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posted by Cutebutcrazy--
I.    Book Title.
A.    Alice unknown
II.    Do you plan on writing more books?
A.    Yes. I would like to write a sequel to Alice Unknown.
B.    I wanted Alice Unknown to be longer too.
C.    Also I would like my next to be more dramatic.
D.    I have a 35 chapter book online too.
E.    And some anime.
III.    Any advice to anyone who wants to do something like this?
A.    Follow your dreams.
B.    Don’t give up. No matter what comes around.
C.    You’re always good enough. No matter what anyone says.
D.    You can go far no matter what you do.
E.    Believe in yourself.
F.    Never say never.
IV.    How old were you when wrote this?
A.    16. A junior at Timber Creek high School.
V.    What inspired you?
A.    A dream.
B.    I got up one night and got a drink of fruit punch and the story kinda just came to me. It was weird.
C.    I started writing it at one in the morning in the summer.
VI.    Who’s your publisher?
A.    Author house.
1.    www.authorhouse.com
VII.    How long have you been writing and what kind of writing?
A.    Since I was four.
B.    I would write anything. I would take plots from TV.
C.    I always drew or wrote down any thing I thought was interesting.
VIII.    Have you ever stopped in the middle of writing a book?
A.    Yes. There are boxes in my garage from things I’ve written down and just stopped.
IX.    What’s Alice Unknown about?
1.    Alice, a skeptical and painfully disrupted girl must relive the dark world that she dreams about, after the strange death of her mother destroyed her life. Continuously getting hurt by her father and falling for the boy around town, Alice sets off her own way when she has the chance to change the new world of Wonderland which is now a creeping, dark, dead land filled with blood seeking animals to deceptive friends. After falling into Wonderland, Alice must find the 8 keys of Wonderland to either go home or stay there and make Wonderland the happy land it used to be. Fighting off monsters, deciding love, and finding every little thing that creeps within Wonderland, Alice must find a way home and a way back to herself. What do you fear?
2.    Alice Unknown is about this girl named Alice. She lives with her dad after her mom’s death. It’s very bad at her house, her dad beats her and she’s falling in love. After getting beat by her dad one time she runs away into the rain where she trips and falls into a hole. Into Wonderland. Now she has to find 8 keys to save Wonderland that is now run by evil. If she survives and gets all 8 keys she can either go home or stay in Wonderland. Where she go home where she’s falling in love but hates her life of will she stay in Wonderland.
X.    What is the age group for this book?
1.    12- 18 year olds.
XI.    How did you go about writing Alice Unknown?
1.    I procrastinated the first two months.
2.    I would write for hours sometimes.
a)    Even till midnight
3.    I did not right every day.
4.    If I got an idea when I was out I didn’t write it down. I kept everything in my head.
a)    Always kept ideas in head.
5.    I loved the final outcome so yeah.
6.    Sometimes I would just write out of the blue.
7.    I used a computer to write it I was kinda lazy.
XII.    Did you ever want to give up?
A.    Yes. Between looking up the publishers.
XIII.    What type of genre is the book?
A.    It’s three. Fantasy. Romance. Horror.
B.    I also see it as a good versus evil type book.
XIV.    Websites?
A.    No. Soon.
XV.    Any other Signings?
A.    No this was my first one.
B.    Will be one at Burlington County Collage
XVI.    Would you like to do another book signing at Camden County Library?
A.    Yes. It was my first. I would love for it to be another one.
XVII.    Are you planning on seeing the new Alice in Wonderland?
A.    Yeah. It looks really good.
XVIII.    Copy right problems? How did you go about that? Costs?
A.    No.
B.    Really I came with the publishing
1.    Everything you write is copy righted.
2.    It’s yours no one can take it.
C.    About $35.
XIX.    Any plans for collage?
A.    Yeah. I’m trying to get a scholar ship for writing.
B.    Penn state. That’s my choice.
XX.    Who was your support? How do your friends feel?
A.    Friends and family were my support. My aunt helped me a lot by doing the editing. So did my mom.
B.    My friends are really supportive and proud and happy.
1.    Most are writers so they know how writing is.
XXI.    What made you want to do this?
A.    I wanted to see if I could write a book.
B.    I also wanted a challenge.
XXII.    How long did it take to write the book?
A.    4 months
1.    Beginning to end
B.    2 months in I found the publisher.
1.    Contract
C.    I also went through like 16 publishers before I found one I liked.
1.    Read reviews
2.    Google Searched
3.    Asked friends and family
D.    Also I didn’t have to deal with any rejects.
XXIII.    How do you feel about the publisher?
A.    I liked them.
B.    If you ever publish a book don’t ever
1.    Pay before hand.
a)    Pay when it’s published or it’s a scam
2.    Look for good deals
a)    I got a graphic designer and new layout.
C.    Ask questions. Lots of them.
D.    Make sure you feel safe with you publisher.
XXIV.    How would you describe this book?
A.    Well it’s not really suppose to be scary. It depends on how easily you get scared.
B.    It didn’t scare me when I reread it.
C.    It kinda keeps you hanging.
1.    Like you know there could be more to the story.
D.    I have book marks too.
XXV.    Money? How much did it cost?
A.    A lot.
1.    Start up
2.    Publishing
XXVI.    The cover. What is it?
A.    The front is two eyes like the Cheshire cat.
B.    Back is from the darker version of Alice in Wonderland. It’s Alice drinking a cup of tea but the blue splatters are poison.
XXVII.    Future Plans.
A.    More books. Of course.
B.    Wants to act in a movie.
C.    Wants to be a director.
D.    And wants to film a movie too.
E.    Also wants to write a screen play.
F.    Hopes Alice Unknown will becom
posted by Rae-Ash
Hey, Daddy.
Look at me
See what a beautiful
young lady I’ve become.

