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Vamp-Out - Chapter 1 Part 1

Fan fiction by nevenkastar posted over a year ago
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1st of all....this is my 1st story so I know It's bad and please please don't be rude to me.

I have a normal life, if we could call it that way.
Well, you see I'm a Vampire. Now, now, I'm not a killer. I don't kill people, I'm Vegeterian. I almost never drink blood, but I'm not weak. When I need to drink blood I drink animal blood. I love animals so It's very hard to look at they're cute face and kill them. =( I live in the UK, to be more precisely in London. In a small, dark street. The name doesn't matter. Maybe you want to know how I look like. First of all I wanna say I'm not an Emo, Punk or Goth! I'm a normal girl, who's a Vampire. I have long curly brown-blond hair and red eyes of course, but I hide them with blue contacts. I live with my small blond sister Emma who is a little annoying, my mom who is a normal "killer" Vampire and my dad who is..just like any other mean dad. Maybe you are asking yourself how can I stay in the sun but not get burned. Well, every Vampire family has it's own protection sing. Our familys sing is the cat. So I have a bracelet on my right hand. It's a cute, little, silver bracelet with a Cat charm on it. I can't take it off. I have a pet. Not a pet that dies after 5 years. It's not a normal pet, like a dog or a bird, even tought it can fly. I have a dragon. Sounds wierd, but she is really cute. Her name is "Striped Diamont", but I call her Dia. She can be very small and very big. With the help of my bracelet I can turn her into a little pocket charm. Ok now to change the subject. We have all turned into Vampires in the same time. In the year 1690. So we still look like the time we turned. Thank Goodness that I was turned when at the time when I was a teenager so I still look like 16 and I will for a long time and after like 500 years I will look like 18, then 20, then 22, etc. I love to get on the roof of our huge house. Did I say it was Huge?It is! And watch the night and the sky. Sadly there weren't any Vampires in our town beside us, better said we are the only Vampires in the whole Country. Every country has is own Vampire family. We are all from Romania. But In 1700 every vampires had to leave the country and go into a diffrent one. So why am I telling you that? Well, 2 weeks ago I got a mail from a High School in USA...


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llrulez said:
comment!!!!!!!!!
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llrulez said:
post soooon !!!
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If I get more comments and likes
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Great one!!! you have imagination and you should continue it!!!!
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llrulez said:
told you nevenkastar !!!
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alizeh said:
nice story
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it's pretty good :)
i like it when you say "Now, now, I'm not a killer, I don't kill people, I'm Vegeterian. I almost never drink blood, but I'm not weak."
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Awesome story.
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great thinking n nicely laid down
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Sara-soso said:
great one!!!!!!!!!!
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aceg said:
Nice one. Like how you start the story with self-explanatory prelude. Looks promising are you gonna continue with this fanfic?
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Yes U will put the new part tomorow
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jenny_23 said:
nice story..plz continue
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great one but you should check your grammar:) just saying..
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Desara said:
Love the dragon ;) i really like it and want to know the next part !!
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YushiGirl said:
I like it
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hannahm4e said:
it's a nice story i love it
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Really good :D the onlt thing i would change is "I'm not a killer, I don't kill people" i would change is to "I'm not a killer." :)
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Great story hun but if i was u go back and reread it there is some mess ups in there but over all GREAT
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Diane1 said:
yeah you should continue it is good :)
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GO VAMPIRE AND DRAGON CUZ I LOVE THIS STORY
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I luv it
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Nice story love it.
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the only thing i had in my mind when i finished is"I WANT PART 2 NOW!!" great story :D
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I love it <333 , keep going its pretty good ^^
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SexyIkuto said:
oh I love it,I love it,I love it!!
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I like it. It is from an original perspective. I would love to see where you go from here. Good Job
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Nice one! , Keep It Up! :)
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pretty gud.... scary..... nice work dear.... :)
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loveVD-DS said:
It's great i think you should continue ;)
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rino25 said:
rly !1nice and great story ...u should write more
love vampier<3
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it's great so far keep writing :D
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Nice you should make a book you are a great author
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michael58 said:
I like it!!!!!!!!
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Awesome story!
I Like It! =)

Keep going! ;D
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I agree KEEP GOING and loveeeeeeee it
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Kaitain said:
I like it!You should continue it!
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Alaa1999 said:
AWESOME story , I hope u post part 2 soon ;)
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its brilliant!!!!!!i luv luv luv luv luuuuuuv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wow, great work...
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Nice.
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I like it.
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It´s great
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loved
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Great job! :) You should write more ;)
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4422 said:
kool
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pearl97 said:
Superb!!!~ Awesomely Written!~ :P
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rorovipz said:
Wow nice
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It's really nice. Continue writing it, you practice your writing skills and you'll be able to think of so many amazing things to write! You have skill! :)
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great work!
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