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The Mark of Athena (my version)

Fan fiction by WolvesRule5692 posted over a year ago
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People who read this fanfic, please tell me if I should continue this story. Please give ideas or criticism. Thanks!

please note: there is one scene which is copied from the Son of Neptune. It is Annabeth's dream (the part with Percy in it, not Hera). I take no credit for Rick Riordan's work

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Annabeth


Annabeth sighed. She was tired or the same questions shooting through her head. But she had no answers. Now, as she, Leo, Jason and Piper got closer to Camp Jupiter, the questions came to mind more and more frequently. Would Percy remember her? Did he have his memories back yet? Who were the other demigods coming from the Roman camp?
Whenever she thought about the questions, she would go limp from despair, just with the thought of Percy viewing her as a total stranger. It was a concept Annabeth had had nightmares about for over a month.
At that moment, Piper and Jason walked by, arm in arm. Jason noticed her and said, “Annabeth, get some sleep. You’re going to need it when we get to Camp Jupiter.”
“How long until we arrive?” Annabeth needed to know that, but the idea of sleep sounded pretty good.
“Leo says we’re somewhere over Nebraska,” Piper said, “Which is about half-way between Camp Half-Blood and Camp Jupiter. We should get there tomorrow at about noon.
“Plenty of time for you to sleep, Annabeth. We’ll need you.”
Jason was right. They needed her. So she decided to go to sleep at last.
As usual, her dream was about Percy. Only, for once, this wasn’t her usual nightmare. She saw Percy and a girl sitting at a table in front of semi-circle of occupied chairs. Best thing about this scene was the fact that Percy was wearing a Roman toga. That was a sight to see. It was like he was wearing bed sheets and a purple cape.
In the semi-circle, a young man with straw colored hair was shouting and gesturing with his hands.
“The camp is safe,” He said, “I’ll be the first to congratulate our heroes for bring back our Golden Eagle and so much Imperial Gold! Truly, we have been blessed with good fortune. But why temp fate?
“I’m glad you asked,” Percy said, standing up out of his chair.
“I wasn’t-”
“-part of the quest, yes, I know. And you’re wise to let me explain, since I was.”
     He pinned that guy good. Annabeth saw that the man could do nothing but let Percy talk.
     “Gaea is waking,” Percy said, “We’ve defeated two of her giants, but that’s only the beginning. The real war will take place in the old land of the gods. The quest will take us to Rome and eventually to Greece. I know you’ve always seen the Greeks as your enemies. And there’s good reason for it. I think the gods have kept us apart because whenever we meet, we fight. But that can change. It has to change if we’re to defeat Gaea. That’s what the Prophesy of Seven means. Seven demigods, Greek and Roman, will have to close the Doors of Death together."
     Geez, Percy, Annabeth thought, that actually sounded smart. You’ve changed.
     Shouts of protest rang throughout the room.
     “Ha! The last praetor who tried to interpret the Prophesy of Seven was the one who lost our eagle!” Someone in the crowd yelled.
     Percy opened his mouth to retort, but at that moment, the dream changed, and Annabeth was looking into the face of none other than Queen Hera.
     “You!” Annabeth yelled. “You took Percy away from me for eight months!”
     “That is not important. I can only appear to you briefly, so listen closely. There is a man at Camp Jupiter who is a descendant of Apollo. Don’t trust him, or he will sell you out to Gaea. And remember, the gods are not as silent as you think.”
    Thunder shook the ground, and with that, Hera was gone.
    Annabeth started and woke, just as Jason burst in the room.
    “Come on,” He said “We’re there.”
     And Annabeth’s heart nearly burst with joy.


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Safree said:
k cool but u r supposed to put it as a forum i think though please post
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I liked it so cool please post when ever you have a chance
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great chapter !! post soon
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I'm working on the next chapter, I will post next week on Tuesday (probably)
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POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME STORY
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amazin chapter post soon !!!!!!
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I'm sorry, I had more things to do than I thought I did, but the chapter should come out today or tomorrow.
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i like it :)
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IF YU DONT POST SOON IM GOING TO GO TO YUR HOUSE GRAB THE CLOSEST POSSIBLE thing AND SHUB IT IN YUR MOUTH!!!
kayy post soooonnn!!!
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My computer crashed, this is the first time I've been on in a week. I have to retype the next chapter. sorry!
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That's ok take your time!
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aahh that was great! post fast please!
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jee you r haveing all kindsa troubles but ur good so take your time, rick riordan takes a year to right his storys but they are always worth the wait and i have a feeling yours will be too:)
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So sorry you had to wait this long. I tried to post on my DSI, but I hit the cancel button by mistake when I was half-way done. The Chapter should be posted in about half an hour, and the next one when I get home tomorrow. Thanks!
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After years of evil computers, here it is

