Chapter 1
The Eternal City

I felt cold, it was dark, and I was underwater I thought 'wait how can I be underwater for so long', then I saw something above the water. It look like some kind of dog thing I didn't know what to expect so I went up to the water. I saw a wolf, then the wolf spoke to me but didn't open her mouth.

She said "Who are you" I was about to respond normally, but I couldn't honestly remember.

I said to the wolf "I don't know, where am I"

"You're in the eternal city, but I don't see how you got in here. This city has a great defensive wall around it and guards all around" Then out of know where an arrow shot straight for my face, but I dodged it at the last second.

I said to the wolf "tell the guards to stop"

"No you prove your worth here" Then out of nowhere I heard a loud growling sound…

Chapter 2


The Anger cute Beast



I looked up to see what it was and it was a cat. At first I thought 'Wow, I am scared of that thing', but in the back of my mind I was thinking 'Don't underestimate it', so I got up and charged at the cute, small beast, when a girl on top of a tower shot an arrow at me. I felt it, but it felt like a pinch it didn't hurt and I didn't bleed. It was very confusing but I still continued my approach on the beast. Then the Cat turned into a Lion 10 feet tall, with razor sharp teeth, and looked at me like "Who's your daddy", but I let my instincts take over. From there I reached in my pocket and found a pen. I uncapped it like I did it a million times and started charging the beast. I amazingly dodged the first snip at me, and stabbed it right into the right ear. It cried with pain and anger, but that just had to motivate the beast even more. So I cut its right hind leg, and did the same to the other hind leg until she was completely down on the ground. Then I was about to kill the beast, but I heard another growl. It was weaker, but it had authority. I then saw the wolf again.



It came up to me and said "I'm Lupa. Welcome to The Eternal City of Half Bloods", then Lupa smiled at me. I was proud but had this weird feeling I didn't belong here.

Chapter 3
Annie? Anna? Whats her name

After i beat the cat Lupa ask me to walk with her and show me the city, i looked around and i saw the Colosseum not as big as the real one but still close and then i saw the leaning tower of pieza like the one in Vegas not the real one but then i thought how do i know what the Vegas one looks like and when did i go to Vegas then i was interrupted by my thoughts when Lupa said "this is the bunkers you will have to stay in Mercury's Bunker until you are claimed" "Claimed? whats that" "your god parent will show us that you are the son of he or she" "do you know anything about me Lupa" " I have a theory child but not a good one for anyone but i can't discuss it now, Reyna come down and give wait whats your name boy" " I think Parry but i don't know" " Well come introduce Parry to the other solders will you" "yes mama" Then Lupa looked at me and had a worry sum look on her face and said "be carefully Parry" and then she ran off then this girl looked at me judgmentally and said hi I'm Reyna Daughter of Venus you are" "you mean Aphrodite" "no I'm daughter of Venus, Aphrodite died when the Romans beat the crap out of the Greeks" "ooh kay I'm Parry son of a god" she smiled she had beautiful black hair and wore a necklace with the name Jason in it but i didn't focus on that i focused on her and how she smiled so sweetly at you that you just wanted to kiss her all day but i felt in the back of mind that it would be wrong to do so then Reyna broke the silence "okay well follow me ill introduce you to some people" "like Jason" she pulled out her sword and pushed me onto the ground and put the sword to my throat and she said "Where is he and don't play stupid i'm not messing around here i want him back Parry" "Hey i said the name Jason because your wearing a necklace with that name on it" she looked down and noticed the necklace she was wearing and she pulled her sword back and i got back up she looked away and it looked like she was crying she tried to hold back the tears but i could tell she had the water works coming so i let instincts take over and i hugged her and said "we will find him soon i promise i will do everything i can to help you Reyna" we stared up in the sky and she said "Jason is Boyfriend the only son of Jupiter he was the greatest solider Lupa's ever trained and he disappeared three days ago and know one knows where he is" she turned to face me and embraced me i looked at her face in my chest and i pictured another face a Astonishing looking girl brown hair Grey eyes knifes to her side and i had a name Annie no Anna no what the heck was it and then i heard some rumbling in the bushes behind us we both turned to see

