MUCH BETTER!

Since nobody thinks I did a completely horrible job at scene 1 and that I should be banned from Fanpop yet, I`ll risk it all with scene 2.

Scene 2
Montauk
Percy, Grover, bus drivers and passengers, fates, Gabe, Sally, poker buddies, Chiron, Annabeth
Percy and Grover are on a bus
Percy –Common, school ended, you can stop the joke now!
Grover –I am being perfectly honest with you! There – has – never – been – a –Ms – Dodds –at – Yancy!
Percy –Grover, you suck at lying and it isn’t funny. Bus stops
Grover –We’re here. He and Percy get off the bus, they see the fates. They...

Im gonna keep this short and simple THIS MOVIE WAS TERRIBLE. The cast was terrible im mean seriously why would the pick a sixteen year old loser and make him the coolest kids ever. The cast didnt even resemble any of the characters(exept for the girl who played annabeth she kind of reminds me of clarisse but thats a article for another time) They didnt shown half of the characters i wanted to see.the plot was terrible it didnt even make sense with the book.why in all of Olympus would Percy,Grover and Annabeth look for the crystals when it was a gift from Poseidon. And they completely chaged...

I'll justify the long wait: I started school, and me and my friends all went to the library. Seeing I'm a reader, they ask "Hecate, what's a good book in English?". So I smile and after they tell me "not HarryPotter" I lead them to the second stop on the tour, the RIO section of the English novels.

So The Lightning Thief passes from hand to hand, and finally my friend Hebe (I'm going on a minor-goddess-for-names theme) checks it out. So then Persephone can't check it out in English (in French, yes, but the translations suck). So I feel sorry for her and lend her my copy. Only to figure out...

I'm late again. Forgive me and enjoy peoples and others!


6
We ruin a perfectly good bus

Percy, Annabeth, Argus, Grover, Luke, Chiron, the 3 furies, Bus driver, 5 bus passengers

Camera looking out the window of the car, at Percy, Annabeth, Grover and Chiron (out of wheelchair) raining like precedent scene. Luke is running towards them carrying a shoebox.

Luke (must see cabins behind him): I thought I’d missed you guys! Good luck on the quest. And, Percy, I’ve got something for you. (gives the shoebox and hands it to Percy, he opens it)
Percy: Thanks, Luke.
Luke: I “got” them from my dad, check...

I'm sorry I'm late, I'm sorry I'm late! I've been writting fanfiction on the HoO spot and my own little projects, forgive me!

Does anybody else hate the lack of ittalic lettering? Ticks me off...

5
The quest

Percy, Mr D, Grover, Chiron, Annabeth,

start
Percy is sleeping in Poseidon’s cabin. He is frowning and turning. Camera zooms into his eye. A horse and an eagle are fighting on a cliff, Percy runs towards them.
Percy – Stop fighting! Stop! STOP!
Kronos – laughter (sound of a door and Grover’s voice “Percy! Percy, get up!”)
Camera zooms out and Percy wakes up
Grover (from outside) –Percy,...

Hey guys! I know its been a while for a very short scene. I also know the sword fights are weakly described,but I'm no good at describing those. Anywyas, I'll get'em out faster, or at least try to.

Now for the long awaited for, one of the key scenes of the book, scenes! Enjoy guys!

ps if anybody thinks this is useless and rubish, just say so, I don't mind constructive critisism


4
Capture the flag
Percy, Clarisse, Luke, Annabeth, Grover, Chiron, all the campers

Percy and Grover are walking along the beach talking

Percy – Does it usually take this much time to get claimed?
Grover –Don’t...