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DOVEWING PVO
Dovewing listened to Squirrelflight name those who are going to the gathering:
"Bumblestripe, Ivypool, Toadstep, Cinderheart, Brackenfur, Millie, Lionblaze, Leafpool, Jayfeather, Bramblestar, I, Seedpaw, Lilypaw, Molepaw, Amberpaw, Dewpaw, Snowpaw, Molepaw, Cherrypaw, Blossomfall, Dovewing, Sandstorm, Whitewing & Hazeltail." Squirrelflight finished.
"Yay!" Amberpaw ran across the clearing toward Dovewing, her mentor.
Toadstep and Ivypool appeared by her side.
Dewpaw and Snowpaw raced after Amberpaw.
"We're goin' to our first gathering." They pranced around.
"Alright, be sensible now and don't waste your energy. It's a long way away." Dovewing meowed, sternly.
"okay." They purred and stopped prancing and sat down.
"Go get something to share all three of you." Ivypool ordered.
"Okay." They raced away toward the fresh kill pile.
The moon was rising and Dovewing stood up tall out of her sitting postion and streched.
"So... Dovewing how are you?" Toadstep meowed.
"Oh, good thanks, Toadstep. How is your realtionship with Ivypool going?" Dovewing asked, keeping the conversation going.
"Yeah, great. We want to have kits soon. I know it's a little early, but we would love kits. I'd be spoilt rotten." Toadstep purred looking deep into Ivypool's eyes. Green meets blue and they both purr.
Dovewing meowed with a agreement. Squirrrelflight started to call out for those who were going to the gathering.
"I'll get the apprentices." Ivypool meowed quickly, nudging Toadstep affectionately.
She raced off leaving Dovewing and Toadstep to get in line.
"Do you think Ivypool really likes me, i think she has someone else on her mind... I think it's Foxleap." Toadstep dipped his head dropping.
"No! She cannot stop talking about you. She has no time left for me." Dovewing meowed a little bit jealous that Ivypool could completely forget about her so easily.
"Really?" Toadstep rised.
"Yes, look she's calling you over, if you need to talk to me anymore do after the gathering." Dovewing teased playfully.
"Okay, bye, Dovewing!" Toadstep sped off to catch up to Ivypool.
Dovewing looked around for Bumblestripe and spotted him beside Amberpaw.
Dovewing padded over to him quickly and fell in beside the tom.
"Hello, Dovewing." He purred with delight at the sight of her.
"Hello, Bumblestripe." Dovewing nudged him affectionately. Throwing her nose into her fur and his warm scent drifting up her nose.
They began walking and Dovewing was staring up at the stars her fur brushing against Bumblestripe's soft striped fur.
Amberpaw and Molepaw ran in front of them toward where Leafpool and Jayfeather were gossiping about medicine and the other medicine cats.
Dovewing didn't care she just wanted to be there beside Bumblestripe.
They padded on just reaching the horseplace and up to the fallen tree.
"You go first, Dovewing." Bumblestripe dipped his head for her to go, purring.
"Thankyou." She meowed.
The fallen tree was very slippery and as she got closer to the end she slipped and almost fell into the water until Bumblestripe got her scruff and dragged her the rest of the way.
Dovewing and Bumblestripe reached the other end and they sat down beside each other, panting.
"Alright, I'll go and see some of my friends." Dovewing murmured giving him a lick on the ear.
She padded off leaving Bumblestripe to talk to a WindClan warrior called Harespring.
Dovewing reached one of her RiverClan friends Willowshine and started to have a little talk to her. But then she saw Tigerheart' his amber gaze burning into her pelt.
"I have to go Willowshine, nice talking." She murmured.
"Bye, Dovewing." She meowed and padded away.
Dovewing swung her head around and raced over to Tigerheart.
"Sorry, I completely forgot about the Gathering." She meowed, but I had to come, so yeah." Dovewing finished looking at Tigerheart's content look.
"It's okay, Dovewing. Not your fault. But tell you what. When the gathering is finished we'll stay on the island and pretend we are hunting and talk." Tigerheart suggested.
