was fun. Well in rome if they wanted fun they would have went to the coliseum where they would watched gladiators fight. i think you need a coliseum where opponents can battle monsters or other half-bloods. i hope you think about this, and i'll still love your story even if there is no coliseum.
your fan,
zips
over a year ago barogr said…
Well Zips has a point there especially because Hecate herself was talking/joking about the roman campers trowing percy right in to a collesium fight with some deathly moster, it would make sense and be fun to read, plus I don't think she's the type to hate people for their ideas, I know that one first hand. :) (I am not sure if it was some other person who joked about that, might be so please forgive me if it is)
over a year ago HecateA said…
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Hola!
So I got a message from irismess (sorry if I screwed your name) asking that for a Thanksgiving special I put up 2 chapters. Happy Thanksgiving to y'all Americans and others who are celebrating Thanksgiving. But the next few chapters are too important to be revealed in pairs of twoes, so I'm sorry irismess and everybuggy else. BUT maybe I'll post the next one earlier.

irismess & zips - Aww! It's great when people love what you do, but greater when they're inspired by it...
partypony - Pluto. Caleb is a daughter of Pluto, the name emans "dog" which is my referance to Cerberus
lightning - You grow used to your mum looking at you crooked. Trust me.
bookeater - Since you've posted 2 small messages in a row I'm pretty sure you didn't just die of bordeness. But please do not bring in the other fanfic. I might get around to reading it, but this forum is not the place to discuss it, like red has said in her message previously, this is for the fanfic I write and not what crazyreader does.

yolmoi_boi, bcquinn, persephone123, partyponies and any new people I might've missed, welcome! I double from writer, to welcoming commity to juggler (JK I can't juggle) so accept the welcoming muffin baskets!

barogr - I said lions!