Hey, Daddy.
See how special I am.
See how much I’ve grown.

Hey, Daddy.
Don’t you see?
How much I want
To please you.
How much I
Truly care.

Hey, Daddy.
Can’t you see?
How hard I’ve tried.
How much I struggle.

Hey, Daddy.
Don’t you know?
How much
I crave your love.
Don’t you know?
How abandoned
I’ve felt.

Hey, Daddy.
Can’t you sense?
How hesitant
I always have been.
Can’t you sense?
How I pretend
To be someone else
Just so you could
Accept me for me.

Hey, Daddy.
Haven’t you noticed?
How fake I am
Around you.
Can’t you see?
How much
You’ve...
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Water
My only escape
Where for once my arms that are too pale and scrawny bend perfectly
Where I feel perfect
This is where my spirit will stay
When my body turns grey and dies away

Water
Where my legs that are too chubby or fat kick so strong
I feel perfect
This is the place my spirit will stay
When my body turns grey and dies away

Water
Where pain only makes me only go faster
Better
Prettier
Perfectly

Water
Where my face that's not pretty in never seen
Hidden in waves that make me feel free
This is the place my spirit will stay
When my body turns grey and dies away

Water
When I used to stab myself with needles
And let the blood bleed out
Suddenly is the last thing on my mind
And when I do spill blood
It's only on the days my mom says I can't go
To the water
Where my spirit will stay
When my body grows old and dies away
posted by alliXcobber
Chapter Two
Jessica lounged on top of the Walgreen’s cash register counter.
    “So, do you even know what your’e going to do about your dad thing?”
    “Obviously, I’m doing just fine. I can live by myself until I turn 18,” Samantha told her, agitated that she was asking that stupid question again
    “You do know thats, like, illegal right?” Jessica countered in her annoying teenage girl accent.
    “Since when do people here care what’s legal or not?”
Jessica merely shrugged in response, they...
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posted by thetscfan121
"We're going camping!" Solimar said to her friends. Everybody cheered and were very excited...well, everyone, except Pamela and Sergio. "We're leaving in two days to MonteNegro, and we're staying there for at least a week. Any questions?" Pamela raised her hand. "Are we living together for a whole week?" "Yes, Pamela, we are. My parents are going to borrow us a trailer, so whoever doesn't like to sleep in a tent can go sleep there. Anyone else?" No one else raised their hand. "Good. See ya'll on Sunday!" Solimar got up from the BK table and left., like everyone else except Edgardo, who had...
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posted by para-scence
I'm never good enough for anyone. I'm always in someone's way. My mother, who had me at sixteen, always complains that I ruined her life. My father left before I was born. I never had any real friends; they all said I was too weird, or I'm such a loser. My teachers hated me, because I could never get good grades. I could never do anything right. All my life, I've been annoying, stupid, worthless, and a waste of space. But they never even gave me a reason, so I couldn't even fix the problem. Am I too ugly? I know I'm less than average looking. My blond hair is a pretty dull color, and I never...
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Hey guys sorry that i haven't added a new entry for this in like 7 months, i have been really busy with school, homework, tests, etc. if your interested please let me know because then i will just try to recap everything that has happened very often. so read on, fav please it would mean a lot! thanks now on with the story