"Okay, but we are taking a risk. Oh, the gathering is starting I gotta go." Dovewing meowed rubbing her head against his flank.
"Can't you sit here. I can't stand it without you." Tigerheart begged.
"No... I have to sit with Bumblestrip...." Dovewing trailed off seeing Tigerheart's hurt reaction.
"Who is Bumblestripe?" He asked.
"He is my second choice if this doesn't work out." Dovewing admitted, solemly.
"What! You have someone else in mind!" Tigerheart's eyes wer blazing.
Dovewing turned cold looking around, only Dawnpelt was staring at them intently.
"Please, Tigerheart. Stay behind. I'm not cheating on you I promise!" Dovewing begged.
"I will, I promised. But don't do this to me." Tigerheart whipped around to go towards Dawnpelt and tell her a lie about them.
Dovewing turned around and raced toward Bumblestripe and sat beside him.
"May I speak first?" Mistystar asked.
"Yes, Mistystar." Onestar agreed.
"Thank you. RiverClan is good after the battle. We all know the leaf-bare winds are almost finished. Prey is running again and RiverClan are recovering well. Robinwing, Beetlewhisker, Grasspelt and Troutpaw an apprentice all died in the Dark Forest battle. But we managed to drive them write to the border." Mistystar finished stepping back into the saftey of her branch.
"May I speak?" Bramblestar asked.
"Yes, Bramblestar."
"In the battle against the dark forest, Hollyleaf, Firestar, Mousefur, Ferncloud all died by the Dark Forest's agressivness. StarClan camer to help us, and the Ancient Cats too. Leafpool is now the second medicine cat in our Clan again. We have forgiven her after the incident of the code. Now i'm the new leader of ThunderClan and our new deputy is Squirrelflight. Spiderleg has moved to the elders with Purdy too. Firestar fought bravely against Tigerstar and killed him but then a fire murdered him. StarClan be with them." Bramblestar finished.
Murmurs of sadness broke off for Firestar and Hollyleaf mainly.
"Can-" Blackstar began but Tigerheart broke off.
"Blackstar? Can I speak?" Tigerheart asked.
Blackstar nodded.
Dovewing gasped and looked up as Tigerheart leaped to the bottom branch. He looked down at her.
"I would like to change the code." He growled.
"What!" Antpelt of WindClan gasped with shock.
"What, change the code?" Dawnpelt gaped with shock.
"Mouse-brain!" Bumblestripe called from beside her.
Dovewing tensed as Tigerheart began to speak again.
"The code saying loyalty must remain to your own clan you may have friends from other Clans...." Tigerheart trailed off his eyes catching Dovewing's.
"I want one cat from each clan to be with a she-cat or tom from another clan." Tigerheart meowed.
The Moon came out full shining in agreement.
"StarClan is agreeing!" Toadfoot yowled with shock.
"Holey-mouse!" Dovewing murmured.
"Hush! Okay, I agree." Bramblestar agreed.
"Same," the other 3 chorused.
"What! StarClan agrees so I do too!" Bumblestripe yowled.
"Good, back to the gathering, sit down tigerheart!" He growled.
Tigerheart moed toward Dawnpelt and Dovewing. He sat down not looking at Dovewing again.
"Alright, we lost Scorchfur, Redwillow and Snowbird in the battle and we miss them a lot. Nothing much has changed. Leaf-fall has been kind to us and blessed us with lots of prey." Blackstar took a step back.
"Alright, WindClan is good and not many warriors died. All of our elders are dead and a few warriors. they will be missed. We are looking foward to Newleaf." Onestar meowed. "This gathering is over, may StarClan light your paths."
Dovewing turned to Bumblestripe. "Can you tell Bramblestar and anyone else who asks that I'm hunting. I'll be back in the morning." Dovewing meowed.
"Okay." Bumblestripe raced off.
The four Clans were leaving and Dovewing snuck into a bush and waited for Tigerheart...
posted by karah1999
Willow May Rains. 15 Yrs Old!:)
Willow May Rains. 15 Yrs Old!:)
Tik Tok on the clock,but the party don't stop!!Tik Tok!"