6
The new kid
-Yo, Valdez! Somebody yelled.
-Busy! I yelled back as I tugged on a rope. The boat’d been perfectly stable until for some reason it’d tipped over. We’d all moved quick enough but Harley.
-Harder! I yelled. We tugged on the rope harder, 10 of us altogether, and even with the triple-pulley system we couldn’t move it back up.
-Holy Styx! Somebody yelled. I felt extra hands pulling on the rope and that seemed to do it, as it raised just enough for Jake to pull Harley out. The boat got lowered back down and everyone gathered up to see Harley as Jake started chest compressions. Soon he was breathing.
-He’s alive, but I think I broke a rib doing CPR and the rest of his injuries won’t do him any good. Jake said.
-Bring him to the infirmary. I said. Nyssa and Olivia were already back with a stretcher and really carefully lifted Harley on. I turned around to thank whoever had come. It was Piper and a girl, about 14, her complexion Mediterranean, with muscled arms and legs and eyes the color of dried clay, that were displayed, her jet black hair pulled completely out of her face in a high ponytail.
-Umm, hi. I said.
-Hey Valdez. This is Karen Mallock. Karen, this is Leo, the guy I was telling you about. She got here this morning and I’m in charge of her tour.
-Well hi, I’m Leo. I said. I stretched out my hand but it was dripping with oil and rope-burnt from having pulled the boat up.
-Umm, the thought’s there. I said.
-Ditto. She said.
-So, who’s your mom? Or dad.
-It’s my dad. And I don’t know. She said.
-It’ll come soon enough. And if not the geniuses here’ll figure it out.
-How?
-Well, what are you good at? I asked.
-Nothing.
-Okay… What do you like doing? Karen looked at us like we were scary.
-You won’t laugh will you?
-No, not at all. We both promised.
-I’m a stunt double.
-You’re a stunt double? In, like movies? Piper asked.
-Yeah. They pay me to fall and swing on ropes and junk.
-Why would we laugh at you, that’s really cool! I said. She shrugged.
-Not the kind of thing people expect from me.
-Kid, I’ve seen that be a daughter of Aphrodite, I’m not that surprised anything anymore. I said pointing Piper. Piper smacked me.
-Owe, owe, OWE! No but seriously Karen, it’s really cool. I do that all the time except I don’t get paid. I said. Karen chuckled.
-Not exactly the kind of thing people expect from the girl who throws punches that can kill baby cats.
-You’ve killed baby cats?!
-No! I like cats! Well, no, but I wouldn’t kill them!
-Okay, thank Zeus! You had me going for a moment.
-I’ve been in fake fights too. Spy kid, Suite life of Zach and Cody, I do stuff like that.
-That’s really cool. Piper said.
-Yeah, but unless there’s a god of stunt-doubling I doubt it can help.
-Not that I know of. We could go ask Jason, he knows demigods. Piper said.
-Great, tell me when you get news, I have to help my peeps put the boat back in place.
-No, Leo, common.
-Why? We’re overly busy here.
-Leo, when’s the last time you took a shower? You’re a freaking mess.
-Thank you, beauty queen. You know, we don’t all get magic hairdos from our immortals.
-That’s not what I mean.
-She’s right Leo. Look, there’s an hour ‘till lunch, why don’t you go and get some rest? You’ve been here for 2 days straight, go rest. You’ll be more productive after anyways, I can keep an eye here for a while. Jake said, walking up to us, rubbing oil off his hands with an oil-stained and singed piece of fabric. He eyed Karen and held out his hand.
-Jake Masson, nice to meet you.
-Karen Mallock. She said shaking it. He patted my shoulder and walked back to the boat, where they were trying to put the boat back by installing another pulley.
It was only a frame, but the width of even one bar was larger than Chiron’s wheelchair. It was longer than the forge, so we’d had to tear down a wall and install shelter tents outside. We’d rebuild it. And if it didn’t it meant the boat’d sunk and the world was doomed, so either way, really. It was also a smidge higher than the forge. We were planning to expand the ceiling too, but then we woke up and the forge had grown taller by some not-god-related-at-all piece of magic. We’d thrown in extra BBQ for Hephaestus anyways.
The bunker would’ve been the perfect place to build it, it was big enough. But then there was the problem of bringing the boat out. Besides, more important things were going on in there.
-Leo don’t make me use a bunch of words to confuse you and just come on. Piper said.
-Whatever beauty queen. Common Karen, let’s go find Jason.
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-The forum’s a too direct place to dock, I said crossing it out on the whiteboard. The hills are unoccupied; they have no fixed weaponry on them if they decide to attack, and it’s far from the senate, which is where any enemy would strike. I recapped the marker. The map wasn’t much. I hadn’t named the buildings and I’d flipped the property so North pointed South and East pointed West. The concept stayed the same, at least.
-Question, we’re docking in broad daylight, right? Annabeth asked.
-Yes. No enemy would do it, it’s too stupid, they’ll know we’re on truce for sure, add the flag and we’ll be fine. I said. Annabeth nodded. She bit her lip.
-Is there enough room in the hills?
-More than enough, we’ll be able to land just fine. I assured her.
-Do you remember where it is at least? She asked.
-Umm… Kind-of.
-What do you mean, kind-of?
-Well, the camp was settled in a titan-prone area. There are loads of security measures taken, I know that much. For example there is only one way in the camp, and that’s from the air to let the Pegasus in.
-Then we have no problem. Somebody said. It was Leo, coming in with Piper and a new girl.
-Hi. He added.
-Umm, hi. I told them both, trying to think of the nicest way to tell them to go away.
-Jason we sort-of need your help is you can spare a minute.
-I have to go. I’ll talk to you tomorrow, key? Annabeth said closing her notebook.
-Sure. Annabeth nodded at Piper, Leo and the new girl, wished us a merry Christmas and left the bunker.
-Hi, I’m Jason. I told the new girl.
-Karen Mallock. She said.
-She got here today and she’s undetermined. Think you could help us out? She’s a stunt double in a lot of movies.
-God of theatre?
-I can act about as well as a potato with a face. Karen said.
-Okay. Can you elaborate on yourself?
-I’m kind of the tough kid at school. The strong buff kid who doesn’t talk to anybody.
-Well apart from Valdez they’re all buff in Hephaestus. Leo hit me in the arm.
-I’m not that bad!
-Sure Valdez. Can you work with tools? Piper asked Karen.
-I can’t change a light bulb without breaking it.
-Dang, no. Leo said. A memory was bugging me.
-You’re like Beth Howlers. I said.
-Beth what-lers? Leo asked.
-Howlers. Beth… Kid in Caleb’s legion. Beth, Beth, oh common, who was her mom?
-Umm, me it’s my dad.
-Strenua! Her mom was Strenua. Goddess of strength.
-My mom’s mortal. Karen said.
-I know, but Strenua’s one of the only immortals to have, to be, the equivalent of an immortal the opposite gender.
-So who’s her equivalent?
-Beats me, that’s all the Greek trivia you’ll get out of me. I shrugged.
-That’s convenient. Leo mumbled.
-Lets test your knowledge of the opposite mythology, see how that goes.
-Umm… Vulcan and Jupiter and salve? Okay, I’m sorry I insulted your Greek mythological knowledge.
-We can just go ask Annabeth or Malcolm or whoever. Piper said.
-You think my dad’s the god of strength?
-Karen, Beth Howlers is known to break fragile objects just by holding them without paying attention to her grip. She’s broken 3 of my fingers on various occasions, completely by accident. If you’re as strong as you say, yeah, your dad’s god of strength. Doesn’t stunt doubling require strength?
-Well, yeah, you have to be able to climb and jump and be tough in case things go wrong.
-Hey, that could really be it. Piper said.
-Who’s the god of strength beauty queen? Leo asked.
-I don’t know.
-All the research from your dad’s movie all disappeared now that you need it. Leo said.
-Your dad’s in movies? Karen asked.
-Yeah, Tristan McLean.
-As in “The King of Sparta”? Karen asked. Piper nodded and having that “Okay, how many posters does she have in her room” look.
-That was fun! She exclaimed.
-You were in King of Sparta?
-Yeah, stunt double for the little girl. Clio, her name was. God, the posters were horrible for that!
-Ugg, yes! We laughed so hard at that one…
-So did my mom and me. They had to take the Clio pictures with me because the actress was too stuck up to do it or something, and I look exactly like her with a little make-up on.
-Those weren’t nearly as bad. Piper smiled. She seemed relieved Karen wasn’t an “OMG TRISTAN MCLEAN!!!1!!!” fan girl. She nearly slapped one of them the other day. On the contrary, Karen seemed cool with it. I guess when you worked in movies you couldn’t afford to be a fan girl.
-Want to bet? Did you see them?
-Yes I did. You’re not that bad.
-I look like an Ancient Greek supermodel! I’m pretty sure the chitons didn’t end here. She said pointing mid-thigh.
-No, it goes to your ankles, trust me, been there, not going there again.
-Thank gods. I found myself muttering. Piper looked at me and blushed, and I think so did I thinking “oops, outside voice”.
-Let’s go, we shouldn’t stay here too long, this place kind of gives me the creeps. Jason says. Like every other building devoted to my father in the history of man, it was uselessly big and empty and cold. It didn’t have much color to it. A war bunker. There was a whiteboard and a desk in one corner but the most place was a training area, dummies with 7-inches of dust on them, some had their heads unattached and on the ground. Then I saw a girl in the corner. She was wearing bronze armour. Her helmet was under one arm, the other dangling at her side, her hand grasped around the hilt of a sword. Her hair was curly and brown, blue almond-shaped eyes sparkled when she shook the hair out of them.
I opened my mouth to ask who the heck she was but she disappeared.
-Jason, are you okay?
-Umm, yes. I think I’ve stayed down here too long. Common Karen, let’s go find someone who knows Greek mythology.


