Go right ahead

Yeah, I was gonna put that they landed close to the Door of Orpheus, since Percy was headed to the underworld, but I didn't have the time to add another little spot to put it

Good

Who's gonna do Annabeths POV? If anyone- if not that's fine! have to go now, sorry!!! :( I'm watching HP... Again... With my brother!:)

Nice now anyone please read this http://www.fanpop.com/spots/percy-jacksson­-an­d-t­he-­oly­m..­.nt­s

I just got on the computer again, my sister wanted 2 go on it. i am not trying to be stuck up, but if anyone wants me to do a certain chapter i can totally do it. just tell me who's point of view to write and what you want to happen in it. i know i'm not the best writer( i don't think i'm good at all!) but i have time to spare. BTW: what's goin' on in the story right now? i'm kinda' confused.

Percy is planing to propose to annabeth mean wile annabeth sends a another dream with annabeth grapes in a web with spiters biting her just when she was about to revile the location anthena poped in telling him that he need to tern back and go home choosing between his hart and the gods

Wait, what?

How about the dream from Annabeths POV? Idk, Or just skip ahead, whatever you want!

Yea bad speller so thank goodness for spell check (bad spellers of the the world unite

@AnnabethC - So they'll start at the dream part, right? Is that what you meant?

I think we're still doing Annabeth's point of view but if nobody's going to do it then we can skip it. Sorry I will have to take a while longer before I can finish the chapter. I think I'm just going to make it a short one instead of writing a ton this time.

They meaning the next person to post??? Well, I guess they could do it (the dream) from Annabeth's POV or just keep going...idk

@Maiden4ever- Do you wanna do the dream from her POV??? Or do ya wanna just skip it?

lol. okay. i will do annabeth's dream.

Annabeth pov:
my eyes widened.i was scared. - sorry gtg 2 dinner. i advise someone picks up from here 'cause i might not be able to go on until tomorrow after school. Byeeeeee!:)

Adios maiden4ever!

Annabeth pov
my eyes widened.i was scared here I was traped in a web with my worst fear crawling up and biting me I saw Percy and screamed his name I know it was a trap I could not let him come I wanted to scream Percy it's a trap but all I could scream was percy so I prayed to Athena to warn him and hope it would work apparently it did work because before she could revile where I was he dissaperes thank the gods "you" she growled "you did this oh well we will have to do it again but this time with more pain,fear and chaos" and with that I blacked out

Okay, it was well written. Excellent job.
Constructive criticism: spelling. Second, I understand that I said without a little hurt, a story won't be interesting. However, this is reaching the point of people want somebody to rescue Annabeth.
So the next person who writes, please, make someone rescue her!
PS I hope you weren't offended by my comment, percysmile.

That's okay I'm used to bad spelling (thank goodness for spellcheck ) but some times it dose not know what I am saying but thanks for the reply

I agree completely with rapunzel! ;) She needs to be rescued haha! And- agh I have to eat!

Okay I was hoping you wouldn't get mad *relief* because I hate arguing with people or making them angry unless absolutely necessary. I use my powers of persuasion only for good xD

Well maby I will post late at night but I will take a break from righting

Sorry this took so long to write and now that I read your comment Rapunzeleah123 and AnnabethC I realize this goes against what you just wrote but all I can say is sorry and please forgive me. She will be saved soon but now they also have to defeat someone.

(Percy)

We were at the doors of Orpheus and what Athena said didn’t make me hesitate for a second. If it came between the gods will and Annabeth’s life I would chose her every single time. I shook Elizabeth awake. She rubbed her eyes.
“Are we here already?”
“Yeah we’re at the doors of Orpheus, but if you don’t want to do this I can send you back with Mrs. O’Leary.” I secretly wished that she would go, not because she could be a problem but because I didn’t want her to get trapped here. I’ve been on a lot of quests. I should know better than anyone the dangers of leaving camp. Besides she was only ten and I wasn’t sure if she could handle going into the otherworld.
“I came here and I’m staying here. I want to help Annabeth.” she said firmly. I guess there’s no turning back. I sent Mrs. O’Leary back to camp and was ready to open the door when I realized that I had forgotten something very important. We needed music to open the doors and with no way back I didn’t know what to do. Elizabeth grabbed my hand.
“What’s wrong Percy?”
I heard a laugh.
“You’re really lucky that my sister had a vision or you would be stuck here.” I knew that voice. It was Chaos and Peace. Under any other circumstances I wouldn’t be relived to see Chaos because I apparently made him very mad and I had enough mad gods to worry about.
“You really should have waited us before you went off on your own. I guess not completely alone since you have a stow-away.”
Elizabeth yanked my hand to try and get my attention.
“Percy do you know who these people are?”
“Oh sorry Elizabeth. This is Lady Peace and Lord Chaos.”
“Do you mean Chaos as in the Chaos that created the world?”
I nodded. I noticed that Chaos looked a bit smug. Peace tolled her eyes.
“Don’t go and give him a big head.” Peace said.
“Wait isn’t Chaos supposed to be a girl?”
“I am NOT a girl!”
I would have laughed right then and there but I remembered how angry Chaos looked when I said that to him. I stood in front of Elizabeth with my arms out protectively. Peace started laughing.
“You don’t need to worry about Chaos. He wouldn’t hurt a ten year old but you are another matter. Now that we have that matter cleared up I’ll open the door and we can get on with this quest.”
“What do you mean we’ll get on with this quest? You guys aren’t coming are you? I mean isn’t there some sort of rule about gods not being allowed into the other’s dominions without permission?”
“Wow you really are an idiot. We were born before the gods, titans, and Gaea so those rules don’t apply to us.” Chaos said while rolling his eyes.
“Oh.”
“Just ignore Chaos for now. The whole reason we came here was to help you.”
“Why would a pair of gods come and help me?”
“This is much bigger than just saving Annabeth. Our mother is awakening and she thinks that she can use you to bring the gods down. Mother is truly not a bad person but she isn’t a good one either. Sometimes she gets visions like I do and I think she is trying to prevent something bad from happening. She is ancient and nameless. She has countless servants and many old ties to the world. The only people with enough power to stop her are Chaos and I. Even that may not be enough which is why we came to help you. This isn’t just about saving your girlfriend. This is much more important, maybe not you but if we don’t succeed not only will the gods fall but everything else will too. It will be almost exactly what it was like before the Earth was born. Nobody will be spared except for my brother and me.”
Well my life just got a whole lot harder and complicated.

Okay!

Wow that was amazing SOmeone else post