Total Drama Island's Duncan Article: 2 Faced Cheaters ch.1

posted by kk99aa

Vannessa

Duncan:*walks into bar* *deep inhale* I love the smell of beer at midnight!

Diamond:Hi!What's your name? *flirty wink*

Duncan: *tugging on shirt collar* Oh WOW is it HOT in here? *rushes past her*

Jason: *walks in*

Diamond: *Anime-heart eyes,faints*

Ryan: *walks in*

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Vannessa: *sitting at bar* Gray-Goose martini,on the double!!

Bartender: Please dont hurt me!! *hands vannessa martini*

Duncan: *sits down at bar next to vannessa* Can i have a scotch?

Bartender: you seem too young to be at a bar.

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Diamond: *un-faints* OH WOW he was hot!!!!!!!

Jason:* standing over Diamond* I am?

Diamond: *opens eyes* 0.0

Jason: XD *trips and lands on Diamond*

J/D: *making out on floor*

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Vannessa: *puts fist under nose* It's ok he's
with me.You got anything to say about
it?

Bartender: no nothing at all ma'm! *runs off to get scotch*

Vannessa: I'm not ma'm im Nessa. Vannessa!

Duncan: What just happened?

Vannessa:Well I just saved your butt! XD

Duncan: I didn't know a girl could do that!

Vannessa: Do you wanna make something of it?

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Diamond: *stops making out* No! I can't kiss you
anymore! I gotta go,I'm only
sixteen,the po-po...

Jason: Don't leave :(

Diamond: ok :3 *making out*

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D/V: *wrestleing*

Ryan: *walks over to Vannessa* Hey.

Vannessa: o.0 *drooling*

Ryan: I see you already met my brother? Duncan?

Vannessa: yah...

Duncan: *staring at Vannessa* huh?

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D/J: *making out*

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V/R/D: *walking and talking* aaahhhh! *trips on Jason and Diamond*

(Police sirens)

V/D/D/R/J: o.0

Ryan

Diamond

Duncan

Jason

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I will prove them inocent part 2

posted by xcv_2013

Hey it's Brooke. I'm back from the police station talking to Duncan & Spikes. I know damn well that they weren't the ones that stole from the local jewlery store. They were at home the whole damn time! Even my parents know that they are innocent but they won't do s***!!!!
"Mom! Dad! You both know that it wasn't Duncan & Spikes who stole the jewles!!! You gotta let them out!!!" I begged. "Brooke, baby, we can't do anything. We know that they didn't do it but the police won't let them go." they said sadly.
"Yeah, but daddy your the Cheif. Can't you do anything?" I asked. He just looked...

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[TDI's Duncan love story]

posted by Lolly4me2

I happily turned on the camera smiling. "Hey everyone! I'm Sofie! Why should I be on Total Drama Island? Well, I'm pretty, (DUH) I'm smart, (kinda) fun, (Um, YEAH!) boy crazy, (COOTIES! COOTIES! RUN!) funny, (Sea monkey stole my money! XD) and TOTALLY random! (RUN AWAY BANANA MAN! RUN! RAWR!!)" I smiled and looked around me. "I also have some junk in the front, if you know what I mean." I giggled and sprawled on my bed. "Sofie!" My mom called from the bottom of the stairs. "What ARE you doing in
there?!" I frowned and ran to the window laughing. "I-I'm going clubbing! Don't ruin my fun! BYE!" I jumped out the window and landed hard on the ground. "Oh!" I yelled up to the room window. "I'm really crazy, so I'll totally boost ratings! See y'all later!"
*End of addition tape*

-Hahaha! See what other trouble this mayhem mistress while cause on Total, Drama, Island! (as Chris would say it) *wink*

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Rockin' love 2

posted by GWENxTRENT

*SHILOH'S POV*
i knocked on my sister's door at night. I just had to. i had an idea. "wha? 5 more minutes daddy." she said sleepy and soberly. she was thinking of dad? poor thing.

"layla?" i said walking in. she woke up. "what is it now?" she sighed. "you were sleep talking, and i just wanted to see if you're OK." i said.
"what's the idea?" she asked.
"you know me so well. anyways, we need to find dad..." i said. "you can't be serious shiloh!you want to runaway?!" she whispered loudly. i nodded.
she got up, got her suite case, and packed. "your just lucky I wanna see dad this badly or I'd never...

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FireFlower - A Poem By Duncan Payne [TDI's Duncan love story]

posted by Lolly4me2

FireFlower
Active and beautiful
And yet....
A petal falls

They say we're not made for each other,
FireFlower,
Because there's someone else...
So a petal falls

She pulls me away,
FireFlower,
And you fight back
Your pain was not my plan
So a petal falls

Time is going by,
FireFlower,
And that girl is still here...
So a petal falls

Two petals hang on

This can't happen,
FireFlower,
Because I need you
But she says no
So a petal falls

I love you,
FireFlower,
And they say we're not made for each other...
But when you bloom,
I'll be there...
Don't die yet...

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Rikki (My OC) and Duncan

added by DuncansMyLuv14

Source: Whoever original drew the picture...