We never got to finding someone who knew about myths, because Sherman DeCharge found us.
This guy is buff. He wore a sleeveless shirt to show off his muscles, which could’ve been transplants from Chuck Norris. His eyes were brown and mean, like Clarisse’s. His hair was platinum blond and stood up like he stuck his fingers in electrical sockets.
-Yo, pep squeaks. He called. We turned. He was walking towards us with his brothers Mark and Dale.
-What do you want? I snapped.
-Ooh, chick’s got an attitude.
-Yes, yes I do. Go away. But Sherman didn’t. Perhaps the idea of a fight was stronger than charm speak, perhaps he didn’t have the brain cells to comprehend what I was saying.
-You found a new kid. Have you welcomed her yet?
-Yes we have thank you, we somehow managed without your eternal wisdom. Please go back to beating small children to pulp now. Leo said. He pushed Leo to the ground.
-You giving me any...?
-Woe, woe, woe, no need to fight here. Jason said, putting himself between Leo and Sherman. Sherman turned away.
-Who’s the new kid?
-Karen Mallock. Karen this is Sherman, son of Mar-Ares. Jason caught himself.
-Unclaimed are yah, pep squeak?
-I don’t appreciate being called pep-squeak. Karen said.
-You don’t talk back to me kid, and I don’t care how new you are, I don’t take nothin’ from no one. He said showing her his fist.
-I just did freak face.
Sherman raised his fist to throw a punch but before we could do anything, Karen grabbed his fist and threw one back. She hit Sherman in the stomach and he stumbled backwards.
-Oh you did not just throw a punch at me. Sherman said, his eyes calling for blood.
-Oh I did just throw a punch at you, freak face.
-You want to fight?
-Bring it on!
-Karen, don’t… I said desperately, but it was too late.
I watched; dumbfound as Karen the 14-year-old fist-fought Sherman the 17 year old tank.
And she wasn’t doing so bad.
She was quick and her punches were strong. When she’d get punched she seemed practically untouched. Jason, Leo, Dale, Mark and I were just staring at the fight in disbelief.
Clarisse grabbed Sherman from behind, holding him back from charging at Karen.
-Stop it, stop it! What good’s a fight if it’s that unadvataged man and- Sherman, I said stop it! Karen punched Sherman in the nose before I grabbed her arm and dragged her back.
-Don’t start anything with me, DeCharge! She yelled. I steered her away. She was panting heavily.
-What the Hades was that Karen? Leo asked.
-I’m sorry, I shouldn’t have started anything but he threw me a punch and...
-Quit yapping Karen that was amazing! Leo said.
-It… it was?
-Heck yes! You’re so strong! Jason, I think you’re right. Honestly, Karen that was amazing! Karen blushed.
-I don’t know. I’ve just been in a lot of fake fistfights and those aren’t that different from the real thing. She shrugged. Then a holographic symbol appeared over her head. A club.
-There it is. I said, feeling myself grin. Karen looked up.
-It’s a club. She said.
-Yes. It’s a message from your dad, claiming you as his daughter. Common, we have to tell Chiron. I said.
The big house was decorated for Christmas, with tinsel hanging on the porch railing.
-Wait a minute. Jason said.
He ran up Half-Blood hill and took red objects off the branches of Thalia’s pine tree, Christmas ornament. He threw them as far away as he could, which was pretty far, one by one, before running back down.
-Sorry, the Stolls have a sense of humour I don’t understand. He said.
-Well, while it’s there… Leo said.
-Dude, that was my sister.
-Your sister’s a tree?
-Was a tree. Maybe I should’ve let you throw them do, you seem to have the better arm. He said. She blushed as we climbed the steps to the door. We knocked.
-Its open. Somebody yelled. We let ourselves in. Chiron was kneeling next to Seyamour the leopard, who seemed to have fallen off the wall, stroking the leopard’s head and pouring liquid in its maw.
-Jason, Leo, Piper and Karen, how can I help you? He asked not even looking up.
-Karen got claimed. He looked up.
-By whom?
-We don’t know. Floating club. She was fist-fighting with Sherman DeCharge too, she was really good. I said. Chiron frowned.
-A club you say? How uncommon, and very surprising…
-Why?
-Because the club is an attribute of Kratos, god of strength.
-So that’s Strenua’s equivalent! Jason said.
-Yes, Kratos or Crotus. Brother of Nike, Bia and Zelos. He is a very little known god, and there are barely any myths about him out there. You only know him if you see him, but he rarely leaves Olympus. He and his brother and sisters are the enforcers of Zeus. Chiron said.
-Hey, after what I saw what she can do, I can understand why Zeus picked that guy! Leo said. Karen blushed even more.
-Karen, you’ll have to stay in cabin 18, with Nike’s children. Children of Kratos are so rare, we didn’t think any would show up straight away, the cabin was stalled until this winter, and now Hephaestus campers are a little busy.
-Oh, heck yes. Speaking of which, can I go back?
-No. Piper said.
-Yes.
-No.
-Aw!
-What? Jason asked.
-I practically had to drag Valdez from the forge. I informed Jason.
-Yeah, I was wondering what he was doing in the sunlight. I figured he’d have mutated into a creature of the dark by now.
-Well, now that we’re done with the stand-up comedy…
-Shut up Valdez. Common Karen, I’ll come help you move your stuff. I said. Karen nodded and we both left.
-Jason keep Zuko busy. I said over my shoulder.