Tell me what you think so far and i will write more soon

Chapter 4
The ones i call my Friends
(Reyna)

Me and Parry were hugging when i was crying like a little girl i felt so off so depressed ever since Jason was gone i was going crazy and then out of know where this new kid shows up, he's good looking and very sweet and doesn't know anything about himself and i just couldn't think straight anymore. then we heard some noise in the bushes behind us right next to the Mercury Bunker, Parry said "ill go check it out you stay here" at first i thought that is a bad idea to let the new kid take the lead in battle but something about him screamed i have killed more people and more monsters then you'll ever know so i let him go and, i nodded at him. he pulled out a pen and uncapped it and slowly walk up on the bushes then he just ran into the bushes and screamed something like "For the Sea" but i couldn't fully understand what he had said after he screamed that i heard swords clanging together i trusted his judgment to stay put but i had to go see if he was all right. i slowly walked up and saw he was attacking Gwen and, right before he was going to strike i Screamed. Parry looked at me like what's the matter and i said "that's my friend Gwen" "ooh my bad" he help hazel back up then said he's sorry. Gwen said "its not a big deal but, where did you learn to fight like that oh by the way I'm Hazel Daughter of Mercury and who are you exactly Parry." "I don't really know i know I'm from New York and my name sounds like parry but i feel its wrong when everyone calls me that and i know theirs this really beautiful girl back where i am from her name is Anna i think something like that but that's about it." "oh well that sucks".then i picked up on something he said "wait your from New York?" "yea i think so, yea i am" "but know one is from there know halfblood has ever come from there the place is usually a bloodbath for halfbloods."

Thanks ill write more tommorow comment as freely as wished

Chapter 5
Neptune,Poseidon whats the Difference
(Percy)

After what Reyna had told me i wanted to get some rest i haven't had that all day today its been fight after fight after fight and so on so it was great to get some rest. i jumped onto the bed Gwen gave me in Mercury's Bunker and fell right asleep. I dream a man was with me the background was blue,ocean blue,then sea green, a man stood with a Trident and Said "Percy" there was a long pause i just didn't know what to say so i stay silent. "Percy i don't have much time pay attention" "Father?" i don't know where that came from but in the back of my mind i knew he was my dad. "Son Pay Attention the Goddess Hera has done this to you ,you must tell the others when you wake up, Do you understand?" i didn't really understand but i felt like i did. Hera did this to me did what exactly "no what did she do" he looked at me silly then realized i was serious "Son she took your memories away that witch of a goddess" the Sky Rumbled "oh shut up brother" father said i was confused but ask my dad "but why, why did she take my memories, dad why and where am i from and who is my god parent and, who is Anna i can't get her out of my mind" he looked at me with concern and calmly said "Oh Gods Hera took everything, Annabeth is her name son and she is your girlfriend you love her dearly and she is searching for you as we speak. i am your God parent Poseidon god of seas and horse and earthquakes and your from New York city. Hera took your memories and Jason's because to great powers must join to defeat what is coming. you should me your strength when you defeated Kronos but now you must gain everyone's trust here son and wait for Jason and the others to come but be careful you are son of Poseidon not Neptune" I felt so confused that i wanted to exploded what is the difference between the two Neptune Poseidon whats the difference but i didn't ask because i had to ask one thing that i new would be more inportent. "where is Annabeth dad" he looked up to the sky waited for a minute and said to me "she's at Camp Half Blood she just arrived there she looked for you all day and she resting, Son i must go now be carefully" i thought about that an thought since when am i ever careful "okay dad thanks for everything" then the last word of my dream "Son i sent someone to find you when you wake up i love you Good Luck" i woke up to some kinda noise and new what my dad meant. My dad Sent me Blackjack.

Wow, that was really good. Yay, you have some puncutation in there. Now, I'm sorry I'm nit picking your grammer but be careful whith your tenses. Like past,present, or future. You are skipping around. Also, you still need to capitilize your I's.

haha thanks redhawks its cool i like that your getting me on grammer and the other cristism what do you mean about past present future what r u talking about and thanks i am trying on the puncuation

The tenses as in:
Past: was
Present: am
Future: will
Hope that cleared it up.
You welcome. I just want you to improve you writing skills. You got the ideas down, you just have to work on grammer and you got a great story.

