hey guys, you guys have inspired me to start writting. Just a little backround when i was yonger i started to write stories, but they where farie tales. now senice twilight and blood red sunset. i want to start writting again. wish me luck guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hey once i start writting will u give opinion for a title. thnks!!!!!!!!
ch 1 home
It was march 20. the week of my brithday and aninerssry. I came down staries, but my feet weren't touching the floor. That's when I started going back to that frist day I came here.That's when it all started.
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In the northern part of Washington lies a little town named Forest Moon. I lived here until the age of 2, that's when my mom, Chealse Gomez, And I moved to L.A.My name is Kathy Bent.i'm 17 now. I pale with short pixi like brunett hair. I am 4'9" with an hourglass fiurger. Every summer my dad, Tom Bent, would come from Forest Moon and spened 2 weeks with me until the age of 14. My mom and dad both got remarried. My mom married a Laywer, his name is David Gomez, he is 7 years yonger than my mom. I wasn't happy with that chose, my mom could see it my face that i didn't like, but she didn't know that I have see what David dose to her. My dad married a Teacher, her name is Haliey Bent, she is he same age as dad, which i like. My mom work as a part time nures in a L.A clinical. My dad worked as a store owner, named shopping outfitters, the only shopping center in the town. I had a rough childhood . I was always yelling
at my mom, but when dad comes. one time we where yelling at the airport I was about to slap her but I saw dad i got all calm before I could, which is good because that wouldn't be a pretty site. That summer that's when I left with my dad. I told her the beging of that second week,
"Please stay. I know you didn't like when I married David because of the age.-and seen what he dose to me. I corrected mental- she said. I haven't told her that I have seen what he dose to her, but that is going to change today!
" yes, but the 2 other reson Are because I hate fitting you,one of this day, I'M GOING TO SLIP, I AM GOING HIT YOU AND I SEE WHAT HE DOSE TO. I KNOW. THAT'S WHY I'M LEAVING. ICAN'T SEE YOU GET HURT. " I yelled.
That's what left her speachless. After that I told dad, soon after I told him he called his wife to get my room ready, they always had spaer room for me, just in case. I started to pack my room. when I finshed, later that week. i put every thing inside the car, I said a quick bye to Chealse and David. Then I was on my way to forest Moon.
My dad and my step-mom lived in a 2 story house with a soft blue trim and a dark blue walls. Haliey was preagnet with her frist child,but my dad's 2 child. school started in 1 week. There is 2 Elementrays, 2 middle schools, and 1 high school. The high school was named Forest Moon High School. there is about 205 students here. At my old school there were about 2034 students there. I went to the shopping center to get my school supplies. When I got back there was a new car in the drive way where their car gose. I got out and there was a note on the window it said " welcome home Kathy. I am so happy you came to live with us. For that here is a new car for you. love dad and Haliey." That's when they came outside.
" Thank you." was the only thing i could choke out.
" your welcome." said my dad
" I thought you would like to drive yourself to school." said my new mom
" thanks mom, dad ,and my new sibling" I said hugging them. That's when haliey and my dad started to cry. I was wounding why they were crying,
so I ask " why are you guys crying."
haliey said in sobs " because you called me mom."
" you are my mom. aren't you?" I ask skeptal.
" yes but not your real mom. only step-mom."she started to cry more.
" you are my real mom. chealse is nobody to me."
Then my dad said" chealse is your mom."
I yelled " NO SHE AIN'T. SHE IS MEAN.SHE IS A BRAT!!!!!!!"
" Fine, calm down take deep brethes" my dad said I complied and I started to calm down.
"better, Kathy?" said worrying. that's when everything went blank.
when I woke up I was at the clinic.
" Kathy?" asked dad
" yes?" my vioce hores
" are you ok?" asked a doctor, I think
" I guess. what happen to me?" I asked
" you had an Anxiety attack." the doctor said
" Kathy, this is Dr. Jackson." my dad told me
Dr. Jackson was pale. He was paler than me. His eyes a strange color it was a cross between purple, gold, and black.His hair was a chocolate brown. I went back to eyes and just stared at them.
" Kathy? did you hear me?" Dr. Jackson asked
" What?" caming back to the present.
