"I got bored one day and decided to write my own warriors fan fiction...but it sucked, well to me. Please give me your opinions! I'm not really sure what time period it is, however they are now in the new forest, and i geuss it is genertaions after Firestar and stuff"
Chapter 1 (i geuss a series)
Stormpaw wandered out of the apprentice den, ready to start a long day of training. His mentor, Grayclaw, waiting for him at the edge of the camp. Stormpaw shook the last of his sleepiness away and ran over to him.
"Hello Stormpaw, did you sleep well? Grayclaw asked.
Stormpaw thought about it for a moment and remembered a nightmare he had had about the death of his mother Oakstride, but Stormpaw decided to ignore it and pretend he was fine. He nodded and they were off.
"Alright Stormpaw, are you ready to learn a new hunting move?" Grayclaw asked.
Stormpaw once again nodded in answer and his mentor immediatly slipped into an awkward looking crouch where he put bot of his legs outward and almost flat against the ground, then slithered forward almost like a snake. It looked almost ridiculous, but Stormpaw noticed that he wasn't making a sound. Stormpaw went over the movements in his head then slipped into his own version of the hunting crouch.
"Good, but put your backside down more, or you'll stand out much more," Grayclaw mewed.
Stormpaw nodded once again, and tried as hard as he could to get into the perfect stance. He tried so hard that he stretched out his right forepaw too much and jump back in pain.
Stormpaw ended up in the nursery a while later, writhing around in pain as the medicine cat apprentice, Heatherpaw tried to reconnect his shoulder. Finally there was a click and Stormpaw fainted.
He woke up in a twisted scene of memories stringed together. His mother saying "He cannot talk, but he will be a great warrior" to the clan leader Poppystar. His apprentice ceremony, his mother's last moments of life before greencouch took her life.
Chapter 1 (i geuss a series)
Stormpaw wandered out of the apprentice den, ready to start a long day of training. His mentor, Grayclaw, waiting for him at the edge of the camp. Stormpaw shook the last of his sleepiness away and ran over to him.
"Hello Stormpaw, did you sleep well? Grayclaw asked.
Stormpaw thought about it for a moment and remembered a nightmare he had had about the death of his mother Oakstride, but Stormpaw decided to ignore it and pretend he was fine. He nodded and they were off.
"Alright Stormpaw, are you ready to learn a new hunting move?" Grayclaw asked.
Stormpaw once again nodded in answer and his mentor immediatly slipped into an awkward looking crouch where he put bot of his legs outward and almost flat against the ground, then slithered forward almost like a snake. It looked almost ridiculous, but Stormpaw noticed that he wasn't making a sound. Stormpaw went over the movements in his head then slipped into his own version of the hunting crouch.
"Good, but put your backside down more, or you'll stand out much more," Grayclaw mewed.
Stormpaw nodded once again, and tried as hard as he could to get into the perfect stance. He tried so hard that he stretched out his right forepaw too much and jump back in pain.
Stormpaw ended up in the nursery a while later, writhing around in pain as the medicine cat apprentice, Heatherpaw tried to reconnect his shoulder. Finally there was a click and Stormpaw fainted.
He woke up in a twisted scene of memories stringed together. His mother saying "He cannot talk, but he will be a great warrior" to the clan leader Poppystar. His apprentice ceremony, his mother's last moments of life before greencouch took her life.
Moth flights vision is a book about the first ever medicine cat and how the leaders got their nine lives, this new SE will be released in August 2014 in the same month as Bramblestar's storm.
And will also take place a few moons after Dawn of the Clans arc ends yes Kate has finished the draft of it and won't be released earlier or later in 2014 it could change to I will update everyone once something changes
My Response: I'm pretty happy about this as we find out the longest wanted answers of Warrior cats how the leaders got their 9 lives and the first ever medicine cat.
-Bramblestar
And will also take place a few moons after Dawn of the Clans arc ends yes Kate has finished the draft of it and won't be released earlier or later in 2014 it could change to I will update everyone once something changes
My Response: I'm pretty happy about this as we find out the longest wanted answers of Warrior cats how the leaders got their 9 lives and the first ever medicine cat.
-Bramblestar
All four Clans at the Island for a Gathering.
Bramblestar: Now Squrrielflight let me get a Helmet before the Explosion.
Squrrielflight: Bram i have decided there will be no Explosion this Gathering.
It turns out there's Dynamite around the Island clearly Visible to Bramblestar but its not ticking.
Random Cat: Look out knifes.
All Cats Scream and run around untell the Knife Rain stops after 5 Seconds.
Squrrielflight: Wheww Thanks for the Heads up.
Squrrielflight looks a piece of Dynamite it has a bunch of knives in it.
Squrrielflight: Uh oh Thats not Good.
Near Bramblestar there's a Grenade with a bunch of knives in it too.
Bramblestar: YA THINK!!!
The Entire Island explodes forcing Cats and dirt to Rain down over Lake Territory.
This was one Gathering more to come.
Bramblestar: Now Squrrielflight let me get a Helmet before the Explosion.
Squrrielflight: Bram i have decided there will be no Explosion this Gathering.
It turns out there's Dynamite around the Island clearly Visible to Bramblestar but its not ticking.
Random Cat: Look out knifes.
All Cats Scream and run around untell the Knife Rain stops after 5 Seconds.
Squrrielflight: Wheww Thanks for the Heads up.
Squrrielflight looks a piece of Dynamite it has a bunch of knives in it.
Squrrielflight: Uh oh Thats not Good.
Near Bramblestar there's a Grenade with a bunch of knives in it too.
Bramblestar: YA THINK!!!
The Entire Island explodes forcing Cats and dirt to Rain down over Lake Territory.
This was one Gathering more to come.
this is why I think millie is better for gray stripe than Silverstream ( you can think different because this is just my opinion.)
1. Silverstream was in river clan and Millie was a kittypet but she proved herself worthy of the clan's respect.
2. Nobody knew about graystripes and silverstreams relationship until she died. after that not everybody still respected graystripe. With mille, graystripe came back to thunderclan to announce that he was her mate and then everyone accepted him.
3. having a mate in another clan is against the warrior code. having a kitty pet as a mate is fine only if they have joined your clan.
that's really all i have right now. please comment if you agree with me and if you have anymore reasons why millie is better for graystripe than silverstream than feel free to tell me.
1. Silverstream was in river clan and Millie was a kittypet but she proved herself worthy of the clan's respect.
2. Nobody knew about graystripes and silverstreams relationship until she died. after that not everybody still respected graystripe. With mille, graystripe came back to thunderclan to announce that he was her mate and then everyone accepted him.
3. having a mate in another clan is against the warrior code. having a kitty pet as a mate is fine only if they have joined your clan.
that's really all i have right now. please comment if you agree with me and if you have anymore reasons why millie is better for graystripe than silverstream than feel free to tell me.