-Chiron what’s wrong? I asked.
-What do you mean, Jason?
-You looked at Karen when we told you her father was Kratos strange. Why?
-Children of Kratos are just rare.
-So are children of Hecate, you don’t look at Lou Ellen like that. Leo said. Chiron sighed like we were impossible. Of course we were.
-Okay, it’s a prophecy.
-Of course it is. Leo rolled his eyes.
-A child of Kratos is meant to grow herself to the power of big 3. We don’t know what happens after that, sometimes uncompleted prophecies happen like that.
-Oracle farts. You know, like brain fart? Leo said.
-No.
-You probably haven’t gotten to remembering them yet. Leo muttered.
-That’s low.
-Sorry.
-It might be nothing. Most of the time those things don’t even happen, but still, one must wonder… Chiron sighed.
-Strange things have been happening. He said, looking at me. I knew why. I wasn’t one of his campers. I wasn’t a camper, I was a soldier. I didn’t belong here, and if the camp and the city really did jump at each other’s throats… Partially it’d be my fault.
Jason, has Lupa communicated with you since the solstice?
-No. Have you communicated with Percy?
-No, I am not a god. I cannot do such prodigies. But something tells me Percy will not be alone any more then you. Chiron said.
-What makes you think that? Chiron’s eyes twinkled.
-He’s Percy Jackson. Nobody will ever leave him alone.
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over a year ago RickJackson98 said…
wow that was so good especially the fact yyou turned things back from The City to Camp Half-Blood that prophecy sounds queit interesting
over a year ago redhawks said…
Hecate my god you have done it again!!!!! I...o I have no idea what to say!!! It was just so good!!! I love your writing!!!!

Happy Thanksgiving to Americans!!!! Like me!!!

Thanks, for putting up some chapters for us Americans.


I love how you made it go back to Jason,Leo,and Piper. Honestly I kinda like their POV better.
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Ah, what the heck guys, happy Thanksgiving

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Magic creek
-I still don’t understand how he tamed Tempest. Brent, son of Mars, said.
The praetors were all gathered in the meeting tent, all in armour, sitting at a round table. I stood behind Lupa, who had turned into the human form she hated so.
-Yeah Add, how’d you pull that one off? Gwen asked.
-I don’t know. Latin whispering went around the table. I managed to catch one word, which I translated to either “salmon” or “fake”.
-Maybe it has something to do with your immortal parent. Hilary, the only child of Venus in power, said.
-There is no god of horses. The daughter of Iris, said.
-Look, who is this guy? He comes here, “doesn’t know his name”-Jace made air quotes with his fingers- and we just accept him? Give him a place in Mercury’s house, don’t even question him? What’s this camp whatnot anyways? How do we know he isn’t a spy? We don’t, that’s what! Why are we letting him in the city?
-It’s called hospitality, stupid. Reyna snapped from the other side of the table.
-He appeared when Jason disappeared, what if he’s in the scheme to kidnap Jason?
By everybody’s faces, I saw Jace’d touched a touchy subject. I got some weird glares and people spoke in Latin. Then I wondered if Jace was right. For all I knew, Camp Half-Blood was a place of evil and I’d just gotten shipped here to contribute to it.
-I don’t know where I’m from or why I’m here. I wouldn’t do anything to purposely hurt this city, especially after the hospitality you showed. I said, which sounded like a pathetic defence. I looked Jace in the eyes. He sunk back in his seat.
-So what where you saying Caro?
-No god of horses.
-Yeah, but gods get associated with horses all the time. Like when they got created out of sea foam.
-What?
-Well, that’s what happens isn’t it?
-Add, that myth’s Greek. Neptune created horses but not out of sea foam. A child of Minerva, Paris, said.
-But…
-Never mind, Add, we get the point. Bobby said.
-You keep using the old names, what’s that about? Somebody else asked.
-Camp Half-Blood. Hilary said.
-What?
-None of us have ever heard of the place, Hilary. Does it even really exist?
-Well it has to. That’s were Add comes from. Maybe they use the old names so the gods aren’t offended or whatever.
-We don’t know what they are and why they exist. What if it’s an enemy army?
-Stop it, Brent; you’re still paranoid from last summer. Caro said.
-Lupa, what is camp Half-Blood? Dakota asked before I could question last summer. Lupa got up.
-Soldiers, I fear I know what is happening but I am sworn from my superiors to secrecy. It is not of my nature to help you in your quests. You need to walk your walks. I may have been more of a staff lately, but now you need to walk alone. She turned to Dakota.
-I know you are the only consul now, but I need to ask you to care for the city on your own.
-What? But… Lupa? Dakota said, the blood draining from her face.
-My fellow gods are on Olympus. I ignored Jupiter when he called me back, but my Lord will not hold for ever. I shall go on Olympus, try to do what I can to talk sense into them all. I trust you all. She said. Every one of you to take care of the city. Train as you do now, legion training is more important than ever, now. She turned to Dakota and put a hand on her shoulder. And she didn’t looked that threatening, like Dakota was softening her up.
-With Jason gone I know this is extraordinary pressure on you. Lupa said. Dakota looked pale.
-Lead as I would lead. Lupa said. And then she was gone. A shocked silence took her place. Then in the distance wolves started howling from the forest. There was a stunned silent and a few seconds after the wolves silences, Dakota got over her shock and got up.
-We need to find out what camp Half-Blood is. She said.
-Agreed. Bobby said.
-So we need to find it. Gwen said. They turned to me.
-I don’t know where it is. I shook my head.
-We know, but anything else you can tell us about it? Reyna asked.
-No. I’m sorry. I said.
-Well until he figures something out, we have no purpose here. Jace said.
The meeting dissipated. Gwen came to find me.
-I want to go check on Tempest, but she’d kill me if I went alone. Do you want to come?
-Sure.
We walked out of the tent. The other consuls left back to their houses.
-What’s your legion again? I asked her.
-4. Hazel’s my second, like Bobby is for Jason. They were both offered to be praetors but… Bobby and Jason are a team since Bobby joined the army, he didn’t want to separate and get paired up with someone else. And Hazel, well… She’s Hazel. She’s not ready to grow up and be a consul yet. Gwen said.
-Wait, they did tell you about Jason? She asked after a pause.
-Yes. I nodded.
-Good.
-Umm, were Reyna and him-
-Yes. Since September. It didn’t show really, but if you paid attention and saw how they looked at each other… I’m a thief; I look around my surrounding before even taking a step in. I practically smell booby traps, I get gut feelings about people, which might be why I noticed, but Reyna hasn’t been herself since he disappeared. If she was you’d be dead by now. I think the fact she hasn’t either killed or injured you yet is why everyone else is letting you be. They all think you’re a spy, a fake, but they won’t face you or attack because of the people you’re with. I answered your question, is Annabeth your girlfriend?
-… Yes. But I can’t remember her parents, where she lives, what she likes, when we met. I just know her, her face and… She used to call me Seaweed brain.
-Seaweed brain? Did you ever eat Seaweed, because when we’re ticked with Jason we call him Stapler-face. It’s an old joke, but if you ever ate seaweed in a non-sushi form, it would be a similar concept for the nickname.
-Umm… I don’t think I ever ate seaweed, but I can’t remember my name so really… Gwen laughed and held the door of the stable for me.
Each stable held 20 horses. The camp had 70 horses, and 70 Pegasi –winged horses- so there were 7 stables. Each horse’s stall had a tag with the horse’s name, its legion, owner and breed on the door, sometimes honours and signs or stickers the owner would stick on. I paused in front of one. A Pegasus with black spots, nearly covering her entire fur.
Gamble
Legion 15, Lily Hallow
Pegasi[/u]
-Tempest’s in the back. Gwen said.
She was standing still in her stall, and I could swear she was waiting for me.
-Hey Tempest. I said, holding my hand out. She accepted for me to pat her head. She was solid where I put my hand which was odd, but if Jason did ride her, I guess she did.
I read the sign as Gwen petted her.
[i]Tempest
Legion 1, Jason Grace
Storm spirit

