This is my first one:))) comment please
Water dripped off my blazing red hair and onto the floor.
“Mom? Can I leave now?” Mom had made me go outside, in the freezing rain, and gather all of the wet clothes on the line. I was shaking now in the corner, covered from head to toe with water, I coughed.
“Vic your not dry enough. Just a couple more minutes.” Mary was standing by the edge of the wall, looking at me, a smile on her face. She loved my torture.
“Okay, you can go up now.” Yes, I quickly fled up the stairs and into my room.
It was warm in here. My bed was next to Mary’s, I gently took of my dress, and laid it on the floor. I walked to the closet and got another out, this one was green, it went well with my hair.
“Victoria!” The sound came from downstairs, it was Mom. I raced down the stairs to see what she wanted, she was standing at the bottom of the stairs her face angry, Mary standing next to her. In both of Mary’s hands was a ragged doll, cut into two. Oh I knew where this was going.