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Moonlight - Chapter Six

Opinion by Twilight_F posted over a year ago
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Here is the long awaited Chapter six....well not very long awaited...but here it is!!!! I got my ideas from the Twilight Books so there are connections. Please READ, RATE AND COMMENT!!!! ENJOY!!!!!

CHAPTER 6

This chapter is a flashback from the time when Bella’s parents died. Bella’s mum’s POV. (Renée’s POV)

It was raining heavily as Charlie, Bella and I were coming back from a supper. Bella was sleeping deeply in the back seat. When suddenly a flash of lightening came down from the sky. I heard a CRACK and in front of us fell a huge tree. Charlie braked vigorously. But it wasn’t enough. We went speeding into the tree.
    I was lying there, dying when I saw a flash of light, white light. It came into the car and dragged Charlie out. I started screaming. But then another flash of white dragged me out of the car as well.
     I got a glimpse of my killer, he had coal black eyes and was painstakingly beautiful. I cried.
“Don’t hurt my baby, please don’t hurt my baby Bella!” I screamed to this boy, he was only about 17.
    The last thing I will remember is a flash of white teeth and the pain like all of the liquid inside of me was being sucked out. I heard more screams from the other side of the log. The last words that came out of my mouth were “I love you Bella”.


Back to the story ………… Bella's POV


As Edward told me this I could see a pained expression on his face. He had just told me him and Emmett had killed my parents, if it wasn’t for them I wouldn’t have been an orphan, the ambulance would have saved them.
I screamed the loudest most painful scream and ran out of the door. Everyone followed me.
“Bella, I’m sorry I had no idea. How was I meant to know I was going to fall in love with you?”
“Alice’s visions”
“Leave me alone!” I screamed at all of them, but they kept following. Edward soon caught me up.
“Please Bella, understand”
“Oh I understand, you killed my parents, they would be alive if it weren’t for you.” I screamed out loud, I wanted everyone to hear it. No more conversations in my head.
“I don’t love you anymore Edward, you killed my family, the only family I had.” I gasped at what I had just said.
At this, Edward stopped and ran away. I felt a whole in my heart. I stopped and slumped to the floor. Esme and Alice were beside me in seconds. Sara stood over me.
“You can always come and travel with me Bella, if you want. I can’t see you staying here much longer.” Sara said politely.
“Yes, I would like to travel with you.” At this Esme and Alice gasped. Carlisle, Emmett, Jasper and Rosealie had followed Edward, knowing that he would be hard to control.
    “You can’t go Bella, it would break Edward’s heart…” Esme pleaded with me.
“HE broke MYN. He killed my mother.” I screeched. I went and stood next to Sara.
“Where are we going? Because I’m following” And I left with Sara.


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14 comments

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crying
that was so mean why did they do that to them
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the story is sad but it's still really good!!!! put the others i can't wait. i want to know what happened!!!
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mwalsh said:
omg i wanna cry thats so sad please make her go back to edward please

you are very talented but i want edward and bella 2 b together


other than that i love it
love it
love it
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I'm Sorry, I had to make her leave...it would have been really boring otherwise LOL

I will post the next chapter tomorrow!!
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2bearz said:
omg, im about 2 cry, plz let Edward and Bella get back 2gthr!!!!!!!
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SO GOOD!
Can you tell us why they killed them (like, I thought they were vegitarians or are they?)
Also is Bella coming back?!?!?!?!
I cant wait!
Its soooo said!
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OMG that was one of the best ones ive read!! plz have edward and bella get back together and she comes back or he follows her!! that was soo sad.
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hmmm interesting story, but I think that making Emmet and Edward murder Charlie and Renne is kinda absurd because first of all, Edward only killed criminal humas ( people that didn't deserve to live) he would never kill an inocent bystandard. He's a vegetarian vampire. But other than that I think you have a good story. Keep it up.
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crying
omg, i am crying...
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I don't know why I wrote that they killed Charlie and Rennee. But I think I wrote it to give the story a twist. But I guess I could say that Edward and Emmett hadn't met Carlisle and co. yet so they were not vegetarian vampires then. And they saw the blood and went off in a frenzy...LOL
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Ok, I see your point... but let me ask you one more question. Who changed Edward and Emmett into vampires? Because if it was Carisle they would adopt the vegetarian way of life... So who changed them? And how did they meet Carlisle if it was he who did not change them? How did Emmett meet Rose?
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omg i cant put it into words how much i love this story its great i love it and you are amazing!
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I LOVED EVERY PART OF IT THANKYOU
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OMGS!!!!!!!!OMGS!!!OMGS!!!!!!!!!!!!OMGGS!­!!!­!!!­!OM­GS!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!OMGS!!!!!!!
AMAZING!!!!
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