DO NOT HANDDLE WITHOUT OWNER
Besides was one of those “Danger high voltage” signs, that Jason had probably hung up.
-Umm, Gwen? Aren’t storm spirits monsters?
-Hmm? Oh yeah, but she’s tamed. We found her in the woods one day, like, 8 years ago. They were about to bring her down but Jason convinced Lupa to give him a chance to tame her. She’ll still most certainly kill any of us if we upset her and Jason’s not there, but what a horse… You should see her in battle. As much destructive power as Peanut or any other elephant!
-Elephant?
-Oh yeah, we keep elephants here. Part of the cavalry. Same concept as a tank. Hazel has one, calls it Peanut. She started training with Peanut practically the day she got here. Gwen looked back at Tempest. Electricity crackled down her mane.
-You miss Jason don’t you?
-Yes. Jason’s a great soldier, an even better guy and a better than-that friend. Just wish we knew where he was… She said stroking the horse, as if it had all the answers.
But I do, Lord.
I jumped back.
-Add, are you..?
-She can talk.
-She can’t talk.
I can talk.
-She can talk!
-Add, horses don’t talk, doesn’t matter if you’re half-god.
Half of what god, that’s the question. Tempest said.
-You mean, you know who my parent is?
-Add, the horse doesn’t…
-Yes she does, let me listen.
He’s the father of my ancestors too. You can talk to other horses too. Think hard, think of him. Black coat, winged.
I had no idea who she was talking about.
Talks a lot. She offered.
-Oh my gods, Blackjack!
-Blackjack’s not a god.
-No, not a god, my horse, my Pegasus. I said. How do you know?
I met him. He was searching the country for you, as I was searching for my master. His rider stopped to let him graze. He found me in the forest. We talked. He told me his owner was a hero like no other. The only of his kind, presently. He’d accomplished great deeds, he was brave with no limits, a leader in war and he was generous in sugar cubes.
-Yeah, that’s Blackjack. I said, remembering him.
He asked me about my owner. You and my master are much alike. Both of you are leaders. Both of you answered to the same call
-Add?
-What call? I asked Tempest.
A voice in your head. It told you to go to the doors of Olympus. To say to nobody where you were going, but to go to the doors of Olympus. It was the first sign from the heavens in weeks. You didn’t trust the voice, Blackjack knew that much. You didn’t listen. Then a sweater voice asked. A voice you trusted more. You obeyed her rather than her sister. You told Blackjack where you were going, and took him to lead you. But you made the same mistake as my master, who rode me down the main road to Olympus: you both sent us back home, with instructions to come back in a few hours. We both came back, but neither of you were there. I went looking, knowing if my master wasn’t there I wouldn’t be accepted in the city, because I was a threat. I found him, on a mountain. He did not remember me, but he rode me in battle. Then Juno unleashed her rage and I had to run or be consumed by her spirit. When I came back, he wasn’t there. But then Dakota’s Pegasus, Katima, she told me an amnesiac, powerful hero was in the city. She could see his thoughts, and he could talk to us. I came back, hopping I could hide until I found you and explain.
-Add, what..?
-I know where Jason Grace is. I said, my voice low.
-What? Add, how do you..? And then an arrow head sprouted from under her arm, and then another in the chest.
-Gwen! I caught her and supported her.
-Gwen, stay awake, stay, oh gods… I was on the verge of hysteria, but that wouldn’t help Gwen in any way. I supported her out. Her eyes were abnormally wide and she looked pale and paralysed. Okay, how to treat arrow piercings? No clue.
How to treat bleeding? RED, rest and reassure, elevate, direct pressure, CPR course you’d get in like fifth grade. Reassure I could do, but as I dragged her outside, what was I supposed to say? “It’ll be okay, just ignore the arrows rammed through you”. As soon as we were outside I yelled:
-Help! Help, medic! Nobody came, and Gwen lost conscience. The arrows might be poisonous. I looked around. My eyes zeroed in on a creek. I brought Gwen down to the creek and lowered her in. She lay still, probably freezing water washing over her face before she took a huge breath, like someone that had stayed underwater too long.
Reyna and Bobby, who’d probably walked back to their houses together, ran towards us with what I assumed was a medic, since he ran and knelt beside Gwen and started putting weird pastes on Gwen’s injuries and pulling the arrows out. Reyna and Bobby stood behind him.
-We were in the stables and the arrows came out of nowhere, I… They both looked up and froze.
-Add, how did you know to bring her to the creek?
-I don’t know, gut-feeling, why? Is it magic? I asked figuring a magic creek wouldn’t have been the weirdest thing I’d seen this week.
-No. It’s just that children of Neptune can cure nearly anything with water.
I looked up and catched the last signs of a holographic trident…
Ah, what the heck guys, happy Thanksgiving

