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The light dimmed, and the first thing Garren notices is the cold, hard ground. Then he notices the howling wind. Then there was the 800 foot drop in front of him....Wait, what?

Garren scrambled back, trying to put as much distance in between him and the cliff edge. Once he was no longer in danger of falling and splattering his guts all over the rocks, he noticed one more thing. His wounds no longer hurt.

Garren lifted his shirt. All of the cuts and bruises the gryphon had given him had all magically healed. He wondered if the voice had anything to do with this. As if on cue, said voice began speaking, the voice bouncing off of other nearby mountains.

"You have shown us you have the strength to fight your opponents. Now, show us your courage and leap. Leap and show us you can conquer what would leave most shaking in their boots, and fall through the door near the bottom.

Garren was amazed at the voice. THEY expected HIM to jump off the mountain? And go through a door, which was supposedly near the bottom.

He stood up, and felt a lump in his pocket. Retrieving the item concealed in said pocket, he found binoculars.

Cautiously, he crept toward the edge and looked down with the binoculars in search of this door. There! It was a portal of sorts, suspended in the air about 200 feet above the ground, the entryway pointing up and about 30 feet out from the bottom of the mountain. The portal was about 15 feet in diameter, but it was still very tiny.

Garren had no clue on how to get there without possibly splattering himself all over the mountain-side. But that was BEFORE he noticed the fairly large piece of cloth on the ground. At once, an idea sprang forward. He had only seen it work in cartoons or movies, but maybe.....

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He was having second thoughts. He didn't even know it'll work, and he only got one try. Using the cloth and pieces of his tattered shirt, he made his own Bat-cape. Where the idea had originally come from he didn't know, but he had made it nevertheless. But it didn't seem logical, the more he thought about it. Nothing he could do at this point, he couldn't re-use the cloth. With a deep breath, he got a running start, jumped, opened the cape.... and began gliding!

"HOLY S***!" was Garren's first thought. "IT WORKS!"

But he wasn't dropping fast enough. He had glided past the portal. He let himself go out a couple more feet, then made a U-turn with great difficulty. Stupid idea time: He tucked in his arms and legs to drop faster and shot toward the portal.

His thoughts? "OHHH MYY GOD!"

He was speeding toward the portal falling faster with each passing second, and he had no way to stop.

But he was having the time of his life. He tucked himself in even more, urging himself to go faster. Garren was getting closer and closer to the portal. 150 feet, 120, 70, 40, 30, 20, 10 feet..... Garren let the cape fly open again, and the air caught him, lifting him up a little before letting him gently float down. A couple feet right above the portal, he tucked himself in again, and tumbled into the portal, hearing the voice speak before he fell through.

"Pass. You have shown us your courage and ingenuity to solve this test. How long can you hold out before dying, I wonder?"
posted by alicia386
Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

      "You're lying," I said but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
      "That maybe, but would he really want you to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add more to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
      "You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most top notch...
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posted by 1999jacko
Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a pillow case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back seat of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...
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just a warning every other chapter will be dark with a murder happening in almost all of them so if you don't like dark stuff don't read this one

Jameson was rushing around the room his eyes blood shot with tiredness, he had received the results of the prints hours ago and had been working on it for the whole night. And when he had discovered who the killer and his little gang were he had instantly knew he was screwed, but tried to type it up so hopefully chief detective James would discover it and start arresting the people as soon as he was killed. When he finished his little message to James...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
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Alex
    “Are you okay?!” I asked as I rushed to Zaria and Iris.
    “Somewhat,” Iris said giving me a shaky smile, while Zaria replied. “Define okay.”
    I helped them out of the water, they were soaked, and kept on slipping. Which led me to fall into the water.
    “Sorry,” Iris said, looking at my now wet clothes sorrowfully.
    “It’s okay let’s just get out of here.” I said, pulling them toward the ground.
    “Wait!”...
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posted by 1999jacko
Dark Fantasy(I think)

Drake and Sam stood at the edge of the road waiting for the cars to stop zooming past. Drake was starting to get really impatient so she started to shout," oh come on! how long does it take for us to be able to cross the road," his face going red and all the while Sam was laughing his head of at the rants that Drake was going on about until finally he said," come on man lets just go under the bridge it may be the long way but its easily quicker than this, so come on." Sam had already started jogging towards the entrance to the little path that lead under the bridge by the...
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Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?





Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked strawberry red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm kiss on the check and saying, “I love you dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I love you two.” As he turned into the next road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...
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Chapter (13):
"So, are we gonna walk home or is Noah gonna pick us up?" asked Leo, as they descended the school steps, "I'm calling Noah" replied Abbie, "Okay then" said Leo, he shoved his hands in his pockets and started rocking back and forth on his heals, Abbie fumbled her messenger bag for her phone,and found it just before she could dial Noah's number, it vibrated lightly signaling that she had a text, "I got a text" said Abbie, "Who's it from?" asked Leo, "Noah" replied Abbie after she'd checked the name, she read the text, 'Stay where you are I'm picking you and Leo up, From ur 'Also...
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posted by hgfan5602
Run now. Run fast. We all have a place that we desire to be, and that place is not home for me, unlike most people. My parents have started to torture me since last December, and I have had enough of it. My heart is racing, and I know I have to get away now. I can't take any more of this. My parents have been holding me in my room, locking me under chain and key, beating my head against the wall. Not your normal kid, the kid who thinks doing homework is torture. This is what I call real torture. Yesterday past midnight, I was thinking, "Why do my parents do this to me? Why? Why? I'm definitely...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the review!!! :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and you are sinner, commit all, you are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take you to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...
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posted by kitty190123
One day, a girl was walking through a forest. Her name was Rachel, and she was looking for a friend. Her and her friend, Misty, were camping, but then Misty disappeared. She then saw a dim white light. She walked towards it and saw a face, a body, arms, and legs. It was wearing a white dress. You know, when she thought about it, it looked a bit like... "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"

That's all for chapter 1! Please tell me if it needs to be a little longer and feel free to post your questions and comments!
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I'm back and better than ever! My brief hiatus has allowed me to prepare spoilers for the Shadow Trilogy for you. Remember, nothing leaves this website.
Eden, its inhabitants, and the Shadow Trilogy books copyright © 2013 Johanna Glass. Do not use without permission.




A few months ago, I gave you the full first chapter if Hope in the Strangest Places. At the end of the chapter, Twera reveals that she and Thunderhawk are siblings. BUT, there is a story behind them. WHY was Thunderhawk apprehensive about seeing Twera? WHY was he thinking what he was?
The story all starts with Siik and Fynd. Their...
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After days of debating, I decided to post some of my first attempt at fan-fiction. In this case the "Silent Hill" franchise. For those of you that have never played the games, you could always look up spoilers for them, since this takes place in the game canon. Anyway, here's the prolouge & Chapter One, please comment and let me know what you think! :)
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PROLOUGE:TOLUCA COUNTY, MAY 2001
Frank was asleep when he heard the knock on his door. After forcing himself out of bed, he looked out to see someone he hardly ever saw. Nathan and his father. Nathan was...
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posted by rory2011
she slept for three hours near Kat ,the ground felt harsher and colder than before ,but Kat's body made Hayley feel worm
she felt the door opening and someone is walking over her ,he grabbed her strongly ,she opened her eyes screaming " mom ... mom ... please " she was trying to escape from Mac's hand but she's too young and small to fight a 36 years old man
Kat finally felt something ,her head was killing her ,she can hardly stand cause she lost a lot of blood ,but all she wanted is respond to her daughter's scream
after she stood up she can see very clear ,she saw Mac taking Hayley ,she heard...
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posted by rory2011
Hayley was lying on the ground without any move ,David was watching his daughter being tortured between Mac's hand

he slapped her three times then he hit her head with the wall ,in somehow ,Kat could get out of Mac's hand ,she took three steps back but everything she was seeing is dark with red and black vision ,she couldn't run away or find a way out cause her head hurt her so much
Mac walked fast after she stood away ,and he pushed her against the wall
he was holding something in his hand
" let's see if you can handle this " Mac said , he looked at Kat for a minutes then he looked at David...
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Chapter (17):
"Glad you came dude" said Josh, "Yeah" replied Noah "Aren't you three going to sit down or wait to be invited?" asked Bonnie, Noah stalked away from Abbie and Leo, and settled himself next to Bonnie, Abbie and Leo sat in the two remaining chairs side by side, "Your Noah's sister Abbie right?" asked Josh, Abbie noticed that Bonnie and Josh weren't pale haired but there hair was deep golden blonde like their mother, "Yes, your Susie's cousin right?" she asked, "Yeah, I am do you know her?" he answered with a ghost of a smile, "Yes, we go to the same school and she's in few of my...
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I deny the truth,
But really,
That is nothing.
I do that just to protect myself.

I cannot let the truth overcome me
All at once,
I must let it come at me
Pieces by pieces.

The truth is always shocking,
At many times sad.
But I must accept the truth
Even after a while.
Because denying the truth
Is like lying to myself

Denying the truth hurts my soul
But it also protects my soul at the same time.
I don't know what to believe.
It's all too shocking for me.

I deny the truth.
I protect my soul.
I protect myself.
But I also hurt myself.
posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :)~
Chapter 32
My best friend was murdered by my other best friend
    I awoke again to find myself lying on a cold stone floor, I felt just as cold, emoty inside. My head throbbed lightly, but painful, and my chest hurt when I breathed. But that couldn’t compare to the betrayal I felt when I learned that Jessica was the one that killed my sister, and Dorothy’s so called friend were the accomplices.
    “Help,” I croaked. “Help.”
    “I don’t know why you bother, Des. Your voice is weak...
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