REALLY NICELY DONE. That is all. I think what Redhawks is saying is that you need to keep onE tense, so if you start a chapter in past tense (was, and all things that end in ed) you shouln't go into present tense.

Yes, exactly. You switch a lot. If you need to switch make a new pragraph.(Omg, my spelling is so off today. I can't think.)

oh i c what you mean i didn't notice but your right lol :) thanks i will watch it and do better and thanks for the help from both of you

@Redhawks, I just checked, and I spelled 'one' wrong. Beat that.

Your welcome!!

Hahahah nice Unorignalname..... But, I feel like a hpyocrit(I wouldn't be able to spell that on a good day.), I;m tellin Aphrodite to have better spelling when I can't even spell.

Well, guys........I'm going to bed now.

Peace Redhawks

Chapter 6
Camp Half Blood?
(Reyna)

After that incident with Hazel and Parry i had to go to bed. It's been a emotional day, scratch that i thought it's been like this for the last 4 days. So i went into my Bunker and jumped into my bed and cried my self to sleep. I started to dream me and Jason on our first date there we were when we first met he pretend to be a kid in a normal middle school before i new i was a HalfBlood. He was there just to pick me up and bring me back to the city. Jason was so handsome so muscular he convinced me to skip school with him and go on a date to lunch and a movie and then a surprise he said. Then my great dream was cut off it went fuzzy and white like a bad t.v in the 50's. Then a image appeared it was a girl she was pretty ,blond hair ,Grey eyes ,and wore a orange t-shirt with Camp Halfblood ,and she was with someone,with my Jason. "hey Jason do you know where the city is?" the Blond girl said. "umm i think I'm not sure" "what do you mean your not sure" she said so arrogant i would have beat the crap out of her if i could of. "look i barley remember who i am so give me a break Annabeth i wanna go to the city to and get Percy". wait to get Percy who's Percy does he mean Parry whats going on here. "you don't want to see him as badly as me Jason" "maybe not but i have someone waiting for me back in the city too her name is Reyna and i think she's my Girlfriend but i feel terrible because i don't even have the memorys with her i just have her face and i know i have feelings for her thats it" he snapped at her, i felt so close to him even when were gone and he doesn't have his memory he Remembers me, Annabeth walk away crying when Jason said "look I'm sorry im just confused and i don't know where were going ,but i just feel like I'm doing something I'm going to regret.
Then a New Image appeared it was a Green background with Parry or Percy with some old dude that looked like him and the old dude was sad and said "Oh Gods Hera took everything, Annabeth is her name son and she is your girlfriend you love her dearly and she is searching for you as we speak. i am your God parent Poseidon god of seas and horse and earthquakes and your from New York city. Hera took your memories and Jason's because two great powers must join to defeat what is coming. you showed me your strength when you defeated Kronos but now you must gain everyone's trust here son and wait for Jason and the others to come but be careful you are son of Poseidon not Neptune". Wait What Poseidon not Neptune Camp Half Blood that means that he is greek not Roman but how can that be. then i heard a Pegasus cry ,and I bursted to life jumped out of my bed and saw through the window that Percy had a new Pet waiting for me outside my Bunker with a big smile on his face.

Good chapter! Cant wait to the next. Do you know when you are going to post next?

most likely tommorow but maybe tonight

Hey just so it's a little easier on us, can you change you title to like The Son of Neptune, Aphroditeskid21. the title is the same as Hecate's and we can't tell who's is who's.

sure

awesome!!!!!!!!

Good job, Aphrodite!

cool story!! but why did you name percy parry??

Thanks for doing that. Makes it easier.

He changed it cause Percy doesn't remember his name is Percy but he thinks it's something like Parry.

Wow I really like your story... Post soon

LAST! (on this page) Come on, post, post, post, I'll die from a , rare disease called of Blackjackfonia if you do not post soon.