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Diary of a Love/Hate ROMANCE ch.5

posted by kk99aa

i couldn't find a pic of Courtney blushing so i improvised XD

"What the heck... oh no!Duck!" Duncan grabbed my hand and pulled me down. In the brief moment he touched my hand,my cheeks burned bright red."What's wrong?" I asked Duncan as he pulled me along the floor."Well the police are after us... and we're running and hiding for our lives." he said cooly. "What?!?" i screamed and he clamped his hand over my mouth."Shut up!" he whisper-screamed at me.By now we were in the hallway.He pointed to the closet and said "Sit down right there." I was confused and freaked out so i did as i was told.He sat down in front of me and leaned forward until our lips were only inches apart... "I anything happens to me... I just want to let you know..." he leaned in and kissed me on the lips. "That I really like you." and stood up and said "Wait here don't leave until the police go. If I don't come back..." he turned and left.And I finally realized that I loved him...

I had to put this funny pic on here! It's too funny!!!!!

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diary of a love/hate romance ch.4

posted by kk99aa

This is Courtney's bff Candace

Dear Diary,
Duncan's party is today,but im not going.Well...
LOVE,
Courtney

Dear new piece of paper,
I wonder if princess is coming.
See you in hell,
Duncan

I searched my PDA for something to do.Anything to do!It was completely blank!"Uhhh!" I thought. My little brother griffin must have cleared everything from my PDA!So I decided to call my friend Candace.I picked up my cellphone and dialed Candace's number."Hello?" Candace murmured. "Hey it's Courtney." I replied. "Court you do know that it's 10am right?" she asked. "Of course i know Candace,but my little brother Griffin deleted everything...

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diary of a love/hate romance ch.3

posted by kk99aa

Isn't he HOTT? Oh darn it! that wasn't supposed to be there XD

Dear Diary,
today Duncan confronted me in the dark.He asked me about the other day.Then I found a note in my locker.From him!How did he get into my locker?!?
Love,
Courtney

Dear back of the random piece of paper I was writing on,
I confronted Courtney about the kiss at the museum.I wanted her to admit that she kissed me on purpose.She totally wants me!I also left a note in her locker.How? Let's just say that I know a lot about vaults and locks.
See you in hell,
Duncan

I walked through the empty pitch-dark hallways,puzzled and confused.Of course I wasn't lost.I mean, I NEVER get lost.Then a...

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Rockin' love 4

posted by GWENxTRENT

um i know while this story moves on it'll be some-what like "the game plan", but this was just an insperation from the movie!
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"i, um...we, uh..." i studdered. there was a loud shril in my head.
"listen here, WE ARE YOUR DAUGHTERS! YOUR TWIN DAUGHTERS!" shiloh said. "what?!" he said steping back. "yep. we are."
"me and sofia never had a kid, or kids..." he crossed his arms. "um yes you did."
"no we didn't."
"YES you did."
"NO we didn't."
this fight with my sister and my father was getting anoying. but with a little insperation gave me an idea. i dug...

The Court Case part 3

posted by xcv_2013

Hey Its Brooke here to say the story about the court case.

After Mr. Gibbson's totally bad & mean statement about Duncan & Spikes he sat down.
"Ms. Courtney, your statement?" said the judge. Courtney took a deep breath & stood up. "Your honor, ladies & gentlemen of the jury, & fellow cast mates." she said turning to the crowd. "We all do know the history of Duncan Payne & Spencer Garcia. They have commited some crimes in the past, but I would like to know where was the evidence against them. Where is the warrant to arrest them? I have not seen one yet. It shows that their...

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How will I prove them Innocent.

posted by xcv_2013

Hey its Brooke. Well, if you read the last story, you know by now that Duncan & Spikes fired our lawer for hitting on me too much. I even got to met Spikes cousin & little sister. Well, after the perverted Mr. Thomas Gibbson left, I knew that we had a problem. Now who would be they're lawer?
"Guys! You still need a lawer! Who would be your lawer on short notice?" I asked suddenly.
They all looked stunned. They needed a lawer & no one could do it. Who could it be?
"How about her?" asked Jackie. pointing to Courtney.
"Who me?" asked Courtney.
"Nah, the mop. Of course you!" I said. "Yeah!...

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I will prove them Innocent part 5

posted by xcv_2013

hey its Brooke here to continue the story.

So like I said, Mr. Gibbson kissed my hand making Spikes ticked off, but that was nothing compared to Duncan's reaction.
"HEY!!! HEY!!! BUDDY!!! NO WAY!!!! DON'T DO THAT TO MY SISTER!!" Duncan yelled & got between me & Thomas.
"Well, I beg your pardon but I am trying to greet a lady properly." then he turned to Spikes." And don't say that she's your girl. She is not in the ownership of you Spencer." then he held my hand & was gonna kiss it again till I snached it away, "Um, they do have a point Mr. Gibbson." I said.
"Oh no. Please call me Thomas."...

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I will prove them innocent part 4

posted by xcv_2013

Hey its Brooke continueing the story of the crime.