I covered my ears so I wouldn't hear the rest of that horrible song.People must be tone deaf to actually like it.

I watch as my sister went to turn off her alarm clock.That's when I remembered. Today we were going to see that horrible band in concert because my bestfriend got tickets.My sister likes them too.The band name is Snakebite.I think they are a horrible band that are wanna be screamo/rock popstars.They suck ass.

Let me introduce myself.

I'm Willow May Rains,your regular fifteen year old girl.I love screamo and rock bands.Real screamo/rock...
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posted by Rae-Ash
Do you know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

As we wish upon the stars
For the very first time
We stand there
Like time is ours
In a world
That's speeding by

Do you know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

So here we stand
In the wake of our dreams
Hoping and wishing
For a day
That they can come true
Hoping for a world
Where I can fit

Do you know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

Now I sit here all alone
In a world where I just don't fit
I sit here alone
Never knowing...
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The fiction story I wrote EXCLUSIVELY for Fanpop. Enjoy!

Shadow watched silently until the bike was out of sight before turning to look at the animals. With a mischievous feeling, Shadow began barking like crazy and speeding toward the animals.
BARK!! BARK-BARK! BARK!!
The farm animals went completely crazy, chasing the dog back, running away from him, screeching at the top of their lungs, and generally running haywire all over the farmyard.
Shadow stopped after about two thrilling minutes of chase. He shook himself off, barked a few times, then squeezed himself underneath the gate and took off...
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CHAPTER FOUR:
As I near the parking lot of Crystal Falls High School, my supersonic hearing picks up on hundreds of voices. As I pull into a parking space, I note how many people are already there. As I walk into the office, the ten minute warning bell rings. I walk up to the desk, and the secretary looks up at me. “Yes?” she asks. I quickly explain that I am new to the school, and that I am a senior. She looks up my name in the student records, and nods. “Ashley Garland. Age seventeen? Transferring from Santa Barbara?” she asks. I nod, and hear the hum of the printer as it prints out...
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Dragon Crew
Long ago, In a land faraway....that's how a Disney movie would tell this, trust me, me and my friends tried to add this as our first couple of words, but it didn't seem...right. This story doesn't start 'Long Ago, in a land Far away'. It more so starts like this, 'Not that long ago, in Dragon land'. That didn't seem that could either. 'Once upon a time' never worked that much either.
So I would love to let you know, we did not come up with the 'once upon a time' theme. Not. My. Fault.
But we did decide to do a mini epilogue about how we became like this, although this starts off with...
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posted by juliet98
In the year 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied by a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It said that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in...
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My breath came out in a white, frozen cloud before me and smelled heavily of my mint gum. My footsteps’ sounds were wet on the sidewalk. It had rained just before I left the bookstore and, just by my luck, someone stole my car (boy, was my dad going to have a cow when he hears that…), so I had to walk all the way home in the wet night, all by myself. I prayed silently that I would be able to find my way because I was new in town and barely knew where everything was. I had to use a crappy GPS to find the bookstore. I was just lucky I found it.
    The town was Cassidy....
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After Skipper and Katherine told the story to Kowalski and Rico, they went to theirs beds. But when penguins went inside to their HQ, they noticed Private wasn't in his bunk. The TV was turned on.
"Hello peng-you-ins" said a familiar voice. Penguins lookes at the TV.
"Blowhole!" said Skipper in angry.
"I kidnaped someone, do you who?" asked Blowhole and he laughed evilly.
"Private..."said Skipper "If you hurt him I'll kill you Blowhole!"
"Oh, I'm scared" said Blowhole and laughed again "If you want save him, you must come here, alone, without your team"
"I'll came"
"But Skipper..." said Kowalski.
"You...
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Chapter 2
Three Months Earlier

There was not much bright where I was. Just dull, cheap lamp-light. Ya know? The cheap light that bulbs give off. Not until I stepped out into the golden hue of this evening’s sunset could I get a good picture with my eyes. I had been in a bar with my friends or, as it’s usually called, my gang. It wasn’t a real rough bar, the one I had been in. there were a couple fights every so often, but not much. Gavin, the owner, was good about that. He didn’t want the fuzz showing up all the time, so when he wanted a fight to stop, it stopped. He could persuade almost...
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the first part: www.fanpop.com/spots/true-writers/articles/171410/titl...ter

SECOND CHAPTER
Paul Dock was bent with the nose that pratically touch the floor. He studying the crime scene, as usual. He isn't convinced that the assassin is Elvira Gorrige. It would be too obvius. He doesn't find nothing intresting on the stage, so he goes behind of that.
-Can i help you sir, are you sick?- asks a female voice, seeing the detective with the nose on the floor.
-Oh, no thank you i'm good, i'm detective Dock, i was looking for something here.- replies Dock with a smile on his face
-may i ask you some question...
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posted by ZekiYuro
If you've learnt British English and you're travelling in the States,or if you've learnt American English and you're travelling in Britain,you'll notice some differences.An obvious difference is the accent,but most travellers find that they don't have too many problems with this.There are some grammatical differences,but they shoudn't make it difficult to understand people,or to communicate.That leaves differences in vocabulary,which can cause misunderstandings.Sometimes the difference is only the spelling,for example,in British English 'center','colour',and 'travelled',and in American English 'centre','color',and 'traveled'.But sometimes the word is completely different in British and American English,and it's good idea to be prepared.
So, in anticipation of the official release of my Harry Potter fanfic, I've decided to post my hopes for the entires series. It's a little over two monthsuntil the release, folks. I hope to see you all in the discussion.


IN THE BACKGROUND
Hailey Jane Potter usually doesn't mind being the sister of the Boy Who Lived. But when the most evil Dark wizard in Britain threatens what remains of her family, she has to fight back. This is the story of Hailey's seven years at Hogwarts.