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Magic creek
-I still don’t understand how he tame
over a year ago polux1002 said…
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i just joined this site and there is only 1 thing i can say about this....

............more! more! more!
over a year ago zips said…
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YOU ARE AWSOME!!!! i love your writings. HAPPY THANKSGIVING. i know that i am thankful for you and your imagination thanks for the extra chapter.
over a year ago polux1002 said…
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you should srsly become a writter and are u rick in disguise?
over a year ago polux1002 said…
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teem greek or teem roman... hmmmm
i need 2 know more aout the romans. if all romans r like jason and hazel and the other ppl i say.... teem romans!
over a year ago Lightning98 said…
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Ok this is for the first one... THANK YOU FOR INCLUDING BETH... sorry i love that name... that one was really goodI love the characters in it too!!!!
I will post a different post about the one with Percy
Love your writing... Lightning98

Sorry... I'm back so I just read it and wow that was really good
Emotional reck is what my are now calling me all because of you Hecate... would you want that nick name... no you would not... i do because they caught me when i was reading the artical... but its fine don't feel guilty because i know i am an emotional reck... espesially when i am reading your stuff
Keep writing because it is amazing!!!!!
Love (again) Lightning98
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over a year ago partypony said…
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OMG!!! SO AWESOME!!!!! THE BEST SO FAR!!!! the last part was sooo good. i cant wait for the next chapter. it so made me in suspense
over a year ago polux1002 said…
hmmm
why does the name tempest sound so familliar? was that the horse of some hero in greek mytholgy?
srry if it seems like im spamming:/ since i just joined im putting wat i think of each chapter somtimes.
over a year ago polux1002 said…
hmmm
hecateA who shot gwen with the airrows? and umm i loved how u switched from the city 2 camp half blood.did umm(i cant remeber her name)the daughter of kratos com from the city and if she did how did the camp half blood ppl find her?
over a year ago redhawks said…
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HOLY CRAP HECATE!!!!!! My gods that was so good!! I can't tell you how good that was, it just leaves me speachless. Errr I wanna tell you how good it was but it's so hard. I have no words that will grasp what I am feeling right now! That part where Percy was talking to Tempast.....Oh I was in some major suspense!! Then when Gwen got shot and he got claimed!!! I HAVE NO WORDS WHAT'S SO EVER TO EVEN BEGIN TO DESCCRIBE HOW GOOD THAT WAS!!!!!
over a year ago TheHero_AC said…
Loved it hope u write more soon!
over a year ago irismess said…
Indiscutible. That u are the best storyteller the earth has been created. U are the best. Happy turkey day everyone.
over a year ago Idunn said…
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Love it again!
over a year ago barogr said…
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Thank you for Black Jack and Percy talking to horses!!!
over a year ago barogr said…
hmmm
aphrodite123 who are you and how do you know all this stuff?
over a year ago barogr said…
I wasn't after your identity don't worry, but I just didn't understand the "Rick R.'s cousin" part (plus even though I'm sure people appriciate you writing these it's kinda out of subject and can be considered as spam, if I am not wrong the spamming can make Hecate stop writing and I really wouldn't want that :))
over a year ago polux1002 said…
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aphrodite123 does pan come back? he did not deserve 2 die and thks 4 the info and whats percy's sisters name i hav 2 know and is alana roman or greek and what do u mean by japenes mytholgy?
over a year ago TheHero_AC said…
Whats the website ?
over a year ago redhawks said…
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PLEASE PLEASE DO NOT POST ANY MORE INFORMATION!!!!! I DID NOT WANT THOSE SPOILERS!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE NO MORE!!!!