One the first day of school i still couldnt believe that Brent was on my team, that meant he'd be in a lot of my classes.On the day back i wore a pretty new red and black stripe top with a attached cover thing, but the shirt had a beautiful lace back with black jeans. When...
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posted by DarkGirl23
There it was, that fuzzy warm glowing light I always had dreams about... Except this time, I knew it was for real. I was so close! But then I felt something sting into my arm, slowly filling my veins with a warm and yet stinging fluid. What was this? Suddenly I was being pulled back into the world I once knew, and once hated.
My eyes flew open and everything was blurry. For a second it felt like I couldn’t breathe but then I gasped and air filled my lungs. It felt like a giant brick had been lifted from my chest.
I breathed a little shakily and looked around. Standing perched before me, looking...
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posted by Insight357
Revealed when called upon
Permitting the dagger to
Deliver steely truths
Who does it hurt the most,
The victim or the killer?
Sacrificed knowledge comes with damnation
You’ll be in hell before knowing this
Blessed by curiosity
Cursed with wicked hate

Speaking words shaper than glass
Not cushions to lay upon
Take the cruelty and use it for your benefit
Or shun the blinded wisdom
Refuse to accept any of the words
Too much experience for fifteen
Too much madness from simply looking
Deny this as you always have
Repetition will be my death
In a vain attempt
Prayer for an ear
A privilege of being a friend
Staying...
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posted by LovingLucy
I sit and wonder…
Whatever happened to the days?
Watching BSG and Lost with Charles,
Playing Star Wars with him,
And Shortys?
Whatever happened to the days?
Of Josh helping me through the grief of my father’s death.
Whatever happened to the days?
Of chicken and egg salad sandwiches at the SUB and take-out Chinese for dinner?
Whatever happened to the days?
Of GIRLS NIGHT OUT!
Whatever happened to the days?
Of spring at KU?
Whatever happened to the days?
Of KU’s waterfall and walks at midnight…
Whatever happened to the days?
Of all my friends at KU, and what great friends they were.
Whatever happened to the days?
posted by noahnstar1616
I felt like I was under a hypnotic spell. I couldn't control anything. I stopped when the water got a little past my waist. I then heard myself start to chant. I didn't know what I was saying, but like I said before I had no will power. As I was chanting, the waters started to fizz. The more I chanted, the more the waters fizzed. Then a strong head wind came. Thunder clouds formed in the sky out of nowhere. I stopped chanting and the water settled down.

As it began to rain, I walked back towards the beach shore. When I stepped onto the beach, I instantly turned back to normal. I ran back home...
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posted by WildCherryWolf
Newborn

I've been with the Cullens for about a week. It's not so we'd to adapt to a vegan lifestyle. In fact, I rather enjoy it.

My name is Elle. I don't exactly recall my last name. It's Cullen now. A week ago, I was mauled by a wolf, and left to die. Luckily, the Cullens found me.

It was a warmish afternoon. The Cullens and Bella were in the forest, playing a casual game of baseball. When Emmett was running to catch the ball, he came across me, curled into my tight little ball. "CARLISLE!!" he bellowed as I remember. The rest came running. I was writhing, the pain from the attack hurt me so...
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posted by flabaloobalah
I suddenly feel extremely sad and miserable. I realize that my Coca-Cola is gushing on the floor. I quickly clean up the bubbly mess.
The phone beside me rings. "Hello?" I say.
"This is-" a man starts, but I immediately hang up because I know it's some weirdo asking for money or whatever.
Cautiously I turn the TV back on, desperately hoping that something sane appears on the screen. For extra measures I change to a random channel.
It turns out I stand corrected, because I have the best of timing to turn on the TV just when Wyatt Starmount gets a sword in his neck. I shriek and try to shield myself...
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posted by para-scence
Grandma felt extremely guilty. She thought it was all her fault; she'd tried to set me up with Foster in the first place. I tried to convince her it was my own choice; my own mistake, but she still blamed herself.

But I had other things to worry about.