" did you hear me? I asked do you remeber anything?" he asked again
" Not really. Only that I was yelling," I replyed
" Has this been going on for awhile?" he asked
" scenic the age of 12." I answer
" why didn't you tell me this?" dad asked
" I thought it wasn't nessary." I fired back. My voice rasing
" Calm down?are you okay now?" Dr. Jackson asked
" yes. Is it ok to go home?" I answer
" yes. just take it easy, Come back if it happens again." he said
" Lets go home. I'm tired." I asked
" sure" he complied
I made it home, made it up the staries but fell asleep on top of me sheets and dreampt of nothing.
hey once i start writting will u give opinion for a title. thnks!!!!!!!!
ch 1 home
It was march 20. the week of my brithday and aninerssry. I came down staries, but my feet weren't touching the floor. That's when I started going back to that frist day I came here.That's when it all started.
* * *
In the northern part of Washington lies a little town named Forest Moon. I lived here until the age of 2, that's when my mom, Chealse Gomez, And I moved to L.A.My name is Kathy Bent.i'm 17 now. I pale with short pixi like brunett hair. I am 4'9" with an hourglass fiurger. Every summer my dad, Tom Bent, would come from Forest Moon and spened 2 weeks with me until the age of 14. My mom and dad both got remarried. My mom married a Laywer, his name is David Gomez, he is 7 years yonger than my mom. I wasn't happy with that chose, my mom could see it my face that i didn't like, but she didn't know that I have see what David dose to her. My dad married a Teacher, her name is Haliey Bent, she is he same age as dad, which i like. My mom work as a part time nures in a L.A clinical. My dad worked as a store owner, named shopping outfitters, the only shopping center in the town. I had a rough childhood . I was always yelling
at my mom, but when dad comes. one time we where yelling at the airport I was about to slap her but I saw dad i got all calm before I could, which is good because that wouldn't be a pretty site. That summer that's when I left with my dad. I told her the beging of that second week,
"Please stay. I know you didn't like when I married David because of the age.-and seen what he dose to me. I corrected mental- she said. I haven't told her that I have seen what he dose to her, but that is going to change today!
" yes, but the 2 other reson Are because I hate fitting you,one of this day, I'M GOING TO SLIP, I AM GOING HIT YOU AND I SEE WHAT HE DOSE TO. I KNOW. THAT'S WHY I'M LEAVING. ICAN'T SEE YOU GET HURT. " I yelled.
That's what left her speachless. After that I told dad, soon after I told him he called his wife to get my room ready, they always had spaer room for me, just in case. I started to pack my room. when I finshed, later that week. i put every thing inside the car, I said a quick bye to Chealse and David. Then I was on my way to forest Moon.
My dad and my step-mom lived in a 2 story house with a soft blue trim and a dark blue walls. Haliey was preagnet with her frist child,but my dad's 2 child. school started in 1 week. There is 2 Elementrays, 2 middle schools, and 1 high school. The high school was named Forest Moon High School. there is about 205 students here. At my old school there were about 2034 students there. I went to the shopping center to get my school supplies. When I got back there was a new car in the drive way where their car gose. I got out and there was a note on the window it said " welcome home Kathy. I am so happy you came to live with us. For that here is a new car for you. love dad and Haliey." That's when they came outside.
" Thank you." was the only thing i could choke out.
" your welcome." said my dad
" I thought you would like to drive yourself to school." said my new mom
" thanks mom, dad ,and my new sibling" I said hugging them. That's when haliey and my dad started to cry. I was wounding why they were crying,
so I ask " why are you guys crying."
haliey said in sobs " because you called me mom."
" you are my mom. aren't you?" I ask skeptal.
" yes but not your real mom. only step-mom."she started to cry more.
" you are my real mom. chealse is nobody to me."
Then my dad said" chealse is your mom."
I yelled " NO SHE AIN'T. SHE IS MEAN.SHE IS A BRAT!!!!!!!"
" Fine, calm down take deep brethes" my dad said I complied and I started to calm down.
"better, Kathy?" said worrying. that's when everything went blank.
when I woke up I was at the clinic.
" Kathy?" asked dad
" yes?" my vioce hores
" are you ok?" asked a doctor, I think
" I guess. what happen to me?" I asked
" you had an Anxiety attack." the doctor said
" Kathy, this is Dr. Jackson." my dad told me
Dr. Jackson was pale. He was paler than me. His eyes a strange color it was a cross between purple, gold, and black.His hair was a chocolate brown. I went back to eyes and just stared at them.
" Kathy? did you hear me?" Dr. Jackson asked
" What?" caming back to the present.
" did you hear me? I asked do you remeber anything?" he asked again
" Not really. Only that I was yelling," I replyed
" Has this been going on for awhile?" he asked
" scenic the age of 12." I answer
" why didn't you tell me this?" dad asked
" I thought it wasn't nessary." I fired back. My voice rasing
" Calm down?are you okay now?" Dr. Jackson asked
" yes. Is it ok to go home?" I answer
" yes. just take it easy, Come back if it happens again." he said
" Lets go home. I'm tired." I asked
" sure" he complied
I made it home, made it up the staries but fell asleep on top of me sheets and dreampt of nothing.