Oh and this is a fan fic forum. Please no more spam. Hecate will stop posting her amazing stories and we do not want that!!!
over a year ago zips said…
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another amazing chapter! people please dont spam if you want to talk about what aphrodite123 posted do it on her wall not here.
over a year ago HecateA said…
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Okay, Aphrodite123, I'm sorry but you stepped on my toes here. If what you say is true, then that's a major spoiler and I'm really not happy about it. I'm really upset because what you said might be true.

Also, its utterly spam. If you ever say something out of context on my forum again, I will report you. Please KEEP THOSE FOR YOURSELF I'm also very much against participating in leaking books and plots, some authors deicde to stop writting because of them (even if RR is too strong for that) please erase your comments, I'm asking from the heart because now I'm scared you've spoiled a big part of the book for me, and the people who read my story. Erase your comment, and I'm preying you aren't saying the truth.

If you dont during the weekend I'll erase the forum and post on a new one so nobody sees those. You will not get any respect if you dont do it, and believe me, not meening to be a big bad guy here or intimidate you, but I will do it.

Oh, by the way ->Or he'll fall for Alaya, daughter of Zeus
Nice try. He cant
fall in love with his
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over a year ago theyoungsamurai said…
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Hi i'm new here and by the way this story is great.
over a year ago percyjackson51 said…
Love your story it just keeps getting better and better
Can't wait for more

Aphrodite123 this is a big story that you are trying to pull off
Personally I don't know if you are telling the truth because Rick hasn't even written the books yet and you didn't tell us where you got the information.
over a year ago HecateA said…
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^He's planned everything do, and some people will believe it. I'm reading back and I sounded paranoid, but aphrodite123, please make it disapeer. Its spam and it gave me a scare for a few minutes (I'm so gullable its kind-of sad) She has no excuse not to, I've asked her on her wall, where there were already 2 comments
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over a year ago percyjackson51 said…
Sorry for the spam hecate
I found a website similar to what she was talking about and it just seems like theories and I still don't know about the Ricks cousin thing but I don't believe most of what she said
over a year ago goddessoflife said…
Those are theories.
over a year ago Me5 said…
I love the story! But that is not true, a matter of fact it is a complete lie, but nice try.
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over a year ago lilsparky14 said…
I dont realy belief anything aphrodite123 said. She couldnt have possibly found all of that out, here are my reasons.
1. Theres suppose to be 5 books and Rick hasnt written all 5 yet
2. Ricks cousin?
3.There all theories a and everything sounds like it would never happen. They wouldnt work with other books(they explain why for parts of it in the PJO books)
over a year ago lilsparky14 said…
And everyone tell aprhodte123 to NOT spam this forum, these fanfics are amazing and we dont want them to be gone.
over a year ago Alex13126 said…
laugh
Hey Hecate two words to describe this LOVE IT!!!!!!! I always daydream about the Percy Jackson story in school but with my own characters(Ellie same age as Perc and Alex age now age 13) both dauhgters of Demeter(real sisters not half sisters or step-sisters)in my daydreams Nico is dating Alex and well i started writing my own version of the Percy Jackson series (with Ellie as narrator) and so far my best friend loves it. Plz make more their so awesome! Just to show you how awesome they are heres a mirror knife like Pipers! (plz take the knife before i accidently stab myself or Alex stabs me by accident lol)
over a year ago Alex13126 said…
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Ow too late i stabbed myself! oh and aphrodte123 plz keep your spam to yourself i am very gullible too and well i dont really want to here it if want spoilers ill read Hecates story (AWESOME story by the way) and pretend its the real story.Owwwww i really stabbed myself hard! you still want the knife? *hands sorta bloody knife*
over a year ago RickJackson98 said…
ok guys listen first great story Hecate I love it but guys I'm sorry if this is spam and Hecate I hope you forgive me seening as I've knoen you for so long and you know I absolutly hate spam but guys please the amount of times I say this to people (gods I'd feel better if Amphitrite or RoHeHa were here to help me they always can see what I'm on about and support me but)you call me Rick Rick Riordan is known as R.R. ok its easier ever since I've been this site people have been calling me Rick and its confusing when someone says Rick because sometimes they're talking about me but other times they're talking about R.R. so could youmall please do it like that I would be very grateful
over a year ago Lightning98 said…
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^^^I agreeto all of that
Hecate amazing story brilliant as usual!!! Hope you coud write more
For those that are new here I wohld just like to point out that Hecate is the most amazing writer on the face of the earth!!!!! Nobody can dissagree with me
The other thing that I wouod like to point out is the 1 1/2 page of spam that people have put on... its crazy!!!!! sorry to say that it was a total waist because none of it was true!!!!!!Those pages could have been used for amazing writing by the one and only Hecate but no!!!!, people are making up lies or repeating lies that they found on what google!!!!!
I am sure that if spaming does not stop behind this point their will be huge consiquences!!!!!


