The Lion King Article: The life of a outlander:Mabaya's story Chapter 1

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The life of a outlander:Mabaya's story Chapter 1

posted by coasterrider

The first of the sun rays peeked over the horizon as Mabaya woke up.She let out a big yawn and heaved herself to her paws.She peeked out of the cave she lived in with all the other outlanders.She could see the fresh-kill pile,but there wasn't that much food instead of three scrawny field mice.She started to head over to the pile when something hit here.She rolled over and over when she hit into something.She then looked up into the face of Nuka.''What was that for''he asked,glaring angrily at her.''Sorry''she said scrambling to her paws.''You better be''he growled,biting at his flank.Mabaya then turned around to see her best friend,Vitani.''Hey,Mabaya''she said,smiling.''Hey,Vitani''Mabaya said glumly.''Whats the matter''?Vitani asked.''Your brother''Mabaya replied.''Yeah''Vitani said,looking at her brother who was biting his leg.''He is kinda a pain''.''How do you live with him''?''I don't know,I just do''Vitani told Mabaya.''Hey do you want to hang out later,I think my mom is calling me''Vitani said.''Sure''Mabaya replied,altough she was kinda sad.''Okay,see you later''Vitani said turning around to leave.''See you later''Mabaya said seeing her friend leave.And then she headed to the fresh-kill pile where another surprise was waiting for her. Chapter 2 coming soon

kionlion443, paige10967 and 1 other like this

KatieK102 Oh! Love it! This club REALLY needs more LK fanfics and your is quite good :) My only suggestion would be to make the chaps longer (But I understand. I write lots of fanfics and it's kinda hard to make them long, not boring, and fun to read) and whenever their talking it would be easier to read if you put a space after a word. Like this: ''Whats the matter''?Vitani asked.''Your brother''Mabaya replied.''Yeah''Vitani said <---- yours "What's the matter?" Vetani asked. "Your brother." Mabaya replied. "Yeah," Vitani said. Just an idea :) Anywho, great job!

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Tojo the Lion

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Scar and Mufasa COLOR

posted by lionkingfan5555

I know some people think that Scar and Mufasa are not brothers but you see they are and I will tell you SCAR: Scar has his mother's fur she has brown fur and he has his father's mane he has a black mane and also Scar's green eyes come from his father too! MUFASA: Okay and this is Mufasa he has golden fur like his father and he has red eyes like his mother but the red mane I don't know where that comes from. But here it is this is what I think. Okay, so some people wonder who Scar and Mufasa grandparents are well.. here you go Scar and Mufasa grandparents are (DRUMROLL) Mohato and Asali! Now...