So the next day after I called Courtney I went over to the jail to go tell Duncan & Spikes the good news! They were going to be so proud! They were going to...
"WHAT THE HELL? WHAT DID YOU DO?" yelled Duncan at me.
"What's wrong? You don't want to see Courtney?" I asked confused.
He looked at space & said,"Of course I want to see her. I miss her. I haven't seen her pretty eyes & her pretty face..." he got silent as Spikes & me just looked at him. I was trying my hardest not to bust out laughing.
"Oh. Did I say that aloud?" he asked...

I will prove them innocent part 3

posted by xcv_2013

Hey its Brooke here to continue the last story.

So I went to the phone, took a deep breath & started dialing my brother's girlfriend, Courtney.
I was thinking of what I would say to her but I didn't have much time to think because I hear a girl's voice ask,"Hello?"
"Uh, yeah,um, I-I-Is Courtney there?" I asked pathetic."Who wants to know?" she asked more louder than when she answered.
"Uh, I'm Duncan's little sister, Brooke. I have to-" I was saying till she cut me off.
"Oh! Yes! Hello! This is Courtney!" she started happily saying.
"Oh! Hi Courtney!" Was all I could say.
"Hello! Wow! I was wondering...

whoa so Brooke's boys have a soft spot

posted by xcv_2013

Hey it is brooke. crying of three things. One, I read the comments made by some of my fans & I want to say is thank you. I never found out who that person was. They deleted their fanpop account. So YAY!!! Two, Duncan & Spikes are friends again. Third, they blame themselves for my being hurt. So I'm really crying now.
After I left the hospital I went home to get the money I earned to help bail Duncan out. I told my mom about Spikes infection & told her of my suspecison that Spikes was afraid that Duncan wasn't hs friend. She told to me in this real serious tone, "Brooke, don't you...

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The fight between the brother,sister, & best friend *countinued* again

posted by xcv_2013

hey this is Baby B!!! just back from this huge,wicked party!!! i have seen the comments on my last story & i want to say thank you. there are some actual people in this world who understand me.
well anyway before I get all sentimental, I'll tell you the rest of what happened when I saw Spikes at the Hospital.
After i left that emotional scene with duncan, I headed over to the hospital. I entered his room & saw his whole family & a lawer there.
"Spencer are you sure you don't want to sue Duncan?" asked his mom.
"Mom, I don't want to sue him. I'm OK. Just a minor cut." he replied in an...

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The fight between the brother,sister, & bestfriend *countinued*

posted by xcv_2013

hey its brooke. well i got back from the hospital from seeing spikes. well i talked to duncan and spikes & i learned a few things i never knew like how i got my name & why spikes had that huge cut on his arm.
well both my cellphone & home phone were ringing. it was spikes & duncan. "AAAHHH!!!! WELL, SPIKES IS MORE PATIENT!!!" i yelled then i picked up my cellphone and answered duncan.
"Brooke, come here now." duncan said sternly then he hanged up.
so as my mom was driving me to the prison I called back spikes.
"Hey baby b.(my nickname) Can you come over?" he asked
"Uh, Duncan just...

How did that happen Brooke? *countinued*

posted by xcv_2013

hey its duncans little sister AKA brooke!!! im back from school. yes i know huge shocker. they fixed the school already!!! so we had to go.
well you all know that duncan was ticked off after i told him that i was dating his best friend. well he won't answer my e-mails. so he must hate me for life. :-(
well to countine the story, after i passed out i woke up at the hospital. my mom & brothers were there & were relived when i woke up. i quickly asked where was spikes. my mom told me the news. he had 3rd degree burns.
i was dismissed from the hospital & i passed by Spikes room. i asked...

How did that happen Brooke? *countinued*

posted by xcv_2013

hey its duncan little sister AKA Brooke!!! just here to countinue with the story of me & spikes going out!!! people have asked me, "Who is Spikes?" well if you have read my previous articles you will see that he is Duncan's best friend. Here is what happened on the IM today.
juvenile girl: Duncan?
he didn't respond
juvenile girl: im in trouble aren't i.
juve dude: yes, yes you are
juvenile girl: im sorry. :-(
juve dude: apology not accepted
juvenile girl: you do know hes in the hospital right?
juve dude: HES WHAT?!?!
juvenile girl: didn't Chris tell you?
juve dude: NO!!!
juvenile girl: yeah well....

How did that happen Brooke?

posted by xcv_2013

Hey its Brooke. I'm sure you all know that Spikes & I are going out. Well let me tell you how that started, but heres what Duncan said on the IM when I told him.
Juve dude: YOU 2 ARE WHAT?!
Juvenile Girl: Chill,bro,chill
Juve dude: HOW AM I GOING TO CHILL WHEN YOU & SPIKES ARE KISSING!!! MY BEST FRIEND & LITTLE SISTER ARE DATING!!!
Juvenile Girl: I'm in trouble huh? :-(
Juve dude: yes. yes you are
Juvenile Girl: i'm sorry
Juve dude: How did that happen?!
Juvenile: Well, Jessica got sick & tired of school & decided to start a fire to stop school. but...
Juve dude: what?
Juvenile Girl:...