TO HECATE
I hope you could keep writing and i am sorry about everything I (Probobly like you) am getting very angry. Love your work Hecate
Love Lightning98
over a year ago aphrodite123 said…
Hecate and everyone else, I am so sorry if I spamed t much.What can I say I have a big mouth!You have every right to yell at me.besides,If you want I'll delete my pages that I posted!!!!Sorry I did'nt delete yesterday,It was my birthday,plus to top it off,my mom got extreamly sick.I just keep going out of my mind on what I keep hearing!!Plus Ricks cousin keeps spaming TO MUCH!!!IT HAS TO END!!By the way,Hecate,you are truly gifted!I think you are BRILLIAINT!!!!!(TIP)I thought Lupa is suppposed to be mean!!!You know because she almost killed Jason?(That was not spaming!It was In The Lost Hero!)Thanks I WILL DELETE IT!!!!!!!!!
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over a year ago losthero5 said…
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just message her Aphrodite. keep this up and we wont have fan fics to read. start your own forum if you want to talk about something else.

P.S.

guys there is a good reason why i made the comments forum topic. BECAUSE THIS HAPPENS!!!
over a year ago aphrodite123 said…
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HECATE,I do not want t fight so please take my apoligy.I want you to please keep writing.My little sisters told me off, because they told me spaming's no good.This rule does'nt only go for me, it goes for others out their too.I think your writing is amazing,I love it.Your a genius,and we all know that,I already deleted my spaming(Well, actually my sisters did,but still.)Please do'nt stop writing,and no, my little sisters did'nt tell me to type this,this is coming from the bottom o my heart.If you need any backup on no spaming, you can count on me.I really do'nt want to be your enemy,just your friend.Thanks, and please write back. Sicerley, Aphrodite123 P.S My sisters read your chapters and they say you are fantastic!
over a year ago Festus1126 said…
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AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Can't wait for the next chapter! Really liked how there is a new pfophecy at CHB and wondered why Percy got claimed again?????????????? Still, the last chapters were amzing!
over a year ago obsessionsucks said…
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I've been reading the story since your first chapter but I finally decided to join haha. You are probably sick of hearing this, but you are REALLY good, and please don't stop writing. I am obsessed with this stuff haha and right now people like you are my only method of fighting it.
over a year ago kkaayyllaa788 said…
Same as obsession for me!!
Cant wait to see what happens, and what you end up doing with the story!(:
over a year ago TheHero_AC said…
Me too :)
over a year ago Calypso_ said…
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I'm truly and absolutely amazed. Thank you for writing Hecate. Thank you!
over a year ago bookeater said…
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Oh gods my eyes!!!!!!! i can't see!!!!!!! I am blinded by the pure amesomeness of you writing HecateA!!!!! "oh wheres that damn remote" *trips over chair* "F%&K ME"
over a year ago Annabeth2882 said…
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That was amazing!!!!!!!
over a year ago bookeater said…
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ya it was totally amazing it blew my eyes out of my head!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago bookeater said…
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wait how am i writing this?????
over a year ago barogr said…
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Guys how do you manage the wait, it has been only 3 days since she last wrote I am already about to loose my mind! Please Hecate this is torture couldn't you divide the chapters into two and publish one part every tuesday and Friday? (Just an idea, not forcing you to do anything)
over a year ago TheHero_AC said…
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Or right one everyday that would be awesome only if u can not forcing u just saying
over a year ago bookeater said…
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lol my eyes are fine now but i can wait since i just daydream my own version of the son of neptune will go i only dont write it cause it is like 700 pages long......
over a year ago bookeater said…
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so peole i just made a new club called "Percy Jackson's pegasus Blackjack" and i was wondering if could help me out of little.... oh and HecateA i have an idea that there should be a weird power thing with Leo and Percy cause percy is water and leo is fire maybe RR will like make a propehhy or something to go with it???
over a year ago Wisegirl123 said…
Hey HecateA! Love your writing, you might as well be Rick Riordan cause its soooo good. Keep on writing. And bookeater, i think it would be cool if there was a weird power collision between Leo and Percy ... kinda like what happened in The Titans Curse between Thalia and Percy. [P.S.Sorry if im spamming, i mean no harm ;)]
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over a year ago tridentbearer1 said…
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wuss up digitydogs! im a newbie and it would be just lovely if you were to accept me into your clubthingy! (that was me formaly asking you:dont expect me that kind all the time!)well HecateA i just wanted to say that i love your story and i have been reading your story from the very begining but i couldnt comment because i didnt have a account. to wisegirl and bookeater i totally agree with the power collision thing between percy and leo!but it would also be cool to have leo on fire and percy just walk up to him and shake his hand while it was still on fire! leo would totaly freak!
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over a year ago tridentbearer1 said…
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HecateA i just wanted to know which continent you live on so i can see what time line you have (im not one of weirdo cyber stalker people its just that i dont live in amercia so im usually ahead one day) P.S i just wanted to thank you for making Dakota a girl:ive read several other stories with the same tital but they always made dakota a boy!
over a year ago barogr said…
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Well I don't live in America as well and I also have the same problem and cultural differences like names so sorry for asking this but isn't Dacota a girl name? (I know that this is spaming so can somedody give me a quick response that will be the end of this irrelevent topic? Please?)
over a year ago tridentbearer1 said…
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I KNOW it totally frustrates me because i know its NOT a boy name P.S i added this on P.S.S. But remember when that volcano exploded on Percy? he survived that because his lifesource is water
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over a year ago Wisegirl123 said…
hmmm
Ya what's with people thinking that's a boy name. Oh, and, tridentbearer1, unless percy is in water he probably would get burned (sorry if im spamming)
over a year ago redhawks said…
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One, in America it is a name used for noth guys and girls.
Two, stop spamming everyone. If you have to say your sorry for spamming cause you are not sure then it is spam!
Three, it would be cool for that to happen
Four, love you story Hecate!