-What, Alec, you can`t be vampires! Annabelle said
-Yes! but were a special kind of vampires, where rose vampires! Alec said
-Hmmm,rose vampires? annabelle said
-yeah, rose vampires have the same abilytis as all the other vampires, it is just that rose vampires dosen`t eat if where not intrudosed to new food we never eat it, and it seems like syd meet another vampire who made him eat human flesch!
-And what does that mean? Annabelle said woried,
-If he cought your sent he will trying to eat you,
-But,
-Let me finnish! And rose vampres blood isn`t red, our is moore blakish grey, and that`s why we are called rose vampires. But where gotta get you outta here!
Abby came in to alec`s room,
-You toled her! she said angry,
-We gotta get her outta here, abby! he said on that way again,
He took her on his back and jumped,
Abby jumped after him,
-NO ALEC!! she shouted,
Abby saw syd,
-SYD NO!!!!!
alec started to jump faster , and syd came after him!
-Yes! but were a special kind of vampires, where rose vampires! Alec said
-Hmmm,rose vampires? annabelle said
-yeah, rose vampires have the same abilytis as all the other vampires, it is just that rose vampires dosen`t eat if where not intrudosed to new food we never eat it, and it seems like syd meet another vampire who made him eat human flesch!
-And what does that mean? Annabelle said woried,
-If he cought your sent he will trying to eat you,
-But,
-Let me finnish! And rose vampres blood isn`t red, our is moore blakish grey, and that`s why we are called rose vampires. But where gotta get you outta here!
Abby came in to alec`s room,
-You toled her! she said angry,
-We gotta get her outta here, abby! he said on that way again,
He took her on his back and jumped,
Abby jumped after him,
-NO ALEC!! she shouted,
Abby saw syd,
-SYD NO!!!!!
alec started to jump faster , and syd came after him!
Annabelle and Abby have bean bff`s in 3 month`s now and they were wery happy abaut it,
-Do you wanna come home to me and eat dinner with my family? Abby asked annabelle,
-Yeah, cool, what time?
-why can`t you just come over after school! Abby said
-I just gotta text my mom abaut that!
Annabelle said.
After school annabelle texted her mother!
mom!
I`m eating at Abby`s today!
I come home maybe eight ore something.
Don`t wait for me ok!
/ Belle!
After a while annabelle`s mom anwsered.
Belle ! Of course you can eat at abby!
-so.... Abby said,
-Yes, i mean she lett me eat at you!
-Do you wanna come home to me and eat dinner with my family? Abby asked annabelle,
-Yeah, cool, what time?
-why can`t you just come over after school! Abby said
-I just gotta text my mom abaut that!
Annabelle said.
After school annabelle texted her mother!
mom!
I`m eating at Abby`s today!
I come home maybe eight ore something.
Don`t wait for me ok!
/ Belle!
After a while annabelle`s mom anwsered.
Belle ! Of course you can eat at abby!
-so.... Abby said,
-Yes, i mean she lett me eat at you!
Annabelle had alec on her mind the rest of the day, she couldn`t bear the delling to sitt with them on lunch, but when she saw them she got so nervous that she trough up.
A few days later Annabelle was wating for the buss again,
-ANNABELLE, abby shouted, she was so happy, your back!!!
-yes, but, where are the others? annabellee wondred,
-oh,I always walk faster then them, abby ecsplained,
Annabelle saw them coming ,
-Here they come, abby said,
- and so does the buss, annabelle said,
-HURRY UP !!! Abby schoted to her siblings.
At the buss abby talked abaut how weired everybody toght she was , all of the others were just sitting there, there eyes loked darker then before, and they had bags under there eyes, Annabelle saw that Alec where loking at her she loked back, he loked at her like she was something to eat, she got nervous and loked another way.
A few days later Annabelle was wating for the buss again,
-ANNABELLE, abby shouted, she was so happy, your back!!!
-yes, but, where are the others? annabellee wondred,
-oh,I always walk faster then them, abby ecsplained,
Annabelle saw them coming ,
-Here they come, abby said,
- and so does the buss, annabelle said,
-HURRY UP !!! Abby schoted to her siblings.
At the buss abby talked abaut how weired everybody toght she was , all of the others were just sitting there, there eyes loked darker then before, and they had bags under there eyes, Annabelle saw that Alec where loking at her she loked back, he loked at her like she was something to eat, she got nervous and loked another way.