Just to clarify for the others in my group story, this is just a prototype. I may ask you to rewrite this with your characters in it. I'm just starting with my two.
It was a bright and sunny day on the coast of Australia. The sun was shining, people speckled the shore, and all was well. "Luna! Stop fooling around in the water! Your burger is going to get cold!" Melody shouted to Luna, the youngest of the group. "Oh relax, sis, it's only water. Besides, I can microwave it when we get home, we're not going to be here all day long ya know" Luna retorted at her big sister. "You are SO stubborn sometimes" Melody shouted to Luna, who was not paying attention. An hour at most had passed, and most of the people had vanished. Melody had been lounging under an umbrella when she heard a distress call from Luna, who was being pulled under the current. It was sunset, and there were no lifeguards on the beach. For you see, Melody and Luna were on a private part of the beach, owned by their father, Michael Brooks. Melody, tired and aroused from her nap, became immediately awake when she heard the frantic call of Luna. "Help Mel! The current is too strong!" " Luna! I'll...