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Hazel
Hazel was anxious. For the past hour, Percy had been alone on the hilltop.
She stopped studying her Latin book and thought; I should get Frank and talk to Percy. So she stood up and wandered off to find Frank.
She found him at some training station, and he and some legionnaires were discussing war strategies.
“Hey, Frank! Should we check on our friend on the hill?
“Sure”
Hazel and Frank walked to the hill that overlooked the valley.
“Percy-”
“-They’re here” Percy interrupted.
“Um, what?”
“The Greeks. Can’t you see?” Percy said, pointing upwards.
Hazel looked where he was pointing. She saw, all right. A flying warship with a dragons head in the front was soaring down toward Camp Jupiter at an alarming rate. When the scroll had come, Hazel had pictured the Greeks arriving in a floating houseboat. Well, if the could build like this, no wonder they hadn’t disappeared.
Hazel looked at Frank. He was wide-eyed with astonishment. Hazel wondered if had known the Greeks were doing this.
Hazel looked at Percy. He had a grin a long as the River Styx
As the ship grew closer, Percy, Hazel and Frank were joined by Reyna and Octavian. Reyna looked nervous, and Octavian looked furious. Of course, if he had his way, the ship would be a wisp in the wind by now.
The warship was on the ground, and apparently, Terminus had decided not to blast them to bits.
A wide, wooden plank lowered to the ground, indicating that they should board.
As Percy, Hazel and Frank boarded, Reyna said, “Farewell, and may Fortuna be in your favor.”
“Farewell, Reyna.”
As they boarded, Percy said “Come on, let me introduce you to my other family.”
When he said that, it reminded her of the boy in the scroll message. Was he coming? Hazel hoped not. Her heart already went crazy around Frank, the last thing she needed was another Sammy.
Percy, Hazel and Frank boarded the ship. Hazel heard arguing and footsteps, and three people stepped out from behind a corner.
“Annabeth!” Percy cried.
Annabeth and Percy ran towards each other and-
Hazel looked away. She felt happy for Percy, but she never liked watching that kind of reunion.
“Ahem, we’ve got a world to save here, you know.”
Oh no. The boy was coming after all. Whoop-dee-do.
Hazel changed the subject. “Lets introduce each other. After you.”
“I’m Leo, a son of Hephaestus.”
“That’s Vulcan, for us.” Jason added helpfully
The person next to Jason spoke up “Piper, daughter of Aphrodite”
“Venus.” Jason again.
“Annabeth, daughter of Athena”
“Minerva” Percy that time.
“So,” Frank said, trying not to laugh, “Your girlfriend is the daughter of the wisdom goddess?”
“Long story.”
Annabeth looked at Frank coldly and asked “Who’re you?”
“Frank, son of Mars.”
“Ares.” Annabeth knew Roman gods well enough.
“I’m Hazel, daughter of Pluto.”
“Hades.”
“All right, lets get going.” Said Leo. He ran off, and a few minutes later, they were flying.
Gods, I hope I don’t get seasick, Hazel thought. And below her, Camp Jupiter disappeared from view.

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see i knew you would be good:)
that was really good!
and thank YOU for writing the story!:)
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that was really good!!!!
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Computers r evil. Thanks so much for getting my story into the Popular content box. U guys rock!
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post plz!!! :) im new here and i like ur version! :)
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Great! Can u read my Mark of Athena on the forums? http://www.fanpop.com/spots/the-mark-off-a­the­na/­for­um/­p..­.en­a

I have another chapter but im not sure i should post it cuz no 1's commenting.. :(
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awesome version. plz post soon and also pop round and check my version out.

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if ur a dresden files fan, my fanfic of "Cold Days" is up now as well and i need fans / comments to justify putting chapters up so ckeck it out!

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Brill could you read mine plz called the best and only MARK OF ATHENA -heroes of olympus
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