One day at school, Echo wasn't there. I wouldn't have been so worried, if people weren't freaking out about it. I kept hearing Echo's name said in the hallways, along with "did you hear?" The teachers in some classes even told kids to stop talking about it; it was none of their business. But it was mine. She was my best friend, and I didn't even...
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posted by para-scence
"You likehim?!" Echo said, somewhat surprised and disgusted. "Why?!"

"I don't know..." I whimpered. I hung my head. This was all so confusing. Echo took a bite of her sandwich, and watched me for a while. She swallowed.

"Well, iff you do... That's fine. I mean, just because I think he's a jerk doesn't mean..." she didn't finish. That was my problem as well. He did seem kind of a jerk. I still didn't understand why I like him. I put my hands to my face and groaned. Echo chuckled. "Love sucks..." I nodded.

***

I was walking home from school, a couple weeks later, when Foster showed up by my side...
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Ky
Ky
“Oni! Did you already pack some shampoo, conditioner and all of that crap? You know that hotel hygiene products suck!” shouted June through my bathroom door.

“June chill, Let me finish taking my waz.” I rolled my eyes. No use she couldn’t see it.

I walked out of the bathroom sat on the edge of my bed looked up at June and said “Don’t you ever go home? I bet that Andrew misses you dearly.” I smiled at her. Now it was her turn to roll her eyes.

June sat next to me. She put her head into her hands. I wasn't expecting that, I pat her back.

"June what's wrong?" I asked concerned while...
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posted by para-scence
"Irina?" he shouted over the blaring music. I was stunned into silence. "What're you doing here?!" he smiled. I opened my mouth to speak, but then Mateo butted in.

"Dude! What're y-- oh. Hi, Irina," he said unenthusiastically. I waved. Blake looked back at me, still waiting for an answer. I couldn't give him one; what was I going to say? He looked at the drinks spilled all over me.

"Oh, I'm sorry! Did I spill your drinks? Want me to buy you some more coke? Or was it Pepsi?" he offered. Coke? That was better than what I was coming up with.

"Uh, no! It's fine!" I shouted loud enough for him to hear....
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posted by GabbyRaptor
There I am... Gabby Raptor.... " I miss him" I say to myself standing on a montain... alone. Then I hear a voice..." Mike...?" I say.... Nothing there... Mike was an old family friend... He was like a father to me.... The father that left me when I was five... My mother she went after him and eventuly died... I found that out 3 years later after the acedent.... Mike was a good friend.... All I have left of him is his horse "Boxer". It was my fault the killer got to Mike... It always is my fault.... I'm nothing but trouble... But what sadens me more is that I'm rejected...My 3 brothers and my...
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posted by sawfan13
The happy cherished life of Amanda and Karietta Love were to be shortened. Amanda was only eleven, when she found out that she had to play the role of "Mother Figure". Mandy and Karrie's mother had died of a rare disease that was very uncommon in this day of age. It wasn't long before that their grandparents from both sides had died and a horrible tragedy had happened to most of their aunts, uncles, and cousins. Their father called it,"The Love Family Curse." Their father was with them, until Mandy turned eighteen and Karrie turned five. No one knows whether he died or disappeared, but he was...
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posted by Insight357
    It was around one when I left the house. I couldn’t walk far, for it was dark. I hailed a cab. I told the cabbie to drive to a cathedral, near a small suburb, just outside New York City.
    I didn’t dare close my eyes during the taxi ride. I did not need any images to play behind my eyelids. The dream had been all too real.
    After a ride down streets I could not name, we arrived at a tall, brick cathedral. I paid the cabbie, and got out of the car. He drove away. I walked up a few steps to the wooden door. I pulled on the...
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posted by Insight357
I needed more, more! I threw the book across the dimly lit, wooden attic. The book hit a stack of old newspapers. I tore open yet another book. Nothing would give me my answers.
    Why did I feel the need to care for Lucy? Why could I not get Alexander out of my head?
    There were pages, and pages of the thought process, but nothing to explain what I felt! Why could no one manage to capture these feelings, and explain them?
    A knock on the door interrupted me. “What?” I snapped.
    “It is past midnight, Damien. Come to bed,” said Grey through the door.
    “I’ll come when I want to. Now, go away!” Could she not understand I was confused, and angry? She possessed such naivety.
    “Fine!” Grey yelled. I heard her storm down the steps. Then I heard her bedroom door slam. I let out a puff of air.
    Then I threw another book against the wall. I kicked the whole stack of books, and watched as they toppled over. I threw myself onto the floor, and began crying.