SPOTLIGHT
With the Second Wizarding War over, it's time to pick up and move on. Some things havechhanged, but others stay...
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posted by thetscfan121
Please comment, I need the comments, writers feed themselves from comments, so if you don't want to kill me of starvation, please comment.



Lots of bad things happen these days. War, violence, corruption, people confusing SFX for SEX, drugs, death, car accidents, etc,etc,etc. Peter knew of them and said that popular line in puertorrican youth language, "ME IMPORTA UN BICHO!!!" Literally translated, "I care a dick." That's the way things are and that's the way I tell you. Well, Peter had one point against him: he was a catholic. Confirmed, conbined and sealed in paper, he was supposed to be the...
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using correct grammar will make a difference between appearing professional and educated or uneducated and ignorant. Many people make common grammatical errors when they write and when they speak. Use these steps to avoid the most common errors and sound intelligent and well informed

Tips:

1


Make sure that verb tenses match. If the subject is present tense, then the verb must be as well. The same principle applies to past tense subjects and verbs.

2


Think about whether the subject is single or plural. Words like don't, aren't, were, are and were belong with plural subjects. For example, "It don't...
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posted by DarkGirl23
The day my sister died, was the day I, myself, died as well.

She may not have knew it, but she was my hero.
I guess, however, all big sisters were kind of like that.

I remember seeing it, the body, the blood, the note she left in her own form of representation.
It was written, all across the wall, the note she left behind was in her own blood.

Hatred.
What a word, so different from hated; just a different form.
Which one am I? I should be described as both.
I hate you, and I know you hate me too. Everyone does.
Here are my final words to you:
Pain is welcoming
Crawling down my arm so slow
Blood that leaks...
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posted by narlyvamp1234
Suji No Shi
A girl stands in her home; a hole has been ripped in the wall. She stares at her father in horror, he is covered in blood. At her father’s foot lays her mother, a huge hole ripped in her stomach, and she is dead. Blood drips from her father’s hands… she looked up at her father and, in an instant, he is gone. The girl falls to the ground and starts crying… that’s when she feels a tap on her shoulder. She turns around and sees another little girl, with pink hair and green eyes. They stare at each other silently… not saying a word. The first girl whose mother had been...
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Meggan slapped herself.
"Get yourself together!"She told herself.Kylie came in, Kylie is Meggan's cat.She's only a kitten but has all her colors.She is black with white stripes.
"Oh, hi Kylie."Meggan said.She got out of bed and went into the bathroom.About ten minutes later she got out of the shower, put her clothes back on, and lied down next to Kylie.Kylie purred and rolled over next to her.Meggan petted her, she smiled at the feeling of Kylie's soft, fluffy, fur.Meggan felt a strange presence.She looked at the side of her bed, and saw Kylie, she looked at the cat she was petting, it had glowing...
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Zoeiz took a subtle relaxed deep breathe. And held it just for a moment.

Christ, by highest heaven adored…

The cold blistering air nipped at her exposed cheeks and the tip of her petite nose. A perfect atmosphere for the winters most important day, Christmas.

It was only 7:55 in the morning. Children throughout the modest town would be up by now, pouncing on their drowsy parents, eagerly anticipating on opening the wrapped gifts and stuffed bags.

She breathed out, the vaporous air revealing her breath.

Christ, the everlasting Lord…

Naturally, fresh flakes of snow began to fall from the...
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posted by DxCFan123
Me and Marie stood at the edge of Skye's hospital bed. He heart was barely beating. I was able to wash off all the blood before anyone saw me. "So tragic, huh? Well, listen, I've got someone to tell you." she said. We sat down and she stared at the ground. "I-I used to know Skye. We knew eachother in Kinder. We were great friends. I know you two were, too. But, then, one day she pulled a prank in me. We had to write report. Me and her picked the same thing, but she said it was fine and wrote mine for me. But, then, She wrote horrible, horrible things that I told her, as secrets. They caused...
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posted by StarWarsFan7
Rosella arrives at her high school and opens her coral locker. "Ugh. I hate hauling this stupid messenger bag!" she says as she tries to get the bag off of her shoulder. "Her? Are you sure?" A group of boys say just not far away from Rosella. "Yeah. I'm plannin' on askin' her out." The tallest one says out of all three. Rosella secretly had put a spell on her own wand to transform it into a beautiful ring. Anytime she needed it, all Rosella had to do was slip the ring off and chant the code words to unlock the enchantment. "Why do you want to ask Rosella Karst out? She's a total